/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3542534
Ya got the feeling allright

>>3542534
if i was into women with happy trails, this would be my goto pic to masturbate to

>>3542534
put some clothes on ya dang hussy

This is hella good such a soothing palette

>>3542540

This anon is correct. Can you post a version without the happy trail?

8.5/10
That bite mark on her ice cream looks silly. Like it's a macaron, not an ice cream ball.
Clouds look like it's gonna rain. If you were going for hot exhausting summer day feeling then clouds totally ruin it.
Forearm on ice cream arm seems a bit too thin, especially wrist.

>happy trail
Absolutely patrician.

>>3542579
Absolutely plebeian.

>>3542534
I want to eat her bearded clam

>>3542534
have you ever seen a real pussy? i dont think so.

>>3542534
...granny-poster?

>>3542540
>>3542579
>>3542602
there you go

>>3542651
amazing, youve given her a penis instead

>>3542651
RUINED

>>3542651
ewwwwww

>>3542534
If it's so hot, shouldn't she be sweating and her skin be glistening all over? But it's dull instead.

Also, >>3542582 is right in saying that the clouds make it look like a windy day on the beach. If you want to go for a hot day look and still have an interesting background, how about palm trees? You could then add some interesting shadowplay on the skin.

>>3542682
>shouldn't she be sweating ans her skin be glistening
>the clouds make it look like a windy day

you answered yor question yourself there pal

God Damn I hate this place.
Fuck.

>>3542684
HAHA that stupid whore. Serves her right to get brain freeze for biting into icecream on a chill day. Also kidney/bladder inflammation for runnning around bottomless.

>>3542534
I think her righr arm lacks volumen and is probably Too foreshortened

Otherwise I dig it

>>3542534
Gonna make it.

>>3542534
that snail trail, i want to kiss it till i reach the bottom

>>3542647
yep that's me (op). how could you tell?

I think its technically sound but boring

>>3542873
Not that guy but it's probably because of the similar shading style. How long did it take you to learn to render like this?
Did you do a lot of still life studies or just mostly photo studies?

>>3542534
Nice work, i like the rendering, although the sky is too dark for a summer day, even if it looks good otherwise

>>3542873
your style is pretty recognizable
Seconding >>3542927 because i cant render and i wanna know how people learned

>>3542927
hmmm... i did alot of different things, youtube tuts, all the artbooks (loomis, bridgman, hampton, robertson and many many more...)
photo studies. all of that within two years
decided to get a job and do art as a hobby, i'm much more happy and chilled now, getting 1,6k euros from job and 200-400 from commissions

>>3542873
The legend himself.
I have no idea what you thought when you made that granny art but I can say that I liked it.

>>3542534
How bigs the dick just off screen. Regardless 10/10

>>3542534
Why would you draw something that looks like cellshading? That's like having your 5 star chef make you an imitation big mac

>>3542873
i couldn't give you a single reason- you just have a distinguishable style. you render- for lack of a better word- ""ugly"" attributes in a really subtle and aesthetic way

>>3542873
the eyes give it away imo

I think her eyes should be more dilated.

>>3542534
>that tummy pubic fluff
muh absolute dick. do you have a blog or place where you upload your work?

why post the cropped version op? are you embarassed of your own work ?

>>3543122
lmao

>>3543122
i unironically want this
op help me out here

>>3543122
have you never seen a pair of legs before

>>3542651
Why is this higher quality than the original pic?
OP pls

Still don't know your blog, could you post it please

>>3543135
They have to be that way to support the massive weight of the penis.
Its just physics.

>>3543122
FTFY fren here you go

>>3542534
learn how to foreshorten properly

>>3543216

>>3542534
>>3542651
femal crotches look different from male ones you should practice on that

>>3542934
>photo studies. all of that within two years
AAAAAAAAAHH why is it everywhere I go I am jealous with other artists' progress?
I got real about drawing like a month ago, my skills were MAYBE past /beg/ tier but not a lot. If I don't git decent by the end of this year... fuck man
hold me bros

>>3543122
>>3543132
OP if you legit render this I will cum to it and post proof ITT because that is how grateful i will be. I'd nut so hard to this then channel that energy to give you power
I am 100% serious. This is not a drill, I will actually post cum if this is done

>>3543648

are you that into futa or what's the deal here

>>3543761
My love for his work and futa is strong enough I'd totally do that if it happened. For real
my balls would have to rest for a week

>>3542534
>>3542651
>>3542873
>>3542934
Do you have any other places you post work aside from DA and HF? I looked around and it seems you had a twitter, patreon and tumblr? Why'd you delete them?
I just want to see more of your work, I'm a big fan

>>3543866
I'm most active on DA, HF and tumblr although i changed my nickname on da and tumblr
its deviantart.com/ngmi and ngmi-art.tumblr.com
i never use twitter and patreon

>>3543901

what in gods name... are grannies an untapped evergreen high profit porn niche?

>>3543901
Nice! Will follow those
... You won't make that futa edit eh? I had really hoped for it

>>3542534
Are you the dude that painted the hairy fat witch? Add some ampit hairs to this pls

>>3542534
that arm is bad. ( the one holding her head) I bet you cut and pasted a photo there and then painted over it, didn't you?

>>3543901
I love your age difference /ss/ stuff. you seem to have a consistent problem with foreshortening though, might want to give that a bit of study

>>3543901
eyyy your the one that posted the granny pic, dude your stuff is awesome!

>>3542534
I like your fuckin stlye.

Post some more of your work please.

Post your DA/Artstation/whatever