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Last time on DragonBall /alt/ >>3581832

>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>I'm a highlord weeb. Why does the image OP say cartoons general?
To distinguish from the anime study thread (janitor approved). If you'd like, post your studies there and personal work goes here.
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Enjoyee the 3 Day weekend, Americans.

>> No.3585841
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3585841

First for out of comfort zone

>> No.3585861

>>3585802
>Your

>> No.3585862

>>3585802
this is the worst OP pic yet

>> No.3585865

>>3585862
then I've succeeded

>> No.3585945

Bump.

>> No.3585950
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3585950

>> No.3585954

>>3585950
Start new thread with a shitty drawing, based

>> No.3585960
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3585960

im trying to be like fisher and mabel ye

>> No.3585966
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>> No.3585973

>>3585950
what's your blog, mate?

>> No.3585985
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>> No.3585996

>>3585960
rough and early wip but this looks nice so far, blog?
who's mabel btw? i know fisher he's good

>> No.3586019

>>3585950
>same face
>same body
>same heads
>same bland neotenous blobs
>same weird mix of milf/loli fetish
>same lack of fundies
>borderline same pose everytime

>> No.3586021

>>3586019
>same shitposter

>> No.3586041

>>3586019
At least he isn't drawing toddlers anymore

>> No.3586043

>>3586041
quick yev, draw a toddler for us

>> No.3586048
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3586048

>>3585996
thanks. blog is strobrijan.tumblr.com
you wont find any works more finished than my previous post, though.

mabel ye is a calarts dropout working at Cartoon Network. her work is pretty eclectic but I was trying to copy how she did pic related, how she moved down the color wheel when changing values. the opaque brushes and the loose drafting reminded me of fisher

>> No.3586053 [DELETED] 
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3586053

The drapes on her top looks bad?

>> No.3586057
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>>3586019

>> No.3586067

Hey guys I have a question.

I've got a bunch of interesting Shonen Jump tutorials that you can find on the Jump Paint app, but maybe some anons didn't know about them all.

Should I dump them all here or make a new thread?

>> No.3586069

>>3586067
dump em in the artbook thread senpai and link it here too

>> No.3586123

>>3586069
Here they are. They're mostly about how to write a male oriented story than drawing.

https://mega.nz/#F!ymgygQQR!0aS7Qsp5474Xuzo0wYML8g

>> No.3586127

>>3586053
This whole pic is terrible and you should feel very bad.

>> No.3586128

>>3586127
hello tumblr

>> No.3586130

>>3586053
are you that wysteria faggot from drawparty? kys

>> No.3586188
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>> No.3586190

>>3586188
Blog

>> No.3586191

>>3586188
cute! her thighs kind of just looks like blobs, though. i'd go more anatomically accurate and less stylized in that area

>> No.3586208

>>3586053
blog?

>> No.3586222
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3586222

was requested to do this one in a vidya drawthread

>> No.3586227

>>3585862
What would you have used?

>> No.3586228
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3586228

Don't know where else to post this so I'll post it here

>> No.3586235
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>> No.3586247

>>3586053
>>3586208
Seconding.

>> No.3586254

>>3586208
>>3586247
give me feedback first. doesn't have to be about her clothes, I'd just like to know what I can tweak to make it look better. It's an underdrawing atm which I'm eventually going to paint over.

>> No.3586255
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3586255

do the adidas logos look to out of place? if so should i move them somewhere else or just ditch them?

>> No.3586264

>>3586235
Cute.

>> No.3586268
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3586268

I'm quiting 4chan guys! At least I will try. Wish me luck.

>> No.3586274

>>3586268
who cares

>> No.3586276

>>3586053
they dont necessarily look bad, they describe the form of the drapes just ok but only keep the lines that overlap parts of the top and are most important to describe the shape of the drapes.

>> No.3586278
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3586278

>>3586255
It's a bit flat compared to the rest of it. I don't think it's a problem but if you drew it yourself it would be better.

>>3586228
lol

>>3586235
Which brush did you use to do the outlines? I like it.

>> No.3586284

>>3586254
I don't know. Her butt should be visible from this angle and her left arm might need to be more oriented toward camera. blog please!

>> No.3586289

>>3586278
Just a regular hard round brush with lowered opacity and no size pressure.

>> No.3586290

>>3586284
I mean, her upper right arm.

>> No.3586291

>>3586289
Alright. Thank you!

>> No.3586296

>>3586228
Big redpill. post it in the comic thread instead
>>3567615

>> No.3586341

>>3586289
thats not opacity thats density, and no theyre not the same thing

>> No.3586343
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>> No.3586344

>>3586341
I actually meant to say brush Flow, not opacity. I use photoshop in another language so sometimes it's hard to find the English translation for every setting and tool

>> No.3586361

>>3586268
see you tomorrow

>> No.3586374

>>3585973
https://twitter.com/yev_san/media

>> No.3586378
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>> No.3586384
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3586384

I'm going to kill every artists who don't post blog when asked. Literally evil.

>> No.3586389

>>3586384
Blog?

>> No.3586399
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3586399

>> No.3586413

>>3586399
is that supposed to be pizza? i thought she was eating the puss out of a giant pimple for a second

>> No.3586425
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3586425

>>3586188
>>3586343
>>3586399
Пpивeт, Гeйcтцyкep.

>> No.3586450
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>> No.3586474

>>3586399
Looks like she just took a bite out of a pile of shit.

>> No.3586543
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3586543

>>3586378
Any help for this kind of style?

>> No.3586572
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3586572

>>3585802
youou stole my picture!!!??

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3586576

>>3586450

>> No.3586577

>>3586191
Do you have anything to reference? I'm not sure how to go about drawing it

>> No.3586583

>>3586572
Its called the op image showcasing stuff from the last thread newboi

>> No.3586600

>>3586344
flow is density...

>> No.3586606
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3586606

>>3586583
this image -_- *diot!!!

>> No.3586752

>>3585950
Please stop drawing blob hands and disgusting blob feet.

>> No.3586755
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3586755

>>3586053
Maybe give some more boxy forms for solidity, such as on the elbows and knees, but other than that I like your art. Keep it up.

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3586760

>>3586254
here's my attempt

>> No.3586812
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3586812

any rendering bros here?

>> No.3586823

>>3586812
arms don't really match the rest. Her right shoulder should have more light and her left should have less.

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3586835

wip

>> No.3586842

>>3586835
Perspective's off.

>> No.3586852

>>3586835
Akko doesn't deserve this

>> No.3586865

>>3586835
Whats the tag for this fetish?

>> No.3586868

>>3586865
guro

>> No.3586870

>>3586865
火あぶり on pixiv

>> No.3586878
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3586878

Hey anyone know the name of that artist (I think he's Japanese) and he free hands everything by drawing a bunch of squares first then adds detail?

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>> No.3586905
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>>3586823
fuck it. ill finish in the morning

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3586917

>>3586755
>>3586760
>here's my attempt
thanks anons.
i ended up tweaking the pose and somehow I made it look worse

>>3586247
>>3586208
>blog?
wysteriary1 and wysteriary2 on tumblr and twitter

>> No.3586935

>>3586917
Sorry if my crab post confused you but old shoulder angle was better. Still will love to see more of you. Thanks!

>> No.3586953
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3586953

no matter what i draw it always looks unappealing af.
Im doing some fundie practices and studies like bg and objects around my house but i don't see how it helps me at all.
Also how do people line without it being all chicken af. If i use a hard brush it gets all the squiggles and nastiness even if I draw lines quickly and if i use a softer brush i have to go over it a ton to get a line that's solid enough to be notable.

thank you for any advice

>> No.3586958

>>3586865
mental illness

>> No.3586961

>>3586953
bigger brush size, senpai
thats it

>> No.3586966

>>3586953
Idk man I wouldn't say it doesn't have appeal, it just needs a bit more polish and fundies. I think studying facial proportion would make your girls look a lot better since you seem a little wonky in that department
As for the squiggly lines i'm not sure what you mean just by looking at the image. It could be the brush has no stabilization, or a driver issue?
What program do you use for art?

>> No.3586972

>>3586966
I didn't put an example of my squiggly line up here but you can see my chicken scratch lines. It might be cause i draw on the screen and it has no texture. Got this tablet as a gift. And yeah faces been giving me a ton of trouble i been trying constructing and using the triangle to center the faces correctly but as i get further in i just keep having to restart the faces. Also I use sai2 and photoshop. I switch between the 2 often but recently been using sai 2 more since i got my hotkeys setup and stuff and havent done it with photoshop again.

>>3586961
the brush size atm is like 20~30px should i make it bigger or shrink my canvas? I work on a 6k by 6k canvas.

>> No.3586976

>>3586953
1. Find art that you like
2. Figure out why you like it
3. Copy it

>> No.3586979

>>3586972
that range seems pretty decent actually
do you have size enabled as something that changes with your tablet/pen pressure? if so, your lines arent actually that size

>> No.3586988
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3586988

>>3586979

yeah i had size pressure off for the sketch tool im using but when i have it on it tapers really ugly. and when i set a different min size it just seems off. But do people line without size pressure?

>>3586976
Also I'll try that but all the art i like seems to be beyond my skill set so don't even know how to imitate it.

>> No.3586989

>>3586543
thats super cute! I think playing around with your colour pallete is a good idea. They seem kinda muddy? or maybe too close in value

>> No.3586990

>>3586812
where's the NECK nigguh?

>> No.3586992

>>3586988
>But do people line without size pressure?
yea. then they paint over it when coloring or use the eraser to give tapers
either make the brush size bigger so that when you use pressure your average size is around your desired range or dont use pressure

>> No.3586993

>>3586543
place a stronger contrast to important parts. like, the garbage can stands out too much, and i doubt you want the viewer's attention to go there

>> No.3587104
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3587104

Question please, which is better?

>> No.3587122

>>3586543
Is that you yume nikki anon? If yes than nice, finally see you get out of your comfort zone in term style.
The lining is kinda wonkey, make it more straight.
Also like other anons said, make the shadow stronger.

>> No.3587134

>>3586935
No your posts were fine, I just screwed up. The previous shoulder angle does look better. I'll probably scrap these changes and go back to the old one.

>> No.3587149

>>3587104
I like left personally

>> No.3587157

>>3587104
Right is better

>> No.3587160

>>3587104
left

>> No.3587162

>>3587104
left, right's mouth is garbage and souless

>> No.3587186
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3587186

I tried to redraw a drawing I did last year to see in which ways I have improved. Neck is a bit long. I tried pushing contrast, but obviously could be pushed further. Not sure how I’m going to go about coloring it.

>> No.3587192
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I plan on digitizing it and turning it into pseudo-sprite art later.

>> No.3587218
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>> No.3587228

>>3587192
Resize your fucking photos jesus fucking christ.

>> No.3587229
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3587229

wip

>> No.3587230

>>3587218
That's excellent

>> No.3587232

>>3587192
what about her shoes and feet

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>>3587162
>>3587160
>>3587157
>>3587149
Thanks for your input anons! Now all I'm left to do is to either find a font or try to draw it.

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3587260

>>3587162
>>3587160
>>3587157
>>3587149
Thanks for your input anons! Now all I'm left to do is to either find a font or try to draw it.

>> No.3587262

>>3587260
Drawing fonts is better.
Good luck

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>> No.3587305

>>3587281
I love it
The only thing i could tell you is if she is wearing socks, you shouldnt be able to see her toes this clearly

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3587313

>>3587305
Thank you! I'll remember that while coloring

>> No.3587324

>>3585950
I always really enjoy the personality your work has, yev.


Even if you draw malteser nipples.

>> No.3587352

>>3587218
Can I have your brush? I like that slightly textury look

>> No.3587402
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3587402

>>3587260
And here it is! The completed piece but resized. Thank you for your input anons.

>> No.3587406

>>3587402
Congrats. You had fun doing it, it shows. Good job

>> No.3587423

>>3586989
it is muddy kind of like water color or something
>>3586993
that is a nice advice, I'll keep it in mind thank you
>>3587122
yes it is me frend, just trying to keep in mind previous comments about becoming a stale, need to change it up

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>> No.3587470

>>3587431
Thiss is very cute but perhaps fix the ears so they're more on the head and don't look like side hair clips?

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3587501

>>3586576

>> No.3587503

>>3586917
>first version was deleted
new mods when

>> No.3587504
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>>3587501
Consider smothing her teeth, and make them whiter, they're on the uncanny sidr

>> No.3587506

>>3587504
I'm pretty sure that's on purpose.

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I dunno what I'm gonna do for the background.

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>> No.3587575
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>> No.3587609

>>3587563
That's a lovely Zero Two

>> No.3587628
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3587628

it seems the jannies deleted my drawing, so i added a tasteful black bar to hide her tits this time

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3587648

>>3587628

>> No.3587657

>>3587563
Eyes look sleepy

>> No.3587666

the 6s belong to me

>> No.3587679

>>3587666
holy fuck

>> No.3587682

>>3587628
guro is against the rules, not nudity.

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3587684

>>3587666

>> No.3587686

>>3587563
chins dont work that way

>> No.3587687

>>3587682
they both are you dolt

>> No.3587688

>>3587628
to gain jannies trust back you must draw her being saved

>> No.3587719

>>3587687
>nudity on /ic/
anon

>> No.3587737

>>3587719
>actually thinks people dont get banned in here for posting loli nudes
yeah dude nice try, nudity is okay on all red boards except blues, and loli nudes are not okay across any except /b/

>> No.3587768
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3587768

idk

>> No.3587769

>>3587768
>drawing forgettable trash seasonal waifu from 9 years ago

why

>> No.3587773

>>3587769
shrug

>> No.3587779

>>3587768
>tits this big
You should have drawn best girl aka Cerea

>> No.3587818

>>3587352
it's the default Krita one (ink 4 rough) with the size pressure adjusted a bit to look more like a technical pen.

>> No.3587820

>>3587628
just to give you an actual criticism, her body is too relaxed for the situation. Try raising the shoulders and arching the back more.

>> No.3587826

>>3585802
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative

does ic have their own tag or group to livestream on?

>> No.3587840

>>3587779
too bad, ponyfag

>> No.3587845

>>3587768
Very nice work mate

>> No.3587846

>>3587845
thx bruv

>> No.3587870

>>3587406
Thanks anon!

>> No.3587882

>>3587575
I love how you drew this one. It looks like you have a great understanding of proportion and anatomy and you capture the feeling of fullness on the body parts very well. Did you draw the body from imagination or reference?

>> No.3587921

>>3587882
mostly imagination, there is nothing special about the pose, its very simple without perspective. but thanks

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3587940

>>3587232
I rsn out of space. The bottom of her feet is literally the papers border. I normally dont draw people either, and Im not a footfag so I dont typically put much thought into that. Phone posting, so huge image inbound.

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3587941

>>3587563
Your faces are so annoying

>> No.3587951

>>3587941
worse

>> No.3587970

>>3587951
Lmao

>> No.3588024
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3588024

hi /ic

>> No.3588036

>>3588024
hi roboham

>> No.3588039
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3588039

Hi loves

>> No.3588042

>>3588024
Love the bottom left the most, look awesome, you should color it.
Not a fan of the others though.

>> No.3588045

>>3587941
>Fixed the chin but doesn't touch anywhere else.
5/10 for effort

>> No.3588048

>>3588045
Chin was the only thing that was too fucked to leave alone
>>3588024
Love you

>> No.3588049

>>3587941
>>3587951
Look like two different styles to me.

The really high jawline reminds me of Oyari Ashito. It causes the faces to look somewhat lopsided, although I *think* they could be technically correct, they just look off cause all we see of them is the outlines.

>> No.3588052
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3588052

>>3588049
>Oyari Ashito
Even though his style have high jaw line and big skull, it's all balance without looking weird.
That anon just need to practices more facial structures and he will be fine, without a solid understanding, stylize would look weird.

>> No.3588064

>>3588052
proko has a solid understanding, and he has the most shit stylization ever.

>> No.3588076

>>3588024
Blog?

>> No.3588081

>>3587826
There used to be a blogspot link to something like that but memory fades me. It died so it was removed.

>> No.3588095

>>3588064
Okay. and? No one even mentioned fundamentals. Think that anon just meant solid understanding of what looks good vs weird. Jutting the chin and cheek out a billion degrees looks terrible. It doesn't look like a 'style' thing either, just wonky proportions.

>> No.3588142

>>3587941
>dunning-kruger

>> No.3588152

What's the most unsafe drawing I can post here and ask for advice?

>> No.3588154 [DELETED] 

>>3588152
realistic loli guro rape

>> No.3588165

>>3587647
I think I recognise your art from another board. Cute pose. Try making the head larger and shifting it to viewer left. It looks like it's floating away from her neck the way it is now.
I'm also personally not a fan of those bangs, the way they're chunked looks flat, stiff, and thin in comparison to the rest of the hair. Try some soft, blunt bangs to see how it feels.
The eyes also feel too large and out of place. Loomis is your friend (or Reilly, or whoever you prefer).

Overall good start and nice attention to detail.

>> No.3588251
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3588251

study of sorts

>> No.3588252

>>3588251
jesus christ study the fundies what the hell happened here
i know you weebs just wanna draw your shitty waifus but how does this not look insanely wrong to you? what is up with her skeleton? what is up with her boobs? her hand? you have to practice every single body part and do some studies, this is unsalvagable

>> No.3588259

>>3587503
Imagine deleting this when you could be deleting >>3585954 >>3586127 >>3586130 >>3587951 >>3587970 >>3588142 >>3588252
What a fag.

>> No.3588265

>>3588259
>whining about mean criticism
>i am not the fag. they are. they are fags. not me, who gets upset over internet banter.

>> No.3588271

>>3588252
it looks fine for being animu, calm down son

>> No.3588273

>>3588259
yeah imagine deleting guro of a child being burned alive when you could delete mean comments that hurt my feelings

>> No.3588275

>>3588252
I literally used reference...

>> No.3588277

>>3587941
You made it worse, the perspective is off. Doesn't even have actual animu proportions now. The original one has a bit skewed cheek area, but it' still looks good. You just fucked everything up.

>> No.3588278

>>3588273
The child is an imaginary character while those are real people you're insulting.

>> No.3588280
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3588280

>>3570824

>> No.3588281

>>3588273
That's not the image he was talking about dummy

>> No.3588282

>>3588280
I love how clean your lines are. Great work anon

>> No.3588285

>>3588281
sure whatever it was some pedoshit regardless

>> No.3588292

>>3588275
Can you post your reference?

>> No.3588293
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3588293

>>3588292
I wanted to try and do a study of their coloring style so I drew a character in pretty much the same position/clothing, but I didn't trace.

>> No.3588302

>>3588259
>Being this gay

>> No.3588306

>>3587769
>Why are people doing the things they want?

>> No.3588310

>>3588306
why are you replying to me

>> No.3588317
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3588317

>>3588293
I kinda get why the other anon is going ballistic with "unsalvagable" but that's a bit too extreme.

I think what he meant was you just tried to copy that style. That's all good but if you don't know your fundamentals you could end up missing details.

- Compare the boobs on your drawing and your reference.: look at difference in volume and how her left boob reacts when squished by her left arm.
- If your changing the pose of her head make sure to account for her neck.
- Take note of the length of her right arm as well. It might be difficult to measure the arm whenever it is raised at level of the shoulder but in yours it's a bit shorter.

>> No.3588322

>>3588251
What do you do to achieve lines this good? What are your brush settings? What are your pen pressure settings?

>> No.3588326
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3588326

>>3588317
Thank you! I will try to fix those issues.

>>3588322
Nothing special, a low flow hard round brush then I just clean it on the same layer with a smaller version of that brush and erasing edges

>> No.3588351

>>3588252
Kek

>> No.3588356

>>3588024
Seeing this motivated me to draw. Thanks. I want to fug your drawings. Blog now.

>> No.3588389

>>3588275
if you cant see how wrong this looks then i dont know how to help you. seriously compare this to a real person in some way. its so broken and it doesnt look good "for being anime" its like nothing fits together. if you just want to say "well i tried my best and i cant do better shucks!" your art will never improve. dont pretend you want it to look like this forever.
>>3588271
>>3588259
>>3588278

is /ic/ turning into a daycare? jesus christ where do you hugbox babies come from?

>> No.3588396
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3588396

Finished version, I tried to fix some things.

>> No.3588401

>>3588389
redline it then rembrandt-sama

>> No.3588408

>>3588401
you know exactly how redlining goes on this board. even if the redline is obviously superior, people will shitpost about how arrogant it is to redline and how bad the redlines are. im not in the mood for dealing with this childish shit. also the things i said are a good start already. i told him to practice anatomy for himself because this doesnt work. also if you think art is just a constant dick measuring contest where its more about fighting over whos a better artist than trying to point out flaws to help someone get better, maybe you need to grow up a little bit

>> No.3588410

>>3588408
>you know exactly how redlining goes on this board
oh you mean it goes perfectly fine just like >>3588317

maybe you need to grow up

>> No.3588412

>>3588396
you didnt understnd anything. you simply copied the original. this most likely did not make you any better at anatomy, etc. you didnt learn anything from this. it just seems to me like you have no passion to make something of your own or to grow with your challenges. its visible in the shaky, unconfident lines. the thought process is just "does this look like the original?" and not "does this hand make sense?" etc.

>> No.3588413

>>3588410
oh fuck off this is so rare. you have to be a newfag if you think this is the norm.

>> No.3588416

>>3588412
copying goes a long way

>> No.3588419

>>3588416
yeah if you take the drawing apart and analyze it and try to understand the artists decisions. its like he didnt even try to make it work

>> No.3588420

>>3588389
>is /ic/ turning into a daycare?
No, it's still a shit hole but at least there're people with double digits IQ that give good advices.
Sometime we got kids like you that mistake anonymity as a way to act like a retard that don't contribute anything to the thread.
This >>3588317 is what a normal critique look like, unlike your.
>>3588396
Her forehead is a little short compare to the distance from eyebrows to the nose.
Also is it just me or the left forearm kinda short?

>> No.3588422

>>3588420
underage alert

>> No.3588424

>>3588412
I literally never use reference. I did today because I wanted to try a different coloring style. And your insight on the "shaky" lines is wrong because I clean my sketch with an eraser, that's why it looks uneven. I wasn't focusing on the anatomy in this piece, but on the colors.

>> No.3588426

I'm gonna have to agree with the shitter on this one. If you were going to do a study/copy you might as well just try your best to replicate the original. It almost looks as if you tried to pass of your own original by taking what was already existing.

Had anon not say anything about refs we'd all just assume it's OC work until autist detective comes.

>> No.3588427

>>3588426

>>3588424

>> No.3588431

>>3588427

You weren't focusing on colors. You were focusing on where to place your shading because you have no knowledge of how light and shadow works. So if you use a reference, which you did, half the work on decision making is already there for you.

If it was truly about colors study then the colors would be matching, yes?

>> No.3588434

>>3588431

I was focusing on making something that looked visually good, using the pose and coloring as mere inspiration.
So the next time I draw something with no ref, I know whether or not I like this coloring or not and I can try to apply it on my own. Not a replica.

>> No.3588438

>>3588434

But anon, the colors are way off. Now I don't know if you just have a bad monitor or whatever but it's not even close to the case. And if you don't like the colors that's what sliders are for in the process. But you do you; no need for this conversation anyway.

>> No.3588439

>>3588434
your result is worthless and you are acting childish.

>> No.3588441

>>3588434
The coloring on the hair and leggings is nothing like the reference though you just have a single layer cel-shade and one line highlight. You have no core shadows no edges and none of the highlights. The drawing is fine desu but if you wanted to focus on the color you failed.

>> No.3588443

>>3588389
>compare this to a real person
I hope that everyone who saw your post stopped reading right there

>> No.3588444

>>3588396
For what it's worth I think it turned out alright

>> No.3588458

I never said I wanted to use the same colors or color all of it the same way. I just wanted to draw something that looks good using that piece as a reference. But guess I failed and I'll have to try again next time.

>> No.3588460

>>3588396
the problems with this are simple, wrong colors and 0 understanding of the form, for example that light color you use on the tiddies is supossed to mark the area where the tits end but you just drawed a circle in bot sides.

eye feels empty, you using 2 colors for the hair, when the "style" use 4, lineart is weak and the anatomy is a bit off in some spots.

instead of acting like a zoomer, try to focus more in your work.

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>> No.3588500

>>3587951
>>3588045
>>3588049
>>3588142
>>3588277
im not him but the fixed version is a million times better, you all literally dont know what youre talking about or have probably never drawn before LEGIT END YOURSELVES

>> No.3588511

>>3588487
is this pose even possible?

>> No.3588515

>>3588317
Based redline

>> No.3588525
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3588525

Look alright?
I feel like the arm near the head needs to be a little longer, besides that the torso area in general is bugging me

>> No.3588528

>>3588024
You're one of the reasons I keep visiting /ic/ ham. Please tell us when you finally make a Twitter.

>> No.3588538

>>3588511
Cats are very flexible.

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>> No.3588557
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>> No.3588562

>>3588252
>Another /alt/ critic whose only vast insight is "le proportions are wrong"

Stop posting in the anime threads if you hate anime or don't understand the appeal anime designs. Post your work next time your only input is "le loomis".

>> No.3588563

>>3588562
sorry kid but your view on the whole anime proportion aesthetic is a bit too skewed

>> No.3588568

>>3588563
Redline Anon's study or the reference and show us what good anime looks like then.

>> No.3588569 [DELETED] 

>>3588024
Is that Gwen tennyson in there?

>> No.3588572

>>3588024
Is that Gwen tennyson in there? also I like your art, keep it up.

>> No.3588577
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3588577

stereotypical anime thug guy

>> No.3588611

>>3587575
Still one of my favorite drawings in the thread so far, got a blog dude?

>> No.3588624

>>3588317
>checkmarks on sindentations
I like you anon.

>> No.3588632

>>3588039
I like everything but her weird boobs, the dude reminds of that plastercine dude from grissly tales for grusome kids

>> No.3588647
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3588647

>>3587501

>> No.3588649

>>3588081
makes sense. not enough anons stream anyway, i guess

>> No.3588688

>>3588525
Blog?

>> No.3588697
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3588697

Fixed her body more.

>> No.3588708

>>3588697
Why'd you fix her body more and not the colors?

>> No.3588713

>>3588708
Because some body parts were pretty fucked up but honestly I like the colors

>> No.3588719
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3588719

>>3588611
yungronin.tumblr.com

>> No.3588720

>>3588697
you should replicate left breast

>> No.3588721

>>3588720
You know what anon, I'm just moving on from that piece and the next time I use reference it'll be real people.

>> No.3588731

>>3588719
Followed, hope you post more.

>> No.3588740
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3588740

>>3588647

>> No.3588748

>>3588500
>im not him
ok I literally don't believe you

>> No.3588752
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3588752

is this appealing?

>> No.3588753

>>3588752
sure, bit stiff tho

>> No.3588795
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>> No.3588844
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3588844

Does anyone else have tips for starting drawing digitally? Am I supposed to be only drawing with my shoulder arm because I don't get how you would do smaller movements for details. What do I do when holding the pen makes my fingers hurt/ feel stiff? Drawing digitally feels weird to me and I don't know why, it might be the disconnect of not seeing your hand / pencil

>> No.3588870

>>3588165
thanks man, i'll keep that in mind

>> No.3588883

>>3588844
stick you index finger out should help with hand pain

>> No.3588889
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3588889

Used National Geographic as ref

>> No.3588891
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3588891

>>3588889
Had to take pictures of my screen because no wifi

>> No.3588893

>>3588891
holy fuck thats niceeeeee. got any social media to follow?

>> No.3588909

>>3588577
>>3588889
>>3588891
P sure these are all from the reposter anon

>> No.3588911

>>3588893
@ohheythatfisher
I’m trying to post more often

>> No.3588935

>>3588891
>horizon line super low
>but figures are placed as if it were higher
thats not how you use those grids either

>> No.3588953
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3588953

honduran white bat girl doodle. dunno if theres much to crit but does anyone know the best guides to getting better at values and color choices? obviously thats why i held so much back with the colors and value on this thing lol cuz i dont know shit ;(

>> No.3588956

>>3588252
dumbass

>> No.3589003
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3589003

Does this look ok so far?

>> No.3589007

>>3589003
Cute, but tails don't come out of the ass crack lol

>> No.3589017

>>3589007
>but tails don't come out of the ass crack
It's an ass plug anon, that man is a man of taste.

>> No.3589018

>>3589017
>butt plug in a loli
calling the cops

>> No.3589019
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3589019

>> No.3589024

>>3589003
how do you think of compositions like these? is it an idea? even with requests that are complex or simple I can't figure out how to draw the character in a way that makes sense to the character and also makes sense in human movement

>> No.3589031

>>3589024
Honestly, I just trial and error until it looks ok.

>> No.3589032

>>3589003
would be better if she were on fire, gj though

>> No.3589034

>>3589024
Vague idea + doodle until you like it

>> No.3589037

>>3589003
This is a Japanese Witch

>> No.3589042

>>3589003
feel like ive seen this exact scene before

>> No.3589073

>>3589018
asians age differently!

>> No.3589119

Nothing motivates me to draw anymore. Even the stuff I'd like to draw no longer gets me going.

>> No.3589123

>>3589119
well time to fulfil your wagecuck destiny

>> No.3589175

>>3588525
Seconding blog request, this looks pretty good, the foreshortening especially

>> No.3589176

>>3589003
>lewding Akko
this is never ok

>> No.3589200

>>3589123
I was never in it for the money.

>> No.3589218

>>3589200
NGMI

>> No.3589243

>>3589119
Good more money for me.

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3589278

>>3589119
Then end it.

>> No.3589333

>>3586384
>>3586389
good job anon now you have to kill yourself, or was that part of your plan?

>> No.3589336

>>3588688
>>3589175
https://melkosan.tumblr.com/
Thanks anons
Don't post much since I'm doing traditional stuff for now but I try to keep it alive

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3589358

Why am I having fun editing something with paint using a mouse?

>> No.3589404

>>3589333
Anon probably asked ironically considering how bad I am. I don't have one nevertheless.

>> No.3589424

>>3589358
changing mediums is a great way to exercise creativity and fight off boredom due to having all the problem-solving of drawing but a fresh take on the performance

I swap between pencils and mechanical pencils every couple of day in traditional because of that

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Old pic, first time trying a real G-Pen.

>> No.3589534

>>3589531
Cute!

>> No.3589538
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3589538

>>3589534
Thanks, reuploaded because pic was rotated

>> No.3589549
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>> No.3589550

>>3589549
unironically best ITT

>> No.3589567

>>3589549
Hot

>> No.3589633

>>3589538
You forgot to draw the hands

>> No.3589636

>>3589355
Those are some gross pixels Anon

>> No.3589645

>>3585802
get ready for your war

>> No.3589675
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3589675

current wip, don't really like the face so I'll rework it soon. I'll draw the hand in too, just messing around with poses
Anything to point out before I go on?

>> No.3589678

>>3589675
>loli with abs

>> No.3589684
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3589684

>>3589675
But where is her dick though? One fucking job.

>> No.3589690
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cliche military/cop guys


>>3588909
idk who that is but i posted >>3588577

>> No.3589749

>>3588935
Could you elaborate on this? The figure does seem off to me but I’m not sure what I did wrong

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>> No.3589941

>>3589930
yikes

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>> No.3590062

>>3588740
Youd get tons of notes if she was pissing in that bucket rather than taking on a battle pose. It's just so awkward.

>> No.3590065

>>3590055
Whenever I see a drawing like this I always play the is this lolibro game with myself now that there is a guy that has an almost identical style. Gonna say not lolibro on this one.

>> No.3590073

>>3590065
I mean it's obviously not lolibro, but if you want to be more sure just take a closer look at the brush he's using

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>>3589019

>> No.3590094
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I got lazy with the background because I'm still shit at them.

>> No.3590111

>>3590094
yo friggen sweet.
Blog?

>> No.3590116

>>3590111
https://twitter.com/orenjipiiru

>> No.3590139

>>3590065
This is clearly the guy that draws fucked up jawlines.

>> No.3590158

>>3590094
wow actual talent on ic.. I'm surprised

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Have this abomination I made

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3590377

Haven't been to /ic/ in ages other than the self promotion thread, is this the right place for pic related? Feels weird to drop a sketch dump page into the drawthread.

>> No.3590477
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3590477

thoughts on this

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>>3588036
hiya

>>3588042
kinda colored something else, enjoy

>>3588048
thanks

>>3588076
>>3588356
roboham.blogspot.com

>>3588528
too scared, i like to hide

>>3588572
just random girls

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>>3590477
Dude, c'mon.

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>>3590521
>the absolute state

>> No.3590617

>>3590195
I wish that were me

>> No.3590639

new thread >>3590636

>> No.3591051

>>3589675
Aaaaaaaand you fucked it up.

>> No.3591056

>>3590055
>>3587563
You literally draw the same 1/4 and 3/4 faces every single thread...

>> No.3591338

>>3586893
Lots of potential brah