/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>3157624
Try to be more precise in regards to values/tone

>>3159264
Vary your line wight more creatively and add a light source/more contrast

>>3159264
Mein gott. I love that shit. Im a massive /beg/ tho so that means nothing much probably.

>>3159501
Well as artists the target demographic is not other drawfags but normies so if that poster has a mind for the future he should appreciate your praise

>>3158354
values and tones are spot on, 2nd one is off a little on the construction

>>3159483
>>3159501
Thanks.
Could anyone redline girl's anatomy if anything wrong?

>>3160351
The torso is bland and lacks volume. The leg pieces lack dimensionality esp the left one

Tried to do some furniture the same way as the plants I drew last thread, but It did not work out.

Scanned

From maybe a week ago

>>3162518
Really cool. That much little detail is a pain in the ass, but it's really fun imo.

>>3161840
this is really cool, blog?

Its fucking nothing
>>3161840
Good shit senpai

I started a new sketch yesterday

And this one today

look.

>>3164526
2

my sketchbook has been shit lately, cheating and posting some of old pages from my last one.

>>3164831
thats so good senpai

why is everyones files so big? takes some time to load when viewing on phone.

>>3164875
>takes some time to load when viewing on phone.

>>3164887
go back to...mexico? Sorry, i live under a rock. I dont understand memes.

Also, my sketchbook is to small, I keep running out of room...

just woke up 25min ago. This is what I drew.
›Yay, more bones ※clap clap clap※
Says no one. At least im getting faster.

>>3159264
great stuff, reminds me of this
http://danbooru.donmai.us/posts/2345099?tags=pandarou

Unknowingly ripped off Katsuya Terada here. Kinda

What sketchbooks do you guys use? I have the orange canson xl sketchbook but the paper is yellowish, could you recommand some?

>>3164875
Stop phoneposting and you wouldn't have that problem.

tried to do some pose of a ballerina, it was a very weird pose. Mostly focused on proportion but something seems off to me

Went to figure drawing yesterday. Interesting subject for once

>>3168345
We were told to use only straight lines for this one

>>3168346

>>3168347
Aaaand that's basically it.

Why is it that one day you can do work you consider to be decent and then the next time you do work that is garbage?

I swear, its like be teased with the feeling of doing something good only to realize you suck again.

/blog, here is some stuff I did for Inktober.

>>3168487

>>3168488

>>3168489

>>3168490

>>3168492

Wish my camera wasn't potato

>>3164831
>>3164550
>>3164544
Neat

>>3168723
>wish my camera wasnt patato
what the hell does that mean?
>>3168487
>one day decent next day garbage

I think that feelings normal though. Just turn your brain off. btw, whats happening with the guy on the bottom right? His pose looks unintentionally sexual and his sword looks oddly phallic. Just sayin.
>>3168279
noted.

>>3169524
>His pose looks unintentionally sexual and his sword looks oddly phallic. Just sayin.

Unintentional. Meant to be just some gesture with the sword by his side but it looks like he's stabbing his dick. Oh well.

one of these days im going to add the muscles and tendons to the bones but i gotta draw every single bone first.

school sketches

>>3171908

>>3171913

>>3171914

>>3171915
imagination

Some doddle of a known character from a North Korean cartoon, I'm going to move onto digital stuff once I get a drawing tablet. Gladly taking criticism to help improve my artwork.

>>3172549
the face looks more or less facing forward but the snout is off to the side

>>3172551
Thanks, I'll fix it up a little bit. I mostly based it off this.

"goybook/Squirrel-and-Hedgehog-369722149817203/photos/?tab=album&album_id=459020417554042"

Don't know if that was a design choice for the norks or not.

comments/crits welcome

>>3172630
>>3172634
Nice, anon.

>>3172630
>>3172634
these are great but there is an awful lot of negative space. These arent even half done, are they?

>>3172868
theyre both fully finished.
i like to focus detail on select parts of the image

>>3172630
>>3172634

nice work ninja

>>3172877
okay. but i see some gorgeous details on the trees and leaves but than only some parts of the images have these details and it makes me think its unfinnished. The second one is espeacially top heavy with grass having much less effort compared to the tree. I understand that its time consuming but its a real shame that everything doesnt have the same level of detail. There is the critism that I have for you, the drawings are not complete.

>>3172901
ok thanks anon. maybe ill revisit them

>>3164831
u got an instagram or anything?

>>3162488
very nice

After the Dutch Portraitist Frans Hals.

>>3173449
yeah its @evaneley

Some of the sketch styles here are so intriguing, makes me want to practice another style. I seem stuck doodling the same bullshit.

I really cant seem to fit my drawings on the pages. Well, this guys got three of his fingers cut off.

>>3173511
Thanks bruh.

>>3157594
An example of my rendering process. (from reference)

Not ready to commit to silverpoint yet.

Identification Error: Please Take Your Card
https://youtu.be/oclBUN080ok

some thingZ

>>3175385

>>3175393

>>3175394

>>3175183
You have consistency but lack the confidence esp when the line counts. Try practicing only using outlines/defining lines sans hatching.

>>3174486
Don't randomly splatter the forms with white. Accentuate form by placing the proper highlights and use it to maximize contrast in high focal areas

>>3159954
no they're not spot on, you blind? Compare the blacks for example and see the obvious.

>>3175399
I love the more warbly German silverpoint drawings and especially Italian master sketches. The only thing I'd change is the forehead but you're right I could have used a less sharp line to get my outline.

>>3175849
>German
I should say Dutch, that wild line only really appears among them. The Italian painters, even the Venetians, used a clear outline as part of the Baroque style.

Frank Quitely might be worth studying in order to get something more formal yet with a "Dutch line".

>>3175400
Thanks for the feedback, anon.

>>3157624
Barge Book ?

>>3174431
this is fucking sick anon

>>3175849
>>3175861
You can babble all you want, but your bold lines lack consistency and confidence.

>>3178432
We're agreed then -- It succeeds in looking like the drawing of a student that was too silly to continue. One that might have worked in oils... using a thick impasto for the hair.

http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/ExactlyWhatIAimedAt

Sum life drawing

>>3172377
Nice tiddies.

>>3178143
wow, theres lots of reflection on my pencilwork. Heres a better photo.

>>3179194
and todays drawing.

>>3178664
Reversed the viewpoint. Came out really boring tho.

>>3172634
looks really nice but i feel like the composition could be better, i disagree with other anon and dont feel that the negative space is a problem, but i feel that you could do better in leading the viewer's eye through your work.

>>3178664
>>3180146
I like these. On white they would make cool postcards.

>>3180295
Thank you for the kind words anon.

You mean like on white paper? The paper actually is white, but the light I took the picture in was horrible, so it gives that brown tint.

>>3180750
cute. esspeacially girl chicken little.
>>3180151
my eyes stayed upwards because of how heavy it felt compared to the bottom. My brain keeps telling me that the top will fall down any second even though I know its a drawing.

>>3181408
Thanks anon. Respect for going so hard on those bones.

>>3178682
Glad you like them

>>3172937
IG?

>>3173677
Love it, what books have you read

>>3181538

anatomy notes, digital though

>>3182910
Ideas for a tv head robot.

>>3185137
Hey, thats what i was going to do with my bones. Except with more value practice and not digital. I don't think digital counts in a sketchbook thread.

I have some more if anyone cares.

>>3168333
Something about her right hip feels disjointed.

>>3188113 shoulder joint

clavicle.

How do you keep, or what do you do with your old sketchbooks, notebooks, sketches, notes, draws etc /IC?

>>3189063
i just add them to a bookshelf. they are book shaped after all.

Heres a video I did doodling in my sketchbook

https://youtu.be/zjxcAaOQvjY

>>3190389
apologies for oversized image

2/4

>>3190412

>>3175746
is it really what is taught in bargues plate?
they are beginner intro to the medium and mechanisms (plumb, correct form, applying color to reveal form), it doesn't matter wheter its black or 80% black, that is insanely insignificant

>>3175746
also it seems like he is using pencils, and if so (not using charcoal) cannot go pure black

>>3190491
>9th grade level math
Underage and low IQs kindly piss off

>>3191465
>that is insanely insignificant
Contrast is not insignificant, and the difference between full black and something closer to a mid tone isn't being slightly off. That's like saying a straight line and an 80% straight line is an insignificant difference, the difference between the two is immediately apparent and noticeable.

a pre-class train ride doodle

mah hands

From imagination, tell me what's wrong with it

>>3178649
Do you go to school or drop-in classes? Do you like your teachers?

>>3178653
Where is this?

>>3181753
You draw the way that girls fight. I can't imitate it but it's cool that you can pull it off.

>>3181752
I own Bellchambers' dream dictionary -- actually I believe we both do. Did you get yours at some goofball New Age shop?

The quotation there is from Murray's Dictionary of Art and Artists, which has a great selection of very concise and lively biographies. I own Durer's Painters Manual, and Parramon's book The Art of Painting, Powell's Colour Guides. Durer is somewhat esoteric but I would recommend the colour guides if you mix your own paints. I also have some books on intuition and ESP from a spiritual perspective.

>>3193753
You should illustrate Christina Rossetti's poem Goblin Market.

https://en.m.wikipedia.org/wiki/Goblin_Market

>>3190440
Is this a narrative sequence?

Just started workin on this guy.

>>3164528
>>3164531
nice scribbles. for real though: a naruto eye is not a sketch. especially a single one. for the second one, think of a drawing like a work of architecture - get the structure right first, make sure it holds up before you start adding any kind of details (with my analogy you could think of it as "you don't put the tv on the wall before the wall is standing").

>>3195349
What do your friends think of your art?

>>3164831
Love the Sorolla study.

>>3195375

>>3195377

Pretty much a study, the blood on the mouth is a silly addition. Let me know what you guys think!

>>3195648
I enjoy art that deals with the menstrual cycle but there is such a thing as being too obvious. Use colour, shape and line instead.

>>3195385
your enviro sketches are nice, figure is a bit behind but I'm sure you know this. Keep it up anon!

>>3195750
>submits in sketchbook thread
>use colour

>>3195750
>>3195757
ignore the beginner senpai

>>3193753
Is this digital? If not, what did you use to color the grey area

>>3195761
Anon, what are you doing? This is a sketchbook thread, why do I see colour?

>>3195764
This is literally in my sketchbook.

>>3195766
Reminds me of Quebec City.

>>3195757
It's a very well-drawn and dignified portrait, but you're using blood to accentuate a perceived irony. It's not ironic to appear dignified while menstruating, yet there are momentary ironies within that process.

WIP after Gestel. Henri's notion of original motive is on my mind atm. I want to alter the jawline, neck and lips.

>>3195343
nah. just practicing paneled stuff for comics

>>3157594

>>3195761
It's a traditional sketch but I added the grey in photoshop just so my gallery isn't full of white

>>3196541
>>3196591
Resize, guys.
Also, is the second one supposed to look like a burn victim?

>>3196234
the back leg looks short, nice dergs
>>3195349
is that from imagination or using references?
>>3190491
next time try to use a sketch notebook

>>3185199
this reminds me of emi from dotto koni chan

>>3197937
Yeah, I can definitely see the similarities, with the tv head and what not.

>>3157624
Dont radiate the tones with your fingers instead try to tone the shadows with lineworka.What you have done is too amateruish and doesnt even help you to improve

>>3185199
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iNR5vxAR22A
Reminds me of Amiga.

Im doing a doodling series right now in my sketchbook. Heres the current project so far

https://youtu.be/aRjqqFU_wQo
https://youtu.be/funj4V3uWCg
https://youtu.be/d9zrVVlLWCQ

>>3198259
A old pc monitor is fine too.

>>3198388
What am I looking at here?

>>3198396
A sketch done in a bus at rush hour.

>>3198401
The highlights are really nice. I'm afraid some low the designs work against the form of the plant particularly the top one

>>3198934

>>3198935

>>3181704
instagram?

>>3198937

Starting to get back on drawing. I have a ways to go.

>>3198934
Yeah, not going to lie, my understanding of light and shadow is next to non existent or is it rather a problem with form? Any way, Thanks for the feedback my dude.

>>3195335
No teachers. You just turn up, pay the ten euros and draw the model for a couple hours.

Sum watercolour.

>>3199440
Nice furniture dude. Although, the mirrored bottom left one is getting ridiculously distorted.

>>3199440
No problem. Keep at it. Btw nice perspective there

>>3199026
Noice.

If it were possible try do something to solidify the tube of the guy in the back, it feels a bit too plain now. Maybe making it go around his back?

>>3199639
Yeah, I kinda went too fast with those, not setting up properly. The others look fine, but the bottom left did get fucked pretty badly

>>3199638
I like it anon, but plz resize.

>>3199655
Did you wing your vanishing points or do them manually?
Also, you have nice skills with the line, with line weight and confidence, but your coloring skills are a little... basic? Your coloring is neat, i can say that, though you should probably get a color theory book.
Besides, your type of coloring kinda slightly flattens your forms. Not that this is bad, it's an okay aesthetic. Your plant drawing, colored, looks like it would be the end result of a neat person coloring an masterful illustration from a coloring book. But I feel like with you studying forms and stuff, you do want to add more three dimensionality, yes? Probably with some color gradation or something.

>>3199669
With those I just slapped on random vp`s on the paper, so I did not find the SP or place vp`s correctly in the 90 degrees in total or anything.

Yeah, I kind just slap colors in with markers and sometimes with color pencils. You are right, I'm not trying to make it look flat, it's just my lack of skill. I am planning on studying colors after values, I heard that good coloring is mostly being good with values.

Thank you for the nice words and feedback, anon.

>>3199652
Thanks mayne.

>>3198954
I think its cute anon, I would recommend you pick up Keys to drawing or Drawing on the right side of the brain. Keep drawing.

>>3193766
Good on you, for tackling such a hard subject matter. Keep it up!

I haven't had the chance to draw much this semester. Hopefully over the break I can do more again

>>3202953

>>3202953
>>3202955
You can do it, I belive in you anon.

Just kinda throwing characters at walls at the moment

>>3196646
it's sterwers

I'm enjoying my first Vilppu lessons.

>>3204292
Dummy forgot his image.

>>3204298

So this is how babby is formed.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=FGEhWQN0FBM&t=5s /

>>3204298
Really solid looking work dude, keep at it.

>>3204908
Did you use a reference?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gBY4Z4N95lw ,

>>3199440
Couple of diagrams for my notes. I think the mirrored tilted object is wrong, seems like mirroring tilted objects without a grid is a fool's errand

Practicing before I make a big finished piece

one of my latest sketches

Study done in class
I fucking love this paper and charcoal

Garbagecamera.jpg

>>3207926
I wish I was allowed to draw like that in my drawing classes.

>>3208334
you can't?
how come?

what's a good ink + watercolor sketchbook?

>>3207920
That's not a sketch, but a finished piece. A nice one at that.

>>3207607
yea, dont know where it is

dumpin some recent pages, as always any feedback is great.

>>3211245

>>3211245
more

>>3211245
yet more

>>3211245
and more

>>3211245
almost done

>>3211245
2 left

>>3211245
and some asses to finish things off

>>3208321
The composition is very highschool-tier.

>>3211363
How do you mean?

>>3172630
I like your style but those leafs are way to visually heavy, it'd look better if they were just lines with no fill like everything else.

pen, studies, 5-10 min
Trying to draw boxes to help with the forms. Why do I suck?

>>3211972


Its much harder to do figure studies without using a real life reference and an instructor.

For instance you learning with a live model and most importantly a sighting stick would help alot with training your eye to recognize body proportions.

>>3164831
Is this done with a .5 micron??

>>3211980

So it just can't be helped? I don't have time/money for a live model. Best I could get would be a mirror. Okay, so my proportions are off, you mean? Can I learn it by sheer repetition and guestimating?

>>3211997
not the guy but you can 100% learn by yourself

Trying to make some art friends

>>3172630
>>3172634
thank god

>>3175393
if youre going to draw something otherworldly, why are you making it humanoid

>>3157594

>>3181556
>>3212298

>>3212299

>>3190491
if youre making something abstract, why are you making it 3d

>>3199026
very cool

>>3175396
you did very well on the flag. Work on your anatomical structure. If you overlook the anatomoy you did pretty good on the pose and perspective. especially since its not an easy pose to draw

>>3208321
i like this

>>3211245
you have talent
talent without hard work is wasted

I've been listening to a lot of that 80's synth stuff. Violence, Speed, and Momentum baby.

>>3212307
wow, a regular master yoda.

It feels like the break is already almost over. Ah well

>>3179194
Nose bones?

>>3173677
Frans Hals made some portraits of my ancestor

>>3164831
dope shit anon, stick with it, even if its hard.

>>3173677
i dig it anon, but dont mistake sketchbook for artwork

>>3195648
Ana de Armas

>>3211253
Holy shit it's P-Orridge!

Sketched myself in the reflection on a train.

>>3212278 I like your pen work mate.

>>3213625

just drawing lines to make things a bit darker, isn't serving your drawing
you can feel that the lines are quick, unmotivated and have nothing to do with any texture, body or light situation.

also tracing the same line again exactly how it was, doesn't make up for mistakes. instead, you'd want to draw a bit off, in a way that feels better to you (e.g. arm is too thick, so you draw a line more inside of the arm, instead of tracing the existing line as it is)

>>3211258

all of those seem very cold and technical. i'm a critic of those strict anatomical schematics. you get exactly what shows in your sketches: rather cold studies.
what you really need to practice more is getting some passion in there, some inspiration. your lines are just what they are, lines. i'm just not getting into it, from what i see.

Digital sketch

>>3198937
firez thicc

>>3214382
>digitalposters in the SKETCHBOOK thread
Every goddamn time, I bet you're the type of man who does Inktober with the "pen" tools on your drawing software.

>>3207677
More diagrams for my notes on: Draft/Orthogonal view, Assembly/ exploded view, transferring scale and a object drawing using the Brewer method.

>>3214464

>>3214457
thx for the (You)

>>3214618
(Y-(you) too

>>3176998
Bargue Book

something I did in art class

>>3174486
what are those white highlights?

>>3214748
I used Pentel white gel pen for highlights.

I've got a shitload of sketches, but can't scan them. Photographing them looks terrible since I am not satisfied with my phone camera or how I shoot them.
It's mostly tribal houses and Beksinski inspired shit.

>>3195761
reminds me of some of the stuff ive seen on the california missions. Love it

>>3198363
cute

Quick Sketch I did for social media

>>3193581
rick and morty number one XDDDD

>>3211981
>>3213544
thanks

Tried using my brush pens in tandem with a brush and some water.

>>3216126

>only draw young girls
>consider myself a potential sex offender.

finaly scanned

Had fun with the new Kyle Webster brushes after they came with the PS CC update

>>3216131

Fucking nice man!

>>3216131
Did you use references ? anyway, fucking love the flow of lines.

>>3214654
oof, these are nice my guy. wish it were a bit darker though, other than that that great

Little study I did

ballpoint pen no reference

>>3213601
Reminds me of Gunstar Heroes, nice

(Autistic shit incoming)

Trying out perspective

>>3217590
Pretty good but why bother doing a study if you're not going to study the structure or color theory or anything?
>>3217841
As if you'd be able to remember all those muscles without even being able to properly use a pen. No shame in saying you used a reference.

>>3217841
>no reference
no shit, i can tell by how far the deltoid is, the deltoid should be close to the armpit but you have the breast muscles there instead, they don go up that far. the breast muscles attach to only a small fraction of the clavicle, the deltoid takes up most of it. you have the entire breast connecting to the clavicle. belly button is too high, it should be leveled with the pelvis. the leg muscles are going way too low, gives it the impression that this guy has a low hanging loose ass., youre missing bones on the pelvis. arms are too short and broken. youre bending the the torso in the wrong area.

sOmE StUfF

>>3218874

>>3218875

>>3218882
Do you have more and/or a blog? I'd like to study more of your draws

>>3218964
yes and yes
I will updato with more when I get a chance friend.

>>3216684
whoa

>>3221565

This looks like the sort of painting that Pablo Ruiz and pals would throw darts at during a party.

>>3169524
I cringe at your soulless composition

>When an Eskimo has a complaint to make against another he challenges him to a drumming-contest (Danish: Trommesang). The clan or tribe thereupon gathers at a festal meeting, all in their finest attire and injoyful mood. The two contestants then attack one another in turn with opprobious songs to the accompaniment of a drum, each reproaching the other with his misdemeanours. No distinction is made between well-founded accusations, satirical remarks calculated to tickle the audience, and pure slander. For instance one singer enumerated all the people who had been eaten by his opponent's wife and mother-in-law during a famine, which caused the assembled company to burst into tears. This offensive chanting is accompanied throughout by all kinds of physical indignities directed against your opponent, such as breathing and snorting into his face, bumping him with your forehead, prizing his jaws open, tying him to a tent-pole-all of which the "accused" has to bear with equanimity and a mocking laugh. Most of the spectators join in the refrains of the song, applaudingandeggingthepartieson. Othersjustsitthereandgo to sleep. During the pauses the contestants converse in friendly terms. The sessions of such a contest may extend over a period of years, during which the parties think up new songs and new misdeeds to denounce. Finally the spectators decide who the winner is. In most cases friendship is immediately re-established, but it sometimes happens that a family emigrates from shame at having been defeated. A person may have several drumming matches running at the same time. Women too can take part.

Geraldo. Not the talk show host.

https://youtu.be/CsKqBy2uJ34

The background turned out well, but too much is being squeezed in.

I think I should start posting in these threads

>>3223069

>>3223071

>>3164831
@Evaneley, if you're still around.. DO YOU HAVE MORE FROM THAT SKETCHBOOK PLEASE ? I love what you did with short lines.

>>3211253
My favorite.
I like your style, Anon

>>3221370
Thanks anon

>>3212300
And Cthulhu isn’t humanoid to you? His imagination is the best engine for something like otherwordly beings.

>>3223069
>>3223073
>>3223071
Love your penwork man, keep it up!

>>3223431

Clean my dude. <3

>>3223431
holy shit man is this yours

>>3218874
>>3218875
>>3218882
really dig these, remind me of masaaki yuasa

Some are from photos, some from an actual model
Help, I want to improve

>>3195385
Digging this a lot, nice.

>>3218964
>>3223491
thanks!! love that guy. also, dude, my blog is @mobble on tumblr.

Deer sketches

>>3213437
That's what I also thought, im guessing its not suppose to be a human skull

>>3223260
yeah pm on insta or tumblr and i can show you the whole thing, i've got 2 of them where i drew like that i think