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This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime works in-between their studies, however, all forms of stylization is welcome here. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, remember to have fun!

Fresh off the Mayflower? Then do yourself a flavor and read /ic/s supplementary sticky HERE:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj
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Hitokaku Index
>http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
List of active livestreams
>Use twitch #creative
>yoshikadu2011 (youtube, streams daily)
FellowBro's Book Collection
>http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
Tutorial & Reference Collection
>http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
Japanese Tutorials & Documentary
>http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317 (0033)
>http://iradukai.com/
>デジ絵の文法 playlist -https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=902YZvjz4eI&index=9&list=PL6dSbz05yTUL_zym3SiOxOgqq29XvOh48
>https://www.palmie.jp/
Life Drawing Reference
>http://www.onairvideo.com/croquis-cafe-photos2.html
>http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html
>http://senshistock.com/sketch/

Remember, don't be a big meanie https://my.mixtape.moe/fivxol.png

>> No.3137841

I have an image in mind of a girl sitting in a taller girl's lap, but I'm really terrible with posing and anatomy. Should I use something like MMD or SFM and go from there?

>> No.3137843

>>3137841
Just draw it and save it until you're better to fix the idea.

>> No.3137849
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3137849

>>3137841
>Using crutches as a visual aid from unreliable sources with design flaws and unrealistic figures
>Not studying from life and paying two hookers to pose for you

Not going to make it desu senpai

>> No.3137927
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>>3137841
depends what kind of art you're doing, if it's comics, sure, use any tool you can to help you produce, if it's not, take the time to practice

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3137946

reposting from last thread because fuck me right

>> No.3137954
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>> No.3138001
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>> No.3138055
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>>3137841
I've mocked it up in MMD, if I use this as a reference will it look shit?

>> No.3138060
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>> No.3138082

>>3138055
As long as you'll just trace it.

>> No.3138095
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Been doing some drawing with coloured pencils, trying to not rely on erasing and redrawing so much.

>> No.3138121

>>3138095
it gud

>> No.3138173
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>> No.3138198

>>3137849
>paying two hookers to pose for you
why would you waste your time with them having them pose, also all artists are poor dont you know

>> No.3138244

>>3138198
Being poor is nothing but an excuse think of it as an investment in your knowledge, and prostitutes will be tolerant with your social disorders and autism so as long as you pay them and not make them cringe too much - for the right price.

Who knows, you just might make a nice lady friend and have an acquaintance; you could have her perform virtually any lewd pose and reference off her to draw your waifu!

>> No.3138252

>>3137927
your heads are finally getting a little better

>> No.3138253

>>3138244
>not make them cringe too much
not possible

>> No.3138267
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3138267

>>3137954
edit. realized the boobs were too flat looking.

>> No.3138273

>>3138267
Blog?

>> No.3138275

>>3138253
This. For instance, I asked the last whore I hired for a commission reference to wear a diaper, and she just laughed, took my mom net and left.

>> No.3138278

>>3138121
Thank you for your kind words anon

>> No.3138285

>>3138275
*money

>> No.3138293

>>3138273
hopefully it's not an ironic blog?, but here you go http://yev-san.tumblr.com/ my work is really inconsistent, sometimes it looks super terrible, like the one posted before this (on tumblr), and other times its ok.

>> No.3138296

>>3138293
Nobody cares. Just post your blog jesus christ.

>> No.3138297

>>3138293
Wait, aren't you fidget-chan's artist?

>> No.3138301

>>3138296
I did

>> No.3138302

>>3138297
yea

>> No.3138343

>>3138055
use design doll you gay

>> No.3138351

>>3138267
>finally an anime girl with boobs that don't look like balloons

Fucking thank you. This is my fetish.

>> No.3138354

>>3138055
>MMD
my fucking childhood right here.

>> No.3138358

To the person last thread saying they charge $20 per drawing

What kind of client goes and buys this kind of art? I mean I enjoy your drawings they're pretty nice, but going online to request a random drawing of Tharja and pay for it? I mean... there's like 700 free pictures of her on gelbooru, why do they feel the need to pay for one more to exist? or they just shit money and want to support you?

I sort of understand when it's a very specific fetish and people pay for porn, but nsfw of a character that's already popular I don't get it. I'm asking so I can understand in the future how to get customers like that if I ever get decent enough to charge.

I've seen people that ask for their OC to be redrawn at a higher quality, but like just go to some dude and tell them, "hey, I want a chibi mario drawing in your style, how much for that? $20? sure draw it doing some jump or whatever".

I appreciate any input

>> No.3138397

>>3138358
"hey, I want a chibi mario drawing in your style"

You answered your own question, they want to see it in a certain artist's style. Maybe a certain artists draws girls in a really appealing way to that person that no other one does.

>> No.3138408

>>3138397
I see, so the important part is to develop some uniqueness that gets recognized?

>> No.3138445

>>3138408
I guess, but if you wanna be unique, just be yourself, since you are chemically different from everyone else, or just make sure that your idea of unique actually is unique. A lot of artists who try to be "unique", all have the same idea of unique.

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>> No.3138512
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>> No.3138516

>>3138512
Pretty cute. However, I think her long torso hurts her appeal, and her right and left hands' fingers have different thickness.

>> No.3138519

>>3138512
Blog?

>> No.3138526

>>3138512
flatty?

>> No.3138586
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>>3138267
They're still flat anon

>> No.3138854
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i really wanted the girl to have a mouth spreader but now looking at the whole thing its not visible/necessary...

>> No.3138909
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3138909

Daily jawn

>> No.3138911
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3138911

>>3138909
and something from yesterday

>> No.3139097
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3139097

>>3132058
Nearly a week later... I probably should try to draw more in evenings.

Trying to take more suggestions/crit in and polishing this thing up so then I can start working on the reverse side of the keychain that this will be made into.

>> No.3139101

>>3139097
Stop polishing that turd

>> No.3139103

>>3139101
stop posting

>> No.3139104

>>3139103
post your work faggot

>> No.3139105
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>>3139104

>> No.3139109

>>3139105
stop posting

>> No.3139111

>>3139105
hol up are you bike nigger or the one that drew the girl with the mask because he couldn't and obviously still can't draw eyes?

>> No.3139133
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>>3139111
At least I try to improve.

>> No.3139135

>>3139133
Mind you, that was done in the past 30 minutes. Super rough, but ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

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3139147

>>3139101
Love ya too, bby.
At least though I've gotten some good help and critique over the past bit. The current form is way better than what I had a few weeks ago.

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>>3139147
Which in turn is even better than what I had at the beginning. I did have a couple of sketches beforehand of what I wanted it to sort of look like.

>> No.3139151
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3139151

>>3139097
These are my suggestions for you. Normally when I do chibis I'd think about what I want to change in proportion, may it be the how fat or skinny certain parts are. But the head almost always towers over the trunk and its related parts and should never be too fat/wide of a female. It's different for a male chibi.

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>>3139151
thats even worst

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>> No.3139160

>>3139147
>The current form is way better than what I had a few weeks ago.
No, it's not. You've gone absolutely nowhere and learned nothing. I honestly did not know someone could manage to completely waste time in drawing which is unheard of but you're special you've managed to waste it, this is unprecedented.
>At least though I've gotten some good help and critique over the past bit.
Despite that you've ignored everything that was said and didn't bother to apply anything. Stop polishing turds, stop drawing anime, stop drawing those "chibis" or "Chaibis" in certain countries, and don't come back until after you've done at least 1,000 gestures but most importantly stop polishing turds.

>>3139159
Read the Sticky.

>> No.3139161

>>3139158
pyw

>> No.3139180

>>3139151
original is cuter, why is it always the shitters that redline

>> No.3139191

>>3139180
fuck off

>> No.3139202

>>3139191
you first

>> No.3139261

>>3139161
>>3139191
salty

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3139274

>>3139248
Didn't see this thread so I posted on /beg/
Critque on whole drawing, pls

>> No.3139330

>>3137946
>>3137954
Noice

>> No.3139375

>>3139151
Stop falling for obvious baiter you dip. The main problem with your redline is the angle of the head and the general size of it compared to the body. It literally more than twice the height of the body, it's too much. But where credit is do, your eyes are much more appealing than the original, no offence. The body is fine too, just fix that air balloon head.

>> No.3139405

>>3139375
>bait

>> No.3139416
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3139416

I had problems with the file of this one (aka saving canvas failed), so maybe I'll finish it in a different way I wanted to or maybe I give up on this one.

>> No.3139417

>>3139416
How do you hair like that?

>> No.3139431

>>3139417
In the pigtails, I tried to make it look like it's spinning, almost like a screw, since her V4X concept art look like this.
Her fringe is weird, so I don't have much to say about it, I may fix it later.

>> No.3139443

>>3139416
>dead stare
>no traps between shoulders
>blurry my shit up

>> No.3139467
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wip

hello it's been a while

>> No.3139505
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>>3138512
Id recommend looking at the line of action, makes the pose more readable and non awkward. Not sure if any of these are more what your looking for. Also find reference for the bottom of the dress.

>> No.3139506

>>3139467
shit, pretty good

>> No.3139629

Who drew the op?

>> No.3139633

>>3139467
>tfw you're sure you asked for blog before but can't tell because it's been a while and the art looks a little bit different
GS? Colors feel the same, so I think I might be right.

>> No.3139651

>>3139633
yeah, been trying new things lately with varying results-- my drawing skills are still really bad orz

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>>3138909

>> No.3139759

>>3138911
Nice, I like her proportions.

>> No.3139887
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>> No.3139895

>>3139887
dude, just try to lower the eyes a little bit and make the noses less pointy, your art always has this one fatal flaw that makes it look really shitty and its the lack of a proper forehead on your characters

>> No.3139925

>>3139151
i like how everyone is seemingly blind to your skill, one thing though is that your ear is showing too much on extending and eye+eyebrow placement is slightly off

>> No.3139966

>>3139895
He knows that but doesn't want to improve. Instead he just keeps spamming the same carbon copy faces

>> No.3139989
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for a sticker maybe

>> No.3140017

>>3139887
Nigger stop using your own face as a reference; you're ugly as sin.

>> No.3140082
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3140082

idk

>> No.3140083

>>3140082
this image raises far too many questions.

>> No.3140226
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WIP; hot opinions desperately needed

>> No.3140231

>>3140226
/beg/

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working on this

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>>3140235
wrong pic sorry

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>> No.3140248

>>3140082
I remember this from like two weeks or so ago, nice to see you finally got to coloring it.

>> No.3140326

>>3140248
he colored it terribly, though.

>> No.3140356

>>3140240
really stiff, especially the kid in the middle, looks like his head is supported by a pole up his ass

>> No.3140378

>>3140240
More contrast would be good I think

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>>3140247
crap, wrong file

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>>3140247

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wip.

>> No.3140604

>>3140082
The action here is really confusing. From what I understand, the spider girl hit the boy's head from the right side, but he's leaning over to the right, and his sticks are falling to the left. If he was hit from the top from the right side, it would be much more natural him to start falling to the left. Also, unless he purposely threw his sticks to the left they would naturally fall either straight down or to the right away from him, if he was moving to the right before he was hit.

Additionally, this color palette looks very warm for what I assume to be a winter scene, are you just using dodge/burn for shading?

>> No.3140613

>>3140604
Looking at the pic a little more, I just realized that what it's probably more likely that this pic is supposed to be of the guy slipping over to the right and hitting his head on the log. Still, this picture is very confusing, and if the guy falling had a stronger line of action I feel the whole picture would be a lot clearer.

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>>3137834
some slam dank inspired sketchs

>> No.3140732
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>> No.3140733

>>3140535
Ugh, any advice would be helpful. I know I'm shit but cmon give me something

>> No.3140736

>>3140720
Blog? Your stuff is nice and dynamic.

>> No.3140741

>>3140736
Thanks man

I have one, but its nsfw, do you mind?

>> No.3140742

>>3140741
yeah i mind, fuck off degenerate scum.

>> No.3140744

>>3140742
haha

>> No.3140746

>>3140741
Nah post it.

>> No.3140757

>>3140535
Widen your value range. It looks pretty flat right now. Also the connection between the arm and hand looks off pretty off. It looks broken the way it's bent. The sandwich looks weirdly more rendered than the guy himself. Also the nose positioning is off since he is looking slightly left and the nose is centered. Also the sweater doesn't really feel like a sweater since there aren't really any folds that imply form underneath it.

>> No.3140762

>>3140757
>tfw you are better at rendering food than people
well, shit. i will try harder anon-sensei, i promise!
thank you for your advice!

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>>3140535
Your whole character is pretty stiff and there are a lot of misalign in the face area, its also entering the uncanny valley a bit by playing some really cartony forms against some of them being rendered/drawn too realistic

as the other anon said its pretty flat too, you'll need to work better on occlusion areas

>> No.3140776

>>3140769
thanks famalam. also quick question, i usually check my values by placing a layer filled with black and set to color mode on top of everything. does this actually work or am i just being massive faggot? I've recently learned about local value and i've been trying to group my values together by values of 10-20s, how much should I widen the values?

>> No.3140786

>>3140326
exblain

>> No.3140789

>>3140776
It works, i use a hotkey to turn it to black and white to check.

how long will you widen it depends on how strong the ambient light is in your drawing, if it was a strong ambient you would play it on less values changes on planes due to the reflected light, in your case i think going up on the occlusions are should do it.

>> No.3140799

>>3140604
wanted to do something that showed the snow stopped and place is starting to warm up again so i used slightly warm colors

also, i just use normal blur tool for shading and normal pen for cast shadows. tried to do the color boomerang thing i heard about but didnt realize how low i put the value for my darks till now

>> No.3140824

>>3139467
this is really nice, but the boob on the left should be more weighted to the right side

>> No.3140834

>>3139467
blog?

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3140843

Wow guis

>> No.3140906

>>3140746
here
https://blooparchives.tumblr.com/
Maybe i should create a safespace for the blog

>> No.3140963

>>3140786
The coloring just looks ugly dude

>> No.3140970

>>3140963
A proper critique would explain why it looks ugly anon-kun

>> No.3141007
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wip

>> No.3141008

>>3141007
Blog?

>> No.3141010

>>3141007
lmao

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>> No.3141109

>>3141101
What the fuck is this shit?

>> No.3141111

>>3141109
Eye cancer

>> No.3141117

>>3141109
comic page, keeps posting em

>> No.3141182

>>3138512
I feel like the clothes are distracting you from the weird anatomy. Her torso is too long relative to her short legs. Also i dont know if its the color making it look weird to me but it seems like you are forcing her right breast more into view than it should.

>> No.3141185

>>3139159
Considering her left shoulder is raised, and her arm already goes that far down her leg, imagine where they will be if she drops her shoulders. In other words, your arms are way too long and your legs seem short.

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3141187

>>3139467
well i guess it's done

>> No.3141199

>>3141187
That looks great.

>> No.3141200

>>3141187
blag?

>> No.3141231

>>3141010
That's not a critique faggot

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>>3140356
>the kid in the middle, looks like his head is supported by a pole up his ass

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5 in the morning and i managed to hit my deadline

>> No.3141343

>>3141262
Weird, I'm pretty sure I saw it before. Or was it just the sketch/lineart? That's quite the thighs.

>> No.3141358

>>3141200
>>3141008
>>3140834
>>3138519
>>3138273
blog?

>> No.3141362

>>3141262
Shame about the face though, she looks like she has a bit too much forehead and too high of a hairline. I think you should go back to studying fundies

>> No.3141387

>>3141362
redline it or get lost

>> No.3141389

>>3141262
I fucking love the rainbow highlights you got going.

>> No.3141410

>>3137834
What are the aspects of style?

>> No.3141433

>>3139151
do you faggots even know what proportions are?

>> No.3141444

>>3141433
Man, I really hope this is a joke.

>> No.3141448

>>3141444
This place has degraded so bad I honestly can't tell if someone is shitposting or if someone is really that incredibly stupid anymore.

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>> No.3141490

>>3138267
>>3137927
Fuck, teach me a thing or two about lineart you dons.

>>3141007
Ay, love seeing another KC fan. Warspite a cutie.

>> No.3141576

>>3141455
this is incredible.I love how the eyes have their minds of there own.

>> No.3141584
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3141584

Practicing to do a webcomic. The hand on the short haired girl is really off and I'm not sure the expression on the other girl came out okay. Anything else I should work on before I fill the internet with my shit? I'm pretty weak at backgrounds, I know that.

>> No.3141596

>>3141584
lmao broken arm

>> No.3141599
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3141599

its the man

>> No.3141638

>>3141387
lmao how can you not see it lol she looks like she has balloon head like >>3139151
although i'm guessing you were the same guy who did that incorrect redline as well

>> No.3141645

>>3141638
>/ic/ is one person

>> No.3141810

>>3141187
Godokun?

>> No.3141832

>>3141599
garbage

>> No.3141844

>>3141576
Thanks. He was fun to work on, I hate the colors though.

>> No.3141866

>>3141187
>nudes
Why though

>> No.3141869

>>3141866
Gotta rake in those neckbeard bucks yo

>> No.3141891

>>3141810
yes, hello

>>3141866
it's a commission

>> No.3141894

>>3141187
What kind of ref did you use for the pantyhose?

>> No.3141896

>>3141187
>that anus
>that vagina
kek
there's porn everywhere on the internet you know, you aren't exactly starved for references

>> No.3141913

>>3141262
the forehead/hairline/face looks off, and i may be wrong but i feel like the hips/stomach dont look quite right either.

Really lovely work, though.

>> No.3141918

>>3141894
i have some cosplay sets that i look through but mostly was looking at a lot of https://twitter.com/y_o_m_y_o_m/media and wanted to give it a try

>>3141896
desu i just looked at an as109 picture, probably the asshole is a bit too far back though since the poses aren't exactly the same

>> No.3141920
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3141920

>>3141891
Fuck you, I followed you on twitter and I got recommended a bunch of weird japanese artists that you follow and now my feed is full of traps and chinese cartoons

>> No.3141926

>>3141918
>I just looked at an as109 picture
so how are you fucking this up
>probably the asshole is a bit too far back
well fuck me at least you're close

Don't get me wrong, left is great, but I have no idea how you could manage to fuck up a vagina-
>>3141920
>traps
oh you're just gay, carry on

>> No.3141935

>>3141920
don't blame me cause u got sucked into the vortex too, my likes are a 100% hot fire zone only

>>3141926
astolfo is cute

>> No.3141959

>>3141918
>https://twitter.com/y_o_m_y_o_m/media
I knew that style looked familiar.

>> No.3142097

>>3141262
face looks fine, niggas who complain don't know about style
skin color bothers me though, it's not warm or soft enough

>> No.3142101
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>> No.3142274
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3142274

some stylized studies

>> No.3142300

>>3141362
ITS CALLED MOE, FAGOTT

>> No.3142328
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3142328

>>3142274
Nice work

>>3142101
The arm/back area isn't right. The anatomy is just off a lot.

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>> No.3142449
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3142449

A group shot.

>> No.3142472
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3142472

I legitimately worked hard on the hair/face. As a result the rest of the drawing is a little rushed, but I'm happy with the results. Learned a lot experimenting with hair/face.

>> No.3142509
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3142509

gayist shit ive ever drawn

>>3141599
very nice

>> No.3142517

>>3142449
Are you the guy that draws giant anime girls crushing buildings?

>> No.3142520

>>3142517
I'm not.

>> No.3142531
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3142531

>>3142300
Moe? You mean that guy from the Simpsons? Moe is way cuter, dumbass

>> No.3142568

>>3142517
It's the futa opm guy.

>> No.3142580

>>3139989
Wouldn't it better if you made diego grin with sharp teeths?

>> No.3142741

>>3142472
Warped skull. Most features are in different perspectives from each other, makes me think you traced different shit.

>> No.3142775

>>3142328
What is she looking at why is it staring at a random corner in space why is this shit so prevalent why can't you make it communicate with the viewer by making those eyes focused stop avoiding that singular most important aspect you don't look at someone with the corner of your eye you turn and look; is she autistic? Does she have some form of social anxiety where she can't directly look at someone? It's awkward, it's unnatural, it's weird, it gives bad mojo and another thing stop posting your drawing utensil with the drawing you pretentious fuck.

>> No.3142822
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3142822

>>3142775
Models take pictures like that sometimes.

>> No.3142872

>>3142775
It's about the relationship with the viewer ya sperg. If the girl is looking directly at you it's a confrontation, even if it's a drawing, that's psychological. If they look away it invites the viewer to admire what's on display. Lots of people who draw it probably aren't even aware of this but it's a pretty old art/photography convention.

>> No.3142882

>>3142741
I'm a retard at doing perspective, but is it bad that I'm having a hard time seeing how to fix it? I really don't want to use the "style" as a crutch but at the time time I can't see how to approach it in the first place. Any examples of angled top-down perspective drawings (stylized or not), if that makes sense?

>> No.3142887

>>3142775
I just didn't want her to be making eye contact with the viewer, it didn't feel right for the drawing.

And I really only put my pencil there to give a sense of scale. An anon suggested I was drawing too small not too long ago, and I am trying to work on that.

>> No.3142953
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3142953

hmm i think that foreshortened hand's finger is too long

>> No.3143006
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3143006

No more heroes fanart

>> No.3143011

>>3142953
yea, it is. also, the fourth one is kinda wonky, id redline it but im not too good myself. i think the mouth is too down and the ear is wrong. cute style tho

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3143057

>>3143011

I am aware of the position of the mouth. i like the effect it has on the expression. I can move it up a little though.

>> No.3143063
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3143063

>>3137834
got a question,
how would you go about achieving the kind of lineart in pic related?

>> No.3143069

>>3143063
duplicate lines,
blur,
lower opacity on duplicate?

PLEASE DONT THO.

>> No.3143094

>>3143063
If you're using Photoshop or some equivalent you can use the Glow filter. But like all filters it would probably take more than just slapping it on to get a decent effect.

>> No.3143120
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3143120

>>3142882
>>3142472
I'm a complete idiot and forgot about the whole "flip the canvas and correct from there" technique, so I just did a quick fix in Paint. I wanna say it's significantly less wonky but what do I know lol.

>> No.3143197

>>3142449
dude your lines are so fucking terrible, i understand this is just a sketch but fuck the messiest shit ive ever seen

>> No.3143201

>>3143063

Use layer style, add outer glow to line layer

>> No.3143212

>>3143197
>the messiest shit ive ever seen

You can't be saying that seriously.

>> No.3143309
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3143309

Opinions? I can tell the anatomy is fucked, especially the shoulders. Unsure how to fix it though

>> No.3143311

>>3143309
Blog?

>> No.3143338

>>3143311
Really? Well I do have one, malva-mia on tumblr. I feel like you'll be disappointed though kek, I'll do my best to post less trash from now on

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>>3143309
I don't know, I tried

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3143377

>>3143309
just for fun, cute char

>> No.3143398

>>3143367
>>3143377
Thanks anon, the arms are definitely better proportioned! And the extra fluff is nice, although I'm unsure about that butt. I'll have to sleep on it

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3143472

>>3139416
Updating. Less blurry now, I guess?

>> No.3143476

>>3143472
Blog?

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3143507

>>3137834
am i rendering this wrong?

>> No.3143509

>>3143507
Looks neat so far but you need to define abs/center of ribcage/throat area a bit imo

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3143510

>>3143377
Fixed it for u buddy.
Womens hips are wider than their shoulders. arm placements are weird as hell the contour of the shorts are wrong. put a horizon line before you draw any character.

>> No.3143522

>>3143472
>deadstare

>> No.3143525

>>3143510
lmao

>> No.3143530

>>3143476
https://nensoushou.tumblr.com

>>3143522
Her expression still bad, I guess. I didn't have many ideas for it, so it ended in this dead stare. Do you have any suggestions for her expression?

>> No.3143532

>>3143510
this doesnt look right..

>> No.3143533

>>3143377
The hand is backwards

>> No.3143557

>>3143120
The facial proportions are really wierd for what looks to be a kid/chibi. If you really want to go for the cute and youthful look you could try moving the facial features lower on the face, to give the character a larger forehead, as well as shrink the chin and maybe even make the cheeks a little rounder.

>> No.3143581
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3143581

>>3143530
is not her expression is the lack of lights and even the pupil is missing

here's some shitty example

>> No.3143582

>>3143532
Because the hands are badly drawn

>> No.3143626
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3143626

I did this, any thoughts? I know it's pretty boring/generic

>> No.3143632

>>3143626
boring and generic.
linework is sloppy

>> No.3143643
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3143643

I know the neck looks like it sticks out too much

>> No.3143645

>>3143643
Blog?

>> No.3143648

>>3143645

>>3138293

>> No.3143650

>>3143626
blog?

>> No.3143702
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3143702

help I'm retarded

>> No.3143710

>>3143702
I know i can tell by your choice of television

>> No.3143715

>>3143710
The anti-circlejerk is coming along swimmingly.

>> No.3143720

>>3143710
please no bully taste
bully art instead. or both.

>> No.3143728

>>3143720
why not both?

>> No.3143729
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3143729

>>3143643
fug, i should just stick to simple monochromatic stuff, it looks better

>> No.3143733 [DELETED] 

>>3143643
Actually, your neck is somewhat fine, just the face that throws me off and the anatomy of your body is a bit out of place. Find a reference with the same/similar pose, drag it in your composition, lower opacity till it's visible barely visible to trace, after tracing hide your reference and just edit/stylize the body you traced to your liking

>> No.3143736

>>3143729
>lolis2

lel no

>> No.3143749

>>3143736
you're right, they're way too mature looking. I gotta work on making the bodies less exaggerated

>> No.3143753
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>> No.3143773
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3143773

Thing

>> No.3143790

>>3143728
>or both

>> No.3143821
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3143821

>> No.3143931

>>3143530
To add to the other reply, you can exaggerate the mouth a bit to go for a more pronounced expression.

>> No.3143949

>>3143557
I didn't want to venture too far into chibi territory, but I see your point. I'll play around with the facial features and see how that goes, but I'm just gonna move on to something else for now and call it a learning experience.

>> No.3143978

>>3143581
Ah, that's true. Even if I liked it in this way, I'll change her eyes, it may look better. Thanks for pointing that

>>3143931
This is also good, I'll try it, thanks

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3144011

>>3143949
Well disregard what I said previously, apparently I'm too keen on polishing this turd. Then again, I'm very happy with the improvements I've made since the initial sketch (https://i.imgur.com/iVwEn2p.jpg)), so I'm going to stop here and consider this a success for now.

>> No.3144029
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3144029

wip

>> No.3144059

>>3144029
that girl is super moe, what's your secret

>> No.3144075
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3144075

Is there some actually good youtube tutorials that teach you how to draw anime faces? in a bunch of different angles?

i've spent a long time studying anatomy and drawing from life but i cant draw anime for shit especially the faces

>> No.3144082
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3144082

>>3144075
>i've spent a long time studying anatomy and drawing from life
>needing a video
Shouldn't you be able to just scrutinize drawings and figure out how it's done? What have you been doing?
There's also tutorials in the op

>> No.3144089
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3144089

>>3144075
know your basics then modify these with the animu style of your choice and thats it

>> No.3144090
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>> No.3144093

>>3144082
i can do bodies just fine but my faces always struggle
i just cant seem to figure out how to stylize is properly

>> No.3144098

>>3144075
Pick a doujin you like and study all the faces in it, that's what I like to do

>> No.3144113

>>3144059
idk, doesn't really count anyway since i copied the pose from the show's eyecatch

>> No.3144155
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>> No.3144157
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3144157

crack

>> No.3144205
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>> No.3144213

>>3144075
Mark, you know the one.

>> No.3144226

>>3144213
he's shit

>> No.3144229

>>3144226
If you can prove you're better than him by posting your work then I'll believe you.

>> No.3144268
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3144268

this is as far as I got last night, anything looking super wonky?

>> No.3144271

>>3144268
Hips and ass could be wider imo

>> No.3144293

>>3144229
i dont get /ic/'s mentality about judging

>you can only judge someone if youre better than them

no? not really
as long as you are knowledgeable about a subject you can critique or review it

Similarly you dont need to be a better artist to be able to point out whats bad and whats not

Of course someone who doesnt draw wont be able to point out the flaws completely or even offer any advice but they can still tell you if something is good or not

For example most movie critics haven't actually made a film much less a film better than the one they are critiquing

Mark is in fact a better artist than i am but i still think his work is low tier garbage

>> No.3144306

>>3144268
She looks incredibly masculine. Narrow hips and a pronounced jawline are the biggest culprits.. Make the face softer.

>> No.3144325
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3144325

>>3144306

>> No.3144394

>>3144155
head 2 big

>> No.3144683

>>3143197
It's a sketch you humongous faggot. Stop shitposting and post your work.

>> No.3144695

>>3144293
Experienced people can back up their claims and advice with examples and such. No one really wants to listen to low level shitters who can't draw a cute girl just run their mouths all day

>> No.3144834

>>3144293
you don't need to, you're right
but /ic/ has an incredible amount of dunning-kruger with terrible (maybe even purposely harmful) advice to boot
take everything ever with a grain of salt, especially here

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3144948

>>3143507
could have darken the values, lesson learned

>>3143509
ty

>> No.3144987

>>3144157
I like this

>> No.3145065
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>> No.3145085

>>3145065
Blog?

>> No.3145091

>>3145085
sabakuhe on pixiv/twitter but I haven't really got any content at this point.

>> No.3145092

>>3145091
Thanks. What does your name mean?

>> No.3145097

>>3145092
砂漠(desert)へ(toward). Name of a pop song. Coming up with a handle is hard.

>> No.3145170

>>3144090
feedback, something?
Ive posted this on multiple boards and nobody will say a thing about it, really frustrating.
is it complete shit or what

>> No.3145172

>>3145170
It's just the face is unappealing.

>> No.3145178
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3145178

>> No.3145181

>>3145178
How do you draw without ref so well?

>> No.3145193

>>3145181
I've just been doing it without ref for a long time. Though I do a ton of gestures, which probably helps in a way

>> No.3145236

>>3145172

jesus fucking christ that's what everyone tells me on every fucking woman i draw. I like the faces but everyone else thinks theyre ugly

>> No.3145237

>>3145178
What about anatomy studies? Do you do those?

>> No.3145238

>>3145237
that artist's anatomy is not very good please just read the sticky and get gud by yourself
yes you have to study everything and yes it is a lot of work

>> No.3145245

>>3145178
terrible

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3145248

>>3145245
>beginner thread tells me to come here
>come here and get told to go back
fuck u

>> No.3145257

>>3145248
nigga youre not even trying, just look at her feet

>> No.3145261
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3145261

>>3145248
Don't take that bullshit to heart, it's not that bad, there are far worse people in this thread.
knife arms are a bit weirdly unaligned if I need to be nitpicky about it.

>> No.3145267

>>3145261
stop encouraging these fuck wads

>> No.3145286

>>3145236
they look weird af dude, it looks like you reffed the most botoxed face you could find

>> No.3145362
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3145362

Foreshortening help pls?

The legs are my main concern; they're kinda distorted right now because I keep skewing them to try and get it right.

>> No.3145392
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3145392

>>3137834
I'm new here, is this where I'm supposed to post my work?

>> No.3145398
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3145398

>>3145392
That doesn't look like alt. You must go to the standard drawing threads
Also no gay shit, dude

>> No.3145400

>>3145398
No gay shit? Go fuck yourself. I am a proud lesbian and I'll continue to draw this "gay shit" whether you like it or not. As for stylization, my work is stylized, it isn't photo realistic

>> No.3145402

>>3145400
>obviously photoreferenced
>not photorealism

>> No.3145403
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3145403

>>3145402
I'm sorry that you're too stupid to tell the difference between realism and photo realism, but it's not like I'd expect anything more from a homophobic

>> No.3145408
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3145408

>>3145400
It doesn't need to be photo realistic to not be stylised. Your work looks like a standard figure study. Take a look at the other posts and see what is going on
And relax, dude, it was just fucking a joke

>> No.3145409

>>3145403
If you did not work from photos, why are you blowing up your values like that?

>> No.3145424

>>3145408
Yeah haha it was just a joke. It's so cool to be edgy on 4chsn amirite guys. You're a sad pathetic fuck.

>> No.3145425

>>3145409
That example was to demonstrate what photo realism is you idiot.

>> No.3145438

>>3145392
this is good
i'm sorry you have to deal with salty cunts here

>>3145398
>Also no gay shit, dude
pls be bait, you can't be serious...

>> No.3145441

>>3145425
But first you said it was not photo realism. Try to decide. Which one is it?

>> No.3145455

>>3145438
Of course it's not serious.
Saying such things will only net you things like "fuck off" and insults and how homophobic you are anyway. Just like what just happened
Terrible people desu, attacking someone with little provocation

>> No.3145460

>>3145424
>>3145425
lmfao this dyke for real? why is this roastie so toasty?

>> No.3145465

>>3145455
You're not on a hugboxing website, grow a spine and deal with it. Post work or stfu.

>> No.3145468

>>3145455
is this tumblr roleplay?

>> No.3145477

Meaningless thread killing bump.

>> No.3145528

>>3145460
This >>3145392 nigga probably just fishing for compliments ain't no reasoning with them.

>> No.3145554
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3145554

im new to digital

>> No.3145574

>>3145554
back to /beg/

>> No.3145618

>>3145554
Le edge XD

>> No.3145629

new thread >>3145627

>> No.3145846

>>3141187
That black stripe in panty hose is a run guard and it's to prevent tears from propagating through the hose.
You kind of just ignored them instead of showing how the extra thickness would affect the tearing.

>> No.3145847

>>3145846
Yamero, you're breaking my suspension of disbelief.

>> No.3146445
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suck my fat fat cock
I'm a fucking SHARK

I'm extremely lonely and extremely depressed and extremely fucked up. Someone please save me.

I really really need to see the end of this. Please end this. Please.

:/

:(

>> No.3146472

>>3145554
So... you basically decided to hide the hands, the feet and the face, why not just give up already?

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>>3145392
In terms of technical ability, you seem to be better at figure drawing than anyone else on this thread. Now my question is, where are your finished pieces? If this is what you can do in your sketches/studies I'd like to see how you can apply it to your more serious work, we'd be able to give you more advice that way I think.

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>>3146445
Shut up and draw. Nobody cares about your depression if you're having the feels that bad then channel that into your art.

>> No.3146517

>>3145362
Try freehand drawing floor grids and placing your characters on the floor using that as a guide. It's a trick used in animation and comic books to fake perspective, try looking for Krenz tutorials on the subject. Get good enough at drawing gridded boxes/cubes freehand (drawing bathroom interiors with lots of tiles is good practice for this) and you basically don't have to worry too much about perspective anymore.

>> No.3146518

>>3145097
へ is pronounced "e" when used as a particle, so typing "he" as romaji is wrong. Japanese people reading this will read "desert fart", not "towards the desert".

t. Japanese tutor

>> No.3146541

>>3143773
as someone who enjoys the show, I like this. nice work.

>> No.3147939

>>3146508
de que pais sos? el filename me causo curiosidad.

>> No.3147952

>>3146445
get a job where you work with other people. talk to them. don't be a queer.
profit.

>> No.3147956

>>3145455
fyi i was referring to calling lesbo "gay"
lesbo was never gay, nearly all guys enjoy girl-on-girl action
but faggots do need to die in a fire

this is common knowledge, that's why it has to be bait