/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3490219
Thank you op. I was thinking of making one, I went to go take a shit and came back and here it is. Love

>>3490219
posted in the beginner thread but fuck it i want as much help as i can get, i desperately want to be better

I am going to need some constructive rip and tear on my over-ambitious piece. ill give a quick summary but i dont want to bog you in detail. i wanted to create a piece about a golem based on mexican folklore. i wanted it to raise alebrije (colorful fantastical creatures, painted on wood or clay) from the sands with its maracas.

biggest things that hit me are that it appears confusing instead of colorful, and that the values just arent cohesive. i dont necessarily need to save the piece, but i want to know what i did wrong so i can study it in detail next. i also think it looks more like evening and not night time, despite references of the desert at night i was using looking rather bright.
please help me become a better artist!

I put an hour more into it since last thread. is it at least more interesting now?

>>3490229
Fucking end me holy shit

>>3490231
wheres your light source

>>3490233
ambient lightly from above, and then after, once I get the design down, a flashlight pointed in the direction. I haven't quite learned the best way to do this yet, but 'mI tackling it head- on

>>3490224
In photoshop play with adjustment layers to get your contrast up (for example levels adjustment)

>>3490224
You should use the color of the moon behind the golem to highlight and define the shapes of the lower area, because as they are they lack contrast and are really hard to discern

>>3490246
currently using CSP
>>3490254
thank you for the suggestion!

>>3490266
Good shit anon.
I'd say you should fix the right hand, those fingers are looking like spaghetti.
Also might wanna edit the nose, I don't know what your character is suppose to look like but those lines you put down suggest he has some swollen as fuck fat nose.

>>3490266

I'm trying out pastel seriously. Just did this Ill post the reference. Damn those guys were good. crit the shit out it.

>>3490334
Her left shoulder is too wide and her torso seems to be on a diferent angle than her legs/pelvis. Her arm is also tilted to a different angle, higher than the ref, her hand and fingers are strange and also you butchered her butt and hips; she looks fatter in your study.
Still a pretty decent attempt, keep at it friend

My greatness is felt even if you ignore it

>>3490379
at least post something new you fucking jew, this is like a month

>>3490224
I like the mood and idea a lot. The only thing I think I can suggest is making the mountains a bit darker since the moon is behind them. Also adding areas that are highlighted by the moon.
I also notice as if the perspective is a bit off. For example, we are looking at golem from behind, but I still see the top part of its head and don't see the bottom part of his torso. Maybe I'm wrong though.


Painted this from a screenshot from "Where the wild things are". Any crit? I feel like it's boring because it lacks any subject. But the scope was just to catch the forest environment mood.

>>3490399
> from behind
I wanted to say from below

fucc

Last drawing I did, it was just a morning sketch yesterday before I went to the gym. Crit me, I have no idea what I'm doing.

>>3490508
>>3490551
I love /draw/'s consistency

I don't normally do full paintings so any crit on this would be greatly appreciated

>>3490224
This is such a freakin' cool idea

>>3490508
>>3490266
blog?

>>3490625
whoops, posted a huge image, here's a smaller version

>>3490626
Nice edges, maybe the focal point could be centered more. Composition studies could be good practice.

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here's sketch wip, please don't hold back:

>>3490219
The girl needs something pretty bad.

She needs a Miracle

started this small landscape, gonna do more to it tomorrow

>>3490659
post reference?

>>3490663
Birdy is super fucking pretty.

>>3490266
What kinda brush are you using anon?

I posted this last thread but I don't know if anyone saw it.

>>3490659
Looks nothing like the ref anon

>>3490688
your cast shadows look god damn terrible do more form studies

>>3490382
started blocking in the shading it, its obviously not even near finished but it want to know if my shadows are in the right places so i don't start turd polishing.

>>3490219
Small update, thoughts?

>>3490690
I can't tell what you are trying to get at here but... uhh. that's the point. I'm not trying to copy the ref. You see non, I use reference as a way to make something new. Like as a visual library kind of thing. I can use a dozen images per figure to help get the anatomy, lighting, or whatever else more accurate.

This is what artists do. Literally every single professional artist works like this. Literally all of them.

I'm having a hard time explaining this to you people because I think you guys might actually be retarded.

>>3490639
Thanks that was actually super helpful. I tried to rearrange the stars to kinda point toward the tower but your post made me realize the whole composition is kind of awkward so I'm gonna end it here and pay more attention to the comp from the start next time.

Also I like your little four-armed guy. I think you could bump up the contrast a little bit though, values all seem pretty close together and it's kinda hard to read.

I posted this in the traditional general thread but got no replies. Been working on this for like a day or two. Tear it up, let me have it.

i feel like im fucking around without understanding colours too much. can someone give me some colour theory basics?

>>3490945
Not much to tear up - it has the right idea, just needs refinement.

1) You shouldn't have harsh sharp outlines like that if you want to go for a realistic quality. Rather, you want to have soft, lost and found edges, and very few hard edges.

2) You need to render your values a bit darker, give the face some range, give the hair some volume. Face and all the features on the face are rounded. Give it that quality by pushing your darks so you can have some space for your midtones.

3) Do a bit more studying on facial features. Her nose seems too big and lacks structure, her brows too straight, and the nodules at the side of the lips are not that long. Again, are you going for realism?

Grab a portrait from Nathan Fowkes or one of the other contemporary realists and try to replicate the same dark quality they have. Go as dark as you can with your material.

>>3490958
Thanks a lot. I'm was not aiming for total realism, but if you think I could be less harsh on the outlines, I could do that next time, as I plan to do a couple more of these. I'll be more careful on the facial features too.

I had figured I needed to go a bit darker in places. I'll check out some Fowkes and darken it up.

>>3490625
Thanks, anon. I was only looking for some c&c, I'm glad you wanna see more of my stuff. Be warned though; I'm super inconsistent

http://quiet-deity.tumblr.com/

>>3490996
You may like works by Mucha, I think this one isn't too far off from what you might be going for:

https://upload.wikimedia.org/wikipedia/commons/c/c0/Jaroslava_Mucha_by_Alfons_Mucha.jpg

Pay attention to where and how he varies line thickness and how it represents lights and forms. There is a lot of detail and thinking even in a relatively simple sketch like this.

Look around, I'm sure you can find plenty to study from. Fowkes was one example and he uses charcoal which can go very dark to give him the contrast he likes.

>>3491019
Oh word, no wonder I like your stuff, I follow you already. Keep up the great work dude!

A few things I've been working on

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>>3491044

>>3491033
Neat! thanks sempai!

>>3490846
Aand im done with this one. any crits?

>>3491042
>>3491044
>>3491046
Sicknasty/10

>>3490219
What do you guys think of shit like this? I know there's not much skill involved and I won't actually improve much from drawing stuff like this, but I like the results.

>>3491090

>>3491091

>>3491093

>>3491096
5/5
How is this style called anyway. Or is it just low skill shit you draw at the beginning but cringe at later on.

>>3491090
I'm kinda really embaressed posting my stuff in here when compared to all you guys drawings. It seems like even beginners are 10 steps above me but at the same time I dig my "work". Is there even hope for me?

Here's some WIPs & sketches that are at various levels of completion, trying to experiment with some color schemes. Which of these is the weakest to you, either in color, subject, composition, etc? Which is your favorite?

>>3491106
dude, if you're happy with what you're doing, keep doing it. Knowing how to draw figuratively is not the end all be all of art. And you'll probably learn how to shapes you think are beautiful, which is really important, for figurative artwork too. p.s. check out peter draws: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=XTDp8ReSpxU&t=

>>3490662
I ended up finishing this for the hell of it.

>>3491044
this ones my favorite, but it loses something at the bottom half. Would you ever consider making something with guns? Like a shootout? Not even with a ton of people, but this one just screams "climactic shootout between antagonist and protoganist", but instead it's more swords. If you like swords that's fine, just my two cents.

>>3491090
Honestly, it's not the type of art I am to create, but I do like looking at it. I feel like this kinda stuff makes good murals...would look cool on some wall somewhere, imo.

>>3491113
Yea that's what I'm doing atm. But even stuff like you posted seems impossible for me. There is so much depth/detail/shadows involved, all my drawings look like they were made by kindergarden kids in comparison.
I'm not even mad about it, but it seems like people have different skill caps and I'm probably not gonna go that far. I have a really hard time wrapping my head around stuff on paper. Thanks for the encouragement anyway dude.

>>3491112
5 is my least favorite, I'm not a fan of really anything going on,but I seriously love 1 and 3. Do you have a blog?

>>3491131
That's what anyone could hope for, that people enjoy it. I think I make up my lack of skill by having it "pop" and it's simplicity.

few hours of oil painting

>>3491044
What's the idea behind this? I just noticed the fucking orchestra at the top. Looks sick

How am I doing on perspective here? Something feels off and I'd like a 2nd opinion, plz

>>3491184
F

;_;7

>>3490551
I've seen your instagram. You can do better

>>3490224
Lad I dunno why, but that Mexican shake shake thing in the beast's right-hand doesn't seem like it's holding it. My mind keeps on thinking its floating in its hands.

>>3491458
Noted. Thanks!

>>3491042
>>3491044
>>3491046
give me your blog sir

>>3490659
you should stick to posting here instead of /alt/. The other general is way too retarded for anything non-anime

>>3491135
Thanks! 5 is actually one of my favorites of the bunch, while 1 is bothering me the most (I think the tree shapes on the mound to the left could be better). My Instagram is: >>3477203

simply sketch i did at work in a few hours would like some critiique

>>3491562
This.

>>3490927
Thanks. Yours is looking better, nicely done.

I've learned to view my painting in both an extremely dark room and extremely bright room because the eyes adjust too much in only one.

>>3491184
F

6 million wasn't enough.

yeah i couldnt figure out the mouth

>>3490219

>>3492284

>>3492284
do you hate women? what is your message supposed to be?

random sketch

>>3492308
It's supposed to be criticising how some women can be manipulative and uncaring, and they like to toy with the hearts of men. And yet there are men out there who outright worship them, simply because they're total stunners.

Of course, not all women are like this, but some are. Some men, too.

>>3492327
you need to be careful about the way you convey things in art because regardless of what your intention was, your intention doesn't equal your impact. it just looks like you hate women who show their bodies/you think theyre all manipulative sluts. that message does resonate with some people (incels) but boy I hope that wasn't what you were going for. I think there are better ways to convey your message

>hating women that show their bodies
Literally said the opposite, I just don't like attention whores. AKA, intent is everything. Doing it for the sake of art and as appreciation of the human form is different than posting your tits with flash photography in order to get likes.

>women being manipulative
That's just true though. Maybe if you take into consideration of everything I've been through you would be able to understand a little bit of the women hate. Not everyone has had the same experiences as you.

>sluts
No, not all. A lot though. There is a massive societal shift that is against long term relationships and pro short term instant gratification. Just look at Tinder. This goes for men and women, it's just women have all the power when it comes to these kind of things. Again, just look at major events that have happened recently. The whole "Ashley Madison" thing where almost every single account was male with almost no female accounts. Women have the power here to do the right thing and they are failing hard.

> think there are better ways to convey your message
Stupid people are going to stupid no matter what. All of these things I have explained in detail and you fucking retards still project your own horseshit onto my words. It's absolutely incredibly how many times I have to repeat myself.

>>3492331
This is the person who drew the image here. I didn't write the post with the four greentexts, just want to get that out.

But I understand. Thank you for not being rude.

What's wrong?

>>3492331
The message is fine,m some women are like that, like he said soime guys are too. It's art, he can make whatever the fuck he wants to. Be less fragile, it's social commentary.

>>3492354
why did you pretend to be the original artist? that is so weird. anyway you need to chill and maybe get therapy. also btw intent is NOT everything thats a really ignorant thought!

boi

Portrait practice

>>3492413
This character is off-centered of composition. He hides on the background.

>>3492284
>>3492308
>>3492327
>>3492331
>>3492354
And here I was thinking that it was just a picture of a thicc big tiddy monster girl.

Man, art is like, really deep n' stuff. Who knew?

fugg

>>3492437
I don't know why, but I found this guy to be really cute.
It's like a shark/dog-penis monster from silent hill.
The only thing I would critique is the leg placements. They seem too close together. How would it walk?

Something feels off. The left arm will be behind an object so dont worry about that.

>>3492688
Her arm is a little long, but other than that, it looks good so far.

>>3492768
reminds me of Jennifer Gennari's stuff

>>3492413
Well done

>>3492688
yea.. her legs are going in front of her and the pelvis is tilted too much

>>3490219
one of my first drawings on a tablet. some tips and critique?

>>3492375
she's got a cross eye going but other than that looks pretty cool

>>3492413
>>3493143
group your values better
you have your extreme lights and your extreme darks, but most of your values are in the middle. readability increases with the easy separation of light and dark, and with most of your values in the middle it will make your works look cluttered or muddy in a sense.
push your lights toward the lights and the darks toward the darks to fix

I'm trying a comic in an R.B. Fuller style, mixed with Watterson's panel layout.

>>3493369
Gotta draw and ink a few more panels. It's done in a Sunday newspaper comic format circa 1995, my ref is from 1935. I believe I'm drawing at half the size of the original (20x30")

Still trying to figure out digital painting -_-
Didn't block in the shapes at first so it's all fucking muddy and shit

>>3493437
aaand started this one today

>>3493442
You know you're allowed to use more than just a 100 opacity round brush? Its holding you back.

>>3493454
Yeah I started in with a flatter brush, it seems a bit more intuitive when it comes to blending and texture...I honestly don't really know what I'm doing and need to watch more ctrl paint vids lmao

>>3492284

Oh hey I recognize this, you know, from the other two threads you posted it in:

>>3491130
>>3492185

>>3493113
Made some more

>>3493575
I do like the direction it's going, but it needs some work. They're very anorexic-looking, and their bone structure is kinda wonky. Namely, the woman in the dress' hips are way too low and squared. (If that is supposed to be a genetic female) Also, is the giant chick supposed to be an actual giant?

L1A1

>>3493567
Cool. So you do a refined outline sketch, then paint under THEN over it?

>>3493567
>>3493605
Also, blog?

LaLaLa

Sorry if this offends anyone.

>>3493661
Blog pls

>>3493653
You too

That horse is amazing, love the style and shading

>>3493662
Thanks. I don't really post much to my dA/Tumblr/ArtStation because I do a lot of fundamentals practice and stuff that's not really portfolio-worthy.

But if you're reeeeally interested, you can find a handful of my recent paintings on dA under Akirelll.

>>3493653

>>3493662
https://www.instagram.com/jordi_milian/


Thanks man. I will post the horse some day soon

>>3490219
My old tablet died and my new one refuses to work with my desktop.

>>3490219
My old tablet died and my new one refuses to work with my desktop.

>>3493730
The bg looks great but the girl is stiff. Do a gesture and line of motion for her.

>>3493795
I know, it's just a placeholder for now.

Perhaps she should be bending backwards a bit more?

Super duper rough 40min. sketch for an album cover I have to do. It's supposed to be about a guy who's "dancing with the devil". I know it's a huge cliche but who am I to judge. Not my fucking album.

Her eyes are gonna be red and she has dem demon hands. She's kinda showing 'us' that she's the devil but the guy doesn't know any better...

Final piece needs to be some nice line art. (gonna do it in Procreate). They want a red circle on the BG, the characters need to be in color and they want some nice "Alphonse Mucha-esque shit" surrounding the circle... Would like some tips on composition, poses and other stuff that pops into your heads.

>>3493834
Line of motion goes through the whole body.

just a comfy study

>>3491114
I put this into the background of this painting

How am I doing? Tear me apart, bros

>>3494000
I feel like I should be seeing her other leg somewhere. The foot in the back looks like it's just floating in the air behind her leg.

>>3493908
Might not work for the feeling that you're going for, but here are a few suggestions.
Flex them hands a little. Make it look like she's going to really dig those claws in. Maybe widen her eyes a little, bare her fangs with a wicked grin.

any tips on color? it just doesn't seem right...

>>3494101
too saturated, colors don't mix well together

>>3493605

>So you do a refined outline sketch, then paint under THEN over it?
I put just basic colours and simple shading under lineart then paint over it, rendering details and removing lines
>Blog
https://klinckfoster.tumblr.com

First time I have done traditional work in year. When the go around comes, I'll have the forms better prepared and her design better thought out. Adding a blue pencil (for that purpose), some brushes, and an inkwell to my kit (more consistency).

>>3490219
Has anyone here read The Natural Way to Draw? I am currently going through it and am having a hard time understanding cross contours. The author says one should do a sheet of them. Does he mean first make the contour and then do the cross contours? Should I use real human models or just objects?

Anybody have any idea?

>>3494918
>was right side up everywhere else I posted it
>won't let me delete it

Here is the Tumblr link.

https://hardstonesmcflintcock.tumblr.com/image/175378375873

>>3493943
other than it being super comfy and pretty, her neck is kinda fucky. on the left silhouette, either pull in from the chin or give more room to attach to the chest

>>3493730
i like the color choices you made, also it's interesting, but I agree with another anon, that the girl is stiff.

>>3493661
Exploring this shading technique

A guro swimsuit model.

>>3495348

Can you post more? I'm interested in how you use shape.

>>3495406

Sharp work mate, who influences you?

Pic is what I did tonight.

>>3495265
What about now? I'm going for a pose of someone who is somewhat incompetent at wood splitting

>>3494156
>>3494101
is this better?

any other critiques?

>>3495753
it doesn't look like she's holding the axe on her right hand at all, not sure about the pose, why not search for incompetent wood splitters on youtube or something. There must be something you can use as reference on how not to wood split.

Why not have her hold the axe down and to a side like if she was holding a 2-hand weapon?

>>3495768
It looks better anon

Posting this garbage I did for a drawthread

>>3495753
it doesn't look like she's holding the axe on her right hand at all, not sure about the pose, why not search for incompetent wood splitters on youtube or something. There must be something you can use as reference on how not to wood split.

Why not have her hold the axe down and to a side like if she was holding a 2-hand weapon?

>>3495768
It looks better anon

Posting this garbage I did for a drawthread

>>3495860
>it doesn't look like she's holding the axe on her right hand at all,
I'm not concerned about the details yet. I'm still trying to make the pose as [natural] as possible

No matter what I draw, it always seems so small

>>3495866
I think I see how it is, second pose works if the axe is supposed to be right above head. since its lacking detail it was hard to read. I also love the background btw

>>3495541
Sorry, those two designs are the only thing i did with that technike. I was inspired by Joony Hall (im not sure if its spelled right)

>>3492399
It kind of strikes me as a shallow message though. Like, there's little to no nuance to the idea, and given the proliferation of concepts such as these already being explored to death in art, nuance is the key it needs to stand out.

That and the dude didn't really reply in a "fragile" way. He was just expressing how it'd come across to some people, and I kind of saw it that way too. It didn't hurt my feelings or some shit, that's retarded.

>>3492354
your incel is showing

>>3490382
How do you begin to draw things like this?

>>3495954
Scott robertson

>>3495956
Thanks, I'll look into his books.

>>3490690
looks cuter than the ref desu

>>3495860
love it

I still don't understand mandibles!!

I want to die, brothers!

>>3496623
looks like shes holding in a fart cus shes scared itll be a shart situation

>>3496626

Burgerfat spotted.

>>3496637
no idea what that means I just know I was in that exact situation the other day and that was my posture

I'm gonna take my brain out of my skull and punt it if it forgets how to draw people standing one more time.

>>3496318
that is very cute

just a lazy charizard, its shitty I know, but I'm really improving, a couple of months ago I wouldn't be able to draw like this

fucking critique me

>>3497151
Below average

>>3497151
forgot pic

>>3490231
I don't think there are any other ways I can tinker with this, and it's already overworked. laying this one to rest.

I really wanna make a portfolio, /ic/. I'm tired of living a lie and not doing what I love for a living

>>3497151
Well I guess you're kind of a dingus. Does that help?

>>3497171
Do it. I believe in you, anon. There's a lot of peace to be found in having your actions congruent with your beliefs.

I'm designing this car and fitting the characters inside of it.

Help anons

>>3497458
Dont phone post you fag

>>3497171
I would crop it, the black is so overpowering, it is also weird that the inside of the creature has a lighter value than the surroundings

>>3497458
The middle third of the face is too long, study the loom is thirds (at least that part is not a meme)

I would also advice pausing the use of value, try to doing more studies just with line, get used to draw around the forms

>>3497543
face reference?

>>3497451
I also started drawing a model sheet of this character. Her name is Tammy and her favorite weapons are explosives. She has no story yet.

>>3497664
Do you take commissions?

>>3497458
This study is called the /beg breaker/
You have been broken

How did you guys learn how to render clothes in a somewhat realistic fashion? What exercises did you do to get good at this?

>>3497911
>tfw didn't get gud

>>3496721
The final product from this

>>3497919
looks like peleng style. very cool

>>3497911
do material and form studies

studies

>>3497777
Yes, I do! (Both sfw and nsfw) Here's some more of my work if you're interested in looking for more.

Instagram: @herrsarmiento

>>3498226
oh no

>>3498231
Uhm, sorry (?)

Some poses. Getting used to draw my characters again.

>>3497630
I’m afraid I made it up

>>3498269
should utilize reference for the stacking of features that one looks wonky

>>3498267
I really enjoy seeing that body type, seems a more natty kind of stronk woman.

>>3498272
Thanks, I'm glad you like her design.

>>3498269
god youre really stagnating its not even funny

Just did a 5-value exercise

>>3498298
is the building floating in the air? I cant tell whats going on around it

plein air in digital is weird

>>3498545
that green is too saturated

>>3494002
The leg is there and I tried to make it more noticeable with the lighting but idk how it worked out. ¯\_(ツ)_/¯ But thank you!

>>3497934
what is that woman's face trying to convey?

>>3498642
sadistic glee it looks like

>>3498642
>>3498649

"Raaar!"

Upper Portion of a piece I’m working on, tips and critique to help me improve much appreciated

Still faffing with this. Its funny it started off as a simple picture of a ghost lady with a black background now its turned into a whole shindig

>>3498997
That is just fucking nice

>>3498997
holy crap this is the best ive seen here in a while.
hows the procces on this ? did you start with strong sketch ?

share secrets.

>>3498997
why are you still posting here you already made it

>>3498997
that's really fuckin good

>>3498963
i don't know what it is but something about this screams 90s pc game box art.

>>3498997
Why is she playing a violin though.

>>3498192
Anon would you happen to have examples of what constitutes form study exercises?

>>3491807
niice. were you going for the soft feeling I get when I look at it? the vases are a bit undefined

>>3499292
My only focus was going both light and dark enough, the undefined parts are simply like that because I ran out of time.

>>3497453
great

working on cover art , not done yet

>>3498997
Tell me how you became godlike.

>>3498997
Can I please have your blog anon

>>3498997
>>3499197
This. You're too good for this bucket, nobody here but us crabs.

>>3498997
Lovely

>>3498997
>tfw im NGMI

>>3499345
it's fun to post, jesus christ. Sometimes you get good advice. I got an award actually for a piece that I posted here and got a lot of feedback on.

>>3499196
No it just sortof formed as I was making it. Started with one character, then I changed the background, thought I should add more characters then they turned into plant people, then the violin showed up and the 'story' formed.

>>3499240
I thought they were all like ghosts or something, stuck in a sort of limbo and she's remembering music or something. Not gonna lie I had this wriggling around in my mind for a while now: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DDsRfbfnC_A&t=69s

>>3499548
But did you sketched all the new things you added or painted it without sketch on the go?

Paint or no

>>3498271
Thanks I probably did that page too fast

>>3498271
It was never funny, I have always admitted to be shit. I hope to never feel satisfied about my work

I think this one is basically done

>>3499778
I think the top of her head is a bit too plain. I would develop it more before going into painting, at very least you will have a more proper sketch.

>>3499853
holy FUCK those arms
literal yaoi-hands

>>3499853
so many wrong things in this. but why the fuck is hair growing out of her vagina?

>>3499862
That looks really great so far

>>3499871
The upper lip is way too thin. the teeth are too plain, they should follow their characteristic arch, Ear should not look like that (the antihelix should cover the helix due to perspective), the right side of her face looks oddly shaped too,

>>3499902
Thanks, I had not realized how big they look

< Some progress from the previous wip

>>3499925
her lips don't look attached to her face

Trying to start selling stuff but I'm not sure how. I would rather sell things in person if I could but I'm not opposed to selling online. I'm also not sure where to go from here artistically. Thanks in advance

>>3499925
upper lip looks thin, eyes are too big they should follow their characteristic arch, does she have a mop for hair? the ear should be visible. nose looks derpy and those tits are too round.

About 2 hours in on this

>>3499853

how long does it take for you to get to this stage?

>>3498997

damn...

>>3491044
i missed you, card art anon

>>3498997
I love you

>>3499959
dont render details before you have blocked the whole piece in, faggot.

>>3499941
what are you even trying to sell? would you buy what you sell?

>>3500070
Here is something I would put on a t-shirt but am mostly interested in selling prints. someone suggested to me screen printing on to a larger canvas or something similar. I’d buy this on a t shirt

>>3500079

>>3499934
That is weird, I thought that depicting the planes around it would suffice, I think I will have to check it again

>>3499916
I will review that area. Thanks

>>3499982
That piece Took me around 15 hours, but alas as you can see there are still some issues. If you are inquiring in general, well I have been drawing for 5 years but in most of those I have had to attend to college for something not related to art (CS) and until last friday I had a full time job in IT which I managed to hold for 10 years, I am also 33, severely depressed and a 3rd world dweller so ymmv.

Some more sketches. Hopefully now that I will be able to do art full time I will become a bit less shitty

Study of a friend of mine

>>3500079
that would look neat on a tshirt
I'd suggest working on your line quality. Maybe doing the drawing on paper instead?
I get that style but theres something off with that line, maybe its the pixels? I dunno

>>3499853
whats with all the outlining? its a bit inconsistent

>>3500090
It could be because I traced it. I hate tracing but I don’t know how to transfer drawn images without doing it, so I guess I just need to get better at that. Excuse the roman numerals I removed them for a reason

weeb shit

>>3500087
Finished. I think the nose and lips could better, I jus don't know how to do it. Help.

Also, I swear the focal length is making it looked slightly fucked up in a way it doesn't in person, but. Idk.

Tried these type of pen for the first time. How did i do?

Repaint of an older painting I submitted here.

drew this black lady, based on an illustration from a danish coffee brand (cirkel kaffe)

>>3500349
always drawing the same ugly punchable face and they all look like dudes

>>3500355
Why are you so buttmad when I post?

Just ignore me, man.

>>3500356
because youre not here to get your ass kissed, youre here to get beaten to a pulp. are you too braindead to take hints with your art looking like shit?

>>3500365
Okay then, shoot me a critique. Tell me how to make a painting that's not shit.

>>3500353
300+ iq

>>3500376
you dont deserve a crit, if you havent develop eyes to see how shit you are then there no point.

>>3500383
If you're not going to give me a critique, or even a modicum of advice, then what is the literal point of you?

Do you have a small dick or something? Just ignore me then.

>>3500365
we almost went a whole thread without cringy edgelord bullshit

Have some monster girl trash, Im still working on.

>>3500349
I like her face but I'm afraid her neck is just too messy, you probably tried to do it painterly but instead you're destroying its form.

First thing I would address is making the neck narrower on the bottom, those brown strokes are making it look wider and working against the cylindrical form of the neck

>>3500094
Thanks.

I tried to emphasize some forms, I hope this is more proper, I also changed a bit the extended arm and added more cast shadows and highlights, the hands should be a bit more proper now.

>>3500254
Cool style, but the body is facing two different directions

>>3500349
I'm a little too /beg/ to give you a crit but I think it looks nice

>>3500365
(You)

>>3500404
>>3500403
>>3500431
poor /beg/ babies cant take a hit roflmao

>>3500349
If you make the eye highlights more punchy/bright she won't look dead. Aside from that it's breddy nice

>>3500442
>m-muh /beg/
Okay post your art then retard

>>3500442
What's the problem, suddenly lost the ability to post your art?

>>3500442
>Fucking with multiple ic anons at the same time

>>3500460
>>3500451
>>3500445
aw poor babies, need some attention? ofc you do youre just a bunch of teenies

>>3500493
>being unable to move your arm to post your own art thus demonstrating the fact that you are qualified to competently critique the art of others
>still hasn't posted it and is just damage controlling
What is it like to be physically and intellectually disabled?

>>3500355
Anon, cut it out, stop picking fights. If you have actual critique, then give it. You're just being a meanie.

>>3500349
Hey, anon. To my eye, her head and neck are not correctly aligned. Her neck is too swoopy in the back and too far forward/close to her chin. Try moving it back a smidge, if that makes sense. Btw, I don't think she looks like a dude.

>>3500494
>damage controlling on an ANONYMOUS imageboard
aaaaaahahahahah, you kiddos love to be right dont you. sure smells like summer

>>3500496
Anon, why are you bein' like this? :(

>>3500496
>still haven't posted their art
>is only capable of posting like a facebook retard
Maybe if you spent less time acting like a retarded newfag you would have something to actually post.

>>3500499
dosnt matter if i post or not, youre the one whos got their panties in a twist. Ahaaaha

>>3500408
Is she gonna be sittin' on something or is she just being drippy while floating there?

My advice: try giving her a drippy pose that isn't floating aimlessly.

I just started painting but I think Im slightly understanding things

>>3500501
In my opinion, the only people who are worth listening to have some skill to back their words up. Want me to actually get my panties in a twist? Then post your work.
>dosnt matter if i post or not
It doesn't matter if you don't draw either, in fact I'm thankful that you've dropped out of the race before you've even begun. Means less competition.

>>3500508
oh my sweet child o mine. youre angry, on an anonymous board. youre definitely underage.

>>3500513
>it is someone else's job to feel any emotion about whether or not your work ethic sucks balls

>>3500520
huh? just stop posting my sweet boi

>>3500544
>huh

>>3500355
There. Change the subject matter enough for you, anon?

>>3500409
>>3500444
>>3500495

Hey, thanks for the critiques. It definitely looks weird to me now, you guys make some good points. I'll try to be more accurate in the future.

>>3500353
>black lady
nigger

>>3500502
Shes floating, because shes base off a gazer.

Although Ill admit I need to work on poses and gestures because they feel too stiff.

>>3493369
Update. Study based off of a comic from late April of 1944. The lead just gets sidetracked.

>>3498205
>studies
>no ref
ok

>>3498530
I'll redo it indeed

>>3490219
BANG! BANG! BANG!

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>>3501294
this is awesome, blog?

Any tips how to do studies properly?

>>3500783
wow that was almost funny in 2009

>>3490266
don't like how it looks but at least i finished something
>>3490269
fix'd
>>3490625
yaow12.tumblr.com its kinda dead but there's still lots of stuff there
>>3490684
sketchbook pro default pen brush

I know I really fucked up the arm and the left eye, but what other mistakes did I make?
Is this boring to look at?

>>3501980
The right eye*

>>3501626

Thanks anon. I post most of my stuff on tumblr

http://andreclemente.tumblr.com/

>>3501980
no its nice

Somehow I thought this thread was on page ten.

Anyway, new thread >>3502541