/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>3029142
It's quite simple, really. You where just not born with that spark so there is no point in helping you otherwise.

>>3029144
Understandable, Have a Nice Day.

>>3029145
that image triggers me

>>3029142
Ink slower and don't give all lines the same thickness. Plus you need to fucking finish the drawing before inking so you're absolutely following the lines that you wanted.

>>3029142
Your sketch has line variation, while your finished line is just the same all over, making it look boring

>>3029145
kys pedo

>>3029150
This

>>3029142
Two things are killing your ink, and one is killing your soul.

The first is line consistency. Like someone else pointed out your ink is all the same width. Make different materials have different widths. So hair thinner lined than skin for example.

You could also have closer objects thicker than further, or thin out the line as it approaches the light source.

But before you get super fancy I'd play with just one or two at a time - the light source one can be tricky.

Two: No overlap. When rendering a rough construction sometimes its easy to screw up with overlaps what. Those hair strands for the bangs are very odd because they don't overlap each other, in real life, crap is overlapping other crap constantly, even on the face - like your nose there. Make sure your final renderings also follow this rule.

Line width variety is also important but it seems you do have that. For example a skin outline will probably use longer lines than hair outlines, etc. Having line length variety helps differentiate objects.

Third: You're drawing childporn and that's extremely bad for your soul. This isn't a joke. You will learn faster/better the more stable your mind/heart is and lusting after children is not going to help that.

>>3029145

Pray to Jesus for forgiveness and to help you take away your unnatural lust.

>>3029178
i add more smugness.
thats what the lord says.

The best way to learn how to ink is to do it traditionally. Fineliners, nibs, brushes, whatever. Just do it with real shit.

Digital inking is the fucking worst.

>>3029173
>You will learn faster/better the more stable your mind/heart is and lusting after children is not going to help that.

How about shad?

Anyone have tremors? They're not bad, but I have no idea how to do clean lines when my hands are always tired and slightly shaky.

>>3029727
Speed. It depends on your medium too. If you're working traditional you have to find work arounds - being less accurate but using speed, or petting your lines in a way that doesnt' look like they are petted, going ultra slow. Using stippling. Or ultra slow drawing one tiny bit at a time like you would for doing a ballpen drawing.

If you're using digital, you can just quick stroke undo quickstroke undo quickstroke undo, it's frustrating but you'll get the line you want eventually.

Or zoom far out and do large lines with a really small stroke.

These are all just ideas, you may have to come up with your own unique solution.

People without hands could draw with their wrists, and others with their mouth.

>>3029223
jaja that's a nice smug

>>3029145
Was not expecting that... quality... here of all places. Err, disgusting. Please remove that and take your ?BLOG? with you.

i tried (sfw work version)

>>3029962
nice work shad

>>3029962
Sfw version actually looks the best so far. You did good taking the advice about overlap and lineweights. If you're op. I'd say stick with sfw.

>>3029972
oh do fuck off with this shad shit the motherfucker is not even good

>>3029142

>>3029962
link your blog or fuck off

>>3030436
https://ryogansfwart.tumblr.com/

>>3030446
I really like your stuff, shame you only have a couple. Too much loli causing you to remake blogs?

>>3030450
first time having a blog

>>3029962
>Japanese Shadman

>>3029150
Yeah this pretty much Anon. Try adding some line weight variation homie. Like make it darker where lines curve in. Find where the light source is, make the lines lighter there. It'll take practice but I believe in you anon; you can do it.

Speaking about linework. I'm fairly competent when drawing traditionally but on digital I can't do absolutely anything.

Some advice? I use Photoshop and an Ugee 19".
What brush should I use? What inclination should my monitor have? Anything

>>3029145
looked it up in the archive, why delete it? its not against the rules

>>3030495
>Ugee
First time I've seen another Ugee user. At least post a sample of your lines so we can see whats wrong though.

>>3030495
You either use a brush with size jitter set to pen pressure or simply erase/draw over the parts you want thinner or thicker.

>>3030481
never heard of this "shadman" so i google it and im very sad.

>>3030497
i get a warning this morning, dont understand why.

>>3030509
well it looked good honestly, you got a pixiv or something i can follow? Might want to fix the eye positioning though

>>3030509
>dont understand why
Gee, maybe because people don't like pedos on their site?

>>3030509
Real CP is illegal so drawing CP might actually be against the rules here.

Which if it is against the rules here, I fully support that. Just like >>3030517 said I don't want to see it while I'm exploring the site.

>>3030567
Depends where you live. USA drawings are all good so long as they aren't realistic and/or depicting assault, sex crimes, etc.

In Canada you pretty much can't draw shit. Even a 16 year old animu in a swimsuit will land you in prison. But you have the go ahead to draw dogs fucking kids, the Canadian government loves beasty porn

>>3030500
>>3030507
Problem solved, I switch to Manga Studio and now my lines are way better.

I still don't understand why I'm so dogshit on PS, but I don't care that much

>>3029142
You could make outlines like the japs

http://prntscr.com/fn2o4y

>>3032445

>>3030925
fucking kys.

>>3032445
>Ballbusting.
B-blog? you know... to report you...

>>3032445
>>3032467
>>3032479
>/ic/ is full of pedos

>>3032501
I want summer to end

>>3029142
When you sketch just exaggerate your gesture more. During the cleaning process your lineart always becomes stiffer.

>>3032445
i like it, and i hope god forgive me for that.

>>3032445
You're going places, senpai.

>>3032501
>>>/r/eddit

>>3034073
lol, judging by this, not really.