/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3119771
So I got some questions about screentones as I keep experimenting around to find the style.

I used this guide:

https://heydesign.com/2016/01/digitalscreentone/

To get this effect, which is fine for a digital webcomic, as it has that manga "feel" of screentones. However, the dots here are greyed to get the color, rather than being actual screentones.

Now, this method is great, as I could literally paint things in greyscale, and then use the various patterns to create screentones, and in fact it offers me a LOT of flexibility.

However, how does this factor in when it comes to printing? It's NOT the same as real screentones. Anyone have any exp?

I flat out do NOT like the preset screentones in Manga Studio/CSP, the dots are too big even at the smallest setting, and it looks like ass when you rasterize. Not only that, but it doesn't let you properly layer screentones (and if you reduce the size/quality - which is necessary for digital formats - it will even EAT entire layers of tones).

I think this method is great, as it translates well with what I already know about painting, and could push what I can do much further, my only concern printing/costs down the line.

>>3119790
Try out using the screentones in another program, perhaps? MediBang has some decent screentones.

Working on something.

>>3119818
please dont make her looks THAT stupid gettingg squished

>>3119822
That's what makes it funny tough, the face contrast.

>>3119818
How do I get as good as you?

>>3119823
But its shaded too realisticly, it looks weird shaded like everything else. Also i think for real comedic value it should be some other expression

>>3119829
>Also i think for real comedic value it should be some other expression

That's more of a taste matter here, what kind of face would you put?

Trying to achieve an atmosphere-hgal look.

>>3119832
Hmm, maybe something that communicates better that she cant breath, or something that looks like she is bored. I think that would be funy because it is pretty much the opposite of what you would expect. Like the suprise you get when you try to asphexiate someone with a pillow and you pull it away and the person smiles at you.

>>3119837
Well, the point was also to have Tatsumaki make a very surprised face here. Her looking bored, angry or smug is what you normally expect from the character, not this, that's also what makes it funny in my book.

>>3119818
How do you blend/paint?

>>3119790
fug, she's cute!

where is she from?

>>3119841
HM, then i think my main problem would be with her eyes being too round, They look like sheer terror. I think thats kinda odd.

>>3119771
Posted this at the end of the last thread
Any thoughts?

>>3119852
round photoshop brush combined with smudge tool.

>>3119855
>They look like sheer terror.

Yeah, that was the idea.

>>3119864
Body's really flat compared to her face.

Halp. I ran out of ideas. Maybe I should get back to grinding fundies

>>3119889
Forgot pic and sage if it still works

>>3119866
What are the settings on your smudge tool?

some stuff.

I think I'm going to leave this one as is.

Thanks for the feedback!

I think I'm going to leave this one as is.

Thanks for the feedback!

doodle between work.

>>3119891
if you are out of ideas this early I'll think that you didn't have much of an idea to begin with. Try thinking about the full view of what you want to draw, be it an interesting costume or a specific posture, mix it up.

>>3119911
try filing your hair behind you ear, the hand gesture is quite different from what you drew. Hands are usually the easiest ref anyone can find since it's right in front of ya, and giving it a more natural look give plus to your work.

Last digit, thoughts?

>>3119905
Blog?

>>3119953
I don't have a blog, sorry.

>>3119907
Well my dick likes this, but this really should go to >>>/3/ if you really want the right critique for this.

>>3119942
I'm just not a big fan of the coloring, but it's just personal opinion tho

>>3119907
did you draw the ref? if so, hella nice, the model's comin along nice as well, but much like >>3119975 said you'd probably get more useful help on the 3d board

pizza time

>>3120018
That looks like a comfy brush for sketching.

Pls share.

Nice torpedo tiddy btw

>>3120019
i link it to people so much that if i type "k" into the url bar in chrome it autocompletes to the link lol

https://gumroad.com/l/dvGBE?wanted=false&locale=false

also danke, i'm gonna try an draw a bra around em by the time it's done so i can slightly justify the shape hahaha

>>3120023
whops didn't mean to namepost a second time, forgot to remove it

>>3119771
lol of course the first time I get put into an OP is with a 10 minute doodle

>>3120058
DONT COMPLAIN AT CHICOALTE.

>>3120061
to counterbalance it i'd like to take a moment to thank chico for rememberin that i don't like to be in the OP. that or they jus think i suck lol

hi /ic/, see you next month

>>3120136
suber cutes, you gots a blagel?

>>3119915
>criticises hand gesture and not putting effort into ref’ing hands
>posts that pic

>>3119942
Nose appears flat/sunken and her left hand looks weird. Hair color is also too saturated.

>>3120061
Not complainin'
>>3120136
a kyut

>>3119818
good bodies with horrendous faces, what a waste

>>3120189
What is a "good" face for you?

>>3120136
This shit is boring, nothing but a bunch of sameface copy paste girls so what? you impressed with this? you expect other people to think this is good? some will obviously but most people with taste will know this is shit.

>>3120136
upper left looks just like shadman.
a lot of them are slightly better than shadman.


this work on appeal. cus shadman is not appealing.

>>3120273
wtf are those dots on her shoulders? i'm sure they are suppose to be freckles but it just looks like hair growing on her shoulders.

why is the shop person building a bomb?

and WHY HAVE YOU STILL NOT STUDIED HOW TO MAKE BETTER HEADS AND FACES!!!!

>>3120273
I am so mad on how wasted your other skills are because of your fucking heads.

>>3120288
You can tell by the style that this person has no intention of getting better.

>>3120274
sameface is a p weak crit without any context as to how it negatively affects a work other than "it bores me"

>>3120018
pizza has left my life but i feel it may soon return

>>3120136
Gibe blog

>>3120136
It is impossible to straighten a foot as far as that sitting girl in short boots does. Do not repeat the mistakes of Japanese artists.

Other than that, you are one of the better artists 'round here, keep it up.

>>3119975
>>3119995

why, thou?
/3/ is very tech oriented and has a really lack of artistry.

>>3119907 is just digital sculpture. You can critique is just as much as traditional Sculpture.

>>3120144
what's wrong with it? let me at your critique.

>>3120136
gteat stuff, 90s manga vibes are some of the best

my most recent oc work. any concrit welcome

>>3120273
ngl your backgrounds all just kind of blend together into one flat image and your characters are just kind of pasted in instead of looking like they exist in the space at all.

>>3119942
Might just be me but I feel like the groin/vagina doesn't line up with stomach position. feels like it's a little too far to the left for the angle

>>3120302
not that guy but sameface is literally the worst habit you could have. The fact that its boring negatively affects it. It's not even boring it's just hilariously bad.

>>3120298
lol this is a good one

>>3120322
That board is literally for showcasing 3D work and does do critiquing of said 3D work as well, they even have a "style thread" just like this for what it seems like >>579626. If you're working on something that needs attention for improvement use >>578614, it's what it's for. This board specializes traditional and digital artwork, not much 3D other than for construction and fundamental training is ever posted here.

>>3120136
I will never understand why /ic/ gets their panties so wet over this, I am guessing most of the replies are coming from fanboys. With that being said, sameface syndrome.
>B-but its the same character just different hairstyles!
Clearly not.

>>3120418
Because it's appealing. Post your work.

>>3120423
Please get better taste. Posting my work will result in thread getting derailed, apparently flat chests are a taboo here.

>>3120426
Right, you don't draw.

>>3120428
You just keep telling yourself that.

>>3120418
because it show some decent understanding of volume and anatomy, much better than what most of /ic/ can pull up at least. Yes, he needs to learn to keep the canvas more interesting, but it's a study, why can't you lay off people a bit before shouting "same face syndrome" all the way across the room.

>>3120448
>Artist posts to receive feedback and critique
>Point out the obvious sameface
>Fanboy butts in and attacks critique
>hurr lay off him man he shows decent volume and anatomy y-you're just nitpicking!

This is the absolute state of cancer /ic/ is engulfed in right now, congratulations you insufferable faggots.

>>3120430
because it is true

>>3120452
more like
>Artist posts to receive feedback and critique
>people like it
>need to find a flaw out of spite
reread >>3120274 and I dare you tell me with a straight face that is constructive criticism

>>3120452
post whatever you like anon I'm not here to stop you but I can say I don't like your negativity, critique can be another way. If you are so concerned with an identity, then you be you, I guess.
Also post work.

>>3120474
He's right you know.
>>3120475
>I don't like you!
y-you too!

>>3120475
>I don't like your negativity
Who fucking cares. This place is not for hugboxing, it's for constructive feedback. Art teachers alone with will kick your teeth in for relying on samefacing just like anyone else. It's a form of comfort zoning, and is a sign of regression. Draw something new.

I drafted out a mipha from botw gonna do a complete one today

Can't help but feel I'm auto-piloting myself into my old mistakes and errors again, really appreciate pointers as I carry on rendering this...

>>3120504
>>3120519
Being a total edgelord when giving feedback is like the opposite of constructive.

The guy drew something nice. Learn something from it since it is probably better than anything you can do

>>3120554
I just got to this thread, and I'm not the other guys who are saying it's shit, it really isn't but it isn't special. Drawing well constantly is a step, drawing unique is a skill. It takes skill and courage to draw something different each time that pen touches your canvas.

If you really want to get impressed and inspired by someone's work, see if they can make polished work that all look different and unique from each other, that's what I'm saying. Seeing the others saying it's shit because it has sameface syndrome isn't good, because the craftsmanship is indeed good, but they are right the artist behind it shouldn't comfort zone himself doing the same simple facial design every time. Hell he could have at least threw a male subject in there somewhere, just to see what else he can do.

Just saying, he should experiment more. He also shouldn't post pictures for the sake of posting when critiquing is the point of this board, if he doesn't want any form a feedback other than dicksucking. That is if that was his ambition, and I hope the people wanking off the comments that seemed negative to you folk follow suit to this advice as well.

Is it a terrible habit to draw half a figure, color, then draw the other half and color? I don't know anyone else who does it this way, but I have a hard time picturing how the final work will look if I don't. Any advice is appreciated.

>>3120552
>categorically refuse to get better and self-induce stagnation
>feign ignorance and ask for pointers
absolutely devilish my friend XD

trying to keep my lines... pretty difficult

added the last of the line details, then i'm gonna think of some way to color it, bonus points to anyone who gets all the jokes in this page

>>3120274
and your work?

>>3120615
Hey there buddy that's pretty demanding of you to go and ask for such a thing, you wouldn't mind if you set us an example and posting your work I'm sure.

>>3120593
Is this a comic page? If so. Next time space the page with panels. This page has alot of information stuffed into each other. Hard to tel

>>3120642
yeah, i'm doing a comic, thanks for the advice, i didn't realize i hadn't put in any spacing

Doing some style exercise

>>3120274
That's literally the best way to become successful with your animu drawings. If you were to look at the top artists in deviantart/tumblr you would see that they all draw cute girls doing cute things, or fanart. Literally all of them, no exceptions. Not a single exception. So clearly this anon knows exactly what he is doing and is practicing exactly what is needed to become successful with his art.

>>3120585
her mouth is a little off

>>3120418
>>3120274
So are you idiots on a self-guided tour of the alt thread or what. Don't know how else to explain these posts.

Colored the sketch from yesterday, gonna paint her fully tomorrow

>>3120585
Blog?

>>3120721
It looks great, but I think the pointy hair looks weird.

>>3120732
Thanks bud, I agree the hair doesnt make much sense, but I think it's kinda cool lookin

>>3120718
We're sorry we didn't suck his dick and further stoke his ego; the faces all look the same it really shows a high level of consistency it is quite superb, really it is something that is pretty admirable I especially like the 3/4 views they're very tantalizing and mystique you don't often see these I commend him for being bold and brash please let me bear your children.

>>3120727
https://barkode.tumblr.com/

>>3120721
Come on man at least fix the right arm. you're killing me here

>>3120751
Mind being a bit more specific?
My brain is small so when someone says "it sux fix pls" it doesn't really help me much, a redline would be sweet if you've got the time

>>3120380
>> This board specializes traditional and digital artwork
>>3D sculpture is digital artwork

I guess >>3119907 isn't wrong in posting that here afterall, huh.

>>3120380
>>This board specializes traditional and digital artwork.
>>Someone posts a 3D sculpture, which happens to be digital artwork.

I guess >>3119907 isn't wrong in posting that here afterall, huh.

>>3120679
I like the rendering and the drawing looks good, but she looks like a tranny.

>>3120805
Thank you! Glad you like it. I hate to say "m-muh style" but the character I painted isn't exactly pretty. I'm thinking about tweaking the jawline and chin tho, so she can still look not perfect but doesn't give off manly vibes

>>3120679
fix her left eye, maybe not so down there, can't tell since you can't see the other eye fully.

>>3120585
>>3120711
yeah, move it a little bit up. let her have a chin

done some stuff.

>>3120832
btw thanks for color advice, my monitor was completly recalibrate.

>>3120825
Yeah I was wondering if it was a bit low. Thank you for taking the time my dude, will fix

>>3120781
2D work. Simply what I meant earlier.

I mean go ahead, post more 3D stuff where no one prior is posting the same medium since they only understand drawing based work. Since no one has made and comment on that piece, other than that one that commented about the 2D drawing to make for reference for the model, but otherwise nothing.

Again, it's your choice, but there is a place that specializes 3D work available as a option as well.

>>3120585
Nose is too flat; unless it' part of her design.
>>3120832
Color's better now. The nose still...

Drawing really does suck...

>>3120914
eyes or too far away from each other, neck is too massive and wide.

>>3120914
WTF you haven't improved at all kys

>>3120951
yeah man I haven't really drawn seriously for a while now.. Too busy with other things. But thanks for letting me know.

>>3120914
literally ngmi

>>3120914
hi dentist kun ^u^~ all ur art is perfect. i know that because you go to the 20th best university in the world! canada rocks! you dont need any criticism and your obsession with drawing the exact same horribly flawed face is totally normal!

work in progress hence the sketchy aztec background. not a super complicated piece but any concrit is welcome

>>3120939
not him but any quick tips for drawings necks

>>3120967
better than your ugly fuckface loser

>>3120573
In my defense this is the first time I'm going back to drawing giant lolis after sticking exclusively to sketchbook drawing gestures and stuff for a while, but next time I'll try to render something that's not the same subject matter, I guess... sorry you feel that way :(

>>3120971
Do you yiff?

>>3121027
i'm not a furry

>>3120914
>that neck

>>3121010

The ends of the shoulders should be equal with the pupils, though not necessarily in this case. In women and in the anime you can use a slightly narrower positioning of the extremities.

>>3121064
i mean neck not shoulders.

>>3120136
le eternal plateau man

I've read that good cartoons depict an action rather than a character, but even when I know who I want to draw, I can never come up with something for them to do.

Anyone have any tips for coming up with action when doodling from imagination? Not gesture poses where the character isn't actually doing anything, but mundane actions that can communicate the personality of a character

>>3121088
I often feel like images like these blow up the expressiveness. It might be more prevalent in western animation than anime because in anime, when someone's standing. They're standing and that's it, why else you want them to be doing some other crazy thing like expressing themselves? In my opinion, it depends on whether or not you want them to be the focus to communicate something without words. It's like a person staring out the window, what are they thinking of? Do they have a gloomy face? A happy face? Are they listening to music? But you wouldn't care if they weren't in the focus and just a BG character.

>>3120721
Since when can Nile draw anime

>>3120423
it looks like shadman... and shadman as i said earlier is not appealing.

>>3121092
I feel like that's a pretty sweeping assumption to make about all anime, and there are plenty of western animations you could say the exact same thing about. Expressiveness is never a bad thing, at least in stylized works, but in cases where time and budget are an issue then it can't always be made a priority. I'm still not entirely sure what you're trying to say beyond that

>>3121153
Go away trash!

>>3121154
nah

>>3121153
>>3121154
is the "muh style" dude again!

D-does anyone remember Miku fag or remember what happened to him

>>3120740
worrying about another persons ego is the plebbest thing a human being can do

if you like it, you like it. at least stick to your initial critique instead of outing yourself as a contrarian

>>3120740
I love you anon can we be friends?

>>3121153
is this a meme yet?

>>3119833
>>3120136
Krenz tier. Genuine blog?

>>3119911
holy gorilla hands

>>3121226
can you even see?

>>3121272
Im mistaken then, but there seems to be a subgroup of anons here emulating specifically yoshinari/krenz/atmosphere aesthestic; like >>3120721 , nosebro, and kirikei fron las, among others.

>>3121289
yeah they do that . not krenz teir yet though.

>>3121310
Shit.

Does anime belong here?

>>3121319
Camera flipped it. Here

>>3121320
Fuck this shit
Fuck phone posting

>>3121110
Been drawing anime on and off since 2015

>>3121289
>>3121226
youre so fucking blind nigger

>>3120573
>>3121025

Dont listen to him, you said you auto piloted so you are asking for pointers again. No shame in doing so, getting rid of habits like that is really hard.

>>3120136
Blog?

>>3120136
I think you could try to play with line weight more.

>>3120552
Please, study value grouping.

>>3120774
It's way too short. the forearm starts near the nipple. You could use some practice on the hand and the left shoulder is way too pointy. Practice your arm/hand construction. But overall it's a very nicely colored piece. You're just missing basic anatomy that alot of people get wrong.

>>3120136
blog?

>>3121462
Work on your line value. But i like how you're adding lines to weird places. Keep experimenting with it.

>>3121310
You made the common comic mistake of drawing the same panel twice. Work on your perspectives. The middle panels very well done as you fit multiple actions inside of it such as the girl reaching for cash while talking to the cashier. The last panel is confusing. I can tell he's locking the door but next time why not show a shot of his hands locking it. As a comic it's good on a beginner level but in terms of anatomy and lines you could use a lot of practice.

>>3120832
The colors are flat and her torso/hip anatomy makes her look like an ant.

>>3121596
Which part of my line art can be the best example of your suggestion? I know that my line weighting is not great, however learning my mistake from the worst part will be much helping.

And I can't grasp the reason why you liked muh style despite of "lines in weird places".

I'm not trying to disprove you. Just want to be clear. I do hope to be improved by your opinion. Thanks in advance.

>>3119915
Thanks I might do a small revision later

>>3121234
They were way worse

>>3120914
I find your stuff appealing.
just try to do more than cute faces.

Another sketch I tried to finish

>>3120552
The girl and the castle perspectives seem to be very different. I think it would look more correct if they both seemed to share the same horizon line

>>3121792
What's the difference between a sketch and a finished piece for you?

>>3121792
Can you please study hands, they're awful. Everythings else looks alright.

>>3121799
I call these sketches because they are not colored. The previous one might just be a doodle I guess...

Maybe it is the wrong way to call them but I find myself limited a bit because the lack of access to a pc tablet ever since my surface pro died.

I only recently started but I'm scared I'll turn into a shadman one day.

>>3121836
Post your work

planetary ring and hover scooter

desu

>>3120136
please I just want the name of your blog

>>3120136
Is this what you call talent? Why is 90% of /asg/ not this good? It's not like they have more experience than you do.

>>3121320
Here, fix'd

>>3122090
did you used a ref for the first two

>>3120273
>>3120593
>>3120971
>>3121153
>>3121310
>>3121840

I just.... I just can't take it anymore.

>>3122108
Yeah, mixed refs

>>3119818
Continuing.

>>3122115
draw something without using a ref

>>3122159
Aye, I should do more of that, thanks, anon.

>>3122223
Blog?

>>3122223
good attempt , bad loomis

>>3121013
holy cheese man you have some anger issues! maybe you shouldnt become a dentist : ( youre gonna rip peoples teeth out! geez lousie dentist-kun why are you such a meanie?

>>3122223
the thumbnail looks professional quality

>>3120679
Donezo

>>3122340
the edge control here is really good, the proportions of the face too. looks professional - pretty great work imo. it just reminds me of how ugly these character designs are. wtf is with those fuckin eyebrows man

>>3122340
What do you call this style? It's like WoW right? Western fantasy I guess?

>>3122344
Thank you! Idk, I just painted my WoW elf. I'm very used to see those long ass eyebrows but it must be weird for someone that's not familiarized with them

>>3122347
Yeah it's wow! I like the aesthetics of western mmos. That theme combined with something more cartoony like the work of Max Grecke.

>>3121792
>>3120552
>>3121588

Was past the point of no return but I pushed myself to finish it instead of leaving it hanging. At least I know better now, the most important part is to remember these mistakes. Thanks for taking the time to reply!

>>3121792
face is flat

>>3122472
no need to post the same thing in multiple threads

>>3122472
Just seeing your poor excuse of a head makes me genuinely angry; and knowing that we don't have any legal reason to kick you off this board is pissing me off even more. Just fix your heads and you can shitpost for all I care.

>>3122530

>>3122538
he's wrong but you're not right either

>>3120273
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>>3122577
post work

>>3122538
lmao always the dunningkrugtards that redline

>>3122472
Dude are you even making any effort to improve?

>>3122726
He's made a finished comic page, isn't that effort enough?

a little doodle

>>3121013
>>3122289
As someone who got teeth extracted recently with a mediocre dentist
>holy cheese man you have some anger issues! maybe you shouldnt become a dentist : ( youre gonna rip peoples teeth out! geez lousie dentist-kun why are you such a meanie?
this

>>3122906
dentist-kun is my favourite meme. i got banned because i made fun of him once. it all started when he had a super aggressive autistic reaction to some calm criticism of his weird down syndrome anime girls.
whenever he shows up just say he has a lot of anger issues for a canadian and hell throw a tantrum like a 12 year old call of duty player.

im also really sorry about your teeth man. that really sucks.

>>3122906>>3122909
he is called dentist-kun because he was very adamant about becoming a dentist and being a student at the 20th best university in the world in toronto. and because he draws bad anime art.

>>3122577
i mean, i'm literally making it>>3122538
and yes, that would work if this wasn't a downshot of skips face and was instead a straight view

Haven't drawn in a long time but just started an illustration class and the first assignment is modernizing an Aesop's fables character. So I have a rough of a sweet talking, cheese stealing fox from the Fox and the Crow. I already noticed the cheese arm is too long and shortened it.

Mobilefagging right now cuz I'm on the shitter, so this might come out sideways.

Just some faces and a few doodles.

>>3122340
noice

>>3123049
Also this quick sketch from last night. I also drew a bunch of figures that I might post later.

>>3121064
I've been doing some studies but is there any especific measurement for how long should it be the neck , i have seen some artist doing really long necks and they look kinda right my guess is the less realistic is the drawing the more you can get away with it lmao

pic related doesn't look too bad

>>3123076
and this one looks kinda off , i think the head is too big

Did these two in the last couple minutes. Done with mouse as usual.

So, I absolutely adore the coloring styles of Kishida Mel (left) and Hidari (right), as well as their line work -- Not necessarily the anatomy, but the way their lines look with their coloring. I know Kishida Mel works almost entirely digitally, but I can't figure out how to actually replicate it, let alone make it my own. The same goes for Hidari and his earth tones. Either way, absolutely gorgeous. Any ideas on how Kishida Mel gets such smoooooooooth transitions of various colors, or how Hidari makes his coloring look like it's done with acrylic colored pencils? I figured stylization people would be who to ask.

>>3123171
Ive heard that Corel Painter has the most realistic classic drawing tools. By which I mean it has tools that pretty much look like the real classic physical drawing tool.

>>3123171
>>3123193
I second this, painter is namba one at reproducing traditional painting methods

>>3122899
i see you like that brush i linked, i really like this doodle nwn
i'd change jus a few things about the face, namely make the lips be more in profile an redo the far eye an eyebrow to give a bit more form to the face as well but still, love the over all piece (especially how you swooped the far shoulder seein as that's a thing i do a lot cause i like the flow it adds to the shoulders)

>>3123002
love the idea but saw a few things that could use some work

i'll try an bullet point what i did an why from the top down

-ears put more into perspective relative to the changes i made to the head, curved them a bit out of personal taste
-head/hair shape are one in the same imo, or at the very least the hair silhouette should echo the underlying form of the head
-brought the eye in a bit an rotated it to help with the form of the skull
-modified the snout. i like to think of the cheekbone as extending into the snout itself, helps give that nice full feeling to the skull on furry type creatures
-i also redid some curves on the bottom of the head as it meets the neck to help with the flow
(these two vids of byson howard (co-director of zootopia) are probably better examples of what i'm talkin bout here: https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GymbbhOBjDM https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=OqV63qRFoUs )
-fixed tray arm proportions more for my sake sense i kno you already did it yourself
-slightly curved the inner part of the straight arm to keep it moving so to speak. curve implies it's swinging in an arc where as the two straight lines made it feel like it was moving straight forward (think superman flying)
-FLOOFED UP THE TAIL CAUSE I LIKE FLOOFY TAILS
-fixed proportions on the far leg, also added some curve to it to help keep it moving as well

hope this helps an doesn't read like bizarre confusing rambles nwn

Is there a Discord server for this thread?

First time doing anything but hard shading.
Tips?

>>3121590
I think the shading on the underside of the upper arm just throws the perspective weird

>>3123271

why do you keep asking this every month, troll?

>>3123298
Literally my first time posting that. I just want some art buddies.

sketch

>>3123299

there was by someone named "kuma" and the rest is history

discords are a quick way to tear down someone with drama

>>3123193
>>3123210
I'll look into it. Thank you, Anon.

>>3123304
top kek

page 4

>>3123328
jesus christ..

>>3123328
I'm starting to think you can actually draw better than what you show. It's pretty hard to pull of pretending to draw like shit.

>>3123262
Holy crap the adjusted proportions and curves make a huge different. I see what's going on with the snout with a smoother, continuous head shape. This helps a ton thanks anon

sorry about the camera shot. My computer literally had a spasm attack and shut down before i could save it, and this is the only picture I could salvage.. I wish sai had a recovery tool.. I'm trying to make this better but I'm not that experienced with digital so any advice on how to colour?

>>3123405
>alienware
good goy

>>3123407
stay mad poorfag

>>3123407
>>3123411
dude I got the alienware 17 R4 1060 model and they said it costs 1500 on the website on amazon, but it ended up being like 2300 because of the usd to cad exchange rate, also the stupid delivery guy asked for an extra 200 dollars.

>>3123305
Holy shit, Corel Painter has a fucking garbage GUI.

>>3121820
I have studied and continue to do so hopefully they will less horrible in the future

>>3122456
working on it, thanks!


Tried to finish >>3121786 a bit more

>>3121820
I have studied and continue to do so hopefully they will less horrible in the future

>>3122456
working on it, thanks!


Tried to finish >>3121786 a bit more

>>3123405
>neck area still fucked up

you need to learn how to draw things in different angles but first you need to know what are you drawing instead of guessing

>>3123420
Yep. It's the one thing that's kept me from buying it.

>>3123330
I dunno. I have a feeling some level of tracing is occurring. Some things are solid like the backgrounds, basic poses and clothing folds, but they have fucked up faces and hands.

>>3123280
needs more contrast/darker shadows

>>3123440
how good is your gesture work etc? All you seem to focus on is rendering really pretty animu faces

>>3123540
Its not even anime?

>>3123544
It's based on one though

>>3123560
Vocaloid isn't anime...reeeeeeee

>>3123540
???

Last thing I finished wasn't very animu I think

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dF-52RWQiIw

>>3123572
You're splitting hairs anon. If your high school art teacher would look at it and say it's too "Annie May" then it's anime.

>>3123560
Vocaloid isn't anime...reeeeeeee

>>3123540
???

Last thing I finished wasn't very animu I think

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dF-52RWQiIw

I do gestures and others stuff but I erase those almost as soon as I finish them since these are basically daily training

>>3123171
>Hidari (right)
Heh

>>3123405
Try this
https://www.pixivision.net/en/a/1249

>>3123405
Do you take commissions?

>>3123751
Blog?

practicing more panel stuff. each panel is unrelated to the last.

>>3123171
>The same goes for Hidari and his earth tones
>his

don't mess with my lefty waifu

hi guys

>>3123882
where you been at Poops?

>>3119818
Continuing.

>>3123895
What's up with you and japanese porn? Are you sexually frustrated? Stop drawing this crap and get laid.

>>3123898
That's not porn.

>>3123898
he's probably a loser virgin

>>3123898
>>3123916
What's wrong with you?

>>3123916
>>3123898
that sounds like projecting

tried inking directly without a sketch..ended up with midget proportions

>>3123916
Saying that to someone who would draw some obvious self insert porn would be one thing, but here that's just silly and reeks of projecting.

>>3123882
neck looks too stiff, especially the line on the back. that nipple on the other hand hnnnngggggggg

>>3123882
I like it.

>>3123588
The girl on the top left looks like something Doxy would do. I like it

>>3119907
Nice, are you going to check out 4R8? Sculpt maintains a lot of character from the original drawing, really nice stuff, will look wonderful when posed.

What mat are you using for the eyes, toy plastic?

This is a human suit I Designed. It was made by me around the time I was a little you know, I'd say, "interested" in trans-humanism and I conducted many studies about it.
Now,my main focal point mostly revolved around the revolutionary idea called "TRANS-HUMANISM".
Well, I expect many of you wouldn't sure understand most of things I said, so... I will just. You know. Maybe put some reviews on your so called "art". Let's see

>>3123927
Need a better anathomy

>>3123895
Hot. I Love OPM and I'm glad seeing artists inspired by it.

>>3123784
Your shadows are weak.

>>3123606
Weeb. Draw from realism, like me

>>3123405
You could use some anatomy son.

>>3123280
Funny! Blog?

>>3123002
Hot. I like your anatomy.

>>3122530
Love it! Don't listen to those autistic manchildren, they don't know how to draw.

>>3122223
I really love the colors in this, good one.

shadman

>>3123946
i want to see reference for that

>>3123945
The color in this version is much, much better.
I see the damn magenta/turquoise overexposed combo all over deviantart.

>>3123302
Damn, that's a pretty good head construction, just clean your lines a bit and maybe the composition - there's a lot of space that doesn't serve any purpose.

You got a blog?

>>3123344
glad i could help nwn

>>3123882
>>3123945
>>3123946
haven't seen your work in so long i don't remember what it looked like last but i'm sure you've improved probably so good job? but also i don't remember if you were an asshole or not so i guess also please don't end up to be an asshole

also if you'll allow me to make a shitty mspaint edit, may i suggest connectin the neck jus a incy bit farther back so that it seems to connect more to the center of the mass/shape of the headskull thing

>>3123974
looks like you forgot to turn the lineart layer back on, forshortening is completely lost on the legs thanks to the kneecap not reading clearly against the lower abdomen, shape of the big toe on their left foot (also our left) feels wrong like the inner line of the form doesn't curve properly to have that werid bulbousy big toe shape like on the other foot
also i will never forgive you if your art somehow gets me into feet

>>3123405
its literally the exact same face as always
down syndrome eyes and all
oh my good how autistic can one person be
why doesnt she have shoulders
why is her ear so fucking large
why is her entire skull deformed and gigantic
christ

>>3124078
post work

>>3124181
>>3124078
Autism

>>3124181
flash me

>>3123970
this is either bait or autism t b h

>>3124270
Senpai

>>3123970
>3123970
>>3122530
OMG I LOVE IT TOOO I LOVE IT SOOO MUCHH I LOVE IT SO MUCH MORE THAN UR FUCKING AUTISTIC BRAIN!!

>>3123606
Thanks man it really helped! I also really enjoy your artwork

>>3123612
No sadly I just don't have time and people like this>>3124078 make me think twice of pursuing art as a serious thing.

I'm still trying to get into drawing anime girls, but I'm not too sure about her face, always feels like I have the most trouble getting them to look cute.
Her hands are still pretty messed up, but I'll redraw them anyways

>>3124439
not the guy that drew it, but the only noticeable difference i can see is that you shaded the eye more darker.

>>3124054
Yeah I was thinking about painting some paintings on the background so I was leaving space for them tiene noticed.
Maybe I should give them less protagonism. Also i do but I don't usually share it here. But glad you like it so far :)


Here's a cleaner update

>>3124446
not gonna make it

>>3124422
>thicc

>>3124422
what has the file name to do with the motive?
and what is she even doing?
the 2nd versions face is a lot better though

>>3124446
you can't be serious

>>3124468
she's going to hold a small bunny plush with her hands, but since I'm not done with her hands, I haven't drawn it yet. There's also a few parts of her outfit missing. Just thought I'd try to get a few opinions on this before I put too much work into it and end up getting too lazy to correct anything.

>>3124439
the face looks way better like that, thank you!

>>3124054
Yeah i was thinking about leaving some space for me to do paintings on the background. Interesting paintings for some storytelling i guess, Thank you man, glad you like it :)
And my blog is http://dreriart.tumblr.com/tagged/my-art


Heres a cleaner update of that drawing

sketcho ready

I have no idea what I'm doing rn
send help

>>3124547
work at a higher resolution, you shouldnt be able to see pixels like that

>>3123945
>>3123946
>>3123991

>>3119865
Very cute would wife the hisoka

>>3124648
thanks, but i think this was also referenced from the same photo; and this artist took the liberty of taking out the huge light spot on girl's face
well i'm just speculating, thanks anyway.

>>3123606
Thank you, Anon. I'll have to look into a way of reliably converting this method to digital, though. I can't seem to find anything good on this. Thanks again while I do research.

>>3124648
whoa blog?

how do you make the eyes sit properly in the head

>>3124852

don't draw anime to learn how...trust me

>>3124856
post work

>>3124867

a new >>3124903

>>3124852
Draw the head properly first

>>3124867
>>3124872
BTFO

>>3119905
was that cameltoe really needed?

>>3120273
creepy as fuck

>>3120273
this is actually pretty appealing to me, keep making it looks cool

>>3120977
is she gonna suck him