/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3110228
>No hair
>innie
>flat chest

MOOOOOOOOOOOOOODS

>>3110228
Blog?

>>3110228
Made while grinding fundies

>>3110235
keep grinding, my dude.

>>3110228
your art always looks so flat. you should do more perspective exercises.

>>3110328
Grind my cock between your tits and call me Jack Sparrow honey

>>3110513
I was about to say

>>3110519
Even the Jack Sparrow part?

>>3110529
Yeah. I was going to say "Captain Jack Sparrow honey *hiccup*" but same diff

>>3110533
Far out!

>>3110513
oh, I see why your art is so shitty. you are a dickbrain.
NGMI

>>3110711
You arent gonna make it either messing around in a porn thread

>>3110711
Never gonna make it, schmever gonna make it, who cares.

>>3110727
>>3110772
already made it. I have a patreon and make a comfy living off my art.

how did I succeed? by not being a dickbrain.

>>3110870
Can I suck your cock master?

>>3110229
>innie

wot? is that a sign they're underage? how do you know that?

>>3111406
i told you, if you want to make it stop being such a dickbrain. or at least don't be jelly of others.

>>3111417
kys pedo

>>3111463
Dickbrain, schmick brain

>>3111549
>faggot shit

>>3111544
that's why you will never make it. you are underestimating the importance of not having a dickbrain mentality to make good art.

>>3111549
be careful with same face syndrome, its starting to kick in on you, don't confuse it with "my style"

>>3111564
thanks for the warning, yeah, i try and give people distinct features, but i might have been sliping on that recently

>>3111549

sticky

working on this

>>3111598
nono, sticky will be the cum variant that i do later

>>3111572
kek. first learn to draw better than a 5 year old and then you can start thinking about making distinctive faces.

>>3111607

no, I meant read the sticky, especially loomis. Your head drawings are quite bad. Practice spheres and work your way up.

>>3111602
i like it, those lips look kinda like niggalips instead of asian ones

>>3111561
But I can only get off to near perfect anatomy

A few sketches I did tonight

burn me to a crisp. I did my best, but I think there's more that I can do.

I posted it on /aco/ eariler via mobile, and posted it to tumblr yesterday.

>>3112165
>loli
mooooOOOOOOOOODSSSSSSSS

I'm trying get into drawing hentai for pay, I think I'm just good enough but my problem is I don't know what people want.

>>3112288
why are the nips on top of the breast?

>>3112300
They're supposed to indicate highlights. Normally I refine my drawings in Photoshop but I decided to post a less complete image this time.

>>3111602
Digital lineart is so fucking slow and tedious, any tips?

>>3112337
What program are you using? How are your lines so nice?

>>3112343
Thanks, I just try a lot until I like the line. Also I use the eraser sometimes to give some form.
I'm using photoshop and It's the first time I use Lazy Nezumi for lineart. I know Photoshop It's not the best program for lineart, maybe I'll download Manga Studio for doing more lineart in the future.

>>3112343
This is also helpfull.

>>3112288
Take commissions?

I just wanted to know how the anatomy looks on this, I can't tell if it's passable or not.

>>3112454
Not to anyone who knows what they're looking at. Obviously the hands are trash but also the clavicle doesn't do that and she's turning so much (think the direction of the hips vs the direction of the ribs) that she looks off balance.

>>3112464
Ah, I think I see what you mean. thanks!

>>3112472
no, you don't. go draw boxes and simple shapes for a few years and then MAYBE start thinking about drawing the human figure.

STOP WATCHING PORN.

STOP MAKING PORN.

>>3112545
Shut up, beard man.

>>3112545
>stop making money
yeah, sure. kek.

>>3112580
Find another means that doesn't play into people's worst vices, money-worshipper.

>>3112165
MOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDSSSSS

>>3112597
>>3112178
MMMMMMMMMMMMMOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOODDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS

>>3112165
MODS GET IN HERE

>>3112165
>ripping off gatarishit
kys

>>3112178
>>3112597
>>3112626
>>3112631
Ugh, this is the worst level of faggotry these days.

>>3112634
kys pedo

working on tracer

>>3112679
why did you give her grandma's tits ?

>>3112679

She has a weird squished frog face, her eyes aren't placed properly, and her goggles are skewed

>>3112426
I would take commissions but I have only 2 examples of hentai drawings and no one has approached me for my art.

Pic Related: second example.

>>3112825
>no one has approached me for my art
that's cause your art sucks. if you want to make money with this kind of skill, you'll have to pander to dickbrains with more niche fetishes (futa for example is too mainsttream).

>>3112894
Yeah it kinda does suck, but I've seen worse sell and I thought I could take advantage of that.

>>3112901
>I've seen worse sell
Link?

Test

Here's my sailor scout bondage domination WIP lineart, please be gentle

>>3112906
Do 1,000 gesture studies, don't come back until you have done 1,000.

>>3112908
>do gesture studies
There's almost no gestures in the picture, wdhmbt

>>3112902
I don't tend to save bad commissions that aren't for me. I found this example on DA of a paid commission. So here.

>>3112910
Jesus Christ people on DA are looser with their money than friggin' saudi princes.

Actually the commissioner might have been a saudi prince, come to think of it.

Working on this for next week, what you guys think I need to improve on?

>>3112968
fuck, forgot to downsize.

>>3112913
DA money seems to be constantly changing hands, people who sell adopts or artwork also buy
I don't think any of them are really earning anything significant from it

Apologies if this seems like spam, but I downsized it to 700x990, Rushed in the last 2 times like a dumbass.

>>3112988
This is good for morale-patch-grade logo graphics, but if you want to make pieces of art that stand on their own you need to start using line weights that allow for greater detail, for one. Secondly, all your fingers look the same length here.

Also I hope you are planning on some shading.

>>3113002
yeah, I'm planning on shading soon, but more importantly I should try to study hands more, plus try to experiment with line weights. probably help makes things look better, thanks.

Who are some popular H artists who just aren't actually super good/ have shaky fundamentals?

>>3112590
Not enough time for that beard man

>>3113217
is that a mouthpusspuss

>>3113300
You like it?
I havent seen it before, i feel like the inventor

>>3113217
https://www.fiverr.com/pendroid/create-hot-illustrations-for-you

>>3113305
seems extremely weird but it would probably feel great

Finished this

A flower loli tied to a pole, planning on coloring it digitally.

>>3113518

>>3111478
>thats a childs vagina!

>how do you know what a childs vagina looks like?

>fuck off, ur the pedo not me!

>>3113521

>>3113537
>asking about how it looks like
>not killing yourself

kys pedo

>>3111417
changing my sister's diaper

>>3113707
haven't used any ref so far, so if anyone has some for me, that'd be very welcome.

working on this. Any crit would be appreciated. New to drawing porn

Posting a WIP Sketch. Any crit would be appreciated! I'm kinda new to drawing porn.

>>3113884
Needs some chromatic abnegation

Question: how does /ic/ find their hentai when literally 99% of the artists are garbage skill wise. It's gotten to the point where I can literally only fap to one artist because every other artist falls to the simplest fundamental mistakes. Composition/readability/focus is the biggest offender in literally every artists work.

>>3115808
Stop thinking with your brain and start thinking with your dick.

WE

>>3110228
Well. I can be happy someone found it good enough to make it an opener

>>3110331
Might look into that, have any good sources that wouls be a good point to start for perspective?

>>3110230
zedarkpenguin.tumbler.com

>>3110229
Thats not how that works.

>>3113884
>>3113707
>>3113521
>>3113518


These will look quite nice for the Podesta Collection.

>>3112909
yes, that's the problem innit

>>3116228
It's a feature not a bug

>>3113217
>>3113305
You're too late, the idea has already been done by the Nips. They are the inventors of fucked up shit, stop trying now so you don't get high hopes.

>>3114050
Cute! I hope you make her arm and hand as nice as her chest. use refs to help get it right. Props if you can make her nose feel a bit less flat.

>>3113305
You haven't heard of superamiuniverse/modeseven then.

>>3116695
does this actually turn anybody on? Seems more like a parody of fetish shit

>>3116708
Even 1 guy 1 jar turns someone on.

>>3114050
That's really nice. Just the hip bone is kinda weird and I can tell that you didn't plan to draw her knees. See picture. I know it looks less appealing, but knowing the underlying structure can really help.

>>3113419
It's not bad, but the thick black outline + airbrush combo is killing me.
Try to color her lines, learn about the importance of hard edges and practice some less complicated rendering. Skin is matte and translucent, so it doesn't have nearly as wide value range.

>>3116695
I've been staring at this shit for a few minutes and even now I can't understand what the fuck I'm looking it. How is this a thing

>>3116695
the penis inside the butthole is what most gets me.

>>3116891
Also, pay attention to the areas where there's bone, the landmarks.
And the belly button generally is closer to being on a top plane than a front plane.

>>3116893
>>3116894
Not to get too off topic but the characters were absorbed and formed into the big one's butthole and vagina. Some sort of vore I guess.

Hey guys, I have 2 questions:

1. Would you fap to my drawing (left is reference)?
It looks very asexual for me, is it some fundamental skill I've missed or just author's perception?

2. I just got Clip Studio and want to try out the legendary brush tool - to see if I wanna transition from Krita, learn the interface etc.
So far I've messed with the G-pen, the oil brush and the brush density settings. Anything else that makes CSP special?

Thanks!

Can't get the eyes right

>>3116901
I think you pulled off the female figure better, at least from an anatomy point of view, but I'd agree that it seems a bit asexual. maybe try pushing the pose a bit more, arching the back and neck further. The face and expression are important as well, it will probably look a lot better once you add those

>>3116897
are you sure that's where the pelvis is

>>3116920
I really like this, do you have a blog?

>>3116920
move them further apart

>>3116926
Thanks! might be a bit extreme but I think you're on to something

>>3116922
No, it looks way off. I guess tunnel vision fucked me up, thanks for pointing it out so gently.

>>3116920
Thanks man, will definitely work on that.

>>3116920
stop posting shota already. it's against the rules of the board for a reason. what the fuck is wrong with you?

>>3117023
And what reason would that be? Does the sight of cartoon dick offend you or smth?
He's by far one of the greatest artists /ic/ has atm, we can't afford bashing that kind of stuff.

>>3117053
depicting minors in sex acts is illegal. simple as that. how hard is it to understand this?

he can post stuff that is not shota. and if he can't draw anything else besides that, then he's not that great an artist, is he?
also, stop worshiping mediocrity. it's true he's one of the best in here, but that's only because the rest are pretty much garbage.

>>3117072
Nice bait. Try harder.

>>3117023
>>3117072
Fuck off

>>3117154
>>3117157
kys pedo

>>3116899
The draftsmanship and technique is great but holy fuck the contents make me want to gouge my eyes out.

>>3117154
>>3117157
you guys should really rethink your life.
how the fuck can you be so rotten inside?

>>3110228
r8 my dicks

>>3117332
>no circumcised
oy vey anti sementism

>>3117340
why would he want leather dicks?

>>3117332
post some proper art if you want to be considered. this is nothing.

>>3116695
I want you to kill yourself

>>3111549
PLEASE WORK ON YOUR FACES PLEEEEEEEEASEEEE

>>3117488
i'm working on the eyes currently, i dunno if i have it right with >>3116542
but i'm trying

Any advice how to not feel like a sellout when you draw lewds for money? Also is there any list of popular fetishes that sell the best, besides furries?

>>3117738
>Any advice how to not feel like a sellout when you draw lewds for money

while in the shower tell yourself, "im not my job," and practice on your free time so you can improve

>>3112292

OK for starters i don't like his face. But that could be a style thing so whatever.


Something is wrong with his left shoulder, it is too high.

His tits and abs don't match. His man tits are chiseled but he has a chubby stomach.

Also there is some weirdness on the line from the hips to the crotch. perhaps a softer line would look better, but it could be collateral damage from the stomach.

>>3117835
He's just a troll who never listens to advice don't help him.

>>3117023

>>3117868
pecks are too high and nips look like a woman's

>>3117868
alright, keep doing it and I'll keep reporting you. hopefully you have a static ip.

>>3117880
shotas dont have such big dicks

>>3117900
top kek

>>3112825
>>3112974
I like your style

>>3116901
the sketchlines here are very good but your inks are dead in the water unfortunately. i wish i could give better feedback since i was in the same situation but my solution was to more or less just clean up my sketches as i went an use those as lines

>>3117868
sure wish a demon with a big cock was choking me with a leash and collar ;-;

>>3117332
Very good, as far as dicks go.

>>3117900
>this nigga doesn't know about hyper
lurk moar pixiv faggot

>>3117332
Not bad, but veins should be decorations of the main form, not really form on their own. Only give hints of them, study real world reference.

>>3117939
Yea, that's probably what I'll end up doing. I made up my mind after inking for about 15 minutes - it's tedious and will probably get replaced by a plugin within the next 5 years, so why bother.

>>3117835
sorry, just woke up, made a few of the recommended changes

>>3117880
>come to porn thread
>bitch about porn

Please leave you retarded moralfag.

>>3117873
>pecks are too high and nips look like a woman's

That's the fucking point.

>>3118231
>comparing shota/lili pedo shit to all other porn
>being this retarded
just kys, you fucking sick piece of shit.

Just started doing nsfw stuff, and i absolutely love it. If anyone's got a guide on pricing, that would be really helpful.

Tumblr and DA:

https://jobopron.deviantart.com/

https://jobopron.tumblr.com/

>>3118357
>lolita
>loli

die in a fire pedo

>>3118357
You set your prices based on how much demand you get.
Start with a price that you deem fair and then if you get enough demand you can raise your prices, or lower them if there's not enough.

>>3118365
Also. Draw legal content if you don't want to get into trouble. What you have in your galleries is pretty sick (not in a good way).

>>3118365
Thanks man, that helps.
>>3118369
The really fucked up shit are commissions, and i have no problem drawing peoples fucked up fantasies. If it would benefit me to take those works out though, i'd definitely do so. I don't really know this community that well.

I'm having trouble drawing good butts. If anyone has tips and guides I'd appreciate it.

>>3118385

rare
a piece i like
A+

>>3118385
Blog?

>>3118385
It's not a bad butt if you intended to go with a more chubby build.
Otherwise it's all about the buttock to thighs ratio imo.
Oh, and fix the position of her arms. Right now it looks like her elbows are buried in the sand.

>>3117494
Try different nose types. You'd be surprised how far that'll take you

I NEED HELP TO IMPROVEEE!

>>3118617
thanks, i guess i can try and give firnez a different type, cause i can see as it is now, just larger and sharper doesn't actually look all that different from skips standard nose, i do have other characters with different nose types tho

>>3118626
Loomis

>>3118626
That's actually pretty good, the only thing I see that's triggering is that her traps should not be that prominent at that angle.

Otherwise just work on coloring.

>>3118628
I know you can do it friendo! Keep practicing! If it means anything, if I were gay, I'd smack my dick to your stuff.

>>3118654
appreciate it, and despite what some posters try and say, i am actually trying to implement the advice given to me where i can

>>3118654
Lying to him isn't going to help him improve. But we all know he's never going to anyway.

>>3118667
Good! It'll take time, just as all things do.
>>3118668
Positive reinforcement is as useful as the reverse. What he really needs to practice is his faces as well as more advanced poses and he'll be on his way to be a decent smut artist. Also you're correct. Lying will not help him improve, which is why I didn't. However, simply telling an amature they aren't good isn't useful either. Surely you could provide a post of more quality than
>lol ngmi
Can't you?

>>3118626
You messed up her shoulders and traps. Look at her clavicle. It slopes and bends down, which clavicles definitely don't do. They are straight and slope op toward the lateral end and then down. I'd personally change her breasts to not look so basketball-y and the right nipple is positioned weirdly. The face is passable, but I personally find it kind of lazy looking.

Honestly though pretty good lad keep going.

>>3118626
i like your coloring on this, however, the position of the pussy is waaaaaay too low, and there's a weird bump at the bottom, the clavicles are a little odd, also the nose it too ill-defined and the shape of the eyes could use some work, the bottom lashes are odd, also the arm on her right is badly plotted out and proportioned

>>3118491
>you were backed up a lot
I hope that doesn't mean poop.

>>3112692
This. Looks like a ninja turtle

>>3118769
no, god no, it means no-fap

>>3118654
dickbrains like you shouldn't give art advice.

>>3118800
You're absutely right but we have to be bice to the poor little shitters so their fee fees don't get hurt apparently.

>>3118803
you have an awfully overblown sense of your impact on my life if you think shit posters on an anonymous board for for art on a szechuan henna website hurt my feelings, and before you say i'm projecting, he's literally talking about me

>>3118800
No u

>>3118803
It would be one thing if you actually gave something of substance. Unfortunately for you, Shit posting doesn't count. Feelings got nothing to do with it partner.

cute bois anyone

>>3118840
Fix that chin

>>3118840
Any with him getting ass fucked?

>>3118844
Why wont you draw it you stupid cunt

>>3118846
What a great idea! Will give it a shot!

Any pointers? I still have no fuckin clue how to do lighting

>>3118858
Stop drawing.

>>3118858

>>3118866
This, I'm afraid.

>>3118866
>>3118871
y u gotta be like that :'(
here's another - i was going for Paz from MGS
constructive criticism pls

>>3118874
>constructive criticism
I don't know where to start, this picture is an affront to God

>>3118874
You really need to draw from reference to even get a semblance of what's going on friend.

>>3118874
>>3118858
You need Loomis my man. Start by looking into /ic/'s sticky.

>>3118937
What type of style are you going for? If anime/manga, I'd study the faces and heads of professionals. The head seriously needs work as well as the facial proportions. Also, the shoulders strike me as being too weak...

>>3118937
Looks pretty good. However, don't be afraid to draw the hands and legs. Gotta keep practicing them. Also the shoulders look off. Look at a reference of a woman in a similar pose to get that body type's shoulder shape. Try practicing more dynamic poses to give of a more sensual vibe, too.

>>3118948
i tend to try for an anime face, but without the typical avoidance of muscles in characters, any particular mangaka you'd recomend, my favorite is kaoru mori, but i don't wanna try and rip her off
>>3118949
thanks, yeah, i wanted to avoid fucking about with skips arms cause i really wanted to try and design some lingerie, tho i kinda see what you mean with the shoulders, i might try and change that

>>3118953
>kaoru mori
AHHHH, I can see where you're getting the problems from. That artist tends to have occasionally the flatter type of head that looks incorrect and stands out negatively. Her or his eyes are often oddly wide and sometimes seem very unnatural and wrong. I would suggest studying more than just one artist. Keep the things you like about some artists. And get other influenced from other artists. Try the male proportions in terms of faces from Yotsubato. Like her dad and Jumbo.

>>3118953
The lingerie looks interesting. Keep doing that while practicing you anatomy as
>>3118948 said. If you wanna try a challenge, try drawing your character in a pose like pic related.you can show off the design of the clothes while practicing posingand anatomy

>>3118964
oh man i love yotsuba, yeah, tho i personally like to make the eyes big for expressive purposes, i do see that i can stand to make em smaller

>>3118967
that'll be the next thing i do, cause the last 'dynamic shot' i tried with the sexy lingerie was this one

>>3118970
Keep it up senpai

feedback welcome and encouraged

>>3118840
try to focus on cute hands instead of cute bois. those fingers are atrocious to look at.

>>3118858
honestly, you have no fucking clue how to do anything.

>>3118874
>constructive criticism pls
>>3118982

>>3118937
looks like you are regressing instead of improving. fucking kek.
>>3118982

>>3119059
stop drawing

Any thoughts?

What is a good site to upload your erotic drawings? Tumblr?

>>3119243
hf

Bad fishnets.

>>3116708
Modseven is literally the only fantastic artist in the Vote/Absorption fetish community. They make the best stuff but also the weirdest. He did scat stuff recently which is gross

>>3119274
want to trade art? I'll come up with a gif

Daddy, does this make my butt look big?

>>3119536
No, it makes you look like a whale.

After noticing I started wanking too much, I said to myself I am gonna fap only at weekends.
And now, on the second week, I find myself drawing simple porn improvisations like these ones (black background + eraser and soft brush to tune the value back) and enjoying it even more than tedious regular pictures which take several hours to do lineart for and tens of hours to fully color and render.

Do you think this "sexual tension-filled drawings" thing actually works?

>>3119718
And another one.

>>3119536
minimilist but I like it

>>3119718
It's pretty gay

>>3120294
That's quite an ambiguous expression, anon-san.

>>3119718
>Do you think this "sexual tension-filled drawings" thing actually works?
These blurry drawings look pretty bad. To be able to convey sexual tension, you need subtle details. You aren't skilled enough to convey that with a few strokes, I'm afraid.

>>3120325
Okay, gotcha. Though I'm curious to know if you consider anyone in this thread or the previous to be good enough for that. Or your personal favourites, if there isn't any here.

Is this lizard cute?

>>3120344
Maybe tone down the scales on the face. Add a few broken-up groups of smaller scales off to the side of the face and let the imagination fill in the rest.

>>3120339
Lately there has been very little people that posted good art here.
Imo best of this thread are:
>>3120344
>>3117868
These guys know wha they are doing. The rest is beginner stuff imo.
From the previous thread:
>>3085078
>>3094240
>>3094960
>>3101105

I like these mainly because of the energy pushed forward by their stroke confidence.
You can these guys have good fundamental knowledge and mileage behind them.

>>3120339
Lately there has been very few people that posted good art in here.

Imo best of this thread are:
>>3120344
>>3117868

From the previous thread:
>>3085078 →
>>3094240 →
>>3094960 →
>>3101105 →

These guys know what they are doing. The rest is beginner stuff imo. I like these mainly because of the energy conveyed by their stroke confidence.
You can tell these guys have good fundamental knowledge and mileage behind them.

>>3120344
Is that the Lusty argonian maid?
Super cute, man. Interesting lighting, nice shape design.. the tail is a nice opportunity for some beautiful lost edges.
Do you post your art somewhere?

Here are some pics on similar style, for inspiration.
>pic related
Doxy (lost edge on top right snake)
>https://pre08.deviantart.net/aad0/th/pre/i/2016/260/6/b/owo_what_s_this_by_imalou-dahxjsq.jpg
Imalou
>http://www.silverlakevoice.com/wp-content/uploads/2016/03/SilverlakeVoice_Interview_Benjamin-Bjorklund_11.png
Bjorklund

not strictly porn, but the first page in an explicit comic i'm doing, tho not colored yet

>>3120594
You are really regressing, no kidding.

>>3113417
niglips

>>3112913
But what if Saudi princes actually have like teams of highly skilled artists who draw the most amazing pictures with the weirdest fetishes? And we'll never know.

>>3120594
>make passable bodies
>this anon ALWAYS, ALWAYS, AL-FUCKING-WAYS fucks up the face

christ for the love of god just study proportions of the face
just for one fucking day
please, before you taint this board with your shit faces like that one time a /co/fag invaded /ic/ with his shitty art.

>>3120594
These arms hurt me, but the same face syndrome even more.

should i get more pizza

How git gud

>>3120885
Unironically, Loomis. Or at the very least start learning from refrences

>>3120872
That look pretty good to me. Though I may be wrong, the arms on the mouse woman look rather short. But I wouldn't know how to adjust it.

What kind of references?

>>3120968
Could you try making something not disgusting for once? You've been given advice numerous times.

>>3120986
i don't getcha?

>>3120994
You. Suck. At. Drawing.

>>3120968
How long have you been drawing? Just curious.

>>3120997
like, if you want improvement, you gotta give more to work with than 'it's shit' i get that you don't like it, but no specifics are give, and before you say 'the face' that's not actually all that specific

>>3120999
i've stopped counting the years

>>3121002
You know what you're right. I don't want you to improve. Carry on.

>>3121005
Well, it seems as all the other anons seem to keep repeating throughout the thread about your faces. Are you afraid that your ocs will looks some of their femininity if you make too drastic of a change? Ill be honest, they do look rather similar aside from the hair. Or is it that you just haven't broke out of samefacing yet?

>>3121039
i'm not worried about bein aflicted by sameface, it just happens that the two twinks have similar faces, and tho i totally get that, you're right that i don't wanna make too drastic a change there

>>3121043
God, your art is just so fucking awful. It literally UNINSPIRES me to draw.

>>3121054
good, if that's something that can affect you, you shouldn't draw

>>3121056
Maybe you shouldn't post your work asshole. You're like a virus on this board.

>>3121061
good, the weak and sick will fall

>>3121043
Well, i may sound like kiss ass to the other anons, but as an a mature artist myself, I do like you work. But, please understand that, I think you continuing to pursue that will hinder your progress. May I take a crack at your ocs to give you an idea on how to change em up ever so slightly?

>>3121071
certainly, go for it

>>3117023
>>3117072
>>3117162
>>3117228
Still pretending the furry+shota/loli content ban is anything but a retarded, I see
Yeah let's keep telling artists to fuck off even though this is an critique board that should welcome all kinds of art regardless of subject, because gods forbid I see something I don't like, that might hurt my feelings.

>>3121318
Shit dude please do something about those heads I swear a lot of what you have going for you is really good but those heads just don't look good

Yearly reminder

>>3121074
sorry it took a while. as you can see, I'm not all that great, but we all gotta keep practicing! now, I gave the boy I believe you call Sammy softer and rounder features since, at least off the impression I got from your pic here>>3118229 and >>3116542 here, hes got a softer personality. rounded eyes nose and chin compliment it if I may say so. also, simply giving him a set number of freckles instead of randomly setting em allows him to stand out more I think? next the one I think is called Skip. I actually prefer your version to mine but just for the sake of the conversation, based of what Sammy said here>>3118229 it sounds like Skip is rather flamboyant. so perhaps sharper features to show a sharper side of him along with catty eye if he is a clever or tricky. I would have gave him a more slender build as well but this is irrelevant. Finally, I took a shot at your dark elf as well as it seemed his features were very similar to his partner here >>3116542 and >>3118491 here. it seems based off his dialog he is supposed to be a masculine figure. his brows kind of show this but not much else. I would suggest a broader nose and a stronger jaw at the very least to hit that theme home. his muscles cant carry all of it. his face must show more too. of course I'm an amateur artist, and surely others can design your characters way better than I, but I hope that this will help you and you can grow a little more

>>3121365
thanks man, i'm bout to head to bed, but i'll look these ove and impliment what i like, i think the softer face for sammy's a good idea, and tho i might keep skip as is i like the eye idea, and while i don't think i'll be giving firnez stuble, i like the defined cheeks, and i'll try to figure out a good way to make a broaden nose fit in, thanks again for the fresh perspective

Go easy on me desu.

>>3121347
No wonder he makes money despite getting blown up constantly, meanwhile we're here.

>>3123400
Are you planning on that being an x ray dick sucking? Looks alright. But if youre going for the x ray, gotta animate the weewee. Looks good so far though! Keep it up!

>>3110228
How do i come up with porn? I just stare at the page. help

>>3123989
Thanks! i don't really plan on having an x-ray cock vision. It's just to line up the cock to the mouth.

>>3124122
>think of what fetish you want to happen to you
>draw it
Anyway is that pic yours? Needs some more work from a technical skill point of view but you got good taste, keep it up son

pls be gentle

>>3112165
Got an artblog?

>>3124220
Thanks. I wish i could just come up with extremely hot monster porn out of nowhere. but its really rare

>>3125158
moar?

>>3125158
fantastic as always

Sorry for posting fish.

>>3125215
You're pretty good.

>>3125207
Love this style, blog or name ?

>>3125158
>Macro getting fucked by his dad
Incest isn't my thing but traps are.

What's your blog compadre?

>>3125220
thatfisher @tumbly

>>3125167
>>3125225
kairunoburogu @tumly but they got more work on their hentaifoundry if you click the commissions link on the sidebar, also lotta stuff that seems to only be up on gelbooru or other similar sites

>>3125215
cute but i don't feel like you've figured out why you like boobs yet. gotta figure out how to make em feel (read: look) softer. remember that 9 times outta ten when it comes to lineart in porn, less is more

>>3125207
so it's estabilished you can't draw anything else besides children?
fucking sicko.

>>3125158
Please draw more Marco PLEASE. You are fucking amazing with traps.

>>3125158
Please draw more traps.

>>3125158
Who is the girl suppose to be?

>>3125340
stop begging, pathetic poorfag.
instead earn some money and commission him.

>>3125352
I don't have money to spend on art, that's why I'm asking him. Don't be a asshole.

Why is this thing extremely unappealing? It's not mine but I tend to do the same shit, especially with lineart and rendering. I feel that lineart is made by CSP's default g-pen. How do I use it non-retardedly, and overall how do i make lineart not shit?

>>3125380
don't be a pathetic beggar and just stop making requests then.
fucking losers.

>>3125383
you need to practice for years to be able to have an appealing style. especially if you want to make good looking porn.
stop asking stupid questions, ffs.

>>3125383
Blend, shadows almost never works that way in real life with 4 different shadows everywhere. The colours are also very muddied. I think a way to make this more appealing is if they added more colour variation as well as shading that makes more sense. But one thing I do warn is to also avoid pillow shading. This is far more disgusting looking than quadruple shadows that make no sense.

just finished this, you guys might like

>>3125495
too chaotic and messy.

>>3125434
You're being a douche for no reason.

>>3125537
no, I'm being a douche for a reason. now gtfo.

>>3125572
I used to think you were a good artist, now I see your just a asshole. You just lost a fan

>>3125582
Not the same guy btw.

some porn practice featuring my oc

>>3125158
This is really good but I think making the guy a black man would have been hotter thbfam

>>3125952
which guy

>>3116542

I know you're trying to draw smut but a lot of people were complaining about your faces and weren't really telling you why the faces looked unappealing to them. At the same time I'm not a master of drawing faces either but I want to try to help.

I'm going to assume you were aiming for the ideal beauty standard faces.

First of all, neither of them have foreheads. The angle you drew the pupils and the amount of depth the eyes go into the head make them look really flat. The mouths also cut way into the cheek way too deep and it makes them look more awkward than "sexy" (imo) The hair

You can help yourself by studying / practicing drawing proportions of the head until it's second nature and you don't need to measure them out. I'd pick up Michael Hampton's pdf in the artbook thread if you can. Even if you're going to be drawing anime for the rest of your life, at least flip through and copy / eyeball draw some of the pages on faces, their proportions and etc. You don't have to "master it." Just try for an hour or two (more if you have the patience). It will help you figure out how to add depth/variation to your stylized drawings much quicker than anything \ic\ will ever tell you.

Also because you're drawing yaoi, in general, it's a good idea to have at least tried to study realistic anatomy at least a little bit. Most of the more super star successful popular yaoi artists draw in that realistic rendered style (Jo-Chen/GuiltPleasure, Sakimichan, PenguinFrontier, Dopey) There are some that draw more anime styled gay porn (Lvlv, Mentaiko, ghostgreen, mazjojo, raspbeary, and etc) but all of them have studied realistic anatomy at least a little bit.

crappy redline unrelated

>>3125978
Marco obviously.
Marco is more dark skin since he is Mexican.

>>3126070
hey, i appreciate the breakdown quite a bit, i appreciate the suggestion and demonstration on eyes and face, i think i'll try and do my best to instate a stylized version of that, because i'm not actually aiming for a realistic style with my works, so a stylized body and form is what i try for, but i will look into anatomy refrences for musculature

>>3119190
shut up
>>3119059
is pretty good except for the horse face, which looks like shite

>>3125582
I'm not Kyle, you fucking idiot. Stop fucking begging commission artists for free art, dumbass.

>>3126139
you can't do stylization (your shitty art is proof of that) if you don't first understand reality.

>>3124541
fucken nice

>>3126139
Gotta agree with >>3126160 on this.
Art is like telling a story. If a story is told by someone who witnessed it, he can choose what to emphasize and what to leave out and it will feel real and believable to those listening.

If you don't see the event for yourself and just repeat what others had to say about it, your interpretation will always be derivative and plastic.
We all study realism, but I doubt anyone here actually aims to draw realistic works of art. Shit's boring.

>>3125215
Good, but the vag looks awful. One option is to put it on the bottom plane, like a little indent where it'd sit - the point is that when you fuck it, you cum upwards, into her belly, not downward, towards her spine.

Or just look up 'dolphin pussy' and reference that.

>>3125158
I like this better than your finished works. The sketch has more liveliness to it, why not just keep it that way? Try posting some drawings in this stage and see the response from your audience.

>>3126536
Kyle's not here, man.

>>3125158
This looks better than your finished stuff to be honest like >>3126536 said. Who's the girl suppose to be by the way? She's cute.

>>3120872
Blog?

Hey, /beg/ only got me shitpost so I figured you fine gentlemen can give me some solid advice. I realize its unfinished, I'm more worried about the large forms (torso, hips, legs) than the hands and faces. Those are separate studies for me and I can do that myself. I started studying seriously a few months ago so my construction skills are still very lackluster. Crits on the breasts are very appreciated because I can't seem to draw large breasts for the life of me.

>>3113217

>>3126898
It doesn't seem you're very concerned with the orientation of your characters, you always draw them the same.

What happens when you tilt the body on its side, is that all the fat and relaxed muscles will drape down like cloth, and those that have to stay up (her head) do so by flexing muscles that keep 'em straight.
Keep that in mind, draw slowly and with emotion.

Here's one of my recent sketches

>>3127669
Another one

>>3127490
>tries to give advice about giving weight
>even writes it in his "redline"
>draws a shitty scribble without any weight behind it
I lost my sides somewhere

>>3127669
>>3127817

>>3127490
Thanks man, I'll definitely work on some fat studies and see what I can do.

>>3128115
I appreciate his drawing quite a bit. Go fuck yourself.