/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Here's some commissions I just finished. Whatchu think? I'll note: I didn't focus as much on style as I did their actual bodyplans.

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>>3487964
3rd

>>3487964
crystal guy

>>3487964
A specially commissioned "lanky giraffe fighter".

>>3487964
They are all gladiators on a gladiator planet.

>>3487964
This one was also specially commissioned, a reference to the Walrus in Alice in Wonderland

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>>3487962
why didn't you just wait until page 9 like always

>>3487964
almost done

>>3487964
Ok, last one. Critiques welcome, tear these things apart if you have to. How can I refine my style more? Note: These are fairly cartoony compared to how I would usually render a creature/alien design, they were for a cartoon project.

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>>3487992
Dude what the fuck.

>>3487976
>>3487977
This one's my fav

>>3488133
What

>it's another "Shitty art gets picked as the OP pic" episode

I don't know if this is the right place but I would love some feedback on this finished drawing and another work in progress I'll post.

I'm trying to illustrate Yoshitoshi ABe's characters.

pic is Ran from Texhnolyze.

>>3488325
and this is the wip, it's lain and her evil sister

>>3488306
post YOUR art anon

>>3488306
Better than 90% of /ic/

>>3488325
Needs work, but I'll take any Tex art I can get.

For an animated pitch bible I made a few months back.

>>3488443
this is pretty cool

I hate coloring

>>3488479
Who sits on their knees to swing a sword? Is she the same size as the other girls? The perspective isn’t reading if she is.

>>3488479
needs more orange and yellows to counter the blue

>>3488507
“Counter”? Jesus I guess you mean balance, but straight orange and yellow make no sense in the scene unless someone has an alternate light source (torch). Please lurk more before spouting nonsense cus you heard someone talk about complementary colors once

>>3488507
I dont know where I'd put orange. maybe the blood could've been more redish.

>>3488513
yes I mean balance, my english isn't that good. What I'm saying is there's too much blue in the drawing.
Maybe yev could create a new light source that will have some warm colors on it

>>3488515
Don't you use torches for light in minecraft? You could put one or a few of them somewhere for some orange light.

>>3488479
You could add lava flowing in the background if you really want to add that extra light source. I personally think its fine

>>3488488
Its sexier thay way, also she's obviously a qt lanklet

>>3487984
I like this design the most out of the rest you posted. Some of the other aliens you've posted don't look very practical with their arms bent over and foward

>>3488479
qt, nice to see you not using your usual messy lines to draw
I'd add a light source close to the girls since they are the main focus of the image and It help to draw viewers through the monotonous dark colors you got going on right now

How could I already be so rusty?

>>3488479
Let the girl hold a torch since she doesn't do anything right now.
That torch will let you use hot colors like red, yellow and orange to balance the drawing.

>>3488733
Because all you draw is shitty furry shits.

>>3487962
>pointed teeth
>still has the calarts worm smile

>>3488443
Care to share some more information about this, anon

>>3488797
What is going on with his back?

>>3488846
How do you mean?

suggestions on how to make the coloring/lighting look better?

Okay, I know this is super rough, but I really want to try to improve with my digital drawing more and was hoping I could get some critique on the posing and structure before I move ahead to lining it.

>>3488852
I'm asking, is it accurate? I cannot tell, it looks off, but maybe it's just me.

>>3488919
I think her shoulders should be above her neck and be on the same level to each. The way it is, it lacks the pressure that's being put on her arms

>>3488805
It's called No Outlet. It's an animated Dramedy- Sitcom. It explores childhood and the human condition in small town middle america in the 90's

>>3488991
h-hot

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>>3488425
Would you mind telling me what you think needs work? I have already have an Idea of the areas i'm lacking in, but it would help me greatly to get some feedback

>>3488991
Her right two torso's are just a tad long on the bottom, and the right one's right foot isn't in heels. Also, the right's breasts seem a bit small/flat compared to the others.

Posted those aliens above, just drew this today. Crit? Whutchu think?

>>3489104
>>3488443
These backgrounds are actually amazing. Blog?

>>3489503
Thanks man!
www.joeuebieart.com

Is pixel art okay? I'm curious as to what you think of it.

>>3488733
if youd stop meme drawing and actually bother to buckle down and draw something that takes more time and effort OR do studies, youd be fine

but you just want to draw the same character and make meme shit because dumb furry peabrain. just make it a hobby anon, and dont worry about how bad you are

>>3488329
update on this

Now when my exams are over I got free time and should start studying/sketching more during summer holidays.
Also need to design some fantasy world/concept and make characters for it before next semester starts.

>>3488871
more contrast

>>3489533
I like a lot of pixel art

>>3489683
nice, you're right

>>3489540
what does it mean "meme drawing??" how do i not meme drawing?

>>3489697
Kill yourself faggot

ive never really done digital before so I gave it a shot. Does anyone know what I should be focusing on right now other than gestures?

>>3489715
gestures gestures gestures


you will never do enough

>>3489715
if it helps i'd like to drawn nudes, not porn, just naked females doing things other than sex.

>>3489718
https://line-of-action.com/practice-tools/figure-drawing/

Here you go friend. This is what I use to do studies.

>>3489715
More figures and gestures

>>3489055
Thanks for the feedback, man! Does this look better, or do I need to push it further?

>>3489721
thanks. am I practicing these right? this was a 5 minute. im doing the 6 hour session right now

>>3489533
Did more work on it. Came perilously close to giving her piss-colored eyes because I hit the 16-color limit, but it worked out in the end. Refined the curves, removed the sleeves (she wears a sleeveless jumpsuit), adjusted the colors a bit. I think I'll call it a wrap on this one.

>>3489744
I think it looks more natural now

>>3489755
that's some good stuff anon, keep at it

>>3489756
>her
does s(he) have cancer?

>>3489756
I thought it says despacito

Could you guys let me know what you think of these colors?

>>3489794
Make the boobs bigger

>>3489574
I think this is as much as I can do with what I know. It has some blatant flaws I can notice, all their feet are strange and the arm gripping on the middle lain may be too long...

I would really appreciate some feedback!

>>3489809
I think they work!

Why is she bald may I ask lol

>>3489809
IMO It's just begging for more saturation & vividness, maybe like pic related. Colors are pretty dull. Also a small, slight black shadow plays well with the way the figure is currently lit. Makes them 'float' less against the pink.

>>3489809

looks like shit git gud or get rekt

>>3489845
Why thank you!! Can't say there's any particular reason for the baldness, don't have any backstory for the character or anything. Was just a style of haircut I had seen before that I thought looked gnarly.
>>3489847
Hot dang dude, you're totally on point with all that! Thanks for the tips, will definitely play around with those ideas. Might just steal the colors you chose there if that's alright with ya.

>>3489784
thanks, here's a 20 minute one, but im going to bed, ill do more tomorrow

>>3489784
She's a heavily modified reanimated human outfitted with robotic limbs, engineered to be an assassin. Not a zombie, though, since she's actually alive again, but she looks like death warmed over because that's essentially what she is.

Concept im working on for fun...NBA- Nympho-Bot Assistant.

>>3489895 i have no idea why that came in sideways sorry

>>3489895
Why is she holding ravioli?

>>3489901 lol good catch

>>3488733
Second try. Body's giving me issues at this angle for some reason.

>>3488741
>>3489540
I love my husbando and my husbando loves ME!

>>3489966
never capitulate to those dweebs. I wish i liked any of my OCs as much as you do

>>3489966
>>>/trash/

Designing more thicc botegirls.

This ones a fleet oiler.

>>3490312
I'm so happy you still post here Kancollefriend

Give me your motherfucking blog already we need to connect.

>>3488991
>>3488479
>>3487964
Blogs bls.

>>3490312
Ooh, now this is a rare treat.

>>3488479
the whole composition is just unexciting. play with angles and shit.

>>3490317

Don't really have one. Just a Tumblr of shitty lewds I need to delete, and a Pixiv of older shipgirls...that I also need to delete.

I've basically just been trying to improve my lineart and coloring for the past three months.

>>3490319
Alien guy:

http://ionsigh.tumblr.com
http://instagram.com/ionsigh

>>3490337
That's a shame man, hope you keep posting here more. Always like seeing your work.

>>3489721
is there a website like this that just has random photos not necessarily figure drawing stuff?

>>3487962
I don't see a stupid question thread or a tablet thread up so might as well ask here.

CSP isn't using my tablet settings anymore, it keeps defaulting to double monitor set up and I only want it on the 1. I'm going through the wacom options and everything is set up for the one monitor, and before I open up a new canvas it is set up correctly. Its just when I open a canvas that the screens maps to half my tablet.

Anyone have this problem?

>>3489809
This gives me Gorillaz vibes

>>3489721
Does using thia actually work? Ive done a few gesture drawings on there and it feels so boring and i see no improvements.

>>3490443
The images in the site are nothing more than references, it's really just for convenience.
Tthe magnitude of your improvement depends solely on the time and effort you put on your practice, doing gesture drawings will help you develop more natural poses, but you don't have to do only gestures, you can also do more ellaborate works and get a feel of lightning and figure, look at
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>>3489857

>>3490441
Yeah, very Gorillaz inspired. All the new material has me hyped up about em again.

>>3490466
I tried color for this one, and actually used layers. Tough working on a time limit, but I think I'm getting a little better at it. Hopefully if I do this for a month I'll get used to digital. My next one is 50 minutes so we'll see how that goes.

>>3489809
>leprosy hair
For what reason?

>>3490503
It's a style I've seen around. It's just kinda weird and ugly looking in my opinion, which I think is hella fun to draw.

ehh..just a sketch i guess

dude on the left is fucked

>>3490528
Blog??

>>3490513
Your lines are falling off the paper anon

>>3490513
so this is the prime example of someone who unironically will never gonna make it huh

>>3490513
oh no no no no ahahahahaha
>>3490523
get out of your comfort zone already

>>3490523
those are great

>>3490317
>>3490312

Boatfuckers get out, reeeeeeeee.

wip, I'll change the face soon

>>3490552
Thanks

>>3490528
Noiiiice

messing with a new minimalist coloring with almost no highlights while still trying not looking too simplistic

>>3490882
That backdrop color is blinding. Why did you choose it?

what are the benefits of tracing?

I got artists block so I just started doing studies, then just traced some art to practice my lines, but are there any other benefits? I'm not sure if I'm learning anything, but maybe I need to be more mindful of what I'm tracing?

>>3490905
Helps understand form. Helps you understand how artists compress 3 dimensionality into a 2 dimensional work of art. Helps you learn to see what’s there and not what you think you see.

>>3490882
I love tracer and I love the way this looks already. Post this while your'e working on it, I wanna see more!

>>3490533
http://jabari.tumblr.com/

>>3490513
Eyes are too far apart, and the stylization is not consistent for that to feel natural in your style.

pls no bully. or do, idk

>>3490905
If you trace, break down the different muscles and body parts and overlay them with lines to get a feel for the form.

>>3489104
this is some metro city Ed Edd N' Eddy shit

>>3490528
that horn on the left side of the female is doing some crazy shit

>>3491139
also her eye on the left side needs to be higher too

>>3489104
I would watch this show if it aired during my childhood

>>3490544
Please if youre that genius please post some of your work. Maybe some of your great art skills will rub off on me.

i hope this is cool

>>3488479
I really like this. Hope to see more of this series Yev.

>>3489966
God fuck, why does my painting style look like something out of a children's book? Am I overdoing the lighting or something?

>>3491076
Bloooog

>>3491045
thanks, that helps a lot actually. i'll just put the 3d forms to it instead of just tracing the outlines.

>>3491430
maybe more contrast. Colours are also very pastel-like which doesn't help.

Some of my own creations.

>>3487962

>>3491455
*Creation

It looks like some cringy fetish porn, btw i wish you'd lurked more before making a thread.
I feel like a fucking mod telling people everyday to post in the threads ugh

>>3491457
>>3491460
Oh god
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

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>>3491461
How is it cringy?

>>3491457
that yellow is so shit

>>3491468
It looks lile fetish porn of a young character

How is that not cringy?

>>3491471
Is that all?

>>3491471
ask me how i know youre a woman

>>3491471
Please don't tell me you wrote that because you're a woman. I'm sorry, but that's a litle petty, if this is really the case.

>>3491471
that's it? never go on the internet again lol

>>3491482
Look, you are showing us some >>>/trash/ level fetish porn cartoons and you asking for critique. What were you expecting?

>>3491501
You do realize fetish porn of young girls is everywhere, correct? I don't understand how what I made is trash, especially if that's your only reason.

>>3491517
/trash/ doesn't have fetish porn of young character. The poster accusing you of drawing porn of young characters is some retarded tumblr fujoshi.

You're posting shortstack porn, stylized in a cartoon manner. Which is basically /trash/'s forte. You should unironically post there because people will have more positive things to say. I would speculate your cartoon shortstacks get on peoples nerves because it basically violates a lot of art principles. Also because you're spamming the pictures.

>>3491324
it's pretty neat but needs more values methinks

>>3491430
it's cringy that's what

>>3491460
>>>/aco/

>>3488479
seeing this board be impressed with this garbage is actually depressing. i mean ic was never a high art board but my god people used to have higher standards. this is not even dA tier. three pedobait scribbled lolis with the laziest garbage background i have ever seen here
youre not even trying. this is depressing.

>>3491556
roasty gettin toasty

>>3490513
dentist fag is back oh my god how long has it been? do you still have anger issues? i mean clearly your art is still the exact same garbage but hey, maybe other things changed. have you ripped out someones teeth yet? last time you were here you were chimping out at even the mildest criticism.

>>3491556
You sound upset.

>>3490523

>>3491582
post backstory

>>3491603
you art overall has improved since your last redline but the face still needs a bit of fixing

>>3491549
How is it cringy? Care to explain, instead of just disappearing and never commenting again?

>>3491667
It's furry garbage, what is there to explain

>>3491674
Even though neither of the characters depicted in them are animals with fur? One of them's a full-fledged human, guy. Come on, don't be like that.

>>3491688
>full fledged human
>furry
pick one

>>3488325
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>>3489574
nice work with the binary, what program you using?

>>3491776
>binary
when will you retards stop calling it that

>>3491777
When it stops being accurate

>>3491769
I don't know about you, but there's nothing to pick. Calling it "furry garbage" even though there are no furries to be seen. I don't get it.

>>3491795
whatever that thing is, it's still shit

>>3491795
>doesn't know how 4chan works
You're >>3491460, right? He wasn't calling your art cringy or furry to begin with, dipshit. He was referring to >>3491430.

>>3491821
Then he should have directed his comments to that person and not me. And do not call me a "dipshit," please. 4chan or not, that was uncalled for.

How can you expect this community grow what that's the way you treat new people? It is depressing, my dear.

>>3491845
>>3491549 here. You sound like someone who just discovered 4chan yesterday. I was redirecting you to /aco/ because people there might appreciate your artwork more

>>3491845
Stop monopolizing the thread with your /trash/ you dipshit.

>>3491818
That foot looks weird anon.
And for a moment I didn't catch that it was a mask, it contours to the face way too much.

>>3491688
>>3491845
HUH DID I MAKE YOU ANGRY WOULD YOU SAY??? HUH GEE I AM SORRY HUH... IT CERTAINLY WAS NOT MY INTENT FROM THE BEGINNING TO HAVE YOUR PRETENTIOUS LITTLE SELF FEEL ATTACKED HEH... weocomle to 4chane kiddoh... and remember my name ull c it ofen... ;^)

>>3491845
>Then he should have directed his comments to that person and not me.
>Anonymous
Lurk more and figure out how this site actually works before posting again, newfag.

>How can you expect this community grow what that's the way you treat new people?
KEK

>>3490568
Made the face a bit longer, focused more on the hand hopefully the look alright/are readable
I think a small silk tote bag would be cuter than a satchel, I might change that

>>3491855
Or you could post in the porn thread instead. Check the catalog

>>3491879
Face looks better, the way her hands are holding look weird, hard to read, maybe because its a sketch.

>>3491855
I am not with concerned with what you think I sound like, random person. I do thank you for redirecting me to /aco/, though. You may be a little rude, but at least you are attemping to help.

are there any examples of cartoons where it never stayed on model, but this wasn't a detriment to the series?

>>3491959
literally every anime ever

can anyone give tips for designing the lights and shadows here? I know the light source is above the figure, slightly to the left, but i cant find an appealing way to draw the lights.

I'm trying to get a result similar to something on the right, it's the closest example i could find to what I'm trying to go for in a manga.

>>3492007
Just look at the reference it doesn't look hard. I want to point out that her shoulder is fucked, looks like she's shrugging or had a hunchback

>>3492017
Yeah I noted that after I saw the pic zoomed out, thank you.

>>3492007
probly something like this. your anatomy is a little off so it was weird to attempt. i suggest you do form studies so in the future itll be easier to light your scene

What dyou think guys ^^

i did a sketch ilustration. took too long but i was learning stuff on the go.

>>3488479
Your art style is too similar to everybody else on deviantart art style

>>3488733
Dont be a furry every furry has the same art style

>>3490502

nice, use more controlled marks when hatching rather than scribbles and it will look much better

>>3491582
kek jealousfag

>>3492137
I like a lot of what you got going on here. The environment especially I think was done nicely. The posing of your characters is incredibly stiff though. They kind of look like dolls that someone stuck in those positions rather than people actually moving around in the real world (the girl more so than the guy). It might be too late for this piece but in the future when drawing out poses maybe try drawing out your ideas more loosely at first and really focus on how the body is affected by movement and what it is you want your characters actions to convey. Beyond that though there's a lot of really good stuff going on here!

>>3492193
im not good with gesture. i even tried to do the poses myself and taking photos of them to see the flow but it ended up stiffy anyway,welp.

>>3491013
>>3492119
So am I just shit or what

>>3492203
Sorry. It's terminal.

i fucking hate my art and this style- help. rip me to shreds

>>3491776
Thank you, I use photoshop and the pencil brush.

>>3492197
Just keep practicing, man! Practice it often and there's no reason you can't get better, even if it seems like it at first. As far as gesturing is concerned, some good things to keep in mind is to work on large paper so you have plenty of room to let your hand go wild. It can also be good to give yourself a time limit (even just a couple of seconds) to draw any figure out, that way you have to scramble and get the most clear, exaggerated form possible. Also, something that my professor taught me when I took a figure drawing class is that sometimes holding your pencil a different way than you normally do for drawing can be helpful when doing gestures. I started holding my pencil like in pic relate and it's helped a lot with having a more natural, gestural feel. (And sorry if this is all super obvious stuff you know already, just figured I'd throw out a few tips)

>>3492203
your work is mediocre
all you have to do from here is fine tune

>>3492240
Stop painting, start drawing more, if you can draw appealing lineart, it's hard to fuck it up. Too much soft brush, bad edges, but most of all, bad drawing.

>>3492240
go back to studies. your values are way too dark it looks like she has a shit ton of eyeshadow all over her face. it looks like youre just guessing until you get something that looks right, nothing is really intentional. and your dependency on line (mouth, eyes, even nose) is ruining how you interpret the form

>>3492266
forgot pic related. poor attempt at unifying your portrait

>>3492203
Its not bad, but not that great either.
Doesn't particularly stand out to me, personally and I guess many others think the same as well.

>>3492272
>>3492266
Wow ty that looks a lot better. ill try to do that

>>3487962

>>3492295
>i am agrodulce

>>3492302
I like how the crisp look of her head and hair, but it seems you weren't quite sure what to do with her body. You should try and find some reference images on that angle so you get an idea of what it should look like.

>>3492302
Nose too high

Can anyone help me with the anatomy/proportions on this. I know the perspective of the table is wonky, so no need to critique that.

>>3491460
I dig it. Where do you normally post?

>>3492305
ye I fucked up with the body.

>>3491076
Blog?

>>3492323
I don't want to say anything too bad, she looks like she could put me down. Biggest issue is her legs seem to be different sizes

Thoughts ? Not finished yet

>>3492328
>she looks like she could put me down
I dont understand?

Yeah the leg on the right is actually propped up on the ball of the foot to make up for the hip raise on that side. I guess I just didn't show it well enough at the ankle.

>>3492329
chest seems sucken in. Either lift the breasts out more, or adjust that lower section of the ribcage under the breast on the left to make it look like she is standing straighter. Also from my experience, bangs with that much length need to ride lower, typically they will cover up the eyebrows. Otherwise the forehead appears really large.

>>3491845
>How can you expect this community grow what that's the way you treat new people?
You naive little fool.
Also fuck off newfag.

Can I get some insight into these poses?
The one crouching is pointing at the frog

>>3492328
Thanks, I made some adjustments here. If you happen to be familiar with the show, do you think its an alright interpretation of her body type? I know she's less toned in the show, but she seems to be portrayed as quite fit through her activities. I felt this better reflected that.

>>3492355
i've no clue frend but she makes me feel weak

>>3492353
Try making the frog smaller or fixing the perspective, frog looks too big. Try to pair small+medium+large compositionally. You can bring the frog out with value/color, not scale.

As far as the poses go, my brain tells me the crouching figure is shorter and smaller (like a young child), but the height of their knee+width of their torso tells me their almost the same height. Maybe the sketch is just too rough, but thats what I get from it. Otherwise the curious observer's pose is really cute and lighthearted.

>>3492360
Thanks. I've been doubling down on anatomy recently so all my figures have been gaining 15lbs of accidental muscle minimum lol.

>>3492118
I finished my illustration course with a first and want to perfect my work so it would be nice to get a reply!

>>3491617
Thanks. Yup, it's fucked up now that I look at it.

>>3492380
ayy lamao nice mr japan always posting superior animes

>>3492364
Thank you for the the insight, you can see their supposed height difference in the image. Not used to drawing kids to be honest. Hope its more pasable now

>>3492261
what would you say needs the most work? form, perspective, gesture etc

>>3491430
What a fucking joke. I've repainted this at least 5-6 times and haven't learned anything from it. Maybe it's time I give that Gurney book a try.

>>3492393
Not him, but yes, yes and yes. The most obvious things I notice are the devil kid's guns are woefully under-referenced (ejecting out wrong side, flat front sights, no rear sights,, incorrect grip angle, out of perspective, etc.). The kid has no flow and even though his pose should be kinda action-y, it comes off as super stiff as though he is intentionally posing. And the fabric of his jeans and coat have numerous folds that shouldn't be there. As for the woman, its hard to say (cause im not great at foreshortening) but it seems like we are seeing too much of her body in relation to the plane her feet tell me she's standing on. Maybe she should be foreshortened more? Otherwise the simple graphic style visually looks nice, but is nothing new/interesting.

Just my two sense anyways.

>>3492394
It's drawing shitty fat OC furries and meme instead of drawing actual good things that holding you back.
But it's not like you going to listen anyway because everytime someone give advices you just go "lmao haters" and keep drawing your shitty OC.

>>3492394
Take reference from other kemono artists, idiot. The face looks fucking atrocious

I just dig the low budget indie zine look. Here is a poster for something I just made.

>>3492394
konosuke is a bottom tier morenatsu husbando. probably why. maybe juucihi or torahiko will improve this...

>>3492353
draw niea already you goon!!!!!!!!!!

trying to do some thumbnailing before i up the scale, any thoughts on the composition? or anything else for that matter

>>3492400
thanks dude, I appreciate it

What's the differences between /alt/ and anime study thread?

>>3492505
Do thumbnails first. Right now all your forms are pretty much the same size. You cannot tell what is the priority.Try balancing the composition using large, medium, and small elements. Make the most important figures large, backed up by the medium figures, and supported by the smaller (detail) figures. In your scenario I imaging it would be the hypno guy huge, looming over the medium sized super family, and then the smaller supporting characters would make up the rest. Think about it like a literal pyramid of importance, most posters of this nature are composed this way using a triangular composition.

Also, while I haven't seen the movie myself, I have heard spoilers for it. Do not group certain figures together in a way that implies them belonging together when they should not.

>>3492528
I believe alt is pretty much everything else that is not technically anime, ie. perhaps some anime features, but departs on a different level, like level of realism, style of rendering, etc. It also includes people looking for feedback on their "style", which can be pretty much anything not strictly aiming for realism.

>>3491438
>>3492326
https://twitter.com/orenjipiiru

>>3492532
gotcha, i’ll reorganize and resize
should i keep the smaller supporting figures more towards the bottom, then? i’ll blow up the topmost figure and maybe shift the hand a bit over to the right
now that you mention it, i should also regroup the characters, didn’t think about it that way.

much appreciated

>>3492528
the ast is people specifically trying to learn the stylistic techniques used by anime artists, this thread is just for people to dump their original work that is stylized and allegedly get critique

I think he looks like a kid now

>>3492490
that's after this one! I haven't even finished watching NieA_7. I stopped with 2 chapters left since I just don't want the ride to end ;_;

>>3492552
Well since there are only 2 supporting figures in your image, you could probably keep them to a side. Typical blockbuster movies will have the lead actor front and center with smaller characters below them. In your case though, because the lead is a group of 5 people, you'll have to do some creative problem solving to figure out the best strategy.

Look at this poster from the first movie. The film followed mr. incredile for the most part, so he appears front and center with his family as support and frozone as a background role. If it makes sense with the film, maybe make elastigirl the second largest behind the villian? Or even the largest overall. Idk how important each character is...

>>3492430
lmao haters

>>3492448
i agree, that's a good aesthetic to go after

>>3492578
makes sense, i’ll probably try to make elastigirl bigger, size up screenslaver a little, and then shrink the supporting characters and move em down

the rest of the family appears together a lot, so i’ll keep em the same size as each other

>>3492118
fuck off. /ic/ isnt your personal army.

>>3492643
I really dig this style. Do you have a blog?

yo whats the beginner friendly to advanced in coloring? this is how I'm doing in each layer

>hightlight
>dark shade
>base color

>>3492576
Welp this is probs as good as it'll get. All downhill from here. My goal is for them to look as CUTE as possible

>>3492654
Post your work!!!

>>3492302
cute but I feel you could shade the edge of her left eye just a bit where it slots behind the hair, right now it does exactly read as behind it.

>>3492295
Oh look guys its torotheking lol
Looks like he changed it to "agrodulce" now though

>>3492737
It's appealing, but very dirty and your pose is on the stiff side

>>3490513
The neck on her right/our left doesn't seem to connect properly with her collar/shoulder behind her hair. On that note the hair there too doesn't seem to fit the perspective very well, it's very flat compared to everywhere else. Maybe try to rework it so that it has a bit more perspective and that part will fit together better?

>>3492743
I strugglle a lot to make finished stuff anon, any advice you can give me?

Manga or finished paintings, I can't make it look finished.

I have used to use soft brushes a ton and people told me that was not very good, so now I only use hard brushes but I can't get soft surfaces and it stays rough and unfinished (Not like before it looked finished anyway...)

>>3492737
It would be like 10 times better as a generic cartoon instead of anime try to make a ben 10 the first generation drowing I think you can make same very cool stuff

>>3492751
i need to find my animoo style tha i like.

>>3492750
I mean dirty as in look at those scratchy lines friend. Its not about the brush, you need to be more assertive of where you place them, or clean them after you decide

>>3492754
how bout this

>>3492643
cute!

>>3492758
Yeah thats much better

>>3492485

upon posting this i realized i fucked up the left hand

>>3492972
best ITT

>>3492972
Bloggo pls

>>3492616
? What

>>3492588
"Im bad!"

"Criticism is invalid yall haters"

self hating furry illustrat. DRAW. SOMETHING. ELSE. Just to study. Then you can draw your furries compotently

Im a fucking furry and im yelling at you to not be a furry ffs

>>3492759
like that face
hands are trash though, especially her left hand

>>3490342
I like this design, I feel like I get a lot about the character by looking at him.

>>3493039
Here's a study I did.

>>3492737
you forgot to fill the background between the legs

>>3492972
There, now it's art.

>>3492380

>>3493128
Thanks, is there anything you would do to improve it?

>>3493128
Also, what do you get from the character?

I have this character sheet that I made a while ago for a "Webcomic" that I'm planning to

>>3492295
Four threads. You posted this image in four seperate threads. Which means you're smart enough to know how to post the exact same image four times, yet stupid enough not to realize why you shouldn't.

>>3493724
gives me zim vibes, I like it
>>3493731
did you not even read the imgur link in his other thread? quit responding to bait and he'll leave. it could even be a shitposter trying to be funny.

Here's some of my own work, I have 2 comic projects and also the odd fanart, request or sketch OC's.

My DA and a sketch, as posted in Art Promo:

https://www.deviantart.com/dat-skullkid

>>3493809
I'd appreciate feedback on my comic projects, sweet days, a kawaii gore work:

https://www.deviantart.com/dat-skullkid/gallery/63122025/Sweet-Days-Comic

>>3493809
and i am the apocalypse, a horror nsfw work

https://www.deviantart.com/dat-skullkid/gallery/64259798/I-am-the-Apocalypse

>>3493747
Beautiful face, pose and body, i just can't understand by now how the prosthetic leg connects to the stump.
I love it as a sketch tho, very expressive!

I'm not going to critique your drawing, just giving you my opinions on your work.

>>3493809
Colors on this are blandand boring boring, there's no contrast, there's no life. It does not stand out, and it looks blurry. I think this is also a problem with your other works.
>>3493810
Ignoring the fact that it's a really weird setting, the images don't really convery any kind of gore, or cuteness. They guve me a headache not gonna lie.
>>3493812
This one's unfinished but it also doesn't stand out at all.

Looking at your deviantart, you draw pokemon asses, that's cringy and agrodulce tier. Please git gud or fuck off back to that shithole

>>3492643
>>3492972
please sir I need your blogs

>>3493823
Thank you. I´m glad it kind of works this early.

I will try to address those issues too

>>3493903

Fair enough; I don't take criticism bad even when it's harsh. Here's what I intended to do with each of them, when I worked on those:

The first pic was originally a b/w sketch I just added the red on the blood and the pink backdrop to try give it a bit more life, think b/w would be better?

Can't say I understand your point about sweet days, but I suppose it's a bit of a too niche idea to work. My idea (visualy) was to contrast the cute design of the main character and the more realistic, wet looking organs, meat and blood.

2nd comic is a wip Im uploading a page tomorrow. The story will make the human centipede look like mlp. My goal was to make the the sickest, most disturbing and gruesome webcomic you can think of.

Those were a 5 minute job each mostly for laughs, but people sure clicked on them and some gave the rest of my drawings a look, so they served their purpose.

Does this kind of stylization work for the hair? Or should I go over it and try something else

>>3494169
that looks very good anon!

>>3492658
Dropping an update on this, I actually fixed the crouching girl's pose and made her look even more like a kid. No clue what to do with the background, probs gonna hack something up

I tried polishing a turd so I can get better instead of just sketching crap and not finishing things. Honestly lads how long do you think itll take me until I can start drawing and painting decent animu grills

>>3494278
You seem to be going in the right direction anon, you're proportions are on point and her pose looks narutal. As for her flaws, her hands are strangely placed and her shoulders should be tilted a little more to make her seem more natural. Keep drawing anon, keep doing studies. The more you study from references the easier it will become to draw off your head. Also practice drawing poses, a lot of poses!

>>3494169
Look good, although too detailed for my taste. Give it more popping light

>>3494278
Just grind your ass off for 2 years and you will be fine.

i don't know where else to post this

>>3494780
Cute aneemus

Apologies for the image size, my dumb ass couldn't get it to scale properly.

Still relatively new to coloring, just wondering if lighting and values in general look okay. I think I may need to push my dark values on the white cloth a bit better, and I am at a complete loss on how to shade leather properly, so the boots are a bit of a mess imho.

Also I need to color the rigging, but I fucked up by accidentally coloring on the lineart layer, so now I need to unscrew that.

title: I know "(я знaю)"
medium: Audacity databending + SAI
date: 6/30/18
1x

New bread?

>>3495835
Wow anon you're such a good artist.