/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3351513
choose ur fighter

>>3351525
Wow I had the file named exactly that but went with the other name instead. Creepy.

Teach me the cute senpais

Dick and balls

>>3351513
I drew a comic. I think the second panel is too sloppy and the joke isn't clear enough. Opinion?

>>3351742
Needs more loomis

>>3351742
both of them need to be seen going to a bigger town together
right now it looks like only one of them is moving to the bigger town when from what i gather they are both moving to a bigger town

>>3351782
Is this angle better?

>>3351763
I don't want him

how do I anime eyes?

>>3351821
Draw 1,000 ellipses

>>3351821
Youtube your question or use google. There you go.

>>3351821
Moonspeak but the images make it easy to understand:
vk
.com/doc4043932_161324940?hash=590e7031d2e3da5284

>>3351513
ayy thanks for using octo chan
<3

Imagination test
No reference

>>3344122

I want to practice bodies in perspective like this. The figures I draw from don't have anything like it. Where can I find resources that do? I've googled "woman looking over camera" and haven't found anything too good.

>>3351885
Download design doll

>>3351821
>save artworks of favorite artists
>practice copying their animu eyes
>rinse and repeat

>>3351888
thanks so much!

i need some feedback on the anatomy of this

>>3351893
>practice copying their animu eyes
>not practicing drawing ellipses and turning them in perspective
Not. Gonna. Make it.

>>3351903
you made the face worse

>>3351935
has baby face

must be the cheeks and small jaw

>>3351941
That was intensional
Seriously haha

You don’t like me drawings? There you go. Haha
Just kidding

>>3351954
>That was intensional
>Seriously haha
>>3351956
>There you go. Haha
>Just kidding
>HAHA HAHA
>JUST KIDDING x-D
>LELELELELELELELELE
>ROFL XD

>>3351960
What is it?
I know I’m not funny But I always laugh alone so...
I’m happy anon!

>>3351922
Why not do both?

>>3351967
fuck off furfag get aids

Sup /ic/

>>3351986
I’m not a Furfag
Anyways
Let’s enjoy drawinnnngggg yei

Any lessons to take in future commissions regarding color choices and such?

>>3352000
Fuck me. This is the correct one, with the bluish tinge to the shadows.

>>3352000
I can't tell what the background is supposed to be

also that's not how cuts look like

This place is slow
Don’t you want to upload your stuff? Dear anon?

>>3352005
who r u talking to

>>3352006
Everyone here

>>3351961
either head is too big or torso too small

>>3352012
This place is like quality control, testing and see what shits wrong before going public

>>3351934
sorry for dissapoint you.

>>3352013
I tried matching the proportion of the original
I knew it looked wonky/different, so I'll experiment some more and maybe decrease the head a smidge etc.

>>3352013
are you aware that stylized proportions dont follow the rules of loomis proportions?

>>3352005
I do want to but I don't know if it's worth going through the trouble of scanning it.

>>3352058
I do, but you need skill to make it not look awkward, which it does in that pic

>>3352013
You can't really use that method for his style of drawing. His head is bigger than the torso lol.

>>3352137
It still is a bad stylized drawing senpai

the ribs are the size of the chest, the bellybutton is way too long and up, etc

>>3352139
I didn't say it was good. I'm just saying he can't use that method for his drawing.

>>3352145
Fight me bitch

really stepped out of my comfort zone with this one..

a """goblin""" from my sketchbook

>>3352212
pretty nice

I went through the trouble of scanning it after all.

>>3352234
The arm that is resting on the hips is too forward. It looks unnatural and uncomfortable. Maybe move the elbow back a little bit more.

>>3352003
Saved, thanks anon!

>>3352240
Thanks. I tried drawing it pulled back at first but that looked weird to me. When I did the pose my arm seemed to go out to the side so I tried to make it like that.

Fucking sexy robot anime - quickie study

yaaay coloring

>>3352271
I'm so sorry for the resolution size; that's my tablet's default screenshot size and i was zoomed in :^/

>>3351742
>>3351784
>I don't want him
Move your scrubby ass to the /beg/ thread, retard.

>>3351513
What's the source for this image please?

>>3351903
I like it, Shadman

>>3352312
check the previous thread >>3350851

>>3352324
Thank you

>>3351513
can someone tell me what Im doing wrong, with linework in particular?

Kind of a bland pose, trying to learn a 90s anime thing but the eye style still eludes me.

>>3351879
I like it!
What did you do to become this good if i may ask, i love the sketchy style!

>>3352257
Combined some studies

wtf is perspective

>>3352491

>>3352519
Did... did you even try?

>>3352322

>>3352545
Normies fuck off.

>>3352546

>>3352525
Commissioner said

>The background doesn't need to be detailed at all. The main thing is the woman.

>>3351742
I like it. Is this scanned or a photo?
>They move to a bigger town because they just got married

>>3351827
Thanks for this

>>3351314
Halfway done. Painting is funnn.

>>3352553
Looks like you used the fill bucket/magic want tool to color the lineart. Just fix it by filling the gaps with a layer below the colors. Also, is the left part of her hair supposed to be the same color as her shirt?

>>3352333
What kind of style are you going for?

>>3352585
wow I forgot to upload the image

>>3351961
Why are the bunny ears coming from the bandanna like that?

>>3352002
I'm not understanding how these shadows work. Is that thing in the back not in the background?

>>3351784
i think they should both be seen in the vehicle, that or keep that angle and show the other guy with some briefcases

>>3352587
>those pecs
>those abs
>those biceps
>flat

You need to fill out those forms more and make it pop a bit since you're painting above them you shouldn't be too difficult.

>>3352519
>>3352525
>>3352585
nope It's just how I start by blocking in where I'm gonna put color. This was $20 I think I'm close to calling this done. It was meant to be simple and quick

>>3352649
How did you do those backgrounds?

>>3352649
literally looks like a porn game

>>3352642
Gah, you're right. I'll see what I can do.

is this good enough for /alt/ yet?

>>3352672
That's disturbing in so many ways.

Take it to /porn/

>>3352650
D-do you actually want to know?

>>3352722
Yeah of course.

>>3352727
>Bullshit Lots of Bullshit.
>Flat Base
>Paint clip next layer
>Texture image clip / distort
>Add variations in filtered colors / painted segments
>Find / make viable repetitious elements and erase with textured eraser
>Keep applying canvas texture to help give a more united 'feel'
>Paint more and clip in places
>Erase with textured brush more
>repeat till satisfied with over all 'feel'

This creates a clunky image but some time sit's okay for normies. Its like being in Photo shop class and abusing masking and opensource textures or images. Some time skewing texture images and playing with overlay multiply ect ect and opacity helps.

>>3352757
could you please tell me how long does it take for you to finish a commission? I'm really fucking slow and always feel bad because I feel I'm taking forever to do something other artist could put out in an afternoon.

>>3352757
yeah and it looks like shit you fucking retard

What do you guys think of this? It's concept art for my sci fantasy 71st century ttrpg.

>>3352157
really cool from head to knees, legs are a bit too long though

>>3352777
Honestly it depends on the 'look' your commissioners want. Some commissioners like stuff that isn't technically nice / appealing. Example of what a commissioner said about prior image:
>It's very pretty! It's interesting In a good way, of course. :D

There is an artist on boards I frequent who doe steh same exact poses does flat shitty coloring and uses anime screen caps as bg's. He charades 50 a character and usually does 2 character images and he cranks them out like 3-4 a day. I think his anatomy is dogshit and that its really fucking bad but some reason he gets a lot of commissions. I also don't like him because even when they do auctions he'll auction the same pose over and over and advert it like a one time thing. This particular artist also blatantly traces other stuff to get their work done with out regard to if a body fits the way it does. At the end of the day it's what makes the commissioner happy and how fast they get it for some.

You will also get comissioners who ask you for bland boring shit.

As far as how long it takes me it depends on who Im working for what prodict I'm trying to creeate and how much I'm getting apid for it. You'll always get folks who want top quality but not want to wait that long or not want to pay that much. At the end of the day I produce what I get paid to make and what makes the commissioner happy. I just would really rather not trace or use a DBZ screen cap for my Backgrounds. Above image only took a few hours to actually make.


Image attached is a commission where Commissioner liked that look with textures but paid for a higher quality image. Image attached took like 3-4 hours from start to finish. Made 125 off a it. . This particular commissioner just loves 'my style' and often gives me repeat commissions and is always looking to commission me more. When it comes to it people like what they like regardless if other people think its shit.

Not very happy with the bee parts, maybe a shinier look would be better?
I'll just finish it quickly and move onto studies

>>3352929
Look up gauntlets and armour for inspiration

also monster girls

>>3352951

>>3352953

>>3352966
why don't you show us her pretty face? cmon, i'm dying to see

>>3352649
>using lens flare unironically
>pants look like they're transparent at first glance due to similar color and texture in both background and on legs
>blatant showstopping of realistic textures on a cartoony piece
I can tell you were rushing because this isn't that good dude. Aside from things like her breasts being a little wonky and her eyes not lining up correctly, you're not completely hopeless when it comes to figure drawing. Please just learn how to paint things using cell shading and learning how to pick good color transitions instead of the filtered bullshit you did here, it'll look so much better and it'll take less time in the end once you learn how to do it right.

>>3351742
Not to be a dickhead, but I've seen this idea before.

>>3352361
are copies really art?

>>3353097
>art
Nah gross, I copy things because I want to and because it feels therapeutic. I’m not trying to accomplish anything.

It’s like I’m just going for a run, and maybe I get faster, but I don’t intend to compete in the olympics.

>>3352966
Nice stuff
I love OL outfits

>>3351513
here's some of my drawings from the past year. I draw every day for 1-4hrs.

>>3353316
Please take a photo w/ better lighting. Would also serve you well to play around with contrast & brightness for more clarity when uploading.

>>3353316
can't hardly see a thing but it reminds me of Flapjack a little

>>3352996
One day anon I will strive to do good like this... One day.

Hi thread! I'd really like your opinion on how cyclops/monoeye characters are designed!
Do you prefer them to have a nose? Or not have one? Please answer with the following poll!

http://www.strawpoll.me/15329006

Thank you!!

>>3353196
You know, that's a good idea.
I think I'm going to start doing some copies of other art like that. I bet I could pick up a thing or two.

>>3353533
With cute moe noses

>>3352966
I like this; would love to be able to sketch and color as loosely as this one.

Working on a redraw, taking longer than it should it should be.

quick one from last night

>>3353636
How long ago was the "before?"

>>3353734
Nearly 4 years ago.

>>3353740
That's unironically pretty cute

Out of many experiments I've previous done, this is the coloring and art style I'm going for.

>>3346831
Hey, no one responded to this one for some reason but I thought it was really nice.

>>3353749
Thanks anon.
>>3353729
I love this. Care to share a finished piece? Genuinely interested to see the difference.
>>3353755
Hair's pretty interesting. However, her face is approaching uncanny levels; can attribute it to her mouth and chin. That and the hand and fingers on top could've been done better.

>>3353766
well, it is finished in the sense that I don't intend to work on it further but I guess here's some other stuff where I spent more time https://twitter.com/Godsh0t/status/871845477691645956

>>3351903
Her left shoulder seems shorter than her other shoulder. You might want to fix it, not unless you like it that way.

>>3353779
Wow you live in Gensokyo, too? How quirky is that!

>>3353779
Fantastic works. You are a great inspiration.

>4 years ago.
good to have talent

>>3353729
Blog?

>>3353757
P cute

>>3353859
Oops nvm I didn't check the other post

>>3353729
Should've drawn Nino desu senpai

>>3352966
blog...?

From my sketchbook, picked the pose from /AQT/
I liked it enough that I might redraw later, just need to fix some things.

>>3352157
>>3352966
>>3353729
>>3353779
Nice

>>3351903
Shadman?

>>3352322
>>3353868
is this the birth of a new meme :^)

>>3353995
Thanks, but you forgot to give me a (You) for some reason haha

Legs, shoes and full body pictures are the bane of my existence, but I'm trying to get better at them. Any advice or red line to improve the pose/proportions would be greatly appreciated.

>>3353864
it's the laala show alright

i was also sad that it's ending and I'll never get another episode of laala ever again

Luna
First fan art of my life

>>3354335
it's not really a technical critique but when the tits are that big I feel like she should have thicc hips and thighs to match, just so it's balanced
also it's a bit weightless looking and I think the head might be too big? and clothing doesn't cling to tits like that, it creates a cloth bridge between them
cute though, I wanna see you git gud

>>3352338
first learn gesture and basic anatomy my mang

replicating someone art-style is chasing a dragon

>>3354441
I wanted her to have big thighs but I think I might be holding back because I'm too afraid of making the proportions weird. Tried making them bigger here + fixed leg proportions, took another stab at the shoes, fixed the shirt thing. Dunno if I can fix the weightlessness unless I redraw it though, oh well. That's what practice is for. What do you think?

>>3354440
I did wrong with proportion, the head is small. That is understandable because I had not practice proportion.
I’m gonna review and do it again.
I’m triggered

>>3354476
yeah, I'd say you changed everything for the better there

>>3354482
Cool, thanks. Time to cry while attempting lineart.

>>3351821
>>3352558
NP

If you keep having problems check out this book:

>Drawing Cartoon Faces: 55+ Projects for Cartoons, Caricatures & Comic Portraits
https://vk
.com/doc4043932_318723875?hash=88f291bbe009db6624&dl=5a5cc89269522a584b

>>3352672
eyes are unappealing, probably the lack of eyebrows and eyeslashes, they are way too thin

That neck holy shit

Ear size and positioning is proportional to the top of the eyebrow and the bottom of the nose

Jaw has more square than a yaoi manga

Arm is fucken tiny m8

Left arm was eaten by the void of "drawing hands is hard"

Lastly you have absolutely no understanding of wrinkles and drapery which makes your clothes look painted over and Those nipples poking trough the shirt are hysterically laughable and don't make me mention those shoes or wathever those things were supposed to be

also that dick is small

tl;dr: You are bottom /beg/, no offense

read about clothing:
>>3351538 →
>>3351887 →

Understand foreshortening (read perspective books like the scott one: "How to Draw" by Scott Robertson (HIGH quality scan)
>https://mega.co.nz/#!iB81WbxK!eNSWCFuDinDeSXib_e0s6ZpfPIAMEGEPpz8otwRiIoQ
or Andrew Loomis - Successful Drawing :
http://www.alexhays.com/loomis/Andrew%20Loomis%20-%20Successful%20Drawing.pdf
)

PS: sorry for the bad redline, I'm bad with the brushes
PSS: I posted it in porn but it hit bump limit so I'm posting it in here

>>3354491
niceu

the rifle could use more details

>>3353766
thanks anon. I'm terrible at hands, sorry. I hope to get better at it.

>>3354502
I had trouble drawing a character design because its eyes were always below the anchor, even the slightest rotation made its face look deformed. That image is very helpful, thank you.

>>3351513
>post some bullshit on 4chan while trying to learn how to tame Photoshop
>check back after a week
>new thread
>my guy is in the the thumbnail for the 1st time
What the fuck? Somehow my white haired boi with his sunday vest made it to the thumbnail?! Now I gotta make a reaction image to this shit.

WIP

>>3354661
Is that Raiden without his mask?

>>3354572
Watch that proportion of that hand left hand rinfag its too small

>>3354664
no I'm just tripping on metal gear and ripping off yoji shinkawa because it's the only thing stocked in my visual library right now
so, unintentional colour-swap donut-steel raiden, I guess

>>3354661
Looks pretty cool, thou it looks like it was all made using a vector pen
Not sure if thats a compliment

Anutha one.

>>3352212
EL GOBLINO

>>3354727
Is that graphite?

>>3354727
really nice

>>3354572
>>3354476
>>3351903
Could fap to these when they're done. Take that how you will.

oh boy it's been a while since I posted
>>3352363
cool

>>3354735
>>3354737
Thank you and yeah it's pencil on paper. Ran into the edge of the paper drawing that bottom wheel.

>>3354739
nice

>>3353779
>26 years old
Man, I wish I was half as good as you in 4 years. Anything that helped you with coloring in particular? Your palette choices are superb.

Also, the fact that you only have 14 patrons is hilarious. I swear if you just learned to market yourself you could be raking in the big bucks.

I want to learn how to draw faces like old 70's/80's manga (only faces. The anatomy is rather shitty), but I can't make heads or tails about what shapes they used to draw them.

I know they're supposed to be 2D, crudely-drawn faces, but I just don't know how to replicate the same shapes and feeling of the original work.

What should I do?

>>3354661
t h i c c

>>3354727
Really nice to look at, aside from the inside of that elbow on the leftside. I'm also getting heavy Kinu Nishimura vibes.

spooked

>>3354754
Show your attempts.

Hey, I wanna come up with a weaboo name for my dA account. Is there a name generator or something out there?

>>3354925
Just mash two Nip words you like together

>>3354754
sendspace.com/file/non14o

>>3354864
Thanks anon. I was going for a Persona-ish style but I see what you mean about Nishimura. I think both styles have certain common qualities that I was after.
If I do more with this I'll make sure to fix the inner arm.

Here's somethin'

>>3353605
I love this comic so much

>>3352587
Fixed a lot of things for doggy boy but I just wasn't feeling it for the girl so I just did a quick render and hoped for the best.

One I did recently. I know the proportions are off. The left leg also looks a bit funky too and the left hand at the angle its at I think you should be able to see the pinky. There's a lot wrong but I've only been using a tablet for around 2 months. Tear me to shreds desu.

>>3355301
uh oh

>>3355301

>>3355347
Boom. Yes. Thats exactly what I wanted. Thankyou

>>3355301
I really like the wet look.
The tits should hang a lil lower though and the hips are a slight disaster, also you should spend some times looking at knees. The hand on the right looks a bit stiff too and the connection of the pectoralis major isnt there so the arm on the left side looks weird. Thats about my biggest concerns that I can see right now.
Overall the picture is really appealing but you lack a lot of knowledge in anatomy. You should look into that.

>>3355022
Thanks.

>>3354739
Thanks

We need more traps

>>3354739
good

>>3354868
that ghost face is cute

>>3355110
legs look a little too tall for the torso but those thighs are nicely thicc and the arm definition is delicious too


Here's this finished. I uh...I'm never attempting to paint metallic fabric ever again. Like, holy shit.

>>3355708
I don't get the MILF vibes, but she's cute af.

>>3355710
She's dressed a lot younger because she tries (and fails miserably) to fit in with the hip kids. In reality she's pushing 35 with no friends, and she's broke and working 3 jobs.

>>3355716
When you put it that way, I totally see the uncanny resemblance to gyaru moms.

>>3355710
I see it, its like that trope of the ex-delinquent girl who is now a young mother doing everything for her child. no milf vibes, thats totally different.

>>3355716
>In reality she's pushing 35 with no friends, and she's broke and working 3 jobs.
>ITT Anon describes herself with a third party persona using a fictional character

>>3355722
god these people are so pathetic. I feel sorry for them.

>>3355708
this is nice. jean shorts are my achilles' heel.

>>3355301
You said it yourself, your proportions are off. Did you use a reference? Do this pose in a mirror and you will understand why the left leg looks so wrong. Its possible but uncomfortable and unnatural. Also the hips would move with the leg as you twist it. The hip is facing the wrong direction.

>>3355110
You have a blog? I like the style.

>>3355276
What was your twitter again?

>>3355808
https://twitter.com/derbikerks/

>>3355671

dabbling in woodblock again for the first time in years

it is so satisfying

>>3356013

Time during Lunch, needed color practice and I'll finish something someday.

>>3356023
Blog?

>>3356025
Sorry, not yet. Silly reason, I can't decide on a name.

>>3355708
Post blog please

>>3356073
angeban on tumblr

>>3355671
you really can't into heads
read hampton and stop drawing anime for a bit

>>3356097
idk, I think it looks okay, can you be more specific? I'm not him but his heads are better than mine, I want to know what you mean

>>3356104
would look better if lined digitally

I can't into skirts

>>3354754
Ohh i know what you're searching for. There was a space pirate episode they made in osomatsu-san 2nd season, it had those 70-80's faces but the anatomy in it was top notch. Try to go on like that and money will be thrown at you, if you decide to animate your work or draw comics

>>3352821
i love it

Working on some ideas for panels for my Twitch channel. I feel the right art is kinda goofed, all thoughts welcome. Thanks!

Working on panel ideas for my Twitch channel. I feel like her left arm is all goofed, but can't really see it. Thoughts and critiques please?

>>3356849
Shoulders are too hunched/rounded and left forearm is too short I think. Something closer to this maybe?

>>3356097
Will do

Do the hands/arms read well? I kinda think I messed up with my choice of angles or something.

>>3356104
I really like this, but her boobs look like they're tacked on. Got a bloggggg?

>>3356849
Don't shade with black ahhhhhhh!

>>3356849
What >>3356896 said, also those colors are tereible and don't shade with black

>>3357000
I haven't been on /ic/ in little over a month, but you're getting a lot better from what I last remember.

>>3357038
>>3357000
>>3356896
Thanks a long for the feedback. Also, I have no fucking clue about color theory.

>>3357038
>>3357000
>>3356896
Much appreciated for the feedback. I have no idea how to color and never even studied color theory, but that probably shows.

>>3357159
Aw, thanks anon. That means a lot to me.

>>3357000
Arms look fine, but the left pec/moob and nipple should be a little bit raised, due to the pectoral muscle raising with the arm.

>>3351513
Cloth studies

>>3357359
gotta render it out or youll never get the folds down

>>3357774
Gotta learn how to render a sphere first

I never know what to do with the offhand/arm

>>3357831
Do the pose yourself naturally and see what your off-arm does. In this pose, my off-arm hangs naturally by my side.

>>3357840
That's a good idea. I have no idea why I didn't think of that.

>>3351513

Another sketch, still trying to develop a character.
shes a crybaby, but also really intense and excitable.

>>3358100
Cute. I like the expression.

>>3358100
blog?

>>3358118
Thank you!
>>3358127
I'm starting a new blog with my new art style, its called cloudlettuce on insta

>>3358132
Why start a new blog? What happened to your old one?

>>3358142
Well i went into a real slump with my art style so decided to put that account on hiatus and go off and experiment with new styles, so simply cloudlettuce is a accout where i can do what i want without worrying about my 5000 followers

>>3358148
the fuck?

>>3358156
what?

>>3358148
Sounds counterproductive.

>>3358161
I just needed some space to experiment with my work, i tried to continue on my main account, but people started complaining about my old art which really discouraged me.

I feel like I could make the legs a little less stiff. Any advice?

>>3358285
Absolutely cute face
Blog?

>>3358312
Do you routinely find albinos with asymmetric faces and thousand yard stares cute?

>>3358338
Don't get too excited, probably samefag.

>>3358338
Yes, how did you know? The albino eyelashes really sell it.

>>3354685
it WAS all made using vector pen
I'd like to say I'm practicing shape theory or something but I'm just bad with brushes honestly
going to try and blend this up now anyway

>>3354859
I caught that and thought big glutes would be okay for a robutt cause those are some pretty useful muscles
but it just looked more and more ridiculous as I worked at it so I gave him lipo

>>3354506
this is a bad redline
please stop giving advice

>>3357000
WTF happened to my last post?? At least only the image was deleted.

>>3357349
I tried fixing it with the liquify tool since by the time you posted that, I ended up getting kinda far and didn't feel like repainting that area for some reason.

>>3358457
Eww

>>3358472
Take that 'ew' and shove it up ur bumhole

>>3358285
desu i think its less of a stiffness problem and more of an anatomy + skirt gesture problem. Her thighs are long af and the object that she should be leaning on would normally stop wind from blowing that skirt out so its action just seems unnatural because it makes you think the movement is from her rather than from the environment while her pose suggest otherwise.

>>3358475
Whatever you say cancer

>>3358285
I love this. Got a blog?

>>3358457
Cute!

Trying to do some foreshortening from imagination. I feel like somethings off with the arm and the back.

>>3358718
foreshorten arms dont look like that at all. youre pushing the shoulder into the arm giving it those weird 3 segments that it shoudlnt have

>>3358728
So I should remove the lines on the deltoid that are extending into the bicep. Or is it better to scrap and try again? The arm at this perspective is kinda baffling me.

hey what's this kind of art called? ignore the monochrome and surrealism, i'm looking for the stencil-type art like this but this is much more rich in such it feels like it has shades instead of plain black and white like stencil has. Similar art is "Metropolis" movie poster (the one with the robot).
Thnks

>>3358747
>hey what's this kind of art called?
It's called math. Russian mathematician Anatoly Fomenko drew this.

>>3358757
I know the artist and all his drawings are in this style, the style is not mathematics. I'm looking for similar ones and only one I've found so far is the art in Metropolis. It's like stelncil + shaded
pic related

>>3358762
> the style is not mathematics
That was a joke, kinda. Fomenko didn't follow any style, he was trying to illustrate mathematics. This is a pi number, for example.

>>3358816 I see, but not my point though. I want to know what this type of artstyle's name is, not what it represents. Since I found the Metropolis art and some other unkown stuff it's clear it's some kind of stencil + shaded monochrome artstyle and I'd love to learn it.

>>3358823
Bad pic, I meant to post this

>>3358285
Goofed around for a little bit, sorry for shity silhouettes instead of a proper red line - I suck at drawing legs, let alone explaining anatomy that I don't even know, lol. In the end I ended up going to the mirror and taking the pose myself. As I found out every single pose of pic related is fairly uncomfortable, except the last one on the right which is a pose that I tend to have naturally - the weight is spread out to arms and one leg while the other is stiff hence providing support for the body. As such I suppose there won't be a pose where both legs will be relaxed per se, one of them must carry the weight of the body.

Also crossing legs while also putting the relaxed feets heel on the ground is kinda bothersome, it feels more natural to let it stand on the ball of the feet while the leg dangles from the hip bent by it's weight. So if you draw it more straight I suppose it will seem more tense. Probably.

Also, I think you could move the eye\brow very slightly lower and to the left. Pick related. Sorry if this post wasn't helpful.

>>3358477
>he object that she should be leaning on would normally stop wind
And if she is leaning on some sort of fence? Also I doubt that leaning on anything on the street would block the wind entirely due to it's volume that is much larger then some pole or whatever a person can possibly lean on.

>>3358893
wtf good crit

>>3358893
>the weight is spread out to arms and one leg which is stiff hence providing support for the body while the other is relaxed and is dangling from the hip not really supporting anything.
Rephrased for clarity.

Im not a real artist, I'm just trying to make something cute enough to use for a game asset

>>3358763
saving this so for reference and inspo

also posting this / recently got a wacom tablet and this is the first thing i drew

i want to learn hwo to draw cute girls, any feedback on this please ?

i like the piece but the pants is a little bit off

Not sure about this one

>>3359309

>>3359358

>>3359309
do studies of your fav artists who draw qt girls

>>3358747
A lot of art déco posters have that style

>>3359349
Might resize her right hand slightly bigger. Her right armpit might use some skin folds, IIRC teres major\minor tend to bulge when you move your arm back like that (although not sure if it is close to the body or pointing away from it, later won't have such phenomena). Although I'm not sure if it is all that noticeable on a lean person or better yet petite young girls so it's probably fine as is. Her right feet should be visible, at least partially. Can't my finger on it but the position of the head bothers me. Maybe it is off centre on the torso? Idk. Might be even her right shoulder - might add a more prominent deltoid to the right hand as to separate it from the spine more, kinda hard to read that area.

>>3359358
I hate to ask, but who's the artist on the right?

bang

>>3359440
Nyuudles, but don't expect anything good from him because his style's not that good IMO, but there are exceptions like that one I posted.

>>3359436
Well, something like this, I guess? Although you are probably better off looking for a reference image, I probably made a mistake or two Anyway, your woomy is a qt.

messing with actual good art

can't figure out the upper body and arms, will look for ref tomorrow probably...

>>3359535
This is nice, I like it

>>3359579
No you don't

>>3353755
It looks like Aerith is sad/scared and Cloud is concerned for her. The top of the face/eyes don't match whats happening in the bottom.

>>3351903
if her bf% is low enough to see abs like that, there could be visible hip bones or more definition in the legs

>>3359595
Yes, I do. Fuck off, crabbo

wip

another print sketch, help always welcome

>>3352862
Thanks for the elaborate reply. I guess I have to simply put my work out there and hope for the best, 3-4 hours is amazing compared to the entire month it took me to deliver something once. I work on the piece like 8 hours a day trying to make it just right and it's pretty frustrating since I don't really make much money off of art. I'm the worst salesman on the planet.

>>3359456
Thanks, I don't like that either. Just wanted to see how he handles chubbier bodies so I could use it in my art, but there aren't many works similiar to the one you posted in his pages.

>>3359866
your composition is boring. I'd rethink it. you don't need to show everything. also maybe put something in the foreground to show field depth.

>>3359866
I had trouble telling what's happening in your sketch because the hands aren't clear enough, make sure you lead the eye towards there if that's your focal point.

>>3359935
it feels really unnatural to cut off the tops of heads like that, you made it worse

>>3359942
It's pretty obvious, anon. The focal point is even the nail file buffer itself. You might need to spend more time looking.

>>3359952
I spent my time staring at the anime tiddies

>>3359959
Thanks for stealing my girl, jackass

>>3359949
it was just a quick example. anon should play with the composition themselves.

>>3359959
>>3359962
what the fuck

>>3359935
Hm, it has to stay at this dimension since it's for print, so I'd have to find another way to do it...are the legs coming into the foreground really not enough? feels strange to place something there for the sake of it

>>3359942
>>3359952
yeah my sketches aren't too clear but it would be more obvious after cleaning it up. I'll redraw most of the right to try some different stuff though, thanks

>>3359866
I find the pose to be ill-fitting to the context (like why is she facing away? It's awkward to hold your arm behind your back like that and I think she'd prefer to look at him more easily), but honestly, tits and hips have gotta be the focus so I understand.

Also, are you preparing to table or is this your first time? I'm considering tabling one day, but I'm scared and have no friends to accompany me or help me out.

>>3359959
>>3359962
But who drew it better?

>>3359975
sorry, I'll clarify. it's not that you lack a foreground so much that everything is neatly isolated. consider having some objects overlapping and/or getting cut off to increase depth and interest.

>auto-sage
new thread when?

>>3359952
I did, when my eye keeps looking for an explanation after 5 seconds there's something wrong. I saw the nail buffer but not the hands.

>>3359980
my vote goes to >>3359962 because the head isn't ridiculously long, although I have issues with the neck

>>3359962
*steals your girl*
nothing personnel

Just dropping this at this point, might as well move onto something else
Besides the face/hair/head area looking really off and the breasts, anything else to reflect on?

>>3359492
>>3359492
Thanks for the advice! This looks a lot better.

>>3359935
>>3359982
I shifted a lot of elements around, hopefully that's better? I know the hands are still hard to read but I think it'll be a lot easier once there's color and lines, since one character is wearing gloves and the other is not.

>>3359976
Hm, the idea was that while she does things like read in bed, he is stuck doing her nails while she makes no attempt to accommodate him? Like if he wanted to switch hands she'd make him get up and go to the other side of the bed. It's honestly probably a shitty illustration idea to start with if I'm explaining so much to get the context but I have a lot of fire emblem prints and pretty much bank on customers buying into the fandom and character tropes so it works out in practice

Also yeah, I table regularly, I've been grinding out a lot of prints lately to prepare for summer. If you can get someone to come with you it definitely makes things a lot easier, but alone is doable too so don't sweat it too much.

>>3360130
I like this composition better. With the heads closer together, the window doesn't act as a distracting barrier. Less wasted space in general. And don't worry, I think it's pretty easy to tell what's going on. Lookin forward to seeing this one colored, assuming you plan to do so

Done I think

New thread was finally made
>>3360196
>>3360196
>>3360196

>>3359329
Aww, I thought this was a Warhammer reference