/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

i really want to be featured on gelbooru one day. But. I know i got a whiles to go, /ic/
>>3284589
i like this form. but if i were to improve it, i say, fix the shoulders line weight compared to the face details. The facial details lines are really small, while the shoulders are pretty big. its a big uncomfy to look at.

>>3284596
I'm not the guy who made the picture, I just hose it for the OP
Also that's a good reasonable goal, anon! Good luck.

>>3284596
i'd disagree, it's obviously not finished yet and seeing the roughness of it now (and a look into his process of how he draws since he probably took a longer time tightening up the face than laying in the shoulders) is nice. I'm sure when it's finished it'll have consistent lineweight if he keeps it in.

Which of these look the most interesting? bit janky perspective but I'm looking at the idea/pose

>>3284607

Third one is cute and unique. In order from most to least interesting: 3,1,2

>>3284596
>>3284599

Here the OP of the original picture.
Here I have a slightly improved version with colors, but as it has been said, the line weight is not final. That's why the small details like the face are done with a smaller brush than the more general aspects like the bodies (cannot decide yet if I should make it with lines or simply paint over them).

Anyhow, it's possible that the woman has too wide of a back or it looks ok?

>>3284656
I personally don't feel like there's enough pinch or compression in the trap area on the shrug which is why you think it looks wide enough but as she has a fit body, it looks fine as it is if some things appear to be bigger. I really dig your lines though.

there's a lot more methodology than i initially figured, but feel like i'm finally getting a handle on working digital.

i do keep making the mistake of making images ant-sized however

>>3284674
idk why but the pussy sort of looks like it's protruding a lot? like i get its supposed to be clit/labia minora but it looks a bit like a prolapse lol could be to do with shading

>>3284656
can you make the dick look thicker/longer or something pls?

>>3284714
the legs are too close together too

>>3284721
gtfo with your dickbrain requests.

>>3284821
Is he straight now?

>>3284884
firnez doesn't care, but that's a foxboi, the little penis at the bottom is his

Curious question.
Do you guys fap to your porn drawings?

>>3284902
very rarely but yes.

>>3284902
Absolutely. A lot of times it's when I'm drawing it but pretty often I go back "revisit" something I finished a while ago.

>>3284902
No.

>>3284902
i draw cause im horny or imagine horny shit in my head but im never hard during the process or afterwards

>>3284902
i feel liek fapping to my drawings sometimes but oddly enough i dont even draw porn

when it comes together and all the lines are where they need to be and my hand didnt shake - i could bust a nut right there

>>3284821
Kys

>>3284977
no

>>3284985
thenstop coming here

>>3284985
Keep at it, these anons who are pissed just make it even better.

>>3284996
naw man, fuck off with that shit
>>3285017
agreed

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>>3284985
the proportions of the lower jaw/nose are fukt up mang, way bigger than everything else. work on facial construction you must

>>3284821
>>3284985
I've been lurking those threads every now and then without posting, bit I have to ask something.

Are these done badly intentionally? They remind me a lot of an old peer of mine who still draws the same way he did in High School and never drew in any perspective besides a flawed side or an irregular front view. Is this some type of subtle ironic meta-humor I'm not understanding or something? I can't imagine anyone posting these every thread without improving one iota and thinking, 'yes, this should be viewed by the public'.

>>3285127
>I can't imagine anyone posting these every thread without improving one iota and thinking, 'yes, this should be viewed by the public'.
Hi, I'd like to introduce you to FiRez, Brian, Nosebro, and Ilustrat.

Can only copy moderately well at the moment, when I try to crest my own works the level of detail and quality goes down. I am just venturing into imaginative and original works and I suspect that either it’s a separate skill that I need to spend time improving or it’s a skill that requires a high level of knowledge of perspective, anatomy, proportions, and maybe a little bit of physics.

Hell it might be both, but either way I think it’s time I venture out on to my own.

>>3285168
I’m sorry I have no idea why it came out upside down here, it came out just fine on discord. Either way here is a drawing I did that’s not a copy, as you can see there’s a moderate level of detail and quality lost.

>>3285131

Don't forget Cumbum!

>>3285168
Drawing from imagination definitely has to be practiced, I would say it's best done alongside referenced studies as opposed to after "mastering" them. This looks really good with all that in mind. My main gripe is with how the breasts don't really wrap around the tentacle. As you draw more from imagination you'll start thinking of forms more intuitively though. My advice if anything would be to stick with it until it starts feeling more natural and then maybe bring back some reference or general construction/anatomy guides.

>>3285176
Shit, u rite.

>>3284985
Are your initials J.D?

>>3285127
I don't understand why he keeps posting these here if he ignores every single critique people give him and doesn't improve at all. What's the fucking point then?

>>3285311
My initials are but I'm not that poster, so you better elaborate on that name you have in mind before I get upset, Anon.

Anyone else having issues uploading images?

>>3285410
Yeah it’s the entire site.

>>3285317
>What's the fucking point then?
Shilling. People are mentally retarded and want attention. It should honestly be a permaban for this board if you don't reply to critique with improvement somewhere.

>>3285559
That's not what shilling means you absolute retard.

>>3285559
That's not what shilling means you absolute retard.

So what are the best sites to post for exposure?

I only have pixiv and twitter, with like 50 followers after some several months.

I tried Tumblr but I was banned in a day because one of the girls looked underage. Should I try there again?
I also got banned from DA since they don't allow porn. And Hentai foundry seems really small.

images are back lads

>>3285577
up, nvm

Can't post images on an imageboard...
looks like were gonna have to do things the way we did way back in 2005.
https://imgur.com/a/laL5W

>>3285559
Exactly my point. She comes here and posts this same shit for two years and the only difference is now she draws follicles on the ass checks. She doesn't improve or even attempt to.

>>3285642
stop it, we've all seen his photo

without being rude he doesn't exactly look like the person to be cognitively capable of pursuing improvement

>>3285687
>stop it, we've all seen his photo
Where?

>>3284821
Who even is this artist? They are everywhere! /Y/ /ic/ what next? Why don't they just make a tumble blog or something if they are so confident in their work and won't accept critiques.

>>3285311
>>3285366
I knew a girl in HS that drew exactly like this, same subject matter too. I lost track of her social media 2 years ago but she never improved since the moment I first saw it.
I'm semi-confident that this girl is the same one posting here.

Not exactly porn...

>>3285750
ffs

>draw some lewd shit for fun on a small piece of paper
>fit futa girl with huge dick + cumshot shape practice
>crumple it in my fist and leave it lying around, forget to dispose of it
>next day I see it again and it's still crumpled but I'm almost sure in a different way
>tfw almost sure my mom found it and opened it
AAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAA

>>3284656
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>>3284721

Here I made some changes regarding the critiques I've received. Tried to give more compression to the woman shrug and made the dick just a little bit more thick but kept it grounded.
Also darkened the two characters to contrast them with the background, but you'll be the judge if you think a not darkened version would work better.

Now my time for critiquing. Take it

>>3284596
General drawing looks very uneven. I'd think it's because the line work is pretty weak, so try to make it more consistent in that regard.

>>3284607
The sketches are perhaps too vague for me to get an idea of what I'm exactly looking at (besides the massive dong that character has). The middle one and the far right one could look like they have the most interesting poses, so try to elaborate on them.

>>3284674
In general terms it looks fine but somehow the vagina looks odd. In one regard It looks way too close to the anus, reason why I initially thought it was that. The labia looks kind of weird too. I'd redo that part from scratch and see how it goes.

>>3285750
I'm not much into anime, so a big eyed noseless cat-girl is beyond my field of expertise. Regardless, anatomy-wise I can spot that the tits are way too long like blimps and those arms need more mass since her legs are meaty enough (the legs look ok, try to use the qualities of those legs to apply them to the rest of the anatomy of the character).

>>3285957
Somehow what I was saying at the start of my critiques got cut, but I was going to say for everyone to take them cool since it's not my intent to demotivate anyone.

>>3285945
The next step is to draw porn of your mom herself.

>>3285945
you can use this board only if you are 18. gtfo kid.

How can I figure out what do people want?

I'm tired of drawing for myself or doing commissions. It's a very lonely experience. Up until now I only made what I personally enjoy and hope that others like it. I'm tired of this.

I want to draw things that a lot of people will enjoy, but I don't know how to do this. Do I just copy what's popular or what? How do I please a large audience?

wasnt sure whether to post to the animation thread or not, but here you go

>>3286095
And this relates to the porn thread... how?

>>3286125
I draw porn.

practicing style on-model. might do a series for chel

>>3285957
Appreciate the feedback

I don’t draw anime often (cat girl) and I def tried to push the proportions, but I can see how she looks off balance. If I go back to it I’ll try and adjust that, thanks.

I can’t give you much constructive criticism as I think you have a much better understanding of anatomy than I do, but I think the string of spit is a nice touch

>>3286130
This looks very flat for various reasons. The forms have very little depth because of bad construction, flat line weight, soft badly defined lights and shadows. You should really put more work in all these aspects of your art.
I am trying to find something positive to say about this artwork, but I am unable to. Sorry.

Are things finally normal again?

>>3286167
Well you're not wrong. It is very flat. But I'm hoping the one exception is her ass. Was it the lighting or is it this base drawing that's the root of the problem? Can I make those changes without sacrificing the DreamWorks' style more than necessary?

>>3285735
He's a boy. I follow him on twitter in hopes that he notices me, but he doesn't even know I exist. Cry cry

>>3286185
I kind of like it myself, but my 2 cents:

Your hair breaks the most important gesture line when it comes to depicting a flowing and erotic figure, especially with the attention being on her bum.
(see pic related)

Green lines is what you're losing by having a straight strand of hair come down and cut the figure vertically.
In the examples on the right (from the movie), the hair doesn't really break that curve, instead.

On the left i quickly roughed up two examples of what i mean.
In the left most example, i broke the back line with the elbow, but sort of made up for it with a clearer gesture line of the front of the body.
In your drawing however, that line is also undermined by the arm that is a little too rigid.

Again, just my 2 cents, i'm no expert.

>>3285957
blog?

>>3285576
>banned from DA since they don't allow porn
Blatant porn is all over that shithole.
>HF seemed small
It does.
>b& from dumblr
I love dumblr because the bar is so low. Just set up another account and don't be a lolicon.
But seconding this. What's a site with a good community that may support both images and word docs that I could link to a patreon?

>>3286470
Wow, thanks for the points. You're spot on. Key contours are obfuscated and my intention isn't clear for the treatment between the hair and the figure. I think I was going for a little "curtain reveal" hair behavior. I want her silhouette including her hair to give the impression of an hourglass, which in my mind justified the vertical split. Nevertheless, her hair treatment isn't well resolved... I'll have to figure that out.

Here's another one. It's wonky as shit because it's just a thumbnail to work from that idea in case I end up polishing it. But I dunno, should I stick to the blowjob themed edition of the thread or venture on other stuff? suggestions?

>>3286482
I don't have a nsfw blog since I work mostly on sfw stuff (and also because I don't know where it's the best site to set up a nsfw gallery). Perhaps one of these days when I find the right site I'll create one, in which case I'd share it here.

every time I save and look at what I've done it looks a little less blended than I thought it did, anyone have any tips? I just want to paint good lewds

>>3286611
I like it, though her lower body feels a bit too small. I made a small edit that looks more right to me but idk I could be way off base.

Any problems here? Especially the back and arms. Backs are one of my weakest points and I really struggled with it drawing this. I looked up some reference but it wasn't great and I want to double check.

>>3284589
Hi, I'm the anon from way back that sperged out about how there was barely any Tokyo Ghoul porn - I quickly whipped this up, any general pointers for improvement are welcome.

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>>3286808
Very hot, dude

>>3285945
Homie I left my sketch book at work, I have no idea if anyone opened it or not but the girl working that day was very awkward and shy when I asked for it

>>3286811
Thanks man - this is my first time doing something like this, so I'm glad someone other than me found it hot.

Do furry hands in porn have 2 fingers or 3? Where does the tail go?

>>3286808
I am shocked and appalled. Yet I'm amazed by how good this is.

>>3286871
Did I really say 2 fingers or 3? I meant 2-joined fingers or 3-jointed

>>3286346
are you kazoo?

>>3285131
youre probably only better than the black one

I guess gay art doesn't get much help around here, huh?
Is it because that one guy doesn't listen to critiques?

>>3286871
Why shocked and appalled?

>>3286726
I'd say this is mostly fine, regardless that there's some kind of ugliness in the style (the strong muscle marks on a scrawny guy and the way you draw the face) that is not too much of my taste in porn art, but that doesn't make it wrong in any way.
Anatomy-wise, the lumbar section of the torso is a little bit too stretched to the right side. Like the ass, back, shoulders and head are dimensionally well positioned, but the lumbar section along with the waist seems too stretched to a side, like you wanted to show as much of the torso without it hiding behind the ass, even if it doesn't makes much sense since he's mostly seen from behind. You'll notice if you try to reconect the left side of his pelvis to the rest of the upper body and you'll see it gets too long.

>>3286952
Well shit. I thought the problem was the opposite, that I needed to show more of his torso. I guess I was trying to change the angle of view. I see what you mean now though. Thanks anon, maybe I'll go back in and try to fix it the other way sometime. I think I'm done with it for now.

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>>3286959
It was bothering me too much so I tried a quick fix.
How's this?

Can someone please show Kyle how to draw males?

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>>3286963
I want to throw bleach in my eyes...

>>3286943
Dunno, guess the idea of Tokyo Ghoul even existing in the first place wigs me out. Which is dumb cause this is the internet and all...

>>3287203
*Tokyo Ghoul porn, I just woke up.

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>>3287204
I understand what you mean. It's the complete opposite for me though - Tokyo Ghoul has so many top-tier girls, but no one has drawn any decent doujins - it's either gay shit or lame Touka x Kaneki drivel.

I basically made that out of seething frustration.

>>3287206
Mad respect, my dude. Keep it up.

>>3286963
I find it ok now. The stretchness of the torso was kind of distracting and now that's gone.

>>3287049
Don't be rude anon. It's evident that he/she is well acquinted with drawing. If you don't like the style (I already said that it is not enitrely of my taste, at least this particular drawing) there are better ways to say so.

>>3287048
post YOUR art for critique, give critique to others that post THEIR art, or GTFO, absolute piece of shit.

inb4 hello kyle.

L A Z Y B A C K G R O U N D

L A Z Y E V E R Y T H I N G

>>3287309
based mon

teach me senpai

>>3287313
I don't know what the fuck I'm doing desu my kazoku. I got a tablet for the first time in Nov and I've basically been slamming my face against it and uploading whatever comes out.

>>3287048
Huh, actual detail on feet. That's rare

>>3287048
the toddlerish face on that 35 yo woman is much more disturbing

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>>3284821
y don't u draw a forehead, its triggering my placement senses real hard atm.

Looking for some help on this, anything to make it more interesting or anything that stands out as wrong?

>>3286898
Who/what is a kazoo?

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>>3286808
Holy shit this is really well done sempai. Didn't even watch the show and I can follow whats happening and I like it! All the posing is really thoughtful and there is a air of professionalism that goes with it. Mu hat is off to you and I hope that, once everything is rendered and fully done, you get the credit you deserve. Great stuff!

Please Help ;-;

>>3287219
Thanks again for the help anon. I cleaned it up some and made the changes permanent so I can finally go ahead and finish it.

>>3287427
one of the people who follow me on twitter, was a random guess

Any advice is appreciated.

>>3286780
Well done! The kagune line got a laugh out of me.

>>3287634
Nipples are off center and the panties wouldn't have so many directionless folds if she was pulling on them like that, they would be coming from the side she is pulling. Elongate the legs a little and make them thicker. The fold on the shirt are looking pretty good, and the shading is nicely done.

>>3287649
Could you elaborate on the nipples being off center. I was a little lazy with the color application so it doesn't look like it's curving around the breast. Do you mean that or do the nipples need to be farther apart?

>>3287673
Left one is placed way too high is what I meant.

>>3287634
You have a future in wikihow illustration.

>>3287678
Actual advice?

>>3287678
Too far, anon.

>>3287206
It's really good. One of my goals is to be able to draw whatever I want like that on a whim. Could I ask how long you spent on this entire project?

>>3287396
Nevermind I've decided to start over with a more interesting angle

>>3286122
cute, boobs are a bit too ball-like though

>>3287498
Try to put some more movement in your pose, some more energy. Look up some artists with great gesture drawing, to see what i mean.

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>>3287732
Like: http://clairewendlingblog.tumblr.com

Hi, I've already moved onto other projects but I would like opinions of where I've fucked up on this one. Reference used was a 3D model on sketchfab so had to guess the awkward joints and in retrospect I kind of wish I didn't use such thick black lines.

>>3287697
Looks quite good.
How are you going to do the top's hand though? With the pic fully rendered it would look weird if he had a floating hand. Or sill it be a transparent self insert ghost?

>>3287794
Ghost hand is the current plan, if I think it looks out of place I'll just paint it out and leave that area blank

>>3287697
I'd reconsider positioning that foot.
It's gonna create one hell of a muddy silhouette.

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>>3287814
Here's two quick examples i put together.

>>3287821
I like the top one, I'll experiment with that

>>3287681
I think this took me around 2 or 3 days (mind you, I'm on holiday right now, so I had plenty of time to spare).
Keep going and you'll get to your goal - it's all a matter of just understanding what you're trying to draw. I fap to doujins all the time, and every now and then I observe the artistic details and techniques of them after I've jacked off.

>>3284589
i swear every time i come to /ic/ the porn thread quality gets better and everything else gets worse, i guess lust is the best professor of anatomy

>>3286871
What the fuck am I even doing?

>>3287862
what is he supposed to be doing

>>3287871
Grabbing his junk, but I'm doing an undies version first.

Anything look too far off? The dong is suppose to be oversized.

>>3287048
He sure does the same childlike goblin face in everything.

Any advice of any kind would be appreciated.

>>3284902
Call me shallow but I only draw because people don't make the shit I want to fap to or certain characters I like get neglected. Figured I'll do it my damn self.

>>3284902
No, I don't see my porn as porn but an effort, an artistic experience, it's the work I put into instead of the sexuality it represents.

>>3287862
I know what you aren't doing. You aren't practicing perspective, which you should.

>>3287048
lol looks like his 'left' arm is emerging from his stomach area

>>3284902
no, the goal is to make others do it for you.
i really want to try to make my drawings more erotic, but its so damn hard

>>3286781
Please use lighter shades for afterimages, because the third panel looks like she ripped the KAGUNE off, which is obviously very disturbing, and you put the throat too far back.

That aside, I don't even care for this series and my definition of a ghoul is far from sexy, but it was pretty hot until page 12. You've clearly had a lot of experience with hentai doujins.

>>3288082
I used a ref for the body, so I dunno how the perspective could be messed up outside of the head. Can you point out what could be fixed?

>>3286720
Thanks for the critique, Anon. Forgot to post updates but I did'nt like this one so much so probably I'll move to something else.

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>>3284589
anyone got any images or refs for poses like this? this is the best i can do from imagination, but i feel like its off somehow. it irks me to no end.

>>3288231
the head.

>>3288618
Head angled too high? Too low? Too oblique?

How come nobody has made another Question and Answers thread?

Anyway, guess I'll ask this here. What's a good place to post your NSFW comics/doujins for views? Are you allowed to just upload your own shit to sites like nhentai, ehentai, hitomi, the Boorus, etc etc?

If anyone knows there's any site that pays you for hosting your comics on their site that'd be cool too.

cleaned this and tried to do a bit of perspective, looks off but I can't put my finger on it.

are her proportions alright? i want her to be leggy, but maybe i pushed it too far.

>>3288060
looks like the watermelon is see-through. lightening the lineart of the dick a touch would make it more apparent that it's an x-ray thing.

is it part of a comic?

Any major glaring issues I can't see?
I'm gonna finalise this picture tomorrow, but my eyes are too adjusted to it at this point.
>>3286130
Cool stuf m8, you gotta be careful with the sprayed-on textures cause they flatten the piece a lot. You gotta add hem at the core shadow areas to emphasise the form.
>>3286772
holey shit, when are you moving to Japan to show them who's the boss? I'll try to do some actual feedback tomorrow, but seriously man this is great.

>>3288770
It's really good! the perspective looks great and I can tell you put a ton of effort into the accuracy of the room around them. the figures look great as well. I don't think that her legs are too long because of the angle it is at. The only thing is, and this may be vague and just an individual thing, but it feels too impersonal . Like, the sexual tension is lost because of how well the environment is done, and how small they seem in it. You might benefit from a tighter crop, But if you do that, you cut out all the hard work you have done with the room already.

I really like it anon, and you can feel free to ignore my petty issue if you don't feel the same way ( especially since you're leagues better than me)

>>3288836
her pussy looks way lower than it should be

>>3288870
thanks for the crit! i definitely see what you're saying. i tried cropping it closer (see pic related) but i don't know that it solves the issue. i think i made a bad choice with the "camera" placement -- the viewer is too far away from the characters. i think that's what is causing the impersonal feel of it. fixing it would mean starting over though, and the impersonal mood might work given the femdom/worship subject matter. hmm.

>>3287981
you're mom is a goblin

>>3288885
No prob anon! Just cropping like that has really changed the dynamic, but you're right about the pose. On that note though, I like the fact that the viewer is under the table, It gives it a strong voyeuristic vibe that the previous one didn't have. Like we're a student who has left in the classroom, these two came in and we hid, only to find this perverted action going on : ) it appeals to a whole new demographic lol. Be sure to drop your blog/tumbr/site after its done or whenever you can because I would love to see more of your stuff and be watching you in the future

An idea moving forward; Maybe take a page out of a comic sort of situation.Drawing a close-up of her face and a close-up of his, kissing/ licking her foot with a humiliated/pervy look on his face. This would add a closeness, probably still keep the voyeuristic part, and help you include the face in a clearer form ( the face being the most erotic part of the body most of the time)

Keep up the really,really awesome work. You have a fan rooting for you!

>>3287973
blog pls?

>>3288900
>you’re

Kyle confirmed for high school dropout

>>3288626
yes

First time drawing fatter characters in more complicated poses. Any critique would be appreciated, thanks!

First time drawing fatter characters in more complicated poses. Any critique is appreciated, thanks!

>>3289091
Her right thigh is waaay thicker than her left thick.

>>3287788
that hairline is the worst part imo

>>3288900
that's a nice face

what's the point in porn if all you fuckers draw are tiny penises

>>3289091
dont give her those bigass lips and give her sharp teeth and then that will activate my schlong

>>3289191
here you go

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>>3289032
Kyle has a bachelors degree

>>3289549
Isn't he like 40

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>>3289537
Fuckkk these are really good
>tfw can't stop drawing futas with massive dicks like those

>>3289537
#nohomo

>>3289096
Wow, I don't know how I missed that, thanks!

can someone give me guidance on the legs/feet?

no matter how i position them they seem totally off. i feel lost on this one

>>3289759
Heel should be a tad larger, the ball before the big toe shouldn't start from the middle of the foot.

>>3289765
i think i'm closer but still not sure

>>3289759
forgive the horrible ms paint quality but this seems more correct to me
her lower leg is coming back at us so the foot shouldn't be so small

>>3289893
also just realized her hand is very small

>>3290098
oop, did em in wrong order

>>3287048
What's the artists name?

Ok, I know jack shit about porn art but I need a good artist with a more western style for a large project. Also needs to be serious, pretty sure there needs to be a contract.
How do I find such artists? Are there some sites I can browse? Like artstation for porn where artist post contact info.
'preciate any info on this, God bless!

>>3290190
look through the popular submissions on hentai foundry. reach out to the ones that at least seem professional and that have a decent following.

>>3290191
Thank you!

I'm currently working on this, which is inspired by this: https://cs.sankakucomplex.com/data/18/6e/186e93aa7a433d680d141225d619b63f.jpg?e=1517121762&m=OBXE4hI8TBea-kZ_KJXATQ

It's Timmy Turner and Icky Vicky from Fairly Odd Parents having had the night of their life with cum drooling out of her vag and his dick.

I'm still in the early phases tho, changing values and colors and temperature. Also I'm no t sure what the fairies should be saying ( gonna add speech bubbles ), will add details like used condoms, used papertowels, clothes etc.

C&c and suggestions in general would be great.

>>3290190
And another question: if you were to guess, how long do you think it takes that kyle guy to do an illustration (2 characters+background)?

>>3290209
this is actually really terrible. Could you not make something horribly disgusting for once grig?

>>3290219
Fuck you nigger, either give a proper critique or >pyw but don't throw shit around when you have nothing of worth to say nigger

>>3290225
lmfao triggered?

>>3290226
yes unfortunately

>>3290209
those legs,

AHAHAHAHA

>>3290209
It's not appealing. When you're drawing porn, you want it to look appealing at least.

>>3290209
I think that other anon is right in that it needs to be more appealing. I'm not sure how you'd do that though.
For what it's worth I appreciate that you made Vicky thicc as fuck and kinda muscular

>>3290098
why the fuck. If you have to be this degenerate at least don't draw zika virus victims.

>>3290209
Technichally the pictures is REALLY good. But... Dude, vicky is fucking HUGE! She's not thicc, she looks like an insanely buff dude who took tons of roids and now has bitch tits. And you added a pussy for all its worth. It honestly looks horrendeous and the armpit hair isnt helping.
Also I'd prefer it if you had given timmy at least a slightly bigger cock, but I'm not into shota and never understood the appeal of seeing a woman get fucked by a dick she can barely even feel, so im biased about that.
But this pic only serves a really smalle niche of people well and is really unappealing for literally everyone else.

>>3290431
>critiquing the content rather than the execution
Don't do that.

>>3290329
You are the hero /ic/ deserves.

>>3290329
>those arms
Also do you even study and practice or do you just shitpost here all day?

>>3288667
>just realized he's literally floating in front of the room
No idea how I didn't see that, I'll get back to it later.
How does pic related look instead? I think I can get some interesting lighting with the hot spring.
Hips/legs are weirding me out but idk what up

>>3289556
You know Kyle is like 40 and black right?

>>3290906

anyone who didn't know Kyle and Illustrat are the same person is a complete newfag

How is the torso anatomy?

>>3291061
You're putting too much emphasis on the lines on the abdomen. You don't to draw every detail, just try to imply it rather than detail it, if that makes sense.

>>3287973
Squish the right cheek a bit more on the girl behind. I see you were trying to go for it, but I think it'd needs to be emphasized a bit more.

>>3286726
Please stop drawing. This is one of the most horrifying things I've ever seen.

>>3287309
Maybe I'm just blinded by how fappable this is, but this looks really good.

>>3291154
Shit man, you don't know how much that actually means to me. Thanks a lot.

Wanted to ask /ic/ a few questions about this next thing I'm working on.

Lighting isn't finalised yet, but do you think I should keep the crack/strip of light on her face?
An internal cutaway showing the Metroid ejaculating inside of her - y/n?
Hexagonal texture on the suit - y/n?

Think I'm probably gonna redo that dick. It's not very dynamic.

>>3291205
Forgot to resize adequately. Repost.

A friend recommended I post a couple of sketches I did of some Samurai jack fanart.

Whatta ya think?

>>3291242
This is actually great, I love it.

>>3291244
Thank you very much, hows the expressions and body language? Would I need to stretch it more?

redid this

>>3291268
Looks nice.

>>3291149
Yeah nah, fuck you.

>>3286963
I would love a androgynous elf sketch from you, mang.

>>3291285
What you mean like Link? Doing what?

>>3291205
Cutaways are always nice.
As for lighting, it depends on what the background would be. Is this taking place in the confines of a space station or on a planet? If its the former, then the lightings fine, but if its the latter then I feel something more subtle would work better in conjunction with the setting.

>>3291295
Either Link dressed as that Geruda dress sitting like this but facing front looking at the vierwer seductivly. https://thumbs.dreamstime.com/z/casual-guy-sitting-floor-19924095.jpg

Or Zevran from Dragon age doing something similar.

>>3291316
Facing front? I'm a little confused, isn't he facing front already?

>>3291318
Your right, he is. Nvm.

>>3291330
Haha. I'll see what I can do for you anon.

>>3291061
Sorry if my sketch is difficult to make out. The blue is the rough skeletal shape, orange is the muscle shapes, and pink is the center line/overall curve of the figure. I'm also assuming the character is supposed to be lying down.
-Don't make the lines of the hips so angular, especially when the hip turns into the thigh. It should be more curved and subtle.
-Pay attention to the shape of the ribs and how they protrude.
-The ab muscles are closer to the center, yours are too wide.
-Make sure the angles and positions of the muscles follow a smooth curve down the middle.
-The vagina doesn't stick out like that, it's pretty tucked in and follows the curve.
-The shoulders are a little too broad.
-The overall torso could be a little bigger, but that's not as much of a problem.
Sorry if some of this doesn't make sense. Also, I'm not an expert by any means, these are just my observations.

>>3291333
Hey, hey...your a good dude. A very good dude.

>>3291342
I knew I was fucking something up. Thanks, man!

please crit the ever living hell out of this

im so scared to go digital

im like a virgin in the porn industry; im scared to git gud at drawing porn I DUN WANNA BE A SLAVE TO HORNY NEETS

COUghahem

having said that, money is money and what should a person who still has no set routine on digital recommended do's and don'ts + uhh
yeah do i literally retain anything from the concept sketch or just trash it once i get the lineart down?

>>3291498

anybody thats a stab at coloring realistically pls respond

otherwise im going full on fauvism on this ho

>>3291498
go to google images.
search for "basic human proportions" and memorize these.

digital is easy. much easier than traditional.
i like the treasure trails, keep them, the porn-art-world is definitely undersaturated for those

>>3291498
I don't know if you're underage or not but please, please learn how to use words, it'll really help you out in life in general, no one wants to hire someone who speaks like an embarassing 13 year old.

>>3291348
Thanks man, I appreciate that.
I need to go for now but I'll finish cleaning this up later.

>>3286772
Wow anon this is really well done, even for a simple sketch. It's exactly what I'm aspiring being able to do. Would you mind sharing your findings and technique?

>>3284589
A little help?

I want to fix anatomy issues and such before inking.

>>3291618
I don't know how qualified I am to describe the 'techniques' I use, as it's always different for everyone, and I don't know how good my techniques really are, but I can share an epiphany I had for my art in general: That it was, at least in my case, much more interesting and fun to focus on drawing things that LOOK good, rather than focusing on structural correctness.

I read a lot of manga, since childhood, and I noticed that even if the drawings weren't anatomically correct, they were more concerned with conveying a specific emotion or aesthetic.
I found that, though fundamentals are important to know, the most important thing in making any sort of art is the feeling behind it - if you focus only on structural correctness, the only things you'll ever make are remarkable displays of technical ability, but nothing beyond.

In my case with this doujin, the 'feeling' behind it was to make it as sexy as possible. Look at page 9 of the doujin - after revisiting it, I've noticed that her head is kind of big and her shoulders a little bit narrow. This is something that I will keep in mind of in future projects, but my intent with that top panel was to draw focus to her face, especially eyes, because I thought that would make her look extra sexy.

I guess what's important is having a focus on the things you want to draw - though, a wise hobo samurai from long ago put it in better words than I have:

“The primary thing when you take a sword in your hands is your intention to cut the enemy, whatever the means. Whenever you parry, hit, spring, strike or touch the enemy's cutting sword, you must cut the enemy in the same movement. It is essential to attain this. If you think only of hitting, springing, striking or touching the enemy, you will not be able actually to cut him.”

>>3291625
Do you have a blog?

>>3291635
https://mushroompanda.tumblr.com/

I only set up this nsfw blog recently, and I don't draw porn very often - I won't be posting my normal blog here, 'cause I don't want anyone making any connections of this sort.

>>3291583
No prob, no prob.

Lovely done, mang.

I appreciate your time and work!

>>3291316
GTFO with your requests, autismo.

>>3291498
>im like a virgin in the porn industry; im scared to git gud at drawing porn I DUN WANNA BE A SLAVE TO HORNY NEETS
don't worry, you are pretty shit at it and with your attitude you're never gonna make it big anyway. only people that make it big have to care about that kind of stuff.

>>3291698
...sure sure, mang.

>>3286808
Absolutely god-tier work. Literally can publish hentai in Japan and could become a professional mangaka if you wanted to.

>>3291625
Words of wisdom. I realized this only lately and it has totally changed how I view my own and art in general.
Also, you have strong appeal going on in that comic you did. It reminds me a lot of kenshin187's messy but appealing style.
Mad respect for that.

Also, pic attached is something I did lately. Experimenting with heavier stylization.

>>3291772
>Experimenting with heavier stylization.
No pun intended lol.

I know I made a thread about this a few days ago but I still can't come to a conclusion on this problem

I want to draw stuff I'm interested in, in a rough painterly style
but in the area I'm aiming at what's popular is ultra clean stuff with clean lineart and terrible fetishes
I'm stuck between the decision of being able to make over 60k a year easily with the skills I've worked hard to attain, or to settle for barely minimum wage but paint what I enjoy

I've thought that if I wanted easy money I should go into another field like accounting, but I have the skills in art to make that kind of money just by drawing what I don't enjoy
I'm thinking of making a second account and doing it on the side, it's less effort demanding and I could easily pump out over 50 pics a year just doing it on the side and drawing what I enjoy on my main account

To anyone who's sold their dignity and drawn shit fetishes for money, how soul crushing is it? Is it worth the easy money or would I be more comfortable making a scarce income but drawing what I love?

>>3291786
is this yours?

>>3291802
no, pic is by Tokifuji

>>3291786
I considered the idea some more and have thought of an interesting idea

The most popular stuff is ultra generic ass and tit shots of girls
these also make alot of money, I've seen auctions go for alot
but if I decide to go all the way in being a money whore would it be wise to offer private commissions for shittier fetishes that don't get a popular with the masses but demand a high price because they're controversial, so basically appealing to both the masses and the niches, I thought maybe start a third account to draw shit fetishes but the popularity gained from the first account would make it easier to get the third working

Would it be insulting to a client if I told them I can't post their commission online because I'm concerned it would hamper the image of my gallery?

I can fuckin smell the money sucking my dick already, am I a kike?

>>3291813
they can just post it on their own gallery or blog or something and credit you. It's non of their buisness what you post in your own.

>>3291852
that sounds like a solution that would work, thanks for the input anon!

>>3291558
>i like the treasure trails, keep them, the porn-art-world is definitely undersaturated for those

>>3291786
>>3291813
I think you are making way too many meme assumptions, anon.
You think by making 50 artworks in one year, you'll make 50k?
So that, what, 1k per artwork?

For something like this you have to have really good skills and a huge rep in the commissions circles. Just because you draw niche content, this won't make you a successful commission artist over night.

I think you have some rethinking to make.

>>3291885
As a start, if I took it fulltime I could make over 100

>>3288126
How do I learn to make sketches like this, as a complete beginner? How do I go from stick figure to this?

>>3291885
>>3291886
Alright I'll be more reasonable, if I did it fulltime I could easily make 50k+, although I probably wouldn't want to do that, that would be too soul crushing
I wouldn't expect to start making that much overnight but there isn't much market for doing what I enjoy, and it takes alot of time as well, the amount of money I'd be able to make it limited, I would easily make more money doing this

>>3291886
Post your art. Again, I think you are making assumptions based on memes.
Unless you are already a huge name, you will never make that kind of money. Are you a big name?

>>3291906
>Are you a big name?
If he was any name at all he wouldn't have these delusions.

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>>3286808
I got no clue where this is meant to be from but design of guy is off putting. Here you have hot chick with huge boobs fucking what looks like character that belongs in Boku No Pico instead.
Has he even hit puberty or is this classical retardation of anime in where he supposedly did despite looking 8.

>>3291900
You'll have to learn fundamentals.
For starters you don't want to jump into figure drawing all of a sudden.
Start by drawing rl environments and objects (still life, furniture, your room from various angles). You want to be able to understand perspective at least a bit before you tackle more difficult stuff, like characters and other organic and complex forms.
Then you want to practice gesture, as that is the most important aspect of sketching.
Then there are values, shading, anatomy, etc.
Most beginners do the mistake of starting to learn by drawing very complex stuff or just copying other artists they like. That's not absolutely bad, but if you make this kind of """training""" your main focus, you'll end up taking a much longer time to learn anything really useful that will make you a good artist, and your stuff will look flat and uninteresting. Then you'll start noticing this and you'll be back at square one trying to learn perspective. This happens 99% of the time with eager beginners with no guidance. Try to avoid that at all costs.

>>3291910
I'm trying to redpill him, but I don't want to be rude. This always leads to offtopic and salt in here.

>>3291772
how long does one of these single-character pics take you?

Trying multiple characters.

>>3291999
It depends. Sometimes more, sometimes less. I like to experiment with styles and I'm still learning to streamline my coloring properly. The cow meme one took me about 3 hours.

This one here 4-5.

I like ink but nobody wants to jack off to black and white :(

>>3291666
I finished your sketch dude. I might try to color this but don't hold your breath for it. Thanks for being the only one to enjoy my art in this thread.

>>3292328
I feel your pain. This is really nicely drawn though I like it a lot.

>>3292345
literally the most retarded shit I've ever seen in my life.

Roughed this out quick. Any advice for the perspective as I go over in red (with the basic shapes better defined)?

>>3292369
No problem, I appreciate what you've done so far.

You gotta good style, hope it'll take you far.

>>3292369
Thanks man. Maybe I'll scan and color digitally someday idk

can I get some critiques?

any thoughts?

hahaha. how did i get this fucked up.

Real rusty, first drawing I've spent time on in a while

Real rusty my anatomy and perspective will be better soon
Havent spent more than 20 minutes on a drawing in a while feelsrealgoodman

>>3292450
Gradually

>>3292308
4-5 houurs seems crazy fast. i could probably spend that on coloring alone.

>>3292308
what's your coloring process like?

What do you guys think? Is it good

>>3292595
I really like this style a lot. I see a couple of issues with the breasts. On the smaller chick her boob is too much in profile view. Boobs point outward from the center of the chest a little. That line representing where it attaches to her rib cage should be closer to her armpit and the breast more in 3/4 view.
On the larger one her breasts look slightly out of perspective to me. I'd say one is either too high or the other too low. Personally I like the position of the one closest to the white haired chick the most so if it were me I would lower the part of the other boob starting from below the arm just a little.
The bigger chick's vag might also be a little too high? Still, nice work.

>>3292308
4-5 hours? and thats the quality u give? lol...

>>3292498
Nice squirt effect.

>>3292551
Nothing special. Flat colors and then I either use multiply and screen layers on top, or just wing the shading and lighting by color picking.
>>3292620
I am hit and miss at coloring, so I spend a lot of time on that. It's just a matter of confidence and process streamlining, though. Practice makes perfect.

>>3292605
To add to this, I think the smaller girl's right arm is a little but out of perspective too. Makes it look bigger than it is. I think if you rotate the right elbow out, it should fix it.

Did the pose turn out as awkward as I think it did?

>>3292446
not bad. tape is a little too contrasty.

>>3284589
So /ic/, what's your favorite specific fetish?
Like, do you have a very specific combination of kinks that pushes all of your buttons seamlessly?

>>3293008
I have made a checklist for that exact kind of question. If I would see a woman with atleast having half of the following traits, I would immediately cum and rape her on the spot.

Body:
-build fat & tall
-SHOULDERS broad
-HIPS wide
-PUBES black
-Treasure Trail
-Hairy Legs, Face, arms
-Veins
-stretch marks
-sweat
-sharp finger toe nails
-skinfolds
-Belly w-shape
-Belly low
-red/brown armpit, ellbow, knee, sole, chest, moles, freckles


Head:
-sweaty/greasy face, wet hairstrands
-FACE wide round
-JAW roundish soft
-EYEBROWS bushy wild (Monobrow?)
-EYES big (jewish?)
-eyelid upper pronounced, dark?
-eye lazy
-eyerings bags
-pupils bright contrasty
-NOSE slightly crooked
-blush
-Hair grey long greasy messy
-Mole (with hair)
-saliva trail at/in mouth

Clothes:
-clothes dirty greasy spots
-partially asymetric, wet, torn
-one sock
-tight neck
-housewife bandana
-exposed armpits
-nipples through clothes or flash
-cameltoe or flash
-piggybelly hangin over pants
-Crotch cutout
-tight strands
-highside thong
-uniform, tight, seethrough, bright color
-panties transparent+shaved or u-shaped revealing pubes

>>3292731
blog?

>>3293027
samefag, altough I'm not sure on the crooked nose, lately I prefer much more straight long noses, pre-raphaelite i think its called

>>3293027
>-Belly w-shape
>-Belly low
what do these mean?

>>3293030
>>3293027
jewfags

>>3293045
what i mean by w-shape is basically a chubby belly, which is slightly parted in the middle, creating a w-shaped shaddow when lit from above.

Low just means that it is hanging lower than usual, portruding especially around the womb area

>>3292507
is there even a way to avoid it though? gradually, yea obviously, thats how everything works in this world.

>>3293145
What about flash photography you fucking idiot

>>3293008
>Futa(real futa, not that dickgirl/shemale shit)
>Traps
>Stomach deformation
>Ahegao
>Big dick
>traps with big dicks
>futa on anything
>Big tits and ass
>legal /ss/

>>3293195
what the fuck?

working on a porn game. Pixel art may not have been the best choice of medium but I'm in too deep.

>>3293482
looks good my man

>>3292498
pussy looks like a tarantula

>>3292498
Why is she shooting projectiles out of her pussy?

>>3291498
you hide behind your line art.

>>3293564
Yeah i keep trying to make hairy work
>>3293576
Idk i was going to white that part out but i got sick of working on it

Moving into the lineart shortly, but I need a fresh pair of eyes to critique my sketch. Tear it apart how you see fit.

Fuck it, I'm going to color this. I came here to get help with coloring and rendering anyway, got to start somewhere.
I'm trying out some stuff I've never tried before and I think it's looking pretty nice as far as color harmony goes. I have a lot of problems with value and saturation so I'd really appreciate advice on that if it looks wrong.

Id appreciate some help. I feel like there’s so much shit that couldve been improved on this.

>>3293618
Imo move her hair out of the way. It gives you a chance to show a nice female back and the hair will look more natural.

>>3293692
Head is -way- too big, her right leg is thicker than her left one and the simplistic heavy lineart makes the whole character very flat. Use thinner lines and a vary the line weight more. Give closer forms thicker lines and make them thinner to those further away from the "camera". This will give some depth to the whole artwork.
There are also some perspective issues, especially on the vibrator and her hand, that add even more to the flatness.

>>3293668
(Same guy who gave you critique on your first drawing in this thread) The colors looks okay so far since you decided to go with opposites in shadow and lighting (warm shadows, cool lights). Some shadows would require to be blended better like the ones in his legs, but I understand it's just a wip. I'd probably define more the character's face (try giving more contrast to his features) and soft his abs. Regarding your previous work, it shows you like worked up muscles in thin guys, but it looks jarring and hard to the eye when a soft complexion like Link's is given such rock hard muscles.

>>3293668
baby thighs

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i really enjoyed these drawings and wanted to give out some (you)s

something i threw together earlier. didn't have very long to work on it, but i felt fine leaving it where it is

>>3294159
Thank (you)

>>3294176
I think you hide your lack of fundies behind overstimulating colors and loose linework

>>3293029
https://twitter.com/orenjipiiru

>>3294599
kek

>>3290209
So here is the progress shot. I added underwear to both of them to not get deleted again.
Crits?

>>3294796
pls dont bully

QUESTION, should the pussy lips be visible in this position?

>>3294964
ANSWER, no

>>3294846
I'd say that Vicky's left leg is too small.
I also feel her shoulders are too broad, but thats personal taste.

>>3294970

Elaborate, nobody else had pointed it out before.

Show photo graphical evidence of your claims.

Could anyone kindly fix the anatomy in this pic? it's driving me nuts.

>>3294846
This is pretty neat, I really like it. Can you please post a version with better res or something, cause I can see the edges are all jagged.
The only thing I can point out is her right leg could use a slightly better perspective, and the right left should be longer to better fit her amazon-like body.

Comments and criticism before I refine the whole thing in red?

>>3291208
Blog?

Do you think this character would work well as a trap? Designing one for a porn game I'm deving. I know the clothing plays a major roll, would anyone be able to recommend good references for the types of clothes I should dress them in?

>>3295313
Gay

>>3295313
Why she don't has foreskin?

>>3295016
maybe refine the hip on the left one and the shoulders on the right one a bit more. Also making the fingers of the male person more manly would maybe give it more charm.

>>3295012
Sure. Here you go, careful tho, it is really HIGH RES.

>>3296130
I looked at your deviantart, good stuff man, I see you've improved a lot since 2011 (your oldest deviantart post)

>>3296130
this is great

have a (you)