/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3390787
need critique

I did some dynamic poses practice, and like how the sketch of it looked so decided to continue it. I'm actually proud of it
Now if some kind anon could destroy that pride by redlining it I'd appreciate it
(I'm aware of her right arm/arm in the back is broken)

>>3390805
I would draw her other foot

>>3390805
dank pose not so dank anatomy

>>3390801
the arm holding the sickle definitely needs some work, as well as that shoulder. I think the forearm needs to a tad longer, and the head looks a bit misplaced. Try looking up a ref for this and seeing how the anatomy compares.

>>3390839
Is the head too large, is it the angle or the way it's placed on the neck or all three?

Want to ink this but probably biting off more than I can chew, there’s a lot of metal ornaments around the top I haven’t drawn.
Folds on the sleeve feel wrong too

Anatomy/pose look fine at this stage?

>>3390806
I'm still learning so I wasn't sure if it'd be visible from that angle and pose, but I'll try to fix that
>>3390807
Yeah I that's what I'm thinking too

i never finish a shit

>>3391016
Your underwear must be disgusting

Based on lilith from darkstalkers

>>3391016
>>3391068

>>3390839
Is this sketch layer any better?

>>3391073
those thighs make me feel things

>>3390787
gonna start filtering this thread, bye faggots lol

>"I'm gonna animate something tonight!"
>end up doing this

I played myself

>>3391227
u played urself when u thought of this shit character design

>>3391241
Well it started as mindless doodling that ended up becoming a character, so no shit the design is probably trash desu

>>3391272
cute

>>3391272
Legs/mostly calves are definitely the weakest part of this. Head is nice.

Cute demon girl. Liked how the horns and hair match

I got confused when I started sketching this.

I started drawing Medusa from fate, first time posting my art here for critics.

(reposting it because of filename)
I started drawing Medusa from fate, first time posting here for crits.

What would you call this style?

>>3391952

>>3391956

>>3391959
They're from a comic book called Zentropa but they don't describe what the art is or would be called, so it's bee hard to find anything similar

>>3392011

>>3391962
it's made with 3d somehow that makes me not apprecite it so much...

>>3392031
Do you mean digital? Those don't look like they're made with 3d

>>3392011
>>3392013
Makes me hungry for waffles while simultaneously reminding me of Super Mario Sunshine and Dark Souls respectively

>>3391883
imo the widest part of the thigh should be a little higher, and the boobs are a little lopsided. can't wait to see it finished!

Critique.

>>3392042
Thanks, I like that compliment.

Here I wanted to use blue/orange since I noticed I don't use that combo a lot but I'm not sure it turned out as good as the other two.

>>3390787
hey

>>3392074
blog?

>>3392182
Is it ironic?

>>3392186
Probably, in my experience real request for blog posts have more information in them like "that's a cute picture, do you have a blog someplace?" If some one just posts "blog?" 19/20 times its ironic

>>3392074
I'm sorry but it's DeviantArt-tier

>>3392268
shit reply, deviant art has the same shit artist to good artist as every where else pretty much

>>3392272
>I'm autistic and can't derive meaning from context

You know damn well what we mean when we say DeviantArt, just like you know what we mean when we say Tumblr. Nobody associates DeviantArt with quality work

>>3392180
hi there lil slut

>>3392074
Doesn't look that great, color choices are awful. Neck is to long and arms are positioned weirdly as well. It's not the worst thing I've ever seen though, practice more.

rate.

>>3392375
finished.

>>3392295
Yeah I know what he meant, and I know what you mean when you say tumbler. But you are both wrong about sites you know nothing about. If you're going to shit on someones art then at least don't meme at him.

>>3392058
Thanks ! I don't quite intended to finish it but have a nice sketch for now ! I think I fixed the boobs but I'm unsure about the hips...

>>3392375
His traps aren't aligned with his head angle. Head angle is just awkward in real life, no one does a 90 degree turn. Kid's torso is a lopsided and thin. Left ankle is broken and facing wrong direction.Legs aren't foreshortened well at all and screws with perspective and foot placement, can't tell if left foot is supposed to be far away or almost a horse stance.

>>3392493
I will try to fix it tomorrow.

>>3392074
loomis
but like unironically
you need to study construction
don't come back until you feel forms

>>3392074
that neck placement and those eyes are completely wrong and show that you're not constructing anything, just placing features in the general vicinity of where you think they're supposed to be

therefore unironically loomis

god i cant color for shit. gonna read a bunch of books soon though, hopefully ill improve

>>3392684
another thing. didnt like it too much so not gonna bother to finish it with color. ill do a redesign of it another time, though.

>>3392688
another thing from a week or so ago. again, still need to learn colors since i only just started digital (ive never used paints/color before, just a plain ol pencil and paper)

>>3392690
last thing for now, just a small concept. i might do a redraw further down the line with a mix of this floaty-mask-shards idea with a the first drawing i posted

>>3392691
are you the guy that posted a portrait b4 as ur first digital drawing?

>>3392777
yes. it was awful

>>3392779
i like ur shit tho, u got a place u upload? i only have an artstation/twitt and pixiv

>>3392788

Some sketches

>>3392982

>>3392983

>>3392982
>>3392983
>>3392984
Blog

>>3390787
I might as well post on this thread too lol

>>3392984
others were great, but you really fucked this one up

>>3391016
naah nigga, that ain't a cat, that's a rag right there.

I'm a bitch

>>3391952
>>3391956
>>3391959
>>3391962
From the perspective of this moment, I'd just call it retro sci-fi. It's akin to what Moebius and most of Heavy Metal had to offer, the kickstarter page even lists Heavy Metal as a reference.

What should I do to make the character blend more with the surrounding?

>>3393137
this is a pretty nice drawing anon

I've been working on "chibi"style characters lately.
I want to use the chibis for a comic but it's an 18+.
So my idea is to do all non pornographic scenes in the chibi style and then the sex scenes in a more normal style.
What do you think of that idea?

>>3393303
>even chibi characters are having sex before me
it hurts

>>3393320
Well they weren't chibis at first

>>3393303
It's fine, is this a porn project? or just a story with sexual themes included?
If it's the latter I'd suggest stylizing with your storyboarding and only use close-ups or something, if you're gonna make it look special, then make it extra special.

>>3390787
Frist time coloring, rape me with criticism plz

>>3393428
Derp

>>3393375
It's porn with a story,but do like the idea of using close ups in the different art style for dramatic effect.Is that what you were suggesting?

>>3393429
I cant make out what the mark on her neck is supposed to be. Is that like a burn mark? What stands out the most is probably the shoulder armor or whatever it is, it looks like its supposed to be hard iron or something but the material looks like the shirt. Also im sure that that red part would create a lot of bouncing light on her hair. The hair overall looks okay I guess.
The head construction is really solid, but the way her body is turned feels a little weird, but we cant see much of her torso anyways so doesnt matter too much.

>>3392782
not yet but thank you

>>3392988
Thanks, mind giving some specifics?

>>3393163
Ambient occlusion. Basically share colours and values with be background in places where the light reflects

>>3393445
Yeh it's a burn mark I guess I can make it more a different value so it doesn't blend so much with the hair. How can I make the shoulder piece better. And yes I barely tried with the body

>>3392775
Don't use that many lines in the lips

>>3393511
Depends on what look you are going for. If you want to have shiny metal armour like a knight I'd suggest just checking out some pictures. Usually iron has bright strong highlights. Right now it looks too mat and smooth.

trying to finish this piece.

>>3393566

>>3393604
Don't blog it before someone gets you shiet

>>3393511
Burns are usually colored like flesh, so you don't need to worry about pigmentation as much. The color you're using now generally meshes with the rest of the color palette better, but it should be fine so long as you don't go too far. Most importantly, I would recommend making it appear more distorted. Skin melts before it becomes charred. If you look up more references depending on the type of burn you're trying to depict, you'll figure it out pretty easily.

>>3392406
>If you're going to shit on someones art then at least don't meme at him.
Do you realize where you are?

background ideas?

>>3393703
Take just the background, remove the furry part

Do things look like they're on the right plane? I've always had trouble noticing mistakes like those and perspective. I know the wheel looks off. Also having trouble with the pose on the far right.

A piece Ive been working on, could use some help.

>>3393703
Is better if you do the background first, at least a the values, so yuo can match the ligthing

>>3393703
multiple blurry furry orgy

>>3393732
Why is he holding a gun like that?

>>3393732
whats with the guns

>>3392688
the line is amazing though i'm confused about the knees, they look bent as fuck

>>3393850
>>3393876
Im just staying true to the source material, im willing to suspend my disbelief for an anime about magic weapons

>>3392986
proko kangaroo?

>>3393896

>>3394046
Yeah thats about right

>>3392988
Fixed it some.

>>3393672
Fuck from the thumbnail i thought bagboss was back

>>3392038
Most of it is 3d models actually. Personally I think it still looks nice, I actually have the book. It's not like modeling is "easy" but its not really a drawing either.

working on this thing for this weekend

>>3393976
We have an action. What's the story? Where is the setting?

Critiques?

>>3393729
The top of the stand looks like it's on a completely different plane than the rest of the drawing. That should be a simple fix, though.

>>3394221
Looks neat so far

>>3394243
Why do you keep posting every time you do a small adjustment to your drawings? What do you expect people to tell you differently from the non flat colored version

>>3394252
1. Is the color balance easy on the eyes or is there some areas that f feel oversaturated/strain/overwhelm the focus on the character?

2. Any suggestions to improve the anatomy and composition?

I will not post the progress again until the second to last stage.

>>3394263
Post whenever you want, bro, don't listen to that guy.

>>3393883
yea i was worried about them. i was just trying to get that inward curvature right, i suppose i overdid it

>>3393604
dekus facial features are a bit wonky/misplaced. even the slightest mistakes in the face are noticed even if only subconsciously, so it makes it look more amateur. but i like the rest, good job

plump

>>3390787
Do you dream of better stars?

>>3395096
no thats litereally just a fat landwhale

>>3395125
dude you're getting worse lmao

>>3395096
this is cute but dude her arms are SO tiny

>>3390878
>no replies
I-I guess

>>3390878
>>3395175
That's amazing. Got a blog?

>>3395175
maybe give her legs? and not hide hands?

>>3395175
Tsugumomo copy

>>3395125
love you jace

>>3395125
Jace, ever tried channeling your schizophrenia into your art? I think you can go very far.

>>3395262
Yikes, your rendering is pretty decent for the most part (a bit too much shadows for the top part of her hair if you ask me though), but you seriously need to work on your lineart. I can't point out anything specific since you're already finished and anything I'd say wouldn't apply anymore.

>>3395313
Yeah I'm aware that's a weak point of mine and any direction to study in would be certainly appreciated. Like I'm looking at guides and trying different things but I'm stalling there.

>>3395175
Should probably find a reference for an anime head side view. Your nose parts need work

>>3395262

What to do if you're unhappy with the way your style is developing?

My style is becoming way too tight and meticulous and it pisses me off, it takes me way too long to finish anything before I'm satisfied. I get really autistic and nitpicky over tiny details, I'm jealous of artists that can quickly produce something that's loose and freehanded but still looks good.

>>3395455
I appreciate the feedback and I'm aware of the hand to face ratio. But from this perspective though the camera or viewer's angle would be closer to the hand so they would a appear slightly larger. That's a solid point about women suits though and I appreciate that. Really trying to break away from stiff and flat poses and try to push for something much more dynamic and entertaining. I mean I'm not saying that you're wrong either I'm just saying that I guess what I was attempting didn't translate very well because of my execution. Nonetheless thank you for your input.

>>3395467
The problem is you have conflicting perspectives. Yes, the general rule is that the close something is to the camera, the larger it is. However, most of the body implies that it's just a pretty simple 3/4 schematic, so the hand would never be as large as that given how close it is to the face.

>>3393672
Need to work on that hand anatomy

>tfw ngmi

Here we go again

>>3395262
I'd let her peg me anon, but the face is a little fucked

>>3395547
The hands are upside down.

>>3395188
Thanks anon
melkosan.tumblr.com
>>3395392
Thanks I'll look into it
>>3395265
Design is from EO, though I know you mean Bakura

>>3395262
That coloring on the neck makes it look like it's spilling over.

>>3395175
both your nose and hards(including arm) is way too short, overall thou i like your design

What background should I use?

>>3395125
nothing the liquify tool cant fix

>>3395811
Not bad.

>>3395811
dam, nice eye.

When yo u're so uncreative you copy a jojo pose.
I feel like my colors have been very boring, but I don't know how to go further. Feels like I boxed myself in trying to learn how rendering/lighting works.

>>3396247
Looks like shit.
Please go away

>>3396247
Try different lighting like blue lighting or purple.

>>3396247
try tying a rope around your neck and suspending yourself from the ceiling for a few minutes, that's always helped me in these kinds of situations.

>>3396260
>>3396265
lel jelly fags

>>3396262
Huh, the solution was so obvious. Gonna play around with different lighting schematics. Thanks, anon.

>>3396247
I think you should work on your values a bit. Try doing some paintings in black and white, play around with contrast a bit until you're happy with how it looks.

are those colors nice?

>>3396399
too saturated imo

Man lining this hair was a bitch, and it's still not finished.

>>3396415
yooo i love this

Great Allah, please strike down all ironic blog? posters

>>3396426
Thanks m8, she's a princess. I'll post the finished ver. soon.

>>3396247
stop giving them anime eyes they looked fucking awful

>>3396415
How do you do the texture in the painting there? I've seen a few comics artist do that by putting a layer of texture and reduce the opacity, is that how you do it?

>>3396536
That's the ticket, only you also set the layer mode to overlay and adjust as necessary (here's the one I used). Sai also has a function built in that will automatically texturise a layer.

>>3393847
what the fuck are those banana breasts holy shit its not even funny anymore

>>3395125
If you're going to shamelessly photobash at least try to make it less obvious.

>>3396543
Thanks senpai, though there was also some other ways. Do you know any good online librairies for these stuffs? Most of the time when I'm looking for some, it's all pay-to-use and I ain't that desperate to be honest. Also keep on rocking, I fucking dig your art man

doodling instead of finishing something

>>3394222
that you Brian?
and they just drew it as a joke/meme reference, i doubt there's a story beyond "it's funny".

>>3396618
Those are very good; keep it up!

>>3396618
Saved

It says fart fresh brown eggs. That is all.

I cannot figure out a way to add shading to the draped scarf+have it look somewhat decent and it's driving me insane

>>3396633
Bless your heart anon

>>3396693
Re the scarf, what you did on the left looks pretty good? Unless you mean that the left isn't finished either and you wanted to add more.

I really like this piece's style overall, it's like a storybook engraving. I think you could make better use of lines in the hair and cleaner lines on the lip and nose would also help a lot (I'm guessing the eye misaligned with the head is a stylistic choice but the sketchiness of the rest of the face plus that is creating an unflattering unfinished look.) I do like your style a lot though.

>>3393429
>>3393543
>>3393635
I'll gues I did a lil bit better

>>3395605
But are they!?

>>3396413
>>3396399
>This
The green is ok tho

>>3395605
Doesn't look like it to me, I think the character's just holding the guns in a way we're not used to seeing.

>>3393429
>>3393543
>>3393635
I'll gues I did a lil bit better

first time finishing a drawing in forever, although i sorta hate it

>>3396832
Hey that's great, dude. Hope you start drawing more often!

what are some good techniques to convey form and solidity in lineart? What are some things that should be avoided to keep lineart from looking flat? who are some good artists to look at to study this sort of thing?

>>3396247
Read color and Ligh by james gurney David. Create more interesting Color enviroments like that other dude said. Color in orange light, or a blue sky etc

>>3390787
Rise Up In Fire

>>3395547
I like it

>>3396954
neato, bit like a crazy version of an old poster

>>3396954
Maybe moving the star and giving it a lower value, so it dosen't clash with the face would be better

Is that hand ok? I'm to retarded to tell

>>3397014
Yikes, that wrist is too thin and the hand is just too small in general. General rule I use is to make it slightly smaller than the face, but not too small.

>>3397015
Don't "yikes" at me you lil faggot.
Got it, I'll fix it later

>>3397028
Yowzers!

>>3397015
>>3397028
I heard from an anon at some point that the hands should be 3/4 of a head, which checks out unless my hands are abnormally big

>>3397112
Looking solid, background is a little too detailed and takes away the attention of the foreground. Loving the color choices and textures. Did you use refs for this?

>>3397119
Yeah, was a photo study, then decided to take it in it's own direction

>>3396720
I feel the left is unfinished but if it looks decent enough I'll let it be. I tried adding more black and it just didn't look good at all. Thank you so much for your input, it's really thoughtful!

>>3396879
Yoshihiro Togashi has good lineart when he actually polishes his works. Line consistency is a big component. The line for the top of her right thigh doesn't match up with the line that exits her left tibia section. Also the lineart for her right leg is thicker than the left but it should be vice versa. Closer objects usually have thicker lineart to draw attention and create depth. It looks like you got that in the sword but there are other places like the butt and waist that could benefit from that.

>>3397319
Nice try dude but it's obvious you copypasted this from Facebook.

Completely no idea how to shade, any tips?

>>3397321
Grind out spheres. Cubes. Lighting studies. Clothes studies. Hair studies. Anime face studies.

>>3397328
Also you're blending too much. Stop that.

>>3397321
fix that thumb, aside from that it's a cute

>>3397321
Read how to render.
Alternatively, use your brain.

times like this are when i really hate this fetish

>>3397391
Hey you drew 2 characters this time!

>>3397320
If you’re talking about how I reposted this from Facebook then you must’ve seen this from my Facebook page. I have a page there where I also posted this image

>>3397391
do you have the story of why they're big in your head? please tell

>>3397010
IMO the star's location is fine, it's just that it's a completely flat shape, the edges are blindingly sharp in comparison to everything else, and it has no obvious z-order in the composition of things, which makes it looks like random clipart that's been pasted on.

Study from Maplestory so I guess it fits this thread. I have a very hard time figuring out how to use visual landmarks for environments so everything comes out unbalanced.

>>3396395
Yeah, contrast is something I'm always struggling with for some reason. It's like I'm hardwired to go soft, but my next painting I will definitely force myself to use high contrast.
>>3396934
Thanks but can you please stop calling me by my name? It's getting creepy.

>>3397567
sure

>>3397567
Sure thing, David.

>>3397504
Too much confining the spirits of people they killed into themselves to get over-buffed and huge

How would you design a cyborg girl who is supposed to look 100% human at first glance, but on closer inspection has visible oddities?

>>3397627
Do you have any thoughts of making an inprogress pic where they're normal sized are just starting their killing spree?

Can someone explain to me again what symbol drawing is? Im too retarded to actually understand it.

>>3394221
Blog? I love the lineart

Critique on this old piece of trash i did like 3 month ago?

Critique on this old piece of trash i did like 3 month ago?

>>3396954
Your work isn't that good, but what really pisses me off is the fact that you act like your the best.

>>3398008
how about you post a current one.

>>3398015
I did this yesterday

>>3398013
the best part is I would have agreed with you a year ago until I found out I was literally the most influential person alive. or dead. whichever one I am.

>>3396954
love you jace

>>3397985
Symbol drawing is drawing your interpretation of reality.

>>3398008
loomis

>>3398029
Hands need improving. You may need to study on how folds and clothing work.

>>3397391
What happens when another giantess intrudes on another's territory? Do they fight?

>>3398044
<3 <#

>>3398074
earthshaking yuri sex

>>3397331
Wouldn't people say this is too messy? This is actually fine? It seems kind of abstract.

Its 5 am and Im tired as shit, so I'm gonna continue it tomorrow, i know its shit, not like I'm that good at drawing (yet, hopefully) and I cant do legs for shit

>>3394221
first sorta colour pass thing for nowa

>>3394252
>>3397987
cheers brothers

>>3398132
Mine was kinda a bad example but no, anime art (and art in general) tends to have pretty clean value changes. This is also true in reality.

>>3397900
Visually? Maybe some seam lines on the skin to imply that it was constructed artificially. If its a comic sort of thing then maybe some whirring and clicking sfx when listening closely

>>3398154

>>3398154

From a drawpile with some buds. My crap is the stuff on the right

Why the caged bird sings

>>3398209
no offense, but in my opinion your art practicely looks the same to me s it did a year ago.

>>3398257
Stilyzation for me its proportions and forms, but u just copy things,and a bit using proportions, i guess u study all days, without good basics cuz i cant see right forms, anyway u have render,if u level up basics, -builds - proportion - forms, it growin in somethin yumi

>>3398257
the face in general was bothering me

>>3398321
>>3398305
I mean, I know you guys are just trolling in order to get me to talk to you but sometimes I wonder if you guys are literally retarded.

>>3398305
Fuckyeah tysm for beautifying this.

>>3398321
Absolutely disgusting
>>3398341
lmao flip your canvas bitch

>>3398257
the women in your older arts are prettier than your new ones

>>3398355
>>3398341
this is why nobody likes this board

>>3398355
Understandable, realism ain't my thing

>>3398368
Fuck art blog?? I want to see the prett
>>3398374
I knowww Like I hate it so much I still check this board out X(

Was trying to help a friend draw a circle and got carried away.

>>3398374
they are just mad that "their" girls want to fuck me and not them.

Like, they are so fucking pathetic that the girls they orbit are their entire lives.

Mouse

>>3398037
Stop being so cocky, no one even cares about your work, and hardly anyone outside of this site knows you.The fact that you see yourself as such a visionary means that you can't take critique, which you desperatly need, since all your works just look like a copied body and a completely different style of head.

>>3398428
As a femanon you disgust me in ever possible way.

>>3398305
that looks good

>>3398406
I think he deactivated his twitter
that or I can't find it anymore since I'm following more than 1k people

>>3398511
obviously you don't know who that is lol

>>3398511
sure smells like summer in here.

>>3398554
ohhh is that why /ic/ has been like really really bad lately, i thought it was just that there was an uptick with the thread about drawing rocks and /aqt/ and it just seemed bad.

>>3398442
no, thats a qt3.14

>>3398209
hair looks off to the side and is too flat

WIP, can some /k/ommando tell me if this crossbow is passable

>>3398734
Looks cool as hell anyways.

>>3398734
bod and crossbow look dope as fuck
do you have a blog?

>>3398750
>blog?
nah I only really post here

>>3398734
That's a particularly odd way to hold anything with a stock, especially a thumbhole? style (Bottom of the grip connects back to the stock, if I'm reading your drawing correctly.). Typically the arm would be on the other side with the stock tucked under the arm. Consider this screencap from some random dude on Youtube with a VEPR.

>>3397953
Probably not, sorry.
Done a similar pic way back before, anyway

>>3398734
>>3398781
While you're at it you should also reconsider the location of the trigger in comparison to the string latch (the thing that keeps the string held back). The two attached mechanisms are for more traditional styles, but mechanical requirements usually mean that the trigger is usually right under or behind the string. It's not mechanically impossible to attach the trigger via a long bar back to some mechanism that releases the string, but realistically if you were to shoulder and fire the weapon you've drawn, the string would be right up against your cheek and you would find this rather uncomfortable.

tl;dr just move the string to right above the trigger

>>3398781
>Typically the arm would be on the other side with the stock tucked under the arm.
it's shoulder-'fired'
I moved the arm to the other side though
>just move the string to right above the trigger
shit man I like this composition and I got deadlines-
>It's not mechanically impossible
yeet

>>3395175
really unhappy with how this turned out, lines are pretty shit and wonky and the thickness is all over the place.
At least I know what to work on now I guess

I really want to make this one work, anyone have good reference for this kind of angle/pose?

>>3390805
...Michael?

>>3398887
imo if you just make it so her shoulders and hips aren't on a straight line the pose looks fine

>>3398896
why did u slice her torso

>>3398902
just wanted to move her waist up and to the left, didn't think I needed to clean it to show what I meant

>>3398908
uhh I mean right, up and to the right

doodle from a couple days ago

>>3398927
Blog?

>>3398928
http://miruku-p.tumblr.com/ , do keep in mind im pretty shit and only post once in a blue moon

>>3398513
There was actually one girl I've met in my entire life that didn't like my art.

And that is only because she thought I was offering her fiend money for sex. She also thought I pimped out my ex for rent money. Also that I was a rapist. Also that I was obsessed with another one of her friends.

People are fucking dumb and will believe anything as long as it sounds interesting. Like, how the fuck could anyone think any of those things were true? But you all believed it. Every single one of you.

I'm not even mad. Just disappointed.

>>3398974
Hey dude what have you made? Like, I know you made all of blade runner but what else
Just want to know so I can stop stealing all your ideas from you

>>3398984
oh is he THAT gguy?

>>3398984
its funny because the jealousy is so real.

>>3399001
is it funny or dissapointing make your mind up baka

>>3399001
why would anyone be jealous of a retarded nobody who coincidentally had all of his million dollar ideas stolen

Actually, I'm the one who stole your ideas, and I'm making bank from them; you're just a faggot

>>3398984
kek

>>3399011
its ok because I'll always have more.

this is why no one likes this board

>>3399017
I am so god damn fucking bored.

I just want to go home.

>>3399015
>People are fucking dumb and will believe anything as long as it sounds interesting
like thinking there's a world conspiracy stealing your ideas? lol

After studying I tried to do different stylised heads. Can you help me pointing out what is wrong and what mistakes I keep on making?

>>3399091

hahaha only took me seven fucking hours

>>3398141
eeeh, I think I'm gonna call it here

Critique?

>>3399187
comfy af

>>3399187
It's lovely but I have no idea what I'm seeing. Where is the body? What's with those pillows and scarf? Is its body made of pillows? Is the sheep just resting its head from behind, body unseen? Is the sheep humanoid and the pile we're seeing is just its torso area? Is the sheep sitting and its body hidden under all the shit?

Maybe I'm too tired to figure it out

>>3399225
yeah, was supposed to be a sheep person thing in heavy clothing. guess I should have added a better reference point for that!

>>3399189
the shadows on the eyes don't really work. the pose and the transfer style pattern look great. i wonder if i more interesting pattern wouldn't go amiss, maybe little stars or something, just a thought though. but yeah the eye shadows de-emphasis the eyes so much it's like 'TONGUE - also the rest of the face'

>>3399214
Damn that's very different than the stuff you usually do.

>>3399189
I don't think the halftone really works.
It just flattens the picture and seems kind of inconsistent.
I'm not exactly sure what you're trying to accomplish with it, if you're seeking to emulate a certain style like with print comics or manga tones you should probably go back and reference that to replicate the style.

>>3399189
Love the aesthetic.

>>3399091
>>3399093
your 3/4s views are all kinda unappealing, Your frontal views are quite nice though, use this animation style turnaround method. It might help to keep the two views consistent with one another. Keep all views on the same page and turn them in a practical order. Also as you practice include the profile view too. Helps to visualize how the forms move in 3D space, as well.

>>3399031
it's not that interesting.

I just want to go home. I'm not too sure what you guys get out of this (assuming these replies just aren't bots, which is a pretty god damn good chance of being true) but whatever.

I just want to go home.

>>3399263
go home then and never post here again

why people didnt like this painting?

>>3399296
It looks like you used a sponge to paint it.

>>3399301
a sponge? what that means

>>3399308
not him but that means a complete lack of definition, hard edges, brush strokes, just soft stuff plastered on and gradually layered

>>3398251
The in-between value the colours is to hard soft'em/blend'em

>>3399424
That's not exactly bad tho

>>3399468
i'm just trying to explain what he probably meant

Critique

Most appreciation on suggestions to not be so damn boring

I can't tell where the problem areas are.

>>3399559
I'm so mixed about this. The style is very simplistic and retro which is cool. The main hindrance seems like the color. The skin is too saturated compared to the blonde and leopard print. The pink is way too saturated to compliment the blue. It might be the overtone+colors but the entire image just looks incredibly flat.

random scribbles

>>3400040
Yeah, I was thinking it was super flat. Gonna have to work on that a lot. The pink was initially much more muted, should've stuck w/ that. Thanks anon

>>3391247
It's a crab, disregard

New thread when? I'm banned and I hate posting from my phone.

>>3401115
>>3401115