/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3343165
i drew reisen

>>3343174
Perfect

>try to draw anime
>looks high school deviant art tier
every fucking time

Anesya from Cross Edge WIP

Critiques are welcome.

>>3343376
You botched the chin, but it's better to have the head angled lower anyways since having a clear view of the face is part of the appeal to whatever you're doing.

POST YOUR DOODLES, QUICK.

>>3343410
what the fuck I drew this years ago

>>3342799

>>3343423
fucking sugoi

Fucking medium hard airbrush, why have i not discovered you earlier

Fuck you built in procreate pencil tool, I’ve wasted so much time with you.

Just some studies for tool practice

>>3343376
some messy ideas so take them with a grain of salt. maybe using shading to define under jaw instead of solid inking it

Trying to learn to paint not-anime-but-still-kind-of-anime

>>3343574
lovely. blog?

>>3343590
No, sorry.
But do you have one, anon?

Struggling with clothing, does the thing around her chest look weird?

>>3343590
Normally I would but this is completely unlike what I typically draw. Unless you want to see some gay furry and lolicon.

>>3343613
this one isn't me

>>3343534
u faggots keep pushing the face in, learn 3d lol

>>3343676
YES PLEASE LINK

Hold on so Agawa posts here or was it a ruse? Some time ago an anon posted that pic and asked for advice

I really want to try and do this more painterly, less on the line art.
How do I make the "transition" while still keeping the features readable? besides the soft-edge hard-edge stuff
>>3343676
nigga just link it's good either way

>>3343376
>>3343534

How to get good at perspective drawings like these? I've been grinding them for weeks but everything I do just looks like a deformed midget.

>>3343961
check your values man, way too light

>>3343376
Update.

>>3343914
who

>>3343961
Try different brushes, try going trough this book and try to replicate them digitally (keys to painting fur and feathers):
vk
.com/doc4043932_376947368?hash=ce6268eb1c6bd2dab5&dl=785e89909c644034dc

then take a note on the steps you took whenever you get a texture you like

the second thing you could try is to use the Value Propagate filter in gimp

>>3343425
Why won't you fucking listen that your faces are fucking dog shit anon?

>>3343495
Noice! Very dynamic shapes my man.

>>3344122
nice

>>3343425
no really, why do you even post here?

>>3343165
Updated character from last thread

>>3344323
you need to step up your gesture sempai

>>3343961
>>3343590
>>3343686
https://twitter.com/orenjipiiru

>>3344397
>expected gay furries
>lesbians

>>3344358
It was just a clothing set. Im doing an action sheet soon

>>3344397
cute
>>3344406
neck self

finished that drawing from the last thread

Tried drawing in photoshop for little while. Didn't turn out too great this time.

>>3344562
colors read amazing on the thumbnail, looks good man

>>3344560
Cute stuff anon<3
I hope she like it

Taking a break from anime, it's actually kinda hard for my brain to freely switch between the two.

>>3343495
The warm ups continue - mech butttts

How does this pose look?

>>3344807
Needs less loomis my friend.
Try playing several dynamic poses similar to that (8 to be exact) then pick the best or let us pick

>>3344807
Absolutely this >>>3344957
Do not forget to post those 8 poses along with your choice.

>>3344777
degenerate
>>3344801
chick on the left is cool but hella generic

>>3344801
One advantage in drawing mech is it's always never stolen.
I don't know why but that just happens.

>>3344777
It's about time we see a Chad Torso and not a virgin nu-male beer bellied estrogen ridden soy boy.

>>3344560
Too much cheek

>>3343465

>>3345160
Derry looking

>>3345162
*Derpy

>>3345162
You think so? I flipped it a bunch too, oh well.

first time postin here.

>>3344807
its cute anon

>>3345169
Yeah, the eyes are unfocused and the gaped mouth just adds to it.
Placement of a lot of features looks wrong too especially the ears. Neck/shoulders are way off, don't be afraid to draw the body under the clothes
>>3345187
very nice

>>3345187
is cute, like teenage version of little girl dragon from dragon maid anime

>>3345187
Pelvis is missing its pubic arch, the belly button is misplaced you need to establish the corners of the iliac crest to help you properly place it, we also have to entirely different planes between the upper torso and the lower limbs you need to keep the entire figure in perspective otherwise you will end up with a very awkward looking drawing where nobody would seem to know what is wrong. For instance, take a look at how you drew the lower limbs they're facing us but you have the pelvis in a 3/4 view this is probably you attempting to compensate with drawing from memory instead of properly placing forms in perspective which helps explain the generic and cliche overly used posture.

Use a reference, and I mean a real world figure not something you copied off an anime the whole thing reeks of someone else's bad habits as if you copied off another weebshit.

>>3345196
>very nice
>>3345198
>is cute, like teenage version of little girl dragon from dragon maid anime
Stop posting and fuck off back to DA

>>3345200
thank you for criticism yea i tried to use this reference for the pose so I sort of had to wing it with the legs and I'm not going to lie I always mess them up, same with the lower torso.

i will try more interesting poses next time too

>>3345215
Study the pelvis and study where the muscles, and tendons originate to and from especially where they attach and how they're in relation to other common tendons it will help you keep proportions in check as well as where to place these forms in perspective. Simplifying the torso as box forms will help tremendously especially figuring out where the bony landmarks are that you will use to help figure out where the muscles of the lower limbs originate from.

>>3345200
>Pelvis is missing its pubic arch
That's the only point I'm not getting, mind spelling it out or drawing it? It's helpful to see critique of people who are better than me by the way

>>3345215
Don't copy the ref 1:1
try to stylize it too

>>3345234
That looks a hell of a lot better

>>3345160
give her eyes something to focus on
Don't give her a cross eye
Jaws also needs improving

>>3345261
forgot to redline her small shoulder and chest

>>3344983
>always never stolen.
I stole it. I copy as much as I feel like, but then at some point, I get bored and simplify. You get minor differences on the little greeble parts but there is nothing creative or original happening here.

>>3345261
how do you draw faces so well

Here's the final. Looks a bit lame but that's life.

>>3345261
Creative differences aside, I think your version introduces issues with the spinal column-head connection/neck length, and it gives the eyes different shapes. Not sure about the relation between base of nose and top of mouth either.

With that said, you made me realize I had added no form to the iris/lens and showed me that my version was fucked up below the ear. I did some band-aid fixes before I painted it.

Thanks.

>>3345270
The torso is intentionally small. I wanted to go for the look where she's pushing her shoulders forward. Guess I failed to counter the awkward silhouette with proper lines.

>>3345398
YIKES

>>3345398
that's pretty bad

>>3345398
ruined

>>3345408
>>3345410
>>3345415
I'm gonna try and expand my value range with future ones so there'll probably be lots of comedy, stay tuned

>>3345398
Nice base colors, needs more light. Looks like she's inside a dark room.

had some fun with paint sketch and ref while taking some liberties

>>3345444
neat, I like it

>>3345444
you drew the right eye from a front view rather than 3/4

>>3345398
>get blessed with an actually okay-looking redline
>completely ignore it
is this the power of dunning-kruger?

Lots of things could be better but I think I've been working on it for too long

>>3345398
You.. didn't fix the eyes..

>>3345398
>I think your version introduces issues with the spinal column-head connection/neck length

You're such a fucking faggot holy shit this can't be real you have to be memeing

>>3345611
>implying anatomyfags weren't actually real

>>3345398
>tries to correct red-liner and excuses himself by making a worse drawing

>>3345398
lol

>>3345398

APEX CUTIE

>>3345682
How's your mental health?

>>3345684
It's getting better. The thoughts of transitioning aren't as bad as they were before, but I still wish I was born a woman.

>>3344961
>>3344957
I didn't do 8 but I ended up with this

>>3345684
I so badly want to be a pretty lady.

The entire world is fucking with me but whatever. It's neat when I see my art in movies like Blade Runner 2049 but it's also incredibly annoying that I can't enjoy it fully. I feel like I am missing out on all kinds of fun.

They still give me weird dreams that mean absolutely nothing. The problem is that I realized they were lying to me about eevverrytthhiinnnggg solely to throw off my detective game, so anything they DO tell me is more than likely horseshit. I can't imagine why they put forth so much effort when it has absolutely no effect at all. It's weird how hard you guys try.

It's a huge waste of resources.

The only other explanation is that "people" are playing along at home or something. But whatever. You people are fucking assholes. If this is true then I don't know what the real world even is or what it even could be.

>>3345584
Could you draw a regular musclegirl for a change? Please ;_;

>>3345702
Is this pasta?

>>3345398
Nigga...

>>3345398
There's no way this is real and not elaborate bait by some guy intentionally making shitty drawings that get shittier with time.

>>3345398
Haha oh wow

>>3345702
>>3345695
It'll be ok anon

>>3345398
Put me in the screenshot

>>3345715
There's so much of regular ones out there, I live to fill the void of flat muscle lolis

>>3345398

>>3345755
I think he was just asking for some that aren't 300 feet tall

>>3345448
thank

>>3345553
oh shit i see it now too
should've paid more attention during the paint progress
thanks for pointing it out though i'll try to be more careful of that in the future

>>3345701
super kyoot

somethings bothering me but I can't put my finger on it

>>3346033
his pants are a bit tight, unless he is actually an eel woman. do eel have penis

>>3346119
not that guy but I don't think that's it. what do you suggest he gives it a noticeable bulge? some of you guys are so dumb

>>3346123
no, just give some extra fabric in the crotch area rather than have it cling/make distinct crotch lines. its the left leg that seems off i think, too

>>3346134
>left leg
Do you think it could be it needs more definition
to let you know the direction it's pointing?

>>3345398
the eyes being different shapes was intentional man, if you ever studied japanese manga youd know its a perspective trick

k hopefully i fixed most of the issues, haven't got too much time left so can't hold off on finalizing much longer

>>3346145
maybe, i tried this

>>3346157
Not perfect, but definitely better.

I can't be fucked to render anything anymore.

>>3345121
LMAO

>>3346157
Much better onii-chan~ ^^

>>3345398
>gets a redline
>utterly fails to compute
I never thought I'd live to see a Dunning-Kruger of this magnitude.....

Some character art. This ones of a witch queen

And this one's of her greatnephew

>>3345701
>Connie
fukken saved!
cute :3

>>3345398
Why do you even name your files like that?

>>3345755
>flat muscle lolis
>that drawing
are you trying to confuse me?

>>3343425
I despise you

>>3345398
Woah, so this is the power of /ic/...

Any glaring issues i need to check? I'll probably mess with those amps in the background a bit before i settle on anything.

I just realized I've been taking screenshots of my drawings when they're not at 100% scale for god knows how long. Fuuuck.

>>3346288
those pants have no wrinkles

actually nothing does

>>3346288
the air in the head should have more volume and the left leg its kinda fucked

>>3346422
*hair

>>3346288
That looks absolutely amazing.

>>3345200
Really like it, do you have any blog?

>>3345187
Really like it, do you have any blog?

>>3345398
>bummed out about Kyle an heroed
>see this and everyone picking on him
>was about to as why is everyone bullying
>read post

oh.

>>3346430
just made one dracksart.tumblr.com

>>3346448
>bummed out about Kyle an heroed
???????

>>3346501
He was stupid enough to believe some anon claim and is sad about it

>>3346510
Probably Kyle himself samefaging.

Does it need fixing?

>>3346566
Bad posture, study how the spinal cord gives an S curve and how the ribcage and pelvis are tilted and to what degree for Males and Females.

>>3345702
>It's neat when I see my art in movies like Blade Runner 2049
Huh? Who is this

>>3346566
Why do japs always make the girls with huge tits super petite otherwise? If a woman has huge tits, shes gonna be thicker

>>3346603
not necessarily. Those ones look stupid, because the tits are bigger than her whole upper body. But large tits does not mean more fat overall.

>>3346247
great
>>3346249
awful

>>3346247
Okay art, but I have to say, that character design makes absolutely no sense at all. It looks like 5 different characters stuffed into one. Try and stick to a single theme and don't force asymmetry and random wacky colors everywhere.

>>3345420
Thanks dood. I upped the contrast and lit some planes of her face.

>>3345563
The redline was a great help and I took what I could considering the time available and concept I had in mind.

>>3346274
I have Japanese CSP and it does that by default.

>>3346761
If you can understand it that's fine.

>>3346651
What is the biggest issues with the second one, in your opinion?

I updated my mta recently

>>3346033
Looks good, but the first thing I noticed is that his head doesn't quite look like it's attached to his body. It seems like the top part of his neckpiece is tucked in a bit too much on the left, and doesn't follow the form of the neck. I've added a line to show what I mean, pic might be a bit small though

when do i get to draw like the patrick nagel

>>3344129
Thanks that's a pretty good book, I'll do studies when I'm done with this
>>3344116
darkened it a bit, I had the brightness down a bit

I was inspired by some of the pictures in the girls in dresses reference thread.

>>3347296
which one

>>3347297
Which thread or which picture(s)?

>>3347298
pic

>>3347299
Mostly these
>>3341936
>>3339269
>>3339270
>>3339273

>>3347375
neato, assuming it's a transvestite thing. if it's a lady then not very good.

>>3347375
unappealing man face

>>3347398
>>3347414
>how to tell anon missed the bulge

>>3347416
some people draw really bulging vulvas, anyway i wasn't being sarcastic, assuming it's a transvestite thing i think it's really cool, that's why i posted frank, to show i'm on the 'transvestites are cool' team

>>3347442
It's not mine, I just wanted to rib you and the other anon a little bit.
I like it too though, it's pretty damn hot imo.

>>3346976
Is the contrast in this really low or is it just me?

>>3343165

>>3347760
holy fuck shes HUGE

>>3347765
ITS just a REALLY TINY car :t

>>3347456
wheres the shading on the bazongas

Just whipped this bad boy up. Just reminded me how insanely fun art is between all the endless study sessions.

>>3347767
Not that anon, but the perspective really makes it seem like she is huge. The proportions of the car make it seem like a regular car, so is difficult to read the car as tiny and her as regular size. I would sugest that you put a couple of things in the foreground, that way you could give more context about the scale.

>>3347456

yes

>>3346586
>Huh? Who is this
clinically mentally disabled anon that traced real artists' work so much that he began to think HE was the original artist and the entire world conspired to steal his concepts
and now he wants to chop his cock off

>>3345682
How do I paint like this?

>>3345398
>Creative differences aside
kill yourself.

>>3348010
Is this a real thing?

Do we have a lolcow
Pls go on detail

If not then likely anon work in blade runner is likely that he designed some of the set art like the products or the made up advertisements or wathever

Little details like that, the equivalent of being in some crowd in the movie

>>3348018
nice post, I can tell why it took you 49 hours to concoct

>>3348019
>Do we have
>pls
fuck off reddit
>a lolcow
everyone who posts work on this board is a lolcow

>>3348034
Yeah you were just shitposting

No lolcow

Shame shame

Any problems with this so far? >>3347296
I'm particularly wondering if the left knee is a little too low.

>>3347760
is she supposed to be that big?

>>3347456
its not just you. it needs more values.

>>3347978
okay will doo!

Really been down lately and it's making me unwilling to draw. I wanted to experiment around with this a bit but in the end I don't really know where I was going with it and sorta finished it half-assedly.

>>3348103
>watermark
reeeeeee

>>3348115
Sorry ;_;

>>3348115
What's the problem?

>>3348131
gay

>>3346157
ok i finished, thanks for your help as always /ic/

>>3348257
I love you Magister-senpai

tfw redraw
tfw his head is too big

>well shit, brain; everyone probably thinks I'm a faggot for all the cute anime girls I draw. What should I do?
>dude...just draw m u s c u l a r h a n d s o m e m e n instead
fuck my life
that aside, I'm really bullshitting the anatomy and I'd appreciate directions before I go any farther

>>3348257
I strive to be at your level one day Magister-senpai.

>>3348311
What the fuck kind of logic is that?

>>3348320
I mean why even bother using a grid if you're not going to follow perspective?

>>3345398
You fucked up anon

>>3347296
the extended back of the head and the ear made it kind of seem her head was bigger compared to the rest of her. the knee does look like it needs to come up
>>3347375
should probably raise his ear, or show more of the underside of the chin and raise the mouth to keep it that low
>>3348296
I think its that his eyes are big and his hands are incredibly small, even for a perspective shot. I really like this duo, I only saw them once before. are you making a webcomic?

>>3348396
ye
I guess it's nothing a little photoshop can't fix
>redraw it and everything is still a little off

>>3348296
>Head too big
I can't really see it. I remember you from another thread saying that your style was supposed to be a hybrid between Jap and Western, so the slightly large head shouldn't be an issue considering in most "anime" styles the heads are either slightly too big or slightly too small. Pic related for the "slightly too small" example. Tho, Akari's (Jojo artist) style has changed a lot over the years and he seems to be drawing more realistic bodies now

>>3348417
well he's a bit off model

>>3348414
>>3348417
Also I just wanna say I really love your style. You got somewhere I can follow your adventures?

>>3348431
https://topplerror.tumblr.com/
It's only got the REALLY old drafts and some fanart, I'll post this shit there eventually... maybe

>>3343676
finished version

>>3348458
saved

>>3348396
Wow I didn't realize how weirdly long her head was. I tried to fix that and the ear using your redline and I worked on the knee and a few other places too. I hope everything is okay now. Thank you for the help!

>>3348172
no steal man
is not nice

>>3348103
try to put your watermark in a way that's not too intrusive and in your face

newest piece
Feels like something missing
oh if you have a pixiv account can you put a like ?
https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=67777064

>>3348115
>>3348538
I don't understand this reaction. That's a signature, not a watermark. Watermarks are supposed to be obtrusive by nature and make the image nearly unviewable which he didn't do. For a signature I think that one is pretty tame and tasteful.

>>3348541
imo while it's pretty tame than other artist's signature/watermark, it's still distracting because of it's solid black color and it's way too in the center. I comment on it in the first place if I didn't mind it.
Also, it's not supposed to be the first one to be seen in an artwork.

>>3348545
I *wouldn't comment on it in the first place if I didn't mind it. Sorry my english still sucks

>>3348545
ah crap I'm tired I meant *solid color

>>3348296
i like it, lets be friends

>>3348257
Good shit.

>>3346288
gaps between the tuners on the headstock, her right arm holding the horn is awkward. i feel like the pose could be changed or viewed from a different angle. seeing the guitar on the right side makes me also want to see it on the left side of her body, or at least make the strap very visible and do it right as a 3D ribbon which takes up space. i think the horn could also be rotated to be more of a 3/4 view facing the camera which would make it read better and more 3D.

whip

Thanks again to the redline anon, it helped a lot.

>>3348651
Christ, how long have you been working on this?

>>3348311
it's shit and you're gay

>>3348651
that butt is way too tall

>>3348728
Not that long, I only work on it when I'm avoiding like three other things.

>>3348830
You mean where it connects to the back? I can fix that.

>>3348311
Anon, this isn't tumblr. Your art doesn't need to be accompanied by some dumb quirky xD story

Just draw buff men if you feel like it. It's far from being the most degenerate thing around here.

>>3348869
>this isn't tumblr
>reddit spacing
fuck off

>>3348885
>reddit spacing being a real thing
Shut the fuck up fagtron

>>3348886
DAMAGE CONTROL! DAMAGE CONTROL!

>>3348886
>>3348897
>samefagging
ugh

>>3345398
I legitimately thought Dunning-Kruger was a meme up until reading this post

>Creative differences aside
More like massive skill gap aside

>>3345398
I know it's rude as fuck to try and "fix" someone's stuff but at the same time i felt it was the best way of showing exactly what feels wrong about your picture, the colors are way too low contrasting, it feels like she's staring at nothing, jaw is too round, mouth feels unnatural. Also she has pink eye? and you used a soft, light pink for the blush, which doesn't work in darker skin tones

>>3346761


>>3349210
I deliberately went for a really round face. Your paintover is superior though, thanks.

I welcome redlines and paintovers, I don't consider it rude.

inb4 I ruin my sketch with inking + coloring

>>3348324
I dunno. My art reveals too much about me; it's hard to maintain face.
>>3348869
>Your art doesn't need to be accompanied by some dumb quirky xD story
hah, but it does need to be accompanied by me emotionally venting
I've concluded that anyone comfortable with art as a form of self-expression doesn't have enough skeletons in their mental closet, and mine are sneaking out all freudian style
it sucks

is it bad to draw flat?

>>3349315
m-more

Is there any easy way to make this match the characters match the background more or to generally make it appear better?

>>3349354
quirky vent aside, that image looks neat
blog?

>>3349360
it's not bad if you can pull off a good one
see pic

>>3349383
that's still 3d.

>>3349386
I thought what >>3349360 meant is using flat colors. Is it not?

>>3349354
The upper arms are too short.
The bottom of the pec for the raised arm is too high it needs to be anchored at the same level as the non raised pec and then stretched properly toward the armpit and shoulder.
Very nice though. I love Raiden.

>>3349381
learn how to draw people and don't just put filters over an image for a bg. so no.

>>3349381
everything is too saturated

critiques

>>3344358

>>3349422
no until u fucking draw something thats not a ruan jia knock off

>>3349422
Still weird proportions on your heads.
I was gonna say its possible that you're drawing the top of the head as if its being viewed at a different angle (Looks like camera is level with face, but the top of the head is drawn as if camera is above it), but now that I think about it it may just be a problem with hair volume.
Pic related. The correction is VERY slight, but I think its makes a big difference with the perception of the skull shape.
Also this isnt really a critique, but you should really branch out more. 3/4 view pretty girl face is getting boring.

>>3344323
It looks like you chopped off the whole hip area and just sewed the pieces back together. Also looks like the legs are bent backwards. Knees are totally fucked. Work on anatomy in general, my dude.
The clothing designs are alright. Both of the outfits communicate totally different moods/ settings, so if they're supposed to be two outfits for the same setting you may wanna rethink stuff like colors and silhouette. But they're individually good. Heres some nitpicks:
For the left one, is it supposed to be a warmer outfit? Why is her waist showing, then? That'd get cold. Also how fucking low is the neck cut for the long sleeve shirt thing she's wearing underneath if we cant even see the neckline as-is.
The right is mostly fine. The hood looks retarded, so look up a reference next time. Also if i were you i would choose either the design on the cape thing OR the design on the midriff belt thingy. Since they're so close together, they kind of distract from each other. Personally I'd stick with the cape one, but thats just personal taste I guess.
Like I said, they're just nitpicks.

>>3349476
im experiment different styles, and i can not see how this is a knock off, its all original. But getting inspired by someone way of render is wrong? So artistic moviments are wrong by definition, because must be people with similar styles than other people right? But even different moviments shared the same knowledge, so.. everyone is a knock off of the first person who conceive these knowledges. But who? Cavemans? Be more logical.
>>3349479
thanks, your changes really make sense, i tend to make the head more bigger than the normal, i will make sure to pay attention to that in the next one. About the 3/4 pretty girl face im working on that, but in order to get rendering skills more fast i tend to go into my drawing confort zone. Btw, just you calling this "3/4 pretty girl face" is already a victory for me because the word "pretty", and girls sometimes werent beauty as i intend whem i was drawing them for imagination, or rendering them, and is still a struggle, even 3/4 girls. Im copying a lot of other artists drawings of cute girls in different situations, expressions, but still lazy to break my head to render these more complex drawings, or create then, and im really aware of that and that is a bad habit. Huge battle.

>>3348458
it have no right shoulder

>>3349672
would fuck

>>3349672
wouldnt fuck

>>3349680
gay

>>3349309

>>3349695
if you tried fucking that you'd end up the one getting penetrated

>>3349672
Would def fuck

>>3348458
Her whole torso is a mess. The other anon is right about the shoulders, they're looking kinda funky right now. I love the the character design though, looks like something from a gothic videogame or something.

>>3348296
I think it's more like the eyes are way too big, and the hands too small. Overall it still looks very good

>>3349575
>>3349422
sorry i tried

>>3350098
well you gave her a lot of character lol, i think the original is still the best, reminiscent of modigliani

>>3350112
did I fuck up anything anatomy wise, shading,etc or did I just make it the wrong style?

>>3350098
I honestly love the original more. That and you gave her weird round nose. It's still good though

>>3345702
not your blog soyboy

>>3349422
warmics, is that you?

>>3350123
>>3350112
shit, it looks like "muh style" wasn't a meme. goddamnit.

>>3350153
uh oh

>>3350160
な、なに…?

>>3350153
That ass to back connection is all sorts of fucked up.
You made the right cheek look like it transitions into her far left back and her left cheek is just too low.

>>3350177
Could you redline it? I understand what you're saying, but I'm not sure if I understand the part about the transition. Is it the folds?

>>3350116
the nose is a little large and weird but the painting is fine, though there's a few issues with temperature

>>3350194
Like this a bit. Your legs are also a bit long and there's not much weight going on, there should be a lot more deformation when someone is sitting on someone else.

>>3349672

>>3350244
Does it have a name?

>>3350244
Looks like a worse version of Maractus

>>3350098
you didn't improve upon the original at all, the original artist is way above you in terms of technical skill, sit down please

>>3350252
Make me sit down, big boy.

>>3350250
see >>3345738

>>3349672
>>3350244
how do you get rid of the lines like this?

>>3350241
Ok, thanks.

>>3350247
Not yet
>>3350250
I tried
>>3350263
I paint over them and redraw them a little

>>3350256
Do you not get that critique is about helping an artist achieve their own vision with better quality?

What THIS anon said was helpful >>3349479, it was in line with op's vision for the piece.

You obviously had your own vision when you looked at that piece and shat all over it, you changed the structure of the face, color of the eyes, and muddied up the colors of the face, all with amateur rendering to top it off. You were entirely unhelpful.

There is not a single thing you did worthy of praise above the original. Stick to doing paintovers for artists below your own skill level

>>3350244
Blog? I want to see more of your stuff. Really liking it.

>>3350277
Nah, I'll keep doing paintovers anyway. It was something I felt like doing, and I didn't want to spend too long on it. An hour isn't that long to render something dude, if I'd really wanted to make it look professional I'd take my time. Fuck off.

>>3350244
Are you the giant loli guy?

>>3350283
Lmao just know that you could spent 100 hours on a piece and you wouldn't produce something half as good as that painting you disgraced

>>3349210
STOP FUCKING HELPING HIM REEEEEEEEEEEE

>>3350278
@yilxaevum on twitter

>>3350284
Yeah, what gave it away?

>>3350098
i didnt like it, the nose you did is kinda standard, boring. But maybe its just a personal thing. You made the colors a little muddy too i think and you made the skin looks shine, wet more than normal, i dont appreciate that style, i do not think is objectivly wrong of course, just not my thing.
>>3350139
no. I dont have a style yet neither a following, as im still improving and struggling a lot, so it would be impossibe to know who im, i mean, of course you could reverse image search, but it would be cheating.

>>3350290
You blow out your colours a lot. That and something about the brushstrokes.
You're finally not doing muscly gigantism fetish art; I'm so proud of you.

>>3350295
All right, that's cool with me dude. I mostly just looked at my own face for the lighting so that probably was why the nose ended up weird. The muddy colors was just a result of both incompetence and doing a rush job, I still have areas to improve in laying down good colors quickly it seems. Keep doing your own thing, hopefully you can find someway to make those guys who call you a Ruan Jua knockoff to shut up.

>>3350305
i never look to my own face as reference because i know im not objectivlly pretty, cute, so i try to understand why some girls are pretty. The kinda thinn and "lifted up" nose is a constant i see, and i feel really atracted by these noses, i dont know why though, maybe biology explains. I dont mind be called anything, really, but as a matter of comparion last year i was called a retard version of some intermediary artist here, so its a progress to be called a ruan jia knock off i think haha. Keep your good work, i really appreciate your time

>>3337472

Finished

How's this? A collab with another artist (they sketched, I colored and added lines.

>>3350434
Another

>>3350435
Last one. Thoughts?

>>3349719
I'm willing to take the chance.

This was a reallt quick sketch, but whst do you guys think of this character?
Their based on old tech, i also gave them a human form, feedback wouls be appreciated.

>>3349360
Of curse not

I kinda like flat actually

Thoughts on the stylization?

>>3350759
the dudes hips and leggies are a bit feminine

>>3350741
pretty good

Line art weight is badly inconsistent tho

>>3350759
>That dude face

>>3350713
terrible line art

nice character design

girl fashion seems generic, like regular clothing and hair but you glued squares and an anthena to it

>>3350713
The (chibi?) computer form looks like a different
character, almost boyish. Maybe take from Max G's burnbot design and add hair on the screen.

>>3350434
>>3350435
>>3350437
I'm sorry Jim

Is terminal

>>3350434
>>3350435
>>3350437
>I colored and added lines.
You ruined em senpai
They all look glossy and have this weird mix of smog and pillowshading coloring

>>3350420
1-Pillowshading
2-3/4 view, amateurish as fuck
3-Stiff and bland, lacks any sense of dynamism
4-Clothing has no wrinkles or foldings
5-the font is dog-shit

a quick one

>>3346566
the only way to fix this is to go back in time and abort yourself

>>3349422
fuck off
literally every time you post here its the same deformed head shit girl
this time she doesnt have short black hair good job
you still obviously dont care to learn fundies and instead desperately copy better chinese artists

legal goat

>>3350784
Its not lineart, its a sketch, and as i said it was just a really quick experiment, vut i see what you mean about fashion, i wasn't going to keep thia outfit on her anyway.
>>3350788
To me it doesn't look boyish, its just a computer, but i understand the character design issues.

Opinions on the style? Its very rough i know, but the general feel of it?

>>3351215
I like it a lot! It's more or less similar animu style I'm trying to achieve as well
also, blog?

>>3343165

>>3351254

>>3351255

Dunno why I'm uploading this when I'm probably gonna repost it in the new thread.

>>3351232
Radarsaturn on insta

New Thread: >>3351335

>>3351331
followed my dude

sorry, new thread >>3351513

>>3343376
what reference did you use? Ive been looking for figure drawings with similar perspective.

>>3350759
The way his right hand is set is not correct with his forearm position. Makes his hand look broken. Nigga heiled one too many times.

>this whole time
>how to into_the_anime_aesthetic
>was to do each hair strand on a seperate layer and preserve layer coloring and shine each individually

oof

time to kms

>>3354312
Do the hair in clumps, not individual strands