/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3258226
Oh good, another thread that's all about Kyle.

>>3258227
at least it's about a competent artist. stop being so fucking jelly, ffs.

You know you've made it when you get a few autistic bucket crabs on /ic/

>>3258227
This thread sucks. Let it prune and make a new one.

>>3258308
That's exactly why it bothers me. If there's anyone who doesn't need any help it's him but he's the only one everyone talks about and to in every thread.

>>3258327
You seem to have the case of being jealous of the popular girl. Stop overthinking things. The problem isn't this dude doing what the thread is about, its your attitude. Just chill dude.

>>3258337
Whatever. For the amount of help I've ever gotten in these threads I'm probably better off going off on my own and trying to figure shit out.

>>3258319
What is a bucket crab?
>>3258337
Kyle is female?

>>3258343
We are all girls on the internet.

>>3258343
No he isn't. Girls are good at drawing expressions.

STOP COMPLAINING ABOUT KYLE AND JUST POST NORMALLY IN THE THREAD

>>3258341
wow, guys, watch out, anon just discovered how you are suppose to do it, wow

There are what, 4 or 5 people here right now? And nobody has posted any art?? What are you guys even doing here?

>>3258381
just woke up, checking out ic a little before starting my gam... I mean my drawing session

Current commission. Really stumped on the body markings. I can't come up with a good design I wish I didnt have to add them.

>>3258384
Did they commission you to come up with body markings?

>>3258385
Yes. They said something Celtic inspired. Bbc chan got commissioned yo do this character a few months ago. I loosely based them on what he drew currently.

>>3258396
celtic patterns usually feature knotwork. right now you just put random simplified tribal stuff on her. look up some ref on the internet. having the flowing designs accentuate the lines of her body would be a good approach.
if you have time read the George Bain book on celtic art construction. might be useful in the future

>>3258384
STOP MAKING HUGE LEGS, THEY DONT LOOK GOOD ON SKINNY GIRLS

>>3258384
Is this you? I saw it on /aco/ but not on your blog. Looks like your art but I wasn't sure.

>>3258421
i disagree

>and the thread proceeds to be completely about kyle again

>>3258428
Yeah that's me. I also did the poke boy one

Are there any tutorials on drawing faces in porn? I can't seem to get anything I'm happy with

also any tutorials would be nice, right now I'm studying Incase because I find his stuff super attractive

>>3258384
Not even porn though...

>>3258428
Heeds some more highlights.

>>3258447
Needs*

>>3258226
>Literally one (1) pic on topic to the thread at hand, that ISN'T something Kyle posted

Please just delete the thread. Please stop posting BBC, Kyle, or any "made it" artists for the fucking OP as it ALWAYS starts shitposting. Just use any old hentai image instead of shilling artists, good or bad. Same shit needs to stop in that Alt Style thread too.

>>3258466
Your just jelly of kyles incredible talent and skill.

>>3258384
Every time I look at your work I want to give up. How did you get so good? like literally how? Books? figure drawing?

>If you're not kyle please don't respond to this post, I don't care.

>>3258487
>Jelly
Nice /ic/ meme

>>3258226
you lazy fuck Why the hell is this >>3255844 not the pic in your post. At least look at SOME pictures in the thread before picking one.

>>3258517
That sucks. Shoulda picked this. >>>>3252051

Shit on me guys. And someone please help with panties. Wtf.

Working on a generic succubus, looking for any errors before clean up and color.

I managed to change the gesture of the orange fairy with the free transform, but I am too tired to see if it needs more work, or if it was a good change, even. What do you say?

>>3258651
one on right feels better.

>>3258651
I agree with >>3258661 On the right it looks more like he's thrusting, on the left it looks like he's arresting the blue one.

Workout outfit.
this one is definitely my favorite of the bunch so far, I feel like I'm improving a lot with these. took pissed off highbrow anon's advice from last thread and put some more effort on the hands.

Anyways, critique it to bits friendos.

>>3258700
nice palette

>>3258700
Blog?

>>3258700
Looks like she got fatter.

>>3258700
I fucking love your art-style, this is some quality shit right here, your art is goals. Where can I find more of your work, or follow you?

>>3258429
me too

>>3258708
>>3258729
>>3258741
Is this same fagging? Honestly.
It's good but not to this level of praise every thread. I really don't understand.
>>3258646
This is very good deserving of the same amount of praise. Yet no one says a thing about it. Not even critique.
I don't see a thing wrong with it btw I hope you finish this.

>>3258763
Last couple thread he got angry people kept asking for his blog, bunch of people do it to annoy him now.

>>3257565
Hey I like your stuff from the last thread do you have a blog?

>>3258700
This is so good. Can you draw her sucking a big cock next?

>>3258700
Blog?

>>3258763
But that one is messy and not so clean and cute.
Also lacking color.
Its clear which artist is superior.

>>3258439
youre better of in the beginner thread, sorry.

>drawing faces in porn
Try using a ref from a porno. If the ref drawing looks bad, figure out why its bad. Are the proportions good? hows the line weight? are you accurately drawing the forms? Are there parts of the porno face that you dont understand? Does it look like what you see? At some point you'll end up having to open an anatomy book, in the faces/head section, and figure out if you understand faces.

Another method would be to copy your favorite porno artist. This would be easier because the artist already put the lines down. So all you have to do is copy the lines accurately and try to figure out why it works. You should also have a book on faces open in another window in order to have a better understanding of faces and heads.

You said you were studying Incase, so the second option will help, but you need to accurately copy his works and understand why they work: line weight, form, and proportions. Maybe spend an hour or so copying a favorite piece from him, then draw from a ref with his style, or use imagination. Just remember Accuracy is key when copying, goodluck

>>3258763
>w-why isn't everyone drooling over m-my work, im j-just as good!
ngmi

>>3258763
Thank you anon, I appreciate it. I think something might be wrong with her shoulder though but it's hard to tell. I was thinking of giving her one of those undercut hair styles so you can see her ear better because I like how it turned out. Or should it just be normal?

>>3258813
I'm awful at hair styles.
The way the collar sits feels a little off just rotate it counter clockwise. The close forearm doesn't taper enough for me.
The shoulder... no? Looks good. Thought she was like coiling back slightly.

>>3258811
>>3258811
What is ngmi?
This is new meme for me sorry.

>>3258830
Cool, I'll edit the collar and forearm like you said and thanks again for the help.

>>3258437
Poke boy? can you post it i havent seen it Your drawing a lot more traps lately. [spoiler]please draw more they are cute

>>3258832
Never going to make it.

>>3258497
Because you're wasting your time here asking retarded questions. NGMI

>>3258497
Have tried checking out the sticky? And actually getting out pencils and shoving them up ass?

>>3258327
what help are you talking about? you think this is giving him some kind of amazing exposure, or something. please, don't be dumb. he's not getting any, trust me.
the OP pic in these threads is supposed to be the best artwork from the previous thread, so that we have a nice thumbnail, and that's all.
drop the jello, seriously.

>>3258421
Are you legit gay or something? Thick thighs save lives and I literally cannot get hard to anything that does not have them.

why ShindoL deserved to be in the sticky?

>>3258797
I pray to god this was a troll post.

>>3258763
People hugbox that cartoonish style because they are weebs. Every topic on this board all share the same cocksucking of eastern/non realism style of drawings and it's laughable. We honestly need more of what you linked to being posted in here and on this board in general to flush out the weebers.

>>3258954
Hi Kyle.

>>3259147
oh great, it's this faggot again

>>3259161
It’s Kyle ignore him.

>>3259147
Kyle pls, you're merely passable as an artist, pls no butthurt

>>3259194
>>3259172
this meme is getting really old really quick

my hands are shakey as fuck and i cant draw smooth lines...everything comes out really sharp and jagged

help? LOL

>>3259205
Consume less caffeine, draw with your shoulder, use stabilizers if it's something beyond your control.

I need to practice nsfw more, any critiques for this shitty drawing?

>>3259212
ahhh this is super cute!
idk i mean i think once you get really stylized its hard to say much, depends on the direction you wanna take? do u wanna do more realistic stuff, just stick with it and refine the shading?

>>3259209
thanks, i think the shoulder thing will probably help. I dont really consume anything with caffeine anyways, just kind of austismo

>>3259214
Thank you so much!! And yeah id like to get better at shading, Im not the best st realistic as you can see and kind of prefer simpler cartoon/anime styles.

>>3259219
mmm i definitely feel you. i mean honestly i think its already really cute and refined, in a simple way! uhh idk Im not sure how relevant this is but i really like eric muentes' stuff. It's a lot more anime-y but the shading is also really colorful and pretty stylized. might be worth checking out!
http://woofycakes.tumblr.com/

>>3259228
Ohh this is amazing im a big fan of the colours and soft shapes! The truth is i haven't done lineart in a few months and was drawing lineless for a while because it felt so comfortable! So this artist is so inspiring thank you!

>>3259235
ahah im glad! wasnt sure if it was super related to what you wanted to do

>>3259256
What kind of art do you do may i ask? You seem really friendly btw thank you for the advice !

>>3259270
no prob, just trying to help!

uhhh idk honestly. I started off doing a lot of traditional painting kinda stuff, but gradually just moved to more anime esq drawings. maybe i got lazy, idk LOL

>>3259275
No it looks good! I like the style, you just need to practice and get better at lineart! Dont worry i think its looking great.

>>3259284
yeeeeah the hardest part is just being consistent and not just fuck around and never end up drawing lol

>>3259284
oh yeah do u have a tumblr or smth i can follow? your stuff is really cute!

>>3259287
I have that problem alot! I get distracted by games and shit all the time

>>3259296
I have an insta that im more active on! My username is SugarBeetles same for tumblr btw

>>3259306
gotcha! i followed u on insta but i dont really post art so it's just gonna be a weird normie account LOL

>>3259310
>>3259306
>>3259298
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>>3259287
>>3259284
>>3259275
>>3259270
>>3259256
>>3259235
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>>3259214
This is infinitely worse than kyle-posting

>>3259339
Fuck off nothing is worst than kyle posting

>>3258700
Personally I'd add some tiny bits of highlights to make the body look even more juicy and attractive. Also to counterbalance all the "blushing" with the shading. Up to you.

Just don't overdo it (or people might start wondering why she looks oiled, etc.)

>>3259339
Your first mistake was thinking this board was worth anything.

>>3259347
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YgHNtzxO0y8

>>3259368
It's relevant to the post, so you can skip the step of all those replies demanding you to post your art so people can consider what level of skill the critique comes from.

>>3258813
Very interested in seeing this finished, good work

>>3258226
So I tried taking advice from the last thread and used side by side photo references. I don't know if my anatomy improved at all but I definitely see how inaccurate my last drawing was of the character. If anyone could critique obvious anatomical flaws or any problems with my line art before I move on to coloring it in? Thank you.

>>3259553
More defined and less round jawline. Please no duckface silicon lips.

I just quickly threw the anatomy there as a side dish, but that wasn't my main problem with the drawing so take it with some grains of salt.

>>3259553
Her mouth is way too low and I think the line between the lips curves too far down. It's making it look like the middle of her upper lip is hugely swollen, it's unappealing imo.
The raised arm is connected at the shoulder too high. Starting left of the line where her hair wisps cross over the collar bone to that sort of Y shaped line on the outside of the arm, below where the ponytail crosses behind it and below the sleeve band, select from those two points out to the rest of the arm and move all of that down.
There are a lot of other problems but they're probably the kind of thing that will only be solved through continuing to draw and study.

I think the pelvis/crotch area is off, and I'm not sure what should I change to fix that. Perhaps make her lower belly a tad bigger and move her butt and pussy lower? Any other glaring mistakes I don't see?
Disregard the legs, I haven't gotten to that part yet.

>>3259577
I appreciate the critique however I am very confused now. In the last thread someone redrew it sort of for me and the right arm was originally very short. They redrew it longer because I never accounted for the extra length the elbow would give. Even when I pose the same way my arm manages to be higher in placement than my head. Here's the photo reference I used for my drawing. I was just wondering because I originally drew the arm around the same size as yours.
>>3259581
Thank you, you are definitely right about the lips and arm.

>>3259596
Wouldn't change much. Although I think the hips/thighs area in general could be larger, but that might require a lot of redrawing.
>>3259607
>They redrew it longer because I never accounted for the extra length the elbow would give.
You have to account for stylization in these things. Whoever gave the last advice, it sounds like they just looked at some IRL reference and though "oh, the elbow should easily reach above the head", without deeper consideration how it affects other parts of proportions. Sometimes the stylization is enough to cause it not be able to reach.
You have to experiment with proportions for good looking stylization and see what things you can adopt from real life and to what extent. Just scaling the head size isn't enough alone, even though it's a good rough reference point.

>>3259634
>Wouldn't change much. Although I think the hips/thighs area in general could be larger, but that might require a lot of redrawing.
Woah, I didn't expect a redline. You are on point about this I think. And this will get a clean lineart pass, so your advice won't go to waste. Thanks a lot!

>>3259676
>redline
That is hardly a redline, he literally traced over your drawing. The absolute state of /ic/.

>>3259683
Oh, I disagree. He pointed out some stuff I didn't see before and that alone is very helpful.

>>3259683
There are some subtle but noteworthy changes if you compare carefully. I recommend flipping between the tabs since they are same sized images.

Any tips on drawing butts that actually are sexy?

>>3259742

Don't draw them like that, and you're off to a good start.

>>3259787
Could you elaborate? If I'm not supposed draw like that, then HOW am I supposed to draw?

>>3259816
Look up some nice asses if you have no idea what they should look like.

Your only concern should be being able to match those asses. Use extra guidelines to define the dimensions better for yourself. If it still doesn't look good you are not paying enough attention to the finer details.
Use smaller brushes so you can be more precise on the details, the line weight isn't as important while you are studying shapes and anatomy accurately.

>>3259831
OK, thanks for explanation!

>>3259742
(cont.)
There's some weird beer gut anatomy going on and other strangeness with the hips. The lineart overall is very wonky and depicts the shapes improperly. It's like you are struggling to put down lines that look smooth and lively but still have enough accuracy to flesh out the shapes.

So it's not just a matter of lacking in anatomy knowledge, but your ability to control your strokes as well. I recommend dedicating a larger area on your tablet for strokes only and less area for unused screen area. Use your mouse to reach other areas around your drawing area. (or just buy a bigger tablet to make physically larger pen strokes).
Also make sure the surface you are drawing on hasn't lost its friction, as they do with use. Using a smudge glove also helps.
Make sure your brush settings are good for sketching when you need to sketch and for lineart when you need to ink.

>>3259872
Those tips are great - especially the idea to set up area on my tablet differently and to use my mouse more is brilliant. Thanks again man!

>>3259895
Here's an example how.

>>3259831
lmao that pelvis bruh, and you still think you're apt to give advice

>>3259683
That's literally what a redline is, fucking faggot.

>>3259943
I saved because I think it looks good. It's not my drawing though.

>>3259943
fucking crabs

>>3259577
>>3259596
Hey do you have a blog? I haven't seen your work, but judging by the way you give redlines, I'm kinda interested in seeing more of your work.

>>3259972
Well, I did use my artist name earlier but someone got triggered from seeing a tripcode.

>>3259634
holy crap what a redline. I love it, looks so solid, how long did you take to reach that level?

>>3258226
>Porn Thread
>picks one of the few images that is barely even lewd and definitely not porn.
Jesus

>>3259973
Give a blog link, I don't feel like looking for you.

>>3260000
Its just kyle using his own images to make the new thread. Fucking faggot kyle.

Can’t we all just agree Kyle is the best /ic/?

>>3260074
>>3260076
go back to drawing instead of shitposting, pathetic crabs.

inb4 hi kyle

>>3260076
I think FiRez is better.

>>3260088
Vetyrr is superior

>>3258384
I'm looking forward to the redline of those boxes I sent you, nahimsayin'.
Happy new year, too.

>>3259683
If you paid attention you'd at least see what he did with the pelvic region; it's up to assbutt what he wants to do. I just wish assbutt would redline those assbutts I sent him back in assbutt.

>>3259688
I'm somewhat interested in what you didn't see beforehand that those changes highlight.

Some stuff from a while ago.

Real_23 is a hell of an inspiration.

Closing off with this comic page. Tomorrow is going to be busy...

>>3260221
Fixed version.

The Vagina is fucking hard to draw

>>3260426
Please look up abs/pecs references

>>3258813
Her arm and spine is a little too straight, makes it look like she's trying to look sexy instead of actually feelin' it.

Pic related is pretty overdone and you're far better than I am, but I hope it somewhat illustrates what I mean.
Try to describe whatever you're drawing with words, eg. pushing, smooth, powerful, strong, seductive...

KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST

Kyle is pretty good, he needs to do more traps desu.

>>3260183
I was looking for a better placement of her crotch. I think the dress made me lose the form of her lower body. I would've probably done a redline on my own anyway, but I really wanted to hear a second opinion, cause I was sure it would give better results. I'm in a bit of a hurry with this, so I don't have the luxury to leave it be for a few days and come back with fresh eyes.

>>3259634
Nice redline

KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST KYLE IS THE BEST

>>3260225
A close-up on her smug smile works better imo.
It's like "I know you nutted inside but won't say a word."

>>3260241
You're going for realism huh. Then yeah, drawing a realistic vagina is hard. What makes your pic uncomfortable to look at is that the paper makes it look like the whole ass is hairy.

>>3260426
I hate this thought off that your balls get full. A lot of the cum comes from the prostate. And I hate your huge balls. God damnit your drawings are so gay, but thats a compliment I guess.

>>3260037
That's bbc-chan, look for his tumblr.

>>3260705
There are those who draw big balls just as a fetish, but yeah, I really hate that ignorance of "the bigger the balls the bigger the load of cum"

>>3260790
It's just a trope. You are overthinking this.

>>3258651
Personally I think left is better. It looks like he's just positioning himself, about to thrust. The blue fairy feels helpless and dominated.
The right one does feel like a thrust, but the blue butt isn't squished, which implies the blue fairy is helping with the movement - which implies it's not submissive after all.

>>3260842
well it's more a trip than a trope...

>>3260704
Lmao know i see what you mean by a hairy ass. I don't have much of a style so i fall back to realism. I figure i will develop my own style naturally over time.

>>3258428
>>3258384
This is funky

>>3260426
Your anatomy and proportions has a lot to improve, but I realy like the lewd themes that you draw.
Keep it up!

>>3260705
no of course i know cum isn't stored in the balls, pee is

>>3260507
Good shit, way nicer pose.

Gym bunny bitch, WIP.

>>3261305
Oh god I only realised how fucked that hand is.
This the gift of retrospect,

>>3261305
Oh god I only just realised how fucked that hand is.
This is the gift of retrospect.

>>3261305
Looks nice so far.

>>3261305
Is she missing the back of her cranium? It looks like that to me.

>>3261322
ty ty :>

>>3261323
WIP senpai.

>>3261323
Sorry, also meant to type that I'm trying to decide if I want to give her short hair or a long ponytail, so I haven't started on the back of her hair yet.

>>3261332
Oh okay, makes sense.

>>3261305
I went with short hair.

Thanks for the help. This is the final sketch if anyone is interested.

>>3258646
looks great, if i HAD to say something its that the further butt cheek is slightly higher up even though the knees are at the same height

>>3261476
Looks fantastic as always BBCbby.

>>3261476
hey BBC. Any tips on gitting gud? nice work

>>3261476
>>3261407
Great job.
>>3261442
I think the way the left leg is making a curve to hide behind the right leg is a bit extreme.

>>3261442
the knee is kinda gross senpai.

>>3261563
Check these two videos.
https://youtu.be/vM39qhXle4g
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lRtV-ugIT0k

I don't know about any shortcut to get good. You just have to put in the hard work. From my experience it's better to do a ton of quicker artworks/studies than focusing on one thing for long hours. This and be patient. Results won't come over night. Probably this is the best advice I can give you.

>>3261585
Not him but I did want to ask what brush/brushes you use for your rendering, I really love your results. Was surprised to discover you used /ic/ a few weeks back actually, hoping to catch one of your streams sometime too.

>>3261591
I use Clip Studio Paint. You can find a dropbox link to my brushes on my tumblr page (top menu). For coloring/shading I use a normal round airbrush in combination with a watercolor blender. All I tweak is the brush hardness.

>>3261598
CSP huh? I assumed you were using PS. I only just finished learning Sai but I've been meaning to try out CSP for a while now and this gives me a great excuse.

Thanks so much for the advice, and for not being a gatekeeping shit.

>>3261585
hey may I have a link to your blog? Are you the one that gave those redlines? I'm new to this place so I'm not really sure how to search for your blog based on your name.

>>3261679
Kek ok this one was kinda funny.

Not really porn, but there is nudity. I had a lot of constructive criticism help while drawing this but i'm open to more.

>>3261703
I'm serious dude.

I summon Kyle! Kyle please come back.

>>3261476
woah is bbc usually here?

>>3261571
i was referencing this image.

>>3261584
just a preliminar sketch but you right.

>>3261801
In your reference the legs are a little over extended (believable) but not broken.

>>3261679
Why would he redline his own art?

>>3261679
JADF is the redline guy. BBC is the dark elf drawing's artist.

>>3261816
wow that BBC guy is amazing. I didn't know artists that good went on ic.

>Kyle doesn’t get commissions rarely anymore since last year
>traces
>same face on everything
>can really only draw feet
>was posting alone on New Years because no friends

And think people like him

>>3261894
what a nice mindset you have, enjoy your demise crabby

>>3261894
Hi Kyle

>>3260241
SAVE US ARKOMEDA !

>>3262182
literally who?

you must be arkomeda, right?

>>3261894
Kyle is overrated as fuck. There is a reason people commission him rarely.

>>3262279
when will you crabs stop spreading your retarded assumptions?

>>3262341
I commissioned him a year ago for him. It took him seven months to finish it and he demanded my money upfront and also said that my OC was kind of dumb looking and he made fun of it. I gave the guy his money upfront and it took him seven months to do it. He is a lazy sack of shit.

>>3262350
>abloo bloo
prove your claims right now or STFU, crab.

>>3262350
I can vouch for this Anon, I just so happen to want to commission Kyle this one time and despite the fact that I was going to fulfill my obligation to pony up $70 for a simple sketch of my OC following my guidelines Kyle was incredibly rude telling me my style was stupid and that he will only draw it they way he wants it to even though he was about to he PAID to do it.

He is stuck up, snobby, and not at all pleasant to be around with. He really hurt my feelings because I looked up to him and wanted to draw just like him Kyle was my hero.

>>3262371
>>3262350
Had a similar experience. I asked for a commission and he asked if it was alright if he traced something as he was in a hurry.

>>3262350
>>3262371
the amount of jello in these crabs. holly shit.
how salty do you have to be to come up with this kind of shit, just to make someone look bad? and all this just because he's a better artist than you.
fucking pathetic.

>>3262386
another jelly crab spotted kek.

>>3262388
>>3262392
You’re more annoying than Kyle or the people that complain about him. Please shut the fuck up.

>>3262371
>>3262386
>>3262350
Are you guys just messing around or is kyle really an insufferable cunt. I had a fat friend that did similiar stuff but he only acted that way when he did freebie giveaways.

>>3262371
>>3262350
I comissioned Kyle too.
He took aproximately 6.5 months and 2 hours to deliver my piece, and demanded the full price (700$) up-front.

I asked for the initial sketch and he denied sending me, and replied all my emails with "huh?"
He also charged me 40$ for rotating the character 15 degrees.

The only time I emailed Kyle about a commission he emailed me back a pic of his dick.

>>3262406
Can you describe it?
I had this happen to me when I asked if he was open for comission, and I'm wondering if he uses stock photos or sends his actual dick.
I believe it was taken with a samsung phone.

>>3262408
It was hard to see, I had to zoom in and there was a ton of hair. It was bad and I almost threw up.

>>3262396
oh look another 4chan empathy deprived kid. go shoot in a mall or something, human garbage.

>>3262397
it's just crabs that are jelly of better artists.

>>3262397
I would assume he’s a cunt in real life judging by how he acts here.

>>3262415
Oh shut the fuck up.

>>3262421
cry some more 4chan kid.

>>3262418
how does he act here? I'm really curious what kind of stuff you'll come up with next, crab.

>>3262426
How about you shut the fuck up

>>3262416
>>3262426
why don't you commission him and see for yourself

if there is substantial lack of activity on him tumblr or wherever he posts his work, i would say there is some merit for complaints

>>3262438
I hear nothing but bad things about how he does commissions and as you said the lack of updates on his blogs show people don’t comission him as he’s either not good or he’s slow.

>>3262438
Stop making sense and talking rational.

>>3262438
What is his tumblr? I have never seen his tumblr or any other works of the sort. People just mention him by his name

>>3262452
http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/

He updates maybe every 2 months meaning he gets no work and no one wants his art.

>>3262350
I saw Kyle at a grocery store yesterday. I told him how cool it was to meet him in person, but I didn’t want to be a douche and bother him and ask him for photos or anything.
He said, “Oh, like you’re doing now?”
I was taken aback, and all I could say was “Huh?” but he kept cutting me off and going “huh? huh? huh?” and closing his hand shut in front of my face. I walked away and continued with my shopping, and I heard him chuckle as I walked off. When I came to pay for my stuff up front I saw him trying to walk out the doors with like fifteen Milky Ways in his hands without paying.
The girl at the counter was very nice about it and professional, and was like “Sir, you need to pay for those first.” At first he kept pretending to be tired and not hear her, but eventually turned back around and brought them to the counter.
When she took one of the bars and started scanning it multiple times, he stopped her and told her to scan them each individually “to prevent any electrical infetterence,” and then turned around and winked at me. I don’t even think that’s a word. After she scanned each bar and put them in a bag and started to say the price, he kept interrupting her by yawning really loudly.

Go make a Kyle/commissioner complaints general thread if you want to discuss it more than 10 posts.

>>3262433
still crying, homicidal child?

>>3262438
this proves nothing. please, crabs, stop acting so fucking pathetic. go draw instead, so maybe some day, you'll be able to get commissions as well.
fucking cancer with legs.
>>3262454
same goes for you. in this thread alone there were posted 2-3 pictures kyle didn't post on his tumblr. please, crab, kys. you are awful at making others look bad.
you actually have to be intelligent to troll properly, retard.

>>3262458
Alpha. As. Fuck.

>>3262350
>>3262371
words are cheap, pics or its just gossip for the sake of starting shit

>>3262458
i remember this pasta from feng zhu thread

>>3262464
>child
>crabs
>fucking
>cancer
>troll
>retard
you're a bag full of meme words, aren't you? makes you look like you're 12

Kyle killed my mother and fucked my father.

Im working on this rn, but im not sure about the body, maybe ill make it so she looks more confident and pit her other arm on her hip. (There will be a second drawing with it btw sorry if the YOU! Is confusing)

>>3261894
I like kyle because I like the foots

>>3262545
I like it, I think you should make the breast anatomy a little bit more realistic though (not too much, mind). Look at Brokenlynx21 and Schmuccubus on twitter for an example of sexycute.

>>3262571
Thanks for the help! And I'm a big fan of Schmuccubus her bodies are always so on point! So should i just make the tits a different shape like she does? More natural.

Porn threads are now belong to kyle

>>3262545
Is this better?

>>3262763
He probably meant give them a little sag instead of just domes.

>>3262784
He meant do what the artist does and the artist did that.

>>3262817
What

>>3262817
>>3262825
I think he meant that, the other guy told the artist to mimic how that artist that was linked drew boobs and he did that.

>>3262825
It ain't what it is but it do

Can we just get Kyle banned?

How would I draw feet from this position?
Educate me

>>3262960
first of all go to /beg

second of all learn how to resize and post your picture properly.

Stop all this Kyle hate.

Why does everyone bully Kyle?

>>3261294
This is still WIP but my boyfriend and I are having an argument. He thinks I should draw her in low, shiny, lycra shorts, but I want to keep her in tights, because I think the sheerness/transparency is sexier. He says because she's a "gym bunny" tights are illogical.

Settle this for me /ic/ please.

>>3262998
pic related

>>3263003
Personally I think shorts or yoga pants would match better and give an impression of a theme, her being a gym rat. With sheer stockings or tights she looks more like a dancer, which is fine but it already has this sort of tough girl attitude that I think would go better with a gym look. I have to say though there's something really unappealing about her skin color to me. I think it's possibly a little too desaturated or something.

>>3263003
Are you open for commissions?

>>3263003
High waisted short shorts, definitely. Even if the transparency is sexy going to the gym in tights is disgusting and weird.

>>3263042
Your heads are getting smaller again and your mouths bigger. Also the smears around bottoms mouth makes him look like the joker. Otherwise I appreciate the stomach bulge.

>>3263045
oop, i think i left those from when i had the heads at another angle, thanks for the tip

>>3258382
^this. Always this

>>3263040
>>3263044
REEEEE I DIDN'T WANT HIM TO BE RIGHT
Do you think I can get away with transparent shorts? I have my heart set on nylon. Maybe the canon can be that she's just an unhygienic slut.

I wasn't sure about the skintone myself either, so I'll experiment more with the saturation. Thanks for the critique guys.

>>3263043
I'm a little backlogged with work at the moment but you can send me an email at im.eromal@gmail.com or contact me via Tumblr (eromal.tumblr.com) with your info and I can get back to you.

>>3263202
I think shorts will work either way. If she was heftier I could see her having spandex ones so stretched you can basically see through them but on her, I just keep picturing her wearing something solid. A good trick would be to make them spandex and tight as hell so you can see all the outlines of everything. Also helps to use a somewhat light color so the shading can help bring out all the forms too. Almost the same as being transparent.

>>3263202
You know, why not do both? There are companies that make workout shorts/pants that have transparent panels on the sides. Google it up and see if you can make something sexy that's still gym-worthy

>>3263232
Oh, fuck yes. And ripped nylon hnnnngggh.

>>3263045
i made the heads slightly bigger and the mouths smaller

>>3263257
but bro, big heads and big mouths is your style.. don't let them fuck up your style bro.

they are just trying to turn ur shit into generic trash.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=ZkgpNql6FZE

really though does anyone have any legit resources besides just copying porn to learn the anatomy better?

>>3262350
>>3262371
>>3262405
>>3262406

this is kinda hot

kyle i'll send you pictures of my feet in exchange for you bullying me

>>3262405
I saw Kyle at a grocery store in Montreal yesterday. I told him how cool it was to meet him in person, but I didn’t want to be a douche and bother him and ask him for photos or anything.
He said, “Oh, like you’re doing now?”
I was taken aback, and all I could say was “Huh?” but he kept cutting me off and going “huh? huh? huh?” and closing his hand shut in front of my face. I walked away and continued with my shopping, and I heard him chuckle as I walked off. When I came to pay for my stuff up front I saw him trying to walk out the doors with like fifteen Milky Ways in his hands without paying.
The girl at the counter was very nice about it and professional, and was like “Sir, you need to pay for those first.” At first he kept pretending to be tired and not hear her, but eventually turned back around and brought them to the counter.
When she took one of the bars and started scanning it multiple times, he stopped her and told her to scan them each individually “to prevent any electrical infetterence,” and then turned around and winked at me. I don’t even think that’s a word. After she scanned each bar and put them in a bag and started to say the price, he kept interrupting her by yawning really loudly.

ENOUGH WITH THE KYLE POSTING

Just to set the record straight as his roommate. He's a easy going and normal unlike you autism idiots. However, there are some nights where I wake up to find his standing next to my bed jerking off his black cock. That's kinda creepy.

>>3263042
No, you delightful pervert! You ahve to make your foreheads larger, not smaller!

>>3263431
>they are just trying to turn ur shit
>ur shit
>shit
only smart thing you said in this post

This place is pure cancer.
I advise all beginner artists to leave it as soon as possible.

>>3263622
>>3263431

Fun fact: I'm >>3263003 and this is how I used to draw when I first came to /ic/.

I posted my 'art' here and as expected I got the ever-loving shit critiqued out of me. I got uppity, I got bitchy, I argued back, because all my life I was used to being praised by my peers for being the arty one, I'd never faced real criticism before in my life. So, I said that my anatomy was 'fine' (lmao) and argued it was just my 'style'. My problem that I was using stylisation as an excuse, when all along it was just a masque to disguise the fact that I'd never studied a fundamental in my life and didn't know what the fuck I was doing.

Can't draw a hand? Jus' muh style.
Pillow shading? Ju's muh style.
Liefeld-tier illogical anatomy? Jus' muh style.

TL;DR: LISTEN TO /IC/.

>>3263003
Oh fucking hell I forgot to resize that. mb /ic/, I posted that from my phone and didn't even notice.

>>3263662
>TL;DR: LISTEN TO /IC/.
>shits out this drawing
yyyyyeaah rrright.

>>3263691
read the post you homonculus

>>3263662
when was it?
last week?

Please give me your honest opinion on this. plz

>>3263702
Kek, more like 8 years ago. This had nothing to do with /ic/ but I fell into a huge depression not long after this and pretty much stopped drawing altogether. Early last year I suddenly remembered "Oh hey, I used to draw a lot as a kid", went away and began actually studying from actual books (imagine that), so now I'm back on the horse and seeing regular gains. Feels nice.

>>3263707

>>3263712
Please stop I almost laughed out out at Starbucks seeing this.

>>3263712

>>3263722
Ayyyyyy.

>>3263662
you talk like you achieved some kind of important shit in your art, but judging by this >>3263003 you are still pretty much beginner-intermediate crap.
step off that high horse. you can't draw hands, your lineart is stiff, you have no idea how perspective affects a body in space (her right arm is passing trough her head and ear), etc.
don't act like you reached some kind of good place in terms of art. you are still pretty much shit. better than the total utter crap you were, but still shit.

also, word of advice. stop pushing forward so hard that you are a woman. you come across as someone that wants to make it based on their gender. I also suspect the fact that you do that made you change your previous art pseudonym. seriously, stop doing that. you're not gonna be the next sakkimichan. trust me.

>>3263744
Snib snab crab time.
>>/crab/

>>3263744

>>3263744
are you the same faggot that was sperging out a few threads back about that guy getting a commission from somebody cosfamous? I always see you typing the exact same shit about how everybody else is riding a high horse and how their art is shit, but you never post any of your own work. I wonder why that is, hmmm.
>snip snip

>>3263744
You're right, I am still shit, but it doesn't mean I'm not going to try to stop people from making the same mistakes that hindered me for so long when I see them making. I've never had a previous art pseudonym though so I'm not sure who you think I am, but you sound like a very angry person. But thanks for pointing out the inconsistencies with her right arm/head, I fucked up because the ears were an afterthought in the piece. Here, a calming and relaxing video as my thanks.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=X_KBocbAD5s

>>3263744
If that's "beginner-intermediate", I'd hate to hear where it would put you in comparison. Probably would need to invent new words to describe how insultingly bad.

>>3263783
>I fucked up because the ears were an afterthought in the piece
nah, you fucked up because you didn't internalize perspective properly yet.
it's not just the right hand passing through the head. it's the construction of her hand, it's the foreshortening of the neck, face, left arm, bad placement of the hair on her scalp, lack of left shoulder, etc etc.
there is nothing on this character I could call good in terms of artistic expression.
btw, keep dodging my comment on how you push your gender to get more attention from horny guys.

>>3263783
>crab dance
This should autoplay on /ic/

>>3263749
>>3263756
>>3263765
>>3263787
beginners spotted, kek.

>>3263794
I never once mentioned my gender, only that I have a boyfriend, you're the one that zeroed in on that with your weaponised autism and automatically assumed I'm female. I'm not arguing with you any more crab so scuttle away and go neg somebody else.

>>3263805
>crab
>I got the ever-loving shit critiqued out of me. I got uppity, I got bitchy, I argued back, because all my life I was used to being praised by my peers for being the arty one, I'd never faced real criticism before in my life. So, I said that my anatomy was 'fine' (lmao) and argued it was just my 'style'. My problem that I was using stylisation as an excuse, when all along it was just a masque to disguise the fact that I'd never studied a fundamental in my life and didn't know what the fuck I was doing.
you are still doing it.

I know who you are. I know your previous art pseudonim a.f.
I know you are female and I know you try to push your gender to make it easier for you.

>>3263809
>I know who you are. I know your previous art pseudonim a.f.
Yeah, those initials mean nothing to me because I've never had an alias prior to now. You legitimately have me confused with somebody completely unrelated.

This is getting pretty funny.

I tried blocking in my forms on this one after some basic gesture, and I feel it helped out with my general anatomy and form. Thanks Anon from last thread! I still need to get around to fixing her hands and finishing her feet and knees. Anyone else have feedback for me?

>>3263857
Yeah buy XBox X instead.

>>3263811
might be wrong about that

but I'm completely right about this
>you are still doing it

>>3263987
Congratulations, you just made a fool of yourself harassing an anonymous user for the last hour, because you convinced yourself in all your autism that I was some poor girl it sounds like you're stalking irl.

Still waiting on you posting your work btw.

pls halp

>>3263805
This is why I pretend to be male online. It starts to fuck with your head after a while.

Anyone open for a series of commissions? I’m thinking like image set type setup, I’d be willing to go $1300 for 4-5 images.

>>3264016
Go bother the people on the comission boards, we come here for critique of our porn and to argue.

>>3264038
Well I’d rather get artists here than /aco/ to be honest.

>>3264016
What do you want done?

>>3264003
find some way to creatively disguise your hands, lol

>>3264109
redline them, then.

fagt

>>3264109
nah dont do that
you have to grind that shit

hands are realy important in male erotica

>>3264096
Like a hentai game CG set of character going thought the different pours of sex. BJ, insert, fucking, cum inside etc.

>>3264185
Are you aiming for specific fetishes? People need to know that stuff ahead of time.

>>3261571
>>3261584
tried to understand the reference pose a bit and change it to be more realistic and manageable for me.

>>3263562
This reminds me of furry porn. It just looks like it. I dunno..

>>3264230
it's the snouts

>>3264234
yummi
You should try to use your shoulder and/or a stabilizer, your lines need a little more confidence

>>3264109
i spiced up the hands a little

may i have another, sir?

>>3264309
What are you trying to do with the top's hands? Are they supposed to be grasping the thighs or is he pushing the bottom closer to him? His hands are kinda floating there as it stands.

Also, the top's chests are too short, his traps make no sense, his glasses are wonky (unless they're supposed to be like that), and the stomach/chest area shouldn't fold like that since he's not bending down that much (the only part that's bending is his neck). The bottom's shoulders/back should be more arched, with the shoulders pointing more towards the front.

>>3264317
I wish I could delete my old pix

drop

>>3264382 off to /beg/ pls..
you need the basics very badly.

>>3264481
go get your eyes examined.

>>3264382
I-Im confused. Does she show 2 peace siggns and is that towards the middle of her breasts a penis?? And- and why are her middle and index finger both spread out to make the V but also at the same time curled inwards?
Is that towards the middle of her breasts even a penis or a crippled hand stump?!

>>3264549
Shut the fuck up for fuck sake. Stop the bullshit shitposting.

>>3264382
As for you I'm surprised you'd go the porno route after you spent all that time ignoring all that critique about everything about your face problems, among other things. I'm honestly surprised we are starting to get more and more people like >>3263562 who just draws this shit and completely disregard critique despite the point of this board. But whatever, this isn't on topic to my post.

Just surprised you'd be doing this imo, but do you, that's all this boards seems to care about now.

>>3264593
Isn't the face at least cute though? I don't understand why people always say my shit is /beg tier, is there something wrong with my fucking eyes? Wtf am I not seeing that other people are like wtf.

>>3264382
face is fine but the way you draw the body shows, specifically the hands & feet

>>3264633
It's not beg tier anon it's cute but the facial features the part you spent the most time on are caddywhompus. The rest is not visualized properly, the idea wasn't finalized before you put the pen down.

>>3264633
Look the face was the thing you SOLELY spent time on, even though it lacks the proper knowledge of a human skull, namely how body parts are placed like the eyes and ears, but people can see this is the style you push for, so it's expected from you. However because you spend so much time "refining" the style you're aiming for, the rest of the body is heavily poorly constructed and is clearly lacking basic fundamentals.

If you are aiming for a style over proper fundies, at least mimic other parts of the body from other artists instead of just focusing on doing so for the face. But this won't get you far over time, because until you get a proper understanding on how the human body is constructed, any stylized human figure you attempt at drawing will always look like shit. It's just common logic.

>>3263998
>you are still doing it
I wonder how many years from now you'll post again saying that you sucked today. kek.

>>3264016
gr8b8m8

>>3264689
yo yev can I add you on discord or you add me rather? my # is 5079

just did a request for the bangfit characters

>>3264748
Aside from the guy I find that female very sexy. Would you be open to do more?

>>3263562
Blog?

>>3264748
Nice.
This should be the next OP image. No more kyle shit please. Half the damn thread was about him.

new thread would be nice

>>3264382
Please do the peace sign with your hands and compare the two.

>>3265060
http://kiahlsart.tumblr.com/

>>3264748
I actually might, the bangfit style is very fun to play with. Or I might just do something else that has a similar flat/vector quality.

>>3265447
oops, reply to
>>3265013

I think I made the faces look really wierd

Can I get a critique on this?

>>3258651
right has more FORCE

>>3261442
I'm not really feeling any depth for the right leg, just looks kind of lumpy and disproportionate. I really like the midsection, the form appears very solid. You should try and use construction/surface lines for BOTH legs to establish that same feeling of solidness.

>>3264216
yeah that looks quite a bit better. Don't be afraid to draw through the model (for example, the "behind" leg) as it'll give you a much better understanding of the balance of the figure.

can I get some critique?
my idea here was to have the girl masturbating in a locker room, while sniffing some other girl's panties

I'm not very good at drawing underwear ( or clothes for the matter)