/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Been working on this, it was originally just a warm up sketch but I decided to color it. The shoulders are a little fucky, and I'll try to fix them.

I've been staring at these motherfucking deltoids for a few minutes wondering which one is the correct one (if either one is) and I'm having the worst case of not being able to decide. Usually I go with what looks better but I don't even know which one that is right now.

I'd like someone with better knowledge/experience to tell me about the aesthetic of longer vs shorter deltoids.

>>3149194
what the fuck?

>>3149282
the one on the left. right one looks like the arm is raised a bit, but the wrist and hand does not match a raised effect, and the far arm wouldn't raised equally in that case either

>>3149194
you chose that picture?! really? these threads are a fucking joke.

>>3149282
i like your lines

no one loves boobies more than I do

how do you start a body? a gesture line? a box? a bunch of circles? Do you just scribble until something that looks vaguely like a torso appears?

I can never commit to practicing a particular way of doing it. Is it unusual or inadvisable to constantly change the way you do things? I hate having no reliable way of doing things since it always feels like I'm guessing, but I'm also too afraid of making the 'wrong' choice to stop experimenting

>>3149339
blog

>>3149339
You're like a better and more appealing Firez

>>3149320
I see it now, thanks dude.

>>3149336
Thanks! I've been trying to get a better grasp of linework, shapes and graphic design in general (hence why I wanted to pick dat perfect deltoid), and start applying it to my work all the time. This sketch is just a template I'll use for testing some alternative designs, but even in minor stuff like this I'm trying to apply it and make a habit out of it. I want my shit to look A E S T H E T I C. Though idk if I'm doing it right/where I can improve.

>>3149339
Duuude, I saw you on the last thread. Blog?

haven't put pen to paper in a long time; there's a lot wrong with this but it felt good to see something through

>>3149439
The upper arms look a little long, but otherwise cool as fuck. You warming up for inktober?

opinions thoughts (inb4 its shit)

>>3149442

thanks, yeah I am. Just bought a fat stack of Bristol and some new red ink to play with

send help

>>3149447
The neck seems a little bit long maybe that's just me tho

>>3149439
Why is he so attached to the physical world?

>>3149347
I've been in the same dillemma the last half year, switching up the way I draw constantly feeling confused and unsure, until I found out the secret: just put lines on the paper till it looks good

thoughts on design?
(i know the drawing is not very good btw)

>>3149615
I like 4 and 5. They show off flair without going overboard.

>>3149475
You're doing good Riri but your necks still don't connect to the skull properly. I'm not very good at anatomy either but hopefully you'll be able to look past that and still get what I'm trying to show with this little paint over.
Also on a little side note, don't shade with black.

>>3149737
Draw bigger, anon

>>3149521

he's wearing a bunch of physical clothes and living in a physical dead body

if u took art school u'd understand

>>3149282
i really like your big beefy monster/possibly animal dude (i see those not quite yet clawed feet >.>) tho i did noticed you had messed up the forearms a bit anatomically as well as made them a bit too long in relationship to the upper arm, along with the close hand being a little weirdly shaped/positioned and the far shoulder being a bit outta perspective (i also made the far hand a bit bigger to be closer in proportion to redrawn hand)

as far as why i chose the bigger deltoid, i liked the way it felt proportionally with the rest of the arm and in general because of the positioning of the deltoid and how it overlaps the many muscles that tuck into/under it. i drew a quick bad sketch example of how i like to push and exaggerate the arm muscles and it usually involves squashing the middle parts of the upper arm to create a more proportionally dense feeling form

hope this helps an wasn't a complete rambly mess nwn

ALSO ALSO i really like the style and proportions you're playin with (i really REALLY like big beefy dudes), would you mind sharing a place to find more of your work, it's really cute~

>>3149828
God bless you anon, this is enlightening. Yeah it technically wasn't too long ago when I learned forearm anatomy, so I'm still crappy with it.

Sorry to dissapoint, I like drawing muscular monsters and I'm an anatomy enthusiast in general, but I don't have much of the work you're looking for at all. Not to mention I still have to upload more shit in general. There's my artstation where I'll be actively uploading more stuff, hopefully:
https://www.artstation.com/enzofernandez
And my DA which has old stuff, you might find some muscular dudes somewhere in my old sketchdumps maybe.
https://pkblitz.deviantart.com/

I'm already loving your little arm sketch too, so mind sharing a link to your stuff as well?

>>3149353
hey, jace is jace

idek anymore im just trying dynamic poses and angles one step at a time to move on from 3/4 bust shots lmao

>>3149921
EGADS I JUST REALISED THE FINGERS ARE ALL WRONG

I'm not sure if brightening everything up helped or not, but it's something I don't usually do

>>3149352
>>3149361
do you guys get off to pretending or what
>>3149353
people love to copy the original.
>>3149839
This anon get's it.

>>3149940
jesus christ what a blessing you are to your fetish

godspeed you son of a bitch

>>3149940
you know you will eventually do a 9/11 one right?

>>3149754
Not him but thanks anon, I never realized that.

>>3149828
That's a good crit, but I feel like in the process of fixing his anatomy you took away the nice blocky silhouette of the forearm. Same with the proportion, a big forearm implies he can swing harder, which is equally important as correct anatomy.
It's more of an opinion tho, both versions are gud.

>>3149353
It's almost like one is a pro who has worked for EA with several years of experience and does it full time and the other is a miserably depressed old fag with a full time non art related job living in a 3rd world country and has only been drawing since 2013

Work in progress

Ever looked at a part of your sketch and wondered why it looked so weird, only to look up references and see that it's correct in the first place? Maybe I've been symbol drawing too much or something, I dunno.

>>3150135
Nice weighting

>>3150143
To clarify, it might just be because I'm too focused on one small part and can't stop thinking that it looks wrong, only to see that it makes sense when looking at the entire drawing. Might seem silly but I easily scrap a lot of sketches because of it.

>>3150129
Glad it helped!

A little piece I'm working on, not used to working with saturated colors so excuse the mess

>>3150148
Thanks man

>>3150151
WoW shit really needs to die

perspective on the wall panel is off, see how it doesn't follow the table?
arm thing pipe looks dumb and the hand is small
mechanic chicken neck is broken
his chair is missing wheels
why is that goblin glaring at me like that? i really want to punch him

a request I did for /trash/. I hate how this turned out and dont like it at all. tear it apart pls

>>3149940
What's Rin doing here?

>>3150216
100% perfect pls dont change

>>3150216
move the near eye a bit down, they are too assmyetrical imo also the far pupil is much bigger than the near. The ribbon needs to face the direction of her head aswell, unless you intentiontionally placed it so that it would at this tilt be perfectly frontal, in which case stop copping out

>>3150216
boobs too pointy

>>3149940
Get the attention of that guy who commissions all those macro fox/falco images and you'll be in the money.

>>3150094
Cute. There should be more mass at the back of her head and less on the top imo. Lips could be bigger.

I just want a cute kitty girl to snug and pet.

>>3149940
This better not be Mexico

>>3150306
her face is seriously skewed here

>>3149607
How is that any less confused and unsure though?

>>3150319
this betta

>>3150330
More

>>3150330
To me it seems like the right eye is in 3/4 view while the rest of the face is in near-profile, if you switched that eye to profile view I feel it would fix a lot of the problems

>>3150330
Polished turd.

>>3150386
post your work then pleb

>>3149940
Gorgeous senpai!

>>3150330
I love it. I always wanted to see a qualtiy render of a realistic Holo from spice and wolf, and this sates my appetite.

>>3150130
Yep, There are tons of circumstances i just can't help but I will aim to do my best anyway.

>>3150305
Good call anon, I will address those issues or I will scrap if I'm unable to. I guess that's what I get for trying to finish something in a single sitting. Thanks!

>>3150427
The lineart looks decent but those colors are seriously dull. Even if you're trying to go for something subdues, I feel some more contrast in the shading would ass a lot.

>>3149439
I think I've seen your stuff before. You're getting better my dude.

>>3150306
You're trying to show too much of the eyes, the head is almost in profile view but the eyes look like skewed 3/4 eyes, not to mention everything around them lacks proper structure. Her right eye should be hidden a bit more, and in her left eye her eyelids are just completely not following the form of the eyes or the head, sorry if this is obvious but remember the eyeballs are spheres and eyelids are just shit wrapping around them. Look at some references in the same angle and you'll see it, flip the drawing if you haven't yet. The rest is gorgeous so far.

>>3149194

>>3150494
Blog?

>>3150346
>>3150374
>>3150483
You're all wrong.

>>3150386
dat jealousy

Instead we have a shitty ass anime pic with a stick figure body

>>3150586
Then for op's sake, tell him how he could actually improve the portrait

>>3150330
>>3150388
>>3150592

>>3150447
Okay thanks. I was trying to keep them duller, like not going beyond 50% saturation or so. So next time I will try some different things out.

>>3150601
you just made her look black . 0 appeeal

>>3150612
Lmao

>>3150597
>>3150601

>>3150616

>>3150601
dont waste your time giving them (You)s

>>3150616
>super close shot
>wide lens for distortion
>OP didn't didn't follow perspective
Wew

>>3150623
you might be retarded
or blind because >>3150618

>>3150625
What? Her neck/head is jutting forward? It's not a downward angle? She has a man chin or she's jutting it out.

>>3150616
that's a child with a noodle neck and it's at a different angle.

floating heads mostly as usual

>>3150644
Blog?

>>3150173
Been wanting to fix that board for a few days, will try and do that today, pipe is staying but you're right about the hands, chicken's supposed to be able to rotate his little head 180 degrees but if that's not coming across properly i guess I'll have to fix it somehow.

>>3150632
>at a different angle
uhhhh, slightly... which is why I posted the other too.
> noodle neck
no
>that's a child
...and? Are children not human?

or are you implying the face of a child is sexually charged? If so, that's a whole shit ton of projection on your part.

>>3150652
garbage

>>3150665
lmao jealous post your work

>>3150668
jealous of a piss stain filter no mouth or nose anime girl?

>>3150601
What's with the baboon lips? She looks laike a nigger lol

>>3150652

>>3150682
wheres your work. jealous of design.

>>3150702
lmao cute

>>3150713
Why are you such a nasty person?

>>3150721
>call peoples art garbage instead of giving kritik
>gets called out
>why am i such a victim

>>3150724
Oh no I'm actually not that guy. I'm asking in general I never see you post anything and evey comment you post is shitty.

It seems like you are really bad and or frustrated. Which I can sympathize with but if you worked harder you could make it too instead of wasting your time here.

Do you have a blog or anything?

>>3150730
https://daizua123.deviantart.com/ and xnosebro.tumblr.com

>>3150739
Go to sleep NoseBro, it's late and already Monday.

>>3150741
i refuse to 9-5.

>>3150407

>>3150739
Im looking forward to watching your development in the future.

>>3150659
Children have different proportions you mongoloid.
Also what is your point to posting those other angles? To prove I'm right?

>>3149940
i wonder what would be the world's reaction to a kawai gigantess that innocently destroys cities, if it was real

>>3150796
Porn, lots and lots of porn.

>>3150796
They'd just blast it to hell then make anime and movies later

/beg/ poster. Anyone got redline expertise here?

>>3150897
resize your image first

>>3150884
And porn.

Still struggling with them legs

>>3150916
> Surge concerto
Good taste anon.
Her hips are too narrow. Should be as wide as her shoulders at least. Left leg looks like it was stretched with transform tool. Draw some cross-sections for better foreshortening of the legs.

>>3150920
It was indeed stretched with the transform tool; I've been skewing things back and forth to get it CLOSE to right. I can always redraw her legs, but I'm afraid everything above them might be incorrect, which is what's making things so difficult.

>>3150940
Well she has man hips. At least in this perspective. If it's intended to be as wide as her shoulder her legs would be extremely foreshortened.

>>3150690
I didn't change the size of her lips, I turned them. Just compare the two images

>>3150940
Not a redline but this is how my >>3150965 dunning-kruger brainlet sees it.

>>3150965
>>3150986
I do want pretty strong foreshortening, but you're right about the hips being too thin. It's a start, thanks.

>>3150916

>>3151015
Awesome, thank you! The background should be an easy fix, I was mainly trying to get the figure correct first. Now to see if I can actually salvage anything, or if I have to redraw it all,

>>3150330
>>3150601

>>3151066
While I agree with the changes in the eyes, it's lost quite a bit of the appeal in everything else, especially the mouth (really, anon's mouth was damn nice) but also the wildness of her original expression+the volume of dat mane. Eyebrows were better before. The eyes are correct now but they should still serve as only a base so that anon can bring back that original aesthetic (wilder, while now she just looks kinda unmotivated) on top of correct form.

>>3151107
I'm not going to spend time making someone else's drawing perfect. I just wanted the forms there and wanted it to look nice enough to get my point across.
Everything is just for placement. Expression can obviously still be changed, but I'm not going to spend 2 hours making anon's portrait perfect. It'd be a waste of my time. I just wanted you weebs to stop stroking each others' dicks on that polished turd.

>>3151118
Fair enough, you did a good job.

>>3151118
you know why youre not gonna spend hours to make it perfect? because you cant.

>>3151144
Post your work, faggot.

>>3151066
I liked it more before

>>3151246
lol, okay kid.

>>3151299
so this is your peak huh

>>3151151
prove me wrong

>>3151304
You're the one who has the burden of proof. I don't need to prove you wrong.
Also, I'm too busy making money off of my art to deal with a /beg/ shitter like you.

>>3151144
Wasting time on some one else's work, just so you can finish their finish result
Cancerous Jew, begone with you.

sketch, going to start lineart tonight

>>3151066
haha really?

You people are the dumbest mother fuckers in the world.

I literally snort laughed when I saw this.

There are LITERAL PHOTO REFERENCES THAT HAVE BEEN POSTED..

And still...

>>3150768
>To prove I'm right?
hue
hue
hue

>>3151318
kid you're the one whos like wah wah i dont wana spend a long time polishing this cause im a very busy man(and is browsing 4chan) i have work to finish wah wah

>>3151299
It's been almost five years. When are you going to draw your beloved?

>>3151302
Nope, not that I think I'm remotely decent but I'm quite ambitious and I love to do my best even if that doesn't mean much at a technical level

>>3151447
I will only finish this Gumi song which I'm composing alongside the illustration I posted in the last thread and the next one I promise will be a Miku one. FWIW I've been waiting to be descent enough to draw a Miku illustration

The shirt is beyond fucked and the torso doesn't make sense, but I'm pretty happy with it since I actually felt pretty comfortable drawing this.

>>3151640
lmao

>>3151643
n-no bully pls

doodly page

>>3151595
I love it and those concepts. Don't know how I feel about that sphere on his head, though.

>>3151685
Blog?

>>3149201
About finished I suppose

how do I make this not terrible?

>>3151738
Her shoulders look rather wide, and her trapezius seems weirdly uneven.

>>3151738
How do I get as good as you at hair

>>3151520
god please dont draw my miku, your art is too shit for her

>>3151788
We've waited five years, don't spoil it you cunt

>>3151738
nose and lips seem off

>>3149940
Can you post more of your works so that I can save them for reference?
I shit you not, I am trying to be like you. You're one of my inspirations, anon, although I'm still beg tier right now. Care to share some tips too?

>>3151358
finished lineart

>>3151807
I think you'd learn more out of referencing from other artists, I'm really not that good at all.

If I were to give a few tips, it'd be to study the hell out of real life as well as the way they light movie scenes. Drawing from life helps alot too

>>3152076
>I'm not that good at all

>>3152076
Thanks a lot. At least I have a clearer goal now instead of MORE LOOMIS.

I'm reluctant with studying frrom life though as there are rarely any little girls with abs and I don't wanna get mistaken for a creepy person stalking muscular men. Still, thanks.

>>3152053
neat. i would vary the local values tho

>>3152105
pls no do this i really want to get better, i still feel really weak
>>3152106
it's not about that. you dont necesarily have to study the thing you want to draw, but knowledge applies across all fields. like if you study how lightning is set up or proper forms you'll know how a giant loli casts a shadow over a city or how to shade her muscles for example.

tfw you meet a new guy & he's really tall

>>3152053
noice

>>3151723
cute!

>>3151595
>>3151676
personally a big fan of the sphere, it's simple but sets it apart from the billion "i have a cube for a head" characters

>>3150788
super cute, i love the way you draw faces, especially eyes, reminds me a bit of fishine/hirame who's eyes i really love an have been studying (also that hand touching the face, soo cuuute)

>>3152120
thanks.

Just finished a chibi face of her too.

>>3152122
how is that a chibi face

>>3152136
How is that not.

>>3152122
>chibi
lol

>>3152156
its a normal anime face with nigger lips. explain to me how it is.

>>3152159
> normal

No, Her normal face isn't that squished. Do you even know what chibi means? Same for nigger lips.

>>3152162
it means small, and you know what gives it the illusion of small? the body, which it doesnt have. otherwise its a normal face

>>3152164
chibi is just a more exaggerated than usual anime face. The small faces on the side of the text bubbles in the 3rd panel of this are chibi too.

>>3152165
u gotta be joking

>>3152122
>>3152165
It just looks like a normal dace, and her wide mouth makes her look like a frog rather than anything cute

>>3152174
> It just looks like a normal dace

You're blind.

> and her wide mouth makes her look like a frog rather than anything cute

That's just your opinion.

>>3152178
Come on, mang, the facial proportions are nearly the same as the non-chibi face. If you don't want other's opinions what are you doing on a critique board. I like your art but you seriously have issues with taking any sort of criticism

>>3152180
It's not even criticism in the first place tough. I squished her face compared to her usual proportions and that's why I called it chibi, you're saying it's the same but that's wrong. No need to get autistic about it.

Coming here from /cgl/, looking for advice on how to better shade this for a tshirt design. desu I mostly draw horror/dark art so like, this is totally not within my area of knowledge. I

>>3152182
its anything but a chibi face, youre insane if you honestly believe that it is

>>3152191
> insane

>falling for baits

>>3152193
>this triggered
>instantly starts memeing with his favorite shitty comic/sho
ur art is shit

>>3152182
No one gives a shit that you squished her face or that the proportions aren't the same (your two renditions are barely discernable btw) because it's still not a chibi at the end of the day.

Lmao there are literally people attempting to mimic anime style in this thread and they don't even know what they're drawing.

>>3152076
holy fuck blog??????? my dude you got some skill

>>3152076
Are you self taught or did you go to art school?

>>3152122
that's cute tooo
she looks slightly smug, in that older sister kinda way

help me

>>3152189
I like the colors you used. I'm shit so I can't offer much advice.

>>3152109
Thanks again.
I think my lineart is passable for now. Not good, but passable, which I can fix with grinding as time passes. I'll try to color and render the way you do till I get them right. Can't post work right now though because I'm mobileposting.

>>3151670
Keep it up

>>3152551
thanks dude

>>3152053
>>3151358
still going...

Hey guys, this is probably my current end game.. What do you think? I'd like to get some critique especially about the coloring and shading.

I didn't draw this, but is this good reference?

>>3152640
no it sucks

>>3152641
Needs more loomis right?

Design Crit?

Is this boy girly enough?

Did I do this right?

>>3152647
No.

Take a better picture for one. And two, you've got some serious anatomy and perspective errors everywhere.

>>3152650
I see. It seems like you're asking for a fite m8

>>3152650
I mean, I can tell there's errors. I probably should have said what is "wrong with this" rather than is this right, because i knew it wasnt right.

Can you be more specific on what is wrong maybe?

>>3152655
I can, if you take a picture at a flat angle.

>>3149347
I start with a base head and use it for measuring the rest of the body.

>>3152658
Ok I'm sorry. Thank you. Ignore the little head pls. that's really old, I just was sketching on an old mostly empty sheet of paper

>>3152666
Here you go.

>>3152675
stop doing redlinmes. instead of fixing the foreshortening you simply changed the perspective to a side one, because this is the only thing you can handle.
leave this shit to people that know what they are doing.

>>3152684
Get your eyes checked.

>>3152685
don't be assblasted, autismo. if you can't push perspectives and do proper foreshortening it's not my problem.
instead of doing redlines, acquire some skill first.

>>3152687
Do the redline yourself, go on. Show me what you can do.

I followed that anon's persective based on the angle of the body. But if you feel you can do a better job, rather than bitching and whining, how about you show me up by doing it yourself.

Actions speak louder than words after all anon.

>>3152644
Cute, he's definitely girly, but too girly for my tastes.

>>3152675
I appreciate your help, but I kinda feel like this is just a different pose than the one I did. Mine is still wrong and your anatomy is better, but it changes a lot about my original drawing I think.

I may be wrong and just retarded on perspective though i don't know, not trying to be rude or anything! Again I appreciate the help!

>>3152690
Yeah, I'm not used to drawing that sort of character, that's why I asked. It's meant to be Nezha who's meant to be a very girly boy, and a deity.

I kinda wanted to evoke the same sort of confusion Bridget from GG produces. Where you bait people into thinking it's a girl, but if you pay a little more attention, you can kinda see it's actually a boy.

>>3152675
lmao

>>3152693
>>3152687
>>3152684
If you're not gonna post a redline yourself, stop posting. You're not offering anything constructive to the thread.

>>3152666
>>3152684
if you are going to personally insult a redliner, you better redline it yourself first

>>3152316
No blog, but i'm Yilx on deviantart/twitter and pixiv id 304834, also again I still think I'm far away from what i'd like to call 'skilled'...
>>3152321
self taught mostly

>>3152925
Who are some artists you would consider 'skilled'?

>>3152926
lack, white datura and haradaya, i really want to draw like them

>>3152691
no no, you are completely right anon. that guy just changed the position of the body because he can't handle foreshortening just like you. on the other hand you at least tried to get out of your comfort zone, which can't be said about our PRO redliner here.

>>3152689
keep being assblasted scrubby.
>>3152699
cry some more. if you can't see his redline is shit, I have really bad news for you, kek.
>>3152700
nah. I have better things to do. it's easier to shitpost and make fun of scrubs that think they are helping, but they are just bad artists.
at least your redline is much better. you should stop defending mediocrity, dumbass.

>>3153093
You have to wonder what sort of individual would get their kicks from lurking an art board, just to troll it. It's clear this guy doesn't even draw. I mean, we must be speaking about a truly pathetic sack of shit here. Who would even do such a thing? And, why?

>>3153096
doesn't really matter if I draw or not. only thing that matters is that this redline >>3152675 is pure shit and doesn't help at all.
this redline on the other hand >>3152700 is helpful as it tackles the bad foreshortening instead of just changing the position of the body..

acquire some critical eye, or start frequenting the beginner thread. it'll do you more good than arguing with people that know more than you, scrubbo.

>>3149194

>>3153121
mfw.
except i go to bed at 9am.

>>3152584
really hard to read

>>3153141
Really, or somewhat hard to read? I can see it, because of the chaos in the background and lack of proper first and second plane separation. Tho I thought the warm vs cold colors makes it work at least a bit.
Thanks for the input!

>>3153108
I almost feel sorry for you troll-kun.

>>3153174
no need to. I'm feeling great. I just helped anfor anon not to fall for a very bad redline.

>>3153168
while im at it, am i just not smart enough to understand this finger? It registers in my brain much better when i tilt my head, its just really hard at this angle.

>>3152584
I think the colors would look better if you either blended those ambient lights into the rest of her skintone some more, or decided to forego them entirely. As-is her skin looks weirdly shiny.

Working on this atm

>>3153340
Cute!

>>3153340
Cute shit. I'd really love to see a comic or children's book in this style.

>>3151595
How do I become as creative as you?
All I can do is copy from artists better than me.

>>3153397
Dope lighting, but the thick line with no variation looks pretty cheap to me.

>>3153096
Seems like he was just pointing out that the redline done by that other anon wasn't a good correction. Not drawing one himself doesn't make him less right, and the original anon know to ignore the bad redline.

>>3151358
>>3152053
>>3152582

Done, crit pls.

*raises paw*

>>3152189
Dude I would buy this tshirt for menhera

>>3153729
damn this turned out pretty cool.

only crit i can think of is it still looks a little flat. you could try adding some occluded shadow gradients to parts to bring it to the next level. just my 2 cents

changed the face and bottom pair a little, gonna mess with the hands a bit then I think I'll be done with the lines
>>3153340
love the lines on this

>>3153750
Love it!

>>3153962
u lie. ironic posting..

>>3153963
Not him but I like it too. I want those furry boobies in and around my mouth.

>>3153729
Your linework and color choices are always so pleasing.

>>3153397
Really love the clean, effortless looking aesthetic and subdued values. Your linework on her arms and center of her coat is doing a disservice to your drawing though (like the other anon pointed out). Also that sword looks nice.

>>3153750
Waist and up looks fine but you don't

>>3153729
Your linework and color choices are always so pleasing.

>>3153397
Really love the clean, effortless looking aesthetic and subdued values. Your linework on her arms and center of her coat is doing a disservice to your drawing though (like the other anon pointed out). Also that sword looks nice.

>>3153750
Waist and up looks fine, but you don't understand the hip girdle and it shows.

I tried.

>>3153995
Blog?

why do I suck

>>3154029
not using inspiration like Guweiz, trying to be original snowflake

>>3153729
shit

>>3154033
Link? Tried searching them and just found Ilya's work

>>3153397
drawing like a discount thdark but I like it

>>3154029
because you dont consume anything besides shitty loli art/anime and you are incapable of seeing anything outside of your little neet shitposter bubble
or badly paying job with shitty living conditions bubble, whatever
go outside, see things, do things, act like a living human being and stop being a sweaty fat bitch alone in your room at night drawing anime girl feet.

>>3154086
This, consume better art and you too will become better.

I really don't want to paint anymore. I want to live my fucking life but you assholes won't let me.

None of this makes sense. I hate all of you.

>>3154105

Don't leave

a 10 minute sketch probably isnt the best to judge improvement but uuuhhh at least i dont draw dick noses anymore

>>3154147
I like how the lines and understanding of forms changes.

>>3151520
I think I have done that expression way too much. It also had a lot of fuck upset, I hope this is less fucked up

Imp summoner

how bad are these legs?

>>3154256
How do I get as good at drawing legs as you?

>>3154257
self loathing

>>3154256
With how the hips are positioned the legs should be facing us more. Also the far foot is a bit wonky.
Cute face though

>>3154261
is this better?

>>3150616
im a robot

>>3154283
Yes, looking good. Good taste with going shoeless too.

>>3154261
I'm pretty sure you should do the opposite in my opinion. She looks like she is forcefully moving her hips to the viewer.

how can i draw this better friends

>>3154299
Blog?

>>3154298
>>3154283
Oh you're right. Make the shoulders and hips line up more, they're pretty misaligned unless you can make it look like she's hugging her legs to the left.

>>3154301
>>3154298
Thanks for all the advice. I tried adjusting the shoulders and legs to align more.

>>3154330
that's adorable

>>3154330
Great job anon. It's very balanced now.

>>3154299
Some more gesture practice, not being afraid to draw arms and legs plus some line weight.

A sketch for a trade.

not really sure what to do with the legs

>>3149194
First coloring attempt

>>3154435
I always thought that was supposed to be Rukia,

>>3154105
Her face has proper proportions, but her eyes are huge.

I think it's done

>>3154448
O Vey, soft palette. Very gud.

>>3154029
For fucks sake please dont be kaguyaschuchtel

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rEBJvtS0SGQ

Is there a photoshop brush that can replicate the density of traditional ink like how Boichi does it?

I have an Intuos pro medium also, would you need a high quality graphic tablet? Of course, I know it's also because Boichi is a monster of an artist.

>>3154448
You have rough edged textured line work, but smooth hard edge coloring. It passes the unobservant eye, but if you really want to push it, clean up the linework to match the coloring or rough up the coloring to match the linework.

>>3154086
Lmao @ all this projection.

>>3154448
Are you picking colors with HSV? The brighter parts of the image are so saturated it hurts to look at them. You need to reduce S as V goes up if you do, as V != perceived brightness. Or better just switch to HSY where saturation is a bit more consistent.

>>3154528
this is very good feedback, a thing i figured out recently with my own work

Do you guys ever draw real figures from a class or something

I'm probably barking up the wrong tree here, but technically these are studies in a style I'm trying to emulate. It's just not animu/mangos

In prep for a small personal project, I'm trying to figure out Alex Toth's style. If you are unfamiliar with his name, you definitely recognize his style (not my butchering of it, but his actual work). I'm sticking to the 'idealized' male face for starters and hopefully I'll loosen up as I figure him out more. I'm shooting for that slick, 50s-60s look that Toth is just so good at. His animation models and doodles simplify and are more geometric, I'm trying out his slightly more busy comic book style.

>>3153547
Thanks man. The only advice I can give is keep doing what you're doing because that's what I do - copying artists i like. Recently i've been copying a lot of Yoshinari's sketches. It's good inspiration.

post yfw finally get over stigma and purely focus on drawing anime

>>3154674
This is such a pleasant image :|

>>3154050
Their styles are pretty similar, here's his artstation https://www.artstation.com/guweiz

>>3154299
>how can i draw this better
color it, add background, maybe some lineweight. The weakest part is the hair is too clumped together, it looks like the wind is blowing it which would cause more separation/individual strands or ribbons of hair.

>>3151299
>>3151520

>>3154382
what about my work makes it unappealing
nobody ever responds and when i ask why they always say that it's because my art is ugly or weird

>>3154761
thats cool

>>3149194
What do you all wthink of this drawing? Im having problems with the bandana any ideas?

>>3154851
What the fuck is this supposed to be?

>>3154502
who's that? I googled and didn't get anything

>>3150330
What's the ref?

>>3154579
To be honest, I'm not familiar with any of that stuff, I just play around with colors until I like it. I'll have to read up on it.

>>3154827
Who knows? It's not unusual or ugly and you seem to have technical bits down. Seems no one right now has anything to say besides things like "I don't like it".

>>3154827
anyone ever tell you that it's messy? work on that.

>>3154827
People get hard-ons for clean lines. Your work is kinda smudgey too, esp that goblin.

>>3154827
This be some dynamic shit.

>>3154827
Its pretty messy anon. like whata going on but for some reason I dont like that I can see all those brush strokes.

Are you trying to achieve an unfinished aesthetic? I dont wanna be a prick but trad mediums are much more forgiving for those endeavors.

>>3154827
you should've posted this insteads of a midget.

Trying another one. Any thoughts on this pose?

>>3155053
Fucking sexy man, I like that. may mike lin bless you

>>3155053
Vagina seems a bit high. Construct without the tail and then add after.

>>3155042
Go back to /beg/.

>>3155061
>>3155053

>>3155088
retard

>>3154827
It's to chaotic imo it's just kind of annoying to look at as a whole piece to much going on perhaps adding colors would help

>>3155042
it was a good day of drawing ^w^

>>3155156
Good potential, keep it up.

>>3155131
Especially you, you jewish cuck. Jews are known to have mental deficiency which probably explains your lack of progress in 2 years. Stay mad.

>>3155053
very GOOD. Constanze is best girl

>>3152538
reeee ahren

>>3155195
jews win 20% of nobel prizes retard. though jews DO select the winners.

>>3155131
>nosebro calling others retards
>he thinks he's not trash

sad

>>3155266
post work

>>3155275
God, that sketch is so fucking bad. It's like you have zero understanding of anatomy.

>>3155280
post work

>>3154827
I sympathize with you, anon.
This is for you -
>https://www.artstation.com/artwork/emxGP
read it, think about it. You're jumping ahead of yourself. There's detail before there is a good value composition and there's rendering before there's a good underlying drawing.
A solid drawing without rendering is a solid drawing, but reverse the order and you have what we call 'a polished turd'.

No biggie tho, once you fix this you have potential to be really gud.

>>3154674
>polish flag on the right
the perfect image

I've been practicing comic book art for a while but I want to do furry art now. How do I stop tryharding my drawings and do cute shit?

new thread >>3155392

>>3154761
looking only at the black dude i would not ahve recognized the style
but the eyes of the woman gave it away.