/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3537606
oh shit, mine made it to the OP for the first time

Ah shiet, cookman still's the cutest anime girl
Also, anything obscenely wrong with this before I go into colour and values?

>>3537618
No dick.

>>3537620
¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>3537618
Needs my dick in her mouth.

Could I get some critique?

I will not post for a whole year if I get into op one last time. it'll make the yikes poster happy

>>3537634
(in this general, to specify)

>>3537633
I did some color correction, you can do even more tho. But more importanlty was the frame

>>3537618
how do you stay motivated working on this same piece for so long, dont you get bored with it after seeing it so much? i dont think its bad but i know i wouldve probably moved on by now
>>3537633
sofa looks massive, the parts between the glass in the windows look way too thick and its also a pretty weird design overall, find some reference and use the designs. also her left arm being straight in that position would push up the shoulder so the shoulder tilt should be reversed. would make her arms a more balanced lenght too

>>3537659
Nah, I don't expend more than 15min on it I only work as a break, and more importantly it's for me, It's just for fun. It's not something I am stressing out over it

>>3537659
I do like the big soffa, makes her feel tinny

>>3537651
Alright, I'll work on the coloring. Mostly your corrections are about the light coming from the window, right?
Also good call not the framing, that placement does look much better!
>>3537659
Haha, I did actually use my own living room as a reference. I do actually have a pretty large couch and those window frames are definitely thicker than most, but you're right, I totally overdid it without realizing in this painting. I'll be more mindful of that kind of thing moving on!

>>3537634
yikes that is one low hanging flat ass.
its also one of the better hairs youve done, looks way cuter than the massive mess of blob hair you usually make.
make her do something else with that arm, it looks awkward and also too short

>>3537634
I really like this one. Nice imagery and creativity.

>>3537634
Digging the perspective.

>>3537675
just wanted to note that this isnt me
>>3537634
kinda yikes but less bad than your usual work

Posting latest doodle

>>3537634
that ass looks concave

>>3537715
Mouth too high, its a mess of lines in there

Who's the author?

>>3537741
A very noble man

>>3537745
i want to sculpt her so much

>>3537745
I'm pretty sure this artist is a girl

>>3537759
An angel she must be

>>3537741
Someone from /las/

>>3537837
That's cute as heck.

>>3537837
holy heck that IS cute as fug

>>3537834
Blog?

>>3537818
What's a /las/?

>>3537834
I remember redrawing your dragon girl from the yourstyle/mystyle thread. Good times

Critique on my bee-girl?

>>3537859
>>3535559

>>3537876
Oh, sorry for my ignorance. And thank you so much.

>>3537875
Post this on /pol/, they have a thing for honeybees.

>>3537884
no probs friendo

need critiques! its very important at this stage that people tell me their honest opinions of these characters.

One day I'll make it in the op. One day...

>>3537837
Nnaaah~

>>3537897
And one day I'll make a drawing decent enough to get creepy anons fawning over it.
Lets make our dreams come true, Anon-kun!

Hi could I get some critique on my drawing i would really apreciate it, thanks in advance!

>>3537858
https://arma-f.tumblr.com/
>>3537867
yeah. I remember that thread, good old times

someone make another mystyle yourstyle general with multiple refs as one of the drawings from /alt/ instead of just one anon begging for free OC fanart

>>3537886
>they have a thing for honeybees.
Y tho

>>3537957
autism.

>>3537928
I can't tell if bait

>>3538030
It isn't bait, I'm just really new at drawing cartoons so any form of advice would mean the world to me.

>>3538044
it's just bad nothing to really critique; very flat looking,you clearly are not thinking in terms of form and everything is off because of it. Only real advice I can give you is read the sticky if you actually want to git gud, else don't even bother asking for critique, I mean, you can but you'll just get similar feedback.

>>3537704
your art is charming as hell and refreshing. makes me want yo carb you. Keep it up.

Posting wip on this, just missing details on the doors and shading to be ache

>>3538081
more like belongs in the trash :^)

>>3538082
I like your stuff very much. But it seems like you ain’t gonna improve, technique wise. Please don’t get halted or anything, I want to see your full potential.

>>3538095
I feel the same way desu; Drawing in this style was actually my goal when i started drawing again and while I have seen huge improvements in this short time (huge in terms of the garbage I did before and the garbage I do now), I feel kind of stuck in this 2 value cel-shading and 1px line art comfort zone and don't know where to take it from here.

>pic related is literally what I look up to

fun art of a ded game

>>3538082
You promised not to use black anymore, you lying bastard, unfollow.

>>3538120
Then i suggest you start drawing like it instead of simple stuff you been doing now.

>>3537884
>>3537887
Wholesome /alt/

>>3537943
Seconding

>>3537834
how the tail connects with the body?

>>3537834
The style feels like k3 spacey bear, I really like it

>>3537834
Do you freehand the final line art? Or do you like pre construction circles and rectangle? I'm new and I want to both do fundies and practical drawing

i give up

>>3538236
it looks lovely Anon! I'm not a critique but it had the potential to turn out nice!

>>3538236
why give up? looks like the sketch is good and ready for linework
don't give up senpai

>>3538236
NO DON'T GIVE UP!!!!

>>3538236
I don't like the face, proportions placement, and general aesthetics, also show some more neck
But don't give up, keep it up

>>3538276
I mean only on the face,

>>3538236
Give up your blog senpai

>>3538122
these are really nice anon

>>3538122
I'm loving all expressions
do you have any more?

>>3538125
Not done yet frend!

>>3538238
>>3538239
>>3538244
>>3538276
>>3538278
w-why are you guys being so nice to me today, i came here expecting some heavy bullying

>>3538127
my point was that it's literally the same and even simpler than what I do.

>>3538457
>>3538236
who would be rude to madoko

>>3538457
>>3538236
it's s-shit

>>3538457
L-Look like shit faggot, go back to /beg/

>>3538120
Line weight, hachuras or screentone,

>>3538218
Gotta disagree with that but it's cool seeing another k3spaceybear fan here.

>>3537875
would pollinate/10

>>3538485
I'll try experimenting with all of those, thank you.

WIP for cutscene/dialog expressions
Marcy's design is one of my favorites but godddamn is it hard for me to draw her just right

>>3538236
bro you need more line confidence the amount of over writing lkines on the legs is an eyesore

>>3538294
>>3538312
thanks anons, i don't have much more but i do plan on turning those 3 guys in the middle into something finished

>>3538461
>>3538467
thank you my friends, i'm now at ease
>>3538565
i usually paint over my stuff to hide the fact i can't into nice lines so you definitely have a point

>>3538564
I consistently like your stuff, man.

When I look at your work conceptually I feel reduced to an objectively shittier 30 year old boomer version of you and I can't say it isn't a little disheartening-but I'm going to be trying hard every day. Keep up the good work famalam. I'm looking forward to seeing your project come to life-even as I'd had to abandon (for now) my own musings of doing anything any time soon due to my as yet persisting incompetence and inadequacy. Good luck out there, lad.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ubZ2SZZBmc8

Is anything about the pose off? I wanted to try and color this later

>>3538459
Oh god this image is so sad why is it so sad I want to collapse on the floor crying.

>>3538633
Her right arm looks awkward, and the pose kinda stiff, not much but yeh

>>3538633
nice to pander to elephantiasis fetishists

>>3538633
pose like this and tell me how it feels

unbalanced and stiff

Expression still needs to be refined.

Also need to come up with a good base armor design.

>>3539050
Also the perspective around the lower torso needs work.

>>3539050
i think the anatomy needs a lot of work. just mirroring it isnt helping you either, the asymmetry is going to occur until youre confident with figure drawing and even then it wont be easy. the proportions are messed up, look at a photo of a woman and compare the tiny neck, shapeless torso, thick arms and bent legs. spend more time on this, otherwise you will only be building up on a broken base and it will just be a polished turd.

>>3538785
ngmi

>>3538215
I going to play a bit more with that tail
>>3538219
freehand if the pose is easy, otherwise, I use construction. pic related

Drew a guys OC, wanted to have a check up on the shading and advice on the hand on the right and how to get the proper soft press on the thigh.

>tfw perspective

>>3539140
>overly detailed hands
>3 fingers

>>3539174
Kek this better for your weak ass?

>>3539177

blog

>>3539177
she has the head of a 16 years old on a 8 y.o body also the hands are too big

>>3539140
I can't tell if it's left ear is supposed to be concave, also those hands are kinda gross

>>3537933
>>3537834

Fuckin adorable. I love QT dragon girls

ye fucken weebs

>>3539140
PROTIP: Monstrous hands don't go well with a soft, squishy critter figure.

>>3539235
Suggestion on how to fix the ear instead of just pointing it out, maybe something helpful?

>>3538459
What's that wooden knife thing on his desk?

How do I draw cute anime girls like pic related /ic/?

did a thing for a discord server I'm on. Haven't touched it since though.

>>3539266
Maybe using your own head to solve your easy mistakes instead waiting to be spoonfeed?
Use radial shading, don't add shadow where YOU think they look "good", put them having in mind the lighting, and if you use form shadows don't make them darker than your cast shadows
>>3539271
A file to sharpen pencils

>>3539280
Loomis.

>>3539280
>How do I draw cute anime girls
You trace it

>>3539280
What do you exactly mean by cute In that drawing (lines ;color ;valance ;facial features)?

>>3539288
Mainly proportions and facial features

>>3539281
A-Anon... D-Draw the hands

>>3539292
>Measure them
Draw a cross to the middle and place other lines to know where things go, also try to understand the outlines of the face, it's the most important part on an anime girl's face
Just copy it

>>3539282
What's it called?

>>3539299
Idk, but it's just a fine file stapled on a board, it's nothing specific

>>3539281
is she scratching her asscrack?

Before I fuck this up, what should I fix now so i...won't Fuck it up

Unsure about my colors, suggestions?

>>3539324
Don't make this your baby anon, not trying to be mean but at your level it's not good enough to worry about fucking it up. You just need to keep drawing and learning from your mistakes, perfectionism will hurt you hard.

>>3539251
Trigger discipline anon

>>3539381
looks pretty good so far. I think it would look even better if you work more on your linework. I also suggest putting some minimal shadows and have the yellow bg into a square frame like pic related (I don't know how to explain it well, sorry f am)

>>3539385
another one with more shading

>>3539324
No such thing as fixing a piece. Pick out what you don't like in your current drawing and try to experiment until you get something you find satisfactory.

>>3539386
Who is artist?

>>3539401
Kantaro/カンタロ (pixiv id:33461)

How do you get the motivation to draw? Or the drive to start the drawing. I am always scribbling something for 30 minutes then deleting it because I don't like it. Should I be doing studies and copies until I feel confident? I really want to get into digital animes !

>>3538998
>>3539017
I just don't fucking know
I tried to come up with a pose for 50 mins and that's the best I could come up with. What do I do to get better at poses, I guess gestures?
Fuck man just fuck. I changed some thing yesterday after posting that so maybe later I'll post the new version and it will make more sense, but maybe i should start over

>>3539009
What

>>3539411
>How do you get the motivation to draw? Or the drive to start the drawing
You need discipline more than motivation, anon.You need to draw even if your art sucks right now

>Should I be doing studies and copies until I feel confident?
Yes but don't forget to balance studies and integrating what you learned to your own works, otherwise you'll just become a copy machine.

>>3539324
Draw some kind of structure for the entire head before trying to draw individual facial features. Also try and get the eyes to gaze in the same direction.

>>3538122
tweaked the composition of these guys, any thoughts? i know it might be a bit hard to see where one starts and the other ends

>>3538236
its ok i gave up after this painting think this was my last probably like 2 years ago though i just did a shitty chibbi thing like 40 min ago

>>3539498
then i made this disgusting thing ugh kill me though some other thread asked for this stuff

>>3539493
like it so far

I'm starting to see stars after working on this for so long, how did I do?

Asked this one on /draw/, but that thread runs rather slowly so i guess i'll try asking this here as well

How do i make the wrecks on the background feel "bigger"? (if possible without actually resizing it)
Also anons on the drawthread said that the sense of depth and distance in this pic still feel underwhelming, what should i do to fix that?

>>3539610
I think having a more experienced anon comment on that is better but if you want here's my 2 cents
I think the wreckage in the middle, off in the distance, looks good and has a sense of scale to it even if it doesn't look massive, but the wreckages near the girl feel small
I think the reason for this is that the girl may be too big compared to the horizon line, she's too tall in relation to the viewer's POV and this "shrinks" the boats' size in comparison. Also I think the wreckage on the right could use to be bigger because right now the size is too close to that on the left even though it seems you meant it to be close to the viewer by giving it more detail and those values

>>3539610
Some more atmospheric distance fog maybe, it's that what are you looking for?

>>3539513
Gj anon but she looks like a downie

>>3539610
push object back nearer to horizon by how they touch the water and push the girl nearer to viewer.

>>3539615
hmmm, that makes sense

>>3539616
Oh, this looks pretty nice
I'll try it, thanks anon

>>3539633
Alright, noted

>>3539634
Kewl, glad that I could be of some help.

>>3539610
Sorry buddy but scale down the girl is the only thing you can do, also blur the ship far most to give it a sense of distance.

>>3539513
I don't think the armpit works like that and her foot looks too small. But other than that good job

>tfw so shit that I'm beyond /ic/'s help

>>3539694
link your work

>>3539704
>>3539151

>>3538564

Is Marcy Kid Vid's sister?

>>3539513
Kek her foot IS too small, great job anyway

>>3539729
>that 7 year old boomer

>>3539151
your lines are good but the pose looks very awkward. It's just not appealing my dude, sorry

>>3539151
This pose is cool but it might be too complex for you to pull of quite right, for your level of skill, it ends up looking wonky
Her left thigh becomes too thin going towards the knee, and her left arm looks twisted
You aren't "so shit that I'm beyond /ic/'s help", don't think so low of yourself, just keep track of these mistakes and try to do better next time

>>3539151

>>3539140
Redline just for you, my nigga, hope that help in something.

First, watch your proportions, thick legs are not equal to gigantic legs. Her thighs are the same size as her entire body.
Second, big eyes, my nigga, big fucking eyes equal to more cute ladies. Just watch out for the placement on the face and balance with the rest of the face features.

And finally, she is a furry lady, anon, try to convey a little bit of her fur somewhere, usually in the edges of the body like elbows and shoulders.

>>3539818
>>3539776
thanks, the redline really helps unfuck what I couldnt see how to do myself. I guess I have to look at the anatomy of hips and legs because I draw them idealized to my tastes
I've posted a bit here and other threads but never get any crit

>>3539870
>big eyes
Dude who's OC he drew here, her eyes were drawn as hidden and shadowed - something similar to this. I will agree on larger eyes, They're so fucking cute.

>>3539870
Dude I appreciate the help but no offense, ya just turned this into your own style and didn't improve anything. Ya basically turned the character into something it's not.

>>3539957
Ok, I can see why are you saying that, but the part about the legs and fur are useful to you, don't discard like that.

How do I know what brushes to use in painttoolsai? I'm new to digital and I dont know what to use for sketching and then linework and then coloring

>>3539965
The legs yea I’m working on, but idk about the fur,I can’t recall if the OC was even that much fur on it, and it might end up looking to busy. I’ll try it out but if I do it’ll be a lot less then what ya got going on there right now. Once again thanks for the help I forgot theirs actually a few people on this board that aren’t just straight up hostile autists.

>>3539971
Nah the fur shouldn't really be noticeable.

>>3539383
she's about to shoot the sky without looking

How do you know what canvas size to use? And PPI?

>>3540015
Literally whatever you feel comfortable with. As for dpi i leave it at default? Whatever that is

>>3540015
300 ppi canvas size whatever you want
i do at least 3000x2000 and size down.

>>3539965
I just couldn’t get the fur to look right, I cut down on the thighs, and softened up the shading on the hands while also adding another small shading layer.

>I shouldn't have to pay to see your art
Well then, I shouldn't have to deal with your fucking shit either but here I am. You people are the fucking worst people alive, you fuckers know that right? You tortured me to fucking death and you are giving me shit because I don't want to post on social media.

It's all fucking fake anyways. Youre giving me shit for things that aren't even real.

Go fuck yourselves. I hate all of you.

>>3540049
hi

>>3540015
>>3540031
ppi isnt a thing at all with this because its always a FIXED resolution. DPI is what you use to actually scale onto print, even then it still doesnt matter. DPI only scales with the metric/imperial measurements on documents(inches,mm centimeteres ect NOT pixels). with 72 dpi at its base it wont scale much, but 300 dpi will scale the measurements higher to printing. so if you have your stuff set to pixels and you change the DPI, it wont do anything it will just stay at that resolution.

>>3539140
I would just tweak small things in the body and face, keep the hands the same just tone down the realism it doesn't fit with the rest of the drawing. The back is also a little fucked so I changed it slightly.

>>3540049
...what? I'm not sure what you're talking about, but accept critique and don't whine and act like everyone else is wrong.

>>3540049
Ate the bait

>>3537973
>that's the same with human women
kek

>>3540049
who's this drama queen

>>3540083
>not knowing who jace is
lol

>>3540049
No idea who his is referring to but where do you post your work? I think this looks great

>>3539513
this is a really good piece, i especially like the tones. very rarely could i ever bring myself to colour an entire setting so i can only imagine what a nightmare that process must have been for you.

that being said, there's just a few things that i think can be improved upon. for one, her wings seem too low to be attached to be attached to her upper back? i don't know if that it is a part of her design but it's the first thing that i noticed. second, where her right arm connects to her torso seems disproportionate, as if too much skin is attached to her chest. i think maybe you could raise her underarm a bit? third, her right hand looks a little too big while both her feet look a little too small. they could use some adjustment. and lastly(and this might just be personal opinion), her face shape seems a bit round. like, rounder than it should be.

i took a stab at it to show you what i mean. let me know if you want me to delete it.

>>3539513
Got a blog?

Should I bother to finish this? Anything wrong with it so far?
felt like shit all the way through

>>3540201
It's fanart, he got the wings are in the right place.

>>3540201
>>3540227
I do like your changes though.

>>3540049
Love you jace

>>3540223
yeah that one girl seems to have a penis, can't be right because girls don't have penises

>>3540049
keep tracing and making boring ass compositions of naked chicks you weird schitzo

>>3540276
anon please...

Can I?

>>3540049
can you kill yourself already you fucking tranny?

>>3540049
Jesus fucking Christ. If you’re so vulnerable and sensitive about people who use Anonymity to be mean to others(not just you), then maybe you should get off this site until you’re not such a crybaby victim. Grow a spine or learn to ignore them. What’s so hard about that, if you want people to only be nice about you and your art, go to Instagram.

>>3538633
Try to pose like that yourself, lol. You’ll fall over. Unbalanced

>>3539251
*draws character over and over in different positions*
*only shows one angle for the head*
Bruh

>>3540472
not even changing her position though, just drawing the same pose over and over

>>3539418
The fetish comment is about how unnaturally and inconsistently enlarged random parts look.

>>3540457
you have no idea what you're talking about
>>3540400
trust me, I'm going to kill you before I kill myself. I'm going to kill all of you. Every last one and you fuckers all deserve it to.

And I won't be the only one looking for you fucks. I'll get everyone to murder you. I'll get everyone to kill them all.

This is what I was sent here to do. To burn this pathetic excuse of an empire to the fucking ground.

What was once in the dark will be in the light. You are without mercy, you are all rage. But I, I will be worse.

>>3540286
>>3540089
>>3540105
>>3540083
It's post like this that prove I'm acting in self defense. You fags have already been proven this is how you acted for the conspiracy. That your end goal was to try to harass me so much that I kill myself.

You keep doing it, you have to know that it's not going to work. That I am going to get out of here. and when I do, I know that I will be justified. That everyone will know I'm justified.

I have every right to defend myself. And you all have proven what kind of lengths you will go to in order to complete your mission. So yeah, I won't be taking extreme measures. The measures I'll take will be exactly the right level.

>>3540494
nigga what the fuck, I never heard of you and I think you're way too invested in this
take a walk man

>>3540494
hi...

>>3540494
See you tomorrow ;)

>>3540494
>conspiracy
>That your end goal was to try to harass me so much that I kill myself.

>>3540494
>He's into us
>He heard about the Conspiracy
>launch plan "J"

i dont often try anime but can someone help me out with the face? also any advice on why the lighting on the legs look wrong?

>>3540507
I fucking wish. I am so god damn fucking bored out of my fucking mind.

>>3540524
forget the face, scrap the whole thing and go back to studies

>>3540524
start over anon

>>3540511
>He, ecли я мoгy ocтaнoвить этo!

>>3540527
>>3540531
thanks lads, self awareness in art is a difficult thing. i'll take this to /beg/

>>3540524
Still too realistic to be called as stylized anime

>>3540481
Dude... Fuckin leave already, there's no reason for you to be here if you don't want to.

>>3540494
This some cringe ass shit bruh, good job encouraging whatever behavior you're criticizing with that dumb fucking reaction.

Any major flaws besides the face?

>>3540373
I like it anon, hope you finish it soon

>>3539381
>>3539390
>>3539491
Thanks gays

>>3540564
Her left hand

>>3540571
Can you elaborate? I feel like the position is off but I can't figure out the specifics.

>>3540574
The two fingers pointing out feel really long to me.

>>3540564
Those two fingers won't do any damage and they also look ugly, make them more like pic related and add more perspective

>>3540494
Dude, you talk like you have schizophrenia or some other serious personality disorder, seek help

>>3540678
Because he is one. Just ignore him. He's been doing this for a long time

>>3540564
>soon
Ah,yes, you know me well

>>3540696

Link to OP blog / gallery? (Right hand side, blue drawing)

>>3538082
I think this is as far as I can take this so I'll stop it here

>>3540745
pretty neato

nee noop

>>3540772
please give back the lower third of her face, and don't say its your style. this could be something if you unfuck her face

>>3540775
it looks like a scan anon

>>3540477
>>3540472
i had already decided on the pose and was exploring different designs, don't care for the angle at this point but you can't stop to consider that, i was about to point out how retarded i think your comments are but it's pointless cause that's probably what you want anyways and i'm not one to contribute to shitposting.

>>3540703
... Read the thread

>>3540790
I can't find it man

I am back f a m

>>3540481
Do you feel big saying these words like they actually mean something? or is it the voices in your head telling you to type this?

>>3540799
I tried adding more shadows. I hope you don't mind bro

>>3540480
How am I supposed to give her fat thighs then

>>3540775

it's my style

>>3540793
Basically
>>3537818
Other than that I don't think she's comfortable with getting her blog spread.

>>3540814
those legs are kinda short compared to that long torso

>>3540201
Thank you so much for your edit! It really helps me to pinpoint my mistakes in this piece, I need to pay more attention to anatomy next time. Right now coloring is my weaker side too because it took me quite some time to bring it to this state, hopefully my next piece will look better and come out faster!

>>3540215
Don't have a blog yet but I do submit my work on /las/ as DejaVu so feel free to join us there if you like :>

>>3540814
Hey, that looks pretty good! I was pretty lazy with the shading, you did a much better job than me

>>3540857
no worries! i really love the piece and your knack for colours so i wanted to be able to help. here's the .psd file if you want to take a closer look at the edit: https://mega.nz/#!n4BTTSCa!8GDrk6a4r2_xd5rgIJmDOo3l4MyBwkcew7TqP5LfXuI

>>3540857
no worries! i really love the piece and your knack for colours so i wanted to be able to help.

here's the .psd file if you want to take a closer look at the edit: https://mega.nz/#!n4BTTSCa!8GDrk6a4r2_xd5rgIJmDOo3l4MyBwkcew7TqP5LfXuI

>>3540873
Thanks my dude. If you want to replicate what I did (coz I didn't save the psd), I increased her highlights using Color Balance to make it look like she's outside on a sunny day, then used a light bluish/purple color for the shadow layer then set it to multiply

>>3538633
sorry shit sketch but i wanted to see if i could use this as an exercise as im still learning this as well
a few thoughts to think of when you draw around w/posing:

-line of action: helps with the overall gesture of character, relieves stiffness

-character weight(still new to concept) essentially giving the character weight and making them feel more real with how they react they shift it to one side or other

-positive/neg space, think of silhouette and if its them when blacked out(more defined space= better)

and if you can think of the body in a 3d space it really helps too when adding them into the environment but make sure you can lead the viewers eye to the subject!

i included a variation with it but uhh fuck arms amiright?

hope this helps!

also one of the more recent things ive drawn!

>>3540918
she thiiiicc

>>3540831
there's a difference between having style and not knowing what you're doing and calling it style, anon

I couldnt be bothered to finish it cause im a fuck.

>>3539615
>>3539616
>>3539633
>>3539645
Alright, how does this looks?
Also, what other things i should do to further improve this?

>>3539513
This is my interpretation. I think you get the gist.

tl;dr push ur values and I personally would forego most of the BG, so the character is pushed more. If you look at your piece in thumbnail form, it barely reads the character silhouette because the bg is not pushed back enough IMO. Best would be to darken it more than I did and make some good unified shapes from the lit books, but I think you understand.

>>3541009
>Also, what other things i should do to further improve this?
Start polish it, i don't like the fog on the right ship though, if foggy is what you going for then alright.
Also give me your blog faggot.

>>3539151
Pose could use a bit of dynamism. Just an idea.

i feel like the colors can be better before i can proceed. Any recs? Also how are my lines

>>3540223
guess i finished it
any crit?

>>3541202
wtf

>>3541202
I should not have clicked that

Asking for critique
I think I draw too rigidly without line authority

>>3541202
>there's more detail on the dick than the entire picture

kek

>>3541202
>looks at dick
nothing too bad
>looks at her body
oh baby momma

Pretty much done I guess.

cbf changing anything probs but will take any advice or critique into account for next time.

>>3537837
Coincidentally followed you on twitter a while ago. Took me a while to realize I had seen your art here before.

>>3541361
I'm not really felling the thumbnail, try fixing it there and it will improve the whole piece as a whole

The most frustrating part is I know it looks off around her torso and back but I have no idea how to fix it, could I get a paintover or redline?

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>>3537606
Put me in the OP next or else.

It's suppose to be Miss Pauling, but it doesn't look anything like her. Should I just roll with what I got or start over?

>>3541203
>>3541205
>>3541305
>>3541325
okay but
what about the critique though
what are you guys even freaking out over?

>>3541425
IMO this is how I would resolve it.

Based on your established perspective, I think you're underestimating at how much of an angle the viewer is looking up at the giant. Much of her figure would be out of view, covered by her own body and the wall.

>>3541464
I know who you are. You are Sinixdesign!

>>3541503
Sinix can't draw non-pointy chins

>>3541482
take it to the porn thread you fag
also nobody's freaking out, just cringing at your stupid fetish

>>3541520
>take it to the porn thread you fag
i mean fair enough but what does it matter
>just cringing at your stupid fetish
it's just a penis, and not even a very realistic one. surely you've been on the internet long enough to see a bunch of dicks? equine, canine penises?

>>3541585
people are distracted by the detail cluster it makes the wiener the focal point which you obviously did whether its subconscious or not because you have a giant wiener fetish

>>3541450
or else what

I think the shadow is weird on this one

>>3541611
Or else.

>>3541634
For some reason I ignored your work so far but I should really look up your blog, I think you have a tumblr right?
also I like your amputee girls seem still pretty and serene instead of the creepy shit some other artists do
I mean not my fetish but just saying

>>3541634
your color is starting to get better imo, but don't stagnate with it, keep studying color, ganbatte

I don’t know if it’s cool to shill discord’s here but if any of you are looking for a beginner friendly art community with funny boys in it. https://discord.gg/RvHW2RS Need more dedicated people who want to improve

>>3541634
Those eyes are super uncanny, you didn't shade the lids as they should, plus they start way too far up.
nose also looks a bit too assymetric.
love that hair though.

>>3541202
Ironically the dick is the least of the problems with her anatomy.
Just her everything. what the actual fuck?

>>3541691
Probably deservingly so. But if you're curious I post daily on firez-tbr.tumblr.com. Also thanks for the observation. I'm glad serenity is being conveyed.

>>3541701
Thanks, I think I'm starting to get better at applying studies to imaginative stuff. Also I've noticed that Procreate leaves things a bit more neutral than PS when applying certain layer modes and it was until that piece that I started to compensate for that. Usually my stuff on PS look less muddy

>>3541739
Thanks. Now that you mention it her left eyelid is probably the most aggravating one . I'm still laying down values and making changes on the face so I will try to get it better.

>>3541753
>Probably deservingly so.
You're not really at a level where you can say that come on now
Your work isn't beginner tier and hasn't been so in a long time so don't think so lowly of yourself
Someone like me can think that because I literally can't even put basic color on some lineart but not you

>>3541634
La cara como que no, creo que es angulo de la nariz, tiene que estar mas angulada para abajo.

>>3541502
pointless critique

This might sound like a dumb question (and it is one) but whats the next step in renering a piece, I blocked it in, added the primary light source, ambient light but im kinda stuck here

>Kyle is a spic
WEW

>>3541620
more... doodle... desu

>>3541423
What can I do to fix that

>>3541789
>pointless critique
What? How so?

>>3541717
Fuck off

>>3537618
>>3537634
>>3537837
>>3539281
blog?

>>3539281
Watch out for pillow shading. I would probably start some form/shading exercises from the ground up, because it looks like you're shading randomly based on your outlines, rather than your forms (you gotta think in top/front/side planes, and don't be afraid to use ref for your lighting even if you're doing something stylized).
Cute colors, btw.

>>3541196
Thanks, doc

>>3541765
If you're going post in spanish at least try not to be a mexican about it.

>>3541762
Thanks for the kind words anon but trust me I feel utterly humbled by drawing, The more I learn about it the more I realize how much I still have yet to cover.

Btw just lasso your linework silhouette and fill that with any color (it really doesn't matter) then lasso heach section with the local color and work your values with a separate multiply layer

>>3541765
Gracias, al cliente le gusto muchisimo tal y como esta pero vere de que manera arreglo la nariz por que si veo que me la han criticado y creo que podria estar mas definida

>>3541196
Colors are too saturated

>>3541439
Not too sure what's going on here, but I think I get it
>>3541502
Thanks for taking the time to paintover! I feel it looks more correct this way too

>>3541425
It's all fundamentally screwed up. Volume is not there, and lighting/shading especially is not there considering there is an explosion behind her. Where's her neck? Why is there even lighting close to the explosion? The closer you are to a source of light the smaller the window of light you'll have.

>>3542037
>Gracias, al cliente le gusto muchisimo tal y como esta pero vere de que manera arreglo la nariz por que si veo que me la han criticado y creo que podria estar mas definida
Esta bueno ver otro catracho ganando pisto.

>>3541023
Thanks, I was trying to make a piece with more detailed background but I will keep silhouette in mind next time

>>3542197
I'm the guy who did the edit.


Remember also that it's beneficial to have a foreground, midground and background with a focal point that all read. It's fine to darken the background and omit a lot of detail, if old masters are anything to go by, and push the silhouette and shapes.

If you greyscale a lot of good modern digital artists' work you will see that there is a clearly defined fore, mid and background, with a focal point usually in the form of a subject like a creature or object, communicated via value. Foreground to background, progressively lighter from dark. I'm sure you *know* this, but do greyscale your pieces every time you start putting base values down and check how it reads.

I'd post some of my own original stuff but honestly I'm not good enough to demonstrate, so have pic related.

>>3542227
Here is also a greyscale of my edit. I think you can see why I opted to darken the BG behind the figure and take away at least one torch.

>>3542126
Its not an explosion, but im not sure how to give it more volume from this...

>>3541747
>whats wrong
>everything
very helpful

>>3542288
porn thread might be better at giving you crits. It's just that it's too degenerate for /alt/

>>3542227
>>3542229
I can see why removing the torch is a good idea, I gotta admit that value is something I've unfortunately neglected while working on these recently, so looking at greyscaled master works really helps reminding me of those important things. Once again thank you, I appreciate it!

>>3542335
Cute style!

>>3542335
please give her chin back

How teh eff does RJ/HGJ do it?

>>3542335
Chin/mouth placement is a little weird, and I dont like that the head is so big that the eyes are below the middle line; but I like how those legs just flow down in these pleasing curves
Be mindful that this is just my taste though, you can do whatever you want
Post blog, I wanna see you progress

>>3542468
>>3542604
Should've fixed the hair/head right like this anon, but was too lazy to do it

>>3542288
I mean, it literally is everything.
You've literally misplaced entire body parts

>>3540524
What the fuck anon it's horrid

>>3543332
Ofc it's horrible, he's a /beg/ what do you expect? It's not grossly bad tho; We all have to start somewhere, at least he's drawing

how do you troubleshoot face proportions?

>>3540524
i made it anime minus the girl penis, because girl penises are not right

>>3540918
who is this character.