/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

anyone?

>>2959304
To draw good porn, your soul has to be consumed by lust and frustration.
If you have a gf, dump her. Become very depressed until you could just punch walls out of mere resentment
You have to dream of nude bodies constantly, you have to forget that girls can talk, you have to see them as moaning, sweaty curves

If you can do that, you are in the appropriate mindset to draw hot porn
otherwise don't bother

>>2960174
that won't mean jack shit if you suck at anatomy.

>>2959304
99% of the advice would come down to git gud at anatomy. after that if it's sequential porn there's tons more like good build up, good clotheswork, good expressions, good writing (if any), and good panel work. oh and good perspective. it's actually pretty hard but the "what" is pretty easy if you have common sense. just go read good doujin's and study what they did.

sometime's I'll fap to a good doujin, finish, but read it again for the great artwork.

>>2960174
It's a little extreme but pretty much this.

You gotta get into the mindset that everything is a sexual object to play with, to mold into whatever position you want them to be in. Obviously to even get started you'll need to always be practicing your fundamentals and a whole lot of Anatomy.

The hard part is making your piece not look boring, to make the viewer and even you feel the sexuality oozing out of the picture. Study what artists make, incorporate that into your studies and try to avoid becoming the next generic anime smut artist that's okay but not great.

Also learn to exaggerate a bit in poses or perspective and such. Just try to be tasteful about it. Avoid becoming another slugbox or sunnibee

I'd be drawing porn if I was good at drawing

crits pls

>>2960215
Watch porn and redraw the girl penis

>>2960215
Puss is misplaced.
Work on legs. Look at poses of REAL people in a similar position.

>>2960215
you shouldn't ask for critique when you're that amateurish
go to /beg/ and draw with anons there and you'll eventually get better

go make us proud

>>2959304
>>2960215
>no dick
so... are you guys drawing girls or girls (male)?

>>2960261
>go to /beg/
>its a beginner porn thread
are you fucking stupid or what

>>2960284
i didn't know beginner porn threads were even a thing
also they seem very dead compared to the regular /beg/ so, yeah...

>>2960215
you should try to lose your virginity first before drawing pussy lmao

>>2960300
cmon now
a LOT of porn artists have never seen a real vagina
you just need to draw a lot from reference

>>2960292
You need to learn to read the title of threads before you start your "fuck off to /beg/" shitposts.

>>2960320
the title doesn't make it official
go fuck yourself and your shitty thread because it's dead anyways
and fuck off to /beg/

>>2960326
If you're not a shitposter, learn to hide threads and posts you don't like next time.
Better yet, fuck off from /ic/ if all you do is spamming buzzwords and metaposts.

Love the idea of the general, I have a lot of trouble making my drawings sexy.

I can draw any body type and remove all different levels of clothing but it always seems dull and missing that edge.

>>2960215
Trace over your reference material from time to time so that you can train your brain how to draw bodies. I found a picture similar to what you were going for in my giant reference library.

There's nothing wrong with tracing when you're first starting out, just don't become dependent on it.

>>2960357
Take notes of which details makes a woman sexy. What triggers you when you look at a woman. Look at the shape of the hips, where the fat is distributed and proportions.

You can depict a ''sexy woman'' with very few curvy lines. Also, don't show too much anatomical details like bones and muscles (depending on your taste).

This is just my observation though. I'm in the same boat as you, I wish I could draw sexy women.

>>2960174
>tfw 26-year old KV
>art has been stagnant for a while
>start drawing porn
>draw obsessively for months
>improving dramatically lately, my anatomy is actually starting to become consistently on point

So this is the Wizardry powers I was promised. Can't say I'm disappointed.

>>2960741
No joke, I think I've gotten like 80% of my anatomy knowledge from obsessive fap sessions on the sad panda.

>>2960199
>>2960174
Why not just use the gf as a model?

>>2960573
thats a hot spic right there

>>2960174
what if i have a bf owo

>>2960768
Arby's roast beef and kfc >>2960929

/ic/ needs to class it up and eat at fancier establishments maybe try some Wendy's >>2956444

>>2960174
or you can simply be an intelligent person.

gr8b8m8Ir88/8

>>2960174
>>2960199
t.virgins

>>2959304
Start be educating yourself where the vagina actually is on a woman.

>>2960743
Because gfs are bad at porn.

>>2960970
Back of the knee?

>>2960972
if you cant train your gf to do what you want, youre doing something wrong

>>2960742
>>2960741
>gotten like 80% of my anatomy knowledge from obsessive fap sessions on the sad panda.

You guys don't have an atlas?

You'll end up like the gurofags and their hilarious depictions of internal organs

>>2960983
To be honest I can't even train a girl to be my gf.

>>2961136
maybe you need to look for a boring gf

This isnt the porn thread btw, this is the shitters porn thread. like for beginners

>>2960938
Take that Wendy's and shove it up your ass, just like she does, weeaboo. :)

>>2961155
They send you over from the other porn thread to try and start some shit here with the beginners, ass hat?

>>2959304
someone please teach these people where vaginas are located lol

>>2960212
>>2960954
You can keep the girlfriend. That part was the extreme part.

>>2961264
no just reminding people that if they think they're experts please fuck off to the real porn thread

Fuck the haters study the boner inducing appeal of this pic

>>2961268
>draw a terrible looking penis
nobody cares
>draw a vagina
AAAAAH DUDE watch your anatomy. It's so fucking all over the place.

>>2961311
Ah yes, look at the appeal of that face full of downs and the awkward looking legs.

I'm all for exaggerations but ffs

>>2961311
neat exercise

Yo

>>2961371
ok now draw the rest but give her full nelson and bare tits

>>2961311
>studying an artist who just copies whatever is popular on e621

Doodles

>>2961311

>>2961533
mouth looks copypasted, lacks lipsticks and too 2 dimensional

>>2961537
Winrar! Here's your bag full of AIDS, faggot.

Critique, please?
I tried to replicate the MLAATR artstyle for this drawing, and I'm rather new to NSFW art. I posted this on another thread, but I feel like I'd be able to get more help here.

Thanks!

could use some feedback on this, particularly angle and the male

H-how can I draw porn if I never had sex?

>>2962883
Just ask 99% of porn artists

Thoughts??

>>2962864
why did you give her wojak face?

Bump

When I want to draw porn it's usually because it's weird shit no one else will ever draw. For example I believe chibi Umaru deserves dicks, but I've never heard anyone share the same opinion.

>>2963216
This is tame compared to half the shit I've seen.

Or, it's because I want something to exist but no one ever does it how I want it. Then again I never get my own how I want it either so I kind of just get frustrated. Can't really fap to your own drawings anyway

>>2959304
How does one do a sex comic? Like what are the things you should plan out when making one?

>>2963277
It's all a matter of studying. I can't really explain it, you just have to study the progression of a comic and design it exactly like it were a regular comic, just with gaping assholes and creamed pussies.

I want to draw porn for certain anime fandom, where do I start and what do I avoid?

>>2963290
You draw stuff from that thing and avoid thing that are not that thing. yw.

Need some advice/feedback on this plz
ty

>>2963948
Knee anatomy looks off, pectoral seems too low

>>2962819
Bravo, faggot, bravo. You really cut to the core of the issue.

If you're too retarded to articulate your grievances in the form of constructive criticism, you're too retarded to post ITT.

>>2963948
Dick looks wonky. Te balls aren't separated that much, the curve looks really strong which isn't very aesthetic and the glans looks edgy.

Not sure what's going on with kid's ass.

The girl's arm looks awkward, the wrist especially.

The faces can use work, they look really simplistic.

The girl's knee looks sharp enough to cut like >>2964001 mentioned.

>>2962669
The anus and vagina look really unappealing. Look up some MLAATR/AT/P&F porn by artists you like and benchmark them if you're not sure how to translate a pussy well into a low-detail style.

>>2964518
Resize ffs

>>2959304
>Beginner porn thread

lay it on me guys, what do i need to improve?

>>2964848
Your mental headspace you fucking fur faggot. KYS.

>>2964848
Is that a dickbutt?

Aside from that, learn some anatomy and do some drawings of actual asses. You dunno what you're doing. So figure it out.

>>2961325
the more common issue with vaginas is wrong placement. if someone drew a dick coming out from the bellybutton you'd complain

>>2961578
did this post timetravel from 2007?

>>2963948
As the others mentioned, the knees are wonky, the balls kinda look like they're growing out of the boys thigh and in the main pic to the left, it looks like she's trying to squeeze his dickhead off.

But great gestures and expressions, very hot!

dumping this

>>2965747
went to develop this instead

>>2965762
done

>>2961494
What the fucking

>>2963277
>this image is tableguy approved

Any tips on how to get rid of this really retarded habit? Hairy lines and the two brain halves making a compromise between analytic breakdown and visualization of whatever the subject is?

>>2965839
Her face looks a kind of creepy.

>>2961268
>
My girlfriend has drawn vaginas basically coming out of character's stomachs before btw.

>>2966093
really? that's pretty interesting, i had assumed that men and boys draw it wrong because they sort of put the whole thing about where their own dick is. if girls do it too perhaps it's one of those things like that one where people draw the eyes way up the top of the head.

>>2966108
wowsers, y'think?
Are you implying that it's difficult to draw things you don't understand the geometry of and how it relates to corresponding structures?

Damn Einstein dontcha got physics or some shit to fuck with I dunno if art is the kind of thing you should be wasting those neurons on

>>2965839
You literally copied and flipped it you lazy fuck. Redo the other half of the face, it's disgusting.

>>2961497
>nail in urethra

NOPE
O
P
E

>>2966066
Blog?

>>2966131
I don't understand

>>2966143
Do you have a blog?

>>2963216
I'm into strange combinations of fetishes so I drew my own shit starting sometime in like middle school. I burned most of it though like a year ago because of the shame. Also it was terrible.

>>2966122
but everyone draws it incorrectly in the same way. the eyes up the top of the head thing is a well known sort of cognitive illusion i guess, and this is perhaps the same thing.

like idk, is it not weird for a girl to not know her vagina is between her legs? it seems weird, regardless of geometry

>>2959304
Decided to copy OP picture somewhat but give her a nice feminine dick. This was my first ever drawing, ever.

Went with my normal way of doing hands and feet on one side and qt feminine sexy anime hands and feet on the other.

Is it weird that I think I have talent?
>>2960274
I got you senpai

>>2964518
I thought it said firez at first

>>2960215
Use reference images
The pussy is glaringly out of place

I made this drawing a few hours ago. I think the picture looks pretty plain overall. Could anyone give me some constructive criticism? I'd really appreciate it.

>>2967044
if thats not a little boy in the sand then that head giving head is way to small

>>2966886
naw, firnez is this guy

>>2966066
idk about the brainhalves shit, sounds like memes

if you don't want your lines to be hairy, sketch in softly and then lineart over it with bold and continous strokes

>>2959304
How would I make money from selling animated porn? I heard paypal makes it difficult to get shekels via porn, and I dont want my sole income coming from commissions. Are there other options?

>>2967044
perspective is kinda wonky, it looks like she's resting against a hill of sand rather than on a flat beach

>>2967313
patreon.

Just make some non-porn stuff once in a while and pretend that is what the patreon is for.

Your fans will know otherwise. Shadbase does this as far as I know, his patreon is for his youtube channel I believe.

>>2967525
blog?

>>2961496
>>2961499
I love the comic too. Literal semen demon grill

>>2967525
10/10

>>2960573
>my giant reference library

Just call it a porn folder my man, you're among friends

>>2967066
>>2967536
Thank your for your advices. I made a new version of the drawing which I think looks better.

>>2968680
Wtf goober

How does one make a female face look cute with as little lines as possible?
Without going full animu
It's hard

>>2961311

>>2968685
W-what did I do now?

here's something from that other thread

>>2968704
>>2968747
>>2968759
>>2968772
Resize
Your
Images
For
Fuck
Sake

>>2969030
wow haha the money store

Critique nao

well sometimes im completely unable to draw porn because of anatomy, and in very special cases due to my fetish. my fetish is huge titiies, pic related

U-Um..I'm new to /ic/, I didn't even know this was an NSFW board at first..so uh, critique?

>>2969128
Go take a good look at the sticky, you're showing some potential but your basics are way off

I haven't drawn in awhile, but porn is a rather new thing for me

>>2967313
>>2967714
>I make utterly degenerate hardcore porn for free!
>I also have a Patreon for my "Drawing with uncle Randy", an educational art channel for preschoolers on YouTube

I have to ask something guys.

Sometimes when I draw porn I get horny as fuck.
I do this as a job so I do feel a bit ashamed to fap on commission I do lol.

Am I in the right mindset or Am I a total perv ?

>>2969994
Your own sexual energy enhances the drawing. The hornier you are, the better your porn will be.

>>2963129
notice the pepe fucking her?

HELP

>>2970030
The stomach looks a bit bloated due to the smooth oval shape, her waist seems a bit weird can't put my finger on it, maybe the angle to her rib cage, and the feet are really abstract. So torso and feet need work, face, legs and arms seem good.

>>2970124
Hey that kinda looks like my penis. Nice.

>>2970124
Can you stop putting the eyes so high on the face? It looks off putting.

>>2963115
left leg looks like it popped out

>>2970124
is your OC supposed to be a troll or something?

>>2970441
no, what in the pic gave that impression?

I just want to draw good dongers ;_;

>>2968949

why?

Would you care to tell us why you decided to draw this image?

>>2959304
do NOT sexualize the yuno

Heck this

I still feel really new to sai
had a hard time with the horns and eyes so i left them off
how should I go about improving?

redirected here from the /d/ drawthread

They told me to abandon hope if I chose to post here.

I feel like I'm too afraid to up the contrast with my highlights/shading. Anyone know any good tutorials for that? Also anything that can teach me how to do nicer more solid lineart.
Also I'm struggling to use brush settings in general and just winging it.

I had fun with this.

>>2971636

>>2963277
Treat it like a normal comic, and then realize that porn breaks all the rules as well as following them.

So I asked for some help in another thread, got some good advice.

However, I'm looking to see if what can be done structurally to improve pic related. The face/head is an obvious aspect that needs fixing. However I want to know on the overall structure that could be worked on.

Mind you its supposed to be a perspective shot.

>>2971636
do you seriously expect any self-respecting human being to aid you in producing such atrocities

>>2971659
blog

>>2971636
god damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn..................i dont even know what to say about that.....
EHHHHHHHHH *vomit*
i guess read some books about rendering.

>>2971735
My blog hasn't been used in like a year. I'm focused on getting better before I start posting online again.

>>2971744
one more thing *still vomiting*
do drawabox.com it will help your *more vomiting* ehhh line work....

>>2971746
that's too bad, thanks anyways and gl on your endeavors

Not sure if I screwed up the perspective

>>2971793
Looks about right.

>>2971716
My only issue is that the cooter is up waaay too high, it throws the perspective off.

>>2971636
I suggest you put down your drawing utensils and sever off your hands.

>>2972024
face and head shape is very tumblr style loooking.

>>2972024
Honestly better than your other stuff

Cute!

>>2971636
If you really need to be disgusting in this particular way, just look at how Radiohead does things.
A better solution would be to kill yourself though.

>>2972024

>>2972100

Are these done on paper, and then lined with pen before scanning it into the computer? Or do you actually do it all digitally? Porn was one of the reasons I wanted to start drawing (besides being able to create things that I want created on paper), but I want to make sure I am able to develop clean lines like you have if I ever do decide to get a tablet.

>>2971870
Will take that into consideration, thank you.

>>2970812
is that Emma Watson

>>2972126
Wait, what does radiohead have to do with that... thing?

>>2972197
Yeah, its a painting of her. here's another one, harry potter themed.

>>2972178
I fill a page with ideas in pencil and then I take a picture with my phone and import it into a program like manga studios or Photoshop. I loosely trace them then. That being said, I do work digital only as well(pic related) and although some lines are clean it is pretty sketchy still before I clean it up. I have a bad habit of over sketching my drawings actually. I find that it is best to go back and forth and really get good at both traditional and digital for maximum benefit.

You can see here what it looked like before I lined it. >>2971659 I used that exact image to trace my final results digitally.

The key to good line work is just practice. Make a habit out of executing curves in a single stroke. My favorite practice is drawing 2-3 dots on a page, evaluating, ghosting the line, and then drawing a (hopefully) perfect curve between them in a quick stroke. It all comes down to how confidently and accurately you can execute single strokes in my opinion.

>>2972208
the head and the body don't match at all. The body looks like that of a girl in the middle of puberty and her face looks like she's in her twenties already.
The scarf's just there because you had no idea how to connect the head and the body, isn't it? Since the face is just copied off some photograph (at least that's what I assume).

>>2972024
If only you gave the hair a bit more volume, I'd hate the way you draw heads a little less

>>2971636
I'd actually recommend brushing up on anatomy instead. The hands and arms look quite bad, can't talk about the rest because there's just too much other stuff going on.

>>2972414
Yeah, I realize their is some propotional issues with with the body compared to the head, mainly that the torso is to short even considering the forshortening,. But i'm leaving it as is, and the scarf is a disguise ; ) but it's thematically appropriate so I threw it in there.

Why do you say that the body is of someone in middle of puperty though, what is so puperty about it? Thanks for the feedback its much appeciated.

>>2972331

Oh, I see. I've actually just started "taking it seriously". The majority of my life has been spent trying to draw anything and failing, I've never actually put forth the time and effort to practice. But I'm kind of tired of being unable to shape the images I want on paper.

I'll probably practice that, too. My hand's not particularly steady and I used to do the chicken scratch that the sticky described because I couldn't do it smoothly in one stroke.

Thanks anon. Love the shortstack kobold.

>>2967525
is this loss?

>>2971636
There's lewd disgusting and repulsive disgusting, you're the latter.

>>2973772
the way you draw faces, heads, and hair is massively unappealing

>>2972814

>>2973772

>>2972206

It's the name of a hentai artist dummy. Look it up.

>>2970950
i see you try to include anatomic details, but don't have a good idea about them yet

I'd focus more on getting comfortable with simple forms and learning simplified muscle groups

the bg and colors are not bad

for horns a good method is the coil technique
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=eJWLaDSNBAI

>>2971636
i see satan is asking comissions again

Anyone have any advice on the skirt?

>>2975125
looks fine to me

>>2971636

I can't stop looking at it. I think it's hilarious. I'd be more concerned about the hot dog hands though.

Also, draw a floor plane and relate that shit to a horizon line.

>>2970812


Her head is very large compared to her body.

>>2971636
learn to draw noses faggot

>>2970124
Please work on the face, mate. Everything else is alright though.

>>2968698
AAAAAAAAAAAA FUCK WORRYING ABOUT FACES WHAT IS THE TORSO ON THE RIGHT????

>>2975249
just ooc, what about the face would you recommend i work on, i wanna use constructive criticism, but this is a bit vague

What you think?

>>2975432
what do you mean?
it's missing a lot of details it's a quick sketch but it's not abhorrent, is it? help me see

>>2960215
Check out some figure drawing books and videos. Villpu, Proko, analytical figure drawing. Do them all and start building a visual library of how the body works.

>>2975479
Fix the vagina

The vagina has volume and lips, it looks flat

First lewd.

>Itsuka Kendou from Boku no Hero
First lewd. Please be gentle but feel free to roast me. I want to deliver something to the community.

Contributing.

>>2970124
>>2975462
Not that anon but you should study realistic facial proportions first and stylize to your liking later.

>>2971716
A continuation with part of the suggests made by>>2971870

Made the face based on Meriem Cooper from Cavewoman. Plus did some detailing on the genitalia and some pubic hair work.

>>2977921
forgot the image

>>2974000
>>2974003
>>2972137
i have no idea what this kid is trying to illustrate.

>>2976123
Not that anon but please think about how long the torso is. Imagine her with that long of a torso but standing up

Opinions?

>>2977980
i think he's trying to say i'm bad at facial proportions

Feedback pls

>>2979250
>>2979251
I like the snake. The snake looks adorable!

>>2976123
it looks like her waist down is a horse.

>>2970910
blog?

>>2979250

The male benis is typically not so bendy

>>2969128
Learn fundamentals, stop symbol drawing, and pro tip: Use long ,sweeping strokes instead of chicken scratch. Lazy Nezumi helps a ton

>>2971793
Is this your art-piece completed? Or is this an art-piece you referenced? Cause this piece looks fairly similar. Accidentally stumbled across it while strolling danbooru for interesting art pieces.

why do so many people here want to draw porn

>>2961380
roll for dubs

What has gone wrong with her chest? Is her ribcage too big?

>>2980345
>do something for fun
>do something because it is a challenge
>do something for dat dosh

There are probably a plethora of reasons.

>>2980364
Yep, she's got a ribcage like a barrel. Also her biceps seems to insert above the deltoid instead of properly going under it.

Depending on how realistic you want her breasts to be, also consider letting them slide down to the sides of the ribcage a bit, to show that she's on her back

I think you should try downloading that anatomy book by Zarins and study landmarks and the major muscles and ther insertion points. It's a concise book and your drawings will get remarkable gains with just 10 hours of practice

>>2980364
The breasts are up a bit too much, further they are also offset from where they are supposed to be.

There are also problems with the arms, the lack of a but (anatomically speaking) which messes with the legs some.

Also I would say the rib cage (foundation of the chest) is a little big, and you can tell that because the head is a tad too small.

Also, you are missing half of the skull for that head. As a result the hair looks like a rag just sitting on top of the half of a head (you really just drew the front plane of the head, not even the half of the head), as such you need to work on your fundamentals.

>>2980395
>>2980399

Thanks anons, I have to say I was kind of expecting someone to just say "Loomis" but this is really helpful advice.

>>2980334
Yeah, that's the finished version.

>>2959304
how do i do with the furry porn?

>>2960215
no butt hole 2/10

>>2961311

>>2969077
>Critiques
I have none
This is the epitome of art

>>2981087
Outside of the stylization you're doing it takes longer than it should to realize what is happening in your picture. As such you should clean it up and potentially try and compose it a bit better.

Those boneless fingers aren't helping either. Just tighten the whole thing up so it visually is easier to read.

I tried

>>2981257
Try a little bit harder, in other words.

Draw that again, but analyze where you went wrong the first time. Then do it better with that information in mind.

>>2981276
Critique is telling people what exactly they did wrong, not just telling them that they did something wrong.

But thanks, I guess. I know that it's off in a lot of ways, but I had no reference and just kinda went with what looked decent

>>2981278
Part of learning is learning to analyze your own drawings. Flip the image and you'll notice plenty of issues very quickly.

I'd say for starters that you didn't really lay down a foundation for what it was you were drawing. You're also drawing an exceptionally skinny chick. Practically skeletal in terms of skinny.

Secondly, look for reference that will help you in drawing what you're going for. In terms of porn and nudity (which you're trying to do) either look for the pose (or something similar) in porn or in similar places. Try /s/, you might find something that will help ground your work a little.

>>2981283
Yeah, I couldn't find a reference that fit what I had in mind so I just winged it.

Learning how to do redlines or skeletons would really help me though. I always fuck up proportions.

>>2981287
Try and break down the form with 3 dimensional shapes. It'll be messy, but the idea is that you are breaking it down in a way that you can visualize it. Forget about finishing the drawing, just focus on getting the perspective and proportions correct.

Try drawing it without the insane perspective first and then use that as a map to how it would look from the different angle/perspective.

>>2981291
I mean, these are also just kinda ~5min sketches. I just found my tablet from years ago and got into drawing again, but that's pretty solid advice.

any glaring mistakes I need to fix before I proceed?

>>2969030
microcephals!
the cranium needs to be larger

>>2981348
the whole gay aspect

>>2981348
Left foot seems off. Flip it and you'll get a sense of whats wrong.

>>2969128
Try graduating middle/high school and coming back

>>2981502
yeah I can see it too
tried to change it a bit
link for redundancy
http://imgur.com/Wogsdnv

I've given up after like 20 minutes trying to draw her face, but does this look like a plausible attempt at boobs from this angle/position?

Something is wrong with the perspective of the abdomen leading into the torso, but I can't put my finger on what the problem is.

>>2981813
You LITERALLY NEED LOOMIS HERE
He covers this EXACT PROBLEM
It's almost parody at this point

>>2981813
The distance between the torso and the hips isn't properly established. As a result they melt into each other creating a weird blob result.

Take pic related. It's a bit subtle, but the distinction between the torso and the hips are apparent.

>>2981831
i bet /ic/ would redline this if it was a drawing

man extreme foreshortening can look so weird

>>2981847
You ain't seen nothing yet. Try drawing pic related and make it work. I'm made an attempt in doing a pencil study of it.

You can find these on /s/ if you want some extreme perspective images.

>>2981860
My attempt at it.

>>2959304
Am I doing alright?

>>2981862
"Ectoplasm"

Fuck kek

>draw figure
>tfw can't decide what character to make it

>>2982035
>Pick 6 different characters
>assign each character a number ranging from 1 to 6
>roll die
>draw the character assigned to the appropriate number

Did this quickly before bed time.
Crits? Hopefully I will have time to work on it tomorrow.

>>2982291
Index finger is a bit long. I don't know what's up with her left arm. Her right leg is a bit small and boney.
I'm interested in the result, so do post it when/if it's done.

Did I do a better job on the ribcage than >>2980364 ? I hope it's not shitposting to post another picture in this thread but I've had the time recently.

I tried to pay more attention to perspective with this one.

>>2983057
I hope you don't mind me drawing on your piece.
The ribcage is definitely too large here, compared to her hips. Study proportions more. Practice drawing solid tubes and then tapering tubes. Study faces. I hope that this helps some.

>>2982291
Hope you don't mind me drawing on your work. Her hips (or at least leading into her butt) are too large. Though it might work if there was some better definition of the ribcage flowing into the hips. Her head is placed oddly. Legs are kind of wonky. Just practice some tubes and apply to the legs. Pose could also be more dynamic overall. Tits could be more interesting (especially if you want to call it porn).

>>2983171
>>2983173
stop giving redlines.

>>2983179
seconded, they are terrible.

>>2960215
0/10 needs more rekt pooper

>>2983173
why does she have levitating boobs?

>>2983179
>>2983186
Like what about them? Just that's not how redlines are done? Or is it my drawings need a lot of work?

>>2983201
Its clear you care more about your drawing looking nice than actually giving good construction advice. Your lines are fine but your actual redlines arent much better than the original pictures.

>>2983214
are you retarded
>you care more about your drawing looking nice than actually giving good construction advice
> Your lines are fine but your actual redlines arent much better than the original pictures.
>Your lines are fine
>but your actual redlines

>>2983221
I mean the line quality, not the accuracy of the redline. That's why i said "lines" and "redline"
Work on your reading comprehension before calling other people retards, retard.

>>2983214
Okay, that's something I didn't know about myself, thanks for the advice.

>>2983227
ok but how is the quality of the redlines low? how are these the same thing?

>>2983227
>>2983240
you have to be retarded to think these are the same

>>2983246
>>2983240
I never said they were the same not sure where youre getting that from.

>>2983253
>>2983214
>Your lines are fine but your actual redlines arent much better than the original pictures.
>but your actual redlines arent much better than the original pictures.
>arent much better than the original pictures.

>>2983259
well yeah.
>>2983240
Look at this, im sure you just focus on the pelvis, but looks at the hands,arms, feet, boobs, and face
The character isnt even in the same pose.

I dont give a shit one way or another so dont go full damage control just saying.

>>2959304
how are my dicks?
doxy's tuts helped

>>2983266
retard alert

>>2983171

>>2983057 here, thanks for putting in so much effort, there seems to be some controversy from other anons later in the thread but it looks like good advice to me. Having slept on it I can see all sorts of places where my original picture is messed up.

I wish I could work out exactly why I'm getting the torsos so big.

>>2983845
The heavily foreshortened dicks look off. I think the tip of the far left one is too thin and the base of the one next to it is too thick. Otherwise, I'd say practice bringing these to the next step and try to make them a look little plumper.

>>2984290
What do your gestures look like? The problem probably arises from losing track of the large proportions. Also, if you know you draw ribcages too large, you can simply actively try to draw them smaller and double check them as you go.

>>2960174
Kek. Is this you /lit/ ?

>>2984297
>What do your gestures look like

I can't do them, I don't "get" what they're about, so I'm just trying to take a more academic approach by focusing on construction, mannequins, basic forms etc. I'm not a natural artist and none of this is coming easily.

Don't excoriate me pls

>>2984324
Okay, gesture does help though, I'd still give it a try sometime. Don't let practice stress you out too much though, it's important to enjoy making art.

I used the angle transform tool with the original reference with 20% opacity under it, to correct some of my drawing.

darn, now I feel like I traced for some reason.

I pray loomis I didnt commit a sin

Anyone got tips on posing for porn? I wanna draw people fucking but can never come up with position ideas. Digging through porn videos hasn't helped.

>>2984881
look at hentai or furry porn because it's already drawn and figured out

>>2971636
The penis looks like a hairless cat

>>2971793

>>2969128
Cute, keep practicing and you'll get better. Do your best!

>>2985512

qt

she's definitely 18, right?

>>2985512

>>2985711
oh mmm... yeah, why not

>>2985295
holy shit what is this from

>>2983171
fantastic redline fuck the kids.

>>2961499
>>2961498
>>2961497
what's the name of this comic again

Its my dream to be able to draw like this.
https://twitter.com/moyashitouhu/media

>>2986508
that boob-bicep disconnect though

>>2962864

That pec really bothers me.

>>2986810
I don't get where the light is coming from with this one.

>>2986947
I tried again with more accurate lighting on the right side. For whatever reason, I like the left side more though. Not sure what to do.

Comments appreciated.