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Old thread here >>3570291

You know what the thread is about at this point. It's time to do studies from pic related and other photos posted in thread. Your goal is to understand the underlying form and structure of the subjects you're studying. Once you understand what the subject is doing, your goal is to deviate from life and design appealing and ideal looking illustrations.

And don't forget: Simply copying your reference then slapping an anime head on top will result in uncanny drawing with out of whack proportions. You cannot forget to simplify and invent where you must in order to preserve an appealing drawing.

Get to it friends.

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>>3588600
Kept this part out of the OP to keep it short. Have a special set of references pictures for you guys today. Meet よむ aka y_o_m_y_o_m on twitter. He's a professional Japanese illustrator that's shared many works side by side with their reference photo. Consider it a benchmark. You have your reference photos and now a solid idea of one way a professional stylized and rendered those photos. Wish you all luck, don't get discouraged! I'll only post a couple and then allow other anons to share some nice boys or other references to add variety to the thread.

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>>3588602

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>>3588605

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>>3588607

>> No.3588626
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posted right before the previous thread died

>> No.3588627
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>>3588626

>> No.3588800

>>3588626
>>3588627
bro... don't bring them angels into this cesspool.

I like most of it except the face. I suggest drawing a ton of faces to get better at them

>> No.3588803

>>3588600
>>3588601
>>3588602
2D really is better than 3D.

>> No.3588831

>>3588627
Why are you posting nasty koreans in a japanese cartoon thread? I hate koreans, please go start a korean thread or something to keep this thread related to japanese things

>> No.3588838

>>3588800
thanks man. I do try to draw a lot of faces and I definitely didn't put enough effort into this one, most of the time I spent was in the clothes. Looking at the face in a mirror, a lot of the errors are obvious. the eyes aren't aligned and the jawline isn't symmetrical etc..
Do you have any other specific critiques for the face?

>> No.3588863

>>3588838
Since I was already drawing i edited yours a bit and did a example of how i'd do it.

mainly choose if you going a more anime route or more realistic. It's like you are combining both but in an unflattering way. like realisitic positioning and size but anime styling. so it looks odd.

I'd make her eyes wider and make the pupil more round and if you gonna shave it always in a straight line not going up like yours did.

also korean style like thick eyebrows it looks nice so make sure to go a bit thicker. it doesnt have to be as thick as i did tho. also a bit wider mouth i think and less O shape.

But yeah keep it up I also like drawing twice but since im not that good i dont post it as often as i should.

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>>3588838
>>3588863
fk forgot to add the picture...

>> No.3588928

>>3588831
This is a general thread for east asian art, retard. There's fuck tons of korean refs in the previous thread.

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>>3588600
Thanks for making the thread senpai

>> No.3588989

>>3588600
>>3588601
>>3588602
>>3588605
>>3588607
>>3588608
>Yom releases whole books on anatomy references for his art

I need these books now.

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>>3588627
Shit was hard desu.

>> No.3589735

>>3588930
Did you make these? 'Cause reverse search turns up nothing. Amazing stuff.

>> No.3589765

>>3588928
Whatever, shit taste faggot

>> No.3590077

>>3589765
Stay mad /beg/ :)

>> No.3590080

So what's everyone's end goal for learning how to draw anime? How will you get by in an already over saturated industry? Do you have unique plans to set yourself apart?

>> No.3590085

>>3590080
Porn

>> No.3590088

>>3590080
I want to fucking draw pretty pictures

If you're only thinking about money then get an engineering degree

>> No.3590089

>>3590085
As a hobby?

>>3590088
I never said it was about money. If it's all just a hobby or something then more power to you.

>> No.3590093

>>3590080
It's a fucking hobby. Im already a senior position at my job.

>> No.3590096

>>3588863
>>3588864
Thanks for the pointers! I like yours, its cute, but if I'm going to be honest I feel like mine looks a bit more "anime" idk, just an observation. Maybe another anon can offer his opinion if I'm crazy. Do you have any other more polished work to show?

>> No.3590101

>>3590080
Kill yourself. I'm having fun. I already have a job that makes money.

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>>3590101
I'll never understand why people got so defensive over to be what I think is a pretty inoffensive question. Good for you anon.

>> No.3590109

>>3590104
Might be samefagging lol

>> No.3590115
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>>3590080
Obviously commissions. It can't be too hard to get some exposure once you get good and live off 20 dollars per drawing. For starters you'd just create a twitter and instagram and maybe tumblr account and start shilling it everywhere on /ic/ and OH yes a facebook page too.

If your drawings are really good, and I mean "Professional manga cover" good, people will surely want to watch your work and some will fall to curiosity and pay you for it.
Of course I know shit about this and you probably have examples of good people not making it, but I know a girl who does 5 dollar comissions pretty regularly just because she got into a big (50k+ people) meme group and thirsty dudes and artsy gays started following her.
From that I deduce it's a matter of making it into a group with something that catches the eye once you get good.

>> No.3590337

>>3589735
nah found it on twitter
ref is based on twitter@konomuraZ

>> No.3590339

>>3590101
What kind of job is it?

>> No.3590342

>>3590080
>muh industry
Who cares? I don't think there's a market for professional anime/manga artists in America. It's all calarts shit. My end goal is to just draw animus as a hobby and share it with people online who are into that sort of thing

>> No.3590402

>>3590115
>20 dollars per drawing

ishygddt...

>> No.3590433

>>3588600
I’m beginning to like Yomu’s new style. She’s turning it around finally.

>> No.3590436

>>3590080
Is there any field in art that's not saturated? Even painter-ly concept art is over saturated these days.

>> No.3590437

>>3590436
Over saturation is a meme. Don’t believe it. Remember less than 1% make a living doing this.

>> No.3590814

I have a huge pantyhose fetish and this has made me unbelievably erect.

How do I create pantyhose like this or better, I need to know. It is my calling.

>> No.3590864

>>3588600
WHERE IS THE REST OF HER FOREHEAD?????

>> No.3591012

someone do a loomis head but with anime

>> No.3591021

>>3591012
go back to the previous thread. I'm not gonna post it again

>> No.3591311
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pls rate my progress.

>> No.3591320

>>3591311
it went from a turd to a slightly polished turd

>> No.3591325
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>>3590864
Anime magic.

>> No.3591344

>>3591311
First one has better proportions but still bad

>> No.3591375

>>3591311
I seriously cannot comprehend how bad your taste must be if you post and can't see anything wrong. Like you have to be autistic or severely mentally impaired
>dibujo
oh

>> No.3591403

>>3591375
I was trying to remake the drawing and be like, trying to copy the original everything.

>> No.3591482

Can we discuss anime proportions? I cannot figure out how big the head should be.

>> No.3591485

>>3591482
Just scale it using the lasso tool until it looks right lol

>> No.3591486

>>3591485
digifag please.

>> No.3591497

>>3591486
Tradfag pls

>>3591482
Slightly bigger than 1/8th of the whole body (if adult) works best for me

>> No.3591502

>>3591482
>>3591485
this

>> No.3591513

>>3588600
>uses reference
>still butchers anatomy

for what porpoise

>> No.3591952

What are the skill level required to get a job as an anime illustrator nowadays? My guess is light novel tier work but I'd love to hear more.

>> No.3591957

>>3588600
>>3588601
>>3588602
>>3588605
>>3588607
>>3588608
>tracing
Why is this allowed?

>> No.3591982

>>3591957
Fix your eyeballs if you think this is traced.

>> No.3592004

>>3591957
huh?

>> No.3592018

>>3591957
The state of this board i swear.

>> No.3592040

>>3591957
Nigger.

>> No.3592066

>>3591957
You think this is traced? looool come on, step it up son

>> No.3592112
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are the facial proportions correct/acceptable here

>> No.3592119
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>>3592112
facial features are nice but that forehead got her looking like megamind or some shit

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what am i doing wrong

>> No.3592144

>>3592143
your gesture and expression sucks. she looks stiff as a board and scared/constipated

>> No.3592151

>>3592144
ouch

>> No.3592173

>>3592119
>megamind
oh god she does look like one

also thanks for the help

>> No.3592333

>>3592143
You're thinking with your dick instead of your brain.

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tried anime again after 2 month of not going near it. how i do with body and face(does it look animu)

hand is sit tho since i didn't try. sorry guys to lazy

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I'll post more refs later

>> No.3592858

>>3592340
You can deal with bad faces later, I'll say to keep grinding a few more months and then go full retard on the whole anime shiet

>> No.3592865

>>3589081
Feels very 80s anime, but I fuckin hate those hands.
Why are you faggots so lazy with learning to draw hands!?

>> No.3592881

>>3588600
>boobs at hip level
so this.................is the power...............................of using references without having a solid foundation of basic drawing...........................woh.................................

>> No.3592896

>>3590080
there's a niche for everyone. im in it solely for the lolis. it will serve as completing my self satisfaction, and a separate goal that will build on top of it

>> No.3592911

>>3591311
it's stiff and boring; i now see what was wrong with my poses. it lacks...movement. like my dick. stiff and boring, and no one wants to see it.

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>>3588627

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>>3592881
Is this bait or are you actually that retarded?

>> No.3592950

>>3592943
yea

>> No.3592969

>>3592943
nice bait
or are you actually that blind

>> No.3592985
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>>3592969
Can't comprehend the basic idea of perspective

>> No.3593000

>>3592985
>>3592943
are all anime fans this ignorant, or is it unique to this board

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>>3592413

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>>3593034
I wish I have a larger size for this

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>> No.3593065
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some couple poses

>> No.3593071
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that's all for now
You can do your own studies or use the ones posted in the thread

>> No.3593135

>>3592143
>what am i doing wrong
you are not posting enough of her

>> No.3593211

why post just koreans tho? gib real nihonjin

>> No.3593223

>>3593211
stop being a pussy and start drawing

>> No.3593383

>>3593045
i'll share my 1st attempt at doing references in this context but without extreme referencing, however.

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>>3593383
i see what i did wrong. i just have to analyze significantly more amongst a couple other bits.

>> No.3593434

>>3588930
is that kira

>> No.3593435

>>3592333
she's just fat u perv

>> No.3593503

>>3593430
You need to learn construction and anatomy anon. Everything is wrong.

>> No.3593508

>>3593503
noted; will work diligently anime senpai. the perfect loli is waiting ;')

but real shit. i anticipate about 4 years before i reach a certain milestone

>> No.3593534

>>3593508
You need to learn (and how to draw) the placement of the ribcage, hip bone, and collarbone.

>> No.3593542

>>3593534
yes. u said that twice. "construction"

>> No.3593585 [DELETED] 

>>3593071
>>3593065
>>3593043
>>3593042
>>3593030
>>3593031
Stop posting ugly ass koreans. This is anime we need JAPANESE references.

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>>3593585

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>>3593585
1/??

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>>3593585
2/??

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>>3593585
3/??

>> No.3593611

>>3593608
What a useless reference picture, in what fucking scenario ever would you need to draw someone holding a gun in that position

I love Japan.

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>>3593605
no clothes

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>>3593607
no clothes

>> No.3593619

>>3593585
Who cares? Just draw you retard

>> No.3593622

>>3593611
It's only good as a challenge.

>> No.3593627

>>3593619

Was the artist who created superman referencing niggers or asians when he created the character? You're obviously the retard who clearly isn't drawing if you think this isn't important.

>> No.3593631

>>3593627
no but if he was referencing niggers, superman would be much more swole

>> No.3593633

>>3593627
>He says when anime started as a Disney rip-off.
Also superman was made by jews

>> No.3593638

>>3593627
I'm assuming your work is probably mediocre with that kind of logic. They're all asians and mostly have the same facial structure, you filthy westerner. Anime is a generally a term for east asian art.

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>>3593633
>>3593631
>>3593627
>Arguing instead of drawing

>> No.3593641

>>3593638
(you)

>> No.3593647
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>>3593627
Just draw faggot. And post your work.

>>3593639
I just woke up with fresh retards in the thread as always

>> No.3593650 [DELETED] 

>>3593638
>>3593647

>They're all asians and mostly have the same facial structure

If this was true you wouldn't have anons easily calling you out for posting koreans. Either post japanese or fuck off. Gookfags are even lower than weebs. Go make a korean study general or some shit you fucking faggots.

>> No.3593661

>>3593650
Make a pol thread elsewhere western cuck or dont participate in the thread at all

>> No.3593662

>>3593661
Absolute brainlet can't counter argue so you have to mention that shit board. Either post japanese or don't post in the ANIME thread.

>> No.3593676

>>3593662
I'll post whenever I want to faggot :) Here's a last (you). Now get out there and draw

>> No.3593678

>>3593676
As expected from a dumb korean poster.

>> No.3593702

>>3593627h
Do people spend this much time shitposting instead of honing their craft?
Just calculate how much in a day, week, month is wasted in shitposts.

>> No.3593800

>>3593702
Which makes his brainlet insult funnier because he clearly doesn't have the brain capacity for self-awareness.

>> No.3593808

Let's just get along senpai ;-;
Let's all post our animu

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>>3593808
ok

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>>3588600
Oh nonononono------ NO

>> No.3594118

>>3594060
what are you pointing out exactly?

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>>3592413

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>>3592413
It sucks.

>> No.3594331

>>3594194
looks pretty cool, she looks like asuka when translated to anime
Also, remove those extra lines for her nostril to make it look less western

>> No.3594391

>>3594118
She hes a giraffe neck

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>>3593027
a warm up. cute girls, anon ty for the refs

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>>3593605
>>3593606
>>3593607

Look out, honey, cuz I'm usin' technology!

>> No.3594546

>>3594403
>>3594194
Cute!

>> No.3594608

>>3594391
i mean you blocked out the context and made her neck longer than it was depicted, but okay

>> No.3594774

>>3594331
>>3594546
thx u guys,

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>>3588600
don't forget to supplement your anime studies with real-world studies, everyone :^)

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>>3594608
HAHAHAHA

>noooooooo muh japanese artists can't do no wrong! ;,......(((

Her craneum is fucked too

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>>3594782

>> No.3594788

>>3594782
>That nose
ayyy

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gave this a quick try, is it animu enough or should i stylize harder?

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>>3594782

>> No.3594928

>>3594809
I'd exaggerate the head shape and its proportions a bit more, especially the hair. lose a few lines on the eyes and also make them a bit more squinty and lengthen if you are going for that mature look, thinner lines on the jaw and chin while adding more curve. experiment and see if it works out, good work though keep it up

>> No.3594945

>>3594928
thanks for the feedback! I'll work on it a bit more tomorrow!

>> No.3594962

>>3594782
>>3594784
>>3594788
>>3594827
Hey, delete these posts.

>> No.3594968

>>3594777
I already get my daily fucking from loomis thanks

>> No.3594984

>>3594809
eyes too small

>> No.3594987

Where can I get a good look at the common female anime head shape? From lots of angles and without hair? This would help me a lot

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>>3594987
Search the tag "講座 顔" for more front, profile, 3/4 view ones

>> No.3595015

how do you know where to put the lines that make the jaw

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>>3595009
all from pixiv

>> No.3595230
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3595230

>>3588600
I hate how Im too western to draw anime.

>> No.3595265

>>3594987
There's also anime loomis posted in the previous thread. Go check it out

>> No.3595396
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3595396

>>3588600

>> No.3595402

>>3595396
>>3594194
dial down the toning

>> No.3595409

>>3595402
Thanks for the tip. I like the screen-tone look, but i dont quite get digital screen-tone and how to make it look not so overpowering..

>> No.3595474

>>3588930
oooh I just realized one of the poses was based on this >>3593032
p cool bro

>> No.3595475

>>3590080
>getting paid for art
Join the day job master race. It worked for Kafka.

>> No.3595479
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3595479

>>3591957
you might be onto something actually

>> No.3595481
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3595481

>>3595479

>> No.3595492

>>3592143
The body proportions are all weird.
Even if it's supposed to be a thicc girl, the left half is too big, especially considering the head is already too small compared to the right half.

>> No.3595497

>>3594809
Make thinner lines.

>> No.3595800

>>3594546
thank <3

>> No.3596299
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3596299

some refs for you guys.

>> No.3596302
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3596302

>>3596299

>> No.3596308
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>>3596302

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3596313

>>3596308

>> No.3596319
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3596319

>>3596313
last one for now

>> No.3597058

Are there some how to draw anime head tutorials that aren't draw the rest of the owl tier? The circle and pointy chin isn't enough because I have no idea how it completely changes shape when you turn it.

>> No.3597059
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3597059

heres this
shes supposed to look asian

>> No.3597061

>>3597059
sorry anon but she looks more anime than asian

>> No.3597063

>>3597061
He's almost there

>> No.3597075

what the hell is going on

>> No.3597106

>>3590104
whats the source on this?

>> No.3597120

>>3595230
me likey

>> No.3597346 [DELETED] 

>>3588831
I agree, I hate koreans too! Get this korean shite outta here!

>> No.3597456

>>3594194
>>3594403
>>3594809
>>3595230
>>3595396
Good job

>> No.3597478

>>3597456
thanks!

>> No.3597572
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3597572

Not asian but

>> No.3597574

>>3597572
thanks for reminding me how fucked up anime proportions are and its cancerous impact on my art today

also draw the fucking feet and hands

>> No.3597587
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3597587

>>3597574
Remove gesture drawing from your first step and that’ll solve the problem. All my figures turn into uguu blobs without even meaning too, it’s oretty aids
>feet,hands
I’m a coward

>> No.3597601

>>3597587
could you not sketch with a soft brush kthanks

>> No.3597627

>>3597587
I'm pretty bad about it too. I can crank out a pretty ok figure but when I force myself to draw the hands and feet they look my figure was in some freak accident and their hands and feet were replaced with smashed mozzarella sticks.

>> No.3597681
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3597681

>>3588601
maybe more people will post their work if they see mine and feel better about themselves.

I really like seeing other peoples construction methods, it helps me a lot.

my arms are extremely spaghett, i have a lot of work to do.

>> No.3597728

>>3597681
Too wiiiiiiiide

>> No.3597799
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3597799

Help me correct the anatomy on this. Some other people told me the legs look off. I'm not particularly fond of the left hand either.

>> No.3597845

>>3597799

The knees are way too..thin? Not sure what you did exactly but I recommend doing some leg studies, learn how the knee works and the muscles, etc. I think it would help you out a lot.

I see potential in your work! Just gotta study some of those trouble areas.

>> No.3597850

>>3597728
I appreciate you pointing that out. It looked so normal to me until now. Looking back at my other sketches, a lot of my torsos are a bit wide.

>> No.3597864

>>3597845

well I used ref but I guess I didnt look close enough.

>> No.3597905
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3597905

>>3595230
I tried cleaning up the sketch a bit
I should really grind more instead of getting drunk

>> No.3597922

>>3597799
I think the torso/hips are too wide, or the legs are too thin... depends on what you're going for.

>> No.3597929
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3597929

>>3597799
Too wide

>> No.3597935
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>>3597799
the legs are weird i dono how to fix it without drastically changing the pose and spending way too much time on something that isnt mine. but here i think you made her tooooo wide. like rylo ken status desu. also move knees way up and change the pigeon toe pose you gave her. makes no sense with her build.

>> No.3597992

>>3597935
Damn, it's crazy how much balance/proportion can make or brake a drawing

>> No.3598018

>>3597935

That face looks pretty smushed to me.

>> No.3598024

>>3597935

I mean the more I look at it that doesn't do anything to address the issues with the legs.

>> No.3598035

>>3598024
like i said the legpose is the problem. what I'd do is change the leg pose all together. but if he wants a pose where the feet both pose inward like the knees suggest then the easiest fix is just move the knees upward to around where i placed the line and continue from there.

>>3598018
yeah the eye closes to the edited side is too close to it. i agree but like i said i was just trying to do a quick edit more or less. and the original had uguu face.

>> No.3598041

>>3598035

>uguu face

I dont know what this means. I'm going to redraw the legs.

>> No.3598075
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3598075

Here's my first attempt at fixing the legs.

>> No.3598092

>>3598075
Thats too low again. the knee. And she gonna tip over. Also you keeping her extra wide? Atleast make the face less wide. Uguu=kanon madoka wide face.

Anyway id redline again but you ignored my fixes so fuck yourself.

>> No.3598095

>>3598041
How in the ever living FUCK does one browse this very website, board, and SPECIFIC thread about drawing anime girls and not know what uguu is

>> No.3598098
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3598098

>>3588600
Here is something I finished today.
H-here is muh insta https://www.instagram.com/alexanderhito

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>>3598075
i think it's supposed to be like this, i'm a beg though

>> No.3598262
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>>3598075

>> No.3598606
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>>3588601
ty for the ref, fren

>> No.3598608

>>3598606
sorry my images are all sideways

>> No.3598841

>>3597572
i'm stealing that reference

>> No.3598981

>>3594777
l-loomis-san if you grind my fundies like that ill-..!!

>> No.3598988

>>3597572
The way you drew her sides makes it look like she's got a bad case of the rumbles.

>> No.3598991
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3598991

3d study of another artist. Perspective of head is slightly turned down compared to original but it looks fine I think. As long as I notice the difference and can tell what it should be is important. On to the next thing.

>> No.3598999

>>3597572
I like how it looks honestly. I can see the perspective and anatomy differences and I'm sure the crabs are angry about it, but you're using a reference and no one is perfect, good job finishing a piece now move onto the next one and keep improving.

>> No.3599020

>>3598999
what's a crab?
I've been here for two weeks and still can't figure it out, tho I have an idea, it sounds like the no fun police

>> No.3599023

>>3599020
yep, that's literally it, you'll see posts by people who are just overly negative or critical, don't let them influence your mood.

>> No.3599028

>>3599020
some people like to complain just for the heck of it
Don't mind them and just keep drawing

>> No.3599056
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3599056

>>3593042

>> No.3599071

>>3599056
Pose, hands, and body are good. Nose on face is pointing the wrong direction, right eye is out of position/perspective. Good job overall!

>> No.3599086

>>3598262
What program is this?

>> No.3599088

>>3599086
Magic Poser

>> No.3599238
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3599238

How long can this grind on? I still can't draw proper 3/4 quarters eyes.

>> No.3599276
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3599276

>>3599238
were you using loomis for 3/4 heads? I couldn't get it before either til I tried other head construction methods like the Reilly abstraction and Asaro heads

>> No.3599278

>>3599276
pic not related I attached it for a different post

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3599317

>>3599071
i don't know if it's fixed or not anyway thank you for the help anon

>> No.3599864

could someone do a step by step of a head

>> No.3599876

>>3599317
The shadows on that are really inconsistent and incoherently placed. Simplify, it's hard to tell what you want the viewer to focus on. Hands could be better, looks like you really struggled with the skirt down as the legs seem quite rushed. The face shadows don't coincide with planes of the face so you have some unnatural shadow lines. One of my least favorite shadow parts is how you have it go from the nose to her left eye, it doesn't correspond well enough for me to the lighting and how her hair would make shadows on the face.

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3600131

>>3594777
how do you color so coolly?

>> No.3600204

https://boards.fireden.net/ic/thread/3531850/#3531850
Any reason why we threw out the old OP?

>> No.3600211

>>3600131
i do a rough blocking in of colors to see if i like how they look together. then i play with adjustment layers until it looks good

>> No.3600231

>>3595492
low test

>> No.3600352

>>3588600
literally a tumbler nose.

>> No.3600354

>>3594194
hurts my eyes desu

>> No.3601210
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>>3593605
>>3593606
>>3593607
>>3593608
what set is this from?

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3601392

>>3601210
Real Action Pose Shots 01: The Compilation of Female High School Students (瞬撮アクションポーズ01 女子高生アクション編

>> No.3601433
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>>3592340
Face drawing is heavily a matter of stylization. Not saying that the body figure isn't, but it's just much less so. It's hard to grind both fundies and style at the same time, anon. So just as the other anon said, grind fundies like mad. To make this process fun, I'm not gonna tell you to read Loomis or some other shit like that, you just have to follow your favorite artists and copy/reference their works. Getting used to anime poses will help you a shittone in manga because what makes anime truly anime is the cute pose. Once you can reliably and easily copy/reference bodies and poses, get deeper into styles that you like and again, try to copy it. Westerinos will disagree with me but this is the true way of getting good at drawing cute anime waifus.
Pic related is a wall of text but it's easily the best read I've had in /ic/

>> No.3601453

>>3601433
>pic related
well explained, anon. Thanks for sharing.
Wish I can contribute to this thread but I'm too swamped with work right now

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Dumping shit from the greatests

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3601527

Anime is shit.
you need to go back >>>/i/

>> No.3601549

>>3598606
no, it's you who's holding the phone sideways when taking pictures

note: your phone will always flip the pic on the phone screen, but on the pc you will have to do it yourself, unless you hold the phone the right way when taking the picture

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>>3592413
Thoughts appreciated

>> No.3603272

>>3603270
I think you need to share a Twitter.

>> No.3603321

>>3603272
I have no social media whatsoever atm. But I think I will make some in the near future since I think I'm finally doing something right with my work.

>> No.3603401

>>3603270
good, i think she deserves a background, but that's not what this thread is about I suppose

>> No.3603480
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3603480

>>3593607
thank you aniki, these are godsend.

>> No.3603484

>>3603480
Beautiful architecture behind her. Is there an album?

>> No.3603560

>>3603484
unfortunately i don't know, but if i do find more i'll pot them.

>> No.3603688

>>3600204
Who knows, this OP is vague as fuck about studying anime aesthetics. At least the original OP gave lots of links to tutorials related to drawing form and anime and shit.

>> No.3603956

>>3603688
Yeah but everyone's too autistic in the previous asg. Im fine with this

>> No.3603970

Does anyone know if there's a good book or tutorial on how to draw abs in an anime aesthetic? That's my biggest weakness at the moment, they just don't look like they belong when I draw them.

>> No.3603972

>>3600204
>>3603688
I liked the old thread better too. Bring it back and just add the "real pic to anime" thing from this thread to it.

>> No.3603974

>>3603956
no they're not. it was seemingly the same shit stirrers always posting the same problems and then idiots replying to them.

>>3603970
study actual ab placement from anatomy resources, find real life reference, then find how artists you like render abs. it's a lot easier to work for a goal as a baseline there and change your style after as opposed to broadly asking for "how to abs"

>> No.3603977

>>3603974
I can do that already. The problem is that for me, to make them look right, I need to render them. But when I just draw them in a simple anime style without adding any tone they look weird.

>> No.3603987

>>3603977
Even anime linework without shading or tones might look weird or less ideal than what you think it should be. You only have to hint at lines. It's hard to help without seeing anything.

>> No.3604002
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3604002

>draw real grills, dude, you're gonna improve so fast!
>draw the ugly ass fuck nearly obese modern women, bro, you are gonna make it!

>do it
>still shit

I hate you all. Now I'm lost in a limbo where I'm shit but can't quit forever.

>> No.3604458

>>3604002
Keep blaming others you lazy fuck

>> No.3604568

>>3603974
Nah it was the people reeeing when they get told to grind their fundies.

>> No.3604618 [DELETED] 

>>3588600
LMAO HER FOREHEAD
>>3588601
muh dikk
>>3603270
not good

>> No.3604782
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3604782

>>3603270
I think it's lovely. The only thing I'd change is the shading of the face. I think it looks a little too flat in comparison to the rather detailed shading of the hair and clothes. Maybe anime figures or dolls could be a useful source on how to render an anime face more three-dimensionally.

>> No.3605075

>>3603270
How do you color like this? Do you have any tips? What program do you use? Any help appreciated Anon

>> No.3605082

https://sunamerimeri.info/how_to-draw_diagonal_face/203

this persons blog is pretty great. its in japanese tho

>> No.3605482

>>3588800
faggot

>> No.3605542

>>3604782
Thanks. Yeah, I was actually thinking that too, will definitely look into it.

>>3605075
I used Photoshop. Before doing this one, I was complete shit at coloring but as I made this one, I experimented a lot and these are what I kept in mind:

Hue shifts are important. The apron is red, but there are colors warming up and cooling. In the highlights of the apron, you can see I shifted the color more towards yellow while I cooled the red towards more purple in the shadows. Open up w/e program you use and drag your color picker across the apron and you can see the hue indicator jump around.

Highlight, midtone, shadows, reflected light. The sleeve of the right arm I think best shows this. There are highlights on top, and then in the middle, I put a thin line of shadows and then a color of a value in between below it. Again, you can see some hue shifting in there too. Also, make sure your midtones and shadows are saturated. I think in real life, you'll see midtones have the most saturation, but in anime or stylized stuff, you'll want to saturate your shadows too. Generally just keep your highlights desaturated.

Vary the edges. Use your hard brushes and soft brushes equally. This was big for me because I never used brushes that had opacity jitter off and I always wondered why my colors always looked shitty and muddy. In most things you paint, there are soft color changes and hard color changes depending on how the form turns and whatnot. So don't blend every new color you introduce, first think if there should be a hard edge or a soft edge.

Work big to small. When I start coloring, I put the base color in, make the brush the biggest I can for the job, and paint in the lights and shadows. This helps keep you focused on which areas are in shadow and in light and then you can build up your details inside of them. I think you can best see this in the hair.

This got pretty long and I'm no expert but I hope this helps you out.

>> No.3605552

>>3605542
the red would look better without a yellowy shift its already a warm color especially if you shift the shadow cool the contrast is already there and intensifies itself. assuming youre not going for realism at all and just appeal

I think youre dependency on the reference shows though and your visible brush strokes make it look unfinished instead of stylistic (because youre not really understanding your reference youre just trying to copy the shapes created)

>> No.3605607

>>3605552
Yeah you might be right about the hue shift. Like I said though, a lot of the coloring was pretty experimental cause my painting skills are really lacking compared to drawing. And definitely agree about being dependent on references. Any tips you've got regarding that would be great.

Thanks for the feedback.

>> No.3605633

>>3595396
Tried to scan but I'm not getting anything, are you sure the QR code's valid?

>> No.3605709
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>>3593031

Lovely refs, thank you anon. Will do some more on my break tomorrow.

>> No.3605732

>>3605709
Oh god that face

>> No.3605937
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>>3588601
spent way too long on this, too lazy to add the skirt. haven't learned anything other than the fact that my construction is lagging miles behind and I rely mostly on eyeballing

>> No.3606092

>>3593000
the perspective is different for both images, you brainded fuck. look at how much of her blazer you can see.
>loomis is a meme!!!
i bet that op pic is better than anything you've ever drawn, with the power of no fundies

>> No.3606177
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Is there a good book on anime study? Checked the book thread but there's nothing. preferably something translated

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3606219

ayo bitch ass fuckin anime study thread i axed u a fuckin question

answer me before i kaplow this fuckin thread to shit yeah

>> No.3606226

>>3606177
There is not.

>> No.3606227

>>3606226
please i beg you i need guidance

>> No.3606260
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>>3606177
rinotuna's book looks great for beginner anime study but noone's got a hold of it
Other than that, just go to palmie.jp, animesijyuku and ichiup_net

>> No.3606586
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>> No.3606603

>>3606260
FIND IT AND POST IT HERE NOW

>> No.3606683
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what do you think

>> No.3606693

>>3606683
Isn't seiza kneeling? Or is that her name? Name of the girl pls

>> No.3606695

>>3606683
bury cude

>>3606693
Don't just completely ignore his drawing you bitch, he asked you a question and you completely ignored it because you're only interested in what YOU can get from him. Disgusting, honestly just get out this thread.

>> No.3606697

>>3606693
seiza is kneeling, not what shes doing, its just what came to mind when i was naming the file
the girl is Shimazaki Haruka

>> No.3606698

>>3606683
I like the shape design of the shirt and hair. Left sleeve looks a little flat and could use some more darker values in areas like between her thighs and in between the sleeve and arms. Also watch out with those sausage fingers.

>> No.3606703

>>3606695
Fuck off.

>>3606697
Thank you. Cute drawing btw.

>> No.3606705

>>3606703
You're a bitch nigga

>> No.3606723

>>3606603
It's only bought within japan and korea so no

>> No.3606728

>>3606723
Why is it in English if it's only bought there?

>> No.3606731

>>3606728
I didn't mention it was translated. It's just good for beginner anime study

>> No.3606733

>>3606731
There is literally no good anime tutorial books translated in english unless you actually count the how-to-draw manga as good

>> No.3606737

>>3606695
im going to ignore your drawing even more

>> No.3606837

>>3606698
>>3606703
>>3606695
thanks

>> No.3607429

>>3601392
Anyone have a download link for this? Looks amazing.

>> No.3607775

>>3597572
Even though you're drawing stylized I think you should try copying her facial expression more, just to make sure you get practice drawing different faces. In this case a slightly open mouth and eyebrows arched the other way.