/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

I dont know

Sometimes I just want to give up

>>3202101
Same

>>3202053
i don't know either

Does anyone start off drawing by sketching for half a minute, getting distracted for half an hour, rinse n repeat until you hit some threshold and start to powerdraw?

>>3202141
been like this for the past 6 hours but when i have no time for shit suddenly i want to draw badly

>>3202053
Neither do I, but I really like your painting. You have a good sense of form and the composition is interesting.

The only thing I'd suggest is maybe giving the hair more volume, especially on the bangs as they seemed a little flat.

going to grind bodies now

>>3202013

>>3202221

>>3201893
done

>>3202265
Hey, that's pretty good.

There is much more to do
but idk if look partier enough

>>3202265
love it

progress, I'm not sure what colour to use for the claws and horns
Does it look good? Anything to comment?

>>3202265
Amazing. Great work!

>>3202365
Somehow this drawing disturbed me more than >>3202053

>>3202365
Taste is subjective,
I like it anon.

>>3202365

>>3202365
Pupils have to be black. Even if it's white iris black sclera there needs to be a pupil in the middle or else she looks blind or in this case, cross-eyed.

>>3202265
Blog?

>>3202265
Her right leg could use more foreshortening and so could her sword, but I like the impression I'm getting from her head/left arm. I'm drawn to looking at her face and it's nice.

>>3202412
>>3202380

Blog?

repoast

>>3202265
Nice colors

Holy fuck, muscles are hard. So are tigers. On an unrelated note, who's hyped for Nekojishi?

>>3202543
>>3202565
Just a friendly reminder folks! That these people are the same people giving redlines critique and advice.

>>3202582
they know not what they do

Ay lads can I get some opinions on how this composition reads, particularly the words?

>>3202445
Just wanted to say I appreciate there's another KC fan here on ic. Do you have a FB page? I feel like I follow you already.

>>3202053
I don't know either but I'm a sucker for the multiple hand things.

>>3202265
Pretty fantastic dude, blog?

I want to understand hair so I can create hair I want, could I get some help please? Any resources that made it click for you?

>>3202582
do you have an actual critique?

Far from complete but getting there slowly.

>>3202380

>>3202321

I finished it

>>3202647
what's he pop pop poppin? google says that might be addy but i never seen that in ellipticals myself (plus that's hella dangerous to be mix with what i presume is alcohol in that red solo yolo cup)

other than that i'd say the forms/planes of her back feel all weird, her upper arms also have weird overly sharp forms, also my man's hand looks a wee bit mobbly as well. he got a pretty ass face tho, bit black dahlia with the lips maybe. oooh also the girl's wrist on her left arm is not connecting properly with her hand, looks broken :c

>>3202662
are you on drugs?

>>3202666
several

>>3202647
I think your monitor might be fucked; that's really fucking dark and muddy. Looks great with the brightness/contrast upped though.
Spine should be showing if her neck is at that angle. The scapula and arm on the left are going forward, but the deltoids look like they're on the same plane as the right. Bicep/tricep too tubular for the rest of the style. You omitted the posterior deltoid on the right but included it on the left? Just use a reference next time.
Dude's index finger looks like it has 3 joints, distal phalanx is bending the wrong way. Exaggeration should be a sprained joint, not a dislocation.

As an aside, that chick with her hands to her ears on the left of the background looks like a face.

Should I copy everything my favorite artists did until it clicks?

>>3202710
Yes. So long as you understand form and can copy what you can see well you will be fine. Just try and copy from more than one guy and try doing the poses they do yourself; that way you won't stagnate into a generic style.

>>3202647
seconding what >>3202697 said, just up-ing the tone curve helps you appreciate the whole piece - colours, shapes, details - a lot more.

>>3202565
>>3202582
In all seriousness, can someone help with my anatomy? I'm not very good at visualizing muscular figures.

done

>>3202274
>>3202321
>>3202366
>>3202412
>>3202484
>>3202593
ty anons,

http://yaow12.tumblr.com/

>>3202417
I see what u mean but I'd have to change everything at this point to make that change work.

>>3202647
fucking awful

>>3202053
scumbag fucking pedophile. Stay hidden you fucking coward piece of shit.

>>3202445
adding colours wip
>>3202593
i have a FB page but not for art, i do have pixiv and twitter though (name Yilx)

>>3202565
Tried to fix as many of the issues as possible. Any glaring errors I should know of before I try to polish this?

>>3202851
Someone's got their panties in a bunch.

>>3202966
he's not wrong tho. That piece wreaks of pedo.

>>3202968
*reeks
I shouldn't be on 4chan so early in the morning fuck

>>3202968
There are 2 kinds of people here. Those who draw, and those who don't. I don't give a fuck what they draw as long as they put effort towards improving.

How old is sinix

>>3203026
5

>>3202851
>>3202968
Why the hell are you on 4chan? This place is definitely not for people like you.

She's waving at the person behind you.

>>3203034
You probably call decent people "moralfags"

>>3203050
It has nothing to be with being decent, it's just retarded. Go bitch at some real pedophiles somewhere instead of pretending you matter.

>>3202832
Well yeah, but better luck next time.

>>3203050
>decent people
Are you 16?
Back to where you come from fucktard.

ah fuck it all

>>3203127
That's pretty cool.

>>3203127
that is amazing, rest of you shitters need to go back to beg

>>3203127
bet you can't do any backgrounds

>>3203127
Any tips on hair senpai?

>>3203143
>Can't post in beg because they only want realism
>can't post in stylization thread because not good enough

This board is so fucking retarded

>>3202911
>>3202445
Her pose is static and it looks like her torso is hanging in mid-air with a foot touching the ground rather than having her foot support her body.

Line of motion is pretty straight. You'v already colored it, but see if you can mess with that a little more next time. See if a little bend in the standing knee would help.

>>3202400
do the claws look alright or did I pick a bad colour? Also would it be better if I added a darker shadow or does it look fine?
>>3202368
>>3202380
I get responses like these a lot

>>3203042
I like it

>>3203042
I think I've seen your art somewhere before. Bloggu?

>>3203237
Not anyone who replied to you. I like the hint of the pupil, and was hoping you'd go that route. I like the colors you chose personally.
But are the boobs different sized?

Blog though? I love creepy girls, you make me think of Xelvy

>>3202928
Too lazy to do the human and the bench, but the tiger is the important part anyways

>>3202647
>>3202763
The other anons covered anatomical issues and curves adjustment, but this is nice, anon. It's cool to see a more illustrative piece in the alt thread, and the lighting and vibe is very atmospheric. Also, the way you rendered the girl's hair is really fluid and pretty.

>>3203037
Love the way you draw and give volume to the shoes. I feel like the colors are pretty bland, though? Also, I feel like her hand would be more natural if the palm was facing towards the right. QT girl.

>>3202933
Like the composition but something is weird about the colors. I think it's the mismatch of cool and warm hues that feel separate from each other?

>>3203237
thanks friend
i like what you're working on

>>3203240
maybe you saw my stuff on /b/ or /i/

>>3203237
Claws look fine, but I feel like the bright green you used for the furthest out leg tips seems arbitrary, might be better to just make it the same color as the rest of the leg.
Also make sure to deepen/lighten the color inside the cracks and crevices to really get the feeling that it's thick chitin on top of skin instead of just being muscular.

Is that a natural cutie monster girl or an amalgamation of parts that someone made, having different types/colors of leg joints is kinda weird.

>>3203250
>/b/ or /i/
Only checked these boards once or twice over the years, very unlikely. Your style looks nice, you should open a blog if you don't have one already

>>3203196
I tried to bend her leg a bit and shifted the foot's facing position, is it better?
Also, which colours look better?

>>3203127
i love the details/texture.

>>3203128
tthanks!
>>3203143
I mean, thanks but.. there are a lot of good artists on here mang
>>3203147
>[pic related]
Even if I couldn't, why would that be a problem?
>>3203150
I have some progress images of some hair I've done recently if I can find em I'll post it.
>>3203301
<3
The veins like pieces were a happy accident

colours put in, just gotta remember to do rimlight and other shit.

>>3203127
BLOG
L
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G

>>3203273
So I just modeled this pose in front of my bathroom mirror for an embarrassingly long time, and your pose is a bit wrong.

Since the purpose of this stretch is really the quads, you want to bring your knee as far back as possible while keeping you abdomen upright (in order to well, stretch your quads). So her thighs should be making around a 170*-155* angle with her back. And then in order to balance out the weight backwards, you generally either push your abdomen forward (this would in fact make the stretch slightly better) or you push your chest forward some and pull your knee back further.

In yours her knee is creating a straight 180* and she's not leaning forward noticeably at all.

You can do the stretch without doing these things, but then you're generally stretching wrong. And even if you're fine with the stretch not being right (because who cares about running, hardly even a fucking sport, more like torture) there's still the issue of counter balancing for her calf, which is behind her, and should create some force backwards, meaning she still needs a backwards weight.

Hope I was helpful somehow.

Reference of someone stretching correctly:

Holy shit I didn't post a reference
http://championsgetfit.com/uploads/3/4/5/5/34550224/quad-stretch2_orig.png

>>3203341
For fuck's sake.

Is this code? For my game?

Like "B-LOG" Bunny Dick. 9"

You all know I'm not going to have sex with any girls/boys right?

I mean, you're still pushing it super fucking hard. I tried to make a deal and you refused. Which probably means you only want people to think I'm going to fuck them... because for some reason everyone in the entire world wants me to be gay.

All I know how to do is rock n roll, not suck dicks.

>>3203393
stfu not only is your art shit, you have an annoying personality

>>3203410
I like this but am not good enough to give decent critique

Is drawing scribbly shit actually okay.

>>3203410
so this is talent

>>3203433
why do u keep posting this

a study and headshots

>>3203448
because it's true retard, look at the way he effortlessly captures form. this kid is gonna go far

>>3203462
show me something hes finished rendering pls

>>3203462
shut up you weeb fag.

>>3203462
but I'm the guy who posted that

>>3203463
>>3203465
post work

>>3203420
The butthurt is strong in this one.

How jealous are you? Cus it looks like a lot. Like, a lot a lot.

>you have an annoying personality
Lana Del Rey winked at me. So did Rihanna.

Yeah, your opinion is trash.

>>3203454
I love these. The 90s is strong in your animu, which is great.

(that arm is a bit long though <3)

>>3203494
the retard argument is here wooo

>>3203465
Underage b&

>>3203549
we know, no need to announce yourself

>>3203303
>progress images of some hair
i know anon will deliver

gross men

>>3203345
>>3203346
Thank you so much for taking the time to check it like this, I'm still not 100% sure if I got it down or not, but from what I understand it's her torso and leg that are making it feel off, as well as the actual position of the foot, so I shifted the positions of those around a bunch. I hope it looks better like this.

>>3203454
reminds me of the cover art of that book Sabriel

some random sketches

>>3202053
Love it
Where can I follow you

>>3203984
I like it anon. Im a /beg/ shitter but I really like how clasic and clean are your sketches.

>>3203984
blog?

I think I'm done with this, already got an idea I like for my next thing.
Do the sheets look fine or do they not look like sheets at all?
>>3203242
thanks
https://melkochan.tumblr.com
>>3203256
I'm not sure what you meant with the chitin, tried a bit of shadow but I have no idea what you mean.
The design is from Monster Girl Quest, not my own

>>3204058
image
also I might turn down the saturation on the sheets

>>3204026
im a brainlet

>>3203804
No problem, I love looking at your art.

I know i should develop a better background, maybe brighten the light source. Other than that, how is it?

>>3204026
>>3204011
thank you, and my blog is https://www.evaneley.tumblr.com/

>>3203127
just wanted to tell you im a beg and absolutely blown away senpai, u inspire me

Still rough af but I'd like some opinions

>>3204432
Chair legs feel like they could extend out a little big more. Also her ankle on the left leg is broken.

>>3204432
i like how the dress looks but i don't like the face.
also what he >>3204441 said

>>3203804
I'm not an expert so I can't be very helpful but I can tell you that men and women are different and those differences include muscles. If you cover the top half on the body, it's clearly just a man. The only real womanly features are a sports bra and the head. If you took the bra off and just put nipples it would probably look even more like a man. Probably because your reference is a man.

Someone taught me about the existence of line weight.

>>3204562
Blog?! Also what did they tell you?

>>3202053
I like it, nice style altough the neck looks a bit too long there.

I wish I knew why

Tried rule 63 of Flint from Alundra 2

I’ve spent too long fucking with this sketch, but open to any feedback. I can’t decide if I should finish it digital or trad tomorrow

Also send help for backgrounds, maybe i’ll draw a bunch of baddies fading into the distance?

>>3204576

Line weight exist...

>>3204788
those poor girls limbs

I like vibrant colours, and I might stick to this style for a future game

>>3204788
Not sure about the middle one's face, but other than that it lokks neat

>>3204788
The background is really letting it down anon, it would be nice if they were standing on something, also I would vector the hearts because they look distractingly wonky.

>>3204788
What brush are you using for sketching? It looks neat.

>>3202638
I like the characters, but considering the picture as a whole, there is way too much going on and my eyes have nowhere to rest

>>3204960
I realised the ears didn't make sense, so I canged it

>>3204826
>limbs
Too long? Too skinny? Too wonky? I’ll try to buff them up tonight

>>3204963
Ugh faces, I wasn’t sure about buttercups face but I guess blossom has issues

>>3204966
I have no idea how to color the giant hearts if I finish it trad - I might just fill the BG with characters or just print the heart BG

>>3204967
Procreate default HB pencil

>>3204576
no blog, but something along the lines of
>heavier lines show precedence, and will be in front of lighter lines
>symmetrical things in the background can be left light, most people understand objects in the background should be light
>areas where lines meet and bunch together should be thicker

>>3203127
how many thousands of layers dude

>>3204432
Perspective on her upperbody and head are pretty bad, we should be seeing it from a lower angle.
being so straightforward also ruins the smug

>>3205143
Can you elaborate further on the perspective?

concept for next ilustration.

>>3205154
her face and torso are pretty much strait toward the viewer.but clearly from the perspective of the chair as well as the low angle and the skirt it should be looking up at her and her down at you.

Naturally she could be bent over, but it doesn't really give that feel since she's lounging backwards.
Also for smug poses like i'm assuming you're going for it works better if they have the high ground and thus are looking down on the viewer.

>>3205158
The idea was that she was turned a bit towards the camera as opposed to sitting directly parallel with the chair, with her head looking directly at the camera, but yeah, what you suggested might look better.

Imo it still looks fine but I might have tunnel vision.

How the fuck do I do lineart, I've been banging my head against this piece of a while now and I can't get out of the sketch phase because my lineart either looks too thick or is too blobby or is too thin.
Digital lineart is driving me fucking crazy and all the tutorials I'm finding are by shitty tumblr artists who use a fat marker tool for their blocky garbage.

>>3205131
blog?

>>3205048
>this fag hates me this much

comical

>>3204788
Unironically, blog?

>>3205188
>/beg/tard is impressed by literal scribbles

>>3205368
>this upset literal scribbles are better than anything you can do

>>3205368
Why u hating

>>3205368
post work.

>>3205188
http://www.webtoons.com/en/challenge/sketchbook-nsfw/sketchdump/viewer?title_no=121230&episode_no=1

Long time no see you guys.

Do most of you use Photoshop or Painter?

>>3205586
photoshop is probably the most popular. But both are good so just try what fits your needs

>>3205586
I keep trying to move from Sai to Clip Studio Paint but Sai's selection tools and stabilizers feel better.

>>3202013
comment/crit welcome

>>3205577
Welcome back, anon. Chest/ribcage too high, seemingly no room for collarbone.

>>3205616
What the heck is even going on here? I can make out the head and that one giant ear and...?

>>3203037
blog?

thots?

>>3205669
Better not be a trap or something

Lemonfag

>>3206032
Post cute girls

>>3206044
Here

>>3206230
faces are too large on some of these

>>3206239
Cool

>>3205942
It's a trap.

loli study (copied from another artist)

>>3204973
Thanks for the feedback dude. I've been asking others and they've said a similar thing.

>>3206308
Don't know what your goal is, but I would recommend finding ways to lead the viewers to the subject(s) of the piece, whether that be through flow, contrast, blur, etc.

>>3206311
Yeah I've been toying with a few things and will post my progress soon enough. I'll still take your suggestions on board and try to refine more. Thanks again.

>>3206307
I always recognize that artist because of the assfangs

>>3206307
Blog?

>>3206321
Holy fuck, you weren't kidding.

>>3205942
what software do you use to sketch these lovely sukes?

>>3202013
Trying to make it less scribbly lol

TIL I cant draw feet

Any CC before I move to the next step?

>>3206370
sexy; keep it up

This image is confusing to me.

>>3206404
That's basically what I do to paint. I don't think she uses the same before/after for this one but you basically just keep adding layers upon layers until you're satisfied. Think of it as traditional painting.

>>3206404
Left is her showing you an amateur anime finish to which she shows you where she can take it with just volume and realism. Also she adds more detail and changes colors.

>>3206407
So she really is good at polishing...

>>3206409
Oh I see so that's not how she really draws she was doing bad on purpose?

>>3206420
Yeah probably, she doesn't draw like that normally as evident by the right and other processes. With how skilled she is, she could draw in any way she wants now I would figure as well.

>>3206413
Pic related is an example of my painting process from sketch. I'm not at her(?) level but this should give you an idea as to how she may paint. Looks like Sakimichan does a similar process based on this video in that she starts with a sketch and paints it over: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=84XQ0Vsjhb4

Keep in mind this is just one way of going about it. There are other ways to do digital painting, but this is my preferred method at this point.

>>3206307
The artist is Oyari Ashito, isn't it?

>>3206404
what the fuck is this, the transition to "after" is clearly someone just warping the everloving fuck out of this with the transform tool in photoshop rather than getting it constructed right in the "before" stage

>>3206465
>construction meme

>>3206471
>being completely incapable of drawing outside of photoshop

>>3206475
How those things are related?

>>3206404
This is bullshit, there's something intentionally left out

>>3206489
That's the point you dumb ass, you pay to find out what's left out. Sakimichan understands marketing to faggots.

>>3206479
On paper, the drawing on the left would be the end result - the eyes and mouth and head have been placed, and getting that "after" result would be impossible without repainting over lots of it.

On paper, you cannot select a face and warp and stretch it to get what you want after you've gotten to the stage on the bottom left. She is using Photoshop as a crutch, but getting fantastic results out of it, so I guess it's kind of okay.

>>3206353
Clip Studio Paint

>>3206365
lol

>>3206521
And how this related to
>being completely incapable of drawing outside of photoshop
?
I can post video where Rapoza/Ruan Jia/Mullins/whatever using, oh my god, crutches.

>>3206373
Not what I had envisioned but I dunno how to fix it so whatever.

>>3206571
i like the sketch without the arm, this isnt so bad either

>>3206737
can you fucking finish something? at this point theyre shitty doodles

>>3206742
ez, find old, finish it in 30 mins

>>3206757
go finish something

>>3206757
You need to make a hentai

Can i get some advice on drawing boobs and stuff? And anyone know some good tutorials (btw pic related, me trying to not draw boobs)

>>3206793
i know there are more like this but i don't have them , hopefully someone will post the rest cuz i need it too

booties and boxes

Again, surprised that I made it before thread ended.
>>3205942
cute
>>3206373
draw more than just heads, oh wait you meant moving on to coloring never mind then I know jack shit about that. I would spend more time giving layers to the hair though, whether you do this using colors or lines are up to you.

>>3203244
I see Darkwing Duck in the thumbnail.

>>3206793
>>3206809
try doxy's tutorial, the toot anon posted was alright in theory, the guy knows what he's talking about, but his examples are really poor, mainly due to his style.

>>3206370
Am I the only one who finds spherical asscheeks like that fucking retarded and not sexy at all? And I fucking love massive asses too. Something about that specific style just looks silly.

>>3206973
They look like butt implants

>>3206986
Yeah that was what I was thinking. The butt doesn't fit the rest of the body. Just suddenly BAM, a sphere.

>>3207002
keep at it friendo

>>3207028
keep at it friendo

>>3207028
>gimpcumtribute.jpg
>>3207040
>mspaintcumtribute.jpg

>>3204059
new thing, thoughts?

>>3207047

are you the same yev or just another faggot with that 1px brush

>>3206757
i used to have ur blog but i forgot.. Can you give it to me again pops?

>>3203454
I like your style.
That arm looks kind of off though. Otherwise well done on those heads

>>3204098
Theres alot wrong with it anon. The anatomy is grotesque and the shading is inconsistent.
>>3204432
make her barefoot
>>3205131
nice doodles. would like to see you actually finish something
>>3206365
rotfl
>>3206370
How horny were you when you drew these? Regardless...
Legs and feet shouldn't look that way from that position.

>>3207050
>yev
who? I just use it for sketching

>>3204340
Good work

should I be in this thread or the draw thread, whats the difference?

>>3206370
I'm a footfag and I approve of those

>>3207085
Why not both?

>>3207047
What's this?

>>3207085
I think the drawthread has mostly realism guys

>>3207154
how do I get as good as you, goobywooby?

>>3207155
their just sketches though, look up reference/images and draw from that while drawing from imagination

>>3207075
>make her barefoot
;) r u a footfag too?

>>3207085
kinda nice. whats with the random thick brushstrokestho . maybe put a little more thought into where you put it and it could work

>>3206250
Thanks

>>3207002
>>3207028
Thank you for these, especially the fixes to the body and face, I really hope I can keep these in mind the next time...

Resumed this after leaving it alone for a while

>>3207172
Thanks, I'll definitely take that into consideration

>>3207157
>>3207154
>implying any of it was drawn from imaginoo

>>3207249
at least one of you gets inspired by sakimichan

>>3207356
but anon its true!

>i'm getting better than some of the regulars here who I saw superior to me

>>3207532
your dingdong-krugger is growing.

>>3207535
nah

>>3207532
Post work, my pupil

>>3207075

>>3207559
begone, kyle

Are there any resources on using screen tones in art and Manga Studio?
a lot of my favourite artists use it and I find it really appealing when used well

I never draw animu shit but for whatever reason tonight I felt like drawing some unabashed Shonen-esque trash.

>>3207576
at least you got the trash part right

>>3207580

Thanks bro.

>>3207580
savage

>>3207576
reminds me of some old video game concept art or character bio's, its cool anon

>>3207576
Jazza!?

>>3206370
i think the feet are the most well rendered part lol

>>3207488
I like the shape of your character's face anon, you've got good consistency
is he just a furry OC or a character you use for something though?

SHADING TAKES FUCKING FOREVER I HATE IT REEE
How do I make shading a more comfy experience? It's always hard on me.

>>3207876
So fucking good. Got a blog?

>>3207679

Thanks Anon, I just wanted to do every 80s cliche I could think of.

>>3207702

Uh, no.

>>3207876
>shading
you have far serious problems
Also it doesn't take long at all if you know your stuff

>>3207559
>the face
kill it with fire

>>3207889
>so fucking good
all I see here is a shift in the hue/sat box. Get your eyes checked.

>>3207876
>SHADING TAKES FUCKING FOREVER
that's because you don't know how light works and you're just making shit up.

Divide the surface of the forms into planes. Planes that get hit by the main light rays are in the light. Planes that don't are in shadow. Planes that are at the same angle should be the same value. It's simple. The hardest part is simplifying forms into planar forms.

>>3207941
no anon. shading just takes a long time, relatively much more than base coloring and drawing.
Not need to be a MUH FUNDIESfag about an objective fact.

>>3207564
bumping this question

>>3207944
I disagree.
The drawing and sketching phase should take the longest for this kind of workflow.

>>3207889
I'd hand it over but I'm still working on making a lot of pieces and everything I've got up looks like shit rn, sorry

>>3207928
Okay crabbo it ain't finished and it is a bit bright so I understand, but do you really have to dictate what someone should or shouldn't like? Pretty shitty desu

>>3207941
>>3207922
It's not like I'm not trying I just suck lmaoo. Ofc I'm making shit up, it's fuckin' anime. I'll try to re-analyze where the light should be hitting though

>>3207944
This guy gets it. Sketching doesn't take me nearly as long, neither does lining or coloring, it's shading and rendering the details that really brings in the grind.

>>3207944
check out apterus graphics on youtube
occasionally he decides to alter his composition or add some body part and the speed he does all the shading etc. is incredible

>>3207993
Well yeah you "can" do it fast, but just all the parts that goes into shading naturally takes longer than the original forms or coloring.
Unlike the sketching or base color phase (if you have one) you have to keep in mind lighting direction, bounce lighting, texture, etc.. all this just takes up more time, plus you actually have to craft out the forms of the object instead of just drawing the contours. While the contours do take time, its still just the outline and easy to fix.

>>3207876
>tfw there's no porn of these two characters
fugg

>>3207852
Nah, just a husbando from a bara visual novel. Thanks for the compliments, though.

>>3207998
https://youtu.be/b0qircnBupw?t=9m6s

check out how he does the legs
it is obviously sped up and far from finished but he puts down the base so tight and clean
my goal is to be able to move like that without much emphasis on the linework

>>3208007
I don't really understand the point you're trying to make.

>>3207576
You did well copying the coloring style of dragon ball at least

>>3207559
Nice work!

>>3206307
finished. Copying feels so unsatisfying, but I think it helped me improve my lines and faces. This is the ref btw
https://exhentai.org/s/63e239ecb6/1097487-16

>>3208070
Link sends me to a pic of a sad panda.

screwed up the posing lol

>>3208118
You should google a question about that.

>>3208070
The faces look horrible, and everything looks pretty bad desu.
at least look up a basic of basics for anatomy.

>>3208000
you're an artist, you have the power to change that kek

>>3208130
I know I've got a long way to go, but I think I've started to improve a bit. I'm trying to get used to correct anatomy. I think in the third one it's about right, isn't it?

>>3208055

Hey I'll take any compliment I can get lol.

>>3208136
no, not even close.

>>3208118
"Back to r.e.d.dit" is fucking filtered, the state of this garbage website.

>>3208140
compared to the ref the torso got a little to long and the legs a little to short, but not too much. What else is wrong?

>>3208141
Nothing wrong with that.

>>3208141
Ah, was wondering where that statement came from.

rate my hime

I don't know if this is the right place to post this, but does anyone know how I can develop a knowledge of film techniques/cinematography and such for the purpose of applying them to making manga or animatics?

I feel like anime and manga borrow heavily from film and I would like to develop the knowledge to do that too.

>>3208199
https://youtu.be/8TM5Tdl9uww

Stuff like this for example, without literally ripping off scenes frame for frame.

crossposting from other thread

some 5-point perspective

I hate to ask this here, but does anyone know where I can find some guides for drawing furshit? Googling it is just giving me links to shitty HOW2FURRY books on Amazon.

>>3208283
Depends on what you want to do. Anthro? Feral? What is your current skill level and how familiar are you with the fundamentals?

>>3208296
Somewhat familiar with fundamentals. I've done all of the loomis excercises at least.
I'm going for something leaning more towards feral, I've done an okay job looking at actual pictures of the animals though.

>>3208325
With feral it's just a matter of taking the knowledge you picked up on how to capture the human form and applying it to animal forms. Obviously this will slightly differ from animal to animal but at the very least it's good to get a solid understanding of those fundamentals. Everything else is really up to you, whether you want anime eyes vs. realistic eyes, using flat colored fur vs. realistic fur, etc. Not much else to say since you'll get the most mileage out of studying from nature.

>>3208122
is he on top of lifeless doll?

>>3208141
reddit

>>3208341
Why would you think that's a doll?

>>3207357
I don't think so, I mean I don't even follow her nor I care about my own style. I just try to draw as best as I can

<I hope this is looking right

>>3208374
Holy shit firez inked some shit?

I can’t believe what i am seeing

>>3208141
good to see this website is trying to keep away the shitty memes then

hi can someone please give me a redline on how to draw her hands? I wanna draw it like a neko person.

Ignore the janky angles, I'll work on them as I simplify the muscles. Speaking of which, fuck muscles.

>>3208401
Hey, it's Mr.I'minthetop20dentistuniversity.

>>3208401
>dentistu
search for a cat gesture reference, study hands by videos like the ones from sinix or sycra, redo the lower part of sketch again for correct proportions while using your cat like reference.Sounds easy but's frustating but it's worth it

>>3208384
5 bucks says it's a commission he was paid poorly for

>>3208343
because she's lifeless? or is it normal for girls to lie like a corpse during procreation?

>>3208477
Okay I see your point. I cba to make any changes now though.

>>3208477
>is it normal for girls to be a corpse
Yes? Life isn't like a porno fag.

>>3203314
Interesting composition and lovely colours -
looking forward to the final product

hope this isn't too cringey

>>3202013
Dumping shitty yeems

>>3208653
I like your linework, anon - have you got more work that has full body or other stuff?

>>3208654
Another yeem

>>3208660
fuckin'

>>3208663
FUCKIN'

>>3208664
FUCKIN’

>>3208665
>“We are as forlorn as children lost in the woods. When you stand in front of me and look at me, what do you know of the griefs that are in me and what do I know of yours. And if I were to cast myself down before you and weep and tell you, what more would you know about me than you know about Hell when someone tells you it is hot and dreadful? For that reason alone we human beings ought to stand before one another as reverently, as reflectively, as lovingly, as we would before the entrance to Hell.”

Who was the main designer/artist behind a rose in the twilight and htol#niq?
I'm really digging their style.

Critique my trash. Redlines preferred

sans

>>3208664
Blog?

new bread >>3209019

new bread >>3209019

new bread >>3209019

>>3208999
The thumbnail looks better than the drawing. It looks very lazily done, stop that and slow down.

>>3208999
http://monotoneink.tumblr.com/

>>3208160
head way too big/10

>>3204724
this one makes me uncomfortable

>>3205577
Like it!
The texture on the visor makes it look like it's see-through fabric.
I don't think that was your intention, looks like it was supposed to be glass, though I actually dig the fabric visor concept.

>>3206239
Real nice!! Would love to see this finished!

>>3208911
looks like generic dollar store collouring book.

>>3207576
looks like Jazza