/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3155392
Sketch and finished lineart, crits welcome.

>>3155398
I also did this too, possibly my best work.

>>3155398
The little faces on the souls holy crap
I love this

>>3155392

>>3155392
>Important advices to consider when advancing in your endeavors: https://a.pomfe.co/rozdale.jpg
What did you mean by this Chicocalte?

Looking for critique and advices.

>>3155465
as a tourist japan will welcome you and your ameribucks with open arms. as a permanent resident, much less so, culturally and politically japan seems to be heading down the ugly road of nationalism (and before you start whining about immigrants remember, you're the immigrant in this case). also unless you're heading up the next big shonen hit (or a popular doujinshi, you'd be surprised what they can net) you're making shit for money and working horrible hours regardless. no clue why one would want to live in japan doing comics for a living when one considers the full gravity of the shituation.

>>3155465
exactly what the image says

>>3155468
the face really throws me off. Is it a bit small?

>>3155468
>FAT thighs but otherwise chicken legs
why? the proportions look weird af. Also her face is super small with all of her features squished to the bottom, might wanna fix that.

>>3155468
the outline looks like you applied a stroke filter to the layer. It should vary in thickness. Thick in darker areas and almost imperceptible near highlights. The smooth render painting style also clashes with the thick outline look. Unify either go one was or the other.

>>3155398

>>3155676
Do you do any cleaner or more-accurate-to-the-final-drawing sketches before you start lining? I find it really difficult to keep the integrity of my sketch while doing line art or can't draw as freely compared to sketching. Your lineart is always so lively, so if you have any tips, that would be great.

Lineart done, third eye is a bit funky but I want to finish this soon
>>3155381
good shit but post more next time not just a little sketch

>>3155702
How do you get such appealing lines?

drew a parrot

>>3155711
Oh nice! Is it finally time for the digital era with Brian?

>>3155714
here we go, baby

>>3155714
time to make that furry porn money

>>3155709
read this book and do the exercises, seriously.
I'm not even a quarter way through and my lines improved dramatically.

>>3155392
haven't lurked /ic/ in ages. does wakkawa still post here?

why? he was clearly too good for this god forgotten place.

>>3155749
fuck off wakaka

>>3155769
kek

i want to draw more nudes and lewds but i'm not very good at it. also does anyone know of any decent guides/tips on drawing feet?

>>3155392
this is the most accurate quote ever quoted.

>>3155392
Crit?

PS4 logo and CERO logo are obviously placeholders till I come up with mock ones.

>>3155503
Well, just make the next big shounen hit. Seems simple enough.

how does this look so far? i think something is off proportionately, but i can't see what it is

>>3155891
cute but those screentones just arent working, they just add noise to the picture. I think the picture would look better if you scaled down the screentones or just used greys

I know the lines are sloppy, but the overall design is what I need help with. Any suggestions that isn't involved with clean lines?

Had fun experimenting with this today.

>>3155944
Blog?

>>3155944
i follow you on deviantart

>>3155944
the tangent from her mouth the the lock of hair in her face is triggering me, but otherwise, pretty

Do you think the eyes look weird, I think so. This is what I'm working on right now, this is my first stabilization painting or drawing, I don't know how to call it.

>>3155945
https://myangelpudding.tumblr.com
(There's a link to my deviantart on there too, I'm more active on DA if you're actually interested, just ignore the cringe I guess)

>>3155953
For some reason that's the last response I expected to get, definitely not a bad one though

>>3155961
Ah I never noticed that until now, thanks for pointing it out. I definitely see how that's irritating.

>>3155944
That is cute. It's her your wifu?

>>3155962
Stylization Painting*

>>3155929
nice, blog?

>>3154300
No blog sorry friend

>>3154365
I tried to make the lineweighting more subtle but i did end up being lazy and inconsistent. As for the arms and legs, i'm redrawing something for a friend and this was the original pose (roughly)

>>3154776
Ill try render the hair strands as overlapping and separate, you're right that it looks too clumped

ty friends

>>3155921
utilise her quirk

>>3155812
The blur you put on the fire guys hand is horrible imo.

Is this good enough to start cleaning up /ic/

>>3155780
1) Just draw
2) youtube has hundreds of thousands of videos on this

>>3156129
Yeah this'll really clean out the place! This image saved /ic/

>>3156129
Fix your arm proportions and perspective, Bro. Also may want to take a peak at that neck.

am I better yet

>>3156409
that ear/jaw/neck area looks all wrong. improve on your drawing before you go into rendering.

>>3156413
i'm not even the op, but it would be a lot more useful to them if you actually told them how those areas looked wrong and how they could be fixed

>>3156409
>>3156420

>>3156446
that's wrong

>>3155676
Your value step is more appealing than the final image

>>3156409

>>3156471
>Manjaw

>>3156490
just getting the point across. OP's ear was so retarded because she had no distinct jaw, and that neck wouldn't have held her bobblehead up.

drew a twitter personality and got bored halfway through so i scribbled all over it.

>>3156513
also im pregnant

>>3156469
i heavily disagree

>>3156517
this

>>3155702
Done with this, I feel like I could've been more adventurous with the colours and had darker shadows though. Any other things to reflect on?

>>3156564
As a casual observer it's plain to see that her hand on her upper hip is much, much smaller than the one on her leg. This might be intentional but again, as someone who doesn't know the context of this character's model it just looks silly as hell.

>>3155392
What kind of hair would fit him, or is this ok with some clean up?

>>3156570
I think that's one of the main arms. The lower arms may be smaller in size like the under bust

>>3156570
>>3156606
I thought I fixed that, fuck I might have used the wrong layer. It's not intentional, for reference pic is the original art from SMT

>>3156714
Take your trash art back to beg. Youre also regressing with your color theory.

>>3156718
post your work :0

>>3156726
>>3156783
There you go.

>>3156792
that aint you

>>3156783
Fuck can you draw on anything other than gimp. Also learn to fucking render something other than a face.

>>3156819
well, i can render boobs

>>3156837
post your boobs

>>3156838

>>3156848

>>3156848
No you can't, are you pretending to be a bad artist that ticked you off?

>>3156848
You do not fully understand the underlying form of breasts and their behavior.

>>3156851
>>3156853
my boobs, my rules.

I honestly don't know what to think. I only really like the fish looking one. Thoughts ?

is her head too big?

>>3157079
no but the torso is, as well as the place of the belly button, among other things

>>3157118
like this?

>>3157118
like this?
edit: also noticed that the second leg is too long

How do I make not wonky uneven dorito anime faces?

>>3157211
Draw more real people, learn human proportions and anatomy first.

>>3157257
How do I make not wonky uneven loomis heads

>>3157257

This doesn't even help. Anime eyes are so unevenly spaced it makes everything you've learn go to waste.

Left or right?

>>3157285
right

>>3157285
both arent bad, the right is easier to read, but the one on the left makes him seem more ominous to any possible small figure he's approaching.

>>3157279
>anime eyes are unevenly spaced
What are you going on about?

>>3157257
>>3157279
That's what I was wondering, how do I Loomis for anime, the facial proportions are pretty different

>>3157079
>>3157118
>>3157182
looks alright now?

>>3157303
original was better

I've been trying to learn new styles and this one spoke to me, but I have a question. How do I achieve this kind of linework? especially the one on the right.

I'm used to erasing mine after painting because it always looks too rough. I assume it isn't done on photoshop? All the brushes I've seem are a little "barbaric". They're great for sketching, but kinda bad for this fine deal. I've thought about using masks and the pen tool, but I'm not too familiar with them.

>>3157359
try SAI or get a stabilizer for Photoshop dude, makes your lines a million times smoother

>>3157303

>>3157362
Not him, but what are some good stabilizers? I tried getting Lazy Nezumi a couple different times in different computers and either I'm fucking retarded and don't know how to activate it/maybe wasn't compatible with my computer, or it just wasn't doing anything for my lines.

>>3157362
Thanks for the tips mate. I've searched and the stabilizer is something I hadn't heard of, but they either 1) are paid 2) seem a little too clunky. I'll try downloading SAI then.
Oh, but let me ask this: Is it counter productive to use SAI for linework and photoshop for all the rest? I really like all it's other functions.

>>3157359
I've been experimenting with drawing line work at high resolution like 4k 300dpi then shrinking down when I go to paint it. I was getting annoyed with muddy anitaliasing on my hatching. Playing with the 'dual brush' option crisped up my edges how I liked. This is one example of a test I did inked in PS

Personal opinion: line stabilizing in programs are a crutch and help bad habits and poor muscle memory develop. Also, it makes the art look stiff and robotic no matter how much you play with the line thickness. I'm old school though and practice my draftsmanship daily.

>>3157379
Tbh I've only heard of Lazy Nezumi, so sadly I can't recommend anything else. I'm an SAI pleb so that's just what I prefer for lineart, but if you can't find a good stabilizer you probably have to rely more on quick strokes to get clean linework. Sorry mang

>>3157381
No. Plenty of artists that do that, you should be fine.

>>3157383
Oh fuck, that's amazing work mate. I'll experiment with that as well. Shame my monitor is garbage, however. Cheers.

To get in the spirit for Inktober I printed, inked and colored a Toriyama piece.

>>3156909
These are super cool

happy birthday

>>3157618
Neat. Should be used as 404

>>3155944
she's making a retarded face like she's pooping

>>3157618
absolutely sick

>>3157618
best think I've seen all day

>>3157618
>that muddy blending
>shitty strokes
NGMI

>>3155929
how do i get to a point where i can do this?

>>3157783
Elaborate anon?

Working in a new sketchbook I just bought.

>>3155398
Working on the next one, it's gonna be a cafe.

>>3155398
>>3157981
I love your shit.

>didn't draw anything in a year
>manual skill is basically unscathed
>can't think anything decent to draw
What the fuck

>>3158048

Great news, you unlearned everything you've learned! You get to start over fresh!

>>3158048
You haven't "unlearn" anything, you just got rusty and you need some time to bring all skills back. It's a good moment to do fundies, start with basic lines and cubes

>>3155503
>Nationalism >Ugly
You must be new here.

Damn this lighting. How'd I do?

>>3158852
Work on your composition, all the attention goes towards that orb and those arrows pointing to it are not helping.

>>3158852

>>3157590
Thank you anon I appreciate it. Which do you like better?

>>3156446
That's right.

>>3158867
This was my goal for the picture since she's charging an attack, but ty!

>>3158877
Nice, I can see a few big differences with that. Thank youuu

>>3158892
If that was the case you need to have her body tell us she's attacking.

Any thoughts on improving the framing/focus of this?

>>3158902
Blog?

>>3158852
Holy shit, how did you get so good?

My inktober drawing for today. Fucked up the proportions a lot

>>3159032
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=2564922

>>3157981
Finished the lineart

>>3159050
>that first bookmark
Could have sworn that person was on /ic/

>>3155503
There is literally nothing wrong with nationalism, quite the opposite. Japan has every right to be nationalistic just as every other country and I'm going to respect that.

>>3159038
It's all about working fucking forever on a single piece anon
I could go over my process for you if you want, but really you just have to nail a good sketch and go from there

>>3159451
I would love it if you did! A good sketch is almost like luck though isn't it? Or do you do thumbnails before them? Or perhaps just really work on making the sketch look good?

>>3158684
>>3159301
lol

>>3159474
Drawing is never about luck imo, outside of that pleasant time when you get a few strokes that look really damn good. This is the about the quality of my sketch before I start- reason some areas look incredibly clean in comparison to others is because some of those forms have to be defined the most. I'm not going to sketch out every perfect line for some goddamn hair, because the flow is just what matters, but I will sketch out the hands because getting them accurate enough for the lineart is needed.
Next, lineart is just lineart. Make it super smooth (I worked entirely on SAI for this one, so stabilizers make it ez), make it semi-thin.
And now, sometimes I'll put in the base color for the character and thumbnail for interesting lighting(I always try to use at least 2-3 light sources) but for this one I knew where the light was going to be coming from. To help me get an accurate vision of that, I actually did the simple background and the special effects on/around the staff first, while keeping in mind how I could take advantage of the lights to make the shapes clearer. I wanted everything vibrant, so I used a lot of luminosity tricks and highly saturated blues/purples
For actually shading, I made sure to set the base colors to their accurate cooler shades to fit the setting, and used a dark blue multiply layer to make the half of the body further away from the staff darker. Another multiply layer adds in the especially dark shadows. All of the major light comes from a blue screen layer that I just shaped to fit the light source I already set up, and right over that I add an overlay layer with textures on the fabric, mostly only on the portions you could see best.
Keep in mind while doing this that your skin tone is going to start looking very desaturated and bad. I counter this by painting on the base color for my skin and adding shadows for it separate when I need to. (1/2)

>>3159507
(2/2)
Lastly, I just add the especially shiny parts of the drawing to make it pop out better, and paint over what doesn't look good. Anything that doesn't look saturated enough you can just swipe some subtle luminosity colors over, and eventually reach the point where you're satisfied.

Shading is the hardest thing for me personally, so my layers get a bit messy. But that's the basics of what I did for this one. I should add that all of the colors and layers for the character were separated by clipping groups- this makes it 10x easier to manipulate everything and not struggle with going out of the lines. If I wasn't clear on something or you want more detail on a certain step, I'll try to clarify it for you.

idk

The face really bothers me, but I was trying a different process and made myself finish it roughly in the time I'm home.

>>3159547
Are you not home often?

>>3159548
no, but i'm always super tired after work and find it really hard to not doze off

>>3159554
What kind of work do you do and how long do you work?

>>3159556
9 to 7ish, working as an artist too

>>3159547
fixed

>>3159554
don't answer
>>3159556
This is how internet buttstalking starts and as far as we know he could be a jealous autist trying to dig up some dirt.

>>3159559
kek

>>3159560
Too slow

>>3155844
go back to /beg/ please before you start drawing in a style you should nail the fundamentals and study actual anatomy before doing anime. to answer your question, the major proportion problem is that the nose and mouth are in the wrong places but i cant tell for sure because the linework isnt very clean.

>>3157279
>>3157292
Draw east Asian models/actors/good cosplayers. It's what Japanese animation vocational schools teach, and its the aspect of reality that modern anime characters are based off of.

>>3157289
He probably means widely-spaced because most anime styles don't draw the inner canthus, which makes the eyes look closer together than they really are.

Skin and portrait doodle, trying to draw from imagination but I'll have to look for reference for highlights which I can't quite grasp yet without it

>>3159060
that's lovely

>>3155944
Did another headshot. I tend to do this shit where I mess up the line from the shoulder to neck without noticing, and it ends up looking a bit hunched.

Also, tablet pen broke. Waiting for that to come in the mail.

>>3160023
I like your penis shaped palette swatches

I MAKE NOISES WITH MY MOUTH

I love pigeon girl. I want to marry pigeon girl.

>>3155676
push the shadows contrast in the final pic

the values were lost! at least push the cote shadows

>>3160333
Teach me how to color senpai !

>>3160336
>pigeon girl
I always see her posted but I've never been able to find more than the same 2 images of her. What her name and where can I find more?

Weird question, but did you guys decide to draw anime/stylized at some point or is that what you wanted to draw from the start?
I'm confused because I'm in a situation where the only form of style I ever knew was only created by my mistakes in trying to make my drawing as realistic as possible.

>>3160727

I lot of people born in the 90s get started drawing anime because the 90s to early 00s was when it was at its honeymoon era in the states. It's just what we grew up with and are fond of. Similarly the 80s kids draw cape comics.

i need help with this, i feel something is wrong but can't find what.

>>3160752
lmao

>>3160752
This is a good face.

>>3160783
loomis

>>3160808
what a bad use of the meme

>>3160783
You can tell from your changes from the sketch layer. You shortened the torso by too much.

>>3160752
aren't you the guy whose fetish is giant muscular fang blonde headband sweaty loli who destroys cities
nice to see you move on to front butt fetish

>>3160752
You've probably noticed but hip area could use some fixing

Do you ever do lineart?

Is there any general guidelines to do subtle colors?

I have tried several times in the past but I ended up overdoing to the point I have to render the whole thing

>>3161054
What do you mean by subtle colors? Do you have an example?

i did this today and its better than the drawings i put effort into

>>3160803
What do you mean?
>>3160806
Thanks
>>3160823
Yes
>>3160825
I used to do lineart in my older works, but I moved on to a more painting style

>>3155676
do you post your work anywhere?

>>3161091
no its an unoriginal copy of a cat meme ive seen redrawn all over the internet

>>3156714
I like it.

>>3161154
he knows what he said

How fucked up is the foreshortening and anatomy of this arm? Redlines appreciated.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=doEwWzMz99A

>>3160783
blog?

>>3160581
liljeep2000 ksenia soyfer, if you're interested in this girl. You might also enjoy:
sabrina nichole
pip the friendly alien ks
lauren tsai
kira rausch
katya lischina
contrachloe
kina shen
etc.

>>3161244
Subduing the ligament kind of makes it look better to me but I'm sure something consequential is still amiss.

>>3161154
ya thats the point anon

>>3161295
i guess i forgot to clarify that it was a drawing of that cat. i thought ppl would have known it was a redraw? or is it not recognizable enough and im meme stealing

>>3157839
trying to fill sketchbooks as quick as possible

>>3161412

microbikini

>>3161508
Dems some titties.

Only thing wrong with it is that I think her hands should be a slightly lower to align more with the knees.

>>3158902
ass must be real huge for a tail like that

>>3161508
>tits so big she can't even stand
poor abomination wants to be put to rest :(

>>3161508
muh dick

>>3161690
kys urself fgt

>>3161691
>finding those 'boobs' attractive
why do you like crippled girls anon?

>>3161767
Not him, but it's okay we all know your flat chest and tight little butt is far superior in both aesthetics and tastes and only subhuman assman degenerates prefer grotesque head sized proportions.

>>3161690
>:(
>>3161767
>those "boobs" attractive
This is why girls shouldn't post here

Opinions? Trying to translate the design from the game is hard.

How do you work the proportion for "basic anime styles" ?
Like how do you adapt the eyes compared to realistic proportions?

>>3158902
Show feet

>>3159535
>https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=2564922
Flawed but I kinda like it

how is the perspective?

>>3161948
So good, blog?

>>3161952
have no blog, just started digital art

>>3161952
That was very useful. Work on your art instead of spreading negative energy because you hate some aspects of your life.

>>3161959
Create one I want to see more and spectate your progress.
>>3161965
>Nobody asks for my blog
Stop projecting.

>>3161968
oh wow thanks, didn't knew you were serious, I'll think about that blog

>>3161973
No problem m8 just don't let those spreading that negative energy because they hate some aspects of their lives.

>>3161973
No problem m8 just don't let those spreading that negative energy get to you because they hate some aspects of their lives.

>>3161976
>>3161973
Oh well, if you were actually serious I'm sorry, considering the harsh criticism around here in general I thought you weren't (cause the drawing is clearly beginner level by all aspects if OP wanna know. Do clean lines or fix them. Work on anatomy and perspective in general, sorry)

>>3161986
yea I did a quick sketch, ill do the lines later, just wanted to know if anything was off (perspective/anatomy)

>>3161248
>kina
>katya
>kira
While Ksenia is in a whole other league, these girls are there with her.

along with [pic related] the anzu, of course.

I haven't drawn anything in a while. Feel pretty bad.

>>3162436
Draw a head or whatever you comfort zone is, now. Don't question it. Do it.

>>3162436
What I did was drew along youtube video tutorials. It didn't matter how shitty it was so as long as I had fun. I was able to get back in the groove in 2 weeks. Try that.

>>3162023
i ve grown to REALLY dislike anzu. i would rant about it, but youre a man of culture, so youll soon realize her deception.

>>3162615
post a new drawing and rant

Why you guys like all this doll like grils? Gee man so much make up..
I don't see the appeal

>>3162674

what?

>>3162454
>draw your comfort zone

Not gonna make it.

Ive never tried rendering a figure before help

>>3162859
Well the lighting isn't bad but the skirt could use some. Also her legs feel a bit odd because her knees are slightly bent yet she doesn't appear to be in motion. What specifically did you want help with?

>>3162879
I dunno how to render a skirt or jeans or the shirt ive been trying for ages and reverting back to this

>>3162859
on the right track
you just need to practice dividing objects into planar structures

>>3161917
You draw it in what ever way you think looks good

>>3162023
I'd have to agree with nosebro on this one. Your stuff is all the same, same stale and dull shit on a stick everytime that it makes me want to throw up..

>>3162859

>>3155423
Damn nice lines, senpai.

>>3157783
Fuck off crab-bucket nigger.

>>3155423
lol.

i started watching those youtube concept artist speedypainty type videos and got really excited to draw things today
then i started drawing and got steadily less excited over the course of three hours or so
yes, i am slow.
please rip me a new one. just not concerning the subject because i don't have control over that rn.

>>3162996
Im talking about anzujamuu. not the artist.

>>3163296
Going to be honest senpai, I'm Korean and she does not look Asian to me at all.

Pic related was literally my first impression.

>>3163301
well it says asian girl cause she started asian but it doesnt matter now

>>3162831
It was just to start him out if he says he can't draw. Usually for me when I can't draw just starting one small stuff that is supposed to take 5 mn ends up hooking me for hours.

>>3161244
>>3161255
This is the most work I've ever put into a drawing, I didn't know what the fuck I was doing pretty much the entire time but I tried to correct issues where I was capable of seeing them. Will I surpass Dobson some day?

>>3155891
Your linework isn't dark or high-contrast enough to work with screen tones.

>>3155962
don't render the eyes too much.
Keep the bounce light distinct from the highlight.

>>3163580
reconsider the use of a flat brush on a smooth, round form.

It can work for the hair. You just need to make your strokes follow the form of the hair

>>3163623
yeah, I need to mess around with more brushes.

>>3163580

>>3163711
Go back to BEG. I fucking hate seeing your art. Faggot.

>>3163720
post your work :0

>>3163724
So you can shit on it?

>>3163779
I'm sure it looks good, come on :O

>>3163781
Well it's better than anything you'll ever be able to produce

>>3163791
Wow I kinda like it. sad that the person who drew is a dick

>>3163797
Very sad indeed

>>3163801
How's it sad?

>>3163804
You're stuff's really good, yet you're so hasteful.

>>3163807
your*

>>3163807
>>3163809
Hasteful or hateful? Ironically, if I wasn't a hateful person I probably wouldn't be doing art in the first place. Hate is what fuels my desire to make art.

>>3163720
this

>>3163810
you do you I suppose

>>3163813
You sound like a woman. Anyway, I don't really dislike your art, I was just meme'ing. Have a good day, sir.

>>3163812
why so mad lol, his art is lacking coherence sometimes and looks wonky but its aesthetically quite pleasing imo

idk

>>3162615
The thing is, like a lot of girls recently, she is dressing up AS my art. Hair style, makeup, fashion.
>>3162996
How much does it pain you to see the most beautiful ladies in the world taking a part in the new renaissance that I starteeedddddd. Call it EGO all you want but it's still happening.

>>3164156
>How much does it pain you to see the most beautiful ladies in the world taking a part in the new renaissance that I starteeedddddd.
The what?

>>3164156
how do you know it was you and not the other way around?
i've seen that style of gilrls since forever

>>3164166
At some point, playing dumb just comes back around to just being dumb.
>>3164198
we all know it was me.

>>3164219
>At some point, playing dumb just comes back around to just being dumb.
I'm not the guy you were replying to, I don't know who the fuck you are or what the hell you're talking about.

>>3164225
;)

>>3164248
Jesus christ, yeah you weren't wrong about the ego part.

From the ref someone posted. I liked it.

>>3164253
I am literally Jesus Christ reborn, the promised the prince.

Hegemon of Earth.

I am literally God.

And I mean these all in the humblest of ways. I never asked for this and I sure as fuck don't want it.

>>3164219
>we all know it was me.
>we
i think it's just you bruh

>>3164295
>look mom I can pretend like anything I say matters!

>>3164100
>muscle peko

What did I do wrong here?

>>3163580
always like your stuff

>>3164275
this looks really pretty, gj anon

>>3164304
>look mom I can pretend like anything I say matters!

>>3155724
It really helps with digital?

>>3164454
>>3164275
only as good as the reference

It's a it's a WIP
>>3164511
what do you want from me? It's just a sketch.

>>3164733
>what do you want from me? It's just a sketch.
i didn't know it was you, wakkawa. you make great work, but i have personal angst against someone complimenting a study.

>>3164321
Come on, loaders need to be stronk

>>3164100
Now if you would start drawing adult faces...

You guys wanna do this?
>>3163793
>>3163793
>>3163793
I'd be curious to see the map of people aiming for anime/alt styles.

>>3164789
im gonna do this, looks like fun

>>3164733
<3 the colors

>>3164955
Pretty cringy m8.

>>3164955
yo those eyes are looking kinda fucked, besides that looks pretty gud

>>3164955
Like the other anon said it looks good, only her eyes are a bit weird maybe, but I think it depends on what you were going for
Her left eyebrow seems not there though

>>3164959
Posts like these are what's wrong with this board and site
Kindly fuck off

>>3164733
can i pay you for an hour of your time?
i want to improve my portraits(color specifically)

>>3165038
Fuc

How do I into Lee Bermejo?

Am I just here to suffer

>>3165449
Cute, learn lighting

>>3164447
wip, other than the lazy ass collar anything to look out for

some wip i will never finish that i did between my fundies studies.

>>3165449
I like it, but the way the head relates to the neck seems unnatural. Other than that it's cute AF

>>3165449
I like alot how you rendered this! gj

>>3165460
>Monkey Princess® will never go straight up ape on your wing-a-ling-a-ding-ding with her sexy monkey tongue

fml

how do i git gud at rendering? also tips

>>3165687
Basic forms and that's it. Looks like you're already getting to it, you just need to finish.

help me color/shade this bitch her skirt, supposed to be a see through cloth

>>3155423
Don't you think it would be better to switch first and second frame, with text remaining in place?

Start with far view of her ass, "damn!", close up of bird thinking "dat ass", then the girl. It would be funnier IMO.

lookin for critque

>>3165771
The face is pretty cute so you've got that going. I think the two biggest non-fundamental issues are the chicken scratching (especially at the bottom) and it seems that you're avoiding drawing hands. You've got to learn them at some point so try drawing them next time.

Make sure you keep going outside of your comfort zone and you'll get there one day.

>>3165687
plz post when finished

>>3155676
oh honey those beautiful values,,,, lost,,, why,,,,

5/100 faces. I'm trying to get 5 faces done per day.

>>3164955
love it my nigga, you got a blog or something?

>>3165877
>>3160346
fixed this

CRITIQUE??
not on the anatomy or values, as it's in a rough stage right now. I want critique on the general look and appeal/attractiveness, does it look good for something like one of those RPG game character concepts?

>>3165876
Fixing some lighting.

a brew thread >>3166323