/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3591479
so what was all that hubbub about earlier?

>>3591479
Who needs a porn thread with ads like these?

>>3591491
I'm glad someone else made a thread about that, I was really weirded out by the amount of "teen" porn ads I was getting. God they're uncomfortable.

>>3591479
I think I was here when the artist posted the OP pic but can't quite remember who drew it. Anyone got a link?

How good is your feet game?

>>3591479
Could you have made the image any smaller?

>>3591491
>not using adblock
lol

>>3591511
why does that matter?

>>3591479

>lurking and watching...

>>3591499
It just got deleted. Mods, I'm leaving.

>>3591501
i think it's ok for what i need it to be

>>3591499
http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/post/169587183805/2feet dis is the one.

>>3591571
>>3591595

Please go back to the fundamentals and learn basic proportions.

>>3591479
>kyle OP pic
abandon thread a shitstorm is brewing

>>3591631
But......this is where the fun begins.

>>3591571
>>3591595
My god, at least use some reference.

>>3591595
>i think its ok

Ya thats the problem, its okay for you as is so why keep coming to a board designed around improvement? Why not just stick to tumblr or /i/? Of all the places to dump your garbo, you choose the one place that you are supposed to take criticism.

>>3591658
reminder this is about what i was at before, i have improved, but almost no one actually gives constructive crit here, it's all people thinking i'm both a woman and part of some jew conspiracy cause i draw cut cock, plus i'm not into feet so i'm not looking to make them sexier

>>3591668
You'll make it one day if you stop using Microsoft paint

>>3591688
he's gonna make it cause of ms paint. removes a ton of digital crutches.

>>3591711
This. Microsoft Paint rules.

>>3591663
That is improvement, I will give you that. But it is incorrect that you havent gotten constructive criticism. Youve been around a long time and I have seen plenty of people offer genuine advice and you continue to skip basic anatomy and proportions. That picture has so many of the same issues that your recent pictures do. Namely that you use hard lines to represent muscle structure, which leads me to believe you don't study anatomy at all and symbol draw your anatomy.

Its nobody's job to make you improve.

The biggest issue is that no matter how much shit you get, you still post here when you could post on Deviantart where you can do what you do.

I get a lot of commissions for male POV while fucking a girl on her back but they always look super symmetrical to me and I can never get it to look good.
Any tips on making male POV less symmetrical?

>>3591813
tilt her head?

>>3591529
I've always wanted to fuck a downie.

>>3591821
fking savage.

>>3591641
People like you make this place a shithole.

>>3591739
Not nu-paint tho.

>>3591667
Was the painting also done in Paint? I can see a round brush with a lot of spacing being used, so I guess it's Photoshop with a multiply layer on top of the lines.

>>3591821
How do I fix the face?

>>3591872
I did this one in drawpile.

>>3591667
>>3591668
>>3591688
he can make it if he stops only drawing moe shit.
I don't know how he practices. Idk if he looks at moe art and tries to copy it or if he draws from real life and tries to stylize it.I feel like he draws from real life a little bit but looks at moe art.Idk i would have to ask him if he's ever around.

Can I get some help with the crotch area, I'm really stumped on the placement of the vagina/asshole

>>3592058
Gotta look at a real pussy and asshole

>>3592058
Here's some doxy tutorials

>>3592058

>>3592058
Pussy Box

>>3592058
Vegene tips

>>3592058
And an asshole

>>3591501
Not traced. Loosely referenced. I frequently just draw feet in my spare time because my fan base is made up of fetishists. I'm not the best by any means, but well I like drawing feet

Critiques requested for this WIP.

>>3591571
Not only are you a degenerate with bad taste you somehow fail to improve after consistently drawing your filth.

>>3592061
>>3592062
>>3592064
>>3592067
>>3592068
nice.

>>3592200
The left arm seems to be turned a little too far back. It's somewhat painful to place your arm like this.

>>3592200

She seems to have no space between her ribcage and pelvis. I get that she is a giant monstertitted monster but she needs some room for her intestines. It doesnt read well as it is

>>3592200
i might be unexperienced but i can't see what >>3592308 means at all. For me it's fine, there's plenty of space for intestines or whatever, she even has a belly. overall great drawing anon

>>3592347
>>3592308
It does appear to be a little short.

>>3591499
Glad I'm not the only one. I know the girls are legal but most of them do look uncomfortably young and it's unpleasant to say the least. Ofc my dumbass opened /ic/ whilst on the train today and the gramps that was parked next to me definitely got an eyeful.

I've just want to talk about art :(

>>3591514
not him but I want the high res, help a bro out. it's a sleek bit of art.

Thanks for the critiques, everyone. Mind giving this animation rough a go as well?

Forgot the file.

>>3591501
This any good? Pretty recent of mine

>>3592423
i want to bleach my eyes

>>3592423
This made me gay

>>3592423
first time I see gay foot porn. Didn't think it was a thing. Good for you buddy

>>3592434
why

>>3592347
I think its the fact that the breasts have absolutely no sag so you cant see how they are connecting to the ribcage. Replace thw breasts with beach balls and nobody would question the torso being short.

>>3591501
I also had this commissioned, shows the feet I draw a bit better. Any crits?

>>3592423
oh my god
this must be how girls feel when we lewd their favorite female characters like sailor moon and shit

>>3592468
now i wish i did't have any eyes

>>3592252
stay mad

>>3592060
The anatomy in this pic is wrong

>>3591571
>>3591595
>>3591663
>>3592551
how can you say you've improved when you draw the same expression on their faces over and over again?

oh please say that the faces, in your opinion, are different because I'm ready to go look for your art through the archives just to prove you wrong, and that stupid grins on every face you draw is what makes your look like a lazy, undisciplined hobbyist.

>>3592754
putting tits on your drawings wont make you any better, kid

>>3592200
you're doing just fine, dumbass. keep doing what you're doing

>>3592820
everything's going to be alright...

>>3592825
>intented

>>3592423
Your penis game could use some work.

>>3592815
i mean, here i'll get a random pull for you, and you can compare it with>>3592551
and see the differences, just cause an expression is similar doesn't mean nothings changed, or are you just blind

>>3592820
>>3592825
anon, youre saltier than a trap sailor getting BBC. Get over it.

>>3592855
I'm afraid you simply have very little talent and aesthetic taste.
I guess you'll just have to keep working harder than the average person. Keep it up.

>>3592996

Legs are fucked up. Did she fall down and break her knees to the side?

>>3592468
that's pretty good

>>3591663
You def improved and keep improving.
People here just don't realise improvement takes long to show.

And that "your faces are shit" and "your anatomy is wrong" are not useful critiques.

>>3592068
If he wanted an asshole reference all he had to do was use his mirror.

>>3591479
Can you link me the not thumbnail image?

What program to use for coloring "manga style" with tones and such. I'm a total noob and every little research I make online leads me nowhere.
How do I make "coloring" like pic related?

>>3593234
manga studio

Newb here. What are the best times to post on Tumblr, Twitter, Hentai Foundry, and Newgrounds for exposure? Where else would you recommend?

>>3593234
Stop, don't go trying tones, it's fucking pointless and compared to proper digital grey, it easily looks like shit depending on the size you look at it.

>>3593012
Not OP but it's called w-sitting position, most adults can't do it unless they're hyper mobile, but it is possible.
Though the legs do look somewhat off in the drawing, especially the knee shape.

>>3594075
It's how the lower calf is drawn over the upper leg. Look at how your example shows otherwise.

I'm not that used to draw not-loli porn.

>>3593012
>>3594075
i agree about the legs looking weird, that was a tough angle/perspective for me

>>3593645
>looks like shit depending on the size you look at it
yeah I noticed but digital grey is totally unknown to me too.

>>3594114
I think those are the largest tiddies I ever saw you draw, anão. Good stuff, but beware of the shoulders and neck and mess a little more with the boob shape, it's a little odd in the armpit connection, feel weightless and the nipples are ill placed. Beware of the proportions as well, I feel those arms are rather small. Another minor thing is the tangent between the cock and her side. I guess this sums it all.

Released a little while ago. Thoughts?

>>3594601
Really bad foreshortening. You really need to improve your perspective.
Main issue is that your linework, coloring and shading are pretty nice, so the bad perspective and foreshortening are more glaring because of that.

>>3594603
Specifics?

>>3594626
not him, but i might move the leg so it doesn't look so stumpy

>>3594776
Thank you very much for the assistance.

>>3594856
no worries, i may also suggest making his legs a tad longer in general, i went off the length you used, but they're just shot enough to make me think they're stubby, tho i may just be out of it

>>3591479
Newfag here. How does one draw porn that will guarantee the most boners? I.e. what balance of stylization/realism should it have to garner the most wide appeal? I'm planning on shilling out soon, so any advice helps.

>>3594896
style preference is subjective, the only way to get wide appeal is by being good at what you choose to do.

that said, most people would find it easier to draw simple, cutely stylized lewds than to draw realistic/detailed stuff. You can lean on gesture and shape language to create appeal while you expand your anatomical knowledge over time. Most people will easily fall for this as long as you have at least some sense of what looks good

Would appriciate redline/critique
also
>technically upskirt=/=porn
id still appriciate it

>>3594776
outstanding redline, well done showing him what's wrong. i hope...he...improves...fucking kek
>my fucking sides LOL

>>3594986
still got that stupid grin syndrome going fer yeh?

>>3594601
god damn you want to be kyle so bad dontcha

>>3592362
Rip being able to browse /ic/ in public

>>3595168
Why are her boobs so short and far down? Even if the volume of the breasts is reduced, the space they occupy will be roughly the same, especially at the top.

>>3595176
Actually thanks for that. This was just some shit I scribbled but I was wondering why it looked so off, I'll keep that in mind.

>>3595168
senpai. the way of the loli is the only way. just be careful.

>>3595155
>"lol j-just a leg is a bit wonky"
>"that redline will show him!"
>never shows his work

hes gotten alot better in six months. what, did he set you off somehow?

>>3594626
I would do a redline, but I don't draw pedo stuff. Sorry dude.

>>3595549
On second thought, I guess I can draw without adding the characters. I really like your stuff and how you're improving over time. I think you should just plan your construction a bit better when you draw complexly shaded artworks like this one. If the shading is of good quality, then small fundamental mistakes get much more exposed.

Hope pic attached helps. I did a really quick redline to fix some of the perspective inconsistencies. And added some coloring/shading on the side to show depth a tad better.

>>3594601
>>3594626
>>3595549 (You)
>On second thought, I guess I can draw without adding the characters. I really like your stuff and how you're improving over time. I think you should just plan your construction a bit better when you draw complexly shaded artworks like this one. If the shading is of good quality, then small fundamental mistakes get much more exposed.
>Hope pic attached helps. I did a really quick redline to fix some of the perspective inconsistencies. And added some coloring/shading on the side to show depth a tad better.

>>3595155
hey man, he was asking for specifics on what he could change, and that was the biggest one i saw, i considered saying nothing but telling him to blow an exhaust pipe and swallow, but that wasn't helpful

>>3595332
he's gotten worse, /beg/. and that redline is just as shit.

but what can you see, you're just a fucking begginer

>>3595589
i'm gonna give you one more shot at that redline before i start tearing you apart for being such a shit artist as well, faggot. take a look at your fucking redline and point out your flaws before i do. and trust me, you don't want me to point out your stupid, amateurish attempt at trying to help someone with just as much shit in your work as he does have in his

>>3595653
that was the biggest flaw you saw?! i'd rather laugh about this shit than give out garbage red lines. your attempt at trying to help is laughable at best, but of course you fucking beginners stick together like crabs in a pot

>>3595285
coloring won't make the stupid grin syndrome go away either, amateur

>>3595810

>>3595810
I don't think you've ever given actual critique to BBC in any porn thread, you just sperg out at him. You're either a) not as good as him or b) not as successful

>>3595813
the glaring obvious wonky leg? yes that was the biggest flaw i saw, there are smaller things i'd likely change, like his hips, and change the angle of his shoulder set, but that was the biggest one
>>3595815
i'm sorry you don't like people smiling while they're fucking, i'd hope you enjoy your sex through a sheet solely for the purposes of procreation, but as you're obviously some kind of Wahhabi i think that'd mean you'd go to hell

>>3595810
man, that redline looks fine

are you obsessed with shitting on bbc?

>>3595810
>before i start tearing you apart for being such a shit artist as well, faggot
hey, I'd love to get a redline of my redline. go ahead.

>>3595860
>t. incel
the only time people smile while fucking is when one of them farts and they both find it funny

>>3595854
post your work
artists can only give out critiques to other artists
your reply is meaningless

>>3595947
man i am sorry for your partner if you can't make her/him smile during it, just remember, a bit uf upward grind to hit the g/prostate can do wonders

>>3595955
collecting sexual trivia doesn't make your virginity any less obvious
that being said, drawing goofy-ass grins in porn is less awful than that ahegao garbage

>>3595961
i have to ask, what gives the impression i'm a virgin, legit wanna know cause i find these things fascinating, like how people thought i was a girl for drawing gay sex, or jewish for drawing cut dick

>>3595860
are you back for more, Brit Boy Cuck? Are we working on the lighting again first sensei, then the perspectve and THEN the anatomy, you fucking hack?

You point out the leg as THAT fucking problem being the biggest flaw in this idiot's attempt at art again? >>3594601

I swear you fucking autists can't take a look inward and see your own flaws in your art. But then, there are people like me who can point that out without having an ounce of art skills, because unlike any of you, I'm not blind to the point where I can say "Fishised, but not perfect."

Let's take a look at another new piece of your work Brit Boy Cuck, and let's see if you can't point out the mistakes in your work. I'll give you a hint, it's in the file name.

Go ahead Redline, tell me how you brought yourself to publish this piece of shit and STILL consider yourself GOOD enough to redline someone else's train wreck.

>>3595988
holy fuck you fucking idiot

you do realise rules can be bent in porn?

>>3595988
boy you are mad, someone whizzed in your wheaties, you do know you're talking to the wrong guy right? i'm the buff elf artist, not bbc

>>3595980
the know-it-all attitude about sex, defending an idealized sexual fantasy as realism, actually caring whether people think you're a virgin, etc

>>3595860
I love how you managed to fuck up the perspective on the tits, though.

So before you smart off at the mouth again, please tell me why your redlines are good again?

Oh here's another gem of yours. Thank GOD your redlines are here to save us. That way we can learn from you sensei.

The hint is in the file name again, because you're not worth giving out an extensive critique to when all you end up doing is making the SAME mistakes OVER and OVER again.

Just like >>3594601
and >>3595285

That's why I shit on you. You claim to be open to critiques but when someone simplifies the problem and calls you out on your mistakes, you'd rather bullshit your way through the barebones critique on your work and cry, "It's MUH style...".

And instead of swallowing your fucking pride and ACTUALLY getting better, you provide redlines that are just as atrocious.

>>3595994
Another moron defending mistakes. "Ruls cahn beh brhuukn!!"

>>3596005
keep that grin syndrome applied to your work then, idiot

>>3596010
'defending fantasy as realism' what? the other 2 points are also ridiculous but, when did i defend fantasy as realism, i'm pretty solidly fantasy, like, this is the sketch for the next piece man, i love fantasy

>>3596024
you also have no concept of anatomy
this just shows how completely detached you are from your fundamentals and when anyone critiques your work, you'll fling "It's a fantasy style guys!" which is the reason why no one takes the time to critique your work and would much rather spend time calling you out on your mistakes, the very same that you've been showing this thread for the last seven of them

>>3595988
>>3596012
BBC here. Again, can you please redline any of those. In the Sakura and Sean one I see a ton of errors, yeah. Not one of my best artworks, definitely.

The other one tho I don't really see what you are talking about.
Redline?

Otherwise, your hateful comments don't really mean anything to me, sorry dude.

>>3596024
I wasn't talking about your fetishes, unless you have a fetish for people grinning like idiots during sex

>the other 2 points are also ridiculous
gave me a chuckle

>>3596039
sorry this dude is seeing my replies and thinking they're you, not meaning to add fuel to his fire on that
>>3596037
and it's a porn thread, it's rare to see someone tell me 'oh your arm looks jank in this place' or 'here's how you should draw the head cause it looks a little off'
>>3596044
then if it's not about that i legit have no idea what you're on about

>>3596015
Yeah rules can be and should be broken, if it makes the pic better.

>>3596046
for fuck's sake, stop being so dense
you went on the defensive the moment I pointed out that people rarely smile when they're fucking

>>3596046
>sorry this dude is seeing my replies and thinking they're you, not meaning to add fuel to his fire on that
Don't worry about it. I couldn't give more of a fug about his dumbass attempts at insulting me.
I'm just trying to get him to do a redline. But I guess that will never happen lol.

>>3596039
stop pretending to be bbc just to feed the troll, idiot

>>3596059
>I couldn't give more of a fug
less of a fug* ?
English is hard.

>>3596059
yeah prolly not, i think he said he had no talent or skill for it but he had an eye for error or some shit
>>3596058
i didn't go on the defense mate, i made fun of you cause my dick is like blood, everyone's happier when it's inside them

>>3596062
That was me. I'm not feeding him anymore, no worries.

Name the bully

>>3596067
>I think he said he had no talent or skill for it but he had an eye for error or some shit
This explains a lot. I think he has a really good skill for being a douche more than anything.

>>3596067
>my dick is like blood, everyone's happier when it's inside them
yeah I'm done now, there's no topping that
thanks for the laughs

>>3591610
>>3591645
post your arts

>>3596068
stop cutting and pasting too, dipshit. stop feeding the fucking troll with your stupid replies already, shut up and help or get the fuck out of here

>>3595951
???
You're the one talking shit to the guy who posted a redline, post your work so you can be taken seriously idk

>>3596097
Cry more.

>>3596097
>gets redpilled about his wrong assumptions
>starts insulting
Never change /ic/ psychos. Never change.

>>3594979
I like it all except for the shota's face. Something is off about it. I think the side/cheek is too big for his features, and his chin is in the wrong place.

>>3596113
Suck my dick, kid.

>>3596119
keep shitting up the thread faggot, that's all its good for now

>>3596113
>>3596119
BBC here. Guys please, let's get back to drawing, I'm ready for more red lines.

I'll stop responding to the trolls. Everyone knows that my art is good and that I don't have to prove myself to anyone.

>>3596225
>>3596228
>keeps crying and shitting up the thread
my sides

please, reply again

>>3596256
Okay. why not, I've got time to kill

>>3596256
found the crab

>>3596256
>keeps replying to trolls
keep replying dumbass

BBC here. Please guys, we all know the trolls just want to make fun of my work, but we all know that I'm better than that. Let's get back to drawing!

bbc-chan, you are better than these guys, you are in a spot where you dont really need critique but you ask here, where people dont even draw or take critique srs.

i know you come here because you really want to help people but this place is a mess and has lose purpose, but dont lose your time, even when you are right and they dont have nothing good to say, they gonna "laugh because we made him go mad and lose time here le ebic broll imrite".

you helped me months ago with a piece, a redhead eating pizza, if you want to help people, do more tutorials, but never come to places like this. love you.

>>3596354

>>3596354
<3

I want to commission art for an H-game I am developing. I'm coming up with all the assets that I need. Most of them are for character portraits, splash screens, and CG's. Human and non-human characters. Would anyone be interested in a a project like this? I don't know a more appropriate thread to post this in.

>>3596024
Your construction is much better than your final line art. You ruin it by using hard lines everywhere. That isn't to say your construction is great because that girl is all wrong but the dudes seem well proportioned for the most part.

>>3596354
>edgelord
>dick sucker
>loves Meme Emblem


FAGGOT

>>3596466
you certainly showed him kek

>>3594979
you have some potential, it's true

>>3595810
>>3595988
>>3596012
Would you take a look at this absolute human masterpiece. My fucking sides.

>>3595589
>>3596039
Man, stop posting here. Release your redlines on your socials, like you've been doing and don't ever come near this cesspool ever again. Get out of the bucket BBC.

>>3594601
these is the major stuff i could think of
god bless

Where do lewd artists find the lewd sounds for their lewd animations?

>>3596912
Fist + Jar of mayonaise

>>3596912

MikeInel/Manyakis has actually talked about this on his tumblr at one point. He said he got the, "wet" sounds for some of his animations from just recording his hands being moved back and forth with soap all over them lol

>>3597100
You really need to study from real life.

>>3592188
do you work for WikiHow?

gimme your thoughts gents. Any critiques are appreciated.

>>3597641
her left leg looks weird, like too long or something, I think it's cause the perspective on the hips might be a bit fucked.

>>3597641

>>3597833
i love you teal-sama

>>3597841
Who's Teal-sama?

>>3597100
the broken spinessss but overall i like it.

>>3597833
what the fuck is up with that left thigh being shorter than the right thigh in your blue line? you DO know that the knee extends out more than the stupid perspective line you drew across it, right?

>needs more expression. unless fucking dolls is your thing
apparently, you're not that far off from drawing dull, expressionless mannequins yourself, bozo

>read books on what you want to study nd improve on, but remember you need to do hard stuff once in a while too
what the fuck does this even mean?! what kind of shitty advice is this?!

>>3597833
blog?

>>3597844
Brit Boy Cuck pretending not to be Bullied By Crabs

>>3597833
Come to /loomis/ bb, let me take u away from all of zis; hon hon hon~

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dTHapr31I8g

>>3597854
post your work fuckface

>>3597833
and the tape wraps AROUND the mouth you idiot, following the natural curve of the face in a downward position, not like your dumb ass portraying it at that dumb angle completely throwing off the composition of the face

and who the fuck calls it almost side? There are three major positions in drawing an eyeball, front, 3/4 and profile. don't think you can add your own angle to the already tried and true method of drawing like some wanna-be teacher who discovered their won brand of drawing eyes, you fucking hack

>>3597862
i'd rather you post yours so that I can critique it faggot, sound like your ass needs a good ass kicking from some class/ic/ truth.

>>3597854
>>3597869
>>3597873
Completely unironically, are you on the spectrum?

>>3597858
Oh, that's not right then. I just like sketching in blue. I don't post often.

>>3597869
You okay, anon?

>>3597968
see kid, you keep drawing that same stupid face like you had no other idea how to draw expressions, and then you wonder why no one gives you a serious critique here. those anons pulling your shit apart are right in what they're doing because for the life of you, you can't draw anything else but that stupid grin.

this clearly shows that you're just here to post your garbage, and nothing more. that elf gay shit is growing stale, god forbid you try something different and leave the boring comfort that your gay elf shit provides.

>>3597924
post your work

>>3597931
thank god you don't, there are enough retards showcasing their amateur shit without you coming along and adding to the shit pile

>>3597972
>can't draw anything but that stupid grin
lol i drew a different expression on the twink in the picture but go off, here, have another

Guys stop feeding Salty-Kun every fucking thread. Tired of having to scroll through his walls of autism and salty rage.

>>3591888
learn to draw?

>>3597976
oh yeah sure, that's a VAST improvement junior. thank god we're saved by your attempt to save face. i bet you though, "and while I'm at it, let me draw him holding the sword by the blade and not the hilt. that'll teach 'em fer messin' with my fantasy ahts."

Pathetic.

>>3597978
why, would you rather post more of your shit? >>3594601

>>3597988
you've never heard of halfhanding a sword have you?

>>3597997
you've never heard of drawing correctly, have you

>>3598001
i'll take that as a 'no' then

>>3598003
guess I'll take that as a no on you knowing how to draw correctly either, kiddo :)

>>3598005
lol then post a redline and i'll take from it what i need

>>3598008
fuck you junior, no hand outs for twinks drawing elf gay shit and who have no idea how to draw anything else. back to /beg/ you go, squirt.

>>3598008
you feel the need to receive a red line without earning one first? do you want a participation award for your hard efforts too, retard?

>>3592058
Finally finished with this, not too happy with the result but had fun making it, thanks to the anon for posting the tuts too

>>3595589
fucking nice, good to see you still around

>>3598061
good to see you happy with that slice of banana cream crap, amateur.

>>3597833
Woah dude
aww man you are good.

>>3597991
SA~ALT! GLO~ORIOUS SA~ALT!

>>3597974
I'll take that as a yes.

>>3598008
He doesn't even draw. He admitted that himself. He's here just to vent his own frustrations.
Please stop replying to his baits.

>>3598052
>>3598057
You said you don't even draw. Stop trying to sound like someone that does. Your posts in this thread are worth nothing.

Everyone is calling you out for what you are. A troll.

That's the last (you) you get from me, garbage.

I can’t really settle on a face or hair for this

>>3598061
You should check out videos on the abdomen muscles.

>>3598264
>trap with a massive dick
never understood this

>>3598264
>trap with a massive dick
i never not fapped to this
keep drawing huge cocks my friend

>>3597855
supermarmalademum.tumblr.com

>>3597833
>bra strap going down the middle of boob
Hahahahaha what

>>3597833
thanks for the incredibly detailed feedback! I agree that the head was too small and the thighs too long (I think they might be a little too short in your pic though). I definitely need to practice drawing faces more as well, I always struggle to make the eyes feel 3 dimensional. I am studying real life anatomy btw, here is the original picture.

>>3598712
you don't even look at your ref when you draw do you? or even look back to it after you done whatever you done right? why even use the ref if you wont refer to it?

>>3598715
I typically have the ref up on one monitor and draw on another. I also usually overlay the ref with my drawing afterwards to see where my drawing doesn't match up. I don't usually redraw the image though, if that's what you're saying.

>>3598718
okay why overlay? i doubt you overlayed this one cause you go off the ref in so many areas. and all the areas that one anon helped with you could have fixed just looking at thr ref. like the leg length and having the right knee further way further out then the left.

>>3598722
>why overlay
because I'd like to see where I made mistakes in my visual measuring so i can improve for the future. I will admit that I forgot to overlay this one before I posted it.

You're also right that I could've fixed a lot of problems by using the ref better, and I'll try to improve in that aspect. But this is part of the reason I'm posting my stuff -- so I can get advice on how to get better. Thanks for your thoughts mate.

>>3597121
Good eye. Yes, I was contracted several times via upwork to create artwork for wikihow articles. They have a very specific color scheme and illustration they aim for, I call it the "wikihow aesthetic."

>>3598843
SO FUNNY

>>3598845
You would be surprised to learn how much artwork from sites you visit regularly is actually contracted out to complete amateurs

>>3598543
Have an update

>>3598997
Contact for commissions?

>>3598997
Just noticed that the hand is pretty small!

>>3599006
lambrey.tumblr.com
>>3599009
Good catch, thankfully that’s an easy fix

>>3595589
still love your shit kyle. but i gotta sympathize with flintcock here as hes going for the legendary straight aerial on a leg bent at a 90% angle with the knee centered that is near impossible to draw. some day ill get it =/

>>3598712
Yeah, I agree that I drew the legs too short. Especially in comparison to the ref.

>>3591479
how do you draw porn without getting a big boner

>>3599132
You are meant to get the big boner.

>>3599132
You develop a functional brain first. That's also how you become a good artist.

>>3598997
love everything but the penis look like that and the size it is, you have some potential. add a thumb to his hand, define his wrist

>>3599132
>getting a boner on your own work
Yikes

>>3599404
>he doesn't find his work arousing

get good fag

>>3599404
Not him but for me that's not the case, I can't fap to my work but I get aroused at the idea of what I am drawing, and that the idea is coming to reality as i draw.

>>3599132
get the boner but don't fap I guess?

>>3599429
I never got a boner from my own art while I was working on it. Especially not at the end when there's absolutely no novelty anymore, which is a must for me to get aroused.
Sometimes I can get aroused by the old art of mine I still find appealing, bu there's no way that could happen while I actually work on something.

>>3599429
My art is like my kids, its weird to get a boner over my own work.

>>3598997
Learn to draw hands better.

Update.

>>3599600
Working on it

>>3599649
>>3599653
you received an awesome redline in this thread and you don't even reply wtf?

>>3599704
did they redline these?
I thought that person only redlined the pit and palutena one

>>3599704
The redline and the anatomy tutorial I was given have been saved into my folder. I am extremely grateful to Hamster and the artist who provided the anatomy tut; they will help tremendously for current and future pieces.

Been run ragged around the highway with a lot of personal stuff in my life, work, and getting these commissions done.

I think I'm just not feeling it today, but I cleaned up a sketch and it just looks really wonky to me. I'll definitely need to redo the feet, but if anyone notices any other glaring flaws pls tell

Contributin'

>>3591663
people have given you detailed crits before. You ignored them so people have just resorted to calling you shit, which you are. You have not improved in the 1 and a half/ 2 years you've been posting. Your work is incredibly unappealing and you refuse any and all help. TLDR fuck off your bad.

>>3599653
This is a perspective/forshortening nightmare

>>3599847
>cleaned up a sketch.
Smh senpai. That is not clean at all desu.

>>3600070
sauce on that image?

Hey I want to improve upon someone else's pic and woupd like some pointers on anatomy to start.

>>3598997
stop deleting your damn galleries

>>3599653
Feels like she has midjet legs.

>>3600076
I drew it last last week. I have become some what obsessed with elf ears.

>>3600077
Dont be ashamed to say its your own work. Own it. Accept your mistakes and take responsability. Then you can take steps to improve on your work and yourself in the process.

>>3600092

I wish I could say it was mine but here is my take on it.

>>3600098
It's worse. I think you should study appeal and anatomy more.

First round of fixes

>>3600098
Love the effort anon. Reminds me of my smut i drew in highschool. Practice some solo figures and anatomy. Draw big too. Buy a large sketch pad.

>>3599893
>Noice
Noice.
Her arms are bit too short though.

>>3600080
as long as he'll keep drawing pedo shit, that's an inevitability.

Any quick tip on drawing good looking cocks?

>>3600200
Look up nice uncut cocks and draw them with extreme detail. Its hreat practice. It worked for me. I drew every wrinkle on that forskin too. Now i can draw dicks easy peasy. Seriously like draw 20 dicks big drawings too. None of those small sketches.

>>3598246
And I'm calling you out for the shitty artist you are, so, fuck you too. :)

>>3600070
I mean it is for me desu, I'll do lineart so it doesn't need to be very refined.

>>3600181
True ! I see it now, thanks boyo

>>3599847
>>3600070
Alright fine, I did an even cleaner sketch

>>3600478
Looked better at the previous stage

>>3600481
Why tho

New commission in the works. Critiques?

>>3600255
For all we know, you are so much of a delusional psycho or downright troll, that you would call even fuckin Kim Jung Gi a shitty artis.
No one is taking you seriously, fucking retard.

>>3600540
Legs are broken is this a fetish?

well

>>3600575
Go use a reference. His legs look like tumors.

>>3600561
Specifics?

>>3600540
I tried sitting like that on the floor and the leg on the right could be more natural if it was up against the thigh, maybe seeing the end of her foot coming out around the top of the quadriceps?

>>3599847
>>3600478
the right calf and feet looked like the glaringly wrong bits so I tried enlarging them a bit for you, does this look any better? idk

>>3600857
I think the more correct version is somewhere between mine and yours, but your version made me realize how tiny they looked, so thank you. Will fix.

>>3600478
Looks a bit better now. Dont listen to that other guy. He a crab.

>>3600179

Sad part is that I am way past my teenage years myself.

I really need to stop procrastinating.

Small painting

>>3600546
Kim Jung Gi is a lesser Katsuya Terada and Jean-David Morvan, snowflake.

Why aren't you posting more gay elf shit anymore? You running scared after I called you out on your stupid grin syndrome? Is your fantasy world turning into shit now that you're doubting yourself?

>>3601286
Knowing artists names won't make you any more relevant, retard.

>>3592060
>that ass hair

>>3597968
if you draw something thats not porn ill redline you. just ping my name. You have tons of skill but nobody is helping you because of your gay fetishes.

>>3601422
>nobody is helping you
maximum kek

>>3601422
why would anyone want a redline from you

>>3601422
Posr your work

am i going to make it

>>3595589
>>3595810
I'm having a really hard time understanding what's wrong with these redlines. I'm starting to doubt my eyes. Seriously, they're the best in the thread so what's the problem? Can somebody explain the butthurt?

>>3601550
some schizo autismo has a beef against this artist, I suspect a false sense of superiority because he can detect minor anatomic mistakes in a professional's work, which deludes them to think they are better than this artist, even though they don't draw

>>3601642
>professional's work
the delusion is real in this fucking porn thread, jesus christ

>>3601402
It's providing sources, dipshit. It's relevant to the conversation. So not only are you a weekend artist, you're also a fucking moron when you type.

>>3602049
he's a working professional you dingus, wether you like it or not

>>3602049
it's priceless how you didn't deny any other allegation they made in that post. you are blinded by your hate.
>>3602058
who cares about those sources. I was pointing out how delusional you are and you proved my point by starting to compare KJG to other artists.
you are a joke.

>it's fucking nothing
Sad!

>>3602501
still haven't posted your gay elf shit, either faggot. I've got you so fucking scared about posting your work anymore that these are the only replies you'll give.

I'd rather be a joke than a pussy artist like you, kid. See you in the next porn thread so i demolish your work even further. :)

>>3602222
Oh yeah, drawing the same fucking shit makes him a great sensei, god forbid he ever leave us with no fish-lens work. Won't anyone think of the children...

>>3602647
you're doing god's work, anon.

>>3602700
I have never posted my art in here. I'm a beginner and I don't draw porn.
you are a paranoid delusional psycho.

>>3601550
it's the way these amateur artists are using their references, really. anyone with a sense of anatomy can tell you that the pose looks awkward, certain body parts look disjointed and putting smiles on their faces makes you look like a lazy artist who can't fully grasp the thought of drawing expressions. for as long as he's been drawing, he's still using training wheels on his art, drawing his arms and legs sectioned off like that to give off that sense of, "my own brand of red line critique. what purpose does this serve other than show off how inexperienced and scared the hobbyist is, when it comes to drawing anatomy.

you starting to doubt your eyes means that you're no longer taking these poor attempts at face value anymore. the only butthurt warranting a mention are all the artists on this particular thread who can't take blunt, honest criticism of their work.

the amateur weekend artist bitches and complains, using "their style" as their poor excuse for learning while the real student keeps their mouth shut and observes, taking honest criticism and applying it to their practice and work.

well, at least someone knows the way to real learning here >>3597861

but you'll never see any of these people admit to it. and that's why this porn thread sucks the way it does.

>>3602733
>t. dunning kruger, the post

>>3592060

>>3603591
nice

>>3602783
>t. dunning kruger, the reply
:)

>try to browse porn thread because there has been some increase in trolls on alt
>porn thread is full of angry motherfuckers
Holy shit what's happening with /ic/ lately?