/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3570410
Why did you had make a thread for this if you already posted on the improvement thread, you just had to wait this is a slow board
Also go to /beg/ faggot

>>3570410
>decent

>>3570410
You've shown progress, for sure. What would really help you though is to keep practicing.

>>3570410
>3 years

>>3570410
>I didn't use references for either of them...
You probably should.

>>3570410
>Draw on bigger paper so you can draw with more detail.
>Do gestural studies so you can draw more interesting poses.
>Do some studies of clothes and hair so you can draw more interesting hair and clothes

Right now your work looks like a doodle. Put more time and effort into it.

>>3570410
>decent

>>3570410
That's amazing improvement, don't focus on the endgame just enjoy the fact you've improved and the knowledge that you will continue to.

There's nothing wrong with using reference

>>3570410
It depends, how old are you?

>>3572435
so nice

>>3570410
Still considered beginner due to the 'L' nose and symbol anatomy. From the image it seems like you're 15 years old at most.

>>3570507
Seeing Mugen really brightens my day. Thanks for that

>>3570410
Good for your age, im sure. I used to be proud of not using references for poses, and you should be proud of your art, but using reference is the best way to improve and learn anatomy so i really hope you use more. I, like many others, can tell that you need it.

>>3570410
>3 years
>still shit
>thinks he's decent

>>3574806
How fast do you have to improve?
i think it's ok for 3 years if he had no teacher
and it doesn't looks like it

>>3570410
i won't say its bad and will say you got better but you have a long way to go and i would recommend you keep working at it

>>3570410
>I didn't use references for either of them

Why not?

you improved but you're still shit

>>3570410
looks still stiff af dude

Would snuggle with girl on the right

>>3573539
Isn't the L nose appropiate for anime?

its a nice progress for a 3 months. not 3 years

>>3574509
I think it's important to study gestures so you can do dynamic and accurate poses, I don't like to draw on top of a referenced pose, its a cheap trick

>>3570410
>j-j-just draw bro it worked fine for me

>>3576298
Spoiler: he probably only drew few times a week and never did any studying.

I draw 2 hours a day for the last year, and ive been animating in general for 10 years but I'm still not as good as 2018 op

>>3576823
- well depends on what kind of animation. skeletal rigged animation is not animation here.
- 2 hours a day is a lot if you're not lying. but drawing fruits is never going to make you draw people from imagination.
- you need to study and be really open to critique.
- also 2hours in one drawing is nothing. the construction part is what matters. adding details and details is a waste of time if you want to improve fast.

>>3570410
That's decent progress if you're in middle school, but seriously OP if you wanna git gud like your favorite mangka, join the Beginner thread, download all the Andrew Loomis books in the book thread, and for the hell of it make a Pinterest account and save a shitload of references and follow some art boards

good luck famlam

>>3576298
>Murata is a literal grandpa
Oh nononono NOOOO

>>3577831
More or less this
Study and GRIND nigga
Or just doodle until you eventually get it like me