/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3171704

>>3171706

the text was actually lifted from /ic/, it had me dying so i had to write it down.

>>3171708

i swear i see this pic posted in every reference thread. i got bored before finishing the bird. still a cool pic to draw.

>>3171709

>>3171704
post in a general and don't make your own thread

>>3171713

this is all for now.

>>3171716
>All images and discussion should pertain to the critique of visual artwork.
User-created artwork is submitted for critique, and visual art is discussed. Do not claim authorship of works you did not create.
Only constructive criticism will be accepted. Rude or offensive comments will result in a ban.


stop being the cancer kill /ic/. now go away to your "confessions why ill never make it" general

>>3171718
That rule has nothing to do with my post. I was simply directing OP to the proper place to get feedback. If anything, calling me "cancer" is an offense comment.

>>3171720
oh look, the newfag is hurt i called him cancer. and it has everything to do with your post. i do not have to be regulated to a general if i have multiple drawings up for critique

>>3171730
My /ic/ license says 5 years residency.

>i do not have to be regulated to a general

Technically you don't but it's board etiquette to do so. If you're not a newfag yourself you would know this, newfag.

>>3171735

>board etiquette

yeah im really concerned about sliding another reddit infested general off the 10th page.

>>3171764
Of course you're not concerned; you're an outsider and considered a newbeggar. Speaking about beggars and now that we have cleared up where you stand, I suggest posting to /beg/ general.

>>3171764
your art is pretty shitty. you should work on every aspect of your fundamentals.

you can't resize properly. you should resize properly.

you should post in a general, preferably /beg/

here's all the advice I can give you.

>>3171788
finally. a real opinion.

>>3171860
are there any other artists out there or are you all gutless cowards?

>>3171862

>>3171864
draw that in ball point pen and get back to me. depending on the results ill consider your advice.

>>3171735
Wow youve been here since 2012? what a big boy you are

>>3171862
Your art sucks. Git gud.

>>3171862
The problem isnt that your art is bad, it is that youre a cunt.

Why do newfags think that acting like complete fucking retards is the standard in slower boards?

>>3171942

>posting shit without reading sticky

>>3171966
wasted dubs. i've read the sticky

im honestly disappointed. i expected more smug anime girls by now.

>OP is never going to make it

This is a classic /ic/ bait setup.

If unironic, go back to /i/ and stay there.

>>3172794
classic deflecting, im officially here to stay and i will be back. this thread is actually 4chan at its finest and you're all butt blasted newfags that cant handle getting told by a tripfag of all anon's. i've come to save this board from the reddit.

>>3172857
you ARE the reddit

>>3172867

you can't even tripfag properly.

i like it

>>3171704
I assume you aren't wanting to be a hobbyist for the rest of your life if you are asking for critique. That said..
why the fuck are you copying existing manga pages and asking for critique.

Read the beginner books..

Learn how to
1. Construct forms
2. Perspective
3. Render forms
4. Composition
5. Color
6. Clothing/drapery

Soon, you will be able to draw your own comics without resorting to sad copies.

As for which books, I can give you my own list if you are interested. Otherwise, good luck

>>3173059
id imagine i have a better eye than you, by that i mean i could probably construct, do perspective, render forms and composition better than you. also i understand color just fine and there is nothing posted here that should make you assume otherwise. this isn't all of my work. the only books i ever 'needed' were comics from artists i loved and i've learned a lot over the years.

id like to make it clear that fan art is an enjoyable and rewarding experience as well as a learning one.

>>3173006
thanks senpai

>>3173069
i also challenge anyone to a draw off, ill even let you pick the picture and anyone can join. don't be scared, really! its not a big deal lol.

>>3173069
you're a huge faggot and I feel bad for >>3173059 actually taking the time to write down something to help your sorry ass.

>>3173143
if you're so good and adamant at proving how shitty of an artist i am why don't you challenge me to a draw off? im not afraid to lose, are you?

you should read the sticky

if you're trying to be another barbro at least pick a memorable name

into the filter you go

>>3173725
you should contribute something worth while

>>3173733
let me guess, you draw furshit for commission and you're a miserable bastard?

>>3173755
>you should contribute something worth while

no. my art is not good, like yours. my contribution would not be worth while, like yours. the sticky will teach you how to get better, which is why i suggested it.

>>3173760
don't be so hard on yourself bro, i got a long way to go too. i don't need to be told how to git gud. thanks for the backhanded compliment though

>>3173768
wut. where did you read the compliment? it was just backhanded.

>>3173776
>my art is not good, like yours

thanks again senpai.

>>3173779
>my art is not good, like yours
>my art is not good
>not good, like yours
>not good

reading comprehension is hard

>>3173782
sentence structure is too.

>>3173790
so is proper punctuation and capitalization, but we clearly don't care about this do we?

>>3173779
>>3173790
>my art is not good, like yours
"my art is not good, UNLIKE yours."

That's how easy it would have been to compliment you, if that's what he was aiming for

>>3173830
this

>>3171704
You have potential?

I don't know if I should link discord or not.

>>3173802
im not the one hung up on reading comprehension; i don't care

>>3173830
yeah to bad he didn't say 'UNLIKE' mine. fucking idiot.

>>3173995
thanks! go for it.

bump

>>3174621
>yeah to bad he didn't say 'UNLIKE' mine. fucking idiot.

no shit sherlock

>>3173148
he wasn't talking about your skills. he was talking about your personality.
you really area a big asshole.

>>3174621
>yeah to bad he didn't say 'UNLIKE' mine. fucking idiot.
you're not just an asshole, you are also a dumb facktard, kek.
he didn't say unlike his, because he thinks BOTH of your art is shit.
stop replying when you get rekt if you don't want to look like an even bigger piece of shit than the one you already are.

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>>3175039


>>>/reddit/

>>3175139
https://discord.gg/bf6PWZd

Get it while it is hot

>>3171704
Your artwork would be very impressive in the notebook of a pre-adolescent

>>3175033
im sorry anon, someone had to be the bad guy. too many of you out there have overinflated ego's and something had to be done.

>>3175911
opening a thread with shitty art and acting like an asshole with an overinflated ego is going to do wonders, yeah. bra-vo.

>>3175998
whats shitty about it?

>>3171881
You know what, I'm going to actually try that. I'm not the anon who critiqued you, but I do agree with quite a bit of the critique you've received.
And though it doesn't seem like it will help art gains, it does seem fun at least.

>>3176011
chicken scratch copies of toriyama's art, where you added bad perspective.

if you think anything about your art posted in here is good, then I have some bad news for you.

>>3176115
cont.

unless you're like 12 or younger. then never mind my comment and keep going kid. I just hope your parents will teach you not to be an asshole sooner or later.

>>3176112

its not a big deal to critique my work lol. im not claiming to be the best but i've been around the block a time or two. i can take it. just please don't waste my time.

>>3176117

im 28 and i have been drawing more or less for my entire life

>>3176115
>if you think anything about your art posted in here is good, then I have some bad news for you.

im please with it.

>>3176115

>if you think anything about your art posted in here is good, then I have some bad news for you.


im pleased with it. id also like to mention that these are sketch book sketches and not finished pieces.

>>3176128
>not finished pieces.

>>3176115
>your art posted in here

what you are showing here is shit. unfinished or not. if you really are 28 you are pretty much a garbage artist and that's it.

>>3175223
Must be a pretty terrible discord channel

>>3176151
It is lmao but I am interested in OP. I am pretty /beg/ myself

>>3176128
Discord name?

>>3176128
>omg it's just a sketch don't take it so serious

DeviantArt is thataway.

>>3176144
do you think i do art for anyone but myself? i don't give a fuck if you don't like it or think highly of an artist. it wasn't made for you.

>>3176338
>discord name?

/ic/?

>>3176343
oh trust me, i've got a deviant art page as well. it doesn't get much attention but im not losing any sleep over it.

>>3176345
I mean discord username.

>>3176361
ohhh lol. i just now made one. ill make it easy on you and ill be zoot allures

>>3176345
>do you think i do art for anyone but myself?
why are you posting it here then?
it is shit, so you aren't proving anybody anything.
and if you don't draw for others, then why post it?

oh wait. you're just full of shit, kek.

>>3176345
>>3176408
this must be a troll thread. no self awareness

TITLE OF THE THREAD IS "R8 H8 B8" , WHAT DO YOU MEAN "i don't give a fuck what you think'

get the fuck out

>>3176408
>why are you posting it here then?
for critique and the riveting discussion :P

ill post some more of my work for you guys to dissect.

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>>3176835
Well done
Your perspective seems a bit odd at times
It has a very comic strip essence to. As in that one strip in the comic that's extra detailed.
Study some more and rehearse those skills
You're gonna make it