/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Dropping this back in from the last one

That fake Kyle got me good with the rendering tutorial

>>3025451
Kyle already has a rendering tutorial.

>>3025441
I remember that picture from a year ago or more and how its creator asked their art teacher to critique it (and now it's even better). Noice.

>>3025501

Yep! He made sure I didn't get lazy with the couch. Probably gonna take it to him one more time to be absolutely sure

Any critiques from here are welcome too

>>3025477
Oh yeah, I thought it disappeared from his tumblr. Thanks for the reminder

>>3025441
>2 years old art.
Why?

What's Kyle's tumblr?

I knew Kyle was an Overwatchfag.

>>3025633
http://kairunoburogu.tumblr.com/

I knew Kyle before any of your guys did, we dated in High School and he's the one who first introduced me to 4chan.

>>3025643

Tell us about his obsession with chicken oppai lolis. Were you a big breasted loli?

>>3025651
Well he's black, and he always had a thing for breasts and big bootys. The stereotype with him is true.

Can someone help me? I need anatomy references for a spread eagle pose, something where the female is elevated and on a surface, spread eagle, about level with the male hips for penetration, while the male is standing up.

>>3025687
use construction and look at porn . you can find a pose like that.

It's full of anatomical and perspective mistakes, but I like how the colours turned out. Still, could've done better 2bh.

>>3025510
Your commitment to this one piece and the fact you had the balls to bring this up to your art teacher irl is really impressive.

>>3025733
Change that dialogue font, for god's sake. What are you, twelve years old and still using Anime Ace?

First panel: When you squeeze an ear, that's not how it looks like. Ear looks stiff as hell. Go back and fix that. And what's the deal with the inverted balloon tail, you trying to be cool?
Second panel: Lettering's redundant.We already know it's for her own good, you established that in the first panel. Sort of.
Third panel: That's the side one, right? Because that reads awkward as hell. Unless that's the second panel, in which you've already lost the reader.
Fourth panel: Still having a hard time reading this. You've already established the whole slavery thing already, she's being taken advantage of, ect, ect. And for god's sake, get rid of that inverted balloon tail. It only makes you look like an idiot trying that out. It's like the dialogue balloon is talking to itself.
Work on your sound effects. Cum hitting the floor doesn't go "Drip, drip". Your readers don't need EVERY single thing pointed out by sound effect, especially awful ones like this. Color wise, it's sub-average at best.

Yeah, it's one storyboard panel, but come on.

>>3025764
And no one says "ARGH!" when their ear is being pulled like that, unless they're a pirate.

Learn to letter correctly. And don't use FAKKU books as reference. Those fucking atrocities are full of Wild Words bullshit and stupid sound effects. You think with all the money they're screwing fans out of, they'd invest in descent fonts to use and leave the damn japanoid moonspeak sound effects alone, if only for aesthetic reasons. I know what a door closing sounds like; I don't need it told back to me right on top of the original jap sound effect writing like a retard.

i see how wonky the arm is but i cant think of a good fix, are the colors good?

>>3025774
Decent, but not great. Go back and work on that shit.

>>3025764
AA is the best free comic font I know of. What wrong with inverted balloon tails, isn't that the standard for characters talking outside the panel? I admit third panel is a bit awkward, but that ain't cum, it's much thinner. I'm not a very good story writer I know that, my literacy is in the gutter, and like I said before, I could've done better.

>>3025775
Go back and reference that pose altogether. What is that supposed to be, a cat-person thing? Where's the pussy opening at? Is that its tail, or its arm trying to make a muscle?

And the reason why the left arm looks weird if because you FORGOT to PUT IN THE CAST SHADOW, you fool.

Go back and reference this again. And try harder next time.

>>3025779
I'll stop you there before you start making a fool out of yourself. Get your shit together, kid.

http://www.blambot.com/articles_grammar.shtml

You're welcome. An while you're at it, go check out the FREE dialogue fonts they have.

You're welcome. Again.

>>3025787
Stop pushing down so hard on your pencil, kid. You'll avoid digging into your paper and leaving ghost marks like that.

>>3025733

I agree on the ear thing- needs to be squished. The boobs in the third panel look weirdly spaced out, but that might just be me. Her ab line is off center, and kinda heads to her left shoulder instead. Also, the connection from shoulder to torso on the third one looks a little high up. I actually really like the fourth panel, nice pussy.

>>3025790
Alright, I'll use these in my future comics.

>>3025441
this is traditional if I remember correctly, right?

>>3025733
Biggest turn off is the stiffness of the poses and lineart. After that come the really annoying sound effects.
It's like you don't think your own drawings will be able to convey them, or you underestimate the intelligence of your readers.
Also, if you find baloon tails reaching out of the panels, just draw baloons without tails instead of these inverted ones.

>>3025909
Yep, all acrylic

>>3026120
again
>>3025621
What's the point in posting 2 years old art?

>>3025424
whats the source of the thread pic?

>>3026313
Because I just finished it and would like critique for final touches/overhauls? 2 years ago is when I started it

>avoid drawing porn for over 2 years
>finally doing something NSFW for the first time
>get walked in on

>>3026360
internet literally didnt care about anything i did until i putted a dick on it

>>3026360
nobody cares, autismo.

GTFO.

>>3026369

no

Decided to finish this up.
I tried making the breast rounder and moving where the nipples were. I'm pretty sure I fucked up the crotch/thigh area it doesn't look right...

here's the last thing i drew

>>3027416
somebody wants to be the new noill, kek

Is Kyle male or female?

>>3027457
KYS, dickbrain.

>>3027459
I'm asking a question. It can be a male or female name.

>>3027416
you have a non porn blog?

>>3027416

The thigh gap there is a little too big. The thighs attach pretty close to the vagina, and would squish against the dudes stomach a bit, kinda like the red lines here.

>>3027463
It literally does not matter, though
like, at all

>>3027406
>>3027516
this, also lower the vagina a bit

do you guys try to change your artstyle so people won't recognize what you draw?

>>3025451
what rendering tutorial? It is good?

>>3027463
the only people that would care about this are dickbrains. I'm repeating. KILL YOURSELF, dickbrain.

>>3027891
I do and still get recognized.

>>3027416
get outta here Mink

>>3026319
Kron Prinz

>>3027453
imitation isnt a bad thing tho

need help on arms and torso/legs

>>3028366
I don't think there's much that can be done to help you with that picture. That pose is simply too advanced for your level, as you clearly have no experience with perspective and foreshortening.

>>3028366
Study your reference picture more. Trace it if you have to so that your brain gets a better idea of what your hand and your eyes are trying to capture on screen. Take your reference pic, make it its own layer, drop the opacity down to about 45 percent or so, then trace over it with your stylus.

You also need work on your faces. Learn proper proportions before you start drawing the animus. I'm not saying to start drawing comic western, but it does help you gain a better understanding of what you're doing.

Don't be afraid to trace. Everyone does it when they first start off.

>>3028443
Post your work. Let's see if you can do better, kid.

>>3027516
When you drew the guy underneath, that threw your entire perspective off on the chick. It doesn't even look like a body, it looks like a sex toy stump. Spend a little more time adding equal amounts of time on everything in your picture, rather than focusing on the chick beast and the floating cocks. Had you spent as much time on the guy, your drawing could have turned out a bit better.

>>3027416
Is that a wall she's sleeping on? Why does the wall have that texture to it?

Focus on your backgrounds more instead of just being so lazy with them. Had you taken the time to draw a good bed underneath the characters, you could have pulled this off.

>>3025799
You'll thank me later on down the road when your comics read so much better. Good luck.

>>3025424
Source on OP's image?

>>3028621
It's Artgerm. Go check out his dA.

>>3028622
>>3028023
What's with the "random XD" joke answers? I really just want to know who's the artist

>>3028626
It's some chick named Kyle, homie. Scroll up the thread and check out her tumblr. Don't get your panties in a bunch.

>>3028631
Wait, so it's confirmed Kyle is a female? Holy shit, I would kiss her if I ever saw her and tell her how much I love her art.

>>3028631
Thanks found it in the last thread. But I can't find that particular image in OP. Does he have anywhere else where he post this?

>>3028603

Okay, thanks anon. I'll do that. This wasn't done from reference so that probably doesn't help!

And I'll look up foreshortening.

Do you think this coiling technique is any good?

forgot my link

https://youtu.be/eJWLaDSNBAI

>>3028670
Probably. The gesture looks good, it reminds me of the style used in Disney's Hercules.

what do you think?

What do you think?

>>3028682

That one leg looks really good, but that arm is floating off the body. I can see the line of action from the hips to the head pretty clearly but anything other than that is lost in a cloud of lines. The foot of the leg that is closest to the viewer should also be pointed more toward the imaginary camera.

>>3028733
Even though you've omitted her neck, her chin probably shouldn't be resting on the bottom of her collarbone since the breasts are too close to the neck. I'd enhance the space between her head and her body to allow for more expression. Dick looks a little short-- is it going in her ass?

Feet and hands looks pretty good but there's some issue with her facial features and how they're centered.

>>3028603
not the same anon but stop with your retarded patronizing tone.
want other people to show you their art? be the first to do so, KID.

>>3028633
I wish the captcha was a test that determines if the poster is autistic or a dickbrain.

>>3027516
Oh I see, yeah that makes way more sense
>>3027867
Gotcha
>>3028608
Yeah I didn't really have a good idea on how to add the guy in properly

Thanks for the feedback guys!

>>3028795
How can you do such a good job on the body but such a terrible job on the head

>>3028858
>trace body
>draw head
its so fucking easy anon

>>3028795
it's hard to tell if she's tilting her head down or if shes facing forward while looking down. if its the former, i think you should show more of the top of her head. if it's the latter, you should show the digastric plane. either way, i think you're showing too much of the side of her head, making it seem like she's looking off to the side instead of at the guy.

could use some crit, especially of the posing and proportions of the characters. does the bottom girl look really short? maybe her big butt is throwing me off, but half the time she looks average-sized, the other half she looks 4' tall.

>>3029018
arm massaging the lower back looks too long and broken.butt of person getting massaged looks too round and fat to be a guy's

>>3029036
hmm, yeah, maybe that arm isn't connecting to the body quite right. i'll re-draw it. bottom character is supposed to be a girl, but maybe i need to make room for her chest.

thanks for the crit!

Dear porn drawers,

how do you manage to deal with pornographic material on your screen most of the day...

...and still stay not only productive, but also creative?

Looking at hentai or porn is fun at designated fap time, but dealing with it longer in form of references etc. seems to fuck with the brain. I don't think human brain is supposed to get stimulated for so long, and so consistently.

Do you run into problems like onsets of brain-fog, decreased motivation, restlessness, distracting craving for more stimulation in forms of easy entertainment etc?

>>3029499
If you look at that stuff for extended periods its not longer stimulating. You stop seeing porn and start seeing the human body in very interesting poses.

>>3029499
No. I don't get turned on drawing shit at all. After I've drawn something I won't use it as fap material either.

>>3028795
>>3029017
what's wrong with her face?

>>3029499

In terms of refereces, it's like getting used to a good smell. It doesn't detract from other good smells, and if you're away from it long enough you notice it again.

Though when it comes to the work I make, I never really have an attraction to it past initial conception- eventually it just becomes trying to perfect a piece of art.

Anyone have any advice for this one? Does this pose look awkward?

>>3029680
footshit tends to look awkward, because it fucking is
it can't be helped

>>3029680

Left foot seems a little big at its front, also 4 toes. Top of but seems to cave in too far, if that makes sense. Nose is kinda suess-ish.

>>3029499
I masturbate after the sketch phase then I finish drawing.

>>3029928
this is why dickbrains never make it.
they can't finish their pics because they think with their dicks.

>>3030232
nah it's just all about the edging

don't cum before the entire piece is 100% finished

Any advice on this? Any critique or where should i take it.

>>3030246
she could be wearing a bh only

>>3029515
the biggest issue as i see it is a lack of underlying structure. what i'd practice if i were you (assuming you're op) is constructing the figure by drawing boxes, spheres, and cylinders in perspective as in >>3029017
and once you're comfortable doing that, try taking it further as in the left side of pic related. placing facial features becomes a lot easier once you know how the structure underneath looks.

i can't really give you much helpful advice on the facial features as i struggle with that stuff myself. drawing a face from a low angle is really hard, and making it an attractive face is harder still.

>>3030235
or maybe stop thinking with your dick.
I hope that comes soon for you, kid.

>>3030267
you have no idea how strong a motivator the drive reproduce is

Pic related: I like the comp.

Any recommended examples artists/ comics that have strong appealing composition in pornography? Do you think it's exactly the same as the regular fundamentals of comp, or is there more to consider?

>>3030283
>words of a dickbrain
I prefer to get motivated by my earnings, artwork improvement and support of fans.
you on the other hand can keep talking to your best friend, penis.

>>3030294
same thing

>>3030300
you can continue to waste time being angry on the internet over men having a sex drive, it's your choice

>yfw Kyle is a girl

Did these overwatch ludes this morning.

>>3030302
mocking dickbrains doesn't exactly make me angry imo.
also, being a dickbrain isn't the same as having a sex drive. having a sex drive is perfectly normal. being a dickbrain is just bad.

>>3030402
mediocre skills, bad anatomy. that's pretty much it. keep drawing and some day you'll probably be able to make appealing stuff.

>>3030406
Don't worry anon. Yull b as good as me one day. v_v

>>3030406
Vague and unhelpful. The kind of faggot who gets his micro-dick hard playing the tough act. Do us and your parents a solid; kill yourself.

>>3030432
don't be a cunt anon. Your drawing lacks proper perspective. It doesn't look like you constructed it. It's almost like you just made contour lines and hoped for the best. Your figures look contorted and deformed. You anatomy doesn't flow, or i should say is barely there. Most of your anatomy is just symbol drawing "hmm, there's supposed to be a line here right?"

The drapery makes no sense. The lighting makes no sense. The composition is meh. Honestly, you don't do nearly enough fundamental practice. What the previous anon was trying to say is that every aspect of your drawing needs work.

Practice everything more.

>>3030471
Not me
>>3030471
You could have said that the first time couldn't you? instead of being a faggot.Also you have no idea what you're talking about. Think, more importantly use your eyes before you crit.

>>3030404
Post your work, kid. You sound like an Artgerm in the making with all that tough, internet talk. Put your money where your mouth is and prove us wrong.
>Pro tip: you won't.

>>3028835
Goplay white knight somewhere else. And you're SO the same anon cunt or faggot who keeps posting this art class brown nose bullshit with absolutely no idea on how to give a good critique, even if your grade depended on it.

Like this >>3028443
And this >>3030406

>>3030402
Decent thumbnails, though. Maybe when the work's finished, we can get a better sense of what you're struggling with. It's hard to crit when it's still in the planning phase, but maybe better panel placement of your characters could help right now? It would certainly establish the mood for each panel a lot better if you practice that. Think of the close up shots, body shots, maybe add better establishing angles, but that's just me. I'm sure you'll get the idea if you study works from Steve McNiven (Old Man Logan, Civil War) and Tony S. Daniel (Batman RIP).

>>3030524
DC's coming out with pencil work only trade paperbacks called "Unwrapped", that show the established pencil work down before it's inked and colored. It really gives a better idea of how those panel shots were created. I highly recommend them.

If you're looking for something in the animu variety, check out the re-release of Blade of the Immortal trade paperback by Hiroaki Samura and the AKIRA trade paperbacks by Katsuhiro Otomo.

Great stuff to study from and incorporate into the porn stuff you're all trying to do—the technical part anyways.

>>3030246
Finish the drawing first, check the shoulder placement and drop them down a bit, consider what kind of top she's going to wear and adjust the breast's gravity an pull on the top accordingly, and consider what the overall composition (pose) of the picture is going to be. Is she going to put up her arms in a, "I don't know..." pose, or is she going to put her arms behind her back to show off her rack?

There are several ways to go about the pose, but be sure to reference it before you put it down to draw it. Trust me, it helps.

>>3029680
Yes, it's awkward. That's PAINFUL if we consider the male's body anywhere on that pose, but only because you didn't take into account WHERE the male's body would be. If it were a stand alone cock, then by all means, go at it. But because you didn't establish the male's position first, that's why the drawing looks awkward. Go back and re-draw this, but draw the dude in first. Then put in the chick.

And draw more veins on the cock. Kidding. You cock however you want to cock. :)

I came here a bit ago and posted a picture of futa frankie when I was just starting to get a hang of things. I don't have the first pick anymore (deleted it in file cleaning) but I thought I should stop by and say a thank you to the anon that called me shit and helped me get on track. Yes, I know this isn't perfect, it may not be very good at all, but it's better than what it was before. So, thank you anon, if your in this thread. your harsh but true words are what I needed

also if anyone wants to, feel free to tear me a new one for this piece. I fucked the tits up pretty bad senpai

>>3030575
>no stitches around the base of the penis
missed opportunity imo

>>3030598
I did think about it but I was too afraid of fucking the entire thing up because it was actually a gift for my gf

Wip

>>3030724
>those hands

Im sure the commissioner doesnt care

>>3030471
I'll call out fuckery where I see it. If someone can't articulate a proper criticism, or are too lazy, then don't say anything. Do you think anyone is going to extrapolation value out of "it's shit"; just magically figuring out all the issues at once? If they could, they wouldn't be here asking. Be specific, or don't talk.

>>3030724
Anatomy is really nice but it looks pretty stiff.

>>3030724
Head is too small

>>3030724
The hands are awful and lazy. The head is way too smal and the pose is boring. Why do you post here? Do you just like stroking your ego?

>>3030763
To get a crit, obviously.

Any suggestion on how I can make her pose more dynamic and utilize negative space better?

>>3030780
Go fuck yourself Kyle. You're not as good as you think and everyone here that likes you is new and doesn't know anatomy.

>>3030763
>The hands are awful and lazy. The head is way too smal and the pose is boring.
>Why do you post here? Do you just like stroking your ego?
Pick one and stick to that, you fucking jelly autismo.

>>3030724
gorgeous feet.

>>3030800
KYS already. Either give him some critique, since it seems you can see flaws in the pic, or shut the fuck up and stop wasting bandwith. Fucking autistic shitposters.

>>3030800
Why are you so angry, anon?

>>3030724
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>>3030808
(You)

>>3030724
Head is small, looks about deficient in the brain as you must be.

>>3030819
Grats, autismo.

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>>3030846
>autism intensifies

>>3030724
head too small
perspective is fucked
hiding hands
wtf knees?
didn't even bother abs

looks shit, you should stop

>>3030864
stop tryharding, scrub.

Boy I really hit the salt mine today. I'll be sure to make the head a little more smol

>>3030724
I can't see anything wrong aside from the fact that girls do not have penises.

>>3030892
For some reason you and BBC chan attracts tones of mad and shitposting.
Or sexualy frustrated jellyposting?

Didn't get that much critique last thread, got a few variants.

>>3030903
Its because those two are the best in these threads.
People are bitter and think they already "made it" and think them posting in these threads is basically just shilling.

>>3030931
>those two are the best in these threads
LMAO

>>3030938
He's not wrong. If anything they are the only people that can post a finished illustration.

>>3030944
fans of fantartists shilling for free never ceases to be pathetic

>>3030283
Dont worry the dude calling you a "dickbrain" is just a mentally ill tranny or a girl. Erotic work is supposed to be stimulating. If its not youre just bad. Might as well be peach banging bowser done sonic-fied

>>3030864
The abs are good subtle and with form, following the curve of the tum. Why r you being a faggot?

>>3030946
I'm not a fan of either of them. I'm just not a delusional jelly faggot.

>>3030962
that's nice sweetie

>>3030963
Keep being jelly, autismo.

>>3030724
>>3030892
We should put these two together and see who's the better out of the two. They're both the same in similar style. Let's see if we ca tell them apart.

>>3030999
ad homs will never be arguments

>>3031000
gr8b8m8
are you even trying, tardo?

>>3030907
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>>3030793
These are all really good '-';;

Here's my contribution, its sorta porn? not really. Enjoy my attempt.

>>3031017
Which one are you? BBC-Chan or Kyle?

>>3031017
>>3031022
Let me bait you some more, dipshit. What real progress have you really done in your work over the last four years? Or have you been reduced to drawing the same shit OVER and OVER again that you're nothing more than justa run-down, Sakimichan wannabe hoping to Artgerm his way to the to of a mountain that doesn't exist?

How sad is it that you're reduced to relying on commissions to keep your bills afloat, and barely break even now that your Patreon shit is hacked and leaked all over the internet with a simple click of a search engine?

You're not that impressive. You post on here like you're some hot shit, but you're not. Deep down, you're already broken and you're glad that at least someone is paying attention to you here.

Right? Great bait now, Shindog? Or should I put it more like you did, which spells out greight meight, you fucking down syndrome cuck. Did they let you out of the portables early so you can run around with the normal kids on /ic/? :)

>>3031032
Wait, don't answer...I know. I'm not being sensitive to your feelings. We should praise you for showing us that we're not WORTHY of becoming great artists like you. We should be afraid that you'll never, ever hand us down the same copying, reference using, tracing, over-layered, over-saturated, cryptic knowledge that you worked SO hard to obtain.

What are you, in your late thirties, knocking on forty now? Are you still in the despair that you haven't reached TRUE Artgerm perfection yet? Are you afraid that now, close into your forties, you'll be remembered as nothing more than a particulate who never achieved true success in your work? Are you here to merely mock those who have what you have forgotten, what it was like to draw a picture for the sake of enjoying it, rather than relying on it to pay the alimony you so desperately need? How far in debt are you that you can't surface to the top of the ocean anymore?

How completely demolished are you? Why do you still have a tumblr account, what, can't you afford your own now?

What sentiment of the word "professional" can you even relate to? Tell me. I'm all ears.

>>3031037
...or were you just showing off your WIP, which really...the cock could be thicker. And veinier.

Mmmm. Thick and veiny cock. Yummy. <3

>>3031038
....aaaannd insert gay related comeback...NOW. :)

>>3031040
*In Eric Cartman's voice* "Stop being a jew, Kyle."

>>3031044
See, they let me out early to make fun of you retards from the portables......wait a god damn minute here.

Am I a retard, too? Christ on a candlestick covered in chocolate... it can't be true. Sweet creamy mother of god, say it ain't so, Kyle! Or Big Black Cock-Chan desu desu, say it ain't so!

I'm beggin' ya!

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>>3031050

Don't go slitting your wrists, Kyle. I was just fucking with you. lol


Seriously dude, don't kill youself.
I'm serious.
Don't.
I'm serious. :D

>>3030724
stop drawing haram things

>>3031099
Light years better than Kyle's work. I'd finger fuck that pussy raw until it screamed, "Yamashita, dora ke imiichio, ane, metomori arigu Kayruu-chan? Deme, yonashimetsu arame ka?"

Loosely translated to, "Good job Western man, my pose is much more congruent with standards of today. Kayruu would be proud, desu desu."

>>3031099
That's like a thigh pussy congealing into a regular pussy.

A Thissy. Le kek.

Shad says "just make your own website and live off ad revenue, don't do commissions, don't paywall anything, sell t-shirts."
Not entirely following his own advice, though he isn't doing commissions at less than 400 bucks, and just releasing WIP sketches and higher quality files isn't a big paywall.
Is he running the ideal model for a porn artist?

>>3031142
Get the fuck out of this thread, Shad. No one asked you.

>>3031142
>is he running the ideal model for a porn artist
No. The ideal model for a porn artist is to just be consistant and to upload often.
Artists like Shiin, Shad or transmorpher dds are PUTRID but they constantly update and thats enough for them to make a living even if they have awful subject matter.
Furry / fetish artists make a lot of money because people into furry / fetish shit don't really want just flavor of the month anime girl just having sex. They want VERY specific things and are willing to pay for exactly that.
>>3030963
There is no word more passive aggressive as "sweetie"

I just got design doll, seems like it could be a very useful tool for getting poses for NSFW art.

>>3031185
Nice thumbnails, but nothing more to look at. What did you need a crit on?

And you might be colorblind so, I won't dog on the background color. Unless you're not colorblind, then the spearmint-flavored background looks great with the grape flavored sketching. On point.

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>>3031062
Why are you so salty about Kyle, dude?
This is some "fucked mother" level shit, man.
Seriously, chill out, autismo.

Inb4 "you are kyle".

>>3031297
you are kyle aren't you

I'm thinking of trying to start up one of those "secret" nsfw blogs where I can start to do lewd things. Am I at a level where I can pull this off? does anyone have any experience with this? also any crits for today's work? thank you /porn/

>>3031341
with that nose and face you'd fit right into a nsfw tumblr

>>3031427
how can I fix the face and become less like tumblr cancer? lean closer towards a traditional anime style or simplify in another manner?

>>3031435
I would tone her smile down some.

>>3031435
nose is fine imo, but the smile looks a little forced

>>3031436
gave that a shot amongst other things. Thank you for the help!

>>3031448
If you dont want this to look like tumblr cancer then look at actual anime hair for one. This looks like some broccoli shit wtf goin on man. The elipses for the eyes are weird and and the whole eye shouldnt taper so weirdly. Why did you get this far along in developing your art and suddenly want to switch styles

>>3031461
Btw this image is shit i only picked it as a reaction image lols

>>3031462
Because this was just an experiment, nothing more. It only took me a night and I got to try out multiple things with it. I don't have a concrete style with this yet and am mostly stumbling around trying various things and taking tips every now and then. Once I find a way that is comfortable and fun for me and is satisfying for the viewer I will build on that. I will pick up hair studies in my daily routine, and as for eyes, I feel like that is an ongoing battle. Thank you for your response anon!

need some help w this

>>3030907
line art is pretty good what kind of brush?

>>3031471
>that attitude

you're gonna make it anon keep it up!

>>3031473
Where sre thd hooves?

If I ever met Kyle in person I'd offer to makeout with him. His art is so good.

>>3031708
That's gay anon

>>3031738
I'm a girl.

>>3031804
Hey faggot, what about half a kiss for me since i have half his skill?

>>3031807
Show your work.

>>3031817
if i do youll say no... Look, im not asking for much. Either you say yes or I curse you.

>>3031807
>nobody brings you up
>you butt in mid-convo

....sigh

>>3031807
>>3031835
>Nose "I'm not a shitposter/troll" Bro

NEVER
GONNA
MAKE
IT

also
>>3031807
>since i have half his skill?
my sides just exploded. you wish those unfinished doodles of yours were worth a tenth of what kyle draws. fucking kek.

kyles drawings are worth nothing
still using a fucking tumblr lmao

Think I'm content with these now, other variants are here http://imgur.com/a/9Byxv

>>3031021
Thankya. Off to a solid start, though the breasts look a little off to me, Hrm..
>>3031482
Honestly just the default rough pencil in CSP for the lines.

>>3031908
>jellyjellyjelly

>>3032121
you're projecting, quite literally in fact

>>3031908
he does commissions, so they are worth something.
hope you aren't too jelly.

>>3032131
still projecting I see

>>3032132
if you aren't jelly (because supposedly you have greater skills), then what's the point in bashing kyle? shouldn't you be making big bucks with your art right now instead of shitposting here?

>>3032188
still projecting

>>3030724
looks great, not even trying to hugbox. hangs could use a lil more work, but their gesture is good enough, and the rest is a ok. keep up with the juicy cocks :)

>>3030724
I lliek

Basic color test, I usually never color/render my shit so this is gunna be painful.

>>3032090
yeah I agree, right arm also feels stiff to me.
There's a bunch of smaller things that bug me now about it looking at it after 18hours but w.e I wanna just do flats and basic shading and start something new.

>>3030485
>person asking for advice says i dont know what im talking about.
kek

Crit Pl0x

>>3032291
it's a midget with long hands and left leg

>>3032291
at this angle i should be able to see the bottom of her right foot, it would also be increased in size towards the viewer

>>3032305
well i guess i'll just give up on art and go work at a gas station.

>>3032348
>doing art for anything but pure enjoyment

>>3032441

>>3032291
please think in 3d

>>3032443
is that real holy fuck

>>3032189
GTFO

inb4 "projecting ooga booga"

>>3031099
Not a fan of the dick (personal preference), but it's undeniable that you know your anatomy.

>>3032542
woops, replied to the wrong post

>>3025784
i drew another one, referenced this one

>mfw I want to spoon Kyle and kiss his neck while he's drawing

>>3032291
lower body is messed up. left knee location wrong, fat and muscle lays wrong, hands magically not there, lower body should basically be stretched more

how do you start a nsfw tumblr? i see people putting shit like "all characters are 18+ even when stated otherwise", and some tumblrs don't, some get removed randomly and some dont. whats the basic do's and don'ts of starting a basic nsfw tumblr to post your shit on?

>>3032744
Tumblr is garbage and you will get nuked randomly, that's it.

>>3032760
any good alternatives?

>>3032798
Webhosting is pretty cheap when you have no traffic and should costs should scale with adbucks when you get traffic.
Using free shit is alright to build a following but don't rely on it, especially tumblr, make sure fans know where to find your work.

I know it's furry and gay but, critique? First time ever really trying to paint. This is just a block in of the anatomy, values and color and I want some input before continuing.

in a way you /ic/ guys are fucking retards coz if you realize something is profitable you want everyone to do the said profitable thing so that none of you get money anymore and 3D becomes the new standard

Just LMAO at how youre fucking yourself in the ass while trying to make it. Movie creators dont submit all their pro techniques online but you do and thats why nobody makes soon money with art anymore

Fucking retards

>>3032285
That face is gross.

>>3032994
you give too much credit to the ability of amateurs to absorb said knowledge, or even to discern it from the bogus advice

>>3032994
Also I'm not sure I'd subscribe to the idea that a higher amount of capable artists directly translates to fewer available jobs for capable artists. Sure they'll compete with each other at first, but the thing is, once they get hired in companies, they'll slowly rise up in the ranks and eventually become art directors and other roles in charge of hiring more artists.

Art directors with a solid understanding and appreciation of 2D art. That means more companies likely to hire capable 2D artists over another 3D monkey "because he can do the same thing but faster".

Why do you think manga and anime artists in Japan keep finding work in those industries? Because there's an established culture of companies that employ such artists and a public consciousness inundated with the works of those artists. It feeds itself and snowballs from there, like all trends in art do.

>>3032653
no one cares.

>>3032760
you get nuked only if you are an autismo idiot that argues with people and draws edgelord shit (pedo, shota etc.)
there's a ton of porn artists which blogs run for years, have like 50-100k followers and are doing perfectly fine.

this said, tumblr is pretty shit, yeah.

>>3032801
worst possible advice ever.
social media is the best way to go when building a fanbase.
you basically get advertisement from your fans, and from their fans.
it's basicaly an exposure pyramid scheme.
people that don't use this are dumb fucks.

>>3032994
>coz
dropped

>>3033129
>dropped
yeah on your head as a baby

Kyle is for ______ing.

I like his art but all of this Kyle dick-sucking is getting really tiresome.

>>3033427
>tfw the face of /ic/ is nosebro, akaki and kyle

>>3031448
i like the ass i hate the face and the hair
you do arms ok

Posted this on the towergirls thread earlier and cleaned it up a little. I have a really hard time with rendering and plotting light; feel free to paint over it, I'd appreciate any help or advice.

>>3033427
post something better and we'll suck your dik fampai

>>3033771
he only wants for you fags to stop trolling with this kyle bullshit. get fucking lives, autismos.

Is it me or Kyle drawings miss something? I think it's good, but I get the impression of that is somewhat "dry" - and I'm not talking about fluids. I kinda like it, but I always get that impression.

anyone digital savvy want to take a crack at coloring this?

before anyone attacks me for being a lazy faggot, just putting it out there.
I've come to accept that I am far better at traditional and even when i do use a tablet, i have no sense of natural skin tones and such.
my line weight also lacks variety which makes it look pop art-y.

wip

>>3033889
Yeah it's called trying to be an artgem clone.

>>3033901
You colour like a lazy faggot.
Is that why you can't just use your pencil crayons or paint to colour it?
You describe yourself accurately.

>>3033164
LMAO!!

So I'm drawing girls from doujins I like with a size 2 millipen to help learn line control at the same time.
Is this a good idea or am I retarded.

"100-year-old-demon" coming through. some rough sketches, sorry for those seriously unresolved areas, its a wip

>>3033694
akaki?

>>3033717
thank you. I am finding the hardest part to stylize is the face and hair. It's just part of the challenge of learning how to make qt girls

>>3030575
is there someplace i can check your stuff?
this is pretty good man

tell me what you think

>>3032825
Shadowings top notch but pardon the pun. he looks to stiff. Scrunch the pillow more. bend the neck. Besides that it's pretty good. Add some specualar light

>>3034396
please, stop commenting art. your taste and artistic knowledge is pretty much shit.

>>3034376
It's gross.

Give me validation but also disgust

>>3034376
Hey guys, it's that time again for the score cards.
>>3034376
0/10
>>3034212
1.3/10
>>3034187
2/10
>>3033901
2/10
>>3033765
ogre/10
>>3032825
1.5/10
>>3032594
2.2/10
>>3032291
1.1/10
>>3032285
1.4/10
>>3031473
>>3031473
2.5 could use work in several areas, leg mostly
>>3031099
3/10
>>3030892
nice as always...
>>3030793
4/10
>>3030575
3/10
>>3030402
art reminds me of orrs, you might be him eh overwatch...2/10
>>3027406
5.2/10
>>3027416
7.5/10 sleepy?

>>3034955
gr8b8m8

>>3034955
>Ogre/10

Well, I tried

>>3035175
yeah, too bad it's disgusting footshit and that's all you morons ever put effort into is the foot and dick!

>>3034955
post your work

>>3034955
>tfw you're not worst or best but comfy in the middle

thanks my dude

>>3035195
you already lost

>>3035175
WHY DOES NO ONE THAT DRAWS BLACK OR BROWN PEOPLE REMEMBER THAT THEY HAVE WHITE PALMS AND SOLES

SERIOUSLY IT'S DRIVING ME CRAZY

>>3035201
he's a troll. he has no idea what he's doing. he is only trying to trigger people.

I hate his art but all of this Kyle hating is getting really tiresome.

>>3035201
yw

>>3035245
Seriously people study a little animal anatomy before you attempt.

>>3035258
>14 year old level of humor
this is a porn thread. you shouldn't be here.

>>3035253
>hating people's art
how much of an idiot do you have to be to think like this? redneck level?

>>3035245
Animu brown people are special

>>3035302
No it's just a lazy gook studio.
Your supposed foot art looks like trash dude.

>>3035262
this is a 4chan. you shouldn't be here.

>>3030404
>>3030300
This is the exact kind of retard that was abused as a child and now identifies as "asexual" on his tranny tumblr blog and tries to bother everyone else into being like his sorry self.

Don't even bother with tumblrites.

Not so much in a pornographic fashion but more of an erotic style. Trying to find a way to be explicit as well to show like more of a subtle connection between the characters. But really I just like to draw women. What do you think of the pose and the anatomy.

>>3035480
>bald chicks

>>3035262
le redit triggered

>>3035480
you got a tumblr or something where you post stuff? that's dope

>>3035480
good job mate - but that is actual pornography its not erotic. Porn = People fucking.

>>3034050
Tumblr?

>>3035497
Haven't figured out yet how to do hair properly and can't decide on the hairstyle for this character. Atleast she's not a chick with a dudes head. And also
>bald ampute chicks with crippled feet

>>3035518
For this stuff not yet. Maybe in the future, when I have figured out how to finish drawings. And thanks

>>3035530
Thanks mate. You're right. What I wanted to say is I'm trying to do stuff that's not so much on the extreme side of the porn spectrum.

>>3035175
Brown loli is god's work

>>3035443
I have a girlfriend and was never abused. pretty much winning at life and art. all this probably happened because I use my head instead of my dick to accomplish things.
try harder, dickbrain.

can i get a crit on this please?

>>3035175
good shit

It's so hard to come up with bikini armor for male characters… Spent all night on this and could only come up with a wannabe-hanzo outfit.

>>3035951
and a second one as well

help

>>3035262
why would you give a You to that spineless autist? lol

>>3035951
>>3036066
It's a bit early to tell because they're sketches but your first drawing it looks like the neck isn't facing the same way the body is. I'd suggest you try to refine your composition and posing as well because they look more like they'd be part of a comic and not standalone pieces if that makes sense (unless that's what you're trying to make.)

Overall they look fine, just keep working on them, looking forward to the final product!

>>3034396
thanks!

Anyone about willing to offer any critique? I'm conflicted about the receiving girl's face but still.

>>3036549
Woah, receiving girl's torso is way too long, you got it right with the other girl, think more in 3D shapes when sketching and use reference too.

Her face is kinda awkward too, don't know what she's trying to convey.

I do like the way you drew the other girl's body, the robotic parts look nice too.

>>3036549
lower part of her torso (abdomen) is too long
also her neck is a bit too long. the other girl looks great tho, keep it up

>>3025424
Hey guys. Have I improved?
1/2 Shading

>>3036561
2/2 Animu

>>3036562
3/2 (was never good at math) Colors

Did this last night.
I know her right hand fucked.
Head looks off, too.

But my biggest concern right now is the eyes. Can't seem to make aesthetically pleasing eyes.

All criticisms welcome. Working to improve.

How's the palette?

>>3036561
>>3036562
>>3036564
Why the HELL would someone making over a thousand buckaroonies on Patreon visit /ic/??

>>3036719
I know someone that makes 7k that used to go to /b/.

>>3036682
Friend that face is nightmare-inducing. She looks like a blow up sex doll.

>>3036727
Who?

>>3036732
Not particularly interested in putting a link to a friends patreon on 4chan.

>>3036732
Yeah the more I look at it the more I feel like taking a hammer to my hdd.

Sleep is important.

How do you make money with this?

>>3036137
gotcha, i'll keep that in mind. thanks anon!

>>3036551
>>3036557
Having done a small revision, it does seem a little better with the torso shortened, while the neck is a bit long I'mma leave that for when I've got more time and consciousness.
I've left the lighter blue lines for comparison..

With the bald chicks again. What do you think of the expression, the anatomy, the perspective. Not sure what critique I'm looking for, so please just do it like you always do and make me feel bad.

>>3035480
>>3036929

I'm desperate for your cheering for me, because I draw bald chicks so well.

>This one got hair and a bad attempt at colouring.

You would like to see a tumblr? I make one if you give me something so I can improve.

anyone know what the thing on top of her head is called?

>>3025424
Making a MILFy body. I always have difficulty drawing proper, organic breasts. Considering making them bigger.

Please give me criticism on my sketch before I ink and color.

Just want to ask if this looks ok before I start inking.
What should I change about the sketch? The right leg looks bad...

>>3037776
could you do a single line? one without a ton of tiny ones surrounding it? I feel like that should be your focus first

>>3038181
I know it's messy, I'm still getting used to my tablet, digital sketches always look like that before I apply lineart. But I will work on cleaner lines.

You should still be able to see if the anatomy looks wrong. No reference was used so the placing of things could be very off...

>>3037776
you are too inexperienced to draw appealing porn. period.
go a step back and learn some proper fundamentals of construction/perspective and build your visual library with using reference photos. what you are doing here is a mess.

>>3038520
I am in the process of learning, never said I was great, that is why I ask for critique. I almost never draw men and will admit they look bad when I do.
I'll try to study the things you mentioned further.

But please tell me which parts of my drawing look bad and what to change so I can keep them in mind in the future.

>>3037776

This is actually very good but you need to figure out what to do with the arms and get the placement of the penis right, it should be lower.