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Since most of the critique treads are for beginners, and I don't consider myself one I'm just going to ask for critique and what I'm doing wrong in this one.

>> No.3493665

use the draw thread you faggot and stop using shitty ribbon brushes

>> No.3493669

>>3493658
What do you mean? /alt and the draw thread isn't for begginers? Only /beg is, this was just an excuse to shit up the board wih more unneeded critique threads that only look at one fucking artist.

>> No.3493670

>>3493669
*Aren't
sorry for the typo

>> No.3493671

>>3493658
>and I don't consider myself one
i have news for you...

>> No.3493673

Looks like she got a 5 o'clock shadow

>> No.3493675
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>>3493671
Literally what i was thinking when i saw this.

>> No.3493682

Why can't a single day go by without a pretentious faggot making a thread for critique?

>> No.3493763

>>3493682
Why can't you guys stop getting brain aneurysms every time someone does something that you don't like?

Just ignore the thread, and it'll fade away into nothingness. I think you guys just get your kicks by bitching incessantly.

>> No.3493781

>>3493658
whats with the 5 o'clock shadow?

>> No.3493790
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>>3493658
>I don't consider myself one

>> No.3493824

>>3493763
actually they have all the right to be mad, you have rules here, you have specific threads to post, and it's not because "we dont like this person's art bu-huu", if this kind of kiddos keep posting like this, other threads that could be more interesting ones will be archived, if you let them be like this there will be a moment when the 10 pages will be some kid posting a circle and asking for criticism

Not to mention that they are being inconsiderate with those who post to where it belongs

>> No.3493825

>>3493658
How did you get so good?

>> No.3493959

>>3493824
I get what you're trying to say, but the reality is that not much is enforced here. Mods don't delete irrelevant threads, users don't really face any consequences for anything they do or say. It's no-man's land here.

Second: People will stop posting threads if people stop replying to them. Half of the time, threads aren't posted to actually learn or discuss anything, they're posted to get people fired up and start a shit-fest. Factually, getting mad about this solves nothing. Ignoring it until it dies down at least is rational, eveb if it's only barely more impactful.

>> No.3493985

>>3493658
Did you use Scarlet Johansson as reference

>> No.3494245

>>3493959
long story short
>and I don't consider myself one
is the thing that triggers most people here. You're not the greatest of begs, but you should be more self-aware anon. Your thread almost seems like trolling

>> No.3494253

>>3493824
Not OP, but since when is there an actual board rule on /ic/ that you have to post in one of the general threads if you want critique for your work, which is, you know, the topic of this entire board?

>if this kind of kiddos keep posting like this, other threads that could be more interesting ones will be archived
Yeah, what would we do without all these interesting threads such as "how to draw anime?" "why can't westerners draw anime?" "is anime the worst style ever conceived?" "Is Loomis a meme?" "SAKIMICHAN SUCKS!" "Holy shit look at the newest Ruanjia painting, he fucking sucks!" "Holy shit look at the newest Ruanjia painting, he is fucking incredible!"

>> No.3494274

>>3494253
It's kind of an unspoken rule. Making a post for just your art alone makes you seem like a egotistical faggot and nobody likes that. Unless it's a thread started by an epic-level lolcow lIke agrodolce/thekingtoro, these threads get only a few replies and then they sit there taking up space and bumping down other threads.

It's just bad form, man. Best to tell them to post in relevant threads from the start so that every single person here doesn't do this.

>> No.3494293

>>3494274
Yeah, just imagine coming to /ic/ and the board was filled with threads where people posted their own work and asked for and received legitimate criticism and all of our feels threads, anime threads and art e-celeb threads were gone. What a horrible thing that would be.

I swear, /ic/ must be the only board on 4chan that thought it is a good idea to self-moderate on-topic threads into 3 generals to make room for off-topic garbage.

>> No.3494334
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Jesus fucking Christ OP, you might aswell not include the bust at all because hioooooollly shit man you cannot draw a bust for the life of you. She is stiff as FUCK and reminds me of those cheap barbie busts that little girls get for Christmas and end up being disposed in the tip 2 years later. The face is fine, but it seems like all you focus on is faces so that's why you say " I'm not a beginner" when you clearly are in a lot of cases.

>> No.3494365

>>3493658
Dont just focus on the face
Dont add random shit that are rushed

>> No.3494371

>>3493658
a lot of this is wonky af
I'd argue everything is but the eyes, I like them
take your head out your own ass anon

>> No.3494386

>>3494293
/ic/ self moderates because moderation and quality control is already so minimal. Plus with no beginner threads, there would be no updated sticky. Which, by the way, most people don't even read because they don't go to the beginner thread and instead jump straight to making their own thread.
The closest comparison to /ic/ is /i/, and the thing is that /i/ has different boards for drawing on a theme. On-topic threads don't have to be "beginner thread, draw thread, stylisation thread," they could be gesture drawing, anatomy study, character designs, landscapes, colour studies, outdoor sketching and hell even your style/my style threads. What we don't need is threads all focused around one attention whore demanding critique on ONE piece of work per thread. Because that's when you get dumb one liner comments and shitposting.
The problem here is that /ic/ doesn't ever post their work. I want my comic threads here on /ic/, but there's never enough to keep a consistent thread going.

>> No.3494389

>>3493671
>>3493675
snibeti snab

>> No.3494723
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>>3493658
>and I don't consider myself one
Than don't use excessive amount of noise filter to hide your shitty brushwork, you fucking pussy.

>> No.3494752

>>3494245
>It triggers them
Yeah, yeah. I know all about the level of composure the average ic anon has here. Making it sound like we're on Tumblr.

Also, I'm not the OP.

>>3494274
That's not an unspoken rule. That's just ic being overly butt-sensitive to any modicum of self-confidence that's displayed here and then sperging out.

>> No.3494766

>>3493658
The perspective of the head/face seems a bit off. The neck looks a little long too. Work on drawing fabrics because the clothes arent good.

>> No.3495145

>>3494752
pppfff ahhaha "finally i have enough confidence to post on the most shitty place all over the internet were people anonymously will insult me as if that were a criticism over my work "
c'mon anon, anybody posting their work here (doesn't matter the thread) have enough confidence for an entire life
we aren't be " butt sensitive over the self-confidence of an anon" it's easier, <b> post were it belongs </b>

>> No.3495863

is she a tranny?

"She" looks like "she" shaved "her" face this morning.

>> No.3495868

>>3493658
The noise filter is strong with this one.

>> No.3495892
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>>3495863
He's doing this thing about the 3 color areas of the face that masterpainters used to do, yellow on the forehead, red around the nose area and blue on the chin area and then applies it without any subtlety or thought because they are totally not a beginner.

No offense OP, I was guilty of that too, everyone does it when they first learn something, they don't really understand it and totally overdo it, but that's exactly what makes you a beginner.