/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3514268
Good choice on OP pic.

>>3514288
kek Only took me like 3 tries. Will try not to be a lazy dumb-ass next time.

>>3514268
Is that OP pic done by PlagueofGripes? Please tell me I'm right.

I need help, I have no idea what I am doing, is this pose event possible?

>>3514313
You should practice hands and feet, they look very unnatural

>>3514344
Its a cartoon, her whole fucking body defies the laws of natural selection and yet you worry about her pose

>>3514328
i believe so.

>>3514344
ngmi

is orc porn considered bestiality?

>>3515628
Perhaps if its a pig-man style orc
Either way it's more like teratophilia

>>3515643
>teratophilia
learn something new every day

thanks

compelling or nahhh

>>3514645
your lines are improving

keep it up

How's this lookin

>>3514344
HAHAHAHAHAHAh
AHHAHAHAAHAHHAHA
HAAAAAAAAAAHAHAHAAAHAHAHAHAA
HAAAAAAAAHHAHAHAAH
AHAHHAHAHAHAH
AH
AHAHAHAHAHAHAHAA
HAHAHAHAHA

>>3516607
I like it. Do you have a blog?

>>3516607
what am i looking at?

>>3516678
https://twitter.com/squishybandit

Not a lot up right now, I just started. I should probably just start posting the stuff I don't paint.

>>3516688
I don't know what this means.

hi this is my daughter

>>3514344

No, is not possible, legs and hips are in different directions.

>>3514268
Wassup

>>3517554
so dependent on reference you might as well bash

>>3517575
That's a problem because...

>>3517577
Because the key is understanding, not mindlessly copying.

>>3517580
It does not matter the method, but the final result. if you can do whatever with reference, then it does not matter that you are using a lot of reference

>>3517577
didn't say there was a problem im saying to cut the middleman and bash because youre stuff is going to look unnatural and frankensteined anyway

>>3517583
doesn't matter how many references you use unless you don't know how to integrate them together. just looks like bad photobashing so you might as well just photobash to at least get a more natural gesture lol

>>3514645
This is actually pretty good, who did you trace?

Will aim to complete the lines and flats by tomorrow night. Thoughts on the progress?

>>3514268
Bulma looks a lot better with her natural hair color

>>3517629
>Thoughts
foot looks like its inexplicably wiggling without regards to the leg its attached to, her head looks like it expands probably because the detail in her hair changes, and her left arm changes in thickness

this is missing so many in between frames though its not really critique-able as an animation, our brains are smart and fill in the gaps.

>>3517629
can you add another frame in between each frame you've already done?

How do I learn where to place the penis and testicles, specifically for pen0rs that are NOT erect

>>3517731
study nudes that include soft wieners

>>3517738
I'm trying to understand where the penis and testicles attach/begin, but a lot of models have pubic hair which make it hard to properly study

>>3517823
i have pics like this for this very purpose but they are of me so i dont exactly want to post them .

>>3517828
Show me your dick, dude. Don't make this gayer than it has to be.

>>3517859
bahhh i decided against it i will give you some stuff though that i found looking for refs for ya.

>>3517875

>>3517877
this one is hard but shows the under connection point well.

>>3517880
another for the under connection.

>>3517875
>>3517877
>>3517880
>>3517884
These penises are erect though I wanted to draw not-erect penises. I can't believe you wouldn't even show me your dick. It's like you don't even want me to succeed as an artist.

>>3517891
the connection is the same anon.

>>3517892

>>3517894

>>3517896
i was trying to avoid this angle but there ya go.

Wow this thread is gayer than a republican thats against same sex marriage, nice

>>3517937
Dude wtf there's nothing gay about sharing art references

>>3514268

Got the foreshortening a bit wrong at the torso and arms, and my line quality is shit but tried to get it right on the important parts.

How do you hide your NSFW account from your main account? It's very unsettling how certain people could track me down from a half-assed work done years ago

>>3517554
Can you draw this elf girl(left) dressed as this redhead anime girl and masturbating using a horse dildo as Daphne Blake?

Any other drawings with this elf girl are welcome and loved.

haven't been drawing much lately

>>3514645
nice to see you improving

>>3518027
alt version

>>3518027
>>3518028
that's gayer than 6 guys blowing 7 guys

>>3518033
I try

>>3518027
looks as if you played that game where you fold up a piece of paper and three people draw diffrent parts of a person and reveal it all connected at the end

>>3518047
And it shows

>>3517949
that is not just a bit wrong. Right now it looks like her navel is the closest part to us andn ot her pussy, also her whole ribcage is fucked up. You should get into the ahbit of flipping your drawing otherwhise this monstrosity comes out. It is not alittle wrong it is very wrong.

>>3514268
mama give me milky

>>3517949
It looks like she has a rectangle torso. I like what you are trying to do. Just work on the perspective and porpotions more and I think it will look very satisfying.

>>3517949
let me help you

>>3517629
Update.

>>3517658
Do the issues still persist?

>>3517699
The commissioner paid for five frames, cellshaded. If you guys want to chip in, I'd be more than happy to draw more frames for everyone.

>>3518271
its quite nice for someone whos a beginner at animation desu. the heel of that foot is still wiggling too much imo. the arm looks a bit better though looks like it gets really thin at the full extended frame. the face is still distracting to me but if you colored it so its not a focal point it matters less

you should check out manyaki's animation (pic related). he breaks stuff down into cutouts before going into fluid animation and it makes for a consistent appealing style
heres a post where he breaks down his process
>https://manyakisart.tumblr.com/post/170280157222

>>3517554
Can you draw this elf girl(left)dressed as this redhead anime girl and masturbating using a horse dildo as Daphne Blake?

Any other drawings with this elf girl are welcome and loved.

>>3518620
not a request thread

>>3518620
Reported. I'm also talking to /loomis/ on 8gag about you derailing threads over there with your endless requests and spam.

>>3517968
NSFW basically just means nudity. If all you're drawing is tame nude art, who cares? Why even hide it?

But if you're drawing dick nipple futas cock vore-ing each other, okay maybe don't publish that art anywhere if you intend to make a career as a respectable professional artist.

>>3518027
>>3518028
Blog?

Wip

Most of the art I see is stylized but I don't work that way.
What kind of demand and audience do "realistic" artists have?

>>3519125

>>3519410
Have you ever looked at an artwork or photo and thought to yourself "hmm that's really cool, I like it"

>>3519410
Post your work and I’ll tell you the demand for your art

>>3519421
I see your point but I'm specifically concerned with porn
>>3519427
I still have to produce something digitally, I haven't worked digitally in almost a year, I been working on fine art.

WIP series of pics. I like each individual picture well enough but taken together they're in the uncanny valley between being too abrupt and too inbetweeny if that makes sense. Advice?
https://imgur.com/a/b9chDtQ

>>3519438
Are you that faggot who posted the thread about this exact topic?

No one wants bad hand drawn photo copies

>>3519454
this is a work in progress of mine

>>3519454
No I'm not
Mind showing me the thread?

>>3519495
>>3519125
>>3518028
>>3518027
>>3517949
>>3516607
>>3514645
>>3514344
garbage not salvageable

>>3514313
potential, work on your arm proportions and hands

>>3519506
Pretty random in what you praise and shit on huh

>>3519506
by what metric?

>>3519440
flip image 3, 4, 5, and 7 so mask dude stays on right side of screen. I think youre breaking the 180 rule

>>3519506
ngmi

>>3519495
This is why the middle east throws gays of the roof. The level of degeneracy of your art actually fucking disgusts me even though I have zero problems with gays. Not that image in particular but everything you stand for.
WHY
CANT
YOU
DRAW
HEADS
??!?!?!?
I CANT STAND SEEING ANY MORE OF YOUR DISABLED SHRINK HEADS BEING FUCKED ANYMORE!

Is my shit good? Should I make a blog and update regularly?

>>3519876
Why did you censor? Also this is uncanny as fuck.

>>3519876
good? ish
make bank? probably

>>3519673
lol get fucked and die mad about it sadboi

>>3519878
>Why did you censor?
In case I want to post it to blue boards to get some criticism. I only thought it was uncanny when I read your reply, but you're right.

>>3519880
>make bank? probably
What? I can make money off this?

That would be a dream come true. I'm a hopeless NEET. Thanks anon I will continue to work hard and make even more complicated animations. These things take a lot of time and effort to make. From cutting up, to redrawing, painstakingly animating, and all that on a not-so-fast computer.

Here is another one I made. I have created many but I tend to delete them since I don't think they are good.

>>3518278
Mind pinpointing what is wrong with the face? I will fix it up as soon as I return.

>>3519888
why do their mouths take up half their face when they yawn does their profile make a right angle

>>3519891
cutting up other artists art? did you get permission to use the art?

>>3519961
I did not. It's for practice, and I'm not making any money off it.

Also it's not your fucking problem neck yourself faggot. I'll do whatever I want suck a dick.

>>3519979
I figured it wasn't your art, you cant make money off of this and even if it was your art, the animation looks like utter shit

>>3519876
>>3519891
No it's fucking terrible and it makes navigating boorus for the actual, talented artist's original work harder.
What part of a still image being forced to randomly jank around did you think would be arousing in the first place? Stop wasting time on this shit and learn to actually animate you talentless hack.
>>3519979
>it's for practice
It's not practice if you're learning nothing.
>ooh I'm edgy ooh look at the big boy words and cartoon frog you got memed xP
absolutely fuck off

>>3514313

>>3520094
learn to draw feet

>>3520117
I'm still drawing, it's not finished.
the legs and hands are just a sketch

>>3520094
isn't the head a little too big for the body? nice face tho.

>>3519928
>when they yawn does their profile make a right angle

I just want to draw titties I can jerk off to when I'm finished. Is that too much to ask? Can't a man have a dream?

>>3520246
wait! I think it is because her face is at an angle.

does anybody else save a drawing part way through as a nsfw and then go back to it after finishing the work as a relatively tame piece? like puc related

>>3520346

her proportions look okay? is her head too small? how about her arm? the arm feels big to me, but i have a tendency to make em way too small. i know her feet are tiny but that's on purpose.

>>3519440
yeah, too abrupt. you're asking the viewer to fill in too many steps of action. i think what's tripping you up is the posing in panel one and four -- very fap friendly but so off from the actions in the surrounding panels. if you want to keep those i think you need to add panels between panel one and two, and between four and five.

also echoing what the other anon said about flipping images.

>>3519419
I tried to make skin look less like a plastic, not sure if it works

>>3519876
what program did you use? i'd love to do something similar with my nsfw art

>>3516779
I want to skull fuck her

>>3520493
good now make the abs not look shit too

>>3520408
>head is too small

>>3520493
don't draw values on lineart unless you know how to do it properly
it looks way better flat compared to this 90's comics tier stuff

>>3521087
thanks. yeah, i scaled it up a bit(and made the forearm smaller) after posting the wip yesterday. looks better.

What if I only want to take up drawing to draw porn? Not even to make money just because I want to.
Good idea or bad idea? Like I legitimately only really have an interest in drawing porn

Added flats.

Any thoughts?

>>3521332

Dammit,this thing somehow came up upside down.

Any thoughts?

>>3521332
put it in a photo editing software, even paint is okay and just save it again right side up.

I am going to try this again.

I hope it works this time.

>>3521191
sorry that inotice this only now but the right side of her ass or hip, dont seem to move because the hand stays pretty much in place except for 1 or 2 images. Thats what it looks like to me at least. IT looks like only her left leg is doing the movement. I at first though that she was moving from side to side because of the way her lower back looks. Im not quite sure, looks good but also a little janky

>>3521175
There's nothing wrong with having a hobby.

>>3521191
so terribly animated its not even funny

>>3521451
you pay for 5 frames you get 5 frames

>>3520493
She looks like a Ninja Turtle

>>3521460
ngmi

>>3520493
Changing the HSV sliders a bit doesn't make her look less plasticky. I didn't invest too much time on fixing her horrendous anatomy, just pay attention to the lighting: you go into reflected light, highlights and all that shit without even being able to place light/shadow correctly. It's like a 6'0 110lbs guy skips the small weights and goes straight for a 4plate overhead press, breaking his spine while doing so.

Also I don't know who told u fags to use complementary colors on every fucking drawing like it's the best thing in the world. Trust me when I tell you that I noticed that green woman sitting there, no need to cranck up the purple BG to full eye cancer level.

>>3519888
That y-e-e-es reads like mr. Burns. Consider it

>>3516607
this pose isn't possible surely?

>>3521628
I found the ref for this by accident the other day while patrolling pinterest for inspiration and the pose is only impossible because he drew it wrong

I was wondering if anyone has anything to say about this pic?

>>3521352

>>3521656
it's really good anon, do you have a blog?

>>3521656
yeah its ugly and gigantic

>>3521674

I have a Tumblr.
ZX-Gear.

>>3521676
Anything I can do to improve?

>>3521680
Make the perspective consistent.
Have the soft shapes like the breasts and thighs deform from the pressure applied to them.
Draw the breasts like breasts or water balloons, rather than bowling balls in shopping bags.

>>3521750

Hello Mara.

>>3520094

>>3521755
Who's Mara?

>>3521783
Dick Spirit from Shin Megami Tensei/Persona

>>3521787
Never heard of him/her but looks interesting

>>3521460
5 frames is more than enough to convey realistic thrusting.

>>3521802
shes just herself on that big think though. And yeah it looks janky to some extend

>>3520408
update. anything look off??

>>3521628
>>3521652
Yeah, that's the pose, it's called Astavakrasana. I don't think I drew it THAT wrong though? There's some variation in how it's done, some legs more elevated, to the side, s. I could have foreshortened the tucked arm and leg much better though, but I'M

>>3521628
>>3521652
>Yeah, that's the pose, it's called Astavakrasana. I don't think I drew it THAT wrong though? There's some variation in how it's done. I noticed 3/4 though arm/legs could be foreshortened more though, but you live and learn.

>>3521853
Didn't mean to greentext that.

I've been trying to start an adaption of Slut Girl, and this is the first scene that I've done. I know his right hand needs to move her tit around, but other than that any critiques to make this look better?

>>3521524
Thats great, thanks!

>>3522138
move his head and shoulder as well, and you gave that poor guy some awfully short strokes... I know he's supposed to be Japanese but you're just cruel.

>>3521835
only thing I notice is that her feet seem to jut downward a little more than is possible. Other than that it looks great and I want to see the finished product.

Anything that needs touching up?

>>3519076
lambrey.tumblr.com

>>3522148
Thanks, Anon. I'll work on that, and try to make their faces move more as well.

>>3521460
theres no weight or clear motion. it screams haha xd guys i can animate

>>3521835
why is her ankles merged into her feet? also her left arm is too wide and her arm is too low it should be connecting with the breast. and tits dont properly display weight, they spread out more and not stay in a uniform position when laying down.

>>3522388
>and her arm is too low
meant her armpit is too low

>>3522239
move on man..

>>3522239
I think it looks very nice.

>>3521750

>>3522239
Its look bad because of small amount of frames.

>>3522239
who is this character?

>>3522385
> it screams haha xd guys i can animate
I have no clue what you are on about with that, I dont see any of that there, you sound like you are bitter desu.
It screams, "I usually dont animate but a guy payed me to do 5 frames."

>>3522239
its done. If youre still interested in animation you should work on timing&spacing and consistency.

a quick sketch

>>3520139
No. The feet are fucked. You have them sketched at a broken angle.

>>3523631
nips should be lower, shouldn't they?

>>3523746
next time will be lower

>>3523746
that is what breast implant tits look like. the nipples are higher up than they should be because of the silicon bags. so it's still valid in a way

>>3522388
>>3522228
thanks for the crit! not entirely sure i'm seeing the errors you've pointed out except for the ankle thing, but i'll tinker with her anatomy some more.

>>3520000
>>3519996
Kill yourself and I hope you get cancer.

>>3523631
those are some juicy titties my man

gonna need that blog

I'm 21 and I can't get an erection anymore. I will just dedicate the rest of my life to art and studies, I guess

>>3524368
Just go to a doctor, anon.

>>3524368
You just turned gay

>>3524367
https://toxodron.tumblr.com/
Sorry but my blog is infestated of weird cocks.
But I'm sure I will made more of this.

>>3524368
stop fapping for a week. ya filthy porn addict

>>3524501
>https://toxodron.tumblr.com/
well no one can say you don't know your way around a dick. You've got some good stuff

Did a no-lineart 1-hour challenge to see how much my speed improved in a year. Modest improvements. Maybe if I didn't draw her whole body first I could have accomplished a bit more.

Something about my work isn't appealing to people

>>3525116
maybe its because its bad

>>3525124
Thanks for telling me why it's bad

>>3525116
id stick my willy in that puffy Virginia

I want to start doing porn commissions. Do you guys have any advice?
Is it necessary to have that gay fast food commissions sheet? How much should I go into detail for my prices not to look vague?
What's the best place to shill myself? My following is tiny at this moment.

>>3525116
I can't speak for all of your work from looking at a single image, but the line of action is really jagged and uneven. If that's common in your work, try studying pinups and artists like Frazetta for ideas of better poses.
There's also the issue of the awful way her legs are being cropped at the bottom.

>>3525148
Don't do porn, it will stain your soul.
As for sharing, go participate in drawthreads in either /co/ or /a/, depending on your style, keep posting your blog when people ask, maybe try /d/ if you're really gonna go that far. Do some lewd fanart of popular normie shit on tumblr/insta or whatever and keep posting regularly.
But yeah, don't do porn.

>>3525116
The body is connected weirdly in the middle, it makes her look really wonky. Otherwise I think it looks pretty nice

>>3514268
I have anatomy problems, but, What do you think?

>>3525148
never made one of those. Go to /aco/ commission thread

>>3525116
>>3525149
Like, here's a quick sketch of how I'd redo it - with a more pronounced S-curve line of action, more of a twist between the hips and shoulders, and keeping the entire figure in the image.
I can't say with certainty that that's why other people don't like your work, though.

should this be here, or alt?

>>3525201
Cool, but those faces are realistic and her heads are some weird. Draw more circles and practice fitting them well.

>>3519876
damn and I thought some nip did some animation shit before opening the webm. this is terrible

>>3525148
not sure, but >>3525151 might be just trying to get you from doing porn because of "muh exposure"

If you want to draw porn, do it. Copy the habits of other western porn drawers who made it big.

>>3525201
>should porn be in the porn thread or the cartoon thread
wew friend

>>3525199
the fuck are you doing bro

>>3525246
Trying to illustrate my point bro

>>3525221
half of them are porn, and half are cute girls so I wasn't sure lol

>>3525204
Thanks. feminine heads are a weakness of mine so I'm tackling them head-on. More circles is a must

>>3525199
>yeah it's okay but it'd be better if you broke the fuck out of her leg!
Seriously man, pls

>>3525272
Was your point to take rough anatomy and take it all the way down to down right terrible?

>>3525278
>>3525282
When did I say a word about anatomy?
Like I said, it's a quick sketch of what I think would make a better pose and composition.
I mean if you want to point out anatomical issues, that's fine and I'm sure there's errors, but that's really not the point of the drawing.

>>3521835
I think it looks nice.

>>3525290
Yeah but if the anatomy is that off, then the pose and composition don't work, so what's the point?

>>3525297
Well, if you truly think that the anatomy is so bad that the composition can't be used, then feel free to disregard it. I don't think that's the case myself, but there's no point shitting up this thread over it.

>>3525334
The pose is physically impossible. That's what they mean by "anatomy" even if it just for composition.

>>3525342
You'll have to explain what's so impossible about it, I'm honestly not seeing it.

>>3525352
Bend your leg like that and take a picture

>>3525366
?

>>3525399
>he thinks that's the same pose

>>3525406
It's clear proof that it's possible.

>>3519585

Real-life and Anime.

>>3514344

Give up, you goddamn pedo!

>>3525416
the leg is in the same position as the pic you posted but the torso and crotch ISNT
joints don't work like that naturally unless youre a broken doll

>>3525399
this is how I am reading it

>>3525444
i don't think you give human flexibility enough credit.

>>3525455
Yeah, I could definitely have used some reference on that one.

Again, I never claimed the anatomy was perfect, just that it wasn't so impossible that the composition couldn't be used

>>3525460
I get what you were going for, you'd just have to adjust the angle of the pelvis to get it, but you're right, this is really about giving him a more dynamic composition. I concede that it is usable

>>3525460
>ywn have sex with a gymnast

:'(

>>3525460
can you do that irl?
what evidence is there that the character has been practicing gymnastics for a decade? it is still UNNATURAL. no matter how many times you move the goalposts. yeah, a contortionist could do some crazy shit too but is that what youre drawing?

>>3525474
Nigga you've got a dame with huge tits in a gun battle wearing nothing but a coat and a pair of fuck-me boots, and you're worried about the implausibility of her being able to do a front split?

>>3525487
yes?
seriously? move those goal posts til it fits your narrative shove those fingers in your ears dude

>>3525517
Not him but you're honestly arguing like a dumb crab. We get it, you are lazy and lanky and have the flexibility of a plank. That pose he drew was probably during an action movement, it's possible for a character to be caught in that pose while doing a front land or a spin due to momentum.

Stop arguing like you're some expert on human anatomy or flexibility, famous comics and mangas use impossible poses all the time, so long as it gives a dynamic flair it's fine.

Goddamn what a petty chain of posts.

>>3525596
keep drawing unnatural figures in the name of faux action

>>3525601
Thanks I will. Will look alot better than your generic lady on a laying blanket.

oc thing figuring out foreshortening still

>>3525911
another juan

>>3525913
>that dick
for what purpose

>>3525911
>>3525913
I'm not sure if it's technically correct to not see any of her from the ass to the shoulder with nothing of her stomach visible between her legs and nothing of her upper back visible over the butt, but it definitely looks awkward. It's like her spine is straight as a board.

im dawing an elf girl.
do her hips and legs look okay?

The complete page of the juicy tits sketches

>>3526400
those nipples are grotesque

>>3526408
yeeahhh! I'm glad you note that! job well done!

>>3526400
Is this traditional or digital?

>>3526400
nigga what the literal fuck is this monstrosity

>>3525455
>that chicken scratching
b-be careful anon

>>3526806
If you ask nicely they might eat you

>>3525181
Futa without balls is disgusting

>>3526756
traditional, graphite

>>3526806
Well, all that you see in that page are literally fucking monstrosities, don't you see? I made monsters.
>>3526893
that's a good idea!

>>3526944
this guy gets it

>>3522239
Please read Richard William's book and start over.

>>3525460
this isnt about flexibility retard its about your shitty anatomy now fuck off

>>3525116
its the line art

>>3526400
This is great anon, you draw like a true degenerate, wish i could see a blog or something

>>3527417
Thank you anon! This is my degenerate blog:
https://toxodron.tumblr.com/

>>3527349
In what way, elaborate

arm lengths are off but I can fix that, does it look alright besides that at this point?
She's supposed to be pushing her left tit while rubbing the tip with the other hand

>>3527505
whats pushing the other tit

>>3527513
the guy's belly

>>3527523
whats pushing it against the wiener

>>3526408
Spoken like a true virgin

>>3526400
Ignore the crabs, I would suck those tits dry
Well done

>>3526806
obviously a peepee

>>3527563
you mean spoken like a true human with nipples that aren't shaped like wieners

>>3521524

Except for her hair, it looks worse now.

>>3514344
>>3516607
>>3525116
>>3525199

What's the deal with people making impossible poses?

>>3520408
blog?

>>3528025
Real talk, people here are too uptight about what's "possible." Basic fundies are 90% of what gets critiqued, rarely anything compositional or stylistic. It's a drawing and unless you're aiming for a very high level of verisimilitude, it doesn't have to perfectly match up with reality. In fact it can hurt the piece. When I over-reference almost invariably I produce stiffer work.

I'm >>3516607
and it actually is a possible pose, but I didn't draw it with perfect accuracy in mind. Rather I did a couple studies and tried to reproduce it mostly from imagination to help cement it in memory. Beyond basic anatomy/perspective goofs, I'd rather know, Is the style appealing or ugly? Are the colors too much? (I cut out the Brite Crawler pink in the final) Is the hair shitty? Is the rendering lacking/clashing with the thick outlines?

>>3528148
https://basnip.tumblr.com/

>>3527960
>>3527965
Don't worry, next time the peepee and wiener shaped nipples will be bigger, so you won't be confused about what you are looking at. XD

>>3528183
if youre trying to draw stuff to jack off to it literally doesn't matter but if youre trying to make art that is appealing to other people, it does matter.
unnatural poses hurt your art because it makes people uncomfortable, subconsciously or consciously. its like cutting off a drawing at the ankle or wrist. this isn't just bullshit, this is taught in art schools (I mean not specifically for porn but art in general that includes human beings).
your "over rendering" produces stiffer work because you need to study more

>>3528252
Unnatural =/= impossible though. Impossible can be made convincing, unnatural can't.
I would never think to call >>3525116 "impossible," for example"--how is it impossible? It's not like I can't imagine someone standing that way. But it's unnatural, it's stiff, it's supposed to be a (re)action pose, but no one would realistically act or react that awkwardly, though it may be within the realm of possibility. So at that point I would recommend studying similar poses, even self-reffing if you can't find any, and doing some 5-minute gesture studies.
The yoga pose I drew is not impossible and isn't unnatural--*in yoga*. You could argue I fucked it up in a way that's distracting, but do you really think so though? I can't see what you're seeing just from "impossible."

>>3528252
>>3528265
just have fun and draw more! this is 4chan.

>>3528265
>>3528252
Fight! Fight! Fight!

>>3528265
I never said that was impossible, im just talking about why its important to draw believable natural shit. the one where she has a broken leg/torn hip flexor is more "impossible." you did fuck up your pose by fucking up the angle of the legs the imbalance is unnatural and probably why people call it impossible, the orientation of the torso and arms is also off slightly and when it comes to posing something that's real but already looks unnatural, just barely fucking it up will REALLY fuck it up.

>>3528276
this is 4chan but its also the CRITIQUE board of 4chan so you can fuck right off if youre just here for a hugbox

>>3528283
yeah whatever just more DRAWING and less shitposting...

>>3528281
>and when it comes to posing something that's real but already looks unnatural, just barely fucking it up will REALLY fuck it up.

That's a good point. And thanks, I see what you're saying now, I'll watch out for that in the future.

>>3521835
You're beyond /ic/s ability to help.

any anatomy tips would be great. i think somethings off with the left elbow but i cant tell what

>>3528662
Rofl, I love the floppy monster dick

>>3528662
The legs are too long and the giant toddler proportion anime eyes combined with the giant dick are grotesque and uncanny

>>3528662
Do you have a blog?

>>3514313
I really like this, but I don't see its pornographic appeal
that's a pin up I would post on instagram to get some likes

>>3528662
Coomichoo? You came back??

>>3516557
the gesture is hot but squiggly lines are a turnoff

clean lines are essential for porn

>>3518271
shit you are a god

>>3528283
>critique is being a complete impolite cunt

>>3529059

>>3528940
Well, I'm going for all those, last one especially, but if there are any issues outside the proportions I'd be happy to hear.
>>3528971
lambrey.tumblr.com

>>3514268
this girl is hot

>>3514268
>>3529081
I wanna smell her

I'm training to draw poses.
I think I'm having some progress.
The one on the left was the first one I drew.

>>3529338
nice clean lines but the characters are very disproportionate

it's like her ribcage goes straight into pelvis

>>3529338
you still haven't drawn feet and the vagina has no 3 dimensionality

>>3529345
Yes, especially the first two, right?
Well, I'll continue training and finish these drawings as I can.
This is the first time I try to draw figures in this way, by poses, and the first two I did without reference.
Too bad my ink pen is gone, I'll have to buy a new one to finish ...

>>3528265
Lmao calling this >>3525116 stiff and awkward when you're drawing this beg tier trash >>3516607. Meanwhile this guy >>3525199 breaks her fucking femur. A lot of "experts" here willing to share advice, never change /ic/.

>>3529338
learn the draw arms the proper length 1st

>>3529390
And of course you can't read a point in context. It literally is stiff and awkward, or are you willing to dispute that point? The guy thinks his work is unappealing and doesn't know why, telling him the pose is stiff and to do some gesture studies is useful *critique.* Whether you think I'm /beg/ or not has nothing to do with anything. But thanks for saying so while answering zero of my questions. Yeah never change /ic/ is right.

>>3521835
That looks great, don't listen to
>>3528498

I decided to try to enter the porn industry recently, and this is my second attempt.

Actually my first doing explicit porn. It's really fun tho, it never crossed my mind how many references you can find lol.

Anyway, im doing this in SAI, im trying to migrate from photoshop cause its a fucking terrible program.

>>3530095
>photoshop is a terrible program
Objectively untrue or every major concept artist and illustrator would not use it

>>3530106
Photoshop isn't optimized for drawing and takes a good pc to use so there's reasons not to use it.

>>3530095
If you’re using refs why doesn’t it show? Where’s that wiener going? It looks like he’s slamming upwards into her pubic bone not going backwards into the depths of her vag. Porn artists trigger the shit out of my autism when they just draw a clitoris and then a void. Not how vaginas work.

>>3530140
Please stop posting.

>>3530142
no

>>3530140
im not sure if youre some very dedicated troll or if youre the next chris chan. not a single attempt at ever improving no matter if you get good crit or not. you just keep dumping your oc's fucking without a word, same old bad drawings day after day. with your dedication you could actually get good if it wasnt for your unfortunate mental (and probably physical) handicap

>>3529893
cheers. i do finally see the lacking sense of weight in her breasts that other anon mentioned though.

>>3530147
ugly hair without volume. ugly nose, ugly everything

>>3530147
stop drawing faces like this

practicing
please tear me to shreds (I never seen a penis before)

>>3530679
>(I never seen a penis before)
wife material right there

>>3530679
>I never seen a penis before
>Trust me Anon, I am a puritan virgin girl, that's why I am trying to draw big fat coks.

>>3530679
>who's been drawing dicks!?

>>3530690
male virgins draw big tittied bimbos, why can't female virgins draw big dongers?

>>3530701
Because that make you a HARLOT!

>>3530690
I meant:I never seen a healthy penis before. I'm a dude but my dongers is fucked due to an accident I had as a kid.

not going to go into detail, who cares I just want to know if I drew dicks right.

>>3530705
press F to pay respects to anon's pen0r

ffs I just want an honest-to-god crit on my penis drawing
>>3530679
please?

>>3530679
uncut cowks are gay

>>3530705
>I'm a dude but my dongers is fucked due to an accident I had as a kid.

What's wrong?, your circum.cision went wrong? kek.

>>3530679
I have a vagina so it looks alright to me but you should check out doxy's penis tutorials because he draws dicks in a similar style

>>3530737
Not feminine enough.

just another sketch

help me out, i have no clue how to make a 'pleasured' face, that and i have no clue how to draw porn

>>3531327
step 1 learn to draw an attractive face
step 2 learn to draw hands

>>3531342
step 1 i can draw attractive faces, I asked for pleasured faces, like ahego but not anime bullshit
step 2 these are clearly sketches where the focus was n o t on hands, I understand I need to work on them, but I did not ask for advice that area

>>3531344
... so defensive lol

>>3531349
i just want what I asked for lol

>>3531344
Speaking as your audience, that face isn’t attractive. Has nothing to do with anime. Incase doesn’t draw anime and makes attractive faces. Same with that other dude who posts here all the time, bepis or whatever. Making appealing porn is more dependent on an attractive face than even attractive genitals (unless your goal is ugly hag porn like that don bluth weirdo)
If you don’t want critique on your “sketches” because they’re “just sketches” don’t post them.
If you want to draw a specific expression (pleasure, whatever) then look at references.

>>3531353
hhhhhhhm
contrary opinion, I know for sure the one rendered face is attractive. I am not bepis, I thought it was just some stupid meme. I'm going for a more realistic look, as you can see, i don't want weird plastic-looking genitals (Like dolphin vaginas, no thanks I want a human vag) I put my sketches out there because i'd rather find out I'm doing something wrong on a throwaway sketch than a finished piece. (that and when I mentioned they were sketches i meant in that the main focus of the sketch was not the hands obvs) I want the other stuff (AKA the body, the sex organs) Thats why the sketches are primarily detailed in the torso. THATS the critique i want, not some shitty general 'just make it pretty' bull. But i will do reference on the 'pleasured' face tho, I know i need to do some work.

Wasn't using any references for proportions so the anatomy might be a bit off

>>3530705
I broke my dick too when i was a kid, it happens

>>3531621
nipples could be much bigger

>>3531621
>>3531327
>>3530814
>>3530147
>>3530147
you suck

>>3526400
>>3530824
I'm not versed in macabre but you have the potential, link the blog

>>3531732
giving thoughtful crits helps YOU learn

someone please make thread

>>3530679
Alright, serious critique;
in the profile view, the urethra area is disproportionately big. The back mass of erectile tissue should be at least two thirds of the width.
I also feel like you're overdoing the curves and bumps of the glans, but there's lots of popular artists that seem to do that so I won't call it an outright error.

>>3531732
thanks for your critique!

>>3531735
https://toxodron.tumblr.com/
Sorry for being macabre, last night I was working in something more conventional: (Still in Progress)

>>3531732
aw thank u

>>3532018
that torso is really great, but she kind of has a weird face. Maybe retry the the nose and the lips.

>>3532045
I will try a more appealing nose

Roughing the animation out via silhouettes. Critiques on the progress so far? Four second animation at 30 FPS. Drawing on twos, breaking it down bit by bit and getting a feel for it.

just got a tablet. I need to get better

Trying to stop grinding studies and produce more

>>3530095
>>3530111
Tried to fix some of the mistakes pointed but couldnt really make it work. I'll get it better next drawing.

>>3532018
work in progress

New thread plops

bump

>>3531621

Definitely needs bigger nipples. Otherwise I think it's the most well done in the thread. Ignore the h8ers.