/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Didn't know what to do with the left arm but I added the armed-hat to make up for it. Not too sure about the folds on the sleeves but they seem right enough
>>3072079
will do, I thought the file size was the main issue but I guess not
>>3072163
I don't know enough to fix it, unfortunately. I'll do some studies once I'm finished with this

>>3076796
don't think it was expressed clearly before since there was an argument about it lol but the hair is in front of her face which is what that straight line is. i'l probably start to blend now so no more messy lines

>>3076796

>>3075672
>>3075584
>>3075157
>>3074159
REEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>3076802
Is that double holding cerrebellas hat?
She looks hot but the hands from the hat look kinda weird.

>>3076802
Wait, is it actually double with Cerrebellas body and her hat? I knew something reminded me of Cerebellla except her hat. Good work

Any tips for keeping eyes from looking melted off? They always turn out looking really skewed even when I measure and take my time. Flipping it doesn't seem to work either

>>3076921
Not sure what you mean by melted off, but the face perspective proportion is like really off. Its like you fully rendered a cal art face.

>>3076921
On ps use magic wand tool select the eye then rotate a bit

been a while since i drew an anime

>>3076929
>perspective proportion
Nigga, what?

thoughts?

not mine, however i cant tell if i like this artist's style or not

>>3076954
so what's up with that face?

/aas/ got a discord ?

>>3076883
stop being a bitter cunt perhaps

>>3077194
p00se2?

>>3077216
Nope

Trying out different proportions but ended up just flattening it.

>>3077237
Blog pls

>>3077246
you will never get it. Only cool people will know.

>>3077268
Aw what the heck ):

>>3077237
1 and 3 are the only good ones.

>>3076796
Blog?

>>3077237
big fan of number 2

>>3077237
5 and 6 are objectively the best, but 2 is also acceptable

>>3076796
This OP image is shitty, but considering what Kyle puts out I can understand why he would think it was good.

>>3076800
I wasn't wrong though. The fact that I can see mistakes that you can't is sufficient proof that I am better at art than you are.

>>3077237

>>3077409
not nose, but seriously, post your work you dumb faggot, or at least redline it then

>>3077478
How's work been for you? Stable?

>>3076796
My autistic fat friend that wont fuck me needs help. How does he complete the legs of this figure? He wants it to be petite like a splatoonimal. Of course we all know it is because he is a disgusting loli. Here is a red line I made showing him the right answer but I will need /ic/'s input.

>>3077592
Here is the original piece for anyone to add input too

>>3077592
Tell him to get good.

>>3077594
tell your friend he has shit tastes

>>3077487
Yes but I stopped taking complex commissions because my surface pro 2 died. I bought a laptop and a cintiq pro 13 with what I got with my first 4 months of taking commissions. I'm currently waiting for them. Thankfully I have a full time job so I'll be fine at least in that regard.

Thanks for asking!

>>3076796
Photo studies

>>3076921
I love it except for droopy eye

Could use a crit, can I make it by making smut with this much skill. I know my perspective is still off.

>>3077592
Not art related, but why the hell would you even want to have sex with an autistic fat guy? I mean I've been around long enough to know that calling someone autistic doesn't really mean they are, as it's just another slang term used to call someone out for being an idiot. But are girls these days really into fat dudes.. Like am I doing something fucking wrong?

>>3077735
He's not a girl, retard. Just one of those fat fucks who wants to be a girl.

Don't believe everything you read on the internet.

>>3077735
fuck off r9k

>>3077735
fat people gotta find love with fat people

Trying to draw figures in more varied angles

>>3077735
Haha you got memed, poor you
everyone always think of what type of qt they want, but you never what you bring to the table, why should anyone be interested in you

>>3077730
I think you have enough skill, but better composition/panelling could help you out. The bottom right panel's not working for me, mostly because she looks like she's at the dentist instead of sucking a dick. Maybe adding a silhouette at 40% opacity might help.

>>3077730
The paneling and shading makes this look more like a horror scene than something erotic. Additionally, the the transitions in 3,4 and 5 feel very jumpy. I think your art is decent enough for porn, but you should work on your storytelling.
Read some hentai mango and study it. How do the authors pace out the sex scenes? How do they escalate the eroticism as the characters approach climax? How do they use camera angles and framing to create mood?

>>3077592
How about this
s t i f f

>>3077825
looks like her boner is sticking out under her skirt

>>3077828

>>3077592
Its hard to add legs if you didnt plan for them. tell your friend to get in the habit of planning his pieces better

>>3077974
I think this is the best bet for something still dynamic. sorry for doubleposting

>>3077592

print for cons

i got really into granblue lately

Enjoy

>>3077409
The fact that you've yet to post your work tells me you're a huge fucking scrub who can only run his mouth.

Choke on it faggot.

>>3078048
Really nice

>>3078048
how does it feel to know you will never touch a pair of tits in real life

>>3077592
I had fun editing this

sup

Really thinking of switching to a different program. I've used Sketchbook for the past several years but I think I've finally grown out of it. Has anyone made the switch from Sketchbook to PS? I honestly don't know what edition I would get.

>>3078172
>>3077990
>>3077979
>>3077974
>>3077825
hey fat fag here, thank you all for the input but i already just shat out the best i could do, this drawing took too long and turned out absolutely horrible. well i need to get back into the groove one way or another so yeah..

>>3077774
>>3077780
Thanks, will try and work on your suggestions. I kinda threw a page together without much thought to see where I'm at.

heyas. Drew this in the library yesterday before work. I wanted to post it here and see my work get thrashed to pieces.

Going for some Keith Thompson kinda shit. Gotta get a break from moe shit and skirts.
>>3076954
Planning to up the values I hope ? Also the face looks really old, shading off tho.
>>3077478
C u t e
>>3077730
Study (hentai) anatomy a bit more, the poses and composition are somewhat bland, don't quite show as much as they could. Also might want to up the values a bit on the lower panels, or at least add some light here and there.
>>3078243
Noice and dynamic.

Does anyone else ever struggle with mimicking ONE's style of drawing faces. Like the overly simplistic eyes and all that can sometimes bother me more than more detailed faces.

for example, here I couldn't get the super simple eyes so I had to "upgrade" them just to make it not look like trash.

>>3078730
You're chicken scratching all over the place here, draw longer, looser lines with more confidence and try to restate your lines a little less

>>3078733
that's what a sketch is senpai.

I don't let my finished drawings look like this.

Now, to your point the best sketches still have nice, clean, confident lines. I just had no intention of doing that for this.

>>3078664
both of his arms look short, especially his right arm.

>>3078740
Nevertheless, chickenscratch is bad for your wrist is more difficult to create clean lineart from. Do yourself a favor and make drawing cleaner sketches into a habit.

>>3078740
>that's what a sketch is
Not the other guy, but your lines ARE scratchy, particularly around the contour of the face. Sure, loose sketches have a lot of exploratory lines, but yours feel more haphazard and don't feel like they're conveying ideas or solutions. The v-neck and shoulders are especially egregious.

Anyway, best sketches don't need entirely clean lines. A good sketch is supposed to capture fluidity or ideas that filter down to the final drawing.

Nico Marlet's underdrawings/sketches are pure energy and he refines that in the final drawing:
>http://4.bp.blogspot.com/_oR7sYJzWZ1k/TNN9RzgN3rI/AAAAAAAAAbc/kqEjBN7ntCQ/s1600/HTTYD+barbarians.jpg

I sound anal but sketches are extremely fundamental, especially if they're preliminary drawings.

>>3078790
but I didn't use my wrist, used elbow. Either way it was like a 2 minute thing and was never meant to be taken seriously.

>>3078792
So I guess we can just drop it's rank from "sketch" to doodle lol. There were no "ideas" or thought really going into this and honestly I don't remember why I posted it.

>>3078065
Hah ha ha ur a virgin xD don't ever post from warptour again faggot.

Does anyone know what kind of drill/exercises Japanese animators do daily? Or even those Animator/Manga trade schools.

If you can provide a link to a blog or site with this sort of insider material it'd be greatly appreciated.

>>3078465
The leg on the right is twisted as fuck bro

How do you create this effect in Manga Studio?

>>3078843
I hear they preform 100 sit ups, 100 push ups, 100 squats and then a 10k run but is causes early onset male pattern baldness.

>>3079014
but most whites end up baldings and they barely exercise

>>3079083
Well it's not balding, per say, one day all your hair just falls out.

Redrew a panel of the OPM webcomic.

>>3079567

>>3078664
Thanks anon. Someone already said that his arms are short but I also feel the left one looks awkwardly placed maybe try that position on the mirror, the armor and face look nice

>>3079575
These lines are just gorgeous, do you plan on coloring it or just leaving it as-is?
Also blog?

>>3079575
i'm fairly sure that you're symbol drawing at least to some extent, and that you'd be unable to do a turnaround of that head without breaking the illusion that you know what you're doing, but this is still pretty nice overall.

I sketched this, someone please tell me what I've fucked up hard

>>3079597
his right arm is growing out of his pecs

>>3077138
unappealing as fuck

>>3078048
Ayy me too.
I'm genuinely curious if the highlights varying on her tits was an intuitive application of light sources or if it's there to be more interesting.

Cute either way.

>>3079730
I could infer your thought process for the lighting, but I'd rather hear it from the horse's mouth. Not really a critique just personal interest.

>>3079730
>>3078048
is granblue fantasy fun? The game?

>>3079576
I've been strictly doing line work and tone laying For so long I feel I forgot how to paint. Mostly because I want to get faster and until yesterday I didn't have access to PS.

My blog is firez-tbr.tumblr.com

Thanks!

>>3079583
Thanks... I think about form way more than a year ago but that doesn't mean I might fall into a "symbolic trap" by pursuing a nice silhouette, design, composition, etc... For instance I just noticed I made the back of her head a too high, eyes could be more focused, etc... I will fix those and push it more to call it done

>>3078997
It's called a halftone gradient, not sure how to do it on CSP since I don't really use it myself, but I'm pretty sure it's the Gradient tone in this tutorial.
http://www.clipstudio.net/en/howto/hiroki_haruse_07

>>3079986
everything you make is so fucking it makes something decent shitty and you never have a consistent light source

>>3080002
> talking about "inconsistent light source" on a b&w drawing that doesn't have any lighting

That's new.

>>3076921
I feel like you should adjust the nose line by her eye and maybe lift her right eye with a rotate thrown in.

>>3077138
I dig it, just wish they'd actually give her an ear instead of a skin flap on the side of her head.j The colours are awesome, though

>>3077478
love it

>>3079986
You have decent lines but the airbrush just shits all over it

>>3079986
I feel the lines are maybe a little bit too soft

>>3079829
If you like jrpgs I'd say it's a pretty good time-killer when you wanna let off some steam.

>>3080416
oh i was wondering if you were talking about the game or the series.. Does the game cost money? Or is it free to play?

>>3080006
He means the lack of proper lineweight.

>>3080438
he means, "i'ver just learned about all these new wordies about art, nowb whooo can i shouit them at?! This guy! you'r lighting's wrong!! you'r values are devalued! your chroma is foama, try again next time kid, i'm a pro"

etc.

How to draw simple like this? All my drawings looks like Hampton anatomy studies. I turn everything into academical realistic figures.
>draw sketch of anime character
>doesn't looks anatomically correct
>start refining
>3 hours later
>I draw absolutely all muscles in correct perspective
That means I don't have artistic spark right?

>>3080444
(you)

>>3080450
What?

>>3080440

>>3080444
no, people come at stuff from all different angles. if you say your issue is anatomy than don't think of anime girls as people, but rather really detailed dolls, or 2d designs even. this kind of thing and the solution you find is what will make your art yours in the end.

We're all gonna make it, don't forget that

>>3078050
Here's more

>>3080127
Thanks. I hope this is final.

trying to learn how to paint anime

>>3080707
That's the worst pose I have ever seen, what the fuck is she even trying to do

>>3080731
Looks like she's realizing she doesn't have the muscle mass necessary to swing that giant robo arm.

>>3078465

>>/beg/

Some friends wanted me to draw the characters of a shitty comic they're making. I need tips to get better

>>3080757
have her free-bleeding

>>3080757
That's a huge forehead

>>3080707
my fave in the thread

>>3080731
>>3080735
salty binches

Drew some edgy eldritch cat character. Just testing out some more stylized anatomy.

three pages from my sketchbook

>>3080896
neat!

>>3078048
damn that looks great
>>3080896
really like those designs

Im going for a different style than my usual

>>3080697
have you ever tried to draw a different face?

>>3079986
Some progress.

>>3080355
>>3080397
Yeah, that was just for the sketch.

I have a question even though im a beginner but I thought this would be the best place. How could an artist that strives to draw in the style of Takeshi Koike ie simplified hard shadows, represent fine details of skin, like goose bumps or peach fuzz? My understanding is that art styles are used as a kind of short hand for reality and my favorite part of about women is their skin but I wanna draw like Takeshi Koike yet I cant think of a short hand way to represent finer details in human skin, specifically human female skin. Also things like dew collecting on a surface.

>>3080990
Would using specific brush presets be the only way?

>>3080990
>>3080995
These kind of details

>>3080998
shit i forgot image

>>3080999
okay anyway sorry for posting so much but im really curious if anyone has a solution and just to be clear i mean in this kind of style.

>>3078664
Some progress blocking in shit. Fixed arm length some, right hand is still giving me trouble by not looking like it's against the wall quite enough. It'll probably look fine when I get to shading.

>>3081042
i would probably change the pose of that hand, it's never going to look right

anyway good stuff overall, reminds me of like some cool manga you'd find in a comic store in the mid 2000s

>>3081055
I'll see if I somehow make it look alright with the shadow planes, if not I'll change it. Aye, early Nihei is one of my favorite artists, got everything from Blame! to Biomega on the shelf.

>>3081000
litterally your run of the mill animu + hard shadows

>>3076808
>>3076802
Why are these colored in grey? I see this quite often and I'd love an explanation for why.

>>3077774
>>3077780
>>3078664
Went back and studied some reference, I noticed that some artists try to limit frame use and let their images clash so I tried to see if I can do the same.

Any crits on this piece?

>>3076802
finished I guess, kinda lost when it comes to colouring stuff, if anyone can drop some guidance on rendering that'd be great.
Just want to start something new now
>>3076898
thanks m8
>>3081295
I clip the layers above it so they stay inside the lines

>>3081338

Eye is lazily coloured.
Her right hand looks weird.

Other than that, this is kick-ass!

>>3081338
her face looks like an old woman nun.

>>3080896
How the fuck does your sketchbook look so neat? Did you digitally edit out the shittiest parts or something?

>>3081301
Looks good, but you need to crack down more on anatomy and work on your lines, they're pretty sloppy.

my charactar Gili Ishikawa

>>3081475
For full transparency I edited the contrast in photoshop and took out all of my drunk ramblings, but these are the actual scans.

>>3080444
As you continue to draw, freehanding perspective and making it look good will get a lot easier. If you look closely enough, some of the perspective in these sketches would probably look off in some way or another, because he wasn't aiming for 1000% accuracy.

Need to fix the standing girl a bit i think

>>3080444
do that and once you're done, erase all the unnecessary detail

if it looks shit after that then it probably isn't anatomically correct either

>>3080444

I have this problem too anon... I look at Jake Wyatt works and think it's fantastic, the line economy he does is really effective. When I try to mimic his style it looks really bad and I end up doing my own "heavy" detailed stuff which looks ok, but is not what I'm aiming for.

He also effectively uses a low number of curved lines in his drawings, most are straight, which is another thing I'm failing to mimic.

character pic for a story im workin on.
comments and crit welcome

>>3080896
Do you have a blog?

I like the war dog, pretty cool

>>3081672
looks like someone took morrowind concept art, mashed it together with amano's final fantasy logo and gave it to someone who doesn't understand gender.

>>3081564
Honestly I think the raw is cooler than the clean up forsure.

>It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the fundamentals of art

What does this mean? To draw some anime after I'm done practicing Loomis for the day?

>>3081704
The application of your studies to your anunt May's. "Strongly recommended" to remind those to practice loomis (fundamentals of art) if wanting to stylize.

Inked and colored one of my doodles from today.

>>3081829
cool!

>>3076921
quick correction with the liquefy tool

>>3081831
>tfw so used to seeing that one "awesome work! blog??? any advice????" poster that this means nothing to me

>>3081953
Awesome post! Blog?

>>3079730
i do pay attention to light source but i will break rules if it means the tits will look fatter

>>3079829
it's fun but you end up in gacha hell

>>3078065
bad

more print wips

>>3081645
plz blog?

you guys ever redraw old work?
>>3080707
Cool lookin, but I think the other two anons are right about the pose. She seems unbalanced

Is she supposed to be a satyr? Her feet look pretty hoof like. I tried to balance her out by giving her a weight bearing leg.I think it can be made a lot more dynamic, though.
Have you looked at Krenz's work? He likes to draw the same subject

>>3080707
>>3080735
I feel like its a cool pose, it looks like she just hit something really hard with that gauntlet and she is trying to bring it back after it bounced of the hard surface that she hit, only the right leg looks a bit weird imo.

>>3079699
I think I fixed it in this one
anything else I should change, adjust or fix?

sketch before bed, this show is really cool

>>3082068
Maybe once I have a few more things posted there that I'm proud of

>>3082278
Sorry Anon, I dont think its fixed. The arm closer to the viewer still looks a bit wrong, perhaps you can put it closer to his back. If that makes sense.

>>3082278
a clavicle would help.

>>3082301
>>3082321
I tried this quickly, but does this help?

>>3082329
Yes I think this looks better now.
I would try not to sit too long on one drawing, perhaps try some more different characters in similar positins for study purpose later.

>>3082335
I try not to, but I just wanted to see what I wasn't thinking of with this one so I could apply it to others I might fuck up. That and I've been busy this week which sucks.

she kinda looks like the grinch whoops.

>>3082129
I love redoing my old work, although I wouldn't say it's entirely fruitful. Creating a new piece feels better than redrawing an old one.
Also nice facial expression! Is this the finished sketch? It looks like its missing some details.
>>3082344
Wow I love the colors and simplicity of this.

>>3082329
better, but the arm still needs to go to the left, he doesn't have much of a chest right now.

>>3082344
good to see your stuff around

>>3080954
And finished.

>>3082512
How the fuck would cloth ever rip up like that?

>>3082512
It looks A LOT better than the wips you showed us

>>3082516
psychic powers.

>>3082516
thats a pretty stupid question. If you cant see that its supposed to be ripped to shreds by that psychic chick from opm then that is pretty embarassing

>>3082512
Not to go all Howard Hughes on you, but that tear on her left breast in the top panel makes a kind of tangent with the sweat drop, looking like her nipple.

>>3082512
will her skin get shredded next

>>3082532
With the position (too high), too small size and how it looks the same as the other sweat drops, I don't really see how you can confuse it with a nipple for more than a second.

>>3082512
some of those sweat drops look like pimples or growths

>>3082535
That's what I mean, it's not a glaring issue but it does distract your attention for a moment; the nipple-seeking eye will notice, so it creates an unnecessary tangent. It's true that it clearly isn't meant to be her nipple, but hypothetically it could be if the artist didn't know how to draw or place the nipple.

>>3081338
Double again, left or right? thinking left
>>3081378
>looks weird
anything specific that stands out? I'll work on eyes too
>>3081380
tried to make her younger here, guess I overdid the blush

>>3081301
Looks way better in composition. But like the other anon said, work on line weight.

Also, the last panel of her face feels a bit awkward? And not very erotic. I think if you zoom in on a part of her face (eyes or lips) and do some distortion, it'll work better. But still, way loads better than your last page.

>>3082512
I think I'm stupid but what is that lump to the top right of the hand? Is it her breast from a side view or her knee?

>>3081301
The top right panel has a really bad tangent where the top of the hand meets the wall edge.

>>3082605
You mean on the first panel? Yeah, that's her knee, she wear a dress.

>>3082512
Man... that hand is terrible, even for anime style.

>>3082617
>anime style
fuck off
>>3082512
link to your comic?

>>3082618
>link to your comic?

It's the introduction page, the project is pretty recent, only have the cover and following page for now otherwise, and those are still in progress.

>>3082618
>90° angle chin
>almost non-existent nose
>fingers look like claws
Yeah, anime style.

People who draw well in anime style adhere to human proportions, creative liberties only look good when they're aesthetically pleasing. If anime loses that then you might as well go full tumblr.

So how exactly do I get a porn blog off the ground?
I can't seem to find any tags that actually have traffic that is relevant.
Even if you do furry, tags like furry,yiff,gfur provide no yield for me.
And for fetish specific stuff, like fisting and cum inflation, it seems the same.

What do?

>>3082756
It'll probably help if you're not just doing OCs getting fucked or whatever. Generally I find that the most popular tags are the ones of the show or original work the character is from.

Ex: Touhou, 東方, Kancolle, Various TV show or game, etc

>>3082756
>>3082761
As another thought, you could always try to piggyback off of other porn artists' OCs. I tend to see a lot of them reblog other artists' fan work of their characters. Of course the one thing that will guarantee your art is popular is that it looks good, so I hope you're focusing on that too.

>>3082621
>attracted to dicks
>somehow the tits are x100 times more appealing

>>3082792
Yeah, the veins just look so unrealistic, i mean some like veiny dicks but those just look bad.

>>3082871
> but those just look bad.

No, that's just your opinion.

>>3082876
Stop projecting, please.

thoughts?
i have to repaint the other girls face cus the positioning was messed up.
trying to get better at digital painting. this rendering sucks .i need to figure out how to get past this block in stuff.

>>3080707
Blog? How do I get as good as you?

someone please tell me why /ic/ complains so much about tumblr style when it's 95% tumblr style.

>>3083022
Tumblr style response has become a meme here, your post included.
I've seen people shit on others calling them tumblr when there was nothing to even suggest they're drawing anything similiar to the sparkly-huge-red-nosed-abominations.

>>3078052
I post shit here all the time, the only reactions I get are jealousy lol. Stay mad, I'll stay creating the work you wish you could.

>>3083022
Tumblrfaggots are among the new breed that's taken over the board and site as a whole.

>>3082512
>>3082621
>>3083007
Just wondering, why not post in the porn thread? People probably know more about it there, and god knows they need the traffic

>>3083174
There is no porn thread.

Why is it that I'm the only one who keeps reviving the porn thread? If you love your porn then don't let it die off the board.

>>3083174
oh i totally forgot that we had a porn thread *feels dumber*
i'm gonna do that

>>3083179
this is true. went looking and no thread.

>>3083196
I'll make it...

here >>3083213

wippin it

>>3082344
So cute

>>3081121
Yeah but how do you represent fine skin details like goosebumps and peach fuzz in that style (animu+hardshadows?)

>>3076796
Feel free to crit, does the head seem too big?

>>3083388
Waitress's neck seems off/too long.

>>3081688
yeah its evaneley.tumblr.com

I'm having a difficult time with the positioning of her right shoulder. She's also supposed to be holding a guitar but I haven't drawn that in yet lol, not fingering herself.. if anyone has any advice I'd really appreciate it!

>>3077320
Hi I drew the OP image but I haven't been checking the thread lately, just gonna drop my blog anyways which is instagram.com/nepheloyd or nepheloyd.tumblr.com

>>3083388
cool stuff anon, got a blog?

trying to make a finished product on one layer can be difficult seems like

Hello all!
I've been working on this face for a few good hours, but I think there's some issues that I'm missing that I wanted to check with others.

I know I gotta work on the jawline and chin, which I'm sketching and reshaping the line for, and I think I made the nose a little too small and need to rework the nostrils. Some of the shading looks off too, but that'll be reworked with the facial structure changes.

If there's anything else that anyone can point out or see, please don't hesitate!

>>3083826
Is... is that a man or a woman?

>>3083831
Woman.

here. something i drew today. (didn't name it properly rip)

>>3082297
i have an extreme bias because of my love of mob, but i still love this a lot. where can i find more of your work?

>>3083356
You don't, it's supposed to look clean.

>>3083826
I like your Miku! But I would try to shorten the face and feminize the jaw. :> I like your style though.

>>3083934
Hey anon! Thank you for the tips!
I've been working on the face, and I just wanted to see if what I did was right.

I added the previous screenshot as well just to see if there's anything else I can change too!

>>3083368
Looks like the eyes are too far apart on the closeup.

>>3081829
i like the chad up there

>>3083826
If this is Planet of Sand Miku then the face is way too masculine. The nose isn't too small, it's far too large.

>>3084247
Hey anon! Thank you for the feedback, I did an edit of the face >>3084028 and I tried to shrink the shape of the nose a bit.

Is it still too large here and if so, how small should I make the nose?

>>3083800
I like it. Blog?

Fanart of Chris Redfield

>>3084546
You're getting better m8. I like it.

The beard and nipples could use a little detail though.

>>3083146
Yeah uh huh faggot.

Go ahead and post now, but you still haven't and never will. If you were any good you would have posted your work. You're a fucking bum.

Some faces 1/2

2/2

>>3084581
How's this? I think I'll add more detail to the nipples once I render.

>>3084654
Nice. Really interesting lineart you have.

In need of some crit, its for a commission. I'm mainly looking for feedback on the painting. I feel I need to push the contrast more. Any advice?

>>3084698
the colors are wrong and you lack technique

>>3084654
>>3084658
I love these, do you have a blog?

>>3084712
Ok.

How do I improve? Both my general skill, and more importantly, this piece? painting is not my strong suit, what should I look into to improve?

>>3084718
Your method of shading is not too pleasing- you should blend some of those shadows together more smoothly. Think about shading in bigger shapes first before you start noodling around with little strokes all over.

The sense of light is weak as well , as I can't really tell where the light source is. Looks like she's lit from the top right, but the arm on the left is being lit from above, and there also seems to be backlighting with the same light on her torso, but nowhere else.

>>3084720
Ok. Thanks. What about the colors? I feel something is off with the contrast, particularly on her skin.

>>3084724
I'm not that same anon who talked about the colors, but the lack of contrast you feel is probably related to the bad lighting. It feels washed out because it looks like you're shading each part of the body individually, instead of thinking of the whole character. This ends up creating a weird 50-50 light vs dark pattern throughout the piece, which is very boring.

In terms of color, usually skin has a bit of red in it. Think about using warm lights and cool shadows to create some contrast and variety in color, as right now the color you use for her skin feels almost white, which is very boring. You also need to consider things like cast shadows and bounce light to make it even more interesting.

>>3084654
Love the constant diversity in accessories and hair you've got going that makes each portrait feel like a separate character.

You still using the iPad by the way? Have you done any paintings yet on it?

>>3084654
>>3084658
glad to see youre still doing well graf

>>3083388

POON-SAMA!

>>3080707
her left leg is longer than the right.

>>3076921
draw a circle/oval on the plane the face details are on
helps me "contain" them better

>>3084658
nice

>>1602828
Crossposting for some C&C on my lines. I'm really dissatisfied with the hair but don't know how to stylize it to fit better.

>>>1602828

Can't crosspost from /aco/ apparently, will post when I'm back home.

>>3084913
That hand is strangely compelling. Love the desaturated skin tones.

>>3084546
Why do girls find gay man attractive?

>>3084966
Looks like a typical beefcake to me, anon.

Quit projecting your gayness onto a drawing

>>3084970
I remember the style, it was a girl
You stop projecting

>>3084972
Chris Redfield ain't gay my homie nigga

>>3084977
i assume he is in her mind

>>3082129
There is something about the face and thickness of her fingers in this piece that i like quite a lot actually. I felt i needed to give you a special shout out even though there is quite a good amount of high level stuff in this thread

>>3084913
The left eye looks too far apart and isnt looking in the same direction as the right eye.

>>3084913
I like what you're doing with the hues.

>>3084913
I like what you're doing with the hues.

Critique this commission for /v/ please. Need some fresh eyes before I ink, be back later.

>>3085028
Reminds me of gorrilaz

roast me

>>3084913
She looks like she has down's syndrome

>>3085042
Tumblr please.

>>3083800
Cleaned up lines, idk if I will render any more though

>>3084392
I might post it once I have more stuff im proud of on there, which could be anywhere from a month to a few years at this rate

>>3085049
good job me

>>3085050
literally hobo saber. I like it though.

>>3085048
Literally nothing screams tumblr in this picture. What a useless post.

>>3081889
I read all the comments on my piece and thank you guys for them

To you anon, how the fuck did you get the liquify tool to work properly? I tried it but unless it recognizes a drawing is a face it won't let me adjust anything.

Regardless, thank you all for your help. I'll post again soon with your advice in mind :)

>>3085095
He's asking for his tumblr you fucking mong

>>3084970
If you can't tell that picture oozes faggotry, there's something seriously wrong with you.

>>3085152
noone fucking asks for someone tumblr, you ask blog and not tumblr, except if youve never been here

>>3084675
>>3084717
Thanks! You can find some of my old stuff on grachh.tumblr.com/tagged/art .

>>3084735
>>3084913
<3

>>3084732
Thank you!! That's what I'm trying to get better at, give almost all the heads and figures I draw a somehow distinct personality (I hope the face types and features don't look too similar to eachother tho). Yeah, still using the Ipad, still loving it. I have done some paintings on it, but it's not really my strongest suit, so I don't upload paintings all that often.

>>3084913
downy as fuck

>>3085031
that's a weird association, but alright, gorillaz isn't too bad.

the thing that's most out of proportion in your illustration is the characters head. If you get that right the whole drawing should be a lot more appealing. Also, get some ref and redraw the hands and forearms.

>>3084731
Noted, thanks a lot anon.

>>3084913
This looks good, do you have a blog?

>>3084913
needs more glowing orbs

>>3083348
really like this one

>>3085293

thanks, i think it's done

>>3085042
her ankles are both broken

>>3085213
Thank you

>>3084546
his left arm seems a bit too short

>>3085042
right leg knee is misplaced, left leg doesn't connect well to the pelvis and makes confusing perspective.

>>3080948
why should I; I just polish the same turd and a bunch of horny children stroke my ego.


win win.

better?

>>3077478
>my eyes are down here

>>3085742
>shhhhh, we let the obvious blatant errors fester and smile, nod and compliment; like so:

>>3077478
blog?!??

>>3085742
>shhhhh, we let the obvious blatant errors fester. simply smile, nod and compliment; like so:

>>3077478
blog?!??

>>3085750
>>3085742
>some "known" artist gets like 5 crits
>i get 1 if im lucky

is the trick to make people hate you? Then they wont hold back?

>>3084712
Your method of criticism is wrong and you show a lack of ability to respond constructively. Perhaps pointing out what colors should be used would be of better help.

>>3081262
qt

>>3085716
Much better. I'm still having a bit of trouble figuring out where the light source is, but overall I like i.

help me make this not shit, she's supposed to hold a duck and be t h i c c but how do arms work

>>3085883
resized, sorry

>>3085883
>Arms interacting with each other
>From imagination

That may be out of your league, ask someone to take a picture of you in that position its your only hope at this point

>>3085883

Her right arm is hella flat, especially with that hand just dangling there. It just looks like someone deflated her arm.

It should be projecting outward more. Try thinking in simple 3D forms more.

I'd take a stab at it for you, but I'm hard pressed for time right now.

new thread >>3086411

>>3085888
>>3085893

Not the greatest, but hopefully it helps. You probably wouldn't even see her other hand depending on how she's holding whatever it is she's holding. Also she doesn't come across as [ T H I C C ]

How to develop an anime-influenced realistic style while at the same time avoiding the sakimi-chan/kronzpr1nz look? I prefer to lean a lot more towards the styles used in MTG and concept art.

>>3084913
blog?