/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3496794
Is this an /ic/ original?

>OP pic isn't a submission from the last thread

Stop this meme

>>3496813
git good faggot

>>3496794
still rough but making some progress

>>3496848
What do you recommend for learning to draw like you. It's exactly my style and I have trouble with bodies in perspective.
How do you practice drawing bodies?

>>3496853
kys

>>3496848
ear is small, proportions in generall look wonky

>>3496857
Holy fuck. Why?
I was just asking but thanks I guess?

>>3496853
idk, i'm pretty bad at drawing standing up poses in perspective correctly the first time too so i'm not sure my advice would be very helpful

i do use boxes quite a bit to help relate portions of the body so perhaps try that.

>>3496859
you sound like a prepubescent teenager

>>3496869
you sound like you're into teens

>>3496861
>lol just draw boxes bro!
Passive aggressiveness with a nice touch of being smug as fuck about it kek

>>3496820
>>3496857
>>3496859
>>3496869
>>3496872
And the thread is off to a great start

>>3496875
post your work.

>>3496875
I too take /ic/ threads seriously

>>3496874
i get that you think that every post on this website is seething with sarcasm but it was earnest advice-- it's a bit absurd to think that everyone is being insulting at every moment don't you think?

>>3496872
god i fucking hate angsty girls like you

>>3496848
I always forget your name but I recognize your style. Blog for like the 5th time, sorry.

Some stuff from last thread that went unnoticed
>>3495847
>>3495870

>>3496861
Thanks! I appreciate it

>>3496903
http://godsh0t.tumblr.com

currently trying to draw more characters in backgrounds rather than white space for the sweet practice

Improved but still shit, back to the drawing board i guess.

>>3497233
yikes

>>3497262
*Snap*

>>3497276
take a good look at the face m8

>>3497278
distracted by the nonsensical rendering on the torso. are those folds? confused

Drew a panel for my comic

>>3497288
no for a profile shot of that face all of the features are off

>>3497038
Blog?

>>3497233
You're pretty close but a few things to keep in mind:

- You're working in a painterly style, g-pen-esque linework doesn't work well in this style unless the lines and shapes are particularly strong.

- There are a lot of lines here that look unsure-- they look more like 2nd or 3rd iteration of sketch in quality. You may be zoomed in too far while drawing.

- You may be spending too much time lining and being married to your lineart. I'd suggest working more loosely and iteratively finding your lines for your volumes. That is generally how Rei works and you can see some of it in this shitty weibo quality picture she uploaded some time ago. Just a word of warning, looser doesn't mean more inaccurate, you'll still want to convey the same level of information-- just be ok with destroying it when you find something better.

- Paint over your lines, it will do a lot for cohesion of the piece all together.

- There are some issues with lighting which you may want to work out. Having an early phase which you use to just separate light and dark shapes may help you plan this better. You can also see examples of this in the attached Rei picture on the far-left and in the middle-left.

Nice work overall, keep working at it.

>>3497233
I don’t get it. This looks just fine if not amazing.

WIPs

>>3497362
fk, resize

>>3497362
now this is great best ITT

>>3497363
that's fucking splendid anon, do you have a blog or something?

>>3497363
Are these original characters? If so, can I ask for some tips on how do you usually go about planning and researching them? Like costumes, hair style etc.?

>>3497368
please refrain from asking trivial questions

>>3497368
use pinterest

>>3497368
not OC but I did pimp her out a little bit with chinese TV and google images as reference
>>3497366
warning: loli and nsfw
http://feason3411.tumblr.com/

Should I give up on this one? I feel like I don't know where I'm going with it. I struggle especially with color.

>>3497334
Finally some good criticism, thank you.
I've been using the generic line => clip and paint process from when i began learning how to draw so it's kinda hard to relearn to whole thing in painterly style over again. Gonna take a few months off to do small studies instead of doing big one.
So her process is loosely line to a character to get the basic feel first => paint over and define the lighting => start building all the details from there. Do i get it right?
>There are a lot of lines here that look unsure-- they look more like 2nd or 3rd iteration of sketch in quality. You may be zoomed in too far while drawing.
This is a little confusing, do you mind explaining further?

>>3497390
Lol is that Thần Đồng Đất Việt?

i wish there was a sketchbook thread since these are just primitive sketches but w/e. this one was referenced but desu i hardly even looked at it

>>3497415
srry phonepostingfag here. this was uhhh quite abstract. sorry

>>3497390
Oh god, you're the guy with the teach and student in the classroom. Love your stuff. Keep up the good work.

Shall i keep pressing forward with this style?

>>3497399
Rei basically draws a sketch, does an underpainting, refines the sketch, then renders. During the underpainting stage, she's not concerned with staying within the sketch lines-- if painting helps discover a newer, better shape from the sketch then it's an idea that she pursues further. Iterative process basically just means, drawing, painting, drawing, painting back and forth until you come to a satisfactory point where you begin your final rendering process. It's a push and pull basically between drawing and painting. What I meant by saying it looked like a 2nd or 3rd iteration of a sketch is that the lines and forms didn't look strong enough yet. You looked like you were still searching for the forms of certain things (like the gloves, the skirt etc.) so some stuff comes across flatter than they should.

Maybe it's a bit easier to just show you though:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ZnE-btFtso

These are quick pieces by attall but you can imagine applying this workflow to a full picture. Skilled artists who are comfortable with this process don't have to do as many iterations since they're so skilled at direct drawing but it's something to think about trying.

I personally like this workflow because... well, I'm pretty awful at drawing and this workflow helps dissociate me from obsessing endlessly over lines which, by the time I reach rendering, end up being all wrong anyway. Line, clip, and paint is not a bad process either but it definitely demands better drawing skills from the outset-- you could easily just continue with what you're doing now and then implement an overpainting pass which would also get good results. It's a bit harder to get an organic look like the attached Rei picture with this method but not impossible of course.

Jo Fang does this workflow and it looks great, though at some point he usually ditches his lineart layer:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=5HxEcTno7JU

>>3497514
learn fundies first

>>3496848
Nice

>>3497038
I like the feel of this

>>3497334
>>3497519
Not the guy you were originally replying to but I really appreciate this post. I usually get too constricted with trying to make perfect lineart and because of that my rendering isn't flexible enough. I'm trying to move towards this looser method.

>>3497390
>http://feason3411.tumblr.com
Stop fucking drawing pedo shit, you moron. Calling it loli doesn't make it any less pedo.

>>3497811
>muh pedos
Fuck off /pol/tard

>>3497815
Not a /pol/tard. Just /smart/tard.
Loli and shota will soon get you banned everywhere.
All socials and Patreon included.
I checked season's Patreon and there the guy must lie to be able to keep his page.
Do you people really want that?

Stop being fucking autistic and start acting like normal people, you fucking dumbasses.

>>3497874
Lurk more

>>3497519
o wow did't know attal had vids

>>3497519
I guess you need to have a good amount of skills and understanding to build everything up from a block of color like that?

>>3497827
years of ruining people homes, how can you live with yourself.

>>3497519
The atall one seems to start directly with colors instead of lines, I guess it still applies to how Rei is doing it except Rei start with lines first?

What happened to bote man.

Trying taking it in another direction. Some critique on how this is coming out would be super appreciated.

>>3498210
could add variation in color temperature. Right now the picture is completely cold, but you could make the warm area the big tree or the human figure. Also a foreground would make it less flat

>>3498222
Something like this seem more right?

>>3497924
It just takes a different mode of thought. Painting and drawing require different considerations so being able to switch thought processes can help a lot when you're having trouble "figuring out a problem". You do need some semblance of fundamentals and understanding though-- it may be less useful if you need to guess a lot since the idea is to help yourself grasp your composition/painting/perspective/etc. If you don't know what to look for it may be a difficult.

>>3497956
Yes, pretty much. Doesn't really matter where you start. You could go from drawing to painting to drawing. You could go from painting to drawing to painting. You can do it for the whole painting or just a little piece you're having trouble with. It's pretty flexible and it's not like you have to do things in a certain order-- mostly just wanted to shed some light on processes that don't get it right the first time which is strangely what a lot of people think happens when people paint.

>>3498265
>>3498210
i think it's really cool, i dig this style
only things that stick out to me are his foot, which looks a bit too much like a flipper, just put more of an arch/angle on the top bit
and it's kinda nitpicky but the spear is really thin right next to his head and looks like it'd just snap right off, I see what you're going for trying to make it look knobby but yeah

>>3497233
Dude i absolutely love your stuff and when you post. your making such huge improvements please just keep drawing and posting.

>>3498289
nice same fagging

anything wrong with his one?

>>3498354
I think you need to revisit the crotch

I still think i have some issues with volume.I'm just way too scared to use more value. Somebody has an advice to overcome that ?

>>3497233
i like it but work on the hands and pick a pink that feels more harmonious with the rest of the painting .

>>3498381
try using more value

Quick render practice.

>>3498381
Looks like you and I have the same issue. My advice is to just brace it and go as dark as you can. Of course I don't even follow my own advice so...

>>3498381
start in grayscale then colorize it

>>3497233
if you animefags need to understand one thing that makes the shit appealing,its that you need some fucking simplicity. every little thing needing such detail really just kills this for me because of all the noise. the more simple, quick renders look better because they arent blown to space by rendering and detailing everything. not to say youre bad, anon, you really arent. but if you want your art to stand out and feel somewhat fresh then you need to take this from a new angle and stop copying the shit that chinese people churn out for mobile games. look at, say, sargents work, and see how simplified he made something that feels so real.

>>3497827
your drawings never feel dynamic, and tilting them won't change that.

>>3498361
i dont know how to fix it

>>3498406
>rendering
>blob of color below some messy lines
anon, this isnt rendering practice. you have a very timid approach to this because the big blobs of light make it loosely look correct. instead, try your hardest to really use your brain and render it out well, maybe you will finally learn something
not that youll ever learn much more than basic positions of a furry head and drawing gross crypt keeper fingers i guess

>>3498502
took me several iterations to get something close to natural without completely changing the orientation of one of her legs
in the future try to be aware of space allocation for the pussy/crotch/buttcheek volume. theres mass there that needs to be accounted for

>>3497399
hey i know it hurts your ego but dont ignore the comments on those hands!

>>3498526
thanks for your effort.It will help me a bit. im gonna modify the pose later tho.

>>3498526
pretty cute anon

> link where I posted my art
https://www.instagram.com/p/BkdxY6Thx29/

I still don't know how to draw faces

>>3498583
the best way to learn is to never draw faces and posting more faggy twink selfies.

>>3498587
yeah can you imagine never practicing it and expecting to be good, then complaining about it on a malaysian web-spinning forum

Posting some progress on this thing

Is this at all interesting to look at? How do I make my drawings more interesting to look at? Should I practice a more painterly style or what?

>>3498516
Bwahaha, I'll definitely keep that in mind for my next piece.

>>3498658
Well, what kind of art do you find interesting?

>>3498673
I find a lot of art interesting.. I like really stylized stuff but I'm not sure if I should do it myself
Is it bad to draw a lot of different ways? I think people like some consistency but I think it's fun to draw in different styles

>>3498658
What do you personally think is interesting about this drawing? If you can't come up with anything, how can we?

As far as I'm concerned it's some girl clad in relatively typical pink showgarb, floating on a completely blank grey background in a pose that's either sitting on the floor leaning back or maybe floating or ????, holding a weapon, except they're not swinging it, or pointing it at anything, and it's certainly not in a defensive pose either. They're just kind of holding it. It adds no gesture to the static pose and has no relation to the scene or even her outfit. To me it seems thrown in there for no other reason other than "oh it'd be boring if she wasn't holding anything."

There's nothing really special or interesting about what you've set up, even before we get to whether or not it's drawn well on a technical level.

>>3498651
alright guess I'm done I don't think i did a very good job but I didn't wanna leave it unfinished for ever.

>>3498658
this looks like speedo's shitty style

>>3498703
Well, I think what's interesting is the character, because I like her and she's from an anime I like.. The pose I referenced from a drawing of the character where she isn't in a background so I wasn't sure about that either.. I need to practice putting character in a background properly. With her sword you're right, I could've had her actually using it rather than holding it. I added it because the character usually has it.
Thanks for pointing all that out!

tried something simple for once

>>3498730
also from today, construction is depressingly wonky (i need to flip my canvas more) but at least i'm happy with the colors

>>3498717
Drawing in binary pen is the same as drawing in any pen, don't do messing lines.
Just grind more construction and fundamental, don't do messy lines and you're good.

>>3497233

>>3498734
That's really cute

>>3498745
kek

>>3498658
it's bland and boring. Post whatever style you find interesting and we'll try to work from there

>>3498737
Thank you for the feedback, will try to be cleaner. And yeah, I'm stopping myself from doing anymore of these and start grinding.

hi /ic

another one

>>3498919
>>3498922
rly cute!!!

>>3497233
>zoom out
>merge the layers
>paint over it
in that order, looks good Anon, you haven't fixed the face tho

>>3497391
to many tangents and not enough contrast on the spear with the vines

>>3497827
learn to use fisheye lenses

>>3498737
Turns out I cannot stop myself from doing garbage. I'm taking my time to clean the lines though.

>>3498980
It's okay if you don't want to grind fundy right away, just that studying facial construction will help you more in the long run instead of doing big drawing.

>>3497811
Are you the same guy that kept giving thatfisher shit?

>>3497038
blog?

>>3497309
>>3499050
i dont really have a blog that i keep updated

>>3497782
thank you very much

>>3496848

>>3499109
>>3496848
do you usually start from grayscale then place the colors later?

>>3499138
No I usually direct color. This piece is grayscale so it won't be colored. I have tried grayscale to color once though for this picture. It was ok but not really for me? I could see how it could greatly speed up someone's workflow though.

>>3497878
not an argument you mouth breathing faggot redditor

Does anything feel wrong?
My eyes say "it's ok", but my hearth is telling me "nigger learn how to draw, It's about time for you to see your own mistakes in such an early stage of drawing", so idk

Second rough of something that I'm starting.

At the least the arms are a little screwed in length, maybe it's the detached sleeves.

>>3499220
Doesn't deserve an argument. You lurk more too

>>3499320
Getting a good look at it again this morning, I also noticed that the head's positioning is a little wonky. Same with the shoulder shape and general angle. I guess that's what happens when you select bits and rotate them slightly without accounting for changes in the rest of the anatomy, lol.

>>3498737
Who's the artist of your pic?

>>3499220
u mad bro

>>3499322
>>3499328

>>3499009
I'm not, but I'll keep giving shit to any dumbass that keeps throwing away their talent by drawing crap like that.

>>3499109
Her head looks just a bit tilted to the right with no apparent reason

The belt/strap thin on her right is mixing in with the hair

You shouldn't mix serif and sans-serif fonts

All tiny nitpicks really. I think it looks great.

>>3498354
breasts are different sizes

>>3499348
>You shouldn't mix serif and sans-serif fonts
ehh font serif contrast is kind of a basic thing in typography

>>3499109
i agree with the head tilt maybe
the shading on stomach and face looks like it could be touched up a tad
other than that yeah looks nice anon

>>3499109
fix the proportions you stupid shit

>>3497363
reminds me of seasons

>>3498919
>>3498922
i love your stuff

>>3497519
thanks for the links got inspired to draw.

>>3499320
>>3499326
Fixed some things.

>>3498919
Excellent

>>3499464
wow thats so gay anon!

>>3498919
>>3498922
>>3499314
>>3499109
Loving these.
First time outside of /beg/, haven't got feedback except for the pose that was said to be too stiff. What should I be cautious about next time ?

>>3499478
lm@o

>>3499478
Blog?

>>3499000
y-you think her face is off?
I think her left leg is off to be honest

>>3499720
Yeah, too stiff do figure drawings.
For now add more contrast on every part of the character, you should be able to se every mayor component, try squinting your eyes, you'll se what I mean.
Also grind hands and faces yours are kinda rewarding, I'll recomend to stick to /beg/ for a few months, good luck Anon

>>3499875
Not that Anon, but yes, her face it's not nice, try studying faces from an artist you like

>>3497355
blog?

>>3498919
From where's the girl on the far right? I have the feeling that I have nut'ed to her or your art style
>tl;dr: blog?

>>3498980
It's not about cleaning the lines, it's about doing clean lines

>>3499802
I have an inactive Tumblr and a deviantART account if those count.

>>3500015
thank you for the feedback that's what I'll be doing

>>3500040
yes I understand that, I meant taking my time to not do messy lines instead of just scribbling as i usually do

Colored this

>>3500206
Gib blog

>>3498980
I tried my hardest to fix, at the very least it doesn't look like an alien anymore

>>3500206
this is cute :3

i usually hide my bad lines behind all kinds of smooth blending brushes but i decided to try sketching directly with hard lines today

>>3500206
the faces look a bit wonky maybe but it looks so nice overall that doesn't really matter

i gave up on this and went into another ngmi stance.

>>3499464
That's really cute, nice job!

>>3500294
this went from 100 to 0 quick

>>3497363
>mfw drawing Asian people is itself a stylistic choice

>>3498284
Hey, thanks, man!
How does the foot look here? Any better?

Also decided to make the girl completely lifeless like the background. Don't normally do lifeless art, so some critique on the job with that would be appreciated!

>>3500405
Liness, not lifeless, haha.

>>3500206
fantastically creative.

>>3497390
i remember visiting their twitter. i don't have a problem with loli but the added retweets of real-life little girls alongside it all made a shiver run down my spine

Do you guys always create a moodboard or pick out a lot of references before you start? I get bored if I don't start drawing right away, so I'll put the idea down first then fill in the gaps with reference.

>>3500441
You mean the anon that drew the chinese girl?? Because if so I'm fucking unfollowing immediately

>>3500477
Weak bait.

>>3500482
me or the other anon? because I'm seriously concerned, I don't wanna follow potential pedos

>>3500483
You are seriously concerned about individuals retweeting an artists work without the artists general influence of what people do or dont?

>>3499570
>>3500324
t-thanks i just have the shoes left its too painful to draw shoes i really dont know how this guy does it with ease, im triggered

Posting finished piece in case anyone cares

>>3500693
Yeah, there are a lot of problems with it, but your colors are cute, just grind fundies

>>3500693
Just because it's dark doesn't mean you have to use BLACKEST anon

>>3500470
>70% planing

>>3500699
y-yes sir

>>3500701
to be honest it seemed appropriate looking at the reference

>>3500707
What game is this?

>>3500731
Yume Nikki

>>3500731
undertale 2

>>3500206
Nice work Evan

>>3498919
>>3498922
Hi Ryoko Kui, love your manga

>>3500932
Are you serious? Doesn't have any resemblance to Ryoko Kui's style.
Everything, from the way they they draw lines, shade, detail the hair and stylise the nose and eyes looks different.

>>3497827
Please stream on youtube. I mean it.

bullshitting my way through this; wafuku is confusing

>>3499314
Maybe I'm not flexible but the ankles feel off

>>3499109
very nice. i like that you didn’t over-render her

12 fucking hours for the lineart, including a rough sketch. Getting so out of shape that your arm loses its muscle and starts trembling again when you draw is absolutely not fun.

>>3501497
get some linewheight going. The right one is the best but especially on the clithingg your lines look weird. The bottom left one looks looks the worst in the clothingg department. Also learn how to draw hair.

>>3501499
>> Also learn how to draw hair.
Huh, I thought the hair was the best point after the faces and legs.
How do I, though? What's missing and/or how would you draw the same?

>>3501509
You draw WAY to many single strands. The top left is the worst offender. Group the hair to bigger strands and refrain from drawing single hairs as much as possible.

>>3501514
Oh, it's true. I didn't even notice. Thanks.

>>3501497
Love the way you draw hair.

>>3501522
begone crab.
How pathetic do you actually have to be

>>3500210
evaneley.tumblr.com

>>3501522
T-thanks.

>>3501516
Not that Anon, but
>80% big
>30% medium
>The rest tiny
gives good results

>>3500470
Yeah I basically make folders with refs of what I wanna draw, where I also keep the main PSD of what the folder is for.

>>3501577
>80%+30%
Lmao

But yeah big-medium-small is a rule of thumb for design in general, and the ratio is about 6/3/1

fug i can't draw anything thats not a generic jk

>>3501625
Ugly colors, learn how to paint with hue shifts better.

>>3501625
Did she just throw a spear or what is goingg on?

would you pay $10 for this

>>3501678
>bad anatomy
>half assed painting
>painted clothes

you will have to payme to accept this shit

>>3501682
thanks i did it 10 minutes, i was wondering if time spent would equate to a price but i guess not

>>3501678
Dude the first problem to fix should be the lineart. A lineart like this will NEVER look like somehting someone would want to buy. A lot of people can look past horrible anatomy and basic colors but lineart like that just looks like scribbles.
3 Things:
Don't have your lineart and colors on the same layer.
Dont Chickenscratch, use a single continuous stroke for one line and not multiple lines layered on top of eachother.
Dont use a brush with opacity lower than 100% if you are making lineart.

And in general, CLEAN THAT SHIT UP. What the fuck dude, the fingers on the right side have their color and outline blended together and other places where your colors mix horribly with the outlines and with eachother, you have multiple lines crossing into arreas they shouldnt be in. The line from the upper arm intersecting with the lines of the lower line. The line you used to show the abdomen crosses into the shirt. Fucking christ if you are not gonna put in any effor then why sell it. You cant draw really well but that is not your biggest problem if you want to SELL your art.

>>3501699
noted. dont usually draw let alone do lineart. im not thinking of selling this type of art, i dont draw anime. like i said it was a quick experiment but that obviously doesnt excuse the quality, thanks for the post.

>>3501699
>> A lineart like this will NEVER look like somehting someone would want to buy.
Not him, but here's a somewhat popular porn artist. His lines are better, of course, but not by much, are they?

>>3501711

>>3501711
>not by much, are they?
His lines are way better, just because hes using way thinner lines that get overshadowed by the coloring, and he uses single lines and not ugly chicken scratches or multiple lines layered on top of each other.
And at the very least this is porn, and he does seem to have appealing porn anatomy which usually distracts from flaws by A LOT.
tldr its way cleaner and barely noticeable compared to the other dudes lineart. Also its appealing porn anatomy so the normies go blind.

why am i getting more critique on a ten minute animu sketch than on my actual art lol

>>3501729
because you posted the animu sketch
and the worse the art, the easier it is to critique

>>3501729
because I happened to be around and ready to procrastinate and got triggered by how bad it was

Is this a shitty style?

>>3501729
The worst or the better a drawing is will have more critique.
The one in the middle will get almost none.

>>3501749
Also pls help w/ back leg?

>>3501749
its a fine style but your rendering is terrible, extremely flat. flat isn't necessarily bad but it looks like that's not your intention. do more form studies

>>3501749
use brighter colors

>>3501755
>back
Niggy?

>>3501756
What do you think makes it flat? is it bc I dont use softer brushes much? thx!

>>3501765
you dont need a soft brush to have a really good clockable form. there are several areas that look neglected but overall it looks like youre just guessing how the shadows and light work instead of actually knowing.

>>3501678
i will pay twenty no lower

>>3500032
Yilx on deviantart

back at it

>>3501838
make an artstation already so i can follow you

>>3501660
faggot

>>3501865
The armpit area doesn't fold like that, it looks like there's an extra lump resting on it. I might just be nitpicking but her foot also looks off? Did you use any ref pic for the pose?

>>3501971
Where's the dick

>>3498919
>>3498922
i've missed you so much buddy....

>>3501909
I'm trying to not use any references but I'll search for one and try to redraw some parts

>>3501971
How did you do those pattern on the clothes? Paint it by hand?

BTW, what's happened to the artbook thread?

>>3501999
yea looks like by hand. but i mean its not impossible to do the patterns by hand if you have the right shapes there.

>>3501971
i would reconsider using the branches differently, it looks a bit off. Maybe add more branches or rotate them in different angles..etc? other than that astonishing work.

>>3502092
forgot to put the text what character i should draw for getting more views (i hesited between zelda fgo anf some azur lane thing)

>>3502092
FGO, of course. Also, the head is way too tiny and I don't think the left arm can be bent this way. I'm assuming you will fix the shapes (mostly the lower half) as this is a sketch.

Feeling stuck in a rut and that my shit isn't too great lately. Any pointers on general composition? These are semi-recent. From about a month or two ago up to today.

>>3502109
joke character. My pals suggested I make the most slutty character possible, so I tried.

>>3502108
fucked up the pens on this one a bit but looks okay in my opinion. Anyways that's it for me folks

>>3502107
you right about the head especialy for anime stuff
for the arm i did like pic related

>>3502114
Don't make me horny. I fapped just now.

>>3502114
Compare the angle of the body in your pic and the reference again. Then try this arm gesture on yourself (you can do it while sitting in front of your computer) and see how far your hand can reach compared to your torso.

>>3501624
RESIZE HEATHEN!

>>3502164
Fuck, I forgot to re-attach the overlapped image after the posting form bugged out and I had to refresh.

>>3501678
I'd trace it and shittly draw my oc over it.

If you polished it then, maybe, you could get $10 out of it.

>>3502110
Your pals should suggest you grind anatomy, and learn how to shade. Good luck mate.

>>3502119
Boobs aren't anime enough.

>>3502185
Fun pose to try, thanks anon

>>3501997
>I'm trying no to use a reference
In something you don't know how to draw? Kys

>>3502092
>>>/beg/

>>3502254
I think you should thank the author who also posted the reference, not me. That said, you did the opposite mistake and made her torso 1.7 heads long at most. With legs and arms this long, it looks just like that football manga with super-deformed anatomy.

>>3501997

>>3502263

>>3502272
hi,griff.

>>3501871
I dont think im good enough... its not really the place for fetish art too

>>3497519
So i did a render study following your advices, rendering from rei's block of color.
-I really liking it so far, this kind of work process is more free and is more fitting compare to the line one.
-Although it's kinda a pain in the ass to fix things if i overpaint because there's no clip and everything is on 1 layer only. Here it's okay because there're only a few things to render but what if i draw more stuffs?
Do i have to fix everything if i overpainted one thing? That's kind of maddeningly tedious desu.
Again, thank you so much for your advices, i learned alot.

>>3502435
you could render one thing then render next thing on next layer.

>>3502258
>>3502272
classic /ic/

>>3502477
they're not wrong tho

>>3502492
should I kill myself then

>>3502496
Alternatively you could actually listen to the critiques, fix your shit and learn how things actually function through use of reference.

That's a bit of work though, just kys

>>3502496
Stop being such a dramatic whiny baby anon, just get a reference compare it to your drawing and then redraw it with your new found information.

>>3502436
I like it

>>3502496
>doesn't listen to critique
>whines because too lazy to listen
>'wheehh ill kill myself no one helpy me'
Either listen or fuck off, theres no point drawing if you dont learn and try to better your art.

Hands are fucking with me a bit, sizes are off too but I'll fix that
Anything else?

haven't posted in a while

>>3502258
>copying form references
>Not internalizing life drawing in the first place instead of having to rely on references
>Not refining your knowledge by drawing form imagination exclusively

Not. Gonna. Make it.

>>3502031
>>3502031
Its been archived. Somebody needs to start a new one. And maybe they have, I'm finding the threads very difficult to find lately & with some good book finds in the last 2 threads I'm not wanting to bother anymore.
Most recent archived artbook thread.
>>3487276

>>3502629
Framed Perspective Vol 1
https://www87.zippyshare.com/v/n2ICZP1s/file.html
Framed Perspective Vol 2:
https://mega.nz/#!VBsDxYYD!mE4w4Pc6EEHjnlFtQscafkL2u8_FUDgPil_f_Y7uCvY
Alla Prima II
https://mega.nz/#!SHpAHKRa!KCvr1a3dCK3KBdViJ_3W94uNLIm0nR0_0G5KryR9_pA

>>3502523
What the fuck are you talking about

>>3502629
someone please reupload all the baidu links to mega. I'm having trouble connecting to baidu

>>3502477
they're trying to tell you to use reference in things you don't know how to draw.
If you don't want to use ref for this drawing then go do some practice reference from different angles or some clothing practice and come back to that drawing with the new knowledge you have obtained.

>>3502091
disagree. I think it's a good use of them. not him btw

>>3502603
not actually a critique, just a sketch of how I might've approached this.

>>3501362
yeah his/her ankles are broken

>>3501865
Blog?

>>3502929
Generic animu grill hiding ha-
>feminine benis
You may proceed.

>>3501322
Colours pretty much down, gonna overpaint everything anyway

>>3502092
update
>>3502260

????

>>3503007
I like it but the red circle is blending with the robes too much

>>3502929
The pose is fucked up fampai
Ankles are broken that left arm is amputated and is trap shit

>>3503028
GJ not fixing the arm and the torso!

not sure if this general is what I'm looking for, but I have a question. how is this really cartooned style called? with strong and large outer lines and simple/clean, well defined design. some old cartoons have this style, like Billy and Mandy and PPG. and some games like Puyo Puyo Tetris and Mario Paper. I'm thinking in using it for my game based on pokémon, and would like tips to know how to use it correctly

>>3503304
forgot to add I need it to be vectored/vectorized (?), does anyone know what program I should use to draw?

>>3503007
lit outlines and colors, I'd only recommend you to define better the shadows, or go to the opposite direction and make them smoother. but it's already great the way it is now desu

>>3502929
that is a BOI

>>3502929
How is this not considered shota?

>>3502790
The boobs are way too high man. Also, learn how to draw hands better, look at your own hands in similar poses in the mirror for reference.

not gonna be able to finish before the 4th ends :(

>>3503331
literally what are those lines

>>3503331
Blog?

>>3496794

How would you anons feel if I randomly picked some of the posts here and use it for a my style your style thread? Yeah or nah?

>>3503435
Nobody cares. kys.

>>3503436
It's a yes then

rate my dabs

>>3503539
Good variety.

>>3501749
>something funky is going on with the connection to the neck and head
>why are her wrists nonexistent
>why does her hands look like a vagina
>her back leg looks like a stump
>hip connection is completely wrong
>colors are dull and lack hue shifts in shadows and the way the shading is done is messy and completely flat
Yeah, it's an artistic masterpiece, and feel free to ignore me and call me a mega crab faggot or whatever you kids use these days.

>>3503304
>>3503310
Look up UPA:
https://www.google.com/search?rlz=1C1CHBF_enUS708US708&q=upa+animation&sa=X&ved=0ahUKEwic257JtIjcAhUkVd8KHYcGDU0Q1QIItwEoBA&biw=1440&bih=854&dpr=1.5

Also, Retro-style animation. Basically it's highly stylized stuff from the 40s-50s you are looking for, because that was the inspiration for the "flat" shows of the 90s-2000s like PPG, Dexters Lab, Billy and Mandy, Samurai Jack and Fairly Oddparents.

>>3503539
I hate it when someone who likes the same stuff I like makes shit fanart of that stuff. Except for NieA Under 7.

>>3504118
s-sorry, did them in a hurry last night for a drawthread. I hate that too and am trying to get better ;_;

I'm going to be drawing some niea x ed from bebop today :^)

>>3504607
new thread

>>3503327
It was just a quick thing and I got what he was going for, really helped me with the sleeves/folds and shoulder area since I was having a lot of trouble with them