/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3315406
Reposting here.

I'm trying to play around with colors more but it's a struggle.

reposting
>still trying to finalize the values, any pointers to help bring out the atmosphereb etter?

>>3316714
>any pointers to help bring out the atmosphere better?
what atmosphere? I could understand if you were going for a desolate ruined city kind of thing but with
>le giant loli muscle girl xD
in the way it's kind of like trying to look through a window pane that's got a huge glob of bird shit on it

>>3316727
Rinfag is not for bullying, your crab like antics will not work on him.

Motivational trainer

>>3316731
>your crab like antics will not work on him.
They don't need to; he isn't climbing anywhere himself.

>>3316735
>he isn't climbing anywhere himself.
My point exactly, he's already made it dumb dumb so go snib at somebody else - or else.

>>3316740
>he's already made it
And plenty of people have made it more than him. No, most people have. Isn't exactly difficult.

>>3316727
part of the charm is trying to mix the two things together, yeah...

>>3316752
you've got all the finesse of a caveman """mixing""" two rocks together
you could mix your own shit with toilet water and it'd have more charm
at least then it'd be where it belongs; not smeared on a canvas like usual
try mixing petrol with a lit match next time, preferably while you're doused in it

post your werk

>>3316758
At least put that creative power into explaining why

sketch idea for another print, any tips or comments appreciated

>>3316778
Is he supposed to look so feminine?

>>3316778
More intense expression

>>3316782
Hm kind of? I am sort of aiming to hit fujoshis but if he looks more female than male then i might need to change his body line

>>3316734
>black
Damn, I could've almost fapped to it too

>>3316802
Congratulations on fitting in!

>>3316823
blog?

Changed her skin to dark.

>>3316842

Uhh, I have dA, but don't expect to see anything good there

https://bogudar.deviantart.com/

>>3316866
I love it anon. Do more short hair girls :b

>>3316866
I really like the way you draw lips

i'll have to go back to the drawing board

I escaped from /beg/ for a little bit and tried to draw anime, and it actually turned out okay. Feedback appreciated

>>3316929
L O O M I S

>>3316929
bottom left looks pretty good.

I feel like the shorts are on wrong but i cant figure it out :x

I'm doing my first comic page and I'm way too nerveous

Help

>>3316929
I like those clean sketchy strokes.

YET.

Your facial features are like paper put on a pond, they float around.

Maybe copy Atmosphere's Sketchbook collection can help.

>>3316980
why do all your characters always have the same eyes and nose, not just talking about these sketches.

>>3316778
This is reading too feminine (and not in the bishie/fujobait way) mostly because of that belly, personally. I don't normally see that little pooch of fat above the pubic mound on men, even if they're not cut.

>>3316866
Love your shapes, especially the stylization of the face. Breasts are reading weirdly saggy for a fairly modest busted girl, though. I think if you got rid of the line going from her pit and showing the curve of her breast, it would read better.

>>3316980
jesus... you havent changed since 2013... your shit is so bad. fuck i mean, i dont mean hate but even yev and that fur fag for fuck sakes have more appeal than you

drew this creepy kid

New to drawing digitally, wanted to start out with some fanart. Looking for any tips on how to move forward with coloring, or just advice in general.

>>3316951
Just watch Urasawa Naoki manben and maybe you will feel inspired Anon! It's a series dedicated to filming mangaka in their natural habitat, recording their workflow. There's lots of great mangaka documented in the series

I royally fucked up my file but it was fun

No idea what I'm doing. Too tired to think. Canvas may be backwards.

coming soon 2 theatre near u

>>3317149
?ani the fuck

>>3316734
Cute
Bonus points for juicy muscle thighs

Some pen doodle
Feels like i didnt draw on paper in years

>>3317107
Shit dude i love those colors
Also big forearms and hands are good aesthetic

>>3317223
Curses

>>3317191
Thanks man.

>>3317289

>>3317295
oof thanks

>>3316879
>>3316918
Thanks!

>>3317026
Oh, thanks! I didn't know how to draw her breasts, so it wouldn't look that she is "flat"

>>3317008
Thanks, I do try to vary those features but maybe those came too same-ish

>>3317071
I honestly don't know what you mean since I was not drawing stylized faces on 2013 but even if I was I don't expect my shit to be appealling to everyone, it is shit after all

>>3317008
Thanks, I do try to vary those features but maybe those came too same-ish

>>3317071
I honestly don't know what you mean since I was not drawing stylized faces on 2013 but even if I was I don't expect my shit to be appealling to everyone, it is shit after all

>>3317223
Thanks man!! Really love your style.

i still have a lot to learn. any tips for drawing in general?

Quick sketch. Hair a shit.

>>3317522
nvm cleaned up a bit

>>3317373
i cannot express how disgusting your style is, especially the way you draw limbs, what in the fuck are those feet every time, its every time with those ugly ass feet

Wheeee

>>3317541
Your sketch had proper facial feature placements that followed the curvature of the face but now the face looks flat. The eyes and the lips specifically should be closer to the sketch.

>>3317544
this. its disgusting, but its not bad at all.

>>3317550
Not him but I think the inverse. The style isn't disgusting to me, it's that same kind of soft whimsical Amano-Ruan Jia kind of look. It's the lack of construction, perspective, and proper anatomical knowledge that makes it look bad. Everything looks rubbery and floppy like there's no solid bones, sometimes there are extra or missing pieces of anatomy, usually muscles. At time proportions aren't properly maintained other times it's inconsistent perspective, leading to some parts of the anatomy looking way too big or way too small and unclear whether or not it's supposed to be because of depth and distance or because the body part is supposed to be exaggeratedly big or small.
It's just not solid enough.

>>3317559
>lack of construction, perspective
His perspective is fine, not really a big issue in his work. If by construction you mean he's lacking in defining the more hard-edged planes such as the bones, then sure. But if you mean construction as in putting cylinders and boxes in space, I don't think he have any problems with that

>>3317584
I don't mean he has problems making things look like they are in perspective, I mean he has problems making everything look like it's following the same perspective. A lot of times eyes will be on one alignment while the mouth and nose are on another, and the body is on still another alignment from the head. There was one he posted a few Alt threads ago with a girl who was resting on her knees or something and the top half of her body was drawn from worm's eye view while the waist down was bird's eye view. That inconsistent perspective is what I mean.

Trying to challenge myself and my shit anatomy, tips are more than appreciated

>>3317544
>>3317550
>>3317559
>>3317591


>it is shit after all

Jeez people... it is like you can't even read

>>3317657
dayum son, what's your blog?

>>3316689
stop posting
your drawings are actual eye cancer

just finished this.

>>3316670
I spent an hour just to make this shitty piece.
I guess I dicked around too much trying to get a feel of CSP.
The pencil brush is nice, I guess.

>>3317672
Loomis

>>3317680
retard

>>3317688
what do you recommend then?

>>3316937
thanks

>>3316935
>>3316953
that's funny, I've been doing both. Maybe my lack of fundies is because I'm missing stuff when I do studies? Do I just need to do more, or am I not doing studies right?
Also, should I ever do the same study twice if I think I could learn more from it? It feels weird to just repeat it and I would like some confirmation on that.

>>3316947
I like the top half, but i feel like the torso and legs are a bit small compared to the rest of her? I tried to do a quick sketch over, but fucking hell i did this on a phone with my finger so im sorry its so messy.

>>3317699
Not them but I'd say you just need more mileage. Your stuff is looking really good, only needs refining. If you haven't yet, look into "drawing through the figure". It's great for construction and getting really convincing looking forms which is crucial for imaginative drawing.

>>3317544
It's not that bad, krabby
Post werk

>>3317550
>>3317559
>>3317584
>>3317591
You guys can’t even decide on what is so bad about it....*yawn*

>>3316947
The shorts are good the shirt needs to tent more to indicate dem tittays.

>>3316714
More contrast.

>>3317601
I find her waist too thin. Like, the left side (her right) i feel it should be more on the left (her right, again).
It could be a matter of style, in which case, well, ignore what i said, but it's kind of bugging me

>>3316758
Honestly though the caveman's curiosity and creativity would be legitimately charming in a way, not the mixture himself but the caveman himself. The anon is just a loli fag though

>>3317548
Should I...should i take his advice? I'm conflicted. Well either way I can see what you mean. Thanks.
>>3317544
She's not bad. Nice lips, eyes, and calves. Feet are bad but whatever. Lips are the most important thing.
>>3317601
Fluffy. I approve.
>>3317672
Your colors are awful. Go read color theory. Anatomy and construction are awful but honestly the colors are the worst aspect.
>>3316714
Your stuff always bothers me. I can't pin down why but there's something wrong with the bodies, like the torso is too packed stiff, or maybe it's how rendered the abs are and how flat the faces are. You're clearly dedicated to your fetishes. Lots of effort but you always draw the same shit.
>atmosphere
Your colors tend to be muddy. Learn how to use warms and cools.

>>3317935
>>3317541
Done for night, tell me if it looks like shit before I start actually rendering this tomorrow.

>>3317962

>>3317972

i draw dodogama

>>3316689

blog?

I haven't posted here in YEARS

are the proportions/features alright?

Man I don't even play this shit

>>3318026
Nobody does but the girls are hot and fun to draw

>>3318026


isn't her neck too long for that pose

shitty redline?

>>3318041
Probably, not gonna lie my eyes are pretty much gone at this point

I literally have to struggle not to fap every time I see the op image, thanks fucker

>tfw severe lesbian fetish ensures that I'll never have a normal relationship; a pair of cartoon girls kissing makes me bust instantly whereas I'd felt completely disassociated from what sexual experiences I'd had in the past, myself

I didn't ask for this

>>3317289

>>3317935
>Should I take his advice?
Care to elaborate?

>>3317935
>Should I...should i take his advice?
Never take advice from a cancer ridden furfag

>>3318004
bloggu?

>>3318112
A saw a Momiji drawing done like this a year ago.
Does anyone have it? I didn't have it saved.

>>3318100
I feel like this would look better if her eyes were more far apart, but idk maybe it's just my personal preference

>>3317559
>Amano-Ruan Jia
please dont fucking compare rj to this faggot, please dont.

>>3318370
Lmao fuck off dickrider. Amano is a legend the likes of which RJ won't be for another three decades years.

Another fate character again today, and yet another one of my personal favorite

>>3318100
Basically this >>3318336
I really like lineweight and the appeal (also nice thick eyebrows) but my main complain would be the eyes are too big and too close to each other

>>3318418
how is her lower leg thickee than her leg , and those fingers are too thin and that ass/left arm looks funny

>>3317075
another simple stress-relief bust

>>3317867
can you point me in a direction? I'd really love to try this out because learning complex forms like the face and human body is proving to be extremely difficult to remember. I can remember simplified things like the brow is a box and the eyes are spheres, but there are still huge nuances that catch me off guard (like the curvature of forearms).

>>3318427
>>3318336


Yeah I kinda see it now, still trying to figure out anime stylization. Thank you.

Really am proud of the lineart though, feels like a break through.

Which one is your favorite?
or

why does it look like shit I don't know pls help

>>3318512
you need loomis

>>3318512
Holy shit the top right one looks like an abomination.

>>3318545
I know I tried to pretend like that didn't even exist, I have like no idea how to apply construction to stylization

>>3318512
Your main problem with expression, among others, is that only the mouth is really conveying expression here, the eyebrows dont look like they're connected to any part of facial anatomy. Look at someone smiling and then frowning, pretty much the whole of their face changes form. Also you could use a little construction to help you, even in this static pose the features are jumping about for no reason. Human expression is super hard to convey, humans devote a large chunk of mental processing to interpret things like this so if it's even slightly off it's gonna look janky. Maybe better to start simple then work your way towards the deep end, even if it's stylised you have to understand how everything works in life to get there.

>>3318512
>symbol drawing like an autist
You'll fit in

>>3318603
Post your work.

>>3317657
i just wanted some advice on this one :(

>>3318606
Come join the merry bunch of animal artists.
https://discord.gg/W3CrZq

>>3318605

>>3318607
Dude.

>>3318370
Hey I'm not saying he's anywhere near their skill level but he's clearly going for that same kind of ethereal soft otherworldly or whatever sort of style that they do.

>>3318484
It's always hard for me to try to recommend resources for people. I did all my learning offline so I'm not that familiar with what's available. In another thread I saw someone mention Vilppu though. They said his method gives a focus on construction through basic shapes and sounded pretty spot on for what I'm talking about although I think it might be missing the aspect of drawing through a figure while drawing gestures and building up form that way. I think maybe Burne Hogarth teaches something closer to that? I hope that helps some.

>>3318636
Isn't that how they draw the chin in your animoos though? Besides, if you say that the ear is positioned too low, do you take the rounded female jaw shape into account?

>>3318418
How the FUCK do you keep up your pace like this? I see a new solid drawing and painting from you every time I check this thread.

Any disciplinary tips?

>>3318004
its good to see you. hope youre doing well

>>3317978

I haven't played with full color in a long time, here's something more in-line with the other content posted here

>>3318587
Yeah I always find myself not even able to replicate my own drawings cause I have no real construction method. I have this same problem with bodies too.

Do you just think I should grind how to construct faces and bodies from real life in a simple way or is there more I could do?

>>3318748

I hate drawing before and could never sit down for it. For the last 2 months, I realized there are things I hated more than drawing. With that in mind, I was able to set a routine for myself to draw several hours a day consistently even though there were a day break or two here and there. It's trying to build the habit I guess. I still feel like procrastinating or avoiding things when I have to start a new sketch.

>>3318827
read a lot of euro comics?

>>3317962 is pretty cool too.

>>3318908
youre really shit at painting

fixes

>>3318946
Quality still life anon, I love pears too.

silly faces

>>3319136
good Lotte. you are a good human thank you! the world needs more Lotte

>>3318946
>>3319136
these are some tasty sketches, I like them

>>3317080
Finished version; literally the first thing I've ever done digitally; any pointers or general advice would be great.

>>3319136
Lotte a cute. Good job.

Don't mind the colors, because they are flats that I will change around in the morning, but how can I improve into my style/artwork? I want to go for something more disney-esque in my faces, and I have started doing face studies and such. For my anatomy, I will post below for you guys to see if it needs improving majorly, or I should focus on other things like linework and face/style choices. 1/3

2/3

3/3

>>3318949
I know

>>3318386
ok?

>>3318949
Dude, shut the fuck up and don't comment if you're not even going to be constructive about it.

>>3319476
>Honest Anon tells it the way it is
>Assblasted buttbuddy crawls out of the woodwork and starts whiteknighting
Not him, but you fanboys are the cancer killing this place if it wasn't for the other guy telling him his hair was on fire he would of undoubtedly continued to be oblivious of his shit painting so instead of thanking them you go and start flinging shit.

>>3319499
I don't even know who the artist is. "Telling how it is" without telling them why its shit is unproductive and does nothing for anyone.
If it's shit, tell them why its shit. I'm not white knighting anyone. I wouldn't have said a fucking thing if he would've given proper critique.

what's decent but most importantly, what's shit for a sketch

>>3319499
Not him but you have to be very stupid if you can't discern between being productive or not

Honest anon was honestly shitposting

>>3319510
As a copy it's close enough I guess, you don't seem to understand how to apply the lighting.

>>3317075
idunno if girls can come off as creepy in the way that you mean it

>>3319515
Yeah the lighting I just couldn't get, I tried layering a big patch of dark value over the entire breast window first, then erasing to get the value but it was just a mess. Should I move dark to light or light to dark?

>>3319457
>>3318908
what photoshop brushes are those?? (for hair and collar and texture around the eyes

>>3319510
Can you post the full original pic?

>>3319534

Tried showing the lineart of a trade I'm working on in another thread and got bashed hard.
Does it suck that much?
After almost five years of reading and practicing Loomis (even though I fucking hate his cartoon style) getting this told is demoralizing.

>>3318221
Hey anon, I don't know the exact painting you're talking about, but I feel compelled to share this random Momiji painting that I thought was really cool.

made a lizard boi

how to color ><

>>3316689
go away tomi holly shit.

Playing around with faces some. thoughts?

>>3316734
ver cute, i like this draw a lot!

>>3319593
>tomi
???

funny and very odd man xdddd

Sketch.

>>3319659

>>3319457
The hair is alright but the face is so expressionless and flat. Mouth and nose are horrible.

>>3319502
See, this bro is the exact opposite, tons of expression but the hair is terrible. Ya'll should partner up, clownhair bro does the faces and silkyhair bro the hair.

Snowing outside. Tell me why it's wrong pls

>>3319567
It's nice. I have this one saved somewhere too.

>>3319703
It's nice to see another Tiger & Bunny fan around. I always wanted to do some fanart of it but never got around to it.

>>3319701
Clownhair bro here, I was wondering what the fuck was wrong with my painting but i guess you pointed out, thanks

>>3319529
It is procreate. An iPad app. I would kill to have procreate's brush engine on Photoshop

>>3319701
Thanks for being a bit more productive. I wish you mention why those features look horrible. I have do them more realistically but people tell me they clash. Sometimes I get the opposite "it is too simple or too small" so I tried to do an expressionless face first to see if they at least worked in that particular test. Anyway, thanks for the critique

This is from last thread, the composition was bothering me so I changed the head tilt, position of the bird and other minor elements

>>3319711
Well, if you can tell who it is I guess I did an okay job. I want to draw as well as Sakakibara Mizuki (pic related)... Probably done 40 sketches for T&B so far, improving but still suck.

>>3319742
Leagues better than that other shit. Lips and nose... just off. No volume, lopsided. expressionless mouth. Eyes are fuckhueg. This one is way better. Can say rear eye is fucked up and the lips jut forward too much. Such silky hair mang.

>>3317548
Are these expressions readable enough?

>>3317548
Are these expressions readable enough?

>>3319753
man cant you return to anime again?

>>3319703
looks like he has a no neck though an his body seems kinda small

>>3317373
I do love your style unlike a lot of people here.
Somehow.
Blog ?

>>3319457
I think your features are too thin compared to the size of her head, makes her look kinda creepy.

Also they way you have the pupils drawn in they aren't looking at anything, she's looking at nothing and it also, looks creepy.

>>3319743
Everyone sucks before they make it. Are you planning to do /y/?
>>3319753
Mostly good. I don't think rage is quite there. I think of rage as more wide and wild eyed. Either that or much more bared teeth with gums showing and a wider mouth. My only other nitpick is the character looks off model in a few of them like cheerful and insecure. Consistency throughout expressions is a big part of the point of doing charts like these.

>>3319758
Yes...yes it does. I'll go kill myself. Redrew but it's still wrong. Guess just have to keep drawing until I don't suck anymore, can't be helped...
>>3319814
You know, I don't really like /y/. Just want to draw cool looking anime guys. I've been doing a few sketchdumps for whatever I'm reading/watching at the moment and it's been helpful, gets me to practice at least. Just need to not suck.

>>3319753
Atrocious

>>3319876
>I don't really like /y/. Just want to draw cool looking anime guys
Yeah, I can respect that. I think you're well on your way to doing it. Your work I've seen so far has a lot going for it, you don't seem to be tripping up on some of the harder things like perspective and scale and things like that too much. You've already said it, it's going to take repetition. Mostly to ingrain the anatomy and proportions etc etc that you need so that you either place things correctly at first or at least can spot when something looks off and self correct. Sad I won't be seeing any /y/ from you but I look forward to seeing where you go.

>Copy a drawing
>Not even for a master study, just tried to copy it like it was still life or a photo or something alike

New sketch. Maybe redeemed myself. Such shame...
>>3319885
Such kind words. I want to like /y/, I just don't most of the time, though a lot of the art for it is really fucking good. No desire to draw it though. Do you post on /cm/?

>>3319921
I have posted on /cm/ before but it was drawings of youtubers instead of anime guys. Man come to think of it I really haven't drawn any anime guys in a long time. Anyway I can appreciate non lewd anime dudes. It's just that Tiger and Bunny is pretty big in the /y/ scene so I had to ask.

cough medicine is not a crime!

i know anatomy is messed up but is this readable/good so far? I added foreground guy to make a scene of receiving fire, any ideas on how can i do that without throwing blood all over? cuz i dont want to paint that

>>3319565
Forget the lineart, the drawing itself is shit, I'm sorry for that but yeah... the linework is fine, but the drawing as a whole...

hello, if you mind, critics and redline, please.

>>3319984
You should probably stay away from robogels anon. Its for your own good!

>>3318013
nope

>>3320030

they are really are terrible

but for the longest time they were the only real cure for my depression

i hate to advocate it but...in well timed doses...

i see it as a well intentioned dumbing down
if getting drunk isn't possible and weed sucks for you

>>3319810
Ayy

Its a butt

ei

>>3320013
that pose is fuckcing weird dont avoid drawing hands it just makes things awkward looking + you won't learn

had more fun drawing the mech than the girl desu

>>3319567
damn after seeing so much shit here as of late because of some idiots who just won't kill themselves or leave, this is like a saving grace. Mind sharing the artists pixiv?

>>3320151
Not him but using saucenao: https://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?mode=medium&illust_id=23406063

reading that color and light book. It's a nice read.

lost steam in this rendering and quit on it when i just started.

>>3320164
Shit this looks nice, you oughta finish it

>>3320164
I love the colors anon, makes me want to draw myself
what book is it?

>>3320179
this is good, rest of you /beg/ tier shitters need to take note

>>3320164

reminds me of harvest moon

>>3319457

kek it reminds me of daria

>>3320225
oh man the memories... I'd remember I'd restart the game to get together with nami..

>>3320156
o shit thanks anon.. I've been trying to find this guy again for like a year after my computers memory got all wiped after a factory restore. Thanks man!

tried a different workflow

>>3320256
nice as always dude

>>3320179
Medusa best waifu.

jesus christ turnarounds take forever

1 down, 11 to go,

jesus christ turnarounds take forever

1 down, 11 to go,

autism

Drew Squigly.

smurf godsh0t are you asian

i need to know

>>3320281
No, I'm french.

>>3320281
Yeah, but I'm american.

>>3320094
oh wow, thanks a lot! Is was trying to find a good way to rest her hands.

Please tear me a new asshole
Also beg desu

>>3320064
It's good but you're in the wrong thread. rear eye doesn't match.

>>3320164
Colors do look good, guess I should read it. torso too short, draw the hands.

>>3320256
I don't personally like it but it's not bad. Eyebrows and mouths are your weak point.

>>3319994
Thanks for pointing point exactly where to improve.

I tried fixing the face which was what bothered me the most but I still fail to see what makes it so shit according to you.

>>3319136
more

>>3320187
>>3320190
thanks! I think I am going to finish it now! The book is called "Color and Light: A Guide for the Realist Painter - James Gurney"

>>3319753
You need to work on the non-happy ones more. They're pretty hard since a :3 kind of mouth is hard to show a lot of expressions with. Maybe try adding wrinkles or look at Looney Tunes / Disney animal characters to see how they convey it. The terrified one looks more like he just realized he forgot to submit an assignment, seductive one looks kinda creepy t b h, and enraged looks more like mildly annoyed. The cri one is the only non-happy one that works well because there's a line where he's frowning, emphasizing the emotion. I would also make the eyebrows pointing a bit more down on the mischievous one, but otherwise that one is fine.

what setting did they use for the pen (I think) to make it look like in the pic here?

>>3319523
Whichever one you are comfortable with really, but that doesn't solve your values problem. Try drawing a value scale at some point.

>>3320229
how do i get as good as you?

Somebody on leddit was asking people to clean up their scan since the scanning process had made it "look bad", so I went one step further.

>>3320532
look like just a regular pen with size and opacity set to pen pressure, w some erasing here and there to get nice points to the lines

>>3319810
Thanks, I like what you did with the nose

>>3319747
Thanks, I will try to tackle those remaining issues

>>3320579
>opacity set to pen pressure
i how do that

>>3320597
Are you on paint or what.

>>3320629
clip studio paint, i bought a few days ago on sale

>>3320370
Not him, but it's completely /beg/ tier. Go do figure studies for a month. Don't get defensive when someone tells you your shit is shit. Fix it.
>>3320576
Jesus. Do r****tards have no self awareness? Also go back please.
>>3320280
There's a concept in art that artists distort drawings by making what they think is important larger than it should be. So yaoi artists make fuckhueg hands, horny teenagers make fuckhuge boobs, shoujo fags make fuckhuge hair and eyes. You're obviously an ass man.

>>3320638
Use the oil brush then, with settings like here. Control them with pen pressure.

>>3320576
The face, combined with the outline of her cheek and chin, is exceptionally off-putting.

>>3320576
Why do people act like this?

>>3320591
looks like she has downs or something. also your smeary rendering always gives you away, not bcause its good, because its horrendous. your art is not getting better. you will never make it firez. just get a real job and stop trying to jump on this meme train. holy shit.

>>3320576
what the actual fuck is wrong with her mouth, ew
this whole post was a mistake, anon

>>3320280
ugly twitter garbage
this shit has no value in any way
its just for dickbrained weaboos on twitter to jerk off to and then they move on to the next shitty waifu trash fanart

>>3320655
>>3320657
>>3320658
AAHAHAHHAHAHAHAHAA

>>3320651
>also go back please
Literally been using 4chan since 2006 m8-O. Reddit has some pretty fucking decent boards, bestoflegaladvice is unironically hilarious and redditgetsdrawn let's you get in good daily practice. I am not ashamed.

>>3320638
The way CSP works is that brush options are hidden from that quick panel unless you specifically set them to show. Click the wrench icon in the bottom right corner next to the weird circle shape and it'll pull up the full brush options. Next to each option there will be a clickable eye, just make sure opacity in one of the options is turned on and you should be able to see it/quickly adjust it from the panel.

>>3320638
The way CSP works is that brush options are hidden from that quick panel unless you specifically set them to show. Click the wrench icon in the bottom right corner next to the weird circle shape and it'll pull up the full brush options. Next to each option there will be a clickable eye, just make sure opacity in one of the options is turned on and you should be able to see it/quickly adjust it from the panel.

>>3320668
>I am not ashamed.
You should be if you're an adult who posts something mediocre to make fun of a noob while adressing him as reddit while browsing the site yourself. top lel

Sorry if I barely made any corrections, I just wanted this over with but I will take your crits into account.

>>3319756
Anon, this is anime.
>>3319814
I had an alternative where only one of the eyes was wider but decided to make it more symmetric. Apparently I chose the wrong eye.
>>3320515
Yeah, it's always been a struggle since I kinda want to retain some of the original structure of the mouth. Coming from a human background, I have a hard time understanding furry mouths, but I'll look into what the folks at Disney do.

>>3320591
Hope to see more stuff like this from you. You should consider making the hair more saturated overall, especially the highlights.

>>3320673
Who's making fun of who?
>while adressing him as reddit
What did he mean by this...

>>3320280
Just saying but you're my current goal bro, your work is great, never stop posting.

>>3320677
The juxtaposition of the drawings coupled with the "leddit" comment made it seem like ridicule. If it isn't, I take back everything I said.

>>3320655
>>3320657
>>3320658
Kill yourself

>>3320682
Just doing it as a fun project man. Was hoping to send it over to the guy after to see what he thought of it.

>>3320657
>>3320653
To be completely honest, I don't draw manga style stuff ever, which is probably why it looks a bit weird. This is actually my first posting in one of these threads.

>>3320694
Alright. Some constructive critique then: her ear stands out a bit since it's placed kind of high, and the strong contrasts in it make it pop too much. The two lines at her farther armpit look jarring, the thick one looks weird since it's so thick without casting any shadow as opposed to the thin one. Also I think the line weight at her farther tit is a little bit strong just above where it meets the fabric.

>>3320707
Also her closer forearm's silhouette doesn't look quite natural to me, considering that it's supinated.

>>3320694
like

have you noticed that anime almost never has lips

>>3320707
>>3320710
This is good critique, thank you for pointing this out to me.

>>3320713
Sure I have, but I'm not trying to draw an "anime", I'm trying to draw a stylised human.

can someone tell me a way to make this more dinamic?

>>3320694
not terrible, but the mouth/chin region. is very offputting as others have said. the hair tucked behind her ear could use some work as well. Also, extreme nitpick, but her hair tie is very weird. Looks like she fused a cock ring and metal and pulled it up in her hair and somehow the gravity didn't pull it down.
I like the colors, the way you made it so her eyebrows were plucked out but you can still tell that there skin going over the eyelid is a nice little touch.

>>3320721
If you're trying to draw a human, how about going with a more appealing stylization and drawing a more symmetrical face?

>>3320538
Thanks I'll try that.

>>3320721
Your stylization is off then. The bottom lip is 3 times larger than the top one and looks more like the result of a bee sting.

>>3316670
Designs for a beauty and beast rehash in my intro to concept art class.
These aren't the finals but I love them so much so far.

>>3319767

Thanks. Tumblr is where I post daily:

firez-tbr.tumblr.com

>>3320655
You failed to shitpost 2 more of my posts here so I doubt my shitty rendering is consistent enough.

Also I have a job on IT, I have never announced myself but somehow people ask for my shitty art enough to generate some extra income, heck this month I even started to receive some pocket change for my shitty music too

>>3320665
>>3320685
The guy told me that he doesn't even draw, he just like to shitpost. I honestly feel pity for him

>>3320676
I will review it once more and try your advice. Thanks

>>3320724
Some suggestions

Lovely art, folks.

>>3320792
Fuck you.

>>3320784
Great designs. I'd love to see them developed more.

>>3320803
Thanks!! I'm quite happy with where the beast has come but I think my beauty still needs some more work.
Not sure what to do with her though, hoping my instructor will have some good tips for me.

>>3318112

>>3318112

>>3320676
absolute trash. U probably are an attention seeking fat gay dude, so it's probably wrong to reply to your posts, but honestly can you stop with the furry shit? Take a break with that will you? Stop posting here too. Its already been cancer enough with all this shitty art I see here everyday. Take a good 5 years, and maybe, hopefully then, you will realize how shit and tasteless your art was, and actually start drawing a little bit better. But judging from the fact you've been drawing more than 6 years, I fear the the latter will not be true.

Let's make love and listen to death from above.

>>3320877

>>3320871
Best one yet.

>>3320882
hehe I see what you did there.

Thanks <3

>>3320877
WHO ARE YOU

>>3320948
You don't know /ic/'s resident autist?

>>3320877
>rendernigger doesn't know what boobs look like

>>3320653
Not that other anon but thanks for this

>>3319985

thats shit i made another thats less shit

>>3320957
what?

>>3320877
Love you always jace.

>>3319753
I think your art's great btw, all I see others doing are the ones not even trying, just using symbols for their shitty anime drawings

>>3320819
shinji's neck looks long

>>3320784
Same here, really like this I hope you will polish it a bit more

>>3320576
>People getting salty just because he's from reddit.
Learn to separate the artist from the art, people

Opinions?

>>3320725
>>3320740
I'm phoneposting so sorry I can't respond in greater detail, but these offer best advice, I'll see about altering the lineart today to correct some errors. Thanks.

>>3321201
I'm not even from Reddit lel. Been using 4chan for 12 years, Reddit for 1 (Reddit turned out to be a pretty fucking decent/useful site and resource, don't understand the 4chan scaremongering now).

>>3321209
Good advice *, not best advice (everybody else's advice was good too).

>>3316980
>>3317373
Ignore the salty faggot who isn't gud. Your work is awesome.

It's that time again. Time for the threadly ratings! Ratings are adjusted to meet /ic/ standards of output amongst all that post & uniqueness.

>>3321208
0.5/10
>>3321188
3/10
>>3321069
1.5/10
>>3320877
4.2/10
>>3320851
sycra levels of suffering/10
>>3320819
1.8/10
>>3320784
3/10 I know it's cliché but a spear in the hand of the naga would go nicely and I like the one on the right
>>3320724
0.5/10 for subject matter 2.5/10 for the face
>>3320694
I don't know why people are giving you a hard time. It is certainly more tasteful than the garbage above your rating. But /ic/ will be /ic/. With that said there are some areas that need to be worked on most definitely as others pointed out. Way too much overlay gives me a headache. However you put a mole on her breast. Such attention to the female form despite your skill and without overly objectifying her gives your score a 1.8/10.
>>3320591
this is still suffering from the last mistake and not picking on you I generally like your posts
>>3320374
studies form frames don't deserve ratings
>>3320370
0.9/10 draw more from life
>>3320357
it's /beg/ but charming
>>3320280
5.5/10
>>3320273
1/10
>>3320270
I'm a sucker for magical girl....but it's a boring design. 2/10
>>3320256
good but the eyebrows do need tweeking and can't say I'm a fan of the lighting choice on this one; with her death eyes stare like that there should have been a different approach I'm sure you're aware of but lack the skill to pull it off....4/10 either case. Brush up on the planes of the face and light them from below. Replicate that to your animaus.
>>3320229
0.5/10
>>3320179
I hope you aren't that last anon, john or whatever. That's a tank in ability if I ever did see it. 2/10 only because you attempted a slightly complex angle
>>3320164
reminds me of my first ai 2.5/10
>>3320150
3/10 looks like you had lots of fun drawing it
>>3319984
1.3/10
>>3319921
1/10
>>3318946
2.5/10
>>3318934
3/10 clean stuff

>>3321271
I love you Derek please never stop

>>3321271
>tfw Derek skips you again

>>3321271
What's your rating system based on, I see weird number like 0.9 and 4.2 with no real context.

If you're going to put this much effort into shit posting, at least provide a rubric.

>>3316670

>>3321368
your girls are ugly. just sayin.

>>3321368
I can see the lasso on the mouth

>>3319571
this is the best drawing in the thread though

>>3321271
are you autistic or something?

Honk.

>>3321137
Aw shucks, you're too kind.
>>3320871
God I kinda wish, that way I can use myself as reference.
>>3321368
Pretty nice, but the right half of her hair doesn't make sense. Would also be worthwhile to consider brightening the entire face since the background is drawing too much attention.

>>3321410
Wtf he deleted his post??

recently bought Clip Studio Paint because of the sale, it's been really fun to mess around with.

>>3321412
what post was that?

>>3321140
Yeah I think I've got a giraffe neck problem, keeps happening.

>>3321188
Nice

>>3317657
Stiff poses, try some Line of Action. Mostly the fox on the right.

>>3321387
this hurts. one day they will be pretty.
>>3321396
this is not suppose to be seen in so large scale, its only a practice, not a full piece, but yeah, i forgot to erase.
>>3321410
thanks, i will think more about that in the next one.

What is your opinión con this Marsha (she is from billy dilley's cartoon)? I wanted to give ver some "Marshas" and enlarge ver hips, bit I am not sure of how it looks so far.

>>3321351
damn sweet brush stokes and color! any blog?

>>3321412
no i got a warning for posting a rude and offensive comment lmao. The absolute state of ic now is that you get banned for posting what is true.

new thread a little early because I got stuff to do

>>3321623
>>3321623

>>3320653
but how do I save? it's still the same.

>>3321368

jesus. fix the ayy lmao head shape.

>>3321410
Do some limb studies. The torso is looking good though. Figures, though, since the obesity is the main focus anyway.
Also glad you're working more on emotion. A lot of your stuff always has dead-eyes, so this is much better.

>>3321709
Huh, limb studies actually sound like a good idea right now. Thanks, anon.

I ended up fixing the right shoulder, the visible hand a little and the legs.
I hope it looks better now.

>>3321585
rude, unhelpful comments are against the rules bicc

>>3321970
post in the new thread

>>3319571
I love this unironically
Blog nigga

>>3319611
go to /beg/

>>3318946
Looks great anon! Do more.

>>3321410
EW

>>3319136
NO AWWWO ALLOWED

>>3321410
jesus christ, this is disgusting