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Post your current erotic drawings and paintings here and provide helpful criticism and advice to others!

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Questions about references for drawing porn will be answered.

>> No.3083230
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>>3083213
thanks
moving over here couldn't get rid of my old post though so i will just link to it.

>>3083007

>> No.3083350
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3083350

Nobody said anything last thread, and haven't gotten much asking elsewhere. I'm contently opposed to the face at the moment, so I'll be redoing that in whole but anything else that's painfully obvious that I'm missing?

>> No.3083352

>>3083350
i think its mainly the face (possibly the whole head shape being wide as well)

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>>3083350
it feels like you are just posing her like this because you want to draw her from this perspective.
you have 3 characters in 3 different planes.it's a bit confusing. Focus on what matters the most,the hot bitch and then build around it.
The cropping is a bit strange too. Face is too plane

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>>3083213
Feel free to crit, is the head too big?

>> No.3083366

>>3083361
woops wrong thread

>> No.3084013

>>3083213
https://moomeu.tumblr.com/

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tfw

>> No.3084455

I'm curious if anyone has advice on working with screentones/halftones. It's like the one thing I just can't really get to look right digitally.

I've been inking with CSP. Is there a specific resolution to work at that achieves the look in work like:

https://e-hentai.org/g/1037013/51f363dc05/

or is it just something that always looks different no matter what you do digitally vs traditional? Honestly any information on the topic is totally welcomed, because I sorta just feel lost.

>> No.3084521

>>3084169
Pedophiles leave.

>> No.3084845

>>3084521
:^)

>> No.3085078
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3085078

are centaurs allowed?

>> No.3085081 [DELETED] 

>>3085078
how to get brush like this on SAI?

>> No.3085090

>>3085081
i use photatoshop
it's kyle's free animator pencil
https://gumroad.com/l/dvGBE?wanted=false&locale=false
things of note: my cintiq stylus has tilt which is p important to making this brush actually look nice, at least in my imo

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>>3083213
some sketches ive done

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>>3085092

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>>3085093

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>>3085094
don't judge this one too harsh I was high as fuck, I'm aware of the retarded hand

>> No.3085123
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I need help.
And not of the anatomical kind (though that is still an issue too and i am aware of it)

This took me way to many HOURS and see myself getting any faster, I am already about to make excuses like "well i am still learning to use my ellbow more instead of my wrist and i get anatomically ever better and i have to make sure stream is entertained and chat is engaged while working. I did not use a referencence and making low angle images look good is hard" but all these things do not justify me spending hours on what should be half an hour at most for a professional...
Issue is while i see myself getting better in most regards due to practice and understanding, i only see mself getting slower with the more details i try to take into account. I do not know how to practice "speed", I did figure drawings but never to a level where i say "okay this strikes a nice balance between anatomical correctness and time invested." I'm afraid when i set the figure drawing timer to lower than 5-6 minutes that i commit anatomy errors to muscle memory instead of learning anatomy + speed.

sorry for the wall of text, this really bothers me about my artistic progress. Hope someone can help :(

>> No.3085128

>>3085123
Spending hours on something is not a bad thing. In fact, it's better the longer you take.

>> No.3085131
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>>3085078
i like your anatomical exagerations, though it looks like the balance between the horse vs human parts is off.

>> No.3085145

>>3085092
>>3085093
>>3085094
>>3085107
That's disgusting, especially those snarky faces. Decent skills, but you're awfully tasteless.

>> No.3085159

>>3085131
you're probably right but part of what i really personally like about centaurs is when there's size difference between the human body an the horse body, don't know why but it makes my kokoro doki doki.

>> No.3085164

>>3085145
hahah I know my taste with the evil faces is bad but it gets me off in a evil succubus kind of way. I only draw porn when I'm high as fuck

>> No.3085166

>>3085164
then if you don't intend to get better (drawing while high is the worst possible approach to getting good at art) stop posting on /ic/.
you can make a blog on tumblr if showing off your art is the only thing you want to accomplish.

>> No.3085168

>>3085166
lol nah drawing porn I don't seriously, I'm doing illustration at uni, I can show my proper drawings if you want but its not really the thread for it. your so serious ahah

>> No.3085171

>>3085164
Stop doing drugs, seriously. Marijuana is pretty harmful when not extracted for medicine.

>> No.3085179

>>3085123
>do not justify me spending hours on what should be half an hour at most for a professional
here's your answer (and it shows in your art). you are a beginner but you want to bite more than you can chew. with this kind of skill you have here, you shouldn't even be streaming and distracted by other things like chat lol.
study, grind and get better, before trying to pass for a pro.

>> No.3085181

>>3085168
stop wasting bandwidth already.

>> No.3085182

>>3085171
yes daddy

>> No.3085185

>>3085159
totally understand and while i was doing the edit I thought that now she looked more cartoony - which your style reflects but less like a "real" proportional centaur, so yeah striking the balance between those is up to you :)

>> No.3085186

>>3085181
unlimited brah

>> No.3085195

>>3085179
okay, thanks, still need to make a buck though. So i can't stop working on things like these.
What excercises do you recommend, back to figure drawings ?

>> No.3085200

>>3085195
If you just want to make good bucks, keep drawing porn, but refine your taste. Your skill is good enough to make money from porn, but what you're drawing is gross, no one's gonna masturbate to that. I don't know, maybe try to watch more animes? That's what people want.

>> No.3085202

>>3085195
>back to figure drawings
what made you think you should already stop doing figure drawings?
dude, your anatomy and perspective are both horrible.
if you want to make money, find a freaking day job and do porn on the side. you simply aren't good enough to make a living out of the shit you are making and apparently spending way too much time on.
either develop better art or become quicker so that you can profit from the shit you'll be selling.

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>>3085092
bit of color

>> No.3085287
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coming off a years-long drawing hiatus because I got tired of thinking I could draw better than the porn I got off to.
trying out SAI, and so far really enjoying what the program can do.

I tried out the left arm in a variety of poses that didnt feel that natural, and eventually just set it behind her and kept drawing. I figured in that pose it would be practically hidden from view; but i'd like to get some thoughts on it. I promise I wasn't trying to hide hands

>> No.3085290

>>3085221
previously they were grayscale turds, now they are colored turds.
stop trying, or at least stop posting here and wasting our time.

>> No.3085295

>>3083230
like everything but the face. i'm getting uncanny valley vibes from it

>> No.3085492
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>>3083359
>>3083352
Overall I think I've figure the problem, of course after trying to make this work after a while before giving up on that part for now. I haven't emplemented this bit, but basically it doesn't really look like she's looking down, logically her head would be leaning down a bit, but it kinda isn't for no real reason...

As far as the other characters, I think it largely stems from not seeming to have any solid relation yet, though I'm sorting out how to make it look like the one on the left is partially hanging off of her while the other is climbing between the webbing that's suspended her where she is.

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first time doing porn. any critique?

>> No.3085695

>>3083213
whats the name of futa anon on the OP

>> No.3085698

>>3084169
Literally the best thing to come from Shadman existing.

>> No.3085699

>>3085698
her dumblr is great for fapping.

>> No.3085703

>>3085699
Thought it was just a one off gif, got a link?

>> No.3085706

>>3085703
no, look it up.

>> No.3085707

>>3085706
I reversed image searched and cant find anthing.
And I'm not googling shadbase ass clap not a trap tumblr.

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>>3085707
stay in the shadows

>> No.3085727
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here my stuff

>> No.3085731

>>3085290
he says as he sucks at drawing aha

>> No.3085769
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Continuing this one, color and shading is next.

>> No.3085776

>>3085769
where will you post the updates? whats your tumblr?

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>> No.3085808

>>3085776
To follow the updates with the wips and all I'd say to go on my twitter :
https://twitter.com/TheGoldenSmurf
But I do also will post it on my second tumblr, Pixiv and hentai foundry blogs.

>> No.3085838

>>3085808
how did you learn anatomy futa degenerate? i have to many problems with flow.

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>> No.3086011

>>3085791
>>3085860

read the sticky

>> No.3086030

>>3085791
kys 4 real man

>> No.3086120

>>3085295
thanks i will try to re-work it.

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>>3083213
Practicing boobs and marker. How am I doing?

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>> No.3086338

>>3084455
Can somebody answer this? I'm interested too

>> No.3086430 [DELETED] 

>>3085290
doesn't really matter if that anon sucks at drawing or not. he's not wrong.

>> No.3086435

>>3085731
doesn't really matter if that anon sucks at drawing or not. he's not wrong.

>>3085769
you didn't fix the hands.
you keep ignoring critique you get even though you need it very badly.
>>3085838
he really didn't

>> No.3086436

>>3086280
you should be practicing boxes, vases and chairs. you are doing just as any other beginner that thinks they're ready to draw figures, but they really aren't.

>> No.3086437

>>3085727
not bad

>> No.3086607
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>>3085078
cute! You got a blog?

Some rendering practice on a copy/study to get used to digital. Lasso and layer management still feels weird. Mainly focused on torso and thigh skin then moved to the clothes. Tips on rendering clothing? Didn't feel as responsive treating it like I rendered skin.

>> No.3087194

>>3086607
apologies, all i have is a personal account where i retweet art an joke with friends, i very rarely post art, danke for the compliment tho nwn

>> No.3087201

>>3085769
did you do the 3d models? what program is that?

>> No.3087660

>>3087201
What 3d models?

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>>3084169

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>> No.3087747

>>3086280
Do some non-stylized figure studies and breast drawings first

>> No.3087803

Whatever happened to Kyle?

>> No.3087819

>>3087660
can't you recognize a normie that can't tell the difference between good art or bad art or fucking 3d?
stop baiting for yous on this board of dunning krugers, you included, and git gud.

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pls rate

>> No.3087855

>>3087838
3/10

>> No.3087930

>>3087666
The more I look the more I hate it.

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>> No.3088117

>>3088032
what's with all these bad artists starting patreons nowadays? fucking cringe, kek.

>> No.3088150

>>3088117
You know what's worse? Paying an artist months and months ago without getting the work, they start a Patreon that barely cracks $100 a month and they refuse to do your work and instead focus on Patreon art.

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>>3087819

what? im talking about this you goober.

>>3088150
share pls

>> No.3088187

>>3087838
try not to work on a white background.

>> No.3088194
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Rate that one

>> No.3088197

>>3088194
eyes are freaking me out real bad

its alright but the eyes are scary.

>> No.3088217

>>3088197
So should a make them smaller?

>> No.3088247

>>3088217
not exactly. id recommend reflections.

>> No.3088338

>>3088179
>what? im talking about this you goober.
learn to quote, autismo.

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not really porn but some gay drawings i did

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>> No.3088492

>>3085492
I've seen your work before...
I like your style...
A blog or any book recommendations would be awesome.

>> No.3088540

>>3088187
thx, but what backround then? neutral grey?

>>3087855
well yeah, was just practicing... don't plan on taking this further anyways

>> No.3088604

>>3087838
its clear that most of the attention went to the tits and the hip area

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Ok, this one is a WIP (work in progress).

>> No.3088690

Whatever happened to Kyle?

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>>3088492
I come around every so often, take what little critique I can get usually.

I neglected to put up a modified one before work, but the only real difference is a slight adjustment of foreground objects..

>> No.3088705

>>3085287
is heart pupils the best drawing meme from the recent years? why is it so appealing even tho is not real?

is it because we, as humans, pay more attention to the top half of the pupil, since that's usually the one closer to the eyelids so the easier point of reference? is putting more emphasize on the top half of the pupil the fact why the hearth symbol works so well?

>> No.3088707

>>3087838
paint hair as it were clay,not threads

>> No.3089219

>>3085860
pretty nice just not into chastity

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Should i burn it to hell or is it fixable?

>> No.3089529

>>3089439
How heavyset is she supposed to be? The waist is very wide but her arms are thin.

>> No.3089576

>>3089529
yeah, i also thought that waist is the problem here.
She supposed to be thin or smth.
What about everything else?

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>>3083213
I plan on drawing this rat lady again sometime soon. A lot of people said that this work felt a a little lifeless.Can someone suggest anyway I can get good lines but keep the life in it?

>> No.3089898

>>3089576
Draw in the ribcage, it should help you position the deltoids better as well. The deltoids are also out of place, they should be more on line with the clavicle.

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Decided to try my hand at porn today. Fuck me up

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something I sketched up in my free time

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>>3085594
did you fap to it?

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>>3089219
fair enough

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Here's something I did a while back. It turned out okay in my opinion. I still need to work on the concept of lighting, and the woman with the short hair seems a bit small compared to the woman she's rubbing.

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Here's some of my lazy garbage.
Not really porn ig but..
I'm just having fun with this desu, I'm aware that there's a shit ton I need to work on and I'm willing to be flamed to shit if it means getting better.

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old work but, thoughts? :^)

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>> No.3090579

>>3090511
>It turned out okay in my opinion. I still need to work on the concept of lighting, and the woman with the short hair seems a bit small compared to the woman she's rubbing.

Friend, lighting is the least of your concerns. You need basic construction skills. Dont skip steps, start with Loomis and work your way up. Dont create a character before understanding forms.

>> No.3090581

>>3090502
from all the thousand and one pictures from this guy, he never learns how to draw foreheads
is this what they call "never gonna make it"?

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some beta-peg shit I did for a friend. Any thoughts?

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>>3090511
there's literally nothing okay with that picture
>>3090579
what this guy said

>> No.3090593

>>3090583
what are those fucking hands? Inconsistent anatomy especially on the biceps, weird forearms, fucked up faces
bridget's body and thighs look good to me but the shading is off, tomo's arm should be much more on display because right now her hand just magically floats, that small hint of an elbow doesn't cut it

it's a start

>> No.3090990

hey this is my entry for a lgbt community exposition soon, I had to explain what ahegao is to them and they gave me the ok to the piece, crituqiue and suggestions appreciate !!

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>>3090990

>> No.3091015

>>3090991
even as a joke this looks absolutely pathetic

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>> No.3091426

Is there a specific program I can use to study people having the fuck?

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>>3090063

>> No.3091503

>>3085093
10/10 made me raff

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early rough sketch, first time actually drawing porn

>> No.3091513

Holy shit it's the fucking gallows

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>>3091512
line art update, how2less autistic face??
Having fun playing around with line weight

>> No.3091557

>>3089903
It's alright. It looks like you're painting with the smudge tool or something though so it looks kind of blurry and unappealing imo.
Her pussy is in a strange spot and the entire lower torso is not very figured out. So just keep studying rendering styles and anatomy like usual.

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>>3091553

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>> No.3091683

>>3091666
>post furry
>get b&
pick 2 animalfucker

>> No.3091695

>>3091683
SEETHING

Tails aren't furry, dickface. Your weeb mods also declared anything without a snout as a "Monstergirl" so they can stay in denial about being into animal people.

>> No.3091857

Can drawing too much porn be a hindrance on your progress?

>> No.3091860

>>3091857
I don't think so, depends what you want your main focus to be, as most of your time spent drawing should revolve around that.

>> No.3091861

>>3091666
That's a 10/10 butthole.
Is it meant to be a dickgirl? The face is very feminine.

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could use some fresh eyes on the composition and proportions.

>> No.3092007

>>3091857
Drawing too many bodies with clothes on will fuck you up.

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Tried drawing a completely flat girl.

>> No.3092056

>>3092051
If your aim was to be completely repulsive and not at all pleasant to look at you nailed it, good work.

>> No.3092069

>>3092056
Thank you.

>> No.3092153

>>3092007
they're both just forms. if you can observe you can draw both. Even if you draw from whatever other tools you can learn to do both

>> No.3092223

>>3091942
looks good but figure out where her back leg will be and try to make sure there's no tangents with the dude's arm. Her heels could be a bit clearer too.

>> No.3092254
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3092254

>>3091574
hatching can end up looking really messy if you aren't careful. try making the lines evenly spaced and with the same thickness. it's good practice for pen control.

>>3092223
thanks! i blocked in the leg. doesn't look like tangents will be an issue there, but thanks for the heads up. and yeah, her heel is really rough. drawing feet (and hands) is torture.

>> No.3092455
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3092455

Working on the next page.

>> No.3092478

>>3092455
those breasts on the right look way more saggy than they do small, if that's what you're going for. flat + big line underneath = sag

>> No.3092488
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3092488

>>3092455
do you just drop a few cashews on a piece of paper and decide thats where your dicks will be

>> No.3092492

>>3092478
Well, yeah, did wanted to give them some shape if that's what you're asking.

>> No.3092493

>>3090583
tracers are the worst thing to exist
you are the worst thing to exist

>> No.3092542

>>3092488
kek

>> No.3092600
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3092600

I don't really draw porn much so I guess let me have it. I drew this in like two hours at around 3 in the morning.

>> No.3092614 [DELETED] 

>>3092600
Possibly the worst and least arousing thing I've seen all month. It looks like a Bratz doll's face was melted and then stomped on. The body looks like a crushed can of tin can. The hands and feet look like they were made by a 10 year old with parkinsons while he was also trying to masturbate.

>> No.3092649

I think drawing porn is the secret to git gud quick. if your drawings are shit you'll know because your dick will say "I cant fap to this"

>> No.3092656

>>3092649
Most porn artists can't fap to their own work. Only narcissists can.

>> No.3092675

>>3092455
how to render pls

>> No.3092703

>>3092455
tatsumaki's dick is coming out of her right thigh/ilium.
also, start applying some perspective to those faces. you draw bodies like they are seen from below, but your necks and faces are always drawn as seen from a front view.

>> No.3092706

>>3092656
>Most good porn artists can't fap to their own work.
fixed that for you.

>> No.3092732

>>3092656

What is the point if you're not going to fap? For that matter what is the point of drawing porn? There is a lot of that stuff with real people. Can I assume you all have fucked up fetishes?

>> No.3092734

To draw porn you need reference but you can't just copy it from porn photos if you want to make stuff for patreon or commissions

So what's the option?

>> No.3092774
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>> No.3092778

>>3092734
reference porn and other pics but change up aspects of the pic so its not 1:1, you silly goose

>> No.3092780

>>3085707
chelhellbunny

>> No.3092800

>>3092649
That's bullshit though. I could very much fap to a poorly drawn picture that I drew in my second month, as well as in the first week after buying a tablet. Now, of course, my tastes are more refined.

>> No.3092801

>>3092800
(And I still fap to my work, but more discriminately.)

>> No.3092997

>>3092732
>What is the point if you're not going to fap?
In most cases making money.

>> No.3093001

>>3092734
>To draw porn you need reference
Only if you aren't good enough to invent art on your own. With enough experience you can build a good visual library and understand how anatomy and perspective work, and at that point you can make pretty good stuff without using any pose references.

>> No.3093002

>>3092800
>>3092801
Post your art. I'm sure it's pretty much garbage.

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>>3093732

>> No.3093793

>>3093762
I've gotta start drawing all my characters wearing mittens

>> No.3093847

>>3087838
It seems like you aren't looking at the subject enough.The bulge where her left tiddy and torso meet as well as the abdonimal flab on her right side have been completely smoothed over, her lips have shrank, and you've angled her nose more towards the viewer, and these are all things I caught on the first glance.

>> No.3093870
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3093870

Thinking of redrawing the head

>> No.3093873

>>3093793
>I've gotta start drawing all my characters wearing mittens
>mittens
make that body bags

>> No.3093879
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3093879

are there any skills other than figure drawing you need to do this?

>> No.3093883
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3093883

>>3093873
like i would know how to draw even that

>> No.3093904
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3093904

id like to hear from you guys, I think my art is getting better, but i need some crit

>> No.3093911

>>3093904
end your career

>> No.3093915

>>3092997
can you live on porn commishes?

>> No.3093916

>>3093911
rip

>> No.3093987

>>3092614
I could fap to this easily, you are weak

>> No.3093992

>>3092455
Have you ever seen a penis? Honest question.

>> No.3094073

>>3093915
Yes and you don't even need anything beyond intermediate skill. You just need to be willing to draw the most depraved shit imaginable like cub porn.

>> No.3094076

>>3093904
How many drawing/figure drawing books have you finished?

If the answer is none then there, that's the problem

>> No.3094081

>>3093870
Facial features seem to pop around

>> No.3094223

>>3093915
Yes. I do, and if I can, anyone can.
But you have to put your name out there. Best way is to have an appealing art style and as good skills as possible (obvious), producing as much content as possible and having a consistent enough style to be recognizable.

>> No.3094240
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3094240

I may have oversaturated things but Im not big on rendering in the first place

>>3085078
>>3087194
I've seen your stuff all over /ic/, please make a blog someday your style is great

>> No.3094319

>>3094240
stop drawing little kids getting dicked, you fucking sicko.

reported.

>> No.3094374

>>3094240
Your stuff reminds me of JJfrenchie. You got a blog? What program/brushes are you using? What's the canvas size/image resolution?

>> No.3094379

>>3094374
His Tumblr is thatfisher.

>> No.3094380

>>3094240
you fucking pedophile piece of shit freak. I hope you get beaten to death.

>> No.3094389
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3094389

>>3092774
tried to keep the same style. Anatomy is pretty wonky, but your biggest problem is drawing all of your characters with microcephaly.
Also eyes are 3d. Try to draw them in perspective.

>> No.3094394

>>3094389
Don't bother replying to that guy he's only here for (You)s. I hope he kills himself one of these days.

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3094523

>>3092488

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>>3092614
People like you are the problem with /ic/, Anon. Not Reddit, not Tumblr, not Furries, you. Too many people take the "all criticism should be honest or no one will improve" message and turned it into a form of shitposting. This guy could use improvement, sure, but I'm guessing you wouldn't be so hard on this guy if the girl in the picture had a cutesy-yutesy anime face.

>> No.3094539
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3094539

>>3092455
Finished.

>>3092703
Tweaked a bit the dick placement. As for the faces, I disagree, they does are in perspective.

>> No.3094542
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3094542

>>3083213
Disgusting furfaggotry, fresh from the oven!

>>>/trash/10946821

Practicing women's body types, started with average on the left, amazon in the middle and high-test/milfy/THICC on the right and bottom left. How do they look?

>> No.3094544

>>3094539
They does are in perspective? Your english is almost as bad as your art. This is why you've stagnated for the whole year, because you don't listen you stupid fuck.

>> No.3094546

>>3094544
>Your english is almost as bad as your art

What's wrong with this line?

>> No.3094559

>>3088694
That's some clean line-work, man. Whats your secret?

>> No.3094569
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3094569

>>3094240
nice.


>>3094319
>>3094379
pathetic

>> No.3094585

>>3094539
>I disagree
typical dunning kruger tgs.
stop posting here if you never listen to critique. just like last time when BBC gave you solid advice and you disregarded it completely.
no wonder people on this board hate you.
stop posting if your ego prevents you from listening to legit critique.
those faces aren't in a correct perspective. your perspective and your perspective knowledge is awful in general.
aslo, stop drawing spider hands.

>> No.3094588

>>3094559
his secret is you being a normie that doesn't know what good line-work looks like.

>> No.3094590

>>3094389
you're wasting your time. this guy has severe autism.

>> No.3094601

>>3094380
I mean I kind of agree but are you really surprised there would be pedophiles drawing their own porn?

>> No.3094611
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3094611

>>3094585
> aslo, stop drawing spider hands.

>> No.3094642

>>3094389
blog?

>> No.3094666

>>3094539
>As for the faces, I disagree, they does are in perspective.
It's sad that you keep ignoring good advice, you could really use it.

>> No.3094676

>>3094240
BLOGGGGG?

>> No.3094685

>>3094676
Retarded dickbrain.

>> No.3094715

>>3094585
> why don't you listen to wrong critiques?

>> No.3094724

>>3094715
He's right tho, back to the basics anon

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3094791

>>3094081
I tried to tone down the jittering some

>> No.3094805

>>3094611
lol. what are you trying to prove?
the difference is that your bad anatomy isn't a style choice but mistakes.

>> No.3094809

>>3094715
thise heads not being properly placed into perspective aren't wrong critiques.
they might appear wrong only to normies and beginners without a properly developed critical eye.
seriously, if you think those faces, heads and necks look good, I have really bad news for you.

>> No.3094810

>>3094805
don't try to argue with him, he keeps ignoring advice every time he posts here.

>> No.3094960
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3094960

>>3094240
i actually follow you on tumblr haha
also thank you, that's really nice ;w;

>> No.3094990
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3094990

Thought I'd try something a little more different, a sorceress having a bit of a problem dealing with some small sewer rat problem.

Always looking for critique.

>> No.3095356

>>3094601
How do you know he wants to fuck children sorry?

>> No.3095473

>>3094585
He is obviously taking the advice he finds helpful. I feel bad for people like you who just get so mad over nothing.

>> No.3095540

>>3095356
>>3094601
I think there's an even spread of porn artists that draw people they want to fuck and people that they want to be getting fucked.

>> No.3095544

>>3095473
look at me. I'm sooooo mad.
fucking kek.
I'm just trying to force some sense in that dunning kruger brain of his, but I guess it's impossible.
probably I'm more mad at people like you that give others bad advice or encourage bad practice.

>> No.3097512

>>3094960
those shapes are so nice

>> No.3097524

How long before I can draw something fapworthy? I've got 0,0,250 RGB big blue balls over here

>> No.3097526

>>3097524
I don't know why don't you go practice instead of asking stupid questions.

>> No.3097531

>>3097524
dickbrains can't draw fapworthy material. don't waste your time.

>> No.3097534

>>3097531
what does that mean?

>> No.3097537

>>3097534
It means exactly what it says dickbrain.

>> No.3097550

>>3095544
> why don't people listen to my super incredible critiques? Everything I say is right so why don't they kiss my ass?

Show your work.
> inb4 cooking analogy

>> No.3097552

>>3097550
Not that anon, but those aren't bad critiques. The faces really are out of perspective compared to the bodies.
The hands and fingers are disproportionate as well.
If you don't see that, the problem is within you, not the one that pointed it out.

>> No.3097554

>>3097552
> The faces really are out of perspective compared to the bodies.

Not really, no.

>The hands and fingers are disproportionate as well.

Murata draws fingers like that, it's a fair stylization, even more for his characters.
>>3094611

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3097621

>>3097554
>>3097550
I'll just leave this here.
The rendering is great, but there's some issues with foreshortening and proportions.

>> No.3097633

>>3097621
The left pose of the head wouldn't really work in context, anyone that looks at someone lower than them would rotate their head as well.

So it's more about the lenght of the neck like you pointed out on the right.

>> No.3097637

>>3097621
For the hands on the top, isn't that more about their pose rather than the perspective? Like yours looks more like they're more rotated to the back, rather than a "fix" of the perspective.

>> No.3097639

>>3097633
That's why I pointed that out.
I was showing what he was doing wrong and WHY.

>> No.3097641

>>3097637
Hands (and arms) aren't put in a perspective where she wouldn't be leaning on them.
The issue with the hands is more of a proportion one. The fingers have a correct length but the palms are too short. That's probably why that anon mentioned spider hands. The proportions are off. The pointy fingers aren't an issue at all.

>> No.3097642

>>3097639
Yeah, I get it, just saying that all those other anons saying the perspective of the face was wrong were talking shit.

>> No.3097643

>>3097642
The necks are off putting. It's normal that you think the face is out of perspective. If you want that neck to work, then you have to make a face that goes with it. So you end up with two options. Either the necks are wrong or the perspective of the faces are.

>> No.3097935
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3097935

Still nothing I suppose.

>> No.3097949

>>3097512
shapes is all i kno ;-;

>> No.3097962

>>3090571
my only thought is who the fuck is going to fap to fat characters with bulbous noses?

>> No.3097979

>>3094539
As a futa connoisseur I am of the opinion that one dick should be larger than the other, preferably Tatsumaki's. Also dick veins don't branch and you could tone them down a bit

>> No.3098336

>>3094990
Good stuff, got a blog?
Pic just has minor foreshortening issues below the waist on the character.

>> No.3099627
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3099627

something i quickly drew..
just want to know if anything is wrong with it.

>> No.3099964
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3099964

Might draw her getting plowed.

>> No.3099978

>>3099964
is she a farmer...?

>> No.3100004

>>3099978
She's a hoe, if that counts.

>> No.3100525

Do I have to eventually go digital to make decent money out of erotic drawings?

>> No.3100531

>>3100525
In general, digital is way more better if you want to make anything out of it. It's very easy to edit and rework on something, and go much further than on paper for the details, which is important for erotic stuffs but it's need to be accurate.

If you say that I guess you don't have much experience with digital I guess, but I'd definitely tell you it's worth getting on it.

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3100550

>>3084169

>> No.3100632

>>3099964
Reminds me of the art from breeding season before shwig came in.

>> No.3100822

>>3100632
Having trouble finding out who the artist was before s-purple.

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>> No.3101142

>>3101105
nice sense of depth and appealing style (both linework and coloring). tho you have some serious proportion issues going on with their heads and the bunny's left arm and torso length. the craniums are way too small, which makes them look retarded. the bunny's torso and arm are too short.

>> No.3101306

>>3085094
Could you perhaps experience sex with a woman once or twice, in a room that has lighting, and take note of the expressions she makes and the expressions she NEVER FUCKING ONCE MAKES and accept that the latter is not because you do not possess the giant nigger cock you seemingly cannot stop drawing in your more well known works but because no one fucking does that?

You think you can do that? Hm?

>> No.3101313

>>3086280
>look at my oiled up nipples
the tits have all the highlighting your scene needs, nipples don't sweat corn oil

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3101316

>>3100632
In the spirit of that game, here she is with a cow girl.

>> No.3101323

>>3099627
>if anything is wrong with it.
find every "how to draw boobs" infographic and follow them religiously

>> No.3101775

>>3086436
How is drawing a boob any different from drawing anything else? That mentality is fucking stupid. The whole point of drawing a vase or a chair is that it is a simple structure that you can understand in a 3D space, a boob fits that description perfectly, in fact its easier than a chair.

>> No.3101863

>>3090063
not bad senpai, what fuck at filename though

>> No.3101875

>>3101105
t-rex arms

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First time doing stuff like this, from today. I'm completely clueless even when it comes to posing/expressions etc. would appreciate the help.

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>>3101984
Another as well from today.

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>>3094960
your art deserves more (you)s

>> No.3102137

>>3085727
The reflection on Katara's Head is round rather than lined.
It gives me the feeling that she's bald.

>> No.3102177

>>3102112
such a shame that good art like yours comes from a pedophile.

>> No.3102199

>>3095540
so how is this guy a pedo?

>> No.3102205

>>3094240
muh dick muhfuggin

>> No.3102276

>>3102199
>>3102205
birds of a feather don't shit on one another.

>> No.3102290

>>3102112
dude when do you sleep

>> No.3102359

>>3102290
he's probably tormented by dreams of little kids with huge dongers.

>> No.3102399
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3102399

Can some add color if not all well,plus I don't really understand the 1000 pixels thing, so if its messup well...damn

>> No.3102441

>decide I want to draw my own porn
>into fundamentals and anatomy
>really suck
>become increasingly sensitive to anatomical or perspective errors
>now I can't even fap to half the drawn porn I used to get off to

T-thanks /ic/

>> No.3102445

>>3101316
you gotta work on that face angle

>> No.3102456

>>3102445
I can redraw their heads, how can i fix it?

>> No.3102520

>>3102441
Personally I find it more satisfying to fap to few thousand well drawn pictures than ten thousand pics of varying quality, and there's less of a chance of finishing on an unsatisfying piece.
Not to mention how much more I can appreciate every picture I consider saving, and being able to judge thumbnails results in fewer tabs left unviewed when crawling for new material.

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3102596

>>3098336
I should probably just start putting a little marker on the corner, but I don't know if I should save that for later...

Just continuing on it.

>> No.3102612
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Chun-Li
I used reference and it just seems boring to me.

>> No.3102615

>>3102441
Give it a few more years and you'll develope a poorly drawn porn fetish

>> No.3102617

Is there a place that dumps good reference photos of lewd naked people? Like life model stills but more sexy?
I'm pretty good at anatomy and shit but I want to get good at making sensual art of people touching and interacting with each other's bodies

>> No.3102620

>>3102456
Loomis. All the features look flat

>> No.3102626

>>3102617
>>>/s/

>> No.3102627

>>3102612
most likely because you referenced too hard. Try to push the pose more and return back to the image when anatomy confuses you.

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first time drawing porn. completely new to all of this, have no clue whats appealing/good and would like some help. some quick stuff from today

>> No.3102954

>>3102953
knife ears and nigger noses aren't for one thing

>> No.3102955
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3102955

Completely new to this. Don't know whats appealing/"sexy", is it just a grind it out kind of thing? Would appreciate some help.

Some quick stuff from today

>> No.3102974

>>3102955
Apart from the obvious, just draw what you like, there's enough demand for everything that you're gonna make it.

>> No.3103118

>>3097621
Perfect redline. It hurts me inside that the original artist will never appreciate it.

>> No.3103132
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3103132

Hi, I'm an amateur 3Dfag looking for human orthos. Most references I've come across on the internet either have weird rest poses (like the model being kicked in the lower back while having her arms pulled back and inwards) or are different from the front and side, and the artists frequently shy away from drawing clearly defined breasts and ass.
So does anyone have any good nude orthos? I don't much mind if they are realistic or cartoony at this point.

>> No.3103133

>>3103132
Daz 3d.

>> No.3103135

>>3102112
This kind of planar minimalistic rendering is what I'm after, it's aesthetic af.
Is there some exercise you'd recommend to get where you are other than Ctrl+Paint and Scott's How to render?
Pretty please

>> No.3103136

>>3103118
>It hurts me inside that the original artist will never appreciate it.

I did, please don't talk in my stead.

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3103137

>>3103132
What about Loomis, unironically?

>> No.3103142

>>3103136
So you're gonna fix those faces?

>> No.3103146

>>3103142
Did you even read? The real problem was that Tatsumaki's neck was too long based on her position, the perspective of the head/face was fine.

>> No.3103151

>>3103133

I'm making low poly stuff on blender as a hobby and to scratch my creative itch. Daz 3D isn't the software for me.

>>3103137

That's useful, thanks.

>unironically

How so?

>> No.3103153

>>3103151
> Daz 3D isn't the software for me.

Didn't you say you just wanted a static reference model? you can just export daz models to Blender you know.

>> No.3103169

>>3103151
Loomis gets thrown around here a lot, often ironically.

>>3103146
Suit yourself. You must look really strange when you look down at something though, bending your whole head instead of just rolling your eyes a bit.

>> No.3103174

>>3103169
>You must look really strange when you look down at something though

The left head pose in >>3097621 works much less. Tough it doesn't need to be as extreme as rotating to the max you head like on the right either. It still should be more on the side of the latter.

>> No.3103211

>>3097621
blog?

>> No.3103310
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The normal ver. of raven...

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>>3103310
and the futa ver.

>> No.3103442

>>3102955
blog?

>> No.3103720

>>3103135
I'm not sure if I can explain it very well, but for the most part I'm applying the same standard light and shadow principles you'll learn from anyone, but painting them with a very large transparent rectanglular brush and keeping it loose. Things facing the light are brighter, things facing away are darker

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gettin back into drawing H
what you guys think?

>> No.3104259

>>3103785
Minor issues, actually. You can't grab folds this large on someone's ass, skin hold it all together.
And the wall separating the ass from the vag is an actual tendon on the pelvic floor, look it up if you want it to look believable.
Besides that and the offputting subject matter, it's pretty nice.

>>3103720
Thank you very much, anon, I'll try that out.

>> No.3104269

DIE, THREAD!

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>> No.3104765

Can someone outline a pornbuild? Like if I just want to draw stuff thats fappable what aspects of drawing I need to grind?

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Plz Rate. I wanna get better at porn.

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How bad is it and what should i fix, guys?
I guess it got problems with legs or smth

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>> No.3106354

>>3105046
the human guy would have an extreme hourglass figure from the front with that lower body. males have narrow hips.

>> No.3106553

>>3105046
I guess the clean lines from >>3101105
were just a fluke.
you really need to get more precise at proportions and perspective. this is really bad art.

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