/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

After-the-lock:

Rol

toll

Rolling

>>3007629
wrong place, bud

>>3006744
>>3006752
Got the Jotun. Lineart is pretty thin since I might shade it later and work the lines away.

(pose stolen from some monster hunter pic as I suck at coming up with poses without a context like a battle or whatever)

>>3006737
roll

>>3007724
Should have stole it harder because that pose is shit

>>3006737
please give me something easy to draw

Rolloid

>>3007809
i don't call myself an artist for various reasons

Ehh

>>3007789

roll

Rollin'

roll

>>3006737
rolling for my train ride. lets see what i get to draw today

>>3006737
Glad you are back Loomis, I like how you post the art from the previous thread at the beginning.

>>3006737
roll

rill

dont know what that is again

shroom waifu

>>3008977

sorry that's so fucking huge

also roll

>>3008841
Damn it, i'm not a furry

>>3007258
cute af

>>3002511
Be careful, if you look closely you can see that the origin of the neck appears a bit too far to the left; the sternum (necktie-shaped bone where the individual ribs converge in the center of the chest, separating the pectoralis muscles), should form a relief on the figure that leads directly to the pit of the neck.

>>3003313
That's ok, keep practicing; we all have to start somewhere.

>>3006755
Mind the forearm on our right, it looks very short compared to its counterpart. Her wrist on that side is ending at around the top of the pelvis (ASIS) despite the arm being fully extended, when it should land somewhere around the base of the pelvis- the gooch, as it were (or pubis). Looks pretty good.

>>3006752
Good job continuing to have a go at angled head positions. In this instance, I feel that once again her head may be a smidge too small. I would consider leaving the silhouette of the head and hair basically what it is now if not even shrinking it a bit-by which I mean perhaps make the face itself very slightly bigger (5%?) but dial down on those hair volumes just a little. Also I'm no expert but her hind legs are looking a little human. Keep it up.

>>3006751
Cute face. Keep the solidity of the armor in mind, try and picture it as a solid shape in perspective. Note how you kind of have it leaning along with her body and it's beginning to take on a sort of "elbow macaroni" shape.

>>3006748
Pretty good. I feel the nose is slightly favoring the side her face on our left a little too much. It's hard to say whether or not the forms of her mushroom "hair" is overlapping the contours of her head and face or not apart from the red part at the top, if that is the case I would strive to show that by perhaps having it overlap elsewhere as well, and/or making a stronger delineation between those forms and contours.

>>3006747
I'm not sure but using the placement of her nose and the "keystone" between the eyes as a guide it appears that the features of her face are kind of having a hard time deciding which angle from which they're being portrayed. Note also how her ears almost appear at the same height in the image but the features are mostly subjected to a pretty substantial downward tilt. Keep practicing those Loomis heads.

>>3006744
I like the 80's anime face. It might not have been a bad idea to simply copy and paste the eyes in this instance, though the discrepancies between the two are slight. This is a very tough angle. Consider adding a pair of small, downward-angled lines near where the contours of her hips and chest meet directed towards the center of her pelvic floor to suggest the presence of her ribs and obliques. While the pattern on the wings are nice, they don't do really much to convey form and it makes them appear flat and works against that angle a bit.

With regards to the ornate leaf pattern of her leggings I'd consider using a thicker brush for both the contours of her legs as well as the reliefs formed by her anatomical landmarks and a thinner brush for the pattern, that way the two won't work against each other or otherwise be so hard to tell apart.

>>3006742
If you take a good look at her torso it appears that it's taken on a sort of "tube" shape. I think this impression is exacerbated by the coalescence of her uniform and the portion of her body on our left. Consider the often inward curvature of a woman's obliques and how they relate to the masses of the ribcade and pelvis

The legs appear a bit short here as well-one thing to keep in mind is that if, using our arms, we pull our leg at the knee tight against our upper body it should reach about the center of our chest. In this instance I think the leg whose length isn't obscured by foreshortening would barely reach the bottom of one of her breasts under the same condition. Keep working!.

>>3007258
Very cute. Who wouldn't want to bounce off into the south side sunset with such a sweet senorita in their purple '62 Chevy Impala, esé?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UZ6eD9TbCAc

>>3006740
Body looks pretty nice. Definitely want to articulate the forms of the palm of the hand a little and look into ear anatomy as well.

>>3007724
It's never a bad idea to get a broom handle or something similar so you can hold it in your hand in front of a mirror for reference; with regards to the hand furthest from the viewer keep in mind the fingers would basically completely overlap the grip of her sword-with the thumb overlapping the other fingers rather than being pointed upwards like that it would be facing closer to the same direction as the pommel rather than away from it.

>>3007834
>>3007840

cute

>>3008977
Very nice. I like it. It does appear that her hand on our right nearest to the viewer is a bit smaller relative to its opposite, which considering it's also a little further back in space judging by the angle of her body and shoulders is a bit of a concern. Well done overall, though.

>>3007258
Very cute. Who wouldn't want to bounce off into the south side sunset with such a sweet senorita in their purple '62 Chevy Impala, esé?

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UZ6eD9TbCAc

>>3006740
Body looks pretty nice. Definitely want to articulate the forms of the palm of the hand a little and look into ear anatomy as well.

>>3007724
It's never a bad idea to get a broom handle or something similar so you can hold it in your hand in front of a mirror for reference; with regards to the hand furthest from the viewer keep in mind the fingers would basically completely overlap the grip of her sword-with the thumb not only overlapping the other fingers but, rather than it being pointed upwards like that, it would be pointing closer to the same direction as the pommel (though at like a 45 degree angle) rather than away from it. In your reference image keep in mind the haft of his weapon is enormous and he's wearing huge gauntlet, there would be a substantial difference between the hands depicted in each image.

>>3007834
>>3007840

cute

>>3008977
Very nice. I like it. It does appear that her hand on our right nearest to the viewer is a bit smaller relative to its opposite, which considering it's also a little further back in space judging by the angle of her body and shoulders is a bit of a concern. Well done overall, though.

>>3008627
It's good to be back, sorry I haven't made the new image yet.

>>3009359
Our hero strikes again!

>>3009705
the fuck?!

Roll, please!

>>3009316
Thanks a lot for taking the time to do these. I appreciate the crits.

>>3009705

>>3010508
No problem. I feel like if someone is going to potentially spend hours working on a piece for the sake of this thread then I can at least spend 15-20 minutes myself to lend them a pair of fresh eyes.

>>3010539
YOU GOIN' TO JAIL, NOW!

>>3010508
No problem. I feel like if someone is going to potentially spend hours working on a piece for the sake of this thread then I can at least spend 15-20 minutes myself to lend them a pair of fresh eyes.

>>3010539
YOU GOIN' TO JAIL, NOW!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=I0JVRcJLea8

Rolling, maybe I'll finish it too.

>>3010735

Wew, was gonna try to draw clothes too but then it turned into a muscle study. Actually really happy with how this turned out! It's been a while! Rolling again for tomorrow.

>>3010735

Wew, I was gonna draw her clothes too but then I just kept going and it turned into a muscle study. I'm actually really happy with how this turned out! Rolling again for tomorrow. I hope to continue, I've been missing these threads a lot, and I'm glad that people are critiquing as well.

>>3010700
yeah, i want to thank you too. i would like to give crits too, but i just dont dare

Rallo

>>3006737

>>3009362

For real, bless you for these threads. They really keep me interested in practicing.

Also bless this >>3010700 gentleman for the critiques. It made me happy af to see so many. I'm hoping to offer my amateur eye again tomorrow, with a grain of salt of course.

Rollango

>>3010943
That is me actually, I just typically don't like to bring too much unwarranted attention to myself if you know what I'm talmbout.

You put something into a thread like this you should get something out, even if that something is a hastily made and dubious critique riddled with grammatical errors and run-on sentences from a 31 year old neckbeard that draws worse than a middle schooler himself. That's what I believe anyway.

>>3010941
Why Photoshop a random photo and shittily liquify the hips in. Just fucking draw something anon, this isn't a high school graphic design class.

>>3011192
He was probably just rolling fampaisano

>>3006737
This sleepy panda's been on my desktop for months and i'm sick of looking at it. roll.

>>3011188

I know what you mean, that's why I liked writing up my stuffs too. I'll look forward to whenever you take a look at my Jotun bb, and I'm gonna jump right into my talky nonsense in a bit.

lamia princess

Been forever, same dealio though. I hope it helps, take with a grain of salt.

>>3006740
I really love the colors you used here, they're recognizable and stand out on their own, but some of the value feels half-done here and there. It's particularly noticeable around her right hand and wrist, and her head feels a touch too big, even for the style. I love her left arm and legs though, and the fabric's cute af. Keep at it, anon.

>>3006742
I love the pose, clothing detail, and expression, but a lot of the anatomy needs to be adjusted. The foreshortening on the legs doesn't translate well, especially with the arms so close to them, which makes them seem elongated. One anon said something about the torso's tube effect, but I think just a bit of adjustment to the body (with more adjustment to the legs) can bring everything up to sync. Love the parchment effect! Composition-wise, this is fantastico.

>>3006744
Tricky fukken pose and you're making great headway into it. A bit of adjustment with the shoulders and arms could make it more convincing. Push the shoulders forward by getting rid of that torso connector line. The shoulders are another plane that will occupy that space instead, which creates the illusion of a third dimension. Love her expression, you NAILED her left leg, and just a bit of touching up can go a long way.

>>3006745
Jesus fukken spoops. This is spoopy. I love the pose and her expression, but there's a few anatomy issues that can make it look even more powerful. The shoulders and forearm positioning can be adjusted to convey more depth, but man you really nailed those hands. The fingers especially are absolutely perfect. Such spoops.

>>3006747
P cute, not bad at all, but from the nose up, it could use just a bit of adjustment. I love the way you defined her neck and collarbones, and I think the strange transition begins around her upper lip. Bring that closer inward to her face to create that attractive divot to her nose, and then work from there.

>>3011508
cont.

>>3006748
I absolutely fukken love the gesture and pose. This looks like something out of Alice in Wonderland with a touch of peyote. I love how droopy her cap is, it fits absolutely perfectly with her pose, and I love the expression on her face. My one complaint is that her face doesn't seem to convey as much depth as the rest of the body, and some of the colors could be a bit darker to create more graceful value transitioning, but that could just be me. Fantastic work.

>>3006751
Could use a bit more depth, especially along the armor, but das a cute face, senpai. The magic flowing stuffs from her neck also looks fantastic, but I feel like the picture could really benefit from a bit more style unification. Keep at it, you're on the right track.

>>3006752
Pff das cute, mane. I like the scene setup and positioning of both subjects, but all of the anatomy could use just a touch of proportioning adjustment. It's most visible along the relationship between breasts/arms/waist, but it is definitely coming along. I really like the color choices as well, and bless you for identifying the light source well.

>>3006754
Daw. I don't even know. This is kind of an all or nothing type picture. It's p dang cute and you can move on to any direction from here.

>>3006755
Aaaahhhh, I really, really like this one. Body language is amazing, I especially love her shoulders and right arm, but some of anatomy is just a touch out of place. The ribs are too long, the scorpion legs are too small, the scorpion-body feels just a touch out of position compared to the human body. Incredibly promising though, I look forward to seeing more in the future.

>>3007258
DAW/10. I fukken love that cut-out style. Speaking of style, you unified everything. This is wonderful. I love her legs especially, the subtle curves on the calves add such character. Only thing I would suggest different is to touch up the line weight here and there to make the subject seem more dynamic. Otherwise GREAT!

>>3011535
cont.

>>3007724
On the right path with a tricky action pose. I like her arm positioning, the torso shows energy, and the legs are solid. She's obviously in the right stance, but exaggerating the gesture just a bit more could make it even more dynamic and powerful. Try to deepen her squat, show the tension in her arms, and adjust her face to better reflect the angle. It's a hard one to portray, and honestly, even trying is a step in the right direction. Keep at it, anon.

>>3007834
Not bad, p cute, some of the anatomy is a touch off according to traditional chibi styling, but do experiment. I like her face parts and tail. The style kind of reminds me of Kids Next Door. That show was a trip. What were you going for? Think of what inspires you, and then emulate and incorporate.

>>3007840
Also cute. No depth or value, but at least you put something to paper. Take the next step. The proportioning is mostly not bad in this one.

>>3008977
Shroom waifu/10. Fukken adorable. I love her eyes, face, the cap, the torso expression, everything is fukken presh. Lookit this adorable thing. The legs feel a touch too short. I think I know what you were going for, but something about the lower body just feel incongruous compared to the composition of the upper body. Experimentation may reveal the answer. Looking forward to more!

>>3011215
Absolutely fantastic posing. You've completely nailed her depth and positioning, also very nice use of value. She looks soft af. Would cuddle/10. It looks incomplete! That's my complaint. I want more of this cute. Great work, especially with the perspective around the thighs.

>>3011414
CUTE. CUTE/10. CUTE/100. CUTE. I'm a sucker for that back curve, and you drew yours so gracefully. Hnngh. Love that cut-out style, I've mentioned it before, I love that you used bold colors! Love the scales, love the patterning, her left hand seems... just a bit weird in its placement, but everything else is amazing. Looking forward to more from you.

A harpy I spent more time on than necessary

Roll!

>>3011884
kawaiii

roll

>>3006737
roll OwO

"Draw my shitty OC for free" general

>>3012521
try to have fun sometimes.

>>3012641
I'm still not drawing your OC, xXEpicWolf69Xx

I'm the best artist in /ic/ btw

>>3012644
what would people gain for having people drawing their OCs? Mr bait, just calm down and let people be happy drawing what they want. is a game,nobody asked you to participate BEST ARTIS IN IC

>>3012650
>what would people gain for having people drawing their OCs
Gee, I dunno... free art of their OC, maybe? Are your parents siblings?

>>3012653
is your saltiness of use in any way, even to you? relax.

rollo

>>3012729
Do you need to respond to me? You must be pretty upset. Funny how you're calling me salty...

>>3012740
if i was upset i wouldnt bite :P and if i was afraid of saltiness i wouldnt be in /ic/. but i'm having a pretty great day, im in a good mood.
now let's leave the thread to its purpose.

Rooollling

roll

>>3011215

rollu

>>3010848

>Come on in, anon, the rocks are fine~

This one was really fun to do. Rolling again.

>>3013057
pretty nice!
i feel like the left arm is thinner compared to the right one. and oneoftherearclawsis missing. very cute though, try to add more detail. just my opinion!

>>3013057
Anon you really need to learn how to shade with both soft and hard edges
https://www.ctrlpaint.com/videos/hard-and-soft-shadow-edges

>>3013621
>https://www.ctrlpaint.com/videos/hard-and-soft-shadow-edges
thanks thats useful

rollin

>>3011245
I like to let a few images build up before I comment; one thing I would say in general is that from the pieces that you've posted in these threads over time your style isn't so bad-I think it has potential. I would try and work on your manual dexterity and tame that chicken scratch (depending on your tablet I understand that this might almost be physically impossible though). In the case of >>3010848 as the viewer I'm not certain whether that swooping downward arc on her deltoid is meant to portray a plane change as those deltoids converge towards the tuberosity of the humerus or not, but if that is the case I think it's mostly unnecessary here. Because of how much stronger that line is compared to the line beneath it in particular it kind of looks like the muscles are just coalescing a bit higher up on the arm than they should be-and then they're doing it again for some reason just below. It's kind of hard to explain what I mean but hopefully you understand. Keep it up!

>>3011414
Very nice-I love how you did the scales receding into the mass of her snake body and added that coloration with the smudge tool. Looking at the relationship between her neck, arms and shoulders I do feel that her neck appears very slightly further to the viewer's right than it perhaps ought to. It's not much, I think if you moved her head and neck maybe 10 pixels to the left and down a bit to accommodate its new orientation in perspective it would look a bit more symmetrical. It also wouldn't be a bad idea to use those splotches of her color pattern to help emphasize the cylindrical form of her "tail" a bit more

>>3011884
I like it, though it looks like one of her legs is broken!

>>3013057
What are ya...chicken? I think the rendering is pretty good here. To me the thinness of her arm is a bit jarring as is the substantial-though inexplicable differences between her claws. Keep workin'!

>>3006737
Does anyone know what those spheres in between Human Princess legs in the alternate outfit are supposed to be?

>>3016314
Anal beads.

This sounds fun, rolling.

roll

>>3017397
done

Roooooll

>>3016280

Thank you for the feedback, I rushed through this one because I just wasn't feeling it and want to reroll. Also ah, I was trying to emulate a style with the shoulder and I think I estimated incorrectly. I'll just nix it when I go over it.

As for the chicken-scratch issue, it's kind of long-running and I hate it. It's a combination of me just unable to get the smooth motion right because I have absolutely no idea how to position my body/elbow/tablet, and some actual hardware nonsense with the tablet, where precise lines end up getting that jagged line thing happening.

What I end up doing to compensate is draw rough lines for the sketch and then clean them up with the erase tool as best as I can and have my fingers on the undo key to practice smooth lines and erase them immediately when they don't hit the right spot. I know it's forming bad habits but, ultimately, I have absolutely no idea what to do to fix it. It'll end up becoming a long-term issue because no matter my grasp of style/anatomy/composition, if I can't execute, all viewers will notice is the chicken scratch.

Others have told me it's just a time and practice issue and it'll go away on its own, but I dunno. I'd love to hear other thoughts.

>>3006737
roll

>>3017421
But that's... A centaur it looks damn godly but still...

rollin'rollin'rolliiin'

>>3017684

I wanted the unicorn.

>>3006737
roll

rooru

>>3017679
sorry I thought of enchantress when I rolled it

>>3017712

Cute

>>3017421
More quadrupeds are always good.
Although your faun anatomy needs some work.
It's like 2 sets of legs with a green mass holding them together instead of having a green cloth resting atop the length of her body.

>>3006737
Rolling for another.

roll

roll

roll

Rollllll

>>3006737
roll

>>3006737
roll

roll

rolly polly

rollu

Y'all are super talented! I will be back to lurk

Rollin

>>3006745
>>3011508


ah thanks for the compliments. I wish the pose was a little more clear at first glance, but wont get anywhere obsesing over a single piece.

dwarf princess was rolled

>>3019143
talent doesn't exist.....
also roll...

>>3019383
what the fuck is an oread and what does it look like , i cant find ref for that !

>>3019386
its a mountain nymph. dunnoç maybe more thicker and rougher on the edges.

>>3019119
done

>>3006737
rollerino

#33

Rolll

>>3019135
sketch at work

would love a red line if possible im dumb as fuck at anatomy

>>3006737
Oh okay

>>3020230
im just doing little doodles sorry

>>3019377
this will be just more crosshatching and detail work, and piece is not intrestig enough to keep me going so... roll again

rollin'

rrr

sleepy as fuck
rolling

rollin

Here is the Lich.

This was fun to do. Not sure how to finish the chair. I could really use some critique.

>>3020396
I'll would say there is no reason to egxecerate your contropose. expecially when the chacter is leaning on her elbow.

also her ass doesnt feel like it lands on the throne. I would have lower the whole thing a bit and play around there the right leg leave the throne. have some indentation or cloth messing up.

>>3020407
>I'll would say there is no reason to egxecerate your contropose.
Hm.. I see. So it's probably best to keep the pelvis and left leg more leveled with the chair then.

>also her ass doesnt feel like it lands on the throne.
I was having trouble figuring out where it should be. I'll try to position it more the way you outlined it.

This was very helpful. Thanks for the critique!

>>3020396
Your values are pretty consistent on the figure, but they don't match up with the chair.
This might be just a sketch, but I hope you can keep this info in mind.

>>3020407
I meant to say no need to not exaggerate. but stupid typo kicked in. I sayt keep the pelvis angled the same way, add more action with making shoulders even more skewed

>>3020495
Ahh, okay that I get. I see what you mean since the shoulder is already being pushed up by the chair, the other can slack more and push the pose.

>>3020487
Oh yeah, the chair should match in value. I wasn't sure about finishing the chair, but I definitely like the way it looks shaded in. The darker tones in the figure do look better as well. I will add them in.

Thanks guys!

>>3006737
rerolling

>>3020396
Alright, so I added in darker values to make everything match with the lighting. I also slightly adjusted the pose. Just minor changes but it looks much better now thanks to all the critique.

roll

>>3020616
Looks much more cohesive
Great job!

roll

Would be interesting to see the stats of rolls vs delivers.

also ROLL

This takes way too damn much time and effort. I'll finish it sometime ever.

>>3006737
rallo

>>3006737
ok roll town bois

>>3020666
Going to try to finish this tomorrow, crits appreciated in the meantime.

>>3020653
tyty

Here's another. The Drakainia.

I'd like to add some kind of environment, background, or maybe color but I don't know how to do that yet.

>>3020653
tyty

Here's another. The Drakainia.

I'd like to add some kind of environment, background, or maybe color but I don't know how to do that yet.

>>3020861
pose is a bit stiff, try angling the shoulders and hips away from each other

>>3020918
Thanks i will try that

Reposting from last thread

Also roll

Greetings, fellow African Americans. I'm currently getting my portfolio in order, so i'm coming back to all of my sketches from the last year and coloring them, fixing them up, all that shit.
So, here's a Nomad Princess for all yall homosexuals. Others will follow soon too.

rollingtom rolls

Rollo

>>3021788
what am I even trying to do
I'll try to fix this fuck up later \o\

>>3006737
roll

>>3020886
The Plant

>>3022109
rad composition my man, nice work

>>3022137
thanks :)

el rollo

You know, I've been coming here for years and I've never tried this.

Rollin

Rollo

>>3021631
I like this except for your obnoxious hatch lines. They're distracting. Other than that nice design and colors.

>>3020315

>>3021917
I like it, should do more

>>3006737
rull

>>3006737
rollingo

>>3023249
again

Rollin

Roll

>>3006740
those colors are really ugly. don't use so much unsaturated gray tones for shadow, learn to draw hair in chunks instead of random straw strokes, and the palm of the hand has fat pads.

>>3006742
pretty noice. you're symbol drawing though.

>>3007724
unfeminine face

>>3018277
gross... even if she's a hairy insect, that body hair makes it disgusting. the features on the head are totally disproportionate, the lower legs are too short, and that ball knee looks like a tumor

>>3019643
nice, but how tf is that sorceress princess? it just looks like a random anime girl taking a bath with clothes on.

>>3019652
those hands have a very weak grip, and i suspect you drew the legs that way to hide the fact you can't draw them.

>>3020567
you're the same artist as moth princess? still gross. stop chicken scratching. deltoids don't look like that. clothes don't form that way around the breasts unless she has a boob wedgie. those lips are disgusting.

>>3020677
looks alright. you should finish it. tits are running away from each other though.

>>3021415
proportions look too short. her right arm would not have that overlap in that pose. her crouch should not be so short and wide.

Roll

roll?

roll

>>3024359
I got monkey princess

>>3006737
>use the dice tool
>get holstaur
>look up the bigger portrait
>oh, there's a dick
>roll it again
>holstaur again
The one on the left doesn't have one, right? Or is it just tucked in? I could go off of whatever I get this post, seems to be the norm. With my luck I'll get boy princess or something though.

You guys are forgetting best girl: Cyclops Princess

>>3024584
Wtf, for some reason, he skin turned green when I uploaded it. Is it because I have the color settings in photoshop set to cmyk? I'm legitimately confused because the little version of her remained blue. Wat do?

>>3024586
Looks fine to me. I'm on mobile though

roll

roll

Lots of images, gonna do some feedbacks. Grain of salt like always. I've been confined to practice more than anything, lately, and my princess just can't seem to come out right. I might opt for a different princess with this roll? Who knows. Anyway, here are thoughts:

>>3011884
Super fucking cute, anon. I love the eyes, expression, eyes, everything. It's just fukken cute. A few value fixes could add a better illusion of depth, and the cloth by her legs seems a touch too thigg because of the way the lines move, but it's nothing a bit touching up can't fix.

>>3013057
Daw, birb. I like the feet placement a lot, but it feels like some of the proportions are just a touch out of the style.The neck and head seem just a bit out of place, but it's nothing experimentation won't fix.

>>3017421
Waifu/10. So very, very, very presh. Lookit this cute fukken thing. Use a bit more linework? Adjust the value on her raised leg? I'm at a loss of criticism here. This looks amazing. Can't wait to see more.

>>3017712
Would free/10. Fukken love that belly. Squishy thighs. Fukken thigg. Love it. Playing around with the proportioning a bit more could unify the style, I think, but it's up to you. Always experiment!

>>3018277
A lot of what is going on here doesn't translate well on a depth-level. I like the choice of pose and expression, but a lot of the proportions are off, even for stylization, and the face's features aren't convincing. That said, do not be discouraged. Keep studying pictures and life drawings and keep posting.

>>3019377
Really love the pose and helmet. Dem arm muscles. Amazing linework. Something is a touch off about the face. The eyes are set too high or the nose is set too low. There's an elongation there that goes beyond stylization and just seems unnatural. It's nothing touching up won't fix, however.

>>3019643
Fukken cuuuute. Good use of value and coloring. The face could use adjustment, especially given the illusion of depth so clearly visible along the body.

>>3024706
cont.

>>3019652
VERY cute/10. Really good use of color, shading, composition, anatomy. It's all unified and lovely. Fantastic work. My one complaint is around the face. The eyes don't seem to be focused on anything, which lends an uncharacteristically exaggerated absent-mindedness to the face, I think going too far beyond the intended effect.

>>3019726
FUKKEN CUTE. I love the perspective pose. You've really captured the view well, and the anatomy placement is spot on. The colors feel a touch rushed, but it's not a bad choice style-wise. It can definitely be adjusted if you're up for it. Also love the small touches of her squishes slipping through the netting.

>>3020230
>>3020269
Definitely a good start. I'll address both of the drawings because I think they both share very similar strengths and weaknesses. You definitely know what you want to draw, and the gesture translates very well. The pose is there but the technique feels a bit incongruous, and I think the linework plays a significant role. Reposition a few of the limbs and focus more on cleaning up. Don't give up, skeleton!

>>3020396
>>3020407
>>3020487
>>3020616
Lovely advice and lovely following through on an already lovely piece. You've got a great grasp for value that I'd love to see develop even further in the future. The positioning and body language is fantastic, but the face and neck seem just a touch off. The jaw seems to extend too far back, the neck may seem a touch too thigg, and the left hand seems... rushed compared to the rest of it. Overall composition is really good, looking forward to more.

>>3020567
Life drawing, life drawing, life drawing. You know what you want and you're getting the beginnings of gesture and pose right, but you need the fundamentals to translate what you have in your mind to the paper. Those lines on the deltoids? Those lines on the belly? They exist for a reason and in a specific way. Keep at it, you're at least posting.

>>3024716
cont.

>>3020677
I love seeing posts like this. The artistic process is a thing of beauty. The middle one's my favorite for stylistic reasons, but also because I think you focus on the most important parts. The linework seems strongest there, the colors exist solely to draw attention to the main accessories on her body, and the eye is free to explore at its leisure. Great composition, great anatomy, adjust some of the coloring, maybe around the hair and skin to add just a bit more distinction and character.

>>3020861
Foxy/10. I love her face and tails, but the pose is just a touch stiff. Her hip squishes seem too pronounced and high above her thigh, which gives her a ball-jointed doll-like appearance. I think soften the lines there, clean up the lines elsewhere, and loosen up the form to give the illusion of motion that the tails already begin to capture. Looking forward to more from you.

>>3020886
Bellycutes/10. Love, love, love how you work with value. Feels like those older sketches that I forgot the names of. I see what the head's doing but I think an indication of the neck, no matter how small, could add better depth and character to the piece. Up to you though. Looks unified and lovely.

>>3021415
Good start! In love with her eyes and nose, and the overall small face composition is extremely captivating. That said, you gotta fix up all of the proportions. A lot seems to lack depth and is just not conveying anatomy well, particularly around the neck and face, which seem too wide. I love the hair and creative crown, and overall there's serious potential here. You can do it!

>>3021631
ADORE this style. The hatch lines do become a bit too cacophonous to the eyes, but I absolutely see what you're going for an everything else translates fantastically. Great pose, great body language, great face, great composition, great colors, great everything, really. Play with that shading a touch more and see how it goes.

>>3024706
>>3024716
>lovely
>fukken
>cuuuute
you're a girl aren't you. stop being so nice and positive for the hell of it and give real critique. most of these are complete utter shit.

>>3024735
Holy shit I didn't realize there were this many new pieces... cont...

>>3021917
Very very very cute. Almost perfect, save for a few strange things around the anatomy that make the body language feel out of place. The shoulders seem stiff and held back, the nose and eye positioning is just a slight touch off, the breasts seem just a touch unnatural in their droop. Amazing colors, values and use of proportioning, though. Adjusting a few small things can lead to this being even more stunning. Looking forward to more from you!

>>3022109
Hello again, friendo. This is a really, really tricky pose and I'm delighted that you went at it. For the most part, the gesture and pose is correct, but you gotta fix up that proportioning. Neck and face are too wide/big, foot doesn't connect well to the leg, values and details seem to blur around the chest area. Cleaning up is really important in focal places like that, where the eye is naturally drawn because of the myriad of details. Great values everywhere else.

>>3022742
This is fukken bizarre to me. It's so long but... so... pleasing to the eye. You really proportioned that gesture fantastically. It looks natural, the style translates well. Love the background, love the sense of completion, love the very gentle use of color, simply love it. Adjusting a few of the lines, especially around the neck, could add more cleanliness and grace to the drawing, but this is fantastic otherwise.

>>3024532
FUKKEN CUTE/10. LOOKIT DEM EYES. You've got your style down. I feel like I can't comment on much without it becoming a legitimate "my style their style" thing. Maybe clean up around the shoulder/arm? I dunno. I love it. Keep at it. Experiment at your leisure, anon.

>>3024584
Hnnnnnngh/10. Now that's fukken thigg. Love her position, love the body language and natural pose translation. This is just great. I adore the gentle use of value too, it adds depth without seeming too detailed or distracting. Looking forward to more.

>>3024743

I'm sorry you feel that way, anon, I do try to balance out the critiques with things I actually like about the piece. I feel like I touch on the things that stand out the most as wrong while touching on the things that stand out as right without being unnecessarily mean or coddling. There's way too much unnecessary negativity around the board and it breeds resentment towards drawing more than it encourages practice.

roll

rall

>>3021631
Next, Fairy Princess
>>3024735
>>3022254
Thx. At the time i drew this i didn't think that i was ever going to color it, so there are some things in the original sketches that i would done differently now and that get in the way of coloring.

>>3006737
rollan

>>3024743
I wouldn't mind if someone pointed out errors in my work. On the other hand all it boils down to is that I need to get my lazy ass up and actually study instead of goofing around for some easy (you)'s.
>>3024735
Those accessories are mostly place holders. IDK, source design is bland as hell. I suppose it is intentional but I wanted to add some characteristic features that would give it some Hindu mythology flavour from where I suppose the nagas\lamias are from. I lost it at how Indian clothes work. I don't know why Asia is so into carpets and huge pieces of cloth. And their crowns, holy cow. I don't even know which are whose and whether it even appropriate to put one on a princess. Probably wasn't the greatest idea but at least I learnt that there are some people out there who wear a really oversized towel\carpet as a dress. And that's not even Japan.
>>3024268
B-but realistic tits. The boob physics and all that!
>you should finish it
I didn't finish a single picture in years. Not that I draw that much to begin with but still.

>>3006737
Rawll

I will show this world who the best girl truly is!

>>3025296

an attempt was made

>>3006737
roll

>>3024964

>>3025298
>B-but realistic tits. The boob physics and all that!
Nevermind him, that fgt doesn't know what he's talking about, your boobs are absolutely fine.

rul

>>3025433
no, roll again.

>>3025437
lel what a pussy

r

>>3024580
Welp, since I rolled it twice in a row, I figure I may as well draw two at once. In a strange way it makes me feel a little less queer. Haven't really drawn since highschool, hands grabbing ass seems kinda intimidating, and I sorta just drew the image with feet then tried changing them into hooves, which sorta fucked them up. I left the area where the lower one's neck would be empty since I think I might try and have some fluid come out of there. Couldn't really think of a non-pornographic way to draw this character.

And no, I didn't start working on this the instant I rolled it.

>>3024747
Thanks for the kind words, anon! Here, have some more booty.

Pheonix princess

>>3024584
>>3025829
Nice butts amigo

i do draw

>>3025931
CUte !

>>3025829
Love it, blog ?

>>3026201
Here ya go, champ

http://godburger.tumblr.com/

>>3006737
Rolling via thread for purity

sketchy

>>3006737

Rolling rolling rolling

rollerino

>>3026518
You have cured my furry fetish forever. Thank you.

This took me too much time

>>3006737
roll

rolleroni

>>3006737
Rolling for the honor of my family

>>3027154
ew, worst girl...

>>3006737
Roll, but can't start until tomorrow night

>>3027200
Aww, come on. Not again

>>3025342
not happy with the feet but fuck it

>>3006737
Looting and/or polluting

>>3006737
Rollan.

>>3006737
volumen

>>3006737
Roll.

>>3006737
Roll

>>3027849
Going for a twofer

>>3023301
sauce?

>>3024268
It's more that I failed to do a good sketch and the legs and hands ended up like shit. Just like my skills. my faun is better imo

>>3024532
my post had the number for Minotaur girl, I didn't feel like rolling.
She's cute though

rowling

Rolling

roll

>>3006737
rull

Rorring.

Rolled separately. Had a lot of fun.

roll

>>3024970
You don't save Skeleton Princess, you save yourself, your women and your children from Skeleton Princess.

>>3006737

test

>>3030845
did the test worked?

>>3006737
Might as well

sigh

wtf is that, no, roll again
please don't be a stupid animal again ffs

>>3006737
Give me a reason to draw somthing

>>3006744
>>3006752
>>3007724
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>>3009332
>>3011508
>>3011535
>>3011556

Thanks anons. Just checked visited this thread again in a long while. I didn't quite expect these to receive more feedback. appreciate it!

>>3024268
>unfeminine face
yeah, that was kind of the point. doesn't always have to be hyper-sexualized. I kinda find it funny that of all flaws, you picked that.

>>3030834
I really like that

lets roll

Lots of new stuff, hope my comments can help. As always, grain of salt.

>>3024970
Good job toning down the shading and hatching. It's more subtle in its delivery but gets the job done much better, I think. Very long fairy princess, not that it's a bad thing, but touching up the proportioning here and there can make the anatomy feel more unified. The thighs and arms are the biggest culprits here, and the forearm curve feels a touch too pronounced, but it's nothing a bit of adjusting can't fix.

>>3025298
This is fukken cute. I really, really like the pose and subject positioning, especially around the arms and hands. The face is fukken cute, but the nose and mouth feel like they could use some touching up. Also the thickness of the calves seem a bit off. Love the hair and dandelion though.

>>3025379
It sure fukken was. Adorable/10. Lookit dem squishes. Love the composition overall, great use of body language, but the pose seems just a bit stiff. There's too much parallelness going on with the pole and the gesture, and exaggerating the pose will add a strong effect.

>>3025400
I like the color choices and composition, but a lot of what's going on is just too messy. The face is very andro, if that's what you were going for, and it could work, but the messiness makes it seem... accidental? It could just be me. Wonderful value, love the sheen here and there, keep at it!

>>3025587

Gorgeous pose and body language, but who are they? Find small and subtle ways to identify the princesses, even if we can't see their clothes or faces. Accessories, skin tones, clothes left on, etc. Stunning anatomy though.

Gonna continue these later.

let me roll

rll

Poorly draw bird girl enjoy

>>3006737
Got this one some time ago. I always roll but rarely finish drawing.

Sorry, no booty today

>>3006737
rollerino

roll

>>3032213
light or no light, what do you think, bois?

>>3032922
IMO that doesn't look good. Doesn't bring out the form and the colour is kinda weird, as if you are trying to add aerial perspective and not a light source. That overly light blue just blends the character into the background or something. You could try to adding shadows\half-tones instead for more contrast.

>>3031994
For what it is I like what you did there.
Nice way to go not using much details and keeping it clear yet appealing to the eye.

>>3032922
it looks a little goofy when you try to colour it like a low render concept art
in a way i like it but its not smooth enough
your lineart is great though and i like how thicc she is

>>3031771
cont.

>>3025829
Thank you for the booty, that's a lovely one. I really, really like the style and composition. You've translated her gesture perfectly and accentuated it well with the right touches of value here and there. In love with her thicc little legs, super looking forward to more from you.

>>3025931
Fukken cute/10. Love everything about this. You've really captured her essence and it's fantastic. Love the colors, eyes, hair, and subtle uses of blush. There's lots of personality and style to enjoy here. Do more!

>>3026518
There's a lot of incongruity going on here. The pose itself and general body language isn't so bad, but the style has a lot of strange points. The hard outlining in the face really doesn't work well with the lack of linework around the rest of the piece. The values are there, but their roughness adds an uncanny valley effect to the piece itself. Try to play around with the linework and see what happens.

>>3027075
That there was an attempt at all is a good start. A lot of people just roll without proceeding. Practice life drawing more to start thinking in the 3D space. There's a lot of details that add life to a drawing, spacial relationships, gesture, and stylized anatomy are all vital and may seem difficult, but all can come quickly with practice. Don't give up!

>>3027280
Really like this one. I love the linework, rendering, and the dynamism of the pose. Some shit's about to go down. Great use of value and texture, but I see what you mean about the feet. It's honestly not that distracting. Maybe accentuate the instep of her left foot and see what happens? I'd love to see more from you, either way.

>>3029117
Oh fug I was waiting to get to this one. Fucking adorable/10. Absolutely adore the style and presentation. Her expression is so cute and there's so many pleasing shapes coming together. I love the torso flow, especially where her ribs connect. Maybe make the eyes a bit smaller? Who knows. I love it and want more.

>>3033233
Thanks, Anon!

>>3033233
cont.

>>3030207
That's a fudge princess alright. I love the arms, breasts, and torso composition, but the face seems a touch unintentionally dopey, like even according to the reference material. It won't hurt to play around with the mouth composition in this one, but the drool effect works great. Great value also. Keep at it!

>>3030834
Really, really like this one. Fantastic pose and composition, especially with all of the action going on at the background. Love her skeleton parts and hair. Great texturing on the pieces of cloth here and there, this is just fantastic. You've really got your hatching technique down now. Very much looking forward to more from you.

>>3031994
Whaaaat, poorly drawn how. This is lovely It's rough and sketchy, but the pose translates very well. She's adorable. Would love to see this continued.

>>3032009
Hey, at least you finished this one. This is another piece that looks a bit incongruous because so much seems right and off at the same time. The pose and body language is absolutely fantastic, but the rendering and subtle sections around the anatomy need work. I see what you were trying to do with the face, but the problem is the head positioning and general composition there. Overall, could be made really, really gorgeous with a few touch-ups here and there. Play around and see what happens.

>>3032213
>>3032922
I like it better without the light, personally, and that's a really fantastic composition. Very gorgeous use of anatomy and body language, and her expression is p cute on top of it. Shame there's no booty but oh well. Can't always get what you want. Great shading, great fold details on the cloak, keep at it!

>>3032928
Thanks, I appreciate the advice

>>3032728
not quite firework princess

>>3030834
nice work!

>>3031967


>>3033233
thanks for the feedback mate

>>3032922
>>3032213
Cleaned and softened it up, decided I'd just stick to my guns and use dark shadows, but a little more mid shadows as suggested by >>3032928

>>3034314
P.S. Sorry for posting so many slight variations of this same painting

Work computer got stolen along with my external backup, boys; sorry but we're in for another delay!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKgcY269q_A

Work computer got stolen along with my external backup, boys; sorry but we're in for another delay!

Back to it!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=QKgcY269q_A

eh why not

>>3034822
now i know why, fuck that dragon-esque piece of shit.
dumb challenge

>>3034825
B-but wrestler princess is top tier

roll

I could actually go through with color if anyone wants.
Also critique pls

>>3006737
Fuck it, roll

A lot of drawings this time. I'll probably have to break this pose up across an entire week

>>3017421
Very lovely. I feel that her foot on our right (the one attached to the leg taking the step) looks a bit like it's being turned sharply inward towards its opposite. I also feel that there's some confusion there, as her knee jutting out well above the opposite knee kind of implies she's in the "up" portion of her walk but the raised leg and foot being overlapped in the manner they are suggests she's in the "passing position". In the end I feel that, particularly because the deer portion of her body is turned slightly away from the viewer, that the raised leg could be the one doing the overlapping instead.

Good work

>>3017503
>As for the chicken-scratch issue, it's kind of long-running and I hate it. It's a combination of me just unable to get the smooth motion right because I have absolutely no idea how to position my body/elbow/tablet, and some actual hardware nonsense with the tablet, where precise lines end up getting that jagged line thing happening.

I think Peter Han's dynamic sketching and a hardware upgrade would do you well. Personally I'm a big fan of the Intuos Large or the Huion Giano; I don't think anything less is really suitable for freehand drawing for the most part. It's not like you're locked out from doing solid finished work with something small but you have to really get in there with the zoom tool

>>3017712
>dat sassy pose

>>3018277
In general I think there's a lot of extraneous detail here that might not be doing the piece many favors. The nose appears to be pointing towards the viewer while the face itself is tilted away. Keep practicing bud.

>>3019377
I think you did a good job economizing the lines in the body and arms.

>>3019643
Very nice rendering. I feel like her deltoid on the far side appears to be growing out of her neck. I think the "contour" is alright for the most part, but maybe show a hint of the trapezius insertion

Roll

>>3033274
Thanks for the feedback man.

>>3035482
Crits welcome, had fun with this one

>>3030834
Kobold is the worst princess.

rolling

hated every second on this but didn't want to double post rolling again so have crappy art for a crappy princess.

>>3035733
Rerollin

roll

roru roru

roll

rollin some sushi

>>3035750
i like your style a lot!

roll, but it's not like I'm actually going to bother, haha

Here's a dawn elf, I haven't been drawing for a while since I kinda hate my art style so I could use some critique.

rol

>>3035733
i like it a lot, if you want something to improve, maybe focus on the left hand (or the right one) they look different in size. or shape up the shaded leg. otherwise i pretty like it, if it was digital art it would be easier to correct.

>>3006737
rollerino cappucino

>>3006737
Hol up

>>3006737
where are the other versions with the male ones too ?

Roll <3

roll

rollan

roll

>>3038975
You could just turn any of them into a male

oilr

ROLL

>>3041115
whorepy princess

>>3035750
Cat one. I like this one a lot, i think it turned out fine.