/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>Don't know how to paint the shirt
>Ah fuck it gonna will paint the waistcoat first
>Bad idea, now i will have to fix the waistcoat later if i overpaint the shirt
G-Guys, please send help.

color clumps animay style, and i know her left hand is shite.

>>3526580

>>3526604
Ive seen enough hentai to know what happens next

>>3523441

>>3526580
>>3526594
>>3526595
>>3526604
>>3526615
when did ic become so good?

>>3526604
Fuck! those sexy fucking hands!
proud of you, keep it up

havent posted in a while, still working out some things on this one

>>3526595
i will dick her

>>3526595
How do you achieve this?

>>3526639
nice laphos!

>>3526669
ty bro!

some thick mommas

>>3526680
we had a chain of nice drawings and then you shit it up again with your literal ass cancer drawings. kys faggot

>>3526680
I would call out your shit since they are kid ponies but you made them hot animes so it's okay. Love it!

>>3526639
Do you have any tips on posing? I can never think of creative poses!

>>3526595
its like you tried a new style with the hair then gave up for the rest of the drawing

>>3526686
Nigga they are all literally anime drawings. Why is this one so different to you.

>>3526624
I don't know and its so fucking odd its like jet lag but unexpectedly

>>3526692
poses are still super hard for me personally, but the two things i find helpful are

1. the personality of the character
i try to think a lot about how the character would pose if they were a real person, casual, excited, etc which limits the pool of poses a bit
and

2. i study a lot of photo references just to have a bit of a mental library, its hard to find references for every little thing but the key is that you just get used to how the human body can bend and how arms etc look in slight distortion
one additional thing i try to think about is avoiding forced 2-dimensionality. basically if youre drawing a character, are all the poses of the arms and legs bent in a way so they are in full view on one 2 plane? like with the arm in my drawing i tried to put it into the foreground a bit so it seems more natural (still practicing that part though...)
also i know its a shitty site but i follow a lot of fashion and photography blogs on tumblr, which provide a daily influx of new stuff to practice and find inspiration from (pinterest works well too)

sorry for the huge reply, im not good at cutting things shorter!

>>3526696
found the dunning-krueger

>>3526701
*on one 2D plane

>>3526639
nice chin

>>3526702
Never said i didn’t like them, faggot. Stop projecting.

>>3526701
it's okay Anon!! your great! thanks for giving me pointers, and I wish you good luck on keeping up the hard work

>>3526702
that's not how dunning krueger works idiot

be nice to each other, kiddies.

i love ham's girls! i love ham!

>>3526604
Bloooooog?

>>3526680
Muh dick muhfucka

>>3526680
Very nice yev! I especially love the way you draw horses!

Widow WIP

>>3527001
lemme smash that.

>>3527001
really cute

>>3527001
draw hands and feet you hack

>>3527001
Fix the parallels of the face, they're a little skewed now

>>3526615
you're using WAY too much red for her skintone. Looks sunburnt even.

>>3527099
I'm gettin' to it
>>3527102
I see it, thanks broski

>>3526595
I want to see this finished

Just finished this, any feedback for future drawings?

>>3527102
>Fix the parallels of the face
nigga what? /beg/ shouldnt be allowed to crit

?!??

>>3527140
What a sexy woman, is she wearing see through clothes or have I developed anime pantsu xray

>>3526580
sauce?

>>3527141
thanks,i have to make clean lines so you can see a bit thru the cloths so far.

>>3527129
Do some anime hair studies, the one you painted looks like slabs of taffy.

>>3527129
It's flat looking, mostly her face and her waist. Also has perspective messed up on her legs and her arms, her right leg is supposed to be in the background yet her right thigh is overlaping her left thigh; I think you intented to foreshorten her arms but again, it looks flat and seems she just has short arms and long forearms. The other big problem is her pose is on the awkward side. That is just me being 110% honest with you colors are nice and I think you did a good job with her clothes and hair. Just gotta grind those fundies friend

>>3527144
thanks for pointing that out, guess I need to practice that more

>>3527142
see previous thread

>>3527148
thanks for the input, as for the right leg I was trying to go for something like pic related, guess the shading needs work as I failed to make it appear as such, I'll work at it though so thanks for the honesty

>>3527163
Ah, be more mindful of her pose though, just because you're using a doll doesn't mean the pose isn't stiff. Key to a more natural pose is shoulders and hips lean to opposite sides of each other. Pic is a very poor attempt at demonstration

wip

>>3527172
ahh, that makes sense, I'll bear that in mind for the future. I am pretty new at this though so I'll take any help I can get

>>3527219
Don't skip loomis REEEEE

>>3527217
Skull need thickness and brain -- glossiness

>>3527285
>needs

>>3527217
meth eyes

opinions on this?

>>3527335
That's a girl!

>>3527494
how many times do I have to tell you that the eyes are too fucking close together

>>3527494
why is the skin reflecting a second light source but the hair isnt

>>3527510
Is this better? It is an old one btw

>>3527512
Because I hid the layer, that part is not done yet

>>3527335
Yeah, it is a female

Is MSPaint a dead medium? Could never afford SAI or a tablet to draw

Anything wrong here? I think the legs' position is a little off

>>3527556
Just pirate it, you don't need to uselessy suffer, you really want to keep your morals intact you can always donate it to them after you get the money.
Autodesk is free, so there's that.

Anyways, if you really want to keep pushing Paint, add more noise, then erase it to lower contrast. Alternatively, paint it solid black then erase it with the binary pencil, otherwise it looks transparent. Keep it up

>>3527662
Lear to do feet, but cute

>>3527217
Have you ever painted a portrait of a real person before? it sure doesn't look like it
Learn the fundamentals, paint real people, learn how the anatomy works, then you may try to stylize your stuff.

>>3527001
Really liking it, can you link your blog?

>>3527522
the mouth looks a little off to me

>>3527663
H-Help, my tablet doesn't work in sai! I changed the settings like the FAQ brand asked but it do not work

Know the hand on the hip looks bad but I was too lazy to try fixing it since I wanted to move on to coloring and shading

>>3527714
Define "not working"

>>3527670
How do they have a fear to do feet? I think their feet look ok and its not like they hid the feet all 4 are in the picture.

>>3527556
No. I use it alot myself because it's quick and stress free. You can make everything with anything. Question of how effective you want to be. Trying to do values with MSPaint will likely kill you. Cell shading is very much possible and even convenient with it however.

>>3527556
I use MSPaint a lot for shitty doodles and memes

>>3527556
Also, why is money even a problem here? No one needs Photoshop nowadays aside from personal preference, and even that is easily piratable straight from Adobe's site.

Clip Studio often goes on sale for just 30$ and is amazing for it's price, probably the only direct Photoshop competitor.

Medibang and Krita are both free and stellar in their own right. Autodesk is pretty great too, lots of cool brushes.

Sai is easily piratable but hard to find a clean crack.

The
> I don't have money!
excuse stopped being valid LOOOONG ago. You can get professional grade tablets for 50$ nowadays and the software is free. If you have a computer made in the last decade and a working pair of hands, you can draw digitally.

>>3527773
this shit is fantastic. Blog?

>>3526687
Celestia and Luna aren't loli ponies.

>>3527762
I didn't say "fear", I said "learn", well I didn't say it cuz I have the retardations.
Anyways, they could use a lil bit more form, a more grounded anatomy, just a lil bit, that could make it even cuter

>>3526686
Post your work bro.

>>3527773
Saved
post blog.

>>3527834
the face shape is putrid
how do you think this looks correct

>>3527785
>>3527840
I made a different version of that. I'm not sure it's readable, tho.
My blog is http://atlas9x.tumblr.com/

>>3527730
When I try to use the tablet in Sai, the cursor doesn't move! I got an xp pen deco 03 and followed their online guide but it still didn't work. It works fine in everything else

>>3527851

>>3527662
Stop pasting stuff from twitter

>>3527868
go into painttool sai's settings/options. change the API it uses to something else.

>>3527883
you draw bad feet

>>3526604
do you have a blog? i really like seeing your work on here

>looking at what makes a animu drawing look good vs not looking good
It's really just the face isnt it? I mean clothing and color choices seem to play a decent role too, but the face seems to be the main difference.

>>3528013
ye pretty much

>>3527997
I don't get it! D: the only related option is to change from Penn/mouse mode

>>3527710
Thanks I will try to revise it

>>3527716
I think you should really reconsider the face, it just looks too plain and jarring against the well proportioned body. Also try to give more a bit more length to her fingers

I think I'm done with pic related

>>3528224
Something about this is extremely awkward, hard to place my finger on it exactly but I don't think its what you were going for with the doll parts.

The hairline on the bangs looks a bit off, just the angle and way its drawn makes her hair look kind of like a wig
The eyes also aren't aligned properly, I don't know if this is what you were going for, but if so then they should be severely misaligned and not just uncannily .
The head->neck->body connection is also pretty badly put together, and I don't know if that other arm is hers and is still attached? But it doesn't look or feel attached. Both of these come from just the angle of her torso not matching up with the angle the arm and neck come from.

>>3526637
>>3526835
>>3528007
Thank you friends happy someone likes it, i'm trying to get better. I do have blog: pantsu-ripper.tumblr.com

Did someone from here draw pic related? It was posted in another (dead) thread and there's no results from reverse search

Is this the right place to post this kind of thing idk

>>3527710
Thanks I will try to revise it

>>3527716
I think you should really reconsider the face, it just looks too plain and jarring against the well proportioned body. Also try to give more a bit more length to her fingers

I think I'm done with pic related

>>3528232
You should establish a common value frist, it jumps all over the place, those reds are fockin eww desu. Read some color theory, even some shity youtube video will help. Relaing on color corrections will hurt you more, it's not the frist time that this has happened to you, so fix it

>>3528257
the mouth looks upturned but the face is not upturned

>>3528270
I should have said tilted back rather than "upturned"

>>3528230
I think you mean >>3528257 I considerably changed some stuff since that deleted post but I'm sure I have did not addressed all your remarks, the thing is that this is a fan art of an odd concept as is. That said thanks a lot for the critique.

>>3528271
The face has some tilt but yeah the mouth was a pain. Maybe I will revise it tomorrow in my blog. Thanks

>>3526680
blog? love your drawing here!

>>3528267
I will read on it, thank you

>>3527559
Everything
Everything is wrong here

>>3527335
I like your grill

Posted this yesterday in agdg, since I want to create art for the game I'm making.
Perhaps I can get more feedback here.

>>3528240
do we look like kjfg to you? i know this is a higher than average thread but come on

>>3528298
...Okay, explain?

>>3527955
Does her chin sit on her neck?

>>3528013
That and line weight apparently.

>>3528456
>baby horses

Yev pls stahp, my benis can only take so much

Here we go

>>3528013
>>3528144
>the face is also the hardest part
I have been drawing anime for a few months now and I can't figure out heads still. I can make them look ok by now but I still feel insecure and my method of construction is kinda half assed
I mean if you want to draw western style I feel like Loomis is a big step forward when you're a beginner because it gives you a guideline on proportions
I'm not that much of a beginner but I still can't figure out anime heads.
It doesn't help looking at skilled artists do it because they don't construct or anything, they eyeball a rough shape then refine the head from that
what do?

>>3528456
>four fingers

>>3528456
I like the simplicity of the line art and coloring
Cant think of any constructive criticism apart from the missing finger, which I'm guessing is a stylistic choice

>>3528546
>Four fingers
3 fingers, everyone knows thumbs dont count
Hope your art is better than your math

>>3528555
no, I just accidentally forgot the 5th one, and didn't notice until after the fact.

>>3528495
Japanese use Loomis too, dude. Construction drawing is applicable to any style.

>>3528319
Blog?

>>3528559
But it's not the same rules obviously because some proportions don't apply 1:1 from Loomis to anime
Like the distance between the eyes being 1 eye. Anime eyes are too big for that, checking the proportions of mangakas I can tell the space is less than that between the eyes
I get the frame must be similar but it can't be the same

>>3526580
FUCK! FUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUCCCCCCCK2!@@@!#@

>>3528319
Cute, but kinda static

>>3528617
Dude, clean your stuff

>>3528456
scoots head is looking pretty weird. Seems that the neck is too thick compared to the rest of the cast. The other thing I'd point out is that your fingers are either just chunky sausages pointing out or stubby lil nubs.
Also the missing fingers

>>3526580

>>3526624
this desu. for a while I was just worried that I was getting stupider and losing my critical eye, but it seems like 'we're all going to make it' wasn't just a meme after all.

>>3526624
i'm glad this post was made before my post because now i don't have to feel bad i wasn't included in the list of good artists

>>3527662
mecchi doesn’t post here. they’re too good for ic

>>3528445
Oh yeah, that DOES look bad...

>>3528798
>he didn't make it

>>3528838
no i didn't. i'm not /beg/ tier but when it comes to anime i can't figure it out even if i tried for months now.
i won't give up because this is what i want to draw but i'm starting to think my mind can't figure out anime as well as some anons in these threads

K,Kanehira is live right now if anyone interesting in BG with alot of details.
Also
>5805*4100pixel.500dpi
Absolute mad man
https://sketch.pixiv.net/@psm021/lives/265553136664854478?from=pixiv

>>3528139
I really like this to be ache

>>3528839
>being this harsh on you're self
you can make it friend just grind more

>>3528839
>i can't figure it out even if i tried for months now
Don't worry anon, i draw for years now and i still can't say i'm confident in draw animu faces in different angles.
Just draw more and you will improve bit by bit.

>>3528842
the colors are pretty neat

>>3528839
>i tried for months
I have some bad news for you, bucko

>>3528853
>>3528857
thanks, yeah i guess i have to try harder

>>3528869
i mean i wasn't saying you can get to pro mangaka levels in months but i thought by now i'd be a little better than i am, just comparing it to learning how to draw other things
that said faces are complex things so i shouldn't be surprised

>>3528798
you'll make it senpai, but first believe in yourself

I know the hand's not great, but this was more about getting clean, well-defined lines.
That's my excuse and I'm sticking to it.

>>3528886
looks p ok

>>3528889
Much obliged.

>>3528886
wait wtf is wrong with her ear

>>3527559
Some critique? Anyone?

>>3528891
Now that you mention it, it looks like I didn't add any detail to the interior or the bottom. Hm.

>>3528886
A quick tip, hands usually big enough to cover a face.
Try putting your hand on your face, yeah that the usual size of hands. Draw it like that.
Also like this anon point out >>3528891
Ears don't look like that, it's a C within a C.

>>3527001
the responses to this prove that /ic/ is full of dickbrains who will praise anything with a gigantic ass and tits

>>3528900
I thought the face looks really cute and the linework is nicely done. Your projection is showing, anon

>>3527217
it looks like youre a fan of that edgy artist who did all those body horror drawings with gems and mushrooms that other edgy hipsters really liked

>>3528894
The legs are definitely off: I think they need to be positioned more to the side of the pelvis than attached to the bottom.
The clothes tightening at the crotch looks unnatural, too, and I think the torso might be a bit too tiny at the bottom.

My wrist feel a little uncomfortable after a long session of drawing, any tips to prevent that guys? It's the first time for me.

>>3528894
her heads small, her face is off, her pose is stiff, where are her feet, nevermind the position of the legs look at the proportion and shape instead, her waist between the zippers magically changes shape (and its too small around the ribcage area) along with her torso being really long (though passable for the style)
nice hands though

>>3528456
a s s c a n c e r
thats a big fucking yikes

>>3528899
I'll bear those in mind. Definitely need to practise hands a lot more.

>>3528906
Increase daily potassium intake

>>3528906
keep doing it, you're either not used to it and will be or you're fucking up your wrist and will regret it
you'll find out in about a year which is it

>>3528906
Don't straight up draw for more than an hour. Use pomodoro as a timer. Take a break every 20-30 minutes and do some arm and wrist stretching while you're on a break.

>>3528908
look it's the yikes poster

>>3528324
Another one for the game.

>>3528324
I'm retarded.

>>3528958
damn...

>>3528958
r63 red skull?

>>3528977
Uh no, I didn't even know what red skull was. The lack of nose is the thing in common, I guess.

>>3528990
just teasing you, anon

Do you guys think it's worth studying cinema composition and framing?

>>3528994
if you can apply it on your original work then yes

>>3528617
the scribbles a bit too much my bro, over all silhouette of the cartoon girl is pretty cool.

>>3528994
Yes.

>>3528905
>The legs are definitely off: I think they need to be positioned more to the side of the pelvis than attached to the bottom.
Yeah I thought as much
>The clothes tightening at the crotch looks unnatural, too, and I think the torso might be a bit too tiny at the bottom.
To be fair I know the torso is really thin but given the body the character has in the manga it would have felt weird to make it normal sized

>>3528907
Thanks

>>3528906
I find that using an easel helps immensely. If I draw with paper straight on my desk it hurts my hand pretty quickly

>>3528819
Those hands and feet say otherwise

r8 my cock

>>3529119
more interested in the thighs

>>3527680
idk what you're talking about the face looks fine, it's proportionate and appealing enough. it's the rendering that's fucked, though it's still a WIP

>>3528906
lighten your grip, draw more with your shoulder and elbow. it takes some practice. if possible don't use your dominant hand and mouse all the time, and always take breaks after 30 minutes.

>>3529119
I love your art kyle, especially your feet, but you really disappointed me with the cock's feet

>>3529119
show full pic

>>3528194
paint tool sai's beta version has an option to change APIs.

but you should be able to do something similar if you go to the misc.ini file in your install folder and experiment with some settings. change some 0s to 1s on the first few settings.

this might introduce lag or delay or some other problems though. in my experinece, paint tool sai has a weird way of interacting with tablets.

>>3527714
use sai 2

any critique?

>>3529229
absolutely disgusting

I can't visualize the form of the shoulder/arm.

>>3528906
Take breaks and do some light wrist/finger stretches. Try to do it before your wrist gets sore.

Which face is better and why? And which one is the worst and why?

>>3529381
they are all the worst because you dont understand how light is supposed to affect the form and your colors are muddy and unappealing

>>3526624
>Oekaki ham
>good

HAJAHAHAHAHAHAHA

>>3529381
>>3529235

>>3529265
You might as well draw the actual child you're referencing from because that looks like shit.

>>3529397
i will not permit you to bully the hams

Finished illustration from my sketchbook on the left / WIP (which I think I'll try my hand at painting digitally) on the right.

How do you feel about the figure stylization, and does anyone have any suggestions/tips for visual design (characters, environment, objects, etc.)?

and as always feel free to mention any errors you find.

>>3529460
I absolutely love how much character you gave even to objects like that cooler box.

>>3529503
did you have to make it obvious that you trace

Pretty new to digital drawing and still experimenting with some stuff. Some advice on this would be greatly appreciated. Also does anyone have any good tutorials on learning how to paint in photoshop?

>>3529504
commissioner just asked for big boots and i added timbs as a joke. the right boot isnt even facing the right direction

>>3529504
oh no, not tracing! the dastardly blackguard!

>>3529508
this is a critique board, if you never want to get better you can trace all you want

>>3529505
there's a website, www.ctrlpaint.com which probably has the best basic photoshop painting stuff around

>>3529510
and if you never want to get better continue to limit yourself to grade school art morality

>>3529514
pointing out someone traces is now grade school tier art morality
the absolute state

Help.

posting some wip thing

>>3528267
hey frend last night and today i've been reading on color theory but I can't find anything about finding a common value, tho I understand what you mean by it now, do you have something that could help me?

>>3529528
he probably means a mother color? a color used to define all of your other color choices
which is one technique used to create balance and harmony in a palette. it doesn't really focus on actual light environments and more cares about color harmony.

I've never done this sort of style and I rarely color my shit, am I doing it right

Plenty of unironic nice talent ITT, proud of you anons.

>>3527522

>>3529586
NGMI

>>3529528
posting finished thingy

>>3529564
Blog? Really like this.

>>3529596
cute pug

wew, I haven't drawn in a while
continued >>3521553 some but fuck it; painting's too cerebral

>>3529678
that is
CUTE

>>3529678
fuck it i want to know. what's your secret to learning to draw like this. i can't fucking do it even after so long. how do i do it

>>3529673
Thanks.... i guess

I started to apply some base colors and more values to this. I’m afraid I will have to pass this to the computer. Procreate is starting to choke at A2 rez and 18 layers

>>3529764
Stop drawing tranny anon, a girl face on a man body is weird.

>>3529764
How do you shrink your posts from procreate? Does it have a resize export option?

I usually zoom out and take a screenshot then crop it

>>3527868
did the cursor move at all on your computer?

>>3529764
your colors still don't feel harmonious. that green stands out in a bad way

>>3529476
Thanks anon!

>>3529525
I like

>>3527773
get a drawing program
keep doing those shitty pixel line drawings
learn to color them with cute colors
spend a year uploading this shit
get paid

>>3529525
Critique this.

>>3527140
how can you draw bodies so good

>>3529421
Believe it or not I didn't use one, but I'd be happy if I could find one in that position.

>>3529540
>>3529528
Yeh and no. When lights are reflected they carry a color in them. When it's reflected from grass and the objects are close to the floor they'll have all the colors will tend to green. If they reflect from a wall, the color of the wall, this plus the own color of the light itself will dictate how warm or cold the colours will be.
Frist you should establish from were is the light coming from and if it's cold or warm though.
I remeber that you did a painting were it was sunset and the color had no even the slight orange in them
>https://youtu.be/gwLQ0cDb4cE
This video isn't completely related, but watch his channel for a quick lazy overview

>>3529602
You're fuckin sad desu

This is the first time i color a character like this. Need feedback.

Give it to me straight doc

>>3526594

Anon, when you are painting like this, do you just start with general shapes of paint and then detail after that or do you have sketch you start off with and then paint over that?

>>3529952
Depend on how much informations you can get from them.
If a block of paint is enough to help you visualize then it's enough.
In pic related, I first build a block of paint like Attall but feel like i need more informations so i do a rough line.
After that i start detailing.
You could also do rough line => underpaint =>detailling too
Choose which is more comfortable to you.

Self portrait

>>3529525
>>3529898
dont tell me what to do

>>3529941
Would be nice if you try to give her head a better shape instead of drawing a dorito.

>>3529184
I still need to add a few background details and the back of the chair. Any suggestions. Its suppose to be a anal voodoo witch

>>3529957
I would say its trash, but it is a self portrait.

>>3529766
I think she looks fit. Granted I just realized I cut off some of her waist.:/

>>3529777
Download pixlr (free) or get pixelmatorv(paid) for downscaling and sharpening both work well

>>3529828
Thanks, the cannon is supposed to be green but I will try to play with the hue and value to get something better


>>3529943
Heh...I drew a similar thing some months ago, Damn...I wish I could see my fuck ups much more clearly when I was working on it :/

I think their skin is too saturated, I will probably change the color of the sofa too.

>>3529953
Thanks. Trying to ease my way into painting and seeing into other people's process helps out a lot.

Otherwise I feel like I'm just flailing around.

>>3529938
I'm watching that video and wew... I kind of figured something similar from what you wrote yesterday but could not really get my head around it, this is very enlightening. I tried to putting it to practice, it's not very good but it's something I'll try to read more on; thank you frend

>>3529996
Stop using black you baka

>>3529764
>>3529961
Why Kyle and firez like amputees so much. It’s like hiding hands, clearly you are unable to draw both right and left sides

>>3529998
s-sorry I fixed it already

>>3529961
great as always, although the back seems a bit stiff

>>3529387
>>3529418
Bad timing, huh.

>> muddy
Samui monogatari da na, otouto.

>>3529800
yeah the tablet works fine outside of sai. even sai2 works but it a trial

>>3530033
Pirate sai 2. With certain tablet and pen combos sai doesn’t work (wouldn’t work with my tablet pc + Wacom pen)

>>3530035
is it supposed to say is the preview version? or did I get a fake crack. I don't know where to get the full version

>>3530040
I got my crack from some deviantart that posted a YouTube video so if you got it from there too, you’re good.

>>3528900
the fact that all you see is gigantic ass and tits shows what a hack you are

>>3529961
Aside from the left arm being hidden I think this looks great

>>3530003
lmao stay jealous

>>3528900
I see the dickbrainfag is still around.

>>3529764
revisit the head and legs. the skull looks huge and the thighs look like theyre super short. her shorts are disappearing into her body. looks like she is using the screw driver on her skin and in my opinion the background looks something more fitting of a hippie out camping rather than a bounty hunter, but i cant quite make out what its suppose to be

i made some fat asses

>>3530004
Post it! >:c

>>3529953
>>>>3527301
Retards being retards, they need you there

>>3530137
That's not how the anogenital area works.

>>3530137
I think the genitals are too high up, her asshole should be about where her vagina ends currently, and the pussy itself should be positioned more below and less visible
Lovely colors though

Using refs to practice both copying and styling

>>3530225
Why is her mouth a recurve bow?

>>3530234
Point taken anon, sometimes less is more.

>>3530248
You also don't need the line for the chin.

>>3530251
Thanks, that's also true.

>>3529961
to me it looks like she is floating but I don't know exactly why

>>3530263
Not him but maybe because the perspective of the floor planks is a little off? I did think immediately the planks pointed up too much but I didn't say because it seemed so insignificant

>>3530225
>>3530248
>>>/beg/

>>3530281
Yeah, I'm pretty much a beginner, but I didn't know if /beg/ is also for stylised stuff.

i need motivation to finish this, what can i improve? i think the shoulder is kinda off

>>3529971
I like the way you draw and render firez but everytime I see the feet and legs they are just awfully bloated and large. Especially the feet

>>3527883
I like this

>>3529610
Cute

>>3530310
if you want a more flowy pose maybe do something with her arms, now it looks like shes in a very uncomfortable leaning backwards position, off balance, and it looks like shes wearing a poorly placed wig with that hairline. didnt bother to check with a redline but the body looks fine

>>3530310
looks like a jojo character

>>3530263
He hasn't added shadows around her shoes and legs of the chair yet

>>3530269
yeah it might be it. And I agree that it is insignificant, I just point it out because if I was him I would like to know anyway

>>3530348
it has it too

>>3530137
Nice balls, Yev-san.

>>3530137
her right hand hory shet hahahaha

>>3530148
Thank you again for the help frend I really appreciate it

>>3528587
I meant that the basic concept is the same, you obviously have to change the proportions and whatnot.

>>3529460
Gorgeous work, anon. You're using Copics, correct?

So, what is the purpose of this thread again?

>>3530426
Shitposting and shitting on anyone that draw, oh and sometime we draw too.

>>3530475
please shit on my post I hate getting useless praise or being ignored

>>3530482
>praise
sorry anon, if we shit on it then it'll start a flame war

>>3530137
embarrassing

>>3526580
I feel like I'm the only person here without an touch screen drawing pad, is it easier to draw on them? I think I should invest in them because I'm eventually going to have to, but there's no way I'm getting 1k+ to buy one yet at this point.

>>3528587
most anime styles still employ 1 eye space between eyes or you still get uncanny. any manga/anime style art posted here with less than 1 eye space is proof of that.
the other thing for anime faces is that the eyes also pretty much touch the edge of the face almost always

>>3530604
majority of people here use a regular board tablet not a screen tablet
if you love art youre passionate about it maybe even want to pursue a career in it, I suggest a screen tablet. but its not necessary I mean even god like artists from all fields and styles still use regular tablets

>>3530614
Alright I guess I'll stick my traditional for now, I'm somewhere around high /BEG/ level, and I think I wan to start on digital but don't know which to invest on.

>>3529460
nice, it's lively and detailed. keep up the good work.

>>3529610
This is now a series desu

>>3530665
I liked your scribbly lines before. But I really like your cleaner lines now

How come so many mangakas don't use construction in their sketching?

>>3530703
Because they draw their shit all the time and there are only so many angles and bodytypes they utilize. It's like writing. A grade schooler still needs lines on the paper, you can write without them.

>>3530604
Seconding >>3530614 here, Sinix uses a dinosaur-old Intuos tablet still and he's a good painter. Screen tablets are nice but not necessary.
Look up different brands, Wacom is generally the best but their competitors keep getting closer and closer.

>>3530604
it's literally not worth the investment imo. I got a big phone with a stylus tho to sketch tho

>>3530396
what's the blog of this artist?

>>3530316
Thanks and yes that is why I said I just noticed some stuff I could have done better now. I think some of my recent stuff have better proportioned limbs than that piece

>>3530665
That is nice, have you tried other shadow tones? Perhaps something more related to the the bg color?

>>3526594
i know u get this like every other post but uh Blog?

>>3530980
Thanks for pointing out, I still suck at this, will change the bg color to fit

>western art
>shitty grey and sepia color
>nigger lips chiks
>spending all day to rendering face but ugly

>japanese art
>flat cell coloring and messed up highlights
>70% of art is same anime

>korean/chinese art
>influenced by jap one
>set some color scheme and rendering all day

why

>>3531094
>tumblr
>round and fat
>shitty pink color

>Deviant art
>it just shit

>Newgrounds
>only old fags are left, basically shitty fan arts and lot of crap

The threads are dying fast wtf

>>3531014
Sure, https://s-kq.tumblr.com/ or 6275562 on Pixiv

>>3531113
>少女前線
rip cool name, I still don't like ドールズフロントライン.

>>3529957
looks like you got to work on the basics, drawing what you see instead of symbols

How do I stop death gripping my tablet pen? I feel like my hand is always cramped. I don't know whether its actually death gripping or just not moving my fingers

>>3531232
ikr, now i have to tags both too, what a pain in the ass.

>>3531243
Might as well add chinese tag 少女前线 too while you're at it. What a clusterfuck.
But no matter what name the game has UMP45 is still super cute.

>>3529957
why did you post this here and not in the self-portrait thread ayy lmao

clenching up my whole body and gripping the pen real tight, thinking "it must be nice to have the time to draw all day"

>>3531560
Can't you use something other than a binary brush?

>>3531572
>muh brushes

>>3531560
Woah you did hands!

>>3531572
Please stop bullying him, what's wrong bout binary brush. I cannot stand zooming in and seeing blurry pixels in my work, it's disgusting

Posting latest doodle!

new thread
>>3531791
>>3531791

>>3526624
they all look like shit though? literal /beg/ tier

>>3532020
True...

>>3531783
did you make this? It's hella charming

>>3532666
yeah frend, it was for a drawthread. I'm trying to put my newfound awareness of color theory in practice

>>3526580
whoa, so embarrassed

i've been outed as a 30+ boomer...