/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3195968
You need to learn how to convey weight. Stand in that pose yourself, and feel how awkward it feels. You have her putting weight on the wrong foot, to also be balancing with her hand on the sword, or whatever it is. You need to convey a center of mass, and the weight on the right foot, or both feet, and that will influence the hips, and the shoulders. You have her hunched from teh shoulders up. Why? That pose should have the shoulders back, and the head held high. You also don't seem to know how shoulders work, and their mechanics - to have her arms like that, and that hunched up, her arms would be completely out of the socket, at the shoulder. The hand on the pommel is bizarre, it doesn't not match human anatomy holding an object like that. The whole pose feels awkward and strange. It's a fairly simple pose, that you could work out simply looking into a full length mirror, or having your friend or mom stand like that.

what is up with the face? her nose and lips are way too close, the left hand looks a little weird in terms of thumb placement (try some more definition) and the right hand doesn't match with the style (looks gloved desu) the legs could use some work, the calf shouldn't bulge like that. Also define the knees and redraw the shoes so that they look angled with the rest of the picture

good detail, bad gesture. very unrealistic and static. please read loomis

>>3195993
This. OP, drawing something from imagination with shit form can't be saved with nice detail. It'll look two dimensional and unrealistic looking.
As he's said, nice detail, I don't know if that's because you're already good at observational drawing or what, but please read a book about construction, like loomis.
It looks like it was flattened by a pancake.