/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Excellent choice for OP pic. We can all learn from that.

>>3393518
she like "the fuc bro, who left the light on lol"

anything look off about the colors or composition?

>>3393537
i thought it had a nice mood to it. probably needs to be viewed in candlelight for the lighting to come off as intended.

>>3393652
Given that the ass and chunky legs is what people would tend to stare at most, it lacks some variety in lighting and color in the area with the most interest. Try to add some more subtle tones and tuny color variations to keep the eye entertained while it stares at the ass and hips. I like it though, it's very nice.

>>3393699
thanks for the advice! ill flesh out the area some more.

>>3393518
All ya'll need jesus.

>>3393518
I think we should set a rule to only use classy ''ecchi'' pics for OP, there will be less complaining about and in the porn threads

>>3394409
what's ecchi? teasing pinup style stuff?

>>3393518
All my Instagram is full of it, I just simply love to draw it. @oss_451

Advice on proportions, perspective, and anatomy are welcome.

>>3395160
the positioning of her left leg doesn't seem possible.

>>3395160
Perf...
>tail
wat

>>3395416
Yes, she has a tail that morphs into a metric fuck ton of things. Guilty Gear is fucking weird. Despite being a huge fan of it, the characters are as if a belt fetishist blasted metal music while on acid, and created better, aesthetic, and balls to the wall insane designs that that dude from Square Enix ever did.

>>3395412
Advice on how to fix it? It seems alright to me.

>>3395422
I think you just forgot to erase a line. Her ankle and foot are phasing through the tail

>>3395444
Better?

>>3395454
why does he have no butthole

wip

>>3395458
looks like he needs to see a doctor

>>3393652
If there's one thing i've learned it's that if people can't tell in a millisecond glance whats in the thumbnail...they wont click on it. Backgrounds that overpower the subject of the picture will do this even if it's technically accurate. Lighten up her body, add light in that triangle between her legs. The shaded area not directly hit by sunlight could use more bounce light especially since the sheet/blanket is white.

>>3394378
There's plenty of R34 of him already.

what do you guys think?

>>3395708
Bretty gud. What's your process for coloring?

>>3395710
>lineart
>colors
>multiply+screen
> idgaf stage where i just paint over everything
>some final effects

It is a really hairy process and I am currently trying to work out a different workflow

>>3395708
what's your nationality?

>>3395708
Her left leg is in disagreement with the lighting of the rest of the body. It's so sharp it's implying it's coming from almost directly behind it, when in reality is further up. It should have a more gradual transition to shadow.

>>3395708
It looks really good but the thickness of the thighs are mismatched. Not sure if you can still fix it at this stage

>>3395708
Here's some things i noticed. Remember that the upper arm from the top of the shoulder to the crook of the elbow is the same length as the forearm+the hand to the middle knuckle without the fingers.

>>3395755
Also lengthened the lower legs and then re-pasted the feet over thats why it looks doubled.

>>3395708
she has rat feet

>>3395581
thanks for the crit, anon. the background stealing focus is a concern, but i'm worried that lightening her up would break the mood. i've ended up actually going a bit darker overall, at least so far. struggling with the reflected light right now, but yeah, i agree -- there needs to be more of it.

>>3395849
This is appealing af. Only thing you need is a stronger bounce/secondary light (something cold like blue or cyan) coming from left below opposite to the sunlight. Just go subtle and you'll keep the atmosphere intact, but gain a lot of readability.

>>3395849
too dark mang
just my 0.02€

>>3395911
thanks for the advice. im trying to add some ambient blues from the left, but i cant get it looking right. i like the thought, though. might just push the reflected light from the blanket a bit harder and have that flesh out the forms if i cant get the cooler blue light looking right.

>>3395961
oh that's really neat. thanks anon! the green lighting suffusing the entire scene gives it a more fantasy-like mood, which is cool, but not quite what i'm going for. what kinda adjustment layer were you using? it's not just a level correction thing, is it?

>>3396051
A bit of color balance and vibrance
As well as painting on top on a screen layer for both sky light and bounce light

>>3396055
cheers!

>>3395736
>>3395739
>>3395755
Thanks for the pointers. I reworked it.

How's it looking so far?

>>3396191
Wrong version. Apologies.

>>3395458
MarmaladeMum/10

>>3396192
MarmaladeMum/10

Not very far through yet and i get bored of each part so i jump around all the time.

Woah, why is this porn thread so much higher quality than the last few? (I probably just jinxed it.)

>>3396864
It's because of the classy pic in OP. Made everyone ambitious.

>>3395464

Drunken 4 am drawing for /v/

>>3398680
Love the lines. Great work.

>>3398674
You really don't know how to draw men do you? It's pretty sad.

>>3398975
When I work out the colors and the light source, I will begin to detail Ky's musculature.

Love men, do you?

>>3398975
And I can't post this due to the ban that would result from it, but I drew a Stupid Sexy Argoniain a little while back.

do you fap to your own lewd artwork? I've read a lot of artists that claim they don't. I definitely do.

>>3399041
if I dont get a boner drawing it then it doesnt deserve to get posted

You guys all so good, please shit on my dreams

>>3399111

>>3395160
>focus is on Ky's ass instead of Dizzy's

>>3399210
Dizzy's ass and thighs next once this one is line-worked, while the current piece is receiving critiques.

>>3399112
She's missing her waist my dude. People have bellies.

first go at drawin porn
i am, a guro fan

>>3399476
nice, keep at it.

>get into niche fetish community (not furry)
>get hundreds of dollars in comm offers not even a week after I open my account

>>3398975
>>3398674
I like how they drew him with a cute booty and shapely thighs, go away anon. It's nice to see some male body diversity in porn instead of super ripped or fat old hentai grandpa.

>>3399573
Your pic makes me think you mean people are commissioning you for porn of the humanoid Neopets characters (fairies) but there's no way that's what it is...

>>3399041
I usually can't fap to my artwork, bet there was one time when I was fapping to pictures in a gallery and then there was mine there. It felt a bit wrong, like fapping to your sister, but it was hot and I came.

>>3399573
people just want to be able to see what you are drawing cause your public stuff can be seen only by ants.
best paywalling ever. gg.

>>3399573
welcome to 2005

>>3399620
>bet
*but
very slow fix

wip

>>3399902
uh not sure that's possible anon
try doing a quick side view version to see if it would work

Any tips on drawing a good dick? Been meaning to do some life study, but haven't gotten around to it... But if you have any tips, that'd be rad

>>3399918
Whats not possible? Lying on your back?

>>3399931
Possibly the way the head is angled upwards to have her lick her own breast?
Or how awkward her arms are. It doesn't look like she's laying on her back... I'm still not completely sure what's going on in the image

>not that anon btw

>>3399930
You're probably better off studying art of dicks you think look good anon

>>3400016
Yeah, I figured... It's always worth asking around though.
>Thanks anon

Plz rate. Also looking for a trap drawing community like a discord server or sth.

>>3400078
Quality except the top's thigh's are fuckin MASSIVE. Too massive

>>3399284
Update

>>3399930
if you are going for a robot dick, exotic erotics have a line of robot dildos, check it out for inspo

>>3400186
Make the hands of the gir bigger. Fingers have 3 segments not 4. Put the left hand index finger of the guy on the boob otherwise it looks like he is grabbing an empty space

WIP for an OC. No name yet.

Was actually thinking of doing a doujin with the robots. Wasn't able to find porn with muscle-ish girls to reference though so I'm having problems retaining muscle consistency from pose to pose. Might need to study anatomy harder.
>>3400440
>>3400442
Digging it but the outlines are way too thick, you should try being more lax with it like with the usual lines you use.

>>3400869
>Wasn't able to find porn with muscle-ish girls
girlwithmuscle.com for anything that doesn't show tits or genitals
stalk /s/ for muscle girl threads if you want the final details, there's often one either in the catalog or in the archive

I like well hung girls. Where can I git gud?

Hi guys, this is not my drawing but I want to ask you a question about boob jobs or "paizuri" in pictures like this, if the man is laying down, what possible position does the girl has? Fucks my brain.

>>3401109
In that particular picture it seems the guy's legs hang off the bed side and she is on her knees between his legs.Other options for paizuri is on her belly or on her knees in kind of a doggy position over him.

>>3401002

Any glaring errors? Feel like the perspective on the knees is off.

>>3401306
You, uh, have more than a few issues going here.

>>3400089
iono i kinda love how massive they are

Rate my color theory chaps.
And by rate I mean please help me this shit is so fucking hard

Hi! I want to earn money and I like drawing very much, but now I'm only learning. I'm ready to draw everything, all kinks like diapers etc. Should I target at furries or humans to find people ready to pay me? What kinks are more popular and profitable?

>>3396851
How this turned out. The start of a series

>>3399579
>>3399578
>>3401629
Find the closest beginner thread and stay in there, forever.

Reviving thread with progress update. Critiques welcome.

>>3399902
dun

>>3404614
aryan edit

>>3404615
>>3404614
god its so obvious you have absolutely no sense of proportion or anatomy and just stick randomly traced pieces together

>>3404733
I got paid $200 to do this. I really dont care.

Recently started drawing lewds. I'm here for some tips and pointers.

>>3403782
Love your stuff, dude! Maybe the ribbon highlights could be a little more subtle. It depends on what material you're going for, though.

Here is the version without the cum. The one with will be finished by tomorrow night.

>>3404835
Dude how. My shit is ok but you got paid fucking 200 for that? Holy shit

WIP

>>3404846
ahegao is cute but the angle makes it look like she’s breaking the right guys dick off
looks really good overall tho

>>3393518
Old style like this

>>3404917
A lot of times you don't need skills to get paid. All you need is a loaded client with bad critical vision. That artwork is indeed really bad.

>>3404835
>I really dont care.
Why are you posting here then?

>>3405168
Dont you draw anything else besides some brainlets nuts getting crushed and him cumming form that for some reason?

>>3405236
Better to just ignore him imo. You know how they say we put our likeness in the characters we draw? Probably his cranium looks exactly like that. Just let the guy have his fun. He's incapable of improving because of his condition.

>>3405176
To share my art.

>>3405401
>>3405175
>this art is bad because its not the way i would draw it!

lol you guys are funny

>>3405454
This thread is for critique. If you don't care and only want to share your "art", use deviantart, twitter, tumblr, etc. for this.

>>3405459
Oh yeah sorry forgot that a universal sense of beauty in humans doesnt exist in the world. Thats why all those ads out there world portay retarded and deformed cripples.

>>3404615
>>3404614
>vulva on public mound
you gotta learn how female genitals are placed if you want to be a porn artist lel

>>3405459
That art is bad because it's technically bad, not because the style is unappealing. Face it, you will never get good cause you have microcephaly.

>>3405615
He doesn't care. He got paid 200 monopoly dollars for it. LMAO.

Do you guys have pic of vaginas/cunts/pussays/crotch areas drawn only with lines on paper? I mean ink, not with half tones, paintings just ink and all, i just cant draw all that shit hanging from gals lol, always ended up with bunch of scribbles

>>3404919
>>3404867
Grill my stuff, please? I will be grinding fundamentals tomorrow, and want to make every hour spent ironing out my weaknesses count.

>>3406439
Your stuff doesn't really need to be grilled in my opinion. The way you're drawing now I believe any minor problems you're having will naturally straighten out over time. Probably not much time considering how much you draw all the time. You've already greatly improved your control when it comes to over saturating your colors which was my only real issue with your work before. Sometimes your drawings are a little stiff which to me looks like you're thinking too hard about the drawing but again I think that's going to become less of a problem as you continue. Maybe to help it along you could look at some more cartoony works like Dean Yeagle or Bruce Timm to help internalize those loose and flowy gestures. I see people complain about your males a lot, I think you could work that out by looking up and copying some male anatomy diagrams and drilling that a little. Other than that I think you should just keep going.

>>3399578
>>3399579
>>3405168

>>3395160

One outsider note - I like that you showed smooth male butt in fucking position.

However strange it might be, porn like that is very appealing from some years now. See Teenfidelity and any porn with Ryan Madison - there's a lot of shots showing him fucking in anal doggy or on straight missionary, but both his buty and female performer are visible.

See pic related, what I mean about aesthetic smooth fucking.

Critique any of my shit pls

Trying to be more efficient with the workflow.

>>3404921
You're right, I need to be careful with the nondescript men and their position. I forgot about the frenulum in that image, too.

>>3405467
I'll post my art as i please. And the more attention you give me the more happy i am. I hope you stay triggered by my success and my art forever.

>>3405491
Nigga what? lol
You must live on some alien planet where everyone agrees with what you find attractive but on planet EARTH, everybody in the worlds dick doesnt twitch according to what anon sees as a "universal beauty standard."


Whine harder everyone. It keeps me horny

>>3406984
>everybody in the worlds dick doesnt twitch according to what anon sees as a "universal beauty standard."
readingg comprehension is lost on you. Either that or you lack critical thinking and look the same as the artists retards suffering from microcephaly.

>>3400186
there really is no excuse for getting the hand wrong with a pose that easy
just curl up your left hand and draw it

>>3406876
poor technical execution aside, you should draw more heterosexual content and stop being a faggot

>>3406876
your poses are somewhat varied but are a bit stiff and the expressions dead/boring. overall its not bad crop but it could be much better. Try to push those things, more, for better erotic appeal.

>>3406923
You have a really appealing style my dude. Just keep doing what you're doing imo.

Also, pic attached is a more smooth and polished (Ishikei-ish) coloring style I am trying. What do you think?

>>3407177
looks great aside from the hair

>>3407186
Agreed, I should have put more work into it. Rendering hair is super hard to me. :\

>>3393518
WIP. Any advice is appreciated.

Is this art? Am I creating art?

>>3408112
you're creating art buddy

>>3408135
This makes it all worth while

>>3408112
I guess.
Unappealing as fuck, but we can't have everything.

>>3408161
How to make it less unappealing?

>>3408179

>>3408192
This doesn't help.

>>3408226
ISnt the whole point that its unappealing? A huge fat purple hairy woman with a disgusting big nose and everybodies mouths are comically big. This is a charicature, they arent appealing. If the artists himself wants it to be appealing and dpesnt see how fugly the faces look than he is beyond help-

>>3408231
This is more useful. mouths and nose too big. Thanks. Here's a work in progress maybe you can help me fix some mistakes early.

>>3408250
Please go troll somewhere else. It's obvious your skill level is high enough for you to understand how to make commercially appealing smut.
Stop asking bait questions. You aren't fooling anyone, dumbass.

>>3408264
I suppose what I'm asking is, aside from the subject matter, how do I improve it?

>>3408281
Grind fundamentals and keep doing what you're doing. You are no beginner. You'll improve eventually.

finished this recently
i think this is the last granny-pic for a while. i want to focus on more normal characters, from overwatch or disney/dreamworks

>>3408683

>>3408250
finished piece

>>3407629
>>3407629
Here’s my work from today. Does anyone know a way to downscale your pics w/out making them so blurry? Would appreciate the help.
As for the drawing, I think it’s turning out pretty well, but I’m unsatisfied with the hair. Will try to improve for next update.

>>3408683
Hey, I like this.

>>3407629
try doing that thing with your arms holy shit

>>3408914
It's called reverse prayer. It's used for bondage because of how uncomfortable it is

Critiques?

>>3409036
She looks a little cross-eyed.

>>3409039
Don't see it, I'm afraid.

>>3409047

>>3409036
I don't think her left hand looks very good (it's also a bit too small). Her hair looks fantastic though, and her face is very cute.

>>3409039
NVM. Saw it and fixed it.

>>3409057
Definitely better.

>>3408876
I just realized my question about downsizing was really dumb. Obviously it's going to look blurrier if there's fewer pixels. I'm just used to looking at it at really high resolution while I'm working on it.

>>3409057
So fucking cute holy shit

>>3408112
>>3408250
>>3408860
Blog?

>>3409168
peckerw00d.tumblr.com

>>3393652
>>3395708
>>3395961
>>3396077
>>3406923
>>3407177
Good shit.
The rest in here is unfappable.

>>3408876
Pretty much finished at this point. Still want to improve at drawing hair. I also think my line art could improve a lot. I think I’ll try using a thinner, textured brush next time to make my art look less plastic-like. Any other advice is welcome.

>>3396077
Great improvement!

>>3408112
>>3408860
Your blobs look like that dude from Moana and your "normal" women look like men. The tumblr filename doesn't surprise me in the slightest, they seem to fetishize ugliness there.

Base colors 1/2

Cerise Maddow

Base colors 2/2

Pit and Palutena

>>3409793
just giving the people what they want.

>>3409814
You should rather draw what you like imo. It's better in the long run.

>>3409810
>>3409812
What stands out most in your art is how over detailed it is. That's the most glaring problem. Second thing is very bad perspective. You are trying to draw poses that are way beyond your skill level, which is good, but it must suck being a person that commissions you. You should keep this kind of pointless perspective experiments for your studies, not for this kind of finished work. Pick simpler POVs and stop constructing every muscle and bone in the body every single time. The more you overdo it, the more unappealing all your stuff looks. Realize this already.

>>3409812
I get what you're trying to do with the arms but it looks unsettling as fuck

>>3409570
Try to pay attention to perspective especially for the legs. I apologize if the redline doesnt help, just ignore it if thats the case

>>3409837
>>3409843

The lines are phased out when the tones are in place.

As for perspective, you're going to have to demonstrate where I made the mistakes in composition and proportions.

>>3409810
Fix her left hand.

>>3409914
>you're going to have to demonstrate where I made the mistakes in composition and proportions.
Nah, sorry. It's a waste of my time, cause I'd basically have to redraw both characters. You supposedly are making money off this stuff, yet you expect other people to do your work? Stop acting like a little kid.

>>3409933
Start penning it out, then, because I do not see the errors which you speak of save for the hand and the lines (which has already been discussed).

The commissioner for the Pit and Palutena piece has been very happy with the progress.

>>3409908
thanks for the help mate!

>>3409957
>The commissioner for the Pit and Palutena piece has been very happy with the progress.
People that don't have a good critical eye commission mediocre artists. And no commissioner will ever tell you you did a bad job, besides assholes.
Trust me, you do bad work. It's not even funny how bad it is.
Also, step off that high horse you put yourself on. Your attitude is that of a pro, your art is that of a scrub.

>>3409990
>you do bad work. It's not even funny how bad it is.
im /beg/ tier but i think his stuff looks pretty good

>>3409967
made my day. what a lovely, stupid idea!
some porn art at least has a humor to it.

>>3409990
Cute.

Applied the basic tones. Will apply the deep shadows soon. Once I get a feel for how exactly to light the scene with the halo thingy, I'll refine the shapes of both.

>>3408683
B-blog?

>>3409990
I've seen way worse making decent money. Cant expect every starting artist to get everything perfect right away. The only thing that matters is if they are getting better...it takes time and he seems to be moving forward and trying new things, unlike some in this thread (BigBallsFag).

>>3409990
His work is fine, you're just a salty troll with no skill. I bet you 100 bucks that your work is 10x worse than >>3410048

>>3410051
https://ngmi-art.tumblr.com/
https://ngmi.deviantart.com/

On Hentai Foundry I still use my old name "ExodusIsNear". Apparently they don't change nicknames there.

>>3410048
That dick is to high

>>3410181
when did you find out, that you're into grannies?

>>3410262
it kicked in really hard in the recent years although there were times where i felt really disgusted by it

>>3410181
Nah, he's pretty much shit. You should be able to tell. You actually have some skill, though you have the same problem where you don't know when to stop adding details to your stuff and instead of applying appealing stylization you make stylized stuff look more realistic giving it an uncanny look. Start doing the same I said to hardperspective mcflintproportions. Less is more.

Basic tones

>>3410555
Forgot the image for some reason.

>>3410526
Define "appealing stylization" with your portfolio.

>>3410559
An attempt to fix the arms.

I saw a picture recently that really had the skin hue variance cranked up. Like its darks were purples. I kind of liked it, my stuff seems so washed out. I gotta hit those purples man. I get to red and I chicken out. Hit those fucking purples.

>>3396850
>>3396849
what?

So why do people draw porn?

Don't get me wrong I want to too, but in a psychological sense I can't think of the reason I want to draw porn. It can't be just because I want to masturbate because eventually I just give up and watch porn and wonder wtf I'm doing with my life.

>>3406984
Have you read a book before?

>>3410694
Because it's fun. I think it's also somewhat challenging because you're trying to draw something sexually pleasing, which usually requires specific aesthetics and moods. It's also nice to illustrate something that appeals to your sexuality. Even if other people draw the exact same shit, you get to make it yours.

>>3410708
im gay but that dragon princess is giving me the tingling

>>3410694
I do it because I like creating a positive reaction from people.

>>3393518
damn, that OP pic makes me feel insecure about my painting ability. Any more porn painting of that quality? I need to study them skills.

>>3410721
Glad it works for you, fren!

>>3410562
>angry baby noises
Your reactions to advice is that of a salty fuck. You're never gonna make it.

>>3410845
Check the recent fix and raise up.

>>3410857
Great fix. Now instead of it being a 4/10 it's a 4.2/10
Grats.

Don't let Salty-Kun derail the threads anymore. He does nothing but try to start shit with everyone every single thread. He's easy to spot, just ignore him.

>>3410998
I feel you're the salty one here. Did that guy hurt your feelings in the past?

>>3393518
Just finished this sketch in this new mixed media sketchbook I got. Could have gone better.

>>3411012
Most likely.

Here's an update.

>>3409810
>>3410559
>>3410620
>>3411157
I thought we already told you a few threads ago to stop spamming these irrelevant updates.

>>3411234
And why the fuck should I stop? You retards keep giving me critique on every post! Keep 'em coming!

>>3411523
Salty-kun, why do you do this? It's becoming increasingly pathetic. Nobody is convinced of your stunts, and the the boasts that rattle out of your mouth from the empty confines of your skull serve only to aggravate onlookers.

I must have burned you pretty bad about your mother a while back to earn this kind of ire.

Or you hate yourself for how little you've improved over the years, and resort to this painful play to ease your half decade long spells.

But keep going. Its entertaining as hell.

>>3411557
>>3411523
stop samefagging.

>>3411561
Back to contributions, while not porn, the upgrade came off as incredibly cute. Was a little worried about it, but I love the results. Hoping you guys would like it, too.

>>3395708
Its well drawn but its not appealing

>>3411570
Well at least you're better than nosebro artwise, rest is pretty much the same.

>>3411048
I like your stuff. I think the fist would look better if the pinky were curled tighter (you can look at your own fist as reference)

I been dabbling the idea of making interracial comics and black/black with less stereotypes and more vanilla but the genre is more hated then netorare and blackmail.

Could a IR and black/black focused porn artist become big?

>>3412978
If you want to be financially successfull I'd advise you to pick races which are more in demand.

BM on any nonblack F is a thing which only low-t white boys are into. Literally noone else wants to see that shit.

>>3412997
what are you trying to tell with that data?


You should do it anon. I wouldn't pay because paying for porn is pathetic but I imagine people would.

>>3412997
LMAO. Watch out kids. That's your brain on NGMI.

>>3413130
Lmao at your chimp-out, little do you know that I already made it.

>>3413136
Then I guess you must be very lucky, cause with this kind of IQ it's basically like winning the lottery. Grats.

>>3413022
>lesbian seduces straight
I didn't even know that was a thing

there so much Fear,in porn art,You wanna fuck something or be fucked by something, to reproduce with something,because u re affraid to Die. The old Masters knew what Porn is,long before us. i guess The Message is...Love is sweeter.

>>3413022
>milf > teen
wew

>>3413142
the brainlet here is you

>>3413193
You can't say that after your previous post

>>3413195
>stating facts is low iq
no u

>>3413337
yeah but the statistic in question isn't valuable. Different factors is taking on when you are looking for cartoon porn and dating partners. Not even considerations most people out there looking for porn isn't american woman using dating apps.

>>3413162
"pornhub" no doubt caters to the world's most eligible bachelors.

help

wip

>>3413337
You are so fucking thick.

>>3412978
The Pit went into a sucidal depression because of it. Even if you start vanilla, Jew boys will pressure you into extreme content in no time.

The end result is the same.

>>3413861
>The Pit

yeah but that guy have been drawing cuckporn/ganbangs for fucking ever. He never tried to change.

>>3413982
I've seen the same result from those who started vanilla. Studio FOM recently has been Jewed to hell and back.

>>3414001
Never thought I'd put Studio FOM and vanilla together. Can't believe that oversight.

Lets just say I know a guy who did this for a while and...let's just say a certain incident caused him to snap and quit. I will respect his privacy and desire for discretion.

>>3401045
use a ref for the hand+dick, I'm sure you can find one in that position
also might have given her too much hair to her left

Real est hours

>>3400078
Blog?

>>3414257
that's some nice sketching

how long it took u

>>3414268
I dunno. I kinda lose track of time when I'm inspired. It was a cool down though so I'd say maybe 30 minutes to an hour for the sketch.

Tentacles. Really need to work on the drawing speed.

>>3414257
Looks confident and efficient, how long did it take you to do this?

>>3414286
30min-1hr

>>3414286
Your pictures are amazing, keep posting

>>3413861
>The Pit went into a sucidal depression because of it.
Care to prove that, or should we assume that are you just spouting BS?

>>3412978
I am also curious about this. I mean furry seems more popular than IR shit.

And most of the people that been dabbled in IR stuff get alot of shit for it

>>3404615
- Boobs are affected by gravity. They don’t work that way when you are laying down
- If you are laying down like that there’s no possible way you can get to your own boob
- her body looks like that of a disabled midget and it freaks me out
- vulva is placed wrong

Jesus Christ dude learn your anatomy before polishing a turd like this

>>3414964
I dont think i feel like changing anything.
Thanks for letting out your frustrations though, i hope it makes you feel better knowing I got paid for this without being so autistic about every detail.

>>3413740
Me like

>>3415164
Thanks anon! This style has been pretty fun to replicate.

>>3395708
the coloring and the whole picture in general is pretty nice, i get multiply but how exactly do you go by using screen?

also anywhere where i can follow your work

>>3415148
...You know this is an artwork critique board, right?

Wip
does she look decent?

>>3415148
I don't think anyone expects you to fix this. Just learn from the mistakes people pointed out and do better next time. That anon wasn't wrong about the stuff he mentioned, minus the unnecessary attack.

Also, I'm trying to improve my animu. What do you guys think?
1/2

>>3415592
2/2

>>3415592
>>3415593
tumblr. good shit

>>3396077
>>3395961

I really like these two because they aren't obviously caricatured like a lot of the shit on /ic/.

Back when I was hella young I remember coming across a sketchbook at a friend's place, was original and not a reprint, but wasn't from his family - nobody in that family was an artist from what I remember. The sketchbook looked fairly old judging by the cover of it, an old military-like plain green.

It had dicks from just about every angle along with penetration. Every damn page of that sketchbook was filled out with fine renderings, and what struck me was how loose but real it looked, the subtle darkening of the base as it meets the pubic hairs all massed in with a loose brush-like effect.

They kept this thing out as a coffee table book.

And I really wish I'd see more drawings of that caliber.

>>3415247
Artwork AND crtique. Critique isnt mandatory, just a sub category. That's like saying a/ is only about manga.

>>3415656
might as well be, anime is garbage.

Don't get all pissy when someone offers critique on your shit

>>3415662
im sorry you get mad that your opinion means very little to me. That thing you said with the anime wasnt even good bait.

>>3413740
more wip

>>3415592
Those beautiful lines. I can't believe I'm missing out a lot on this part.
Anyone got tips/tuts on producing lines like this? I honestly can't wrap my head around on how they work.

>>3415593
Liking the dynamic but god damn that's one feminine penis. Please add some veins or something, it sickens me to see a wiener that smooth.

>>3415678
if you want to just post art, go to /i/ or a shill thread, if you come here expect critique or dont post, because the moment you upload those files in this thread you are allowing anyone who is able to see them to share their toughts on it

>>3415593
thats a really nice penis, please dont make it all veiny and gross, keep it aesthetic

>>3404615
>>3404614
this is pretty bad senpai.
I think you need to grind some fundies.

>>3415678
>>3404615
wait these are from the same artist?
your toony style drawings look pretty decent and cute compared to the more "realistic" chick laying down.
Work on some anatomy bro..
It's obvious you skipped the your loomis and fundies and all that.

>>3415701
Nah. I'll do what i want.

>>3415694
Line control is all about mileage. In this case #justdraw is actually the only legit advice I can give you. The more you draw, the more confident your lines will become.
Also ctrl+z obviously.

>>3415228
screen does the exact opposite of multiply. it lightens things like multiply darkens them. i usually just eyeball it, experiment with colors and stick to one which seems to look right.
you can follow me tumblr: ngmi-art.tumblr.com or ngmi.deviantart.com ...yes ngmi is unironically my artist name

>>3415614
WHAT?! a sketchbook full with dicks lying on the coffee table, you say?

>>3394378
>all y’all need Jesus
>all you all need Jesus
Yankee please go and stay go

>>3417044
Nice draw man

>>3417044
if youre trying to animate this, you have no concept of it.

>>3417188
I didnt ask for your opinion you piece of shit

They're giving me $900 for it and they said it's fine so it doesnt matter. You're just jealous.

>>3417191
dude, you have no idea what youre doing.

>>3417191
>$900
nigga what

>>3417191
what a retard... learn to accept critique u nasty aspy prick

>>3404614
>>3404615
Sweet jesus... this is horrible...
anon, please learn some anatomy and study some art if you don't want to do it, do it for the poor fag that payed you 200 bucks

>>3417191
>youre jealous of that which you had no preconception of until i told you right now
wew

>>3417242
Dont need to.
I make 100,000+ a year on my art pleb.

Shitposting has ramped up lately.
Summer must be approaching.

>>3417191
This wasnt even me. 4chan is so retarded. Me and this person have different ip addresses.

And i didnt even say $900 i said $200. Stop pretending to be me.

>>3395763
Pq

>>3417188
Ok now this is me. I dont care about what you think is good, all that matters is that I have fun drawing it.

>>3417454
If you don't care about critique, then there's no point in posting here.

>>3417469
The point is that im having fun. People that are less successful artists are always so butthurt and sensitive. It makes me laugh. I wont stop, and the more you reply the more it makes me want to do it.

>>3417683
That dick looks weird af. Especially in contrast to the completely rendered hand. He shouldn't be this blurred so that you can only see his silhouette. At least give the head a different color where the light shines on it

>>3417702
NO fuck you, it looks good, you know nothing never give critique about anything ever again.

>>3417683
As a still image this is pretty good, but those vaginal contractions are super Janky.

Anything wrong with the body before I start to color?

>>3418363
balance is off. she is leaning to far to the left without proper support

>>3418369
Shit, I was worried about that, thought it would be fine but it looks better now, thanks

>>3417554
>People that are less successful artists are always so butthurt and sensitive.
I think you might be assuming a tad too much here.

>>3418642
its true tho unsuccessfull/unskilled/low IQ artists have terrible personalities

>>3418554
lmao I know these characters
Also you fucked up the blondes girls vag, see doxy's tutorial on it.

I wonder at which size real breasts get so heavy that they sag instead of flattening if the girl is reclining.

>>3420094
Study perspective. Nipple placement is wrong in almost all versions.

>>3420101
Studied various references instead. I see, I should move the nipples upwards and redo the areolae for the flat chest one, move them closer together for the B+ one, and move them upwards and closer together for the D one. I obviously don't have any refs for the two extra large sizes, but I suppose I should treat them similiarly to D after imagining their shape... though I'm not sure what should I do with the saggers. Perhaps simply move the nipples closer?

Is that correct?

I pretty much never draw lewds... Can someone redline this or give me something constructive? It's a WIP, so a few things will be changed in a little bit. This is only a quick sketch, so sorry it's sloppy

Original character is on the left.

Are these colors working?

>>3420321
Maybe if the background itself was a warmer tone? You have a dim light source, but it's still a warm light source. Providing the BG with a warmer tone will make things blend more smoothly.
The bits of blue on his thigh, abs, and chest feel off as well. If they're lighting spots, they shouldn't be all across the way they are. They should fade out a bit.
The earrings should also glimmer a bit. This drags the attention over to his face as well, and makes sense since they should reflect the light faintly. Not a strong glimmer, since they aren't in direct light, but not a dull color.
>Might be better if the right (my POV) earring was lighter than the left one.

But, to try and cut my rambling short, you put *too* many cool colors and it makes it a little messy to the eye. I think something that could be an easy fix is just making the BG a warmer color. Even if it's just by a little bit.

>>3420325
Thanks a lot anon. I tried fixing some of the things with your advice. The earrings aren't even supposed to be that color I forgot about them but I'll change them later along with the bluish fill light. The eyes are supposed to be glowing. Does this look any better?

>>3420359
>excuse my image being sloppy, I did it with my mouse

I think a BG color closer to this might suit it better. I think a warm color will make the scene feel more "heated" and suit the lighting's warm tone better.
Adjust it however, of course, but I hope I make sense? It also just lets the lighter blues of his clothes pop out more.

>eyes glow
I think you could define their glow a tad more by adding a slight glow to perhaps the bridge of his nose, top of his cheeks, and his hair? But subtly, since we can already see the eyes are bright, so it doesn't have too be too strong a light source.

>>3420372
Ohhh I see what you mean now. Yeah that really makes everything read better. But damn it, I feel like I'm never going to get good at catching things like that. Why is color so fucking hard...
Thanks again anon. I'll use that or a similar color and try to finish this thing.

>>3420375
Honestly, I've barely even glanced at color theory. I've just kind of taught myself through trial and error since I was a kid.
>I also just really like to color

I think, at least for me, it's more about knowing your warm and cold colors as well as knowing what exactly you want to pop out of the image. Taking into account on the general feel of the image and tone (sex > hot > warm / Warm light source > typically warm tones).

Going in and making your canvas monochrome typically helps you see what parts make it difficult to point out. If the image doesn't easily process, typically something is off.

Wishing you the best anon!!

>>3420375
Oh, and in case you just wanted to know..
His hair and cape are what clashed with your blue BG the most. The color of them was simply too close to the BG and made it a bit of a mess to the eye

>>3420382
*Sorry, meant just the cape! I was thinking about another thread I'm in hahaa

>>3420381
>>3420382
>>3420383
Thanks, every little bit of info helps. I really want to get better at this so I appreciate you going into depth to help me.
By the way sorry it took me so long to reply to this I was afk for a while.