/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Took me quite some time but hopefully it's ok

>>3029027
what is she laughing about

>>3029027
really good, rest of you shitters who planned on posting something need to reevaluate your drawing before you embarrass yourself

Posted this towards the end of the last thread and it got swallowed up by the drama going on...please help, Twintelle's proportions plus this angle is killing me.

i'm afraid i can't bring myself to draw anything anymore

>>3028954
Why he deleted all accounts? I sick of lurking in /ic/ trashhole jsut for his art. And where is Jace come from? Isn't he supposed to killed himself after his tumblr crywalls?

>>3029083
Haven't been on /ic/ awhile. Has he even deleted his twitter and tumblr?

>>3029088
Yes

>>3029088
he had a tumblr? what was his name, I saved a few artists tumblrs and I might have his drawings

did he post in LAS too? because I have some of those too

>>3029027
That mouth's looking a bit large and lack's some darker colors, try simplifying the nose to a more basic shape, the attention to detail on the nostril is off-putting. Separate the boob from the pectoral / shoulder muscle. The neck's too long and the chin is looking too recessed, either move the point to bellow the middle of the nose (without accounting for the angle of the head) or add some more squish to the cheeks. Her right shoulder is too close to the neck.

>>3029073
there's a lot out of place here, but you can make it look better by making the arms longer, fixing the boobs and fixing the proportions of her face

>>3029080
join the club

>>3029212
how to I get expelled?

>Alternative art
>it's just chinese cartoons

>>3029243
>chinese cartoons
???
Check tumblr for SU art

>>3029243
Franco-belgian and italian artists just aren't hip right now.

>>3029258
nonsense, hugo pratt is always hip

Crit my wip pls.
I've changed things since last thread, but I wanna see if there's other things I could improve on. (the white bars are there just because of paint's select tool)

>>3029354
why didn't you follow the redlines

>>3029027
It's very well done. Quick composition thing to consider.
Her right arm creates a tangent with her right breast, which serves to flatten that part of the image. A small tweak to the angle of the arm would fix that.
On the bikini top, her left breast, lower inside quadrant, the yellow border shouldn't be visible. Eliminating it should help her left tit "pop" out.
The edge of the mouth is a bit jarring, but I don't know how I'd fix that, or if I'd even mess with it.

>>3029027
Feels like the transition between light and dark on her arm is too sharp, creates the impression of an edge

>>3029375
i tried, anon.

any suggestions on how I can push the flame effect?

>>3029421
I like the effect, but the nose seems angled wrong. Maybe I'm looking at it weird.

>>3029421
looks neat and thicc.

>>3029421
consider making the sss a less greener hue.

Black fire is a little paradoxical. Maybe make the center of the flame white? And darken the background in places that are away from the flame?

>>3029421
Something a bit closer to this might help, could do with pushing the contrast.

Hi!
Any tips for shading and lighting like this?
I use Clip Studio, is there any tool or settings for the default ones out there that looks like the ones here?

I really want to achieve something similar to these examples but I'm nowhere near.

https://leongangar.tumblr.com/

>>3029474
Shit, forgot my picture.

>>3029483
That's just cel shading. Has nothing to do with a brush. It has to do with light and shadow. Instead of multiple shadows they just use a core shadow.

>>3029474
>>3029483
>>3029493

I've also found this tutorial that may or not help me (It's DA, sorry)

http://tomycase.deviantart.com/art/Shading-Tutorial-Model-X-396912791

>>3029428
Probably the lips and the nose.
>>3029447
>>3029459
Hmmm. Definitely after a more realistic flame, but I'm not sure how it's supposed to behave is the thing

>>3029474
>>3029483
Use warm colors to shade, no green. Purpleish blue will work on almost anything. Cell shade it with a hard brush. You need to understand form in order to be bold with it.
Use a soft brush to erase some of the edges. On skin, make the edge of the shadow pinker.

I stole one of your linearts to demonstrate

>>3029555
Hey thanks! That looks pretty good actually, I'll practice that.

Crit?

How's it look so far? I'm about to start coloring it.

>>3029648
How do you know how to vary your lineweight?

>>3029651
Mostly the light source for the overall difference. But also material. Skin I generally kept thin, clothing thicker. The interior where the clothing or etc... touches the skin is darker as well. While at the same time varying each line by having connecting points and outward curves be darker.

The black areas where I filled in are where it's pure shadow, though I used the artwork for Blazblue Central Fiction as reference for how that's done.

>>3029648
Didn't you read the sign, well drawn artwork not allowed.
get outta here

>>3029648
Looking good.

Is there a specific brush you use for lineart?

>>3029354
Alright I've done some more work on this. I'm gonna color it once I've finished the actualy drawing.

Just crit my shit up, senpai.

>>3029666
Yes. I use a custom G-Pen in Manga Studio. These are my presets based on personal preference. It should give you a base to build off of. For me at least, this makes a HUGE difference. I have a lot more control over my lines this way. Also, normally I have the Random value at around 30, but in this case I wanted really clean lines, so I removed it entirely. To mess around with this stuff, click on the button in the Pen Tool Properties tab that looks like three dots arranged in a triangle.

Forgive the phone camera, it wouldn't let me use the snipping tool to grab a screencap (the presets tab kept closing whenever I clicked anything else).

>>3029687
Thank you so much

>>3029648
I really like your shadows and lineweight, everything feels natural.

>>3029165
This any better? Still having a lot of trouble. Her face looks so derpy.

>>3029676
You should have fixed the shoulders as shown in the redbox critique from yesterday.

>>3029139
>>3029396
>>3029398
Thanks for the crits, I really appreciate it! I was too concerned with the rendering so many issues slipped under my radar, I will try to fix these aforementioned issues to make it better.

Thoughts?

How can one draw like the Disgea dude
His characters seems so full of life and I love his art style but is so unique

>>3029754
start from the obvious, he makes slender bodies with big hands and heads, also uses a "bright" color palette, and the other hard part is the designs but that's too obvious.

>>3029754
Try not to copy him too hard since his style is so distinct you'll end up being just a cheap knockoff. Consider what is the core element that you like about it and steal that instead.

>>3029410
>I tired

No you obviously did not. Dude, just a small example, look at the placement of her hands in the red line, and look at yours. That plus the shoulder placements.

Try harder and stop asking for feedback when people have already spent valuable time attempting to teach you

>>3029725
Will do.

Sorry I posted this here before but never got around to finishing it. Can I ask you guys option 1 or 2 again?

>>3029799
or this one?
Also, should I change anything about the magazine he's holding? I wanted it to look like a porno mag so I added the title "s ukiyo e" but I don't know if it looks dumb.
Is the whole thing better subtle or more apparent?

>>3029799
1

>>3029648
Great job, I'm always worried coloring my line art will ruin it but this looks like it would be great with color on it.
>>3029752
pic related
>>3029724
its a cute concept. I think the boobs were actually better in the first one. in this one they're pushed unnaturally close together. If you want them to have cleavage like that than I think that you would make the bottom have a line straight across instead of the two C shapes you have as the bottom (think about how a bra looks, the bra is straight on the bottom and round on the top, the middle connecter removes the disturbance of the two Cs and makes a gap between them, thus making it just a straight line that represents the line that goes around the woman's ribcage. A little bit of curve at the bottom is good but I think there should be one more line below it)

Thoughts?

I feel like I fucked everything up

>>3029813
I just realize that this meant he drew the background in the wrong perspective.

>>3029826
When you feel that way, just tackle one problem at a time.

Or, if this isn't digital, draw it again, and fix things that you know for sure are wrong along the way the second time.

Lots of people don't know the value of drawing something more than once - they just never try it or try it only once.

The head is too big for the body. start with that, and just that. One thing at a time. One small improvement. One problem.

Look, analyze, fix. Ask yourself 'what needs fixing' then 'how could I fix that?' maybe you need a ref, maybe you know the answer right away.

And then when things look okay 'correct' wise, don't just ask 'what needs fixing' because art isn't about being correct, or fixing things, it's actually about making things look good.

So ask the question, 'what would make this look even better?' and then do that. One thing at a time.

>>3029346
I really like this, anon. Your lines are very confident and you seem to have a good handle on stylization already. Would you mind telling me what exactly you study?

>>3029083
>>3029116
kurylneko?

Hmmm

>>3029954
right wrist looks broken

>>3029954
Nosebro, that you?

>>3029956
Fixed, I would cut and move, but it did not loo to good, so I just redraw.
>>3029959
Nah.

>>3029648
Hey! I remember the concept you posted for this... And the color scheme you chose as well...
I'm excited to see the colored version.

WIP

any good?

>>3030003
Dang that's quick coloring, good job

Any tips on this posing? Knees, arms, shoulders, distribution of weight, etc

Or just any way to make this more interesting since it's pretty generic

>>3029847
fuck, can't find anything

I need help getting out of this rut.
I haven't been able to draw anything worth while in weeks.
Everything looks like shit and I feel like shit.

>>3030086
Just keep drawing anon, you'll get out of it eventually. Consider taking a day or two off, but never quit. If you stop drawing completely, you'll only feel worse.

Always remember, https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxGRhd_iWuE

Any tips welcome.

Anon, I'm sorry I didn't respond to your critique that one time, but I'm really thankful for it.

>>3029555
>>3029558
While I didn't achieve the exact same result of my idol or your example, yours helped me a lot to get this done. I'm pretty happy with the end result.
I'll keep practicing it, thanks!

>>3030051
I really like your style and use of colors, as a whole it looks very good IMO and the texture adds to it a lot.

>>3030101
Blog? Really liking this, you seem like a semi-pro.

>>3030085
Isn't that Andrae or are you guys talking about something else?

>>3029754
>unique
kek

>>3030108
of course it would look like that to you

>>3030109
indeed, andrae, which I got to same their LAS, but I didn't know they had a tumblr too

how's the coloring looking so far lads

>>3029027
do some hands studies. also the pose is very stiff.

>>3030277
Liking it, you must be influenced by asanagi.

>>3030277
kinda bland

shift them hues more

>>3029648
>>3030101
I will riot if these two aren't in the next threads pic.

>>3030280
Thanks and correct. Well, him and a few other porn artists.
>>3030281
Was afraid of that. I'll fuck around with it some more.
Thanks lads.

>>3030101
>Finished drawing with background and everything
>in this thread
Am I dreaming?

>>3030101
What brushes are you using? I've been looking for some brushes that have a nice bristle effect.

>>3030101
I know this was a conscious choice you made, but I think if I was to change this in any way, I'd have made her head hanging down looking at her reflection that way instead of the upright position it's in now. Also this is super rough (the W10 draw function is not great), but since you still seem up in the air about her left arm, I might try this.

Other than that, good luck, looks really nice.

>>3030123
epic green texting my dude

>>3030108
>semi-pro
Hardly, as that one anon said with the helpful post. Since blog asking is in a dangerous meme-y spot, I'll just post in the selfpromotion thread.

>>3030307
I'm using http://88grzes.deviantart.com/art/Brushes-656603878
And some custom brushes. You can try to paint some brush profiles by hand and have fun experimenting (pic related). Photoshop's default textures are pretty boring though.

>>3030303
>Am I dreaming?
Yes, it's not finished.

>>3030313
You're right, I wanted the face to be visible, that's why I choose this angle. I haven't though of the arm position you drew, I'll consider it.

>>3030566
critiques on this stylization? tried to make it cutter, and put bigger boobs because chestlets are not worth enough.

Trying to get back into drawing. Struggling with hands and feet so i'll need to study more..

>>3030572
You succeeded in making her cuter, while keeping her identifiably similar. Did you mean to re-angle the head or was it an accident?

I'm making a character sheet for this cute goat-riding royal knight girl.
Almost finished with the front view, any feedback?

hello guys, i will post this sketch for critique. design not mine.

Finished.

I gotta work on her emblem a bit more though, it's in the right direction, but it's not quite there yet.

>>3031020
The right leg is connected in the wrong place dude, I get that you wanna show some pussy but this is really off

>>3029813
I shouldn't have this many problems drawing boobs with being a girl too ugh...

>>3031084
bitch just look in the mirror

Everything I do feels a bit off. Any thoughts? I think my colors are good, but I'm probably bad on technical drawing. Why are my faces retarded?

>>3031115
Blend, and I think your art would look really good with a very very thin outline. Of course not a black outline.

>>3031117

Blend what? I'll consider an outline, thanks.

>>3031115
you don't know how to handle depth (nose holes where? ppls noses arent as shallow as you drew it.) and the facial expression looks funny esp how the mouth has teeth??tounge sticking out?? also learn to draw ears or atleast place them in a correct spot. and your colors are decent but
definitely focus down on relative values and drawing. honestly even tho this is alternative art you should learn more about realism/perspective and it will inform all the other things u draw.

>>3031027
I think I see what you mean. Nothing a simple edit can't fix. I'll spend some time mulling over how to fix it exactly before making any changes, since it's a bit tricky due to the angle.

>>3030572
blog?

>>3029421
Don't make the background the same colour as the flame.

>>3031248
well, im still really shit but...
i posted already a bunch of stuff in my instagram
https://www.instagram.com/augcasarin_art/
but i ve created a tumbrl today.
https://augcasarin.tumblr.com/

>>3031175
fuckkk thats top teir fetish bait and it works for me

snitches get stitches

>>3031020
You kinda fucked up the hips. I mean, I like Fishine's art as much as the next guy, but it's not exactly something you should use as anatomical reference.

>>3031545
Who is fishine?

>>3031647
The ahegao meme artist.

>>3031532
cute, yo

>>3031656
Ohhhh, Turtle Fish Paint?

I see why people think I used his work as ref, but I didn't. His is a lot more exaggerated than mine, and looking at the hips, he didn't make the same mistake I did. If anything, this probably just motivates me to just leave it alone. Considering I see some weird anatomy going on with the torso, but people absolutely love his work regardless.

>>3031678
There's always a chance that it's a coincidence, but I would be more inclined to believe you if you didn't copy Han Juri's weird pants and basically use all the same anatomical landmarks as Fishine.

>>3031685
The pants are not just Juri's though. One of the girls in Beat Blades Haruka has them, and they're also part of the female Naruga set in Monster Hunter (my real inspiration for the design). They're somewhat common among female Ninja designs, and I like them cause they form a nice sillouhette and are a bit sexy.

The pose, I got by using a doll as a point of reference, and repositioning stuff when drawing it on paper.

>>3029845
No i cant u ugly stupid bear

>>3031685
Those two don't even begin to line up, in any way.

>>3029845
I wish I could give you something specific. I really like how kim jung gi handles his lines and line weight, specifically how he manages to minimize chicken scratch by rarely lifting his brushpen. best practice for that is doing lots of work in pen or just erasing less. as for the style, I'm a big fan of JC leyendecker's faces and try to emulate them as best I can without copying them outright. hope that helps.

also ignore
>>3031702

>>3031709
jesus I shouldve proof read that. ignore the first sentence

>>3031656
Is this copyrighted pose or something? If so I seen this one on vintage erotic photos from 80th.

>>3031115
how often does he get his belly blown?

>>3031772

>>3031656
why meme?

>>3029421
Her left arm is disgusting, fix it.

>>3031984
"Her left arm is disgusting" doesn't really give me enough info about what's wrong with it. Can you be more specific

>>3031984
Are you gonna troll on every image itt that reminds you of how much you suck?

>>3031997
If you honestly cannot see the flaw for yourself without somebody spoonfeeding you information you might as well give up now.

>>3032004
Stop projecting.

>>3032023
oh my what a warrior

>>3032023
So you don't know?

Could I sell this?

>>3032045
yes, messy bed thing is already a huge famous piece of art. I don't remember the artists name but you're probably already aware of it, hence posting this.

r8 my batman which totally didn't take me 30 seconds to draw

Is this stylized enough?
I think I need some input on my colors

>>3032256
Pretty styley. It's hard to reach because the mice heads are all the same value despite receding into the background. You're using overlap only to show distance, and not using anything like thicker lines for closer mice, or etc.

So my advice would be make the colors further away slightly different. Like maybe add a touch of grew to the mice as they get further and further away, or green to reflect the grass, or blue to reflect a sky, or something.

Whatever you think is best. To separate them from the ones in the front more. Personally I would also do it with line thickness or some other convention.

>>3029421
The left hand doesn't look right with its arms.

>>3032256
*grey not grew

>>3032256
I think what the other anon said is a good point, also while working traditionally try to preserve your whites and keep them pristine.

It's nice to see something on here that isn't the same boring anime girl, keep it up.

It's impossible to not be anxious as fuck.

>>3032342
How do you get such detailed hair without making it a mess?

>>3032342
you're too good for ic, get off of here before a bunch of 10 year olds pretend they're better than you.

j/k, but not really that's exactly what will happen

I'm the dude who critiqued your last picture with the 'subtle changes' i know your plight because I drew pretty much same level as you

>>3032342
>>3032351
How long have you two been drawing?

>>3032355
for me, roughly 10 years of serious drawing, not full time, but at least serious about it. before that I was off and on for .. I don't know how long.

I wanted to learn younger but was afraid to try so I started getting serious only late.

the other poster might have more or less years on me, but its hard to tell because you can always spend longer on your work to make it look better

that's one of the secrets of art - if you're a beginner or don't have many years under your belt you can just spend more time on your pieces and still get great results.

Like I noticed that artist there has the eyes slightly off a lot in those pics, but if he's been drawing as long as me, those pics wouldn't have taken him as much time ie he'd know how to fix them

on the other hand if he's been drawing not quite as long maybe they did take him a significant amount of time, but they're still very decent and he likely has what it takes to fix them anyway with that kind of dedication

>>3032347
so some of the tricks he's using for the hair are darkening values at the roots and the ends, having the 'insides' of the hair be lighter contrast - you can do that with value or with thinner lines, or a number of tricks

he has a midtone in the one pic with some highlits but its still basically relying on what I just said.

And then the actual direction of the hair, that's just something you learn from practice in drawing from refs, you can also take note that all hair flows out from the roots, and sort of, flows together, rather than against itself more often than not.

the top of the head of the last girl uses the light midtone to indicate the line where the hair parts.

>>3032256
hubert?

Thoughts? Not done yet.

>>3032424
Pretty darn good, just make sure your line l pretty darn good, just make sure your line lengths and dangle changes aren't too consistent. When you are at this level, the difference between being advanced and being absolutely professional is often down to things like that.

So you will notice that your line lengths are all very similar throughout the entire figure - try to avoid that. Remember the importance of contrast.

>>3032440
*Angle

Maybe I finish maybe i not, i just have to choose some technique of shading that will look good in a punk girl and still fun to make.

>>3029083
I don't draw the much anymore

just critique my shit up.
I was going to draw a keyboard and computer and a chair but I'm sick of it now.

>>3032676
Lines are stiff af and shoulders are fucked up and not in perspective.

>>3032676
looks like you traced part of it

>>3032689
Thanks, guess I fucked up. I was trying to make it seem like she was twisting her shoulders to look behind, but I guess I fucked up.
>>3032693
I didn't. What's the part that looks traced?

>>3032676
Blog?

>>3032629
Still working.

>>3032701
I get asked this every time I post for some reason.
I don't have one, sorry.

need help figuring out what skin tones i'll end up with.

>>3032672
Fuckin' nice.

>>3032672
pls never stop

>>3032219
looks like the batman from one of my nightmares from like 10 years ago/10

>>3032810
stop fucking smashing your faces downward

>>3032676
youre like a slightly better version of beg1

>>3032672
blog?

>>3032814
Who is beg1?

>he hasn't seen lwa yet

WIP as fuck, but if anyone's got the time I could use a red line. I wanna make sure I've got the underlying shit ballpark before I cock up everything else.

She is in fact floating, so those clubby little chicken wings down at the bottom aren't concerned with bearing weight even when I do draw them in proper.

getting back into drawing consistently

I was told to go on this thread sooooo...an anon helped me by telling me how to fix my outlines. So do think it's any good?

>>3032851
a traitor. and an artist slightly worse than you.

>>3033124
Beginner1 is better than him, what are you talking about?

>>3033115
right tit is bigger than the other
elbows reach just below the ribcage, not to the pelvis
your outlines are still shit and line weight in general is all over the place

>>3033130
lol no. youre retartet.

>>3033146
lo. Get your eyes checked.

>>3033148
post some beg1 art.

>>3033150

I don't have his blog bookmarked, dumbnut, you do it and own urself.

i wanna start drawing hank hill's ass cheeks

>>3033152
http://innocentloli.tumblr.com oh nevermind, I do.

>>3033156

>>3033136
Ok thanks

test

>>3033277
Cute. blog?

>>3033037
10/10

>>3029799
>>3029802
Would buy on a t-shirt. If I wore graphic tees in the first place.
But looks really nice.

Was going for a light-hearted environment but i overused the blacks so everything is kinda muddy..
Any tips?

>>3033522
Try working some light blues into it somehow.

been a while

>>3033522
blog?

Do I have to be Japanese to draw like this?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=N7K2vFtesws&list=PLn260AvnyLWQywk-Yo7p7gXAFDflb_wvC

>>3033583
Nice, are you drawing an Aztec Neo from the matrix?

>>3033596
If you think like that, then yes. IF you stop thinking like that, then no.

>>3033600
are you using the plastic model to test poses again

>>3033600
>>3033609
Of course you are you trundlefuck, back to beg

what's the diagnosis, doc

How's the anatomy/pose? Does it look stiff? Trying for something sexy.
I feel I can try and push the pose a bit more but I'm afraid I'd just fuck up the anatomy

>>3033037
got a blog?

>>3033706
hey that looks pretty good.
you can improve it by fixing the hat, it doesn't look like it's properly on her head, also don't be sloppy with the hair.
also the left eye isn't in perspective, fix it.

What should I fix?

>>3033706
the left side of her hip looks off but im really digging the hand

>>3032370
wat?

>>3033742
>>3033774
fuck off
>>3033706
autism, as always:
stop using clothes to hide anatomical fuck-ups
head's fucked, go study anime heads
disgusting man hand, go study anime hands
grind full-body anatomy with anime or real life studies, there's no way around it
if you can't draw the other hand or the legs then don't occlude them, change the pose and resize the canvas

>>3033742
>>3033819
does the face look any better now?

>>3033774
thanks, gonna work on the hip

>>3033758
your testicles so you can't reproduce bitch aaaaa

nah but for real, I can tell you're going for like a 'flat' thick-outline style, but making him look like an actual cardboard cutout isn't very appealing. Adding subtle things, like overlapping lines where arms bend, can help imply form and sort of 'sell' the image. Look at the way his hair parts; it looks like the area around his forehead is facing straight toward the viewer, but the guy's head is turned to the left.

Also the button on his shirt is making a tangent with the line next to it, making it not read as well as it could.

>>3033860
by quite a bit but the cranium's still misshapen

>>3033819
you need to calm down son

>>3033861
Okay thanks for your help man!

>>3033543
Cute sloppy gf.

>>3033277
blog?

>>3031380
>https://www.instagram.com/augcasarin_art/

I love your style anon.

>>3030051
Finished I guess

>>3033335
Thank you >>3033908
No blog yet

>>3033485
Thanks Anon.
That's really good to hear cause I actually designed it for redbubble. (haven't put it up yet though)

>>3031084
Your gender has nothing to do with it don't worry, being bad doesn't discriminate

>>3033899
I wanna some critique, but thanks i guess

>>3033927
Thanks anon, im trying

Sketching.

>>3032045
which state penitentiary are you incarcerated in?

>>3034134
Is your lineart done through refining/carving out your sketch? You've got a 3D-model-like look to a lot of your lineart that reminds me of another artist I've been trying to replicate but I can't seem to do it through the typical inking over your sketch process.

>>3031084
I just dont think the boobs on her would be that obvious looking, She looks young and while this is pin-upy i think its more cute than sexy, so you dont want those big funbags hanging off her rib cage likes she's had too many kids.
also the boobs you drew are out of perspective, that might really be your probloem here. You're not getting the volume. Try making a wire frame for your character, it will challenge your mind and you'll improve while making it look right.
I could not stand to watch this so I redlined it.
Heres a suggestion, instead of making lines for the boobs how about implying it with shadow and maybe a few subtle lines (kind of like how noses are done a lot, they usually have lines for the nostril but the bridge is done with a shadow that leads into those lines)
I mapped out where some of your shadows would go in the first pic
In the last pic would be more like if you wanted to keep doing it line art style. Try to use her clothing to imply her boobs instead of drawing her actual titties.

>>3034150
>3029724
Also the face looks better so you did a good job with that. keep working at the rest of it, you'll get it.

>>3034146
Which other artist?

You're asking about the lines of the clean lineart and not the lines of the sketch if I read well right?

>>3033277
Funny how you hide the bad anatomy

>>3034178
Mind giving me some cc instead ?

>>3033277
I like the colors and style, seems intentionally unproportional. And while I don't really agree with anon about your anatomy skills, I think it would look nicer if you drew her left hand on her thigh instead.

>>3034194
thanks

Yeah it is, i thought this was a thread about stylization so i didn't think anyone would mind exaggerated proportions lol.

It probably would look better if i did something with the arms, i was betting on just a bunch of comments about me hiding the hands desu

this was just a doodle to test the waters here though, first time posting

>>3034178
I tried a different style, is this better?
>>3034194
+added hand on hip

this looks better ty

>>3034224
can you add the legs?

>>3033602
What if I just tell myself that I'm Japanese?

>>3032342
These jacings are great. Do you jace on traditional media too?

>>3032342
You should do some overwatch fan art, like your favorite character. Probably Tracer right?

>>3034178
How do you know it's bad if he hid it?

>>3034224
I like the previous style more, this is good but also far more generic, kinda like when comparing Studio Trigger stuff to generic anime visual novel, but that's just my preference.. Don't let this place kill your drive anon, there are good artists here who will give you good advice, but also a lot of jaded young artists who don't do much drawing themselves and just spam memes like ''show hands and feet, tumblr aesthetics, needs Loomis''.

>>3034382
What is generic anime visual novel?

>>3034387
This imo.

>>3033596
it looks a lot like how Boulet draws (a french artist), so no

>>3034134
Working on the clean.

>>3034642
I want to hug that deadly bug.

>>3034642
Very good lineart.

>>3034630
Truthfully I think anime is not really that different from european illustration tradition.

>>3034779
I think it is, Japs draw realistic but vibrant environment for anime, while artists in EU (mostly France) tend to heavily stylize both the characters and the environment. Well, for the most part that is... It's all about keeping those anime waifus as cute but also as believable as possible

>>3034150
Thanks. Just saw this now...I went back and basically redrew her all. I'm much happier with my new version, and I've tried to take what you said and apply it to this pose too. My shadows aren't complete, just a map.

>>3034279
>>3034281
Whatever saves time, especially when you're in my very specific situation. Being able to focus for less than a few minutes at a time is debilitating.

Pic related was streamed all the way through with no assistance.

Maybe when you've been psychologically fucked with your entire life and have several degenerative brain disorders you would fuck off your high horse.

>>3034925
Uh oh we've got a snowflake over here...

Been trying to get back into drawing.

>>3033565
That could be good for unifying the piece, but i decided to hold back on the blue.

>>3034060
I like it; your lines reflect confidence.

>>3033522
I really like this, anon. The colours, lighting and atmosphere is very nice.

>>3034929
what happened to your blogs? I miss your drawings so much ;w;

>>3034925
or.

>>3034943
andddd

>>3034929
Hey how do I get the confidence to post my drawings in three and probably more different locations? It always makes me feel dirty.

>>3031997
It's extremely short and bent in a very awkward way. If you were trying to foreshorten you should of put the arm in a different position, Infront of the character. When I say it's disgusting, I mean it in a way if the character where in a different position they would have a deformed limb.

what's up guys

>>3035053
Good. Reminds ne of Ghibli.

>>3030614
Naisu!

>>3035053
reminds me of yoshi island from double dash

Standu

>>3035083
I still can't land that shortcut.

>>3035156
ooh I like the hatching

>>3035083
>>3035056
thanks guys!

here's a wip doodle, testing out a new chalk brush

>>3033944
Some crit or tips welcome, please?

>>3033715
Progress, it's a bit messy. Satan is supposed to have 3 pairs of tits but I could only physically fit 2, so I'm a bit disappointed.
I also think the pose would look better if I just rotated the whole thing a bit clock-wise so the leg is more vertical so it looks like it's standing on it
Any glaring anatomy mistakes to fix before I go on? Thoughts?
>>3034642
Lovely anon

>>3035240
Start thinking more about composition. Your painting doesn't really have a well delineated fore/mid/background. Having actual ground visible would help. It feels like you cropped the part of the painting at the bottom that was supposed to have some of the character's feet in it.

>>3034134
could you do a complete process tutorial thanks???

>>3034929
Thanks, you have some pretty neat lines yourself

cute expressions

>>3034134
And here is it cleaned. Colors next.

>>3035290
What part of the process? Not really sure if any of it would give anything interesting, there isn't much to say to begin with.

>>3035283
It was actually deliberate, since I wanted the point of view to be low thinking it would look good, but I see now what you mean, I`ll work on that. Thanks anon.

>>3035317
Work on your perspective before you do anything else. Drop the rendering for now.

You were going for a low point of view, so in your piece, everyone would be leaning at a 30 degree angle. The perspective is a mess.

>>3035307
I would like to learn more about your method for lineart. Do you draw directly onto a screen?

>>3035340
I use an Intuos Pro medium if that's the question. No screen tablet (for now).

>>3035191
Thanks, been trying to work on hatching a bit more.

>>3035307
Rendering n valu

>>3035426
Rendering is related to how much you can give volumes to things in drawing, there isn't so much to say about this.

I mostly learnt by studying works rather than reading tutorials, so I would advise doing the same thing with your favorite artists.

>>3035437
As for tool, I just use the soft round brush of Photoshop (5th one on the list) and the smudge tool for some parts.

>>3035445

>>3035447
>>3035445

>>3035447
>>3035445
literally no one wants 4k images, fucking scale that shit down. your art isn't good enough to deserve that hi-res quality

>>3035487
my b i always forget to do that

>>3034925
looks nice, it's a shame your style is that of sakimichan tho.

How do I do dynamic sketches.
Everything I draw feels stiff.
I do gesture drawings already.

>>3035475
Man this girl would be way too cool to hang out with me if she were real.

>>3035571
Do some crazy, over-the-top expressions.

Was laid off two weeks ago, currently sending applications like crazy, gonna use all this time off to work on og project. Done with "cover art" tell me how much it sucks.

>>3035582
That's some real nice inking and coloring, but the drawing itself leaves a lot to be desired. Though I do love the retro style.

Any chance for a scan?

>>3035589

dowsnt fit in a scanner. but i do have others here http://parada69.deviantart.com/gallery/

>>3035591
The quality of these varies pretty wildly. I think if you spent a bit of time on figure drawing, learning proportions and anatomical landmarks and that kind of thing, you could really improve your consistency.

>>3034925
Fuck off your high horse faggot. You think you are the only person battling mental illness here? What a joke. You are literally a one trick pony. Your fucking facebook posts and twitter are such a pathetic mess, like you wanting to be called a girl? wtf god you are gross.

Like don't kill yourself but just go away. Seriously fuck off. You're gross.

>>3035582
Neck looks short, perhaps fix that and the width of her jaw looks odd due to the shading of the shadow. Other than that rather cute really!

>>3035246
If you move the second set of tits upward a bit such that the 'normal' pair more or less rests on top of them, you should be able to squeeze a third pair in. At least that's what my /d/ick tells me. In terms of animal nipples at least, aren't they usually pretty close together?

>>3033522
A bit too much same-texture! Try using less textured brushes on some parts of the rocks, particularly the areas that catch light. Real nice colors and comp, tho. I dig it.

>>3035475
Cute! Nice angle.

>>3035723
What's your art?

Tell me so I can send my cult to kill you.

(no, I wouldn't do that but you really should remember who you are talking to. Hate me all you want, but do it in silence.)

>>3035943
false-flag.

don't take any comments as being from a particular artist unless they have new work attached.

>>3035943
Why do you sound like you are an edgy 13 year old, is what I'm wondering

>>3036022
want to test it?

>>3036180
is posting this a new meme or is this seriously someone trying to get crit? I cant tell.

>>3035943
There are more roleplayers on DA, go there. Or use discord.. You won't have that much fun here...

>>3036518
Not intended as a meme.

Trying my hand at painting

Comish- how's it lookin?

new tsure (⌒ω⌒)ﾉ >>3037083

This is a contest entry for Sailorleyla if anyone knows her. Honestly I don't think I'll win, not because I'm not good enough but because I don't think she'll like it.

Regardless, this is the piece I've put the most work in so critique would be very helpful! Thanks in advance.

>>3034060
I really like the line of your pose. One of my larger weaknesses are boring poses but yours it really nice. Also I really like her body type.