/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3236653
other than the top left, awful choices

>>3236653
that is a really good soul

Just a class doodle I decided to digitalize

>>3236589
fuck you yev is god

>>3236689
T. yev

>>3236690
nice blog uwu

yev makes me miss nosebro

>>3236704
Who the fuck is yev

>>3236705
nice blog uwu

>>3236706
Another name we should add to the filter.

>>3236705
What happened to nosebro?

>>3236716
Oh is it this shitty ms paint artist?
>>3236732

I make spaceship.

I want a spaceship so badly. Fuck this fucking planet.

>>3236653
accidentally posted this in the last thread, so here it is. I've been watching a lot of older shows the past few days. Also, thanks OP for including my Soul in the op image!

>>3236653

>>3236197
>>3236206

pls notice me senpai

>>3236790
I'll fuck your ass

>>3236790
draw miku

>>3236777
Nice digits Choo-choo <3

>>3231357
should take it with a grain of salt. I am kind of rusty nowadays. I don't have too much problem with the figure as a whole, some parts are loosy goosy but a bit more gesture can tighten up on the contruction in the future.

Main issue I saw is the constructions of the shoulder and the way arms and hands are posed and articulated. First thing is that the right arm going straight up, and it is also not immediately clear to me what kind of pose is it and where the momentum is going on this figure. The construction of the hand can use a bit work, mainly the way you lay down the outside palms, the line in the middle gives incorrect impression of the exterior of the palm's shape, it makes her hand looks like curving from further in than what usually appears, if that makes sense. I thought the way fingers was articulated can use work but its okay.

I thought the arm is a bit small, relative to total length of her body, although her leg is pretty long, sometimes it makes the figure feel distorted when that is the case.

Another smaller issue is that, I felt the feet can be more articulated and would make the pose more stable if one of them is lay flat, but its matter of preference on my part.

>>3236777
Lovely hands, I really love the way they are drawn.

You are being intentionally provocative with the head design. Although I thought it is an interest contrast with other elements. I felt the hair and braid ended abruptly though.

>>3236812

>>3236769
even though your drawings are very messy and rough, I feel like you know a lot more than what you present. Would be nice to see something finished.

>>3236856
Finished work is quite tedious. I don't get any enjoyment from it, it feels like work. Especially with comic strips, I don't think pretty art is needed at all, I've seen some pretty popular comics executed with little more than stick figures. With that said, my lack of finished work has caused me to stagnate for quite some time. Currently, I'm writing a one-shot comic, once I'm done, I'm gonna put all my effort into it, use perspective rulers, shade it, and submit it to the shounen jump contest.

>>3236653
jesus who chose those OP images, weebs truly have fucking shit taste

>>3236879

I have no say in this but try not to always pick Godsh0t, Andrae, Oreo, Coomi, etc every single time they post whenever oddmoon they post.

>>3236875
>Finished work is quite tedious
That it is.

Currently drawing the manga above. No hints for the title, mind you. It's a surprise for 2018.
<< The female character on the left when she gets a bit older.

>>3236886
I hope the title is something like, 'Space Rocks Taste Delicious'

TL;DR They live on a planet that has an active comet for a moon so it snows constantly. Weapons are gigantic popsicles.
<< The middle character when he gets older

>>3236886
Names for characters on the left and right?

>>3236794
oke i drew

elven knight in progress
comments/crits welcome

>>3236939
I love it.

>>3236941
thx anon

>>3236939
I hate it.

>>3236988
HE HATES IT

>>3236732
why is your art so appealing even with ugly as hands as that, goddamnit

>>3236790
sorry rin's birthday is coming up and i still have a bunch of panzer girls i wanna draw

>>3236988
Ok.

>>3236723
fell in love with an actual 14 year old asian girl on his discord

>>3236941
why?
>>3236988
why?

>>3237142
who is this?

>>3236740
Nice looking spaceship anon keep it up

>>3237142
pretty much a good representation of what woman do to society.

>>3237148
Kadotani Anzu, seitokai chou

An attempt at backgrounds.

>>3237178
cool bg why is she/he leaning on nothing

>>3236740
You keep designing them, I got a friend who works with airplanes. Maybe a design of yours could imfluence a newer model

>>3237184
Only noticed now. Thanks.

>>3236991
Hate confirmed.

I want to have sex badly nowdays

Post your drawing of a stylized for me, I'll tell you if I'd have sex with her or not

>>3237221
But no traps or furry please
I'd rather kill myself

>>3237221
fucking kek

>>3237221
Your balls finally dropped for you bro?

done with this

>>3236939
cool style but I don't see how it's an elf

>>3237178
design is nice, watch those lines you use for shadows though, too thick and too scattered, and sitting next to them are very detailed and very small vehicles, makes the image look jarring. Either you apply the same level of detail to everything, or you leave everything an out line.
if ya can't be bothered to draw dense thin lines, maybe resort to shading with gray.

>>3237239
He's out of balance, senpai. And some line weight would be nice to separate the character from the Bg.

>>3237256
dont do this.

>>3237355
He's right about the balance, though. From this panel, his legs look like they're almost parallel and leaning away from the body.

>>3237367
That's a beautiful drawing. Nice on the gestures though the blonde one doesn't quite align with the background's point perspective, unless she's supposed to be leaning to the side.

You should also post nudes of them both.

>>3236732
daily reminder that no one except for untalented /ic/ fags will ever like your trash

>>3237499
So you like it too then?

>>3237502
btfotbh lmoa

>>3237502
Fukin DESTROYED.

Some fun in paint.

>>3237629
So good, blog?

>>3237440
>you should also post nudes of them both
foolish anon

>>3237437
yea he right
but I can't be bothered to correct it though :^)

I've been staring at this for far too long, is the tit too big or not?
I mean, the main idea of that drawing is how comfy and safely the cat is buried in her chest, but still the character is like a 14yo or smth..

>>3237367
I like your style of drawing, nice and loose, but by making everything stand out, you ended up making nothing stand out.
Maybe pushing all of the background into that purple mist would help the characters pop?
Color theory and contrast is what I'm talking about.

>>3237239
The line weight is a bit inconsistent (thin at face, thick in bg, thick on the inside contours..) - you kept zooming in and out while working on different areas, didn't you?
Nice drawing tho, those are just technicalities that can be fixed easily.

>>3237711
I like how you do hair. Tit looks weird though, almost like it's coming from the side. I get that you're trying to show that the cat is pushing his face into it but you definitely have a tangent issue.

>>3237256
tfw you don't realize the horizon is perpendicular to the character, and you don't understand composition.

>>3237752
Yeah, I'm dumb. Good luck explaining this in the industry tho. Best wishes

>>3237711
is she an amputee? why is she missing her legs and feet?

>>3237724
Thank you, I mirrored it and I think I see what you mean. It's fuckin weird.

Also - style wise - do you think the textured linework is a no-no with the smooth rendering?
I love working with brushes that behave like real pencils, but maybe a transition to a hard round would be a strategic move. None of my fav artists (InCase, Norasuko, Creamylewds, Sinix..) go for this type of linework.
>pic related

>>3237771
Doesn't Doxy use a textured brush often for their final lineart? If that's the style you're going for, it can definitely be effective.

>>3237771
I can see the textured lines work depending on the style, but since you like to render very smoothly, it kinda clashes. You either have to go for a more textured approach when you render or go for the hard round brush. See if you can play around with different brushes, hopefully some other anon can help you with that because I personally just use my square brush for everything.

>>3237769
Nay sir, I don't have anything in mind for her legs, so I'll probably put a flat graphic shape behind her and call it a day.

>>3237772
>>3237774
Thank you dear anons, I shall investigate further. Maybe thinner lines or some noise overlay will do the trick.

>>3237771
how do you evn do lines likethis

>>3237781
I can't find a good, hires example of Doxy's finished work, but he does use a really textured pencil brush for his comic lineart, but it IS a thin one (like the breasts here).

I think using a textured brush like that is effective in his work because he does a lot of shape design and exaggerated volume. It works in your Ladybug one because you're focusing on appealing shapes. I prefer your Ladybug one to your second drawing, aside from that line weight in the armpit >>3237771.

>>3237788
>>3237790
I'm sorry for the confusion, the second pic is not mine, it's by norasuko (in the title) - he's my biggest idol because of his looseness and minimalistic rendering.

>how do you evn do lines likethis
He has a bunch of vids on yt, let me know if you figure it out c:
youtube.com/channel/UC1KvDzZnHmYDR3UXPJ-IRhg/videos

>I prefer your Ladybug one to your second drawing
Thank you, that's extremely flattering.

>>3237634
dunno but here's another.

>>3237711
eyes under clothes

>>3237057
f-fake news.
She's a-almost 16

>>3237057
There's actually a nosebro discord? lmfao. Wtf do they even do there? Draw shitty nosebro drawings and revel in how ugly and unappealing they can possibly make a drawing?

>>3237865
What did anon mean by this

>>3237988
why are her eyelids cover in red? why can we see her eye lashes at all?

>>3238013
It's one of those magically conforming masks you see in animated superhero designs. They did it in The Incredibles, too.

Plus it's pretty cool to use for emoting, like in Spiderman.

>>3238017
more like, what a shitty idea/design

>>3237977
You must be disappointed, huh

>>3238013
You really got me thinking there. It's not correct, but in the show it works like so...

>>3238017
>>3238019
haha what are the odds

>>3238018
Shhh anon, if she showed her eyelids, it might reveal her true identity, ya know :c

>>3238018
Three iterations of live action Batman decided to use black eye shadow for a similar effect, because it looks fucking stupid to have that rim of skin visible against a mask.

>>3238024
>live action
as if anyone would give a shit if it showed his eyelids.

>>3238030
i would because it would look retarded. There is a reason this is used so often because they tested it another way and saw that it looked like rat shit so they went with this.

>>3236889
Why can't the girl be *the* narcissist?

>>3236893
Blog?

>>3236939
She guards this crabapple tree?

>>3237629
Flattering stuff.

>>3238030

You are not thinking in terms of design and appeal yet. Shit /beg/ detected.

>>3238034

Yeah just look at Kick-Ass (which did it deliberately) and the old Batman tv-show. Gives off a realy goofy masquerade look.

Going for a Range Murata-type thing. Does anything look off/wrong?

>>3238142
delicious. upper torso feels a bit too long to me

>>3238142
>Range Murata-type
??

>>3238142
Looks like... Someone needs to come search the house or something. Maybe they can hear the screams coming from the cellar.

>>3238161
Now that you mention it, it does look a bit long, thanks.

>>3238171
A work similar to the style and aesthetics of the artist Range Murata.

>>3238175
Does it come off as horrory? It's supposed have a similar mood to this.

>>3238178
Yeah, I got it... It looks completely different. Change the lighting, make it softer or brighter and use more vibrant colours

>>3238146

>>3238178
>cold, sharp, down/back lighting
vs
>warm, soft, overhead lighting

The atmosphere is the exact opposite, similar subject matter doesn't mean a thing when it comes to how the picture feels.

>>3238178
>>3238142
I can see the 60's aesthetic vibe and plastic outfit, but the mood it's completely off.
But I think that's good, you ending up having your own take on it, not a complete copy.

>>3238202
Maybe mood is the wrong word or maybe I just don't understand even a single thing about it (it's probably the latter), but here are some more examples. There's no single particular image that I'm trying to emulate, but I'm trying to get the same general feeling.

I'm mostly worried now that it looks like some kind of weird sex dungeon.

>>3238208
The reason something 'feels like ___' is because of some connection to how we perceive nature.
We associate high contrast with danger, so instead of calming us down, it makes us get scared or ready to fight.
Cool light is artificial.
Light source down - the opposite of natural light (the sun above us), feels unnatural, spooky.
Light source behind - doesn't reveal the person's face, makes them mysterious, threatening.

Maybe another warm, soft, overhead lightsource from the right and keeping the tv light only for rim lighting would help, but that's so much work you might as well save it for your next piece.

The painting is quite nice actually, just the mood seems a bit.. not what you intended.

>>3236732
ugly ass garbage as always, at least you're consistent in that.

>>3238291
shit taste

>>3238291
garbage trolling as always, at least you're consistent in that Mr Crabs.

guys how do i get twitter followers by posting art ?

>>3238548
seconding this

>>3236893
>weapons are popsicles
draw him sucking a popsicle
just for a friend haha I'm not gay haha

>>3237239
>Either you apply the same level of detail to everything, or you leave everything an out line.
That is wrong friendo. The omission of detail can aid in directing the viewers eye to specific areas. Not saying that that guy did it correctly, just that it is a legitimate technique that shouldn't be discounted. People do it all the time.

>>3238611
Blog?

>>3238611
were is the waist? where are the boobs?
That right arm is fucking long
what the hell are those shoulders

>>3238277
I see, thank you. I normally draw plain old porn so this is my first foray into trying to create something a bit different.

I was actually hoping to print it out and give it to Murata himself as a gift at Comiket since he's one of my favourite artists but I don't know if it would come off as weird.

how to into painting lmao

>>3238617
>where is the waist
i don't know
>where are the boobs
didn't draw them
>right arm
damn you're right
>shoulders
i think i just plopped them on the ribcage i'll get to loomis eventually

>>3238808
Try going for a strong sketch first to get a clearer direction of what you want, then fill the sketch with the usual base colors. Paint over from there.

>>3236939
I LOVE LOVE LOVE the treasure trail

I think I'm going to call it done. It's probably easier to just start from scratch with a new picture than change the lighting significantly.

It was good practice in any case and hopefully I'll do a bit better next time. Thank you to those who gave feedback.

All I can really muster for today. Met a guy, things were great, ghosted the next day. Maybe it's just a misunderstanding or there's something wrong with me but regardless I feel like shit.

All I can really muster for today. Fuck men lmao

>>3238983
You should make your midtones more saturated or your shadows less saturated. Keep it up, cummie

>>3236653

>>3238980
Reminds me of Okito Endo for some reason.

>>3239001
Holy fuck, that art style is my aesthetic. Thanks for the new source of inspiration, anon.

>>3239039
Hmm I like the drawings where you draw your oc with an open mouth a lot more than with a closed mouth, but it's still the best in the thread. Good work man.

drew some mermaids.

>>3238556
I've got your likeness down, would you like to watch yourself do the same thing?

It’s bad when you are so slow that your /ic/ thread dies before you can finish

>5 gold rings
6 more to go...

>>3239201
What's with the rings anon?

>>3239211
He's doing some Christmas gift that involves sketching out the 12 days of Christmas thingy.

>>3236583
>>3236585

I'm slow to respond, but big thumbs up to the advice you gave here. It's still far from perfect, but after taking what you said into battle, I'm much happier with the results.

I still feel like I'm screwing up drawing the cloth, though; I'm probably going to end up completely redoing the sleeve, or just changing her outfit to something easier.

>>3238961
Looks great anon. I'm looking forward to the 'next time'.

hi /ic

we gonna make it yet?

lord know i haven't

maybe next year right?

>>3239246
robo fham. plz delete the scary face

>>3238980
Nevermind, did another shoddy sketch huhu

>>3239201
+11 pipers piping, these at taking forever...

Any suggestions on the 9 ladies dancing?

>>3239211
Tearing halos off angels and collecting rings

>>3239326

This is awesome

>>3239326
blog?

What would the lighting on this white house be like in this night setting? can someone please overpaint? (not really alt, but draw thread is saged, and i'm afraid no one in /beg/ will know)

>>3239408
Kind of like this. Light is back and to the right, so that is where the light would hit. The shadow would be the front and left side of the house and the shadow would be coming out towards the front and to the left. I only have MS paint on my computer since I don't work digitally.

>>3239362
Excellent choice of angle with the sword, but the rest of the pose can be made a bit more dynamic. As it stands, the entire painting seems very static since he's(?) completely parallel to the paper/background. Also his hairline is too high up.

>>3239408
boot blender. put a box. put a light source where yours is.click render. magic. wow.

Can I get some critique on this? I'm finally trying to properly tackle anatomy and heads since I suck at them. These are from imagination after studies, can someone pinpoint what I should work on?

>>3238200

>>3239763
thats pretty nice man, thou I'll say the face looks way too jutted out and eyes seem off.
Overall looks nice

wip

>>3239772

>>3239772
Desaturate this and you will probably see how there is no value structure. Foreground, background, they dont exist and i dont know where to look at, its a truly mess. I would take down the brightness in the background, making more dark, and the fire more high in value too, with her being lit by the red of the fire, and the moon light in the background.

>>3239948
i can't tell if this is a compliment or an insult.

>>3238980
looks like a bug.

>>3239957
Is value structure a superior /ic/ meme

>>3239772
Her left leg is all kinds of fucked up

>>3240240
sorry im retarded, mean right leg

>>3239224
Hey, this is a fantastic improvement! Love the way you worked the frills of her sleeve.

>>3239326
+6 geese laying Or one goose laying 6

>>3239387
Blog is here, but not updated http://tableguyic.tumblr.com

>>3239766
I can't believe I overlooked something so basic wow , ty.

>>3239772
had some fun with this

>>3240418
>deliciously burnt crisp feet

>>3240418
>>3240240
>>3239957
Thanks so much for taking the time to give feedback, I especially appreciate >>3240418 's lighting setup. I'll take the time to properly adjust it.

>>3240418
Ah yes the giant muscle loli anon.

>>3240118
Red fo sho

>>3240346
+7 swans swimming

All the big ones left 8+9+12=29 more...

>>3240418

>>3239326
an orgy would be so funny haha

How do skinny necks work? They seem to defy everything.

>>3240670
+8 maids milking

>>3240802
I wanted to make strippers, but it’s for my parents...

Shoutout to cummie chan for their skin tight gloves.

>>3240862
Fuck me, I just realized I inverted the hand.

>>3240818
+9 ladies dancing

One more to go... 12...

Can’t decide if the whole thing is going to be faster to do digital or trad. I think it will look better trad

pardon the content, I don't do much sfw

>>3240867
Sketches done! Gonna make 2x2s and ink, but still can’t decide if I want to marker or digital color.

>>3236939
> not on a tablet
super sick

>>3238142
....you drew an 11 year old sex slave.

>>3240913
boring style

Some garbage I posted on /a/

>>3240872
Blog?

>>3240862
I completely forgot I was supposed to go with a different coloring style. Maybe tomorrow.

>>3241115
What's wrong with that?

>>3241115
No
She's ten

>>3241138
(nsfw + /d/ content)
thetransformtentacleart.tumblr.com/

>>3241115
This is why net neutrality died

I made this for the Tower Girls thread the other day, but I've been dwelling on how I could have done the foreshortening better. I'm also really confused by the armpit area as well as the hips in perspective. Parts of it were rushed undoubtedly. I'm just trying to achieve a solid sketch before moving on. Let me know of any other glaring issues.

>>3241454
I think your issue is that you drew the shoulders as they would appear from the front, but here we should be presented with the top view.

>>3241454
gave it my best shot, but my perspective isn't finely tuned, so take it with a grain of salt

my thoughts on this were your hand didn't feel large enough for a giant reaching in perspective, as well the arm was straight across when it feels more natural to have a downward arch to it, since it is going towards the person there

I hope this helped or atleast gives ya an idea of where to go with it from here

>>3241594
I like your changes. The way you did the hand does a much better job capturing the story. I think I just over-complicated it.

>>3241146
Accidentally messed up some layers and saw some potential with the shadows so I played around a bit.

Now give me some crits ya dinguses

>>3241663
thoughts on my changes?

>>3236653
Researching some medieval maternity dresses and fantasy cosplay outfits, but in the mean time, would you guys mind giving this rough a fresh look? I'd really appreciate any and all advice you're willing to part with.

Crap, that was...quite the error on my part. Here is the piece.

>>3241728
Overall, not bad. I think the pose would look more natural with the elbow up like >>3241594 did it, but you still have convincing foreshortening. Thanks for going the extra mile and doing the rest of the body.

>>3241744
It's way too rough to give any useful advice, but you have the form down proper I guess? Upper arm seems a little on the short side and the butt is just unnaturally jutted out.

>>3241744
Took me forever to realize she's not pregnant.

>>3241744
is she wearing something on her chin or ?

>>3236653
Blog of the top left?

>>3241801
seconding

>>3236653
Lineweight practice. I wanted achieve a finished line work look for my one-shot project that isn't tedious to make. Ideally in one layer. I've been looking at masashi kishimoto's look and trying to replicate it.

>>3241771
Fixed.

>>3241774
She was supposed to be.

>>3242004
Oh, assumed she was holding some amulet.

>>3242004
super cute, finish this

lmao

I got kicked out of /beg/

Did this one last night.

>>3242114
I like it. It reminds me of plague of gripes style on YouTube.

>>3242129
Never heard of him, but now I'm happy I looked him up. Seems like a nice guy. thanks anon

I made this Angelica yesterday, opinions?

I went back and finished it!
>>3242004
I have no idea about medival underwear but I'm really curious about how you do faces.
>>3242114
design is a mishmash of elements, I like it nonetheless

>>3242169
You could have just left out the thighs, but no, you left them and now it looks even better than it really should.

>>3240418
Hopefully it's better now, still working on it. I'm still a bit unsure on how to deal with the leg as >>3240243 said, but I'll try to figure it out

Made this a couple minutes ago. Opinions?

>>3240459
I prefer your original version, actually.

>>3242243
>>3240418
These twoo look way too generic.
There's nothing wrong with having a busy composition, especially when the image is humorous.
Don't listen to everything /ic/ says. Your anatomy could use some work here and there though.

>>3242193

>design is a mishmash of elements

So are most anime "monster" girls and everyone loves them, at least, on congregation.

>>3242193
Blog?

Doing two version: semi-realistic (this one) and my usual style colored. I need to hone my rendering anyways.

rate my elf loli

>>3242399
chode arms and chest ugly ears and shit style

>>3242399
you also literally have one arm that is twice as big, do you not take a moment to see what youre fucking drawing?

>>3242378

>>3242169
pls dont lewd her

>>3242378
Ugly, simplify the face, looks horrible with too much details.

>>3242450
You blind fuck too detailed isn't a flaw. it's the fact that the face is skewed

>>3242444

I was just asking for advice, since I think her right feet is wonky, among other things.

>>3242169
very cute. I like.

Quck run through of the draft on my phone. Redlining appreciated for landmark/perspective study.

I'm working on something right now and I feel like the lighting is extremely off, so I figure maybe I should come down here and ask for advice on how to fix it. thanks in advance!

>>3242284
>>3242243
New one looks way better.
She looks menacing now. Better athmosphere. Less Purple skin. More contrast. Skin looks wet, because moonlight reflects.
Really like the improvements.

Anatomy has room for improvement still though.

>>3242464
I'm talking about semi-realism in general.

>>3242514
What I mean by this is I will be doing a landmark study once I finish this draft. Any advice given the perspective (head turned away from the centerline of the body) is greatly appreciated in advance.

>>3242490
You're right, ironic shitposting is still shitposting and all I suppose.

The way you positioned her legs (both feet facing inward) implies that they should be much closer together, so that there should be minimal thigh gap especially considering how thick the legs are. Either that or you can change the feet so they're less askew, pointing more towards the viewer. As it stands now, her legs look pretty unrealistic--try the pose out yourself and you will notice that it's probably something that would never be done intentionally. Yes, in art you exaggerate certain details but at a certain point you have to understand the difference between pushing boundaries and just making an entirely weird pose.

The rest of it looks fine, definitely has that charm.

>>3242521
You'd probably fare better in the general draw thread, but what exactly are you trying to accomplish here? Lighting is mainly influenced by two things: the source light and the environment. As it stands, your lighting source is extremely ambiguous. Where is it coming from? What color is it? How strong is it? As for the environment, you have a simple gray background, which is fine but it looks like you're trying to shade with a color (blue) that doesn't appear anywhere else. I'd recommend taking a step back and try to understand the dynamics of shading in grayscale. From there, you will find shading with colors to be a much easier task.

>>3242514
>>3242555
Any reason you strayed from your sketch? Her frame looks absolute massive in your render, and that's speaking from a general standpoint. At least you fixed her shoulder.

>>3242563
maybe i should've explained, the light source was supposed to be a small fire! I didn't do much with the background because i planned on doing it after i got all the lighting done, same with the shading. thank you for your advice though!

>>3242585
Ah, makes much more sense now. You will find it helpful to start off with a simple dark blue (assuming it's taking place at night) instead of gray for your background. Not only will you get a better idea as to how the overall composition will look, but it makes the process easier in the long run should you do more with the background. Fire in general gives off a more reddish hue, so you may want to look into that.

>>3242593
thank you!

>>3242416
>>3242413
calm yourself, take a breather

>>3242514
>>3242555
You have too much contrast. (Youre going too bright / too dark too quickly)

>>3242618
Where should I donate?

>>3242660
to the charity of your choice

>>3242378
>>3242618
ughhh the western style is just so ugly.

>>3242558

I know what you mean but I cant picture how it should look, I'll guess I'll try another thing.

>>3237239
>>3237752
I think that if you want to make a picture with a dutch angle you have to make it clear all elements are in the same angle, show the horizon tilting or exaggerate the angle a little bit more.

All the pile of stuff in the background makes it a little bit confusing. And something the angle of his body seems off with me.

>>3240913
I ran out of time to do it trad, I compromised and will go digi and print at parents house. Inking now

>>3241122
Well... I’m not going to redraw them all now and learn a new style...

>>3242399
Ok, redrew it because yeah, its not that great.

>>3243040
How about shading?

>>3242132
You bet. He is pretty knowledgeable about his shit. Plus I kind of like his sense of humor

>>3242514
Value wise it's not bad BUT the lighting isn't convincing. You need to show on the clothing where that is more but with subtlety

>>3239591
drawing faces at different angles, especially focus on the nose, cause in a lot of them you're screwing it up.
As for figures I would say the lower part of the figure, the connection between torso and pelvis and how the legs fit in the pelvis, you seem lacking in that area.

>>3240118
can you tell me why you're adding saturation to your lines?

>>3242114
fix left hand or go back

>>3243042
i think his style doesnt use shadows at all. Except maybe occlusion. But thats fine i like it with minial shadows.

>>3242558

I think I am going to twist the legs towards the viewer since I want to preserve the gap at all costs, if anything I'll make it smaller but I don't want the legs to touch each other, looks like crap like that.

Also, if I drew her looking back at the viewer with the head like this would you people say her neck is broken or some of the usual stuff you say? I mean, this is canonically how she would look like if doing that.

>>3243267
You bring up something that's pretty important: where do you draw the line between stylizing and lacking fundamental knowledge of a certain feature? It's difficult to say, but one thing's for certain is that animators have to cut a lot of corners to make the most out of their time. However, these changes can evolve into a part of an entirely new style, which is why anime illustrations is a thing in the first place. However, what's to say you cannot improve upon that? In the picture you've posted, it's obviously an unrealistic pose yet it works in the Rugrats universe since the characters are so stylized. However, when you think about it, you can make the pose even more readable by making it more similar to reality. For instance, why not make her shoulders/chest turn clockwise a bit more? Sure, you can keep up those animation quirks in your drawings, but what are you going to bring up when someone questions it? Does the argument "it's a stylization choice" hold much water? It's up to you to decide.

Touched it up a bit. Will work on irises, hands, outfit, then hair. In that order. Tips most welcome.

>>3243312

I guess I just want a better view of thy bottoms, ( it was going to be my next drawing) the alternative is just making her profile face or doing what you said and twisting her back a bit.

>>3243439
the chin feels a bit off to me, pardon the less than ideal ref there, but from what i can see the left side of her face is sagging down too far, including the left side of the nose and lips

The chin bone on the right also feels too thick going back towards her neck

hopefully that helps!

>>3243312
Look at this krugtard. The reference you posted doesn't even apply, she's a thick woman with zero gap, photographed from 5 feet away.

Gaps exist, hips vary widely from girl to girl. In a closeup center shot, distortion would make the hips/gap look wider. The perspective/anatomy on the original is fine, a retard like you couldn't even begin to redline it.

>>3236777
I like it

>>3243439

lol

There was an expressions meme thread but it died so I decided to go with a styles meme instead.

Pop will have a different coloring style so pardon if the sketch looks the same as normal. I don't really know how to do moe...

cnc?

>>3236903
Mimi and Dale

>>3242981
I redid 9 ladies dancing with an old figure drawing study

Can’t give up now, I didn’t really get any other Xmas gifts for people...

>>3244169

It's pretty adorable and the rendering is good. But you need to center the face better. Stylized proportions are one thing, but the facial featured aren't centered on the head well and to me it's not really serving an art style, it just looks goofy.

I'm not sure if it really needs to be adjusted to a large degree, maybe even just a small amount. But the placement of the eyes (and possibly the mouth too) is throwing me out a bit.

>>3243439
outside the hair change, this is good

>>3243991
Sketches done, time to go through the hell that is coloring.

>>3244323
plastic face

>>3244297
Your old manga and shoujo are both shoujo, dude

>>3236811

>loosy goosy

This is my main problem with anime and hentai, It amazes me the incredible attention to detail and ultra thin quality lines Japs can shit out yet they always commit this type of mistakes.

Usually western takes on Anime look more "solid" and "bold" if you get me.

>>3244323

I like the face, but what do I know, I have been a beginner for 12 years.

>>3244377
Yeah, I honestly didn't know how to tackle old manga :\

>>3244410
Oh, and I used this to reference the old manga part. Maybe once I color, it'll be more distinct.

>>3244793
Your work always feels so organic. I wish I understood how to do largely single weight lineart.

>>3244726
Love the contrast of the shadows on her face, but the bottom half with the pale shirt just feels like an after thought. Good for making the face a focus, but maybe choosing a darker color for her shirt would've made it less obvious of a decision.

>>3244891
QT cat. Digging the style for her face and the little designs on her shirt, but her shoulders feel a bit too stiff and raised for the casualness of her look.

>>3244726

(¬¬)

>>3245136
Sorry, it;s flipped lol

>>3245138
Left bottom girl is cute, draw more of her.

Why is everything I make garbage once I work on it?

>>3245199
Okay, let's backtrack a bit. What anime style(s) do you find appealing?

>>3245138

>>3245199
When it's in its sketchiness, the idea is there. It's clear to see promise but vague enough to hide flaws. Then you clean it up and all your flaws is revealed.

So basically it was always garbage.

>tfw can't even draw anime
am I NGMI?

>>3245233
>blaming anime for your problems
This is what's going to cause you to NGMI. I bet it's more like
>tfw can't even draw

>>3245235
i ktf too, how do I change

>>3245237
By not refreshing this page for a secret answer and to draw your problems away.

New thread

>>3245248
>>3245248
>>3245248

>>3242421
hangman?

>>3243481

The only gap that exists is the difference in payments that white guys get over noble 7 foot tall big-dicked black men and women.

>>3237711
BLOG PLEASE!