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>What is /ALT/?
If you're looking for a place to post your cartooning then you've found the right general. This is /ic/s 1st and only merged hub where both Eastern and Western stylization can coexist peacefully, hence the double title. However, by community demand and long history, this is favorably an Anime general.
>Rules & Guidelines
(1) Any form of cartooning is welcome; so submit and receive feedback from others. (2) Please resize your images before posting. (3) Share your knowledge and (4) Remember to not be afraid of asking for critique. Most importantly I encourage you to keep discussion at a civil level, but you're more than welcome to share your opinions.
>Where do I go to learn to study Anime?
Great news! We have an approved anime study general. Just ctrl + f anime study in the catalog and you'll find it. Other than that, check the resources below.
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>Community Resources
Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
>https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Fdt2GaZVIpY (dead, update whenever I get to it)
References
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

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Thread theme music for those of you transitioning from furries to cute girls:

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Mz3Mi_OZYno

>> No.3518031
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trying to do something bigger than usual

>> No.3518062

>>3518031
Ooh, I really like this.

>> No.3518066
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>> No.3518070

>>3518066
not your personal army, faggot

>> No.3518111

>>3518066
you know what, I don't like this sort of thing, but at least people are drawing, and finding enjoyment in it.

If they have an ego about it or refuse critique then I have a problem, but this stuff is generally harmless. Rainbow dogs have been around for like, ten years now, right?

>> No.3518113

>>3518111
it's probably just someone reposting images from other artists on tumblr and twitter. I saw another post just like this on the previous thread. Most likely just baiting for attention

>> No.3518122
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3518122

Just got back from art camp and iIm super inspired to draw!

>> No.3518200

>>3518024
That youtube link is fucking cursed.

>> No.3518227
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>>3518200
Why did I open it aaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

>> No.3518233

>>3518200
>>3518227
What are you guys talking a- OH NO NO NO NO FUCK I'M OUT

>> No.3518236
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>>3518024
Didn't know you were a furry, chicococklate

>> No.3518246

Huh.. it actually has very good production value.

>> No.3518321
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>>3518024
I will never be a japanese artist.

>> No.3518448
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How the fuck do I into drawing landscape/backgrounds? I never tried anything like this before, pretty much

>> No.3518451

>>3518448
Looks good to me. Just add more detail.

>> No.3518457

>>3518321
You can be a good artist influenced by japanese art

>> No.3518458

>>3518448
Looks bad to me. Just add less detail.

>> No.3518459

>>3518321
no, but you can draw like a japanese artist. that's all that matters. don't believe people that say you need to be japanese to draw in a perfectly eastern style.

>> No.3518523
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another pos :^)

>> No.3518570

>>3518321
>I will never be a japanese artist.
who gives a fuck

>> No.3518596

>>3518200
>>3518227
>>3518233
I managed to get through all of it. It was extremely painful.

>> No.3518648

>>3518451
>>3518458
Anons please, who I am to believe? I mean it's unfinished yet clearly so...
I think the part that looks shittiest to me is the perspective, I tried to use lineweight to convey it, but I'm clearly not experienced at all with perspective in general

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>> No.3518700

>>3518675
You improved.

>> No.3518774
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Smokeman

>> No.3518853
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>>3518321

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>>3518448
Don't know about forest but adding more small details help with making it more organic.

>> No.3519220
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>> No.3519222

>>3518947
I love this but it's nearly impossible to tell compositionally what's going on and what separates foreground from background

>> No.3519305
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Trying to do a series of drawings to test consistency of character, style and proportions. How does one ensure such things? This is a video game character so it's easy to keep her character consistent; my style doesn't change much, so the only real question is how to ensure proportions are on point with the other drawings; I'm just using my eyes atm.

Does she look consistent is my question desu

>> No.3519329

>>3519222
mostly because lack of color/shading isn't it?

>> No.3519343

>>3519329
That would help, but there's full detail in everything in the foreground and full detail in everything in the background. Although the line weight is slightly thinner in the background, it's not really visually obvious.

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>> No.3519348

>>3519346
what's up with the prosthetic limbs theme

>> No.3519370

>>3518947
This, but with line weigth

>> No.3519372
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>>3519348
Itsmyfetish.jpg

>> No.3519374

>>3519305
her skull and chest are different.
keep it up anon, proud of you

>> No.3519382

>>3518700
Thank fampai!

And in all seriousness thank you to everyone here who told me to loomis and gave me solid crits. I sat back last night and looked through my stuff from Jul last year till this year and I was happy with the progress.

>> No.3519388

>>3519374
noted, fixed, and I will, t-thank you

>> No.3519550

>>3518947
Yeah, like I said it's a WIP and I like adding small details to my work, I was just concerned with the underlying structure so if anything was off I could correct it right away
Anyway thanks

>> No.3519559

>>3519220
legitimately hope you get killed in a drive-by , yev. your art is ass cancer

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Should I finish this?
I don't really see anything wrong, nor I dislike it, but I dont' care about it either; I'ts for pussy, It's not commision work, not that big of a deal
Should I keep pushing it Anons?

>> No.3519576
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>>3519573
literally up to you frend. If you don't feel like finishing you can always leave it as a wip forever

>>3519305
posting the fixes and also another pose, really fun exercise desu

>> No.3519593

>>3519220 Donst listen yev
>>3519559
On the other hand her lower leg on the right looks weird. I at first thought it was wrong but for that exact pose thats pretty much what it looks like. So I guess I dont like the pose, other than that only the thigh on the left looks too short

>> No.3519601

>>3519220
I don't like your style, don't get me wrong, it's okay but it's not for me.
I wish you experiment with colors more instead of using 1 hue per painting.
>>3519559
*nip nip*

>> No.3519643
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>>3519576
I can't sleep so here's another pose

>> No.3519648

>>3519643
>tried to paint one
>looks cute
>going to share to anon-kun
>did not save

>> No.3519737

>>3519346
Beautiful

>> No.3519757
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Is any of the anatomy broken?
I gave up on a few months ago, and I think I just fixed it, at least it looks OK to me

>> No.3519762
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any advice on how to paint clouds? i'm desperate

>> No.3519792

>>3519757
kek

>> No.3519827
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where is fucking Andrae new blog?

>> No.3519831

>>3519757
Here's some things I notice
-Neck way too long
-Foreshortening on both feet is incorrect
-Crease between calf muscle and thigh of raised leg does not show proper form of calf & causes flatness
-Ears/antennae not correctly aligned in perspective. Right one needs to be moved left and higher. left one needs to move left and align with the cheek & jawline.
-Fingers not laying on and wrapping over top of knee correctly.

>> No.3519933

>>3519831
Yeh, lazy mistakes, thank you
But, what do you mean about the foreshorteing? How can I fix it? Spoonfeed me Anon-sama

>> No.3519938

>>3519220
her hands look like she has cerebral palsy

>> No.3519939
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Burned out.

>> No.3519966

>>3519827
Literally the OP image is Andrae...unless you're him selfposting.

>> No.3519986
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What do you think?

>> No.3519990

>>3519827
Blog?

>> No.3520022

>>3519933
If I had more time to spare I'd do a redline or something but suffice it to say the feet are drawn incorrectly. For one thing they both are bent upward too much at the ankle, making an odd angle between the top of the foot and shins. It looks unnatural. The best I can do right now is to tell you to try and find some comparable reference or hope someone else has a chance to redline it.

>> No.3520052
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>>3519648
It's okay, I love u

>> No.3520054

>>3519986
jesus christ what the fuck

>> No.3520055

>>3519986
it alright

>> No.3520088

>>3519986
The more i look, the less i like it. Sorry.

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>>3519643
and one more pose, this one I really would like feedback on, I put the first one and last one together so it's easier to see proportions. Does her crouching pose sell? or does it look weird?

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practicing

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>>3520412

>> No.3520426

>>3520412
thats a little too big of a hat

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>>3519986
now this i can fap to

>> No.3520607

>>3518947
looks like a recipe for 1 week of drawing one background and alot of crying
>>3520173
turned into a loli

>> No.3520610
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Anyone willing to translate these settings for CSP? I'm trying to copy this brush but I can't read runes.

>> No.3520616
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>>3520173
And this is after some corrections. I'm stopping it here with this. Probs going to color it for cutes then back to grinding

>>3520607
yes I noticed that, thank you. Can't quite correct it, desu

>> No.3520620

>>3520610
I read the runes.
You lose.

>> No.3520632
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3520632

I'm not happy with colors at all. Every time i set out to try something new, i find myself returning to the bad simple flat colors. I'm kind of meeting a wall, some tips/cool tutorials to take a look at?

>> No.3520664
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3520664

Any tips?

>> No.3520677

>>3520664
What are you doing on /ic/, Akairiot?

>> No.3520679

>>3520664
Holy shit
Blog please?

>> No.3520680

>>3519939
>>3519827
Blog?

>> No.3520681

>>3518321
You could've fooled me anon. Keep making art no matter what.

>> No.3520683

>>3519220
Yev outdoes himself again. Getting better bit by bit.

>> No.3520684

>>3520677
>Akairiot
wow not to be a crab but how does this mediocre faggot how 60k followers, he doesn't even draw porn

>> No.3520685

>>3519939
Can I have your brush dude, it looks really sexy

>> No.3520686

>>3520685
why would you think that's anything other than a hard round

>> No.3520687

>>3520684
He's been doing pin ups of Super Smash Bros and Fire Emblem girls for years, that's basically where his whole following came from.

>> No.3520837
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should I stick with the face paint or go without. also I can't color to save my life

>> No.3520838
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>>3520837

>> No.3520854

>>3520837
I would say face paint but give it a more washed out color

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>>3519737
Thanks. At this moment I’m not sure what to do with it. I feel it is very messy. Maybe I will give it a few days before resuming

>>3519372

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>>3520866
yikes x infinity

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hi /ic

>> No.3520919
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one more

>> No.3520924

>>3520913
>>3520919
double yikes

>> No.3520926

>>3520919
>>3520913
I like

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>>3520913
>>3520919
your stuff is amazing anon, do you have a blog? not even meming

>> No.3520941

>>3520664
i like the idea but i dont think bangs fit it, kinda ruins the hair thats suppose to flow like water. the pose looks like shes leaning backwards but is bent forward like a cheese doodle. imo the face shouldnt show the nostril, the eyes are too winged upwards, the eyebrows too thick and shouldnt be visible, the mouth is too far down, giving her that long philtrum makes it look like that of a monkey

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i'm probably in the wrong place, but i made a slav kebab, if this contributes to the conversation in any way, shape, or form

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>>3520680
b-s-c-b.tumblr.com

>>3520685
it's from the KNKL brush pack; I haven't bothered looking for anything better

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>>3521015
>b-s-c-b.tumblr.com

found you

>> No.3521159

>>3521052
how did u learn to draw the eyes im having difficulty drawing anime eyes in 3d manner.

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>>3520989

>> No.3521162

>>3519986
This better be the new thumbnail for the next thread

>> No.3521169

>>3520022
Really? I can move them at least to a 45° angle upwards without pain, and I can go a lil bit more with excruciating pain, I'm not very flesh tho. I can tell about foreshorteing, too much of an artlet desu

>> No.3521171 [DELETED] 

>>3521169
>flesh
>flexible*
Idk why I wrote that

>> No.3521173

>>3521169
>flesh
>flexible*
>can't tell about*
Idk why I wrote that

>> No.3521317

>>3521169
You may be able to position your body that way but whether or not the body is capable of being in a pose isn't the only or even most important factor. In such a reclined and overall relaxed pose most people would not be flexing their feet to the maximum to bend them up towards their knees like that. You want your gesture to be cohesive, all body parts should come together to convey the mood of the pose. Everything else is relaxed, the feet and hands should help convey and flow with that.

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I haven't done anything traditional in a while. I think I actually raised my pen a couple off times to try to undo my line only to remember I'm not in Krita.

>>3520632
I always go to Matt Herms for color palettes and inspiration. He did coloring for the Archie Sonic comics.

>> No.3521330

>>3521052
>>3521015
work on your proportions jesus

>> No.3521374

>>3520941
Very helpful, thanks

>> No.3521520
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A quick sketchless doodle

>> No.3521553
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>>3521052
I'm not lolibro but the comparison is flattering

>>3521330
it's intentional

>> No.3521651

>>3520192
why

>> No.3521690

>>3520192
Like this doesn't belong here. What are we even supposed to critique? Like I guess its a drawing but what did you want us to say about it? Why dont you do some serious studies of cartoons or animation or hands that you find appealing come back and show us your work and your reference and maybe we can help steer you towards a more productive end.

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>>3519966
>OP image is Andrae
Looks like lordoreo

>> No.3521791

>>3521328
>trying to ctrl-z whilst sketching in real sketchbook
i know the feel.

>> No.3521795
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trying to learn the art of the hips and ass.

>> No.3521808

>>3521690
understood, i shall look at figure drawing for all its worth

>> No.3521834

>>3521795
My input, more leg, little less fat

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>>3506665
lineart

>> No.3521980

>>3521786
I'm confused as to what's going on, but the one that looks like Lordoreo's stuff is https://ndrph.tumblr.com/
Also, Lordoreo is a good boi.

>> No.3521986

>>3521980
>https://ndrph.tumblr.com/
Looks like you spotted Andrae's new blog right now.

>> No.3521989

>>3521986
Technically, I've been following him for quite some time now, but I'm glad I was following the conversation correctly and ended up being helpful.

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>>3520412

>> No.3522021

>>3522012
Tiny hands

>> No.3522033

>>3519966
>>3519827
Is Andrae the type of fag that regularly burns down his blog and makes a new one?

>> No.3522035

>>3522033
No he just killed one blog.

>> No.3522038
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>>3522021
changed the size of the hands and added a portion of the other leg.

any advice to improve this will be apreciated.

>> No.3522047

>>3521834
its coming off as fat not thicc?

>> No.3522048

>>3522047
No it’s thicc that anon is probly just used to sticc anime girls

>> No.3522051

>>3522047
Yeah, sorry it's not coming off as fat, but I think her legs are too short, like you ran out of space

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Should I even bother try to start doing commissions? I do have a couple friends who wants me to do some D&D character art and a map... I would like to earn some extra spending money though, it would be cool.

I know that this one was pretty rough though, did it pretty late at night and in the span of an hour or so.

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yeahyup

>> No.3522213

Why don't you just call this a manga thread because that's all it really ever is.

>> No.3522244

>>3522206
Yes. Do it faggot.

>> No.3522260

>>3522213
It would be better if it was just 1 single thread instead of this and the anime study thread. It's the same except here people post their furry shit (only that one fucker who said he wasn't going to anymore and has been spamming his gay shit all over KILL YOURSELF)

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>> No.3522303

>>3522260
Anon.
Anon, breathe.
>>3522280
Nice monkey foot

>> No.3522331

>>3522206
You're not that good, but if you can make money with it, great, do it

>> No.3522370

>>3521317
Not that other Anon, but really? I do sit like that, In fact I used a photo of myself as reference, it wasn't uncomfortable or anything.
But if it looks wrong composition wise, I can change it, I just wanted to show some feet for the Feet Gods

>> No.3522382

>>3521786
>dislocated shoulder
>boobs out of perspective
yikesss

>> No.3522387

>>3522370
What I'm trying to say is that visually it's not giving the impression it should. Like I said, the literal sense of the pose being possible doesn't matter. What are you (in a general sense) trying to say with your image? What mood do you want it to have what emotion do you want it to capture? The character is just a component of expressing an idea, the same as color palette or brush strokes. Making it a character makes the idea more easily relatable to viewers since we all know and use facial expressions and gestures. Where color and strokes may be too abstract for some viewers to pick up on reading the mood of a character is near universal. That's why it's less important for the pose to be literal than to communicate effectively.

>> No.3522391

>>3522370
The feet can certainly be shown off while making the pose work and be expressive, in fact I think moving them would help them be shown off more. But this is sort of an abstract concept that stretches into the realm of subjective opinion, so if you don't agree that's fine. I just wanted to explain my reasoning clearly. To me the feet are anatomically wrong, but even if you don't agree with that I also think they work against the cohesiveness of the picture, and if you disagree with that I can't really say more. It's just my opinion about what would improve it and I won't be upset if it's not taken.

>> No.3522397
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>>3522303

>> No.3522504

>>3522391
>>3522387
Oh, no, no, I get it. I'll try a few different feet poses and update it, probably next thread

>> No.3522526

>>3522260
his posts are always nasty 2bh

>> No.3522826

how many followers you need before doing commisions ? as drawing anime stuff ?

>> No.3522839

>>3522826
its not the followers you need, its a niche. i have like 600 followers and regularly get hundreds of notes but no one ever buys a commission. get intoo furfaggotry or mmo character commissions or something. sometimes even a small follower amount is enough to get a returning consumer base

>> No.3522843

>>3522839
should i make a alt account for it(mmo bullshit) ? i really need my bucks

>> No.3522853
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3522853

help me senpais

>> No.3522895
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3522895

Anyone know some good guide about drawing stylized vehicles?
When looking at examples on the net i was under impression that people just simply randomly shorten, enlarge, and skew some parts. But after trying to sketch it down, i'm not sure anymore

>> No.3522914

>>3522211
why does she have stomach hair !?

>> No.3523029

>>3522895
with stylizing vehicles it seems best to caricature it much like a face. or make it feel chunky.

>> No.3523041

>>3522914
A lot of women do

>> No.3523046

>>3523041
I really dont wanna know what kinds of women you have the pleasure of seeing naked. Maybe a lot of hags do, but young women under 30 definitely do not, even if they have a giant bush hiding down there it doesnt travel up their stomach. They have hair there, but its tiny and pretty much not nitceable. This kinds of stomach hair is reserved for males, and the only reason I see that someone would like that, is that he has a weird fetish for that because he got deflowered by a woman like that or similar.

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3523059

>>3523046
As a young women under 30 I know what a women's body looks like, and women have that trail of hair on their stomach which is really annoying and most shave all the time including myself, men have it as well, but don't shave it.

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3523064

>>3523046
>doesn't know anything about females.

>> No.3523078

>>3523046
if you're going to virginpost keep the word count down honey

>> No.3523086

>>3522206
You can probably get away with doing commissions; but I'd wait a little longer until you nail your style down. I've paid quite a bit of cash for worse art, so you;ll make it.

It seems you've got the gyst of everything from the waist up except hands. Learn hands and you can do waist-up color portraits for like 15 USD.

For God's sake, smooth your strokes and use stroke stabilizers. God made them for a reason.

>> No.3523089

Hairy shit skin woman that smells like butter is real woman. If u disagree u virgin.

>> No.3523102

>>3523046
>snap

>> No.3523105

>>3523089
The weird thing is that women with a big bush smell more intense and make you horny, why fuck a clean shaved girl when you could get a hairy gf?

>> No.3523107

>>3523064
retch

>> No.3523110

>>3523107
Anon you have more hair there than a female and they dont vomit when they see it so why bully?

>> No.3523121

>>3523059
>>3523064
>>3523078
>>3523102
ITT nerds talking about scoring hairy women and hairy women defending hairy women.
Doesnt make the picture any more aesthetic.
All women without exceptions have arm pit hair, that doest mean adding them to your drawing makes it somehow more beautiful or make them appear more feminin

>> No.3523131

>>3523121
>that doest mean adding them to your drawing makes it somehow more beautiful
This is pretty subjective though

>> No.3523132

>>3523110
Because testosterone promotes body hair growth. And men tend to have a little more of that than women do. A woman with a beard is a rare occurence, because women have less testosterone, as soon as a woman shows sings of increased testosterone people tend to group them in as not so female, which makes them more unnatractive

>> No.3523136

>>3522211
for what its worth anon, i prefer girls with hair and would like to see more art of it, in particular stomach hair

>> No.3523137
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3523137

You're virgin if you don't like pumped vagoos.

>> No.3523141

>>3521052
>>3521553
I really like this style. kawaii af

>> No.3523156

>>3523132
>which makes them more unnatractive
For you
It's like you forget that people's standards differ, the nips for example like hairy girls for the same reason they think crooked teeth cute, they symbolize innocence and purity since it kinda implies that the girl doesn't try to make her assets 'presentable' and go around showing them off to everyone

>> No.3523163

>>3523156
nips like bush in JAV but they don't like bush in doujinshi but everyone watches JAV, maybe only otaku degens read doujinshi? idk enough about nip culture

>> No.3523172

>>3523156
the standart if beauty in the west (and in pretty much most first world countries i can think of) is mostly hairless though, armpit hair isnt some mainstream sign of beauty, neither is stomach hair, pubic hair is pretty much the only hair that people are pretty split on here, or fall into multiple categories, a lot prefer one or the other, a lot prefer it at least trimmed, and some like both, but I have yet to meet someone who's into girls rocking a slight moustache or that have hairy legs.
Ofcourse peoples tastes differ, but I usually talk about the biggest audience, the norm. If your goal is to speak to the few people who are into woman with stomach hair, then thats your thing.
Also this >>3523163

>> No.3523177

>>3522839
How long did it take you to get to 600? And what media?

>> No.3523180

>>3523131
It's subjective in the same sense that some people are into obese whales and amputees. Most people aren't.

It's still unappealing to the vast majority, and unless you're a niche fetish artist targeting a specific minority, "vast majority" should be your target demographic.

>> No.3523188

>>3523180
>vast majority should be your target demo
Entirely depends on your goals

>> No.3523196

>shit skins bearded woman apologists
>>3523163
>nips like bush in JAV
>but everyone watches JAV
Cool story EOPkek. Now look at most gravure idols and camwhores/twitter/instagram girls.

>> No.3523201

>>3523188
if you wanna make it both are valid, niche fetish( though fat hairy women are maybe a little to niche) or vast majority, you can make it with both. If its just your hobby, then it depends if you want people to look at it and like it, or if its just for yourself and have it as a secret stash.
However, it being a hobby and also not being interested in being able to show it to anybody is probably the rarest case here, so its either you wanna be niche fetish artist and make it, though its a bad niche whatever he drew, or you want it to appeal to the majority.

>> No.3523207

>>3523196
Every male in Japan watches JAV, dude. That's not a joke or an exaggeration. Go drinking with some Japanese salarymen some time. They're all perverts. You can openly talk about your favorite fetishes with them in broken english and argue if paizuri is better than pettanko. You can argue over which J-pop idols are better. It's pretty great.

>> No.3523210

>>3523207
>Every male in Japan watches JAV
Cool story EOP

>> No.3523213
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3523213

Rate my girl

>> No.3523215

>>3523201
>bad niche
You have no clue the amount of fetishists on the internet who will pay insane amounts of money for their fetish which you think is too weird to be profitable. I was a cam girl, I know this to be true.

>> No.3523218

>>3523210
I don't know what the fuck EOP is but you've obviously never been around Japanese people, my friend. You have some retarded preconceptions about them that are totally unfounded.

>> No.3523220
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3523220

>I was a cam girl
What a twist >>3523121
>hairy women defending hairy women

>> No.3523221

POST

MORE

ART

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3523222

>>3523218
>I don't know what the fuck EOP
>but you've obviously never been around Japanese people

>> No.3523225
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3523225

>>3523220
Take your medicine

>> No.3523263

>>3521520
I like

>> No.3523336

>>3519329
>Let's fix a bad drawing by making it into a bad painting

>> No.3523347

>>3519329
I would argue it has more to do with bad line density. Thicker lines would make the foreground pop.

>> No.3523358

It's not surprising to see such an uproar over women with a little body hair considering how many posters in this general are pedophiles.

>> No.3523375

>>3523358
t. legbearded roastie
It must be a fucking jungle down there, can't even imagine the smell.

>> No.3523379

>>3523358
i think it depends on where youre from, the hairy women are usually currywomen or allahuackbars. unless theres some testosterone problem then that kind of hair just does not happen like that. just because you have some hair fetish doesent mean it fits the drawing. its clearly some fetish thing or just bad choice in general

>> No.3523384

>>3523375
>cant imagine the smell
unsurprising as you've never encountered a vagina irl

>> No.3523386

>>3523379
It's hilarious how you all seem to think that if a woman isn't adolescent bare she's instantly a wookie as if it's not possible for them to have just a slight amount of hair in one or two places.
But then again I guess to a pedophile even one hair must look like way too many.

>> No.3523396

>>3523379
Also
>being attracted to natural secondary sexual traits is a fetish
yeeeeaahhhhhh.

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>>3523396
youre a smart one arent ya

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3523410

>>3523386
Not him but if you want a decent Man who is husband material to touch your roast beef, you're going to have to compete against younger girls otherwise get used to Tyrone and friends. There is however cosmetic surgeries that essentially "revirginizes" your whorebag and makes it tight again.

>> No.3523419
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3523419

stealing a niggas style lmao

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>> No.3523426

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8ZszWj8k_ms

Being a /beg/shit I get really envious when I see commentary videos like this. I can hardly wait to get to the point where I can just crank out a drawing while talking about random shit, but I know that now as a filthy /beg/ I really have to concentrate

>> No.3523429

>>3523386
Ah yes, they dont like my lack of basic body hygiene, they must be pedophiles if they dislike damp smelly hair around meat or my legs feeling like a males when cuddling.
Come up with something new brainlet

>> No.3523441
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3523441

WIP

>> No.3523442

>>3523429
No, I called you pedos pedos because most of you are self admitted. You go around flaunting it. Naming your files lolithis and shotathat. Some of you freaks even have lolishit in your names. So it's not surprising to see you all running scared from anything that remotely represents an adult woman.

>> No.3523444

>>3523429
im assuming you shave your pubes and armpits to prepubescent bare as a man then

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3523457

>>3523444
>Wanting to be a nigger tier gorilla
>Not wanting to be a slick and smooth, clean bare back fuccboi
Pick one.

>> No.3523462

Stop derailing the thread and post more art you brainlets

>> No.3523465
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3523465

Colore

>> No.3523473

>>3523457
the fuck does this mean faggot

>> No.3523489

>>3523457
that dick is more femenine than that bellyhair

>> No.3523494

>>3523489
kek

>> No.3523495

>>3523489
when did you realize you were gay?

>> No.3523496

>>3523442
Ignoring that loli have no resemblance of real children and calling people pedos for this is just as wrong additionally to you swtiching the argument to loli and shota now isntead of actually talking about body hair, it seems that you are under the impression that we select few hold this view about body hair. Well I am sorry to dissapoint you but the whole civilized world holds this view, Nowehre is arm pit hair the beauty standart for women, except maybe france but they are retards anyways. Literally every single beauty icon, on any magazine, in any make up commercial literally anything else that show cases peak female beauty, shows completely hairless women, and I bet you every single one also has at least trimmed pubes. Becaus body hair is a male thing, thus females have to be the opposite to appear more feminin.
You are labeling around 70% of males pedophiles because you like your precious hair filthy.HAIRLESS WOMEN ARE THE BEAUTY STANDART OF THE MODERN WORLD.That doesnt mean when sleeping with a woman that we shove her off the bed as soon as we find a hair, it just means that we prefer our women smooth asking her to at least shave when its a relation ship.We prefer to be able to see her fucking cunt when we stick our dick in it, instead of sticking it into a jungle of damp hairs. Get over your fucking self.

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3523499

>>3522387
>>3522391
Ok, I studied some feet at random positions and re-did it, is it ok?

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3523501

>>3523495
He's right you know.

>> No.3523504

>>3523495
Since I tasted your dad's anus
>Is this highschool all over again?

>> No.3523517

>>3523504
DUDE AWGH dude...what the fuck ugh..thats fucking gross dude...anus?? dude

>> No.3523524

>>3523496
I didn't say that whatever percentage of men are pedos because they don't like body hair. I said since there are many self admitted pedos here I'm not surprised to see this reaction to a little body hair. You're mad at me for supposedly overreaching what group I was naming but all of you have been overreaching by saying defending a little happy trail means I want women to look like fucking orangutans. Shaved hair might be popular but the fact of the matter is body hair is a natural occurrence and it's no weirder to like it than it is to like fully developed breasts or big muscles on guys. If anything it's weirder to like the removal of naturally occurring traits because we didn't always. Throughout history all kinds of things have been popularized. Rubenesque fatties, giraffe necks, bound feet, etc etc. Fads come and go. The human body evolved the way it is for a reason and it will never be weird to like the natural state of it as much as any trendy modification.

>> No.3523526

>>3523499
The left foot is way better. The right one still has some problems. You didn't need to make it flat on the ground though, it just needed to be at less extreme of an angle.

>> No.3523527
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3523527

So when picking values you want 3 darks and two lights right?

Does that include the base color? Does anyone have a good example? You can just give me a name and ill look it up.

>> No.3523532

>>3523441
remember that arms and legs are cilindrical and very smoth, so shadows should be soft on the respective form-shadows
Start with a big soft edged brush, press ligthly, make it like 10% smaller and press a lil bit more, and so on, then just erase to make the hard edge or to make the soft shadow into a cast-shadow
I know it's supposed to be some kind of rim ligth, but it does not look like one, I can see you're making a value change, and that's ok, but right now looks like some kind of bevel

>> No.3523536

>>3523527
what kind of art are you trying to achieve? like an example of what you want to do

>> No.3523542

>>3523526
HER right foot? as in our right
also, define "some problems", I can't see them for myself

>> No.3523544

>>3523527
>the more values you have the more ditail in values overall
You can do pretty much anything with three tho

>> No.3523546

>>3523542
Sorry, right side of the image but her left.
It looks like the meat of the foot stops a little short. You didn't really draw the toes yet so it's hard for me to tell what exactly you're planning for that area but right now if the toes were going to extend only as far as the line furthest to the right I would say the foot as a whole would be too short. It's also tilting downward a little too much making it out of perspective with the rest of the body.

>> No.3523559

>>3523536
Anime stylization, I have been keeping it simple and using 3 mostly as per >>3523544
.

>> No.3523580

>>3523524
Fads come and go, but those fads went because they were literal mutilations of the bodies structur or existed because food was scarce and fat was a sign of wealth.
Now if we dont experience a global colapse of the world as we know it, then fatties wont be a fad anytime soon.
Today we count removing hair to basic body hygiene, and theres no real difference to that and getting a haircut. You cant compare it to crippling ones feet.
Taking care of yourself to the highest degree possible is pretty much the biggest fad and probably will continue to be so. That includes being fit, being clean and shaving just like doing your hair etc. Now though the highest degree might get into the realm of obsession, people expect a bare mininmum, and that definitely includes no stomach hair on women.
>I didn't say that whatever percentage of men are pedos because they don't like body hair. I said since there are many self admitted pedos here I'm not surprised to see this reaction to a little body hair.
After all of this time, here on ic, i have not seen any pedos that addmitted to being attracted to real world children.
You are not suprised by the reaction of the people here because you think they are pedos? Well then im sorry to tell you but the whole world will have the same reaction to that "lil happytrail" just a lot more filtered and nice. Just because the people dont censor themselves here and are meaner than elsewhere doesn't meant its the pedophiles who hate on you. Stop making a strawman, face it body hair like that does not conform to the standart of beauty, and if people make fun of you for that then dont start calling out that thats just because we are pedos.
>it's no weirder to like it than it is to like fully developed breasts or big muscles on guys
I believe the gist of what that i already talked about but, no. Big muscles on guys is a sign that they put in effort to raise their physique to a level that conforms to the standarts of beauty.
(1/2)

>> No.3523582
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>>3523532
>>3523441

>> No.3523588

Less talk more draw

>> No.3523589
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3523589

>>3523358
>>3523384
>>3523442
>hairy sasquatch is mad

>> No.3523597

>>3523559
but are you cel shading? trying to paint like the op image? what are you doing?

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3523599

>>3523589
nigga go outside

>> No.3523600

>>3523580
Now breasts are also something different, as they are one of the most obvious parts of what makes females look female, however they are part of the body like your ears or your nose. So theres no removing those.
Removing your hair however counts towards body hygiene, its effort you put in to conform to the standart of beauty.
Big muscles and developed breasts are part of the standart of beauty. Hair on women (and to some extend on guys) does not.

The whole problem everyone here has with body hair is the same as anywhere else. If you dont want to conform to the standarts of beauty that is your thing and noone would care if you wouldnt lie. But then write " I like my women that way" or "I myself have hair like that and feel better when drawing women that are more similar to me". But not "A lot of women do" or " virgin" or " you are pedos thats why you dont like it".
Its ugly to most people. That is a fact, you have to accept that, if you wanna draw that, expect people to go "ew" and dont defend it like they are in the wrong for not liking it. If you feel personally attacked because thats how your body hair looks like, its sitll ugly and youll have to accept that most dont like it. Thats what it meants to not conform to societal norms

>> No.3523613

>>3523589
I don't think its' women who defend bushes and call guys who dislike bushes pedos/virgins/<insert insult>

I think it's beta guys who have MILF fetishes due to mommy issues, or beta guys who have high test, aggressive and bossy gfs and they can only summon a spine over the internet

>> No.3523628

>>3523589
She shaves it anon, like most women do.

>> No.3523633

>>3523628
Damn thanks for the insight enlightened one

>> No.3523635

>>3523628
HOLY SHIT NO WAY

>> No.3523650

>>3519343
>full detail in everything in the background
son,
no.
just count the fucking lines for a house, and then for the contraption before the bridge

>> No.3523673

>>3523441
where did the guy with the sword go ? he can't be entirely hidden behind her, she's too thin.

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3523705

>>3518947
made me say holy shit out loud, real cool anon.
how long has this taken you, out of curiosity? I am beg tier pleb so I wouldn't have any real idea.

>> No.3523713

>>3523210
>EOP
Opinion discarded

>> No.3523748

>>3521052
This is so nice, blog?

>>3521159
I'm in sorta the same situation but try to think of them as a flat object like a piece of paper, then move it and see as the shapes "bend" despite being flat

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3523764

Guess I'm done with this
Perspective is probably fucked but other than that I feel bad because I wish I could make rock look properly textured with lineart. The only thing I can think of to improve on that is to look at better artists' version of that and study it
Anyway, best I can do with backgrounds right now is this, meh

>> No.3523767
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3523767

What is this effect called, where it looks kind of like a 3d anaglyph? It's most noticible in the bangs and her eyes, where there is a subtle neon blue/red outline. Do you think the artist did this in the painting process or is it a filter put on in post? I really like this effect.

>> No.3523775

>>3523767
chromatic aberration. tons of tutorials how to do it its very easy.

>> No.3523781

>>3523767
I'd be careful with that, a lot of people hate it myself included
Because it's a cheap easy effect to add visual noise to an image, but also it makes people nauseous with that 3d-ish effect, it's bad

>> No.3523783

>>3523767
Don’t do this.

>> No.3523797

>>3523767
It's called Cancer and you should definitely learn how to portray it in your work.

>> No.3523802

>>3522211
yuck.

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3523807

>>3523783
>>3523781
>>3523797

O-ok I won't touch it sorry

>> No.3523855

>>3523807
Nothing wrong with liking it I just wouldn't add it to your art.

>> No.3523883

>>3523597
Yes, a cel shading with blur tool softening edges and blending effect. I actually looked around and found the answer I was looking for basically.

Comfort zone is 3 values, but I am going to try and push for 5 on top of anatomy studies to really make it convincing. Thanks all.

>> No.3523951

>>3521861
I like it! Love the angles, fingers and toes. Any tips for doing stuff like this?

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3523996

>>3523465
Sombra

>> No.3524014

>>3523996
work faster my dude

>> No.3524017

>>3524014
color did a day ago, i just got off work s-sorry

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>> No.3524028

>>3523386
no i think pubic hair is fine, armpit hair is no big deal, everyone has it. that amount of thick belly hairs are not normal for men or women and thats why i think its a fetish drawing and it just looks nasty and doesent fit the anime drawing. you seem pretty obsessed with pedos, did something happen growing up?

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Something about this bugs me. I can't quite put my finger on it...

>> No.3524090

>>3524031
Well anatomy wise, his tail appears to emerge from his left buttcheek, and given the placement of his right leg he appears to have literally no pelvis.

>> No.3524116

>>3524031
his (her?) chest and hip turn too far from each other

>> No.3524158

>>3523441
cute, but why does this boy have breasts?

>>3523807
don't be sad anon, chromatic aberration can actually work well and look good in proper context (trippy scenes, depicting an image on a glitchy monitor, etc). it's just getting a somewhat bad rep for now because a lot of people went overboard and overusing it without any respect to said context, kinda like the way lens flare were used in the past

>> No.3524171

>>3524031
his left hand is offset from his wrist and forearm

>> No.3524214

>>3523951
what exactly would you like to know? because breaking down everything would just get down to "draw more" and i hate getting that answer.

>> No.3524230
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3524230

girl

>> No.3524234

>>3524230
marry me

>> No.3524255

>>3523441
That upper right arm is broken dude, fix it asap before it's too late

>> No.3524267

Any reference for stylized proportions in perspective?
No matter what I do always look strange, usually the head.

>> No.3524276

>>3520616
just animate dude

>> No.3524303

>>3523705
Lol the artist name is K,Kanehira.
He's one of my BG idol.

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>> No.3524315
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>> No.3524316

>>3524314
okay, now I'm getting turned on

>> No.3524317

>>3524314
>>3524315
your art is ugly and disgusting looking and the only people who like it are thirsty newfags who would be impressed by a pile of shit if it had tits drawn onto it

>> No.3524325

>>3524317
No, you're supposed to praise them so they never leave their comfort zone in the guise that they're getting better.

>> No.3524326
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3524326

>>3524317

How many rounds you got left for those AC/20's there, King Crab?

>> No.3524327

>>3524314
>>3524315

Your art is amazing and has a unique twist. Where can I find more of your works?

>> No.3524329
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3524329

>>3524276
I did >>3502909
no patience for that desu

I am actually ashamed to ask knowing the answer but, how bad is the perspective here? It's a supposed to be a train wagon

>> No.3524334
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3524334

>>3524317
my fucking sides

>> No.3524335

>>3524325
devilish

>> No.3524340

>>3524230
Fuckin cute, needs more hands

>> No.3524347

>>3524329
Do you use perspective grids? If not use them, will make everything on perspective easy af

>> No.3524360

>>3524347
No I don't I'm looking into it, thank you

>> No.3524370
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3524370

>>3520838
Alrighty so now I'm trying to clean this up, what should be my next step anons?

>> No.3524376

>>3524370
delete it

>> No.3524379

>>3524376
alright sure

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>>3524329
It's not much better but at least the lines aren't dog shit. I just discovered how to do straight lines in photoshop desu

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>>3524689
>>3524690
I love your style friend, and your colors are very pleasing. And your anatomy is also very good. That's all

>> No.3524695

>>3524693
stop lying!!

>> No.3524697

>>3524689
>>3524690
glad you're slowly transitioning from shortstack girls

>> No.3524699

>>3523532
>>3523582
>>3523673
>>3524158
>>3524255
Thanks for pointing these out, will get em fixed and hopefully I won't repeat the same mistake next time

>> No.3524700
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3524700

back to the drawing board of proportions because it didn't come out quite the way i visualized

>> No.3524702
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3524702

>>3524697
I always draw big girls

>> No.3524718

>>3524702
the one on the left is good, the wind in the hair justifies the huge fluffy skulls and hair you usually draw (in porportion to the face) idk if you start the head with a circle but that could really help you, with ear placement too. the necks are a bit small. and try some diffrent pose rather than butt out-back arch, references of women doing everyday things in real life could help make it more interesting

>> No.3524745

>>3524360
get any 3d modeling software, make a cube, make a lot of separations, place the camera, only render the separations
>https://youtu.be/z1RuZZVULy4

>> No.3524760

>>3523996
whats the fucking point of your shitty alias lines if youre just gonna paint under them

>> No.3524780

>>3524329
i love your yn art, blog?

>> No.3524784
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3524784

>>3523546
ok, I don't want to blog my shiet, but this is realy helpfull; I'll redo the feet again, maybe in the moring, if this are bad, and just finish with line art in general, sorry

>> No.3524788 [DELETED] 

>>3524702
>>3524718
>this
I don't dislike your stuff, but man you're gettin fucking boring, almost a year and bearly no improvement, fucking get better already, I FUCKING WANT YOU TO GET BETTER

>> No.3524789 [DELETED] 

>>3524702
>>3524718
>this
I don't dislike your stuff, but man you're gettin fucking boring, almost a year and bearly no improvement, fucking get better already, I FUCKING WANT YOU TO GET BETTER

>> No.3524790

>>3524702
>>3524718
>this
I don't dislike your stuff, but man you're gettin fucking boring, almost a year and bearly no improvement, fucking get better already, I FUCKING WANT YOU TO GET BETTER

>> No.3524807

>>3522280
yikes,
that body
that foot!

>> No.3525071

>>3524760
what do you mean?

>>3524780
That's almost all i put out, it just gives me a lot of inspiration.
pantsu-ripper.tumblr.com

>>3524745
Ah that sounds good, thank you, will check it out

>> No.3525110

>>3524695
Reading other's posts I guess you've been stuck in comfort zone or something? In all honesty I did mean whag I said. The style OS appealing and looks good

>> No.3525118

>>3524689
'uge feet yev. That looks disggusting. Actually study feet

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>> No.3525150

>>3525142
Any tips on improving color? All around critiques is welcomed too.

>> No.3525153 [DELETED] 

>>3525142
Any tips on improving color? All around critiques too.

>> No.3525170

>>3525142
>>3525150
i think it might be good to lighten up the saddle, right now it's the same color as the darkest parts of the creature and your shapes would probably read better if that weren't the case

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>> No.3525236

>>3525170
Thanks, you're right.

>> No.3525415

This thread is gonna pop. would any other anon's be willing to make a new one?

>> No.3525549
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3525549

boy, you guys move too fast

>>3520930

http://roboham.blogspot.com/

>> No.3525930

>>3525549
Fucking finally, you faggot, thanks

>> No.3525954
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3525954

A WIP I started a few days ago. Will probably import into photoshop for linework and coloring. Bit messy, desu.

>> No.3526024

>>3525549
>blogspot
Got any more social media?

>> No.3526070

>>3525549
>blogspot
how old are you? lol

>> No.3526143

>>3526070
do NOT bully ham

>> No.3526144

>>3526143
i like his art, it's just teasing

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3526192

>>3524745
>tfw to much of a brainlet to get it

>> No.3526213

>>3525150
If you want vivid colours use a very dark grey background, if you want calm washed colors, use pastel pink or light brown for soft light colours. Idk but your brain will do all the work when picking colors

>> No.3526217

>>3525179
Needs more hard edges, to make the face pop out a lil bit more, especially on the chin/neck and the contour of the nose.
If you say "hurr durr is my stile" I'll fuckin pegg you

>> No.3526301

WHERE'S THE NEW THREAD REEEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>> No.3526305

NEW THREAD FAGGETS

>> No.3526374

OP better pick my drawing

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>>3526374
>being this much of a whore

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>>3526024
sorry, i don't know how to act human to be on social media

>>3526070
embarrassingly old, in my 30's....

>>3526143
my hero

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>>3526478
cute

>> No.3526508

>>3526478
Do you draw as just a hobby?
also, it's ok to be autisitc in social media, you just gotta post and talk little, everyone will suck you pee pee

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3526537

>>3526480
no anon, your cute

>>3526508
just a hobbyist, 0 confidence to do anything serious

social situations make me nervous, even on the internets. page 10 is pretty comfy right now

>> No.3526565

>>3526478
that's cool, i hope i still have passion for the arts in my 30s

>> No.3526582

>>3526580
I fell asleep, new thread >>3526580