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3206543 No.3206543 [Reply] [Original]

(I know about his small waist, don't mention it, he gets pretty self conscious about his body)

>> No.3206559

You're shading to define the muscles. You should shade to define the form.

>> No.3206566

>>3206559
how is that?

>> No.3206569
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>>3206559
Here's a quick mockup, OP.

There's also some weird musculature you've done there. His arms don't attach to the pecs the way that they should, unless there's a deliberate extra pectoral there. And while skinny waist is fine, the sudden cut into the sides at the external obliques look strange. Like he's got a mannequin swivel waist.

>> No.3206577

>>3206569
I didn't noticed the arms, you're right, so I should bring the arms closer to the observer, right? and hide that "extra pectoral" behind them?

>> No.3206579

>>3206569
A better way to think of it is to not shade each muscle as an individual thing. Instead, think about the entire body as a whole, and the shape and roundness of it. Even the most defined muscles don't really make shadows of their own. They simply add detail to the shadows that the body itself makes.

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>>3206577
You don't need to move them, just make it so that extra muscle is in the back and the bicep dives under the pectoral.

>> No.3206582

>>3206581
Do you have the rest of those? I knew the website once upon a time but not anymore.

>> No.3206585

>>3206582
Yeah, give me a bit

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>> No.3206603

>>3206598
(not OP) pretty cool, is there a pack i can download?

>> No.3206604

>>3206600
That's all of them. I have a couple more by different people if you'd like.

>> No.3206608

>>3206581
>>3206586
>>3206587
>>3206589
>>3206592
>>3206593
>>3206594
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>>3206599
>>3206600
Woah these are all pretty helpful. Where are they from? Thanks for sharing.

>> No.3206609

>>3206604
yes please?

>> No.3206610

>>3206603
There's a site somewhere with all of these, but it's in japanese and I wasn't able to track it down through google. I've just dumped all of them, though.

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>> No.3206635

>>3206633
That's the best of my anatomy stuff. Hope you enjoyed.

>> No.3206638

OP here, thank you guys so much

>> No.3206642

>>3206635
thanks for sharing lad!

>> No.3206649
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Well this is it, I hope nothing's bad because I really need to sleep right now

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>>3206649
very bland, too many effects makes it look very devientart

>> No.3206799

>>3206543
>>3206649
biceps should never be bigger than the shoulder muscles and triceps. you made him look like a fucking crab.

>> No.3209634

>>3206589
>>3206592
Where is this from and who's the artist? I can't find it anywhere

>> No.3211717

good drawing

>> No.3211776

>>3206649
The location of the light source isn't consistent. The height specifically.

Maybe you stopped thinking about the larger shapes and got too focused on the individual muscles.

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>>3206579
>Even the most defined muscles don't really make shadows of their own
x(doubt)

>> No.3211806

>>3206579

but the body is made up of muscles, anon

>> No.3211807

>>3206625

>mfw this lays out the muscles more clearly than hampton, loomis and vilppu