/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Why are the OP images always so /gd/ I love it.

>>3041971
Best stando
>>3042015
Hot.

Almost done with Tats, still got a lot of work to do with the background.

>>3042038
Your coloring always manages to look like you threw up on it, it's really not any good

>>3042038
You have a pillow shading problem.

>>3042038
Why do you bother posting if you don't listen to advice?

>>3042077
Not him, so I don't really know his thought process behind it. I'm also quite amateur so take this with a grain of salt.
The light source is coming from above (the moon), but I think he added a light source from the front of her body to make the scene more dramatic I guess?
I don't know, I could just be making excuses for someone else here.

>>3042086
This is a problem with all of their drawings, so unless all of their characters are always walking around with a studio front light there is no excuse really

Lines, for the most part. I'll redo the breasts since they aren't properly sized/shaped and clean up. Any thing I need to fix before going on?

>>3038109
Thanks, I use CSP, default 'rough' brush
>>3038110
>Satan, Beelzebub, and Belial are invariably assigned a male gender in religious and occultist texts
This also includes succubi, even those which take the appearance of women

>>3042103
That's fair then, I'm a newfag to these threads so I wasn't aware of that.
Here's hoping that they learn from their mistakes!

>>3042077
There is no pillow shading here.

Crits or suggestions?

Pls be constructive.

>>3042110
>This also includes succubi, even those which take the appearance of women
Taking it to the next level. I like your commitment.

>>3042110
Messed around with colours a bit, not really sure what I'm doing since I'm somewhat new to the painting stuff. Does this look fine? I feel it's a bit desaturated but I really don't know
>>3042077
I'll keep that in mind, might add some harder shadows

Posted this yesterday and forgot to ask for criticisms and suggestions, I should probably finish reading all the books in the OP though.
>>3041125

>>3042038
Tats done, I'll finish the scenery later.

>>3042116
Itsuka Kendou from Hero Academia.

>>3042325
I think it's a bit stiff near the head and neck area, it might just be the stiff facial expression. Because when I take my hand and cover the face/head it doesn't look to bad.

>>3042317
You never take any crit, just go post on deviantart, no point in posting here, they`ll love you and praise you forever and you`ll never improve.

>>3042334
> and you'll never improve

Stop projecting.

>>3042317
I think your anatomy looks nice, and the painting is very well done. Although as others have said earlier in the thread, the lightsource really makes no sense in this scene.

I mean I can't really vouch, but taking and using critiques I feel will really help. I still struggle in using references because a part of me thinks it's like cheating, and that you have to "git gud" by yourself.

...and that's why my rate of improvement is horrible and I will probably not get any better.

Is this still symbol drawing by any chance? I know the mouth is kind of off, i noticed after shading everything

>>3042341
Parrot memes and general opinions without understanding their use, enjoy the summer here mate

>>3042349
your desire to be "authentic" is rooted in nothing but illogical pride

why hamper your growth by intentionally limiting yourself when ultimately one of the goals of art is free, unrestrained creative expression?

selling copied work is an issue of copyright law-- there are no laws in art. do as you please, copy what you like, and eventually you will assimilate those ideas into your own work

>>3040393
Progress from

>>3042458
love firez faces. the back still looks kinda fucked up, though.

hiya /ic

so anybody making a living doing this?

I change it ... hope it looks better now

>>3042458
i can't tell what the fuck is going on with the perspective, you should really set up a grid and start fixing it

>>3042458
A giant floating pinup.

>>3042530
It's hard to read man.

>>3042536
I know!!! UUGHH
really don't know what to do, and i have to use this monsters

I don't draw, just browsing boards I don't frequent often. A lot of cool, impressive stuff. But what I've noticed is stuff that seems really good gets the most responses, and usually always negative. Are most of you art majors? I'm science based and find myself thinking overly critical of other science-based work and I've wondered if it's just me subconsciously shitting on people to partly justify spending all that time and money on my degree; I'm an expert now, I need to let others know, etc.
It seems like that here, times ten.

I love this dude's work

https://dribbble.com/bemocs

How much do you think people with styles like this actually know how to draw realistically?

>>3042543
>art majors
God I hope not, the 'art community' you could consider /ic/ to be a part of universally acknowledges art school to be a waste of time.
However, yes I'd say that's a fair assessment, just replace art-major with self-taught. Also, it's not as though the negativity can't be helpful; but it does get absurd sometimes.

>>3042543
most of these faggots barely draw, they read one or two infographics and are eager to show off what they learned. just look at all the shitty redlines filled with tips that the "corrector" himself can barely follow

>>3042543
you came to the wrong neighborhood science boy, aint no bunsen burners here. best git fore we shove some brushes up your vanishing point

>>3042342
I did didn't really take in account the scenery when doing the character lighting, it works for the solo shot but I guess I could change/add some stuffs for the scenery.

>>3042565
This.

>>3042644
>pulling up the ladder behind them
This, I give misleading advice to newbies in hopes of distorting their understanding and slowing their progress. There's enough competition as is, you retards can fuck off

>>3042458
The girl looks better from what you used to draw, looks like improvement but the perspective is completely fucked. I cant really tell whats going on part of me thinks I'm looking at her from above but the background tells me we are nearly at eye lvl with the horizon. I think the main reason is that her calves and feet look like we look at them from the top but the rest of her body looks more like we are looking at her at eye lvl.
But don't listen to me try it out for yourself, adjust her legs a little and see if it works with the background.

>>3042530
Man you are leaving that poor man no chance. In the last one it looked like he could maybe beat them but now he is just cut in half immediately. Poor dude.
But the fact that the slim one cut him is now easy to read, at least for me, however that he comes from the same direction as the fat monster and his legs are behind the fat one kind of make a clusterfuck. Also I think it might be easier to read if you dont make him cut that dude in half so that you cant see the fat monsters leg through the mans body.
Also the cut feels unnatural because the monster comes from behind the fat monster. Maybe if the slim one was on the other side of the monster it would feel more natural. because it could reach him easier.
I can't really help you, and so probably 70% of the people here can't, we can only give you some insight on what others think, you gotta pick out the good stuff.

>>3042543
i have a bs in physics if that makes my opinion worth anything

i think people just like to talk shit, it's not really that deep-- your own feelings aren't that far off from the truth, minus actually being art majors

>>3042696
>There's enough competition as is, you retards can fuck off
Not really. I can sustain myself solely through art. And I do it without ever drawing porn, like a lot of artists on here tend to.

I got three routine clients that pay me monthly, two for comics, and one to design characters for him. Plus, I also get the occasional commissions from time to time for paintings and such, from people who just come across my stuff on my facebook or insta or tumblr, and just really like it. For example, pic related is something I did for a private client for $1000.

And I've done fuck all in terms of proper marketing or branding online. If you start putting your stuff out there, if people like it, you'll get commissions for stuff. The market is much much bigger than you think. Especially with private clients who just think, "oh, I'd like to hire an artist to make me a painting of X, to hang on my wall." There's a fuckton of those.

If you have a scarcity based mindset, especially one in which you believe that you gotta undermine others to sustain yourself, then you're only undervaluing yourself, cause as I see it, it's like a belief that your work simply isn't something valuable enough to retain or attract clients. I know that so long as I keep my clients satisfied, they'll keep coming back to me, and they'll spread good word of mouth to attract more clients. Simple as. If you live in an abundance-based mindset, then you'll have actual abundance in everything you set out to do.

Personally, I like to help people, and see them improve, simply cause, especially as total newbie, I understood just how frustrating it is to try and get any decent feedback when you need it the most.

>>3042523
Have you got faster in drawing these or do they still take you days?

>>3042402
Yeah i know what you mean about "authentic" and illogical pride. I've only ever had like an extremely limited amount of people who draw well, so most of the time my self learning gets in the way. I just need to get my self to look at other work and such. I already keep folders of inspiration and references, I just never use them.

Continuing this one.

>>3042317
>>3042038
She's not that thick

>>3042317
Your anatomy and shading are really not good, and why not put the same effort you put into her ugly torso into her hands? They're so amateur looking.

>>3042458
This looks REALLY wonky. Her lower legs look like she's cripples, her breast looks like it's coming out of her sternum, she has a sasquatch arm, and can YOU swivel your head to a perfect 3/4 angle sitting like that? Your rendering and lines are great, but I think you should leave this drawing and start a new one, there's a lot wrong with its construction.

my lineart is super shit but i like to make it one of the focal points of my work. i can't get the flow of my lines to be nice curves. would getting a bigger tablet help or should i just get better at drawing curves? maybe both? i use a small tablet with a 4x6 active area so it might not be enough space to flex my wrists to actually draw them.

>>3042532
>>3042480
>>3042851
>>3042706
I think the issue derives mostly because the background perspective is inconsistent with the one of the body, If I were to make it more simple like a mostly top view grass field it would work better.

Thanks for the feedback

>>3042945
I really like the style you're going for in this. And yes, a bigger tablet with an actual screen will make a world of difference.

>>3042949
No dude, the body itself is fucked. But I don't know I'm surprised, you don't take crit very well in general, and it shows.

>>3042458
who takes off their bra while holding onto their heel

>>3043277
Girls that want to look sexy

>>3042945
Honestly, YOUR ART WOULD impove with a better tablet, cause this one really shows some good skills anon, although you need to practice folds imo. Keep it up

>>3042530
Needs more contrast to split up the dude from the man and the thing and the background. Nice job though.

>>3042116
The sketch looks better than the linework

I`m gonna get hate for this, but... one thing I've learned from these Alt/Style threads is that PS is the industry standard but out of all artists who post here the best ones work in CSP.

>>3043625
I use CSP but I'm scared that when I eventually do get a job in the industry, that I'll be hindered by my inexperience with PS.

>>3043625
>>3043631
they are basically the same if all you're doing is drawing. You wont need to know 90% of photoshops functions

u like uuu fate?

Decided to try my hand at anime(ish) style.
Crit?

>>3042317
When are you gonna learn what values are?

>>3042763
Copy copy copy copy, that's the best way to get good. Even the greatest artist just copy from what already exists in real life.

It's like learning in school, you don't just learn formulas by yourself, the teacher has to teach you.

Tried out some wonky stylization. Any tips for drawing western cartoons?

>>3042760

i drew this in about 45 min.

i can draw faces pretty fast

everything else takes days

practicing a bit more recently

hopefully it helps, feels like im slowing down

Absolutely had to do it.

>>3043807
The way you stylize eyes is crazy appealing.

>>3043788
tip 1:
don't
tip 2: be a non cis white male
tip 3: forget how to draw, use the same fucking generic gumball 3 tooth grin face

>>3043807
I love you. Blog?

Donut steel oc jojo stand.

>>3043014
So both can't be fucked? lel
the thing is that the perspective on the previous background was atrocious, I did try to fix her body too,

>>3043277
it's complicated

It's true, this guy doesn't take critique well. He namefags and just posts his work on here to get extra attention. I gave him a helpful critique with a red lining a while back and he completely ignored it.

>>3043864
That comment was directed towards Firez.

>>3043807
Blog??

>>3043850
Is she underwater now?

>>3043736
>tfw this is better than you

>>3043807
seriously dude, blog?

>>3043850
Her right arm is impossibly long while portions of her left arm ought to be visible. If you can't see these, draw this exact pose from a side view. While you check these proportions, tell me if you think it's possible for her to maintain this pose balanced solely on her knees.

>>3043931
Just stop, if he doesn't want the crit, don't give him the crit. Ignore and move on.

>>3042730
Finally someone said that. I dont understand these people shitting their pants. If you love doing something and youre good at it, theres always gonna be people who will want to pay for it.

>>3043949
It think it lacks highlights, particularly on the skin. It's like you just put on flat color over grey shading.

>>3043950
Hmmm... care to elaborate?

>>3043952
To take 3D render passes as comparison, you only seems to use the "rim left" one. It all feels very flat and lacks shadows and reflections. Consider studying those, it helps a lot in improvement your shading.

One other problem I see way too much Is that you put an highlight everytime there is a line. Stop this, that's not how it works at all, you're just repeating errors of others.

>>3043961
I see, thanks a lot. Also, what do you mean by this?
>One other problem I see way too much Is that you put an highlight everytime there is a line.
Do you mean the white going over a line? Should I thin the line more on the white white highlight?

>>3043769
Don't bother replying to him anymore, I don't know why he posts here to begin with.

>>3043984
Don't tell me what to do.

>>3043982
I mean how your putting a lighter lines on the side of a dark lines that is supposed to represent a muscle. That's not how it works.

Go look at real life muscular guys and give it a try at making your render like it. i think that should help you understand a few things.

>>3043992
Ah, alright, I gotcha. Thanks a bunch. Saving this ref, and doing some changes.

>>3043843
This is fucking making my duck hard. Love this style with the line weight. Any more?

>>3042952
>>3043425
Thank you! I've always drawn on small spaces so it'll be a venture to draw on a bigger surface. I'll def look into a bigger tablet.
I am taking some draping classes next semester, are there any references/books that are good to study from?

>>3044016
Yea, I have this two other jojo ones.

>>3041971
>>3044016

>>3043996
are you going to finish it?

Thoughts?

>>3044158
blog?

>>3044075
now take his shorts off

>>3044183
http://passionateshadow.deviantart.com/gallery/?edit=1&offset=0

>>3043991
I'll says whatever I want to you, bub. SO HAVE A NICE DAY, JACKASS

>>3044263
You sounds butthurt. Still didn't draw anything today?

>>3044268
Lmao what?

i don't think i'm going finish this

i don't think i'm going to finish this (sorry for reposting)

>>3044318
lazy fuck

>>3044360
EXACTLY

How does one go from drawing still life and fruit (learning this in my university course) to drawing Anime and vidya characters? There seems to be a world's difference between jotting down the face of an actual human and something that has zero basis in our reality

>>3044464
>something that has zero basis in our reality
you start by getting that out of your head

Can I get a critique on this?

>>3044496
IF you spent 5 minutes on something only, then why would anyone make the effort?

>>3044464
Drawing still life is done to teach you how to properly copy. Copying is important to learning.

>>3044464
>something that has zero basis in our reality

Anime and any other stylized art is all abstraction from real life things. It's entire foundation is based in reality.

>>3043788
this is awesome anon

I'd love some cartooning resources too but you only ever get Loomis and anime in this place

How would one go about trying to get this type of brush and effect?

>>3044672
In Clip Studio preferably.

>>3044674
flat brush low opacity lots of layers knowing forms and shit. change the brush direction to go to the forms.

>>3044679
Thank you, honestly.

>>3044681
np anon have fun.

>>3042458
she's gonna fall forward in that pose with no support arm and hit her head on those rocks firez (tests the pose ) maybe not but its still really hard to hold position.and not natural .
i like your style and work but i think you would know this

>>3042725
Are you actually a nipnop?

>>3044672
Looks like a round hard brush at ~50% to me

>>3044739
Thank you, anon. Note taken.

>>3042547
Anyone who can stylize successfully knows how to draw successfully.

>>3043961
Why does a leather/denim jacket have so much SSS?
Why would a solid object like the helmet have SSS at all?

>>3044783
I just used it because the render passer list was fairly complete. For the SSS, I think it's like the reflection pass, It's put at max to be then used for if necessary when doing the final render. Or the guy just wanted to show how it would look, like for the normal pass.

i feel like I'm losing the motivation to draw..

but got to diamond in league finally after playing about 20 hours a day!!

>>3045025

>playing games

>>3045025
>good at drawing and good at league
Why must we be born to suffer

>>3045025
literally wall eyed

>>3045025
>playing ranked

>>3045049
If you think being diamond makes you good at league you are extremely mistaken.

>>3043991
not me
>>3043984

The shapes aren't as simplified as i'd like.

study one thing, start drawing one thing, realise there's about 20 things you need to study to finish drawing that thing, go back to grinding
the glorious cycle repeats

>>3043807
Who are your inspirations?

>>3045251
uguuu

>>3044711
? im american my nigga

>>3042110
Finished line art of body, took a shit load of time.
Maybe it's because I tried a process I'm not used to (Sketch->Messy lineart->clean with eraser), or that it's just inefficient, either way I like the result

Bluh...me again. Thoughts so far? I haven't finished the lineweight on the hair and cup yet, because I don't know if it's right. Still have to add outfit details too.

>>3045740
This is actually kind of cool.

Anyone happen to know brush settings that could simulate this sort of "low quality AA" look that Pixel's older art has? Some of it's definitely just a binary tool sort of thing, but not all of it.
http://www.cavestory.org/page-archive/history/

>>3045740
>>3045763 Here. Looking at your anatomy actually really helped me see my own errors and fix some up. Thanks. I love your picture too, btw!

>>3045763
Something about her anatomy is really throwing me off in the chest area.

>>3045851
Oh my god I still didn't get it right??..this was the thing I struggled with the most during the sketch phase. I need to take a day and just draw tits non-stop or something lol

>>3043736
her shoulders and torso are small and dont be shy to draw the other arm, other than that it looks pretty decent

>>3045049
>good at drawing

>>3045328
sure you need to go back and grind but youre not helping yourself if you dont finish what you start

>>3043736
That one eye is a bit higher than the other.

>>3045860
I don't think it's her chest cause that seems alright, I think her torso is a bit too short. Her crotch seems a bit high up. I did a shitty redline to illustrate.

Also notice the perspective of her breasts and the sash underneath are going in different directions. Unless her sash is going diagonally, you should have them roughly follow the same perspective.

>>3045025
Who fucking cares? You draw the same thing over and over without improvement.
>inb4 I don't want crits
Then stop posting.

>>3045359
ooh really neat style! Though I think to improve the readability of it, you might want to consider adding white lines where the edges of certain objects are, kinda like i've done here.

I also thought the head was a little too tall, and the rear hand could use a little more detail than 'vague blob'. Other than that though, really cool stuff

>>3045964
I was going for silhouettes and shapes (leaving out white lines) for a more flat look. I get what you mean though.

isn't there a touhou who has a thing for telephones?

Been working on posing a little..
I also feel like my male Garnet looks like Ziggy Stardust..

Can I get some hard advice on what looks the most fucked or what needs to be worked on?

She's suppose to be wearing that face mask thing from Saw, but it seems I've ran into issues with just about everything.

>>3043807
Reeeeee

Post. Your. Blog.

Or at least more of your work! Who's your inspiration anon?

got another sketch started i think

>>3046339
he looks retarded. I hope someone can point out to you why though.

>>3046366
dead stare + open mouth

>>3046371
+ drool

>>3046388
i think he is actually supposed to be sucking at the chain hanging around his neck. Also his nose kind of looks broken

>>3046393
First I looked yeah I thought he had been sucking on something alright

>>3046063
Hotute Humekodioh. And probably Muribul Ringo and Asume Hurn too, given that they are modern girls (from the future, to be correct) living in the outer world.

This swimsuit was mentioned on /a/ 2 months ago. I was drawing this since, because I liked it. Also, Onsa was one of the best girls.

>>3046507
holy fuck that is repulsive

>>3046583
cute! but she hasnt got a nose!

>>3046583
Reminds me of this thing. God that takes me back...does nobody remember this or did we really shift into another parallel universe? I remember it being popularly worn by young girls.

>>3046507
>>3046583
damn.. the japanese art style looks so much more appealing than westernized anime art. It's a fucking night and day comparison.

>>3046595
>goodly done anime looks gooder than badly done anime

>>3046599
I don't know if it's just me, but I think I've developed an unknown superpower that allows me to discern a trash tier western faggot fatass tumblerino drawing impersonation of "anime", from real anime.

>>3046595
Anime is easternised Disney. Nobody westernised shit, it just returned back.

>>3046606
Is Kronprinz real anime?

If you ant to change up your style, what are some things you can do? I heard you can try to mimic other artists you like to try and take on elements from there drawings to add to your own, but I usually go back to drawing styles I learned from how to draw manga books. I do like anime, I'm just wondering what I can do to mix things up a little.

>>3046507
You see this is exactly the sort of shit that helps turn people into faggots.

>>3046236
arararararagi-kun

>>3046507
kill it with fucking fire before it lays eggs and turns into one of these.

>>3046626
Is this better?
It's that I haven't decided on noses yet. Black dot is glaringly subpar, but everything else I've seen is just chain copycatting. Or >>3046583 because the best solution is apparently ignoring the issue completely.

>>3045740
Progress on colours, still got a bit to do.
I tried airbrushing it but I hated the really soft look so tried this instead. Feel like it got a whole lot less sexy, maybe it's too dark? idk, I'll have to mess with saturation/brightness I guess
Also problems with the nipples, can't seem to make em sexy.
>>3045775
Thanks mang
>>3046630
Just scrap it and move on to something else man

How awful is this? For a moment I thought I was improving and this looked decent, and then I realized I must just be getting worse at judging my own art.

>>3046630
it's more about positioning than the exact way you draw the features

it's all about the baby proportions

>>3046626
what is that thing xhe's holding in zer hand? some kind of a castration tool?

>>3046742
Face is still too long. It needs to be completely redrawn. Start over >>3046507 don't get too attached to your drawings.

>>3046754
Eyelash curler.

Should I bother learning how to use Clip Studio Paint/Photoshop or should I just keep using SAI?
I've used SAI for like, 3 years now. Does Clip Studio Paint/Photoshop offer anything significant other than eating up more processing power?

>>3046775
There's not much to learn. I switched from Photoshop to CSP a few months back, and it only took my about a day or two to get properly accustomed to it.

WAKE ME UP INSIDE

>>3046339
mouth is fucked and hes got a giraffe neck

>>3046775
Way more tools in booth of those programs than in Sai.

>>3046791
>>3046780
I'm a massive poorfag, what's the best way to download Clip Studio Paint?

>>3046830
https://thepiratebay.org/search/Clip%20Studio%20Paint/0/99/0

>>3046833
Congrats, that link gives you brushes and lessons, but not the actual program, read more

>>3046583
Blog?

>>3046833
>only one is a "download" for the actual program
>first comment is "malware"
Yeah... nah. I'm going to look on some other torrent sites then.

>>3046840
>>3046837
Man I miss Kickass Torrents

>>3046844
Apparently I already pirated it a while back.
It's working fine, but for some reason all the tool names are in Japanese while the menus are in English.

Can I get a critique

>>3046846
Learn Japanese, easy

>>3046741
More like better at judging.

Speakin' of software & shit; Humblebundle has some shit going for Corel Photo Brush-Aftershot/Corel Painter Essentials/Particle shop for less than 4 packs of tendies

Anyone actually used the aforementioned programs? How do they hold up compared to Photoshop/Clip?

>>3046852
I know Corel Painter is good, don't know what essential 5 specifically offers but for the price seems good enough. The particle shit seems like a pointless thing tacked on and the Aftershot is just basic photoshop editing features. desu, worth it overall

WIP, hope you like generic shit

>>3046884
woopz mb inb4 fuck it up again

>>3045738
Very nice, do you have a place where you post your other work?

>>3046848
The face is cute, but you seriously need to get those lines under control. Stop chicken scratching and make long, single stokes for your lines, ctrl+z until you draw the line right. Additionally, it seems like you referenced the photo without much understanding of the underlying forms. The hands are the most glaring problem area. Do some simple anatomy studies, draw more bodies and hands.

>>3046907
This is rare, the full image looks more appealing than the thumbnail, why is this even?! Honestly confused

>>3046941
Agreed, its not a huge difference but kind of.
I think the color pallete is a little bit off and maybe thats why, I think the blue in the background is too glaring maybe. Im unsure cause I'm bad with color but this is cute.

What do you think of this? I want crit before I go in with the colours. I lately started grinding anime faces, hair etc so I'm not yet too confident

>>3046583
show those tumblr nose artists whos boss

>>3046982
the guy is drawn in perspective while the girl not. It's like they're not in the same surface

Is this any good considering i have 60 hours grinding so far? Been working on fundies and all that good stuff, any criticism is welcome

Something I'm working on.

I know the grid is all over the place, but it's just a rough guideline. I don't use it much at this stage anymore.

Used some light reference from myself for the right arm, but it's otherwise mostly from the head. Is anything really off and I'm just not seeing it?

>>3046236
>>3046621

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zpwyhpv269E

>>3046966
Neck is fucked, hands are weird (get a reference).
Legs look disconnected to the body, you should make a new layer on top, draw them from crotch to feet and correct your lineart.
>>3047213
Face is way too big and the back of the skull isn't in perspective.

>>3046877
Her nipples would be showing unless she has weird shitty titties

Anyone wand to trade art?

>>3039553
Made his outfit more ambiguous, tried to make him look a more like a fighter wearing one of those boxer's robes and less like a Japanese fisherman.

I think it compliments the masculine frame a bit more but let me know what you guys think.

>>3047237
I do, what do you have in mind?

>>3043703
kek

>>3043736
You might want to re consider your fundamentals. Her left tits is like hanging off her arm yo.

>>3047268
I'll draw one of your characters for a drawing of that one, I probably cannot finish until tomorrow though.

>>3046756
>It needs to be completely redrawn.
But I like it. It looks exactly like I want it.
>don't get too attached to your drawings
True, I'm overly attached, but the only way to overcome this is drawing a lot, and this was, like, my third drawing this year? Forth? It boils down to "become pro to be pro". Deep.

>>3047303
>but I like it. It looks exactly like I want it.
No, you're attached to the idea of it due to how much time and effort you put into it. In reality, it looks like shit and you need to redraw it so you can get better.

>>3047213
>>3047219

hopefully this is better? this always happens it feels like; get through most of a drawing, mess up a fundamental anatomy thing, and get stuck.

>>3047287
any particular pose or lewd you want?

>>3047342
just kidding, this definitely looks way worse.

>>3047351
Anything lewd is cool, long as there's no dickgirls. l would try and cough up a gif but I don't have the tools I need so you'll probably end up with a single image from me.

>>3046907
you just drew from a photo and stylized it, didn't you?

>>3046718
Warmed up the colours a bit, pretty much done with the body now.
Nipples still look unsexy as fuck though

>>3047422
no ref

>>3047466
then your imagination is boring af

>>3047471
ya

>>3047471
Ganbatte anon senpai! Give it your best, pull all your strings, if one thing doesn't work try another! Just don't give up! You`ll make it eventually, you`ll insult another artist on the internet! If proved wrong or stupid just throw in another theory! It will work! We are all counting on you cancer-senpai!

I tried making more complex work, but it seems my lack of painting skill is starting to bite me because I'm having a hard time trying to bring it to a finished state

>>3046886
Attempted to color dunno anything about rendering but it was fun back to actually studying

>>3047520
To me it looks like your are abusing either dodge/burn or a shit ton of color replace/ balance/levels/curves. Stay away from those up the very late stage, and only use it a little even then. Also think about the focus, add details to the parts the eye should focus on, and much less so to the rest.

>>3047527
I typed too fast sorry, hope this makes sense

>>3047351
Got the character you want drawn?

>>3047531
felicia from darkstalkers

>>3047541
Anything you want to see her doing?

>>3047546
the most extreme shit you're willing to draw or just anything you like instead, I'm cool with any.

>>3047548
Sounds like a plan.

>>3047549
be probably done with yours in an hour or two

>>3045251
love you, never stop posting, or atleast drop by from time to time, just don't stress yourself ok?

>>3047235
magic anon

>>3047554
sorry, I'm just starting this could take a while, if something comes up I may not finish seven or eight hours

>>3047569
it's fine

>>3047521
You shouldn't use pure greys and blacks.
Instead use very dark/desaturated colors that create harmony with the saturated ones.
For example here you could use desaturated blue or violet for her blouse and dark red for props on the hair,

>>3047219
fixed the neck and the hands, the problem with the legs is i had already drawn the pose and it made sense to me (I red lined it) but I think the skirt is drawn in a way that makes it look weird. Thank you for the crit also

>>3047315
>No
Yes, anon. It was completely according to keikaku.

>>3046779
is is why you shouldn't draw the same thing over and over again, its actually kind of comical how much worse it gets from the neck down.

>>3047520
I like your sense of color, I feel like her mouth should be slightly parted, kind of like in pic related.

The stylization I was going for didn't work and i kept changing the proportions, resulting in an inconsistent figure. Also it seems that i have regressed, big time..

>>3047623
i'm done. back to studies i guess

>>3047237
hope you like it

>>3047732
Nicely done dude, thanks.

>>3047732
Nicely done dude, thanks, you got a blog?

>>3047758
https://www.pixiv.net/member.php?id=16901516
just pin ups though

>>3047732
blog?

How am I doing, /ic/ ?

>>3047798

>>3047800
don't know where I am going tho

>>3047798
I actually really like this piece, it's cute

>>3047798
blog? i really like this

>>3047804
>>3047813
https://captainmorgansalvador.tumblr.com/
Thx, but I really want to know where I could go next, I'm kinda stuck right now

>>3047829
it gives me an akira vibe so I would go with colour schemes like pic related. simple cel shading, browns, oranges, reds and beige

>>3047858
Yeah never saw this this way, that might be really cool, thx my man

>>3047858
here, take the sketch o thanks

i tried to do this for my sister's birthday because i figured it's the kind of hippie shit she'd like
would appreciate critique if anyone has the time

>>3047927
should also mention that this is not the finished product, just a work in progress.

>>3047912
aaaw cute senpai

>>3047927
are you drawing your sister naked, you perv? i think she will be disgusted with your present.

>>3047989
Yeah a naked girl in a heart shape is a weird thing to give a sister.

>>3047927
Huge head, unless that's what you were going for. It doesn't look connected to the body

>>3047527
Thanks for the crits, I've used too much contrast adjustment although it's the only post processing stuff I used in this, also I will try to paint from life more so I could get over this bottleneck that is rendering.

>>3047607
Glad that you like it so it's not a total failure.. I'm going to keep this in archive and come back when I got better at fundamentals

someone please crit

finally beginning to understand those gosh darn anime heads.

>>3048022
Began reworking on designing the secondary characters of my personal project, got a big amount to do.

>>3048011
cow tits/10 it's okay
Looks like she's flicking her hair out of the way to the side, the position of the arm is a little odd.
I think it's easier to have your elbow or arm pointing outward for a motion like that

>>3048141
Ugly style. Stop spending all your time on /i/ and learn how to draw hands properly, you know with proper anatomy.

>>3048141
Cute style. Keep enjoyeeing your lifetime.

>>3048210
I'm experimenting, I like it, try different things it's really fun, you should try.
About the hands you are completely right, It's been a long time since I studied some hands, will work on this tomorrow.
>>3048221
Thanks. :3

>>3048025
Dude you still don't know how to draw anime heads?
Unironically Loomis

>>3048141
It looks like she's missing her lower legs lol.
Loomis, sticky.

>>3048253
Yeah, she kinda don't have any on purpose...just don't think about it

>>3047471
Happy with yourself senpai?

How would I make this read better?

I used to do this kind of straight hatching technique on traditional, but it just ends up as a mess on digital. Probably due to worse straight lines, and partly because I just don't know how to draw stylized hair at all.

Can anyone draw-over this and section the hair in a more coherent way?

just finished this, not rlly sure how to feel about it :')))) any critiques would be lovely, especially on coloring !!

>>3045763
Your line weight is jarring as fuck yo.

red forman from that 70's show-- thoughts?
doing a lot of face studies because i just realized i can't draw faces from imagination

>>3048442
forgot pic

floaty girl

>>3047422
>>3047471
I love how salty you are, kek.

>>3048449
that is exactly what I googled when I wanted to find a picture of her and I didnt know her name.
Looks cute so far.

>>3048252
Nah I mean sketching them WITHOUT construction.

>>3048511
>>3048449
Uraraka?

>>3048561
ye

from the other thread.

>>3047541
Done

something looks off, but I can't put my finger on it. It's probably the eye and the cheeks

>>3048832
really nice, liked your style since I first saw that jungle comic you posted here on /ic/ long ago (did you ever finished that?). just message me on pixiv anytime you want to do another art trade with me. and thanks for the lovely draw.

>>3048022
>>3048034
The second one.

new thread >>3048901

>>3048210
>thread for a bunch of weeaboos to draw stylized art
>someone draws more stylized hands for a smaller character
>DRAW IT RIGHT REEEE
/ic/ is either the worst or the best board on 4chan.

>>3048817
ty for posting this