/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Finally got around to attempting some shading, always annoying, but think I'll set it down for something else for a minute until I can figure out what to do about the girl on the right...

>>2938676
hot

Did this earlier in the week.

I dont have time to draw very often, but am trying to get into it more and going to try and do at least one piece a week min.

Do I have any potential /ic/?

>>2938611
That looks painful on so many levels.

Made this today. How does it look?

>>2938676
Please fix the faces.
And fix the boobs on the right girl

>>2938904
It's very obvious that you used a reference for the face. Not that that's a bad thing, but your anatomy is pretty bad.

>>2938676

Looks good

>>2939064
Boobs don't start there. Look up some tutorials

>>2939098
The chest is supposed to be angled a bit upwards, hence the breasts are further up, though I guess that didn't read well

could i get far if i started drawing furry nsfw?

>>2939064

I think perhaps the boobs need to start a little lower down, and the legs need to come forward more, apart from that, it looks good.

I had a go at a red line for you

>>2939068

No reference used for face, but yes, my anatomy needs work

i do not have any final works but i do have some sketches, im very new to digital art.. criticize or praise, potential or nah

>>2939107
Oh I see. I'll fix it up some then, Thanks!

>>2939038

I think the legs need to come backwards and the thighs shortened a little

>>2939109
Oh, the that's a nice face anon.
I recommend doing some figure drawing and then looking at proko's vids.

>>2939106
Before learning perspective, stop doing chicken scratch and learn some more anatomy.
You'll make it anon.

>>2939099
What needs to happen is you have to apply that low angle to every part of her body then (including the collarbone). The boobs are still misshapen either way. Try looking at Doxy's tutorial on boobs.

>>2939163

Cheers, will do, I have spent way way more time drawing faces than bodies, and its catching up with me lol

Why cant i get turned on by my own art, but seeing some crappy lewd works.

>>2939195
I had the same problem. If you're like me, then you simply have to get a bit better - when I was starting out all I felt when looking at my art was disappointment.

>>2939162
blogggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggggg?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

>>2938904
She's very cute, keep it up.
I see you mostly focused on the face, your skilly at the body needs to catch up, also the fatser you get used to draw hands the better.

>>2939225
Bait?

>>2939237
no

>>2939272
I don't paint nsfw stuff that often. So, no blog.

>>2938676
butthurt anon, it's good that you finally started using proper references. tho you should try to do that with the faces as well instead of going with your flat style. drop the stylization for the time being and learn construction and perspective first.
you are doing it the other way around and this is just not working.

>>2939326
Dont recall being terribly butthurt, but just looking for critique, thank you.

>>2939068
I know about everything with the girl on the right is fucked in a major way...

>>2939354
>Dont recall being terribly butthurt
maybe I mistook you for another anon I called burrhurt anon in the past. you have a very similar style, but you seem to be better, so I thought it was them that improved. sorry if that's the case.

>>2939038
pretty bad

gud boi

thanks for the feedback in the last thread guys
attempt numero dos
how`s it looking now?

>>2939371
Its been a long while since Ive poked around, think BBCchan was still here last.

>>2939447
I would put her shoe on the other leg - you wasted an opportunity to show off sole of her foot.

>>2939354
I think you replied to the wrong person

>>2939497
Yeah, it was meant for
>>2939067

>>2939398
i love you kyle

>>2939643
Suck off mediocre artists somewhere else you insufferable faggot

>>2939648
>mediocre
post your work

>>2939648
stop being such a bitter jellí cunt

>>2938611
>deathgrip
ouch

How do I feet?

Can I get some feedback on this? How do I make the sexy drawing

>>2939782
Looks like you're doing fine; you'll figure it out.

>>2939849
>drawing porn of your own characters
haram

>>2939849
How about learning anatomy?
There's too much wrong with it to give a critique

>>2939913
Could you point out specific areas where I need to improve on, then? I've been trying to study anatomy, but it would be more helpful if you gave me some direction to work in.

>>2939910
Thanks anon. I'll try my best and show results. Any glaring flaws?
I feel as though the left leg (her right) looks really wonky still but I can't nail why.

>>2939917
Not him, but the biggest problem with your understanding of anatomy is that everything feels as though it's thin as paper. Nothing feels as though it's a 3d form. Take the young woman's left foot and pelvis. It doesn't seem to have any density. No bone structure underneath it. Granted, my anatomy is still wonky as well but I feel as though you aren't thinking of the bodyparts as objective things that exist in a space.
At any rate, you're better off starting something new. Maybe with the same characters.

>>2939948
Thank you for the critique, giving body parts volume is definitely an issue I have. Do you think focusing on construction would help?

>>2939957
Construction is only effective if you understand what you're doing honestly. If you don't understand the basic form of what you're trying to make, or understand how to reliably draw 3d shapes already you might as well be drawing a fancy stick figure. But that's just in my experience. Someone better than I am may have better advice for you.

Dang, this thread is pretty impressive.. just finished polishing this tonight.

>>2939398
That guy's ear isn't in the same perspective as the rest of his face, also feels weird that he's just a disembodied head

>>2939782
This is some good stuff, have you got a blog?

>>2939398
As the other anon said, fix the dude's ear, it's in the wrong perspective. The girls right arm (her left) also seems a bit too small. Other then that, really nice and hot.

>>2940443
Dat's cute!

At such an extreme noob level, am I going to learn more by trying to get pictures as "finished" as possible or should I just crank out dozens of rough sketches to try and learn? So far I dare say I can draw a vaguely sensible-shaped body, but I can't into shading or colouring. Or faces.

Is it at least obvious that they're pictures of Yui from K-ON?

far as i got before the thing i use for photoshop shortcuts finally ate shit & died

my desire to just crop out musclebob and buffpat's heads is getting trickier as i progress, t-thanks perspective

That's my first try on porn, and it's not completed yet.
Some part of it was rotoscoped, I feel a little ashamed of it, but I think I learned a bit more of anatomy doing this. I'll try doing more of these without rotoscoping next time.
Also, the character is Rina Shinomiya from Digimon Re:Digitize.

>>2940443
Monkey ear

>>2940850
>rotoscoped
Lmao.
Fucking tracer, call it what it is

>>2940850
here are some crits, stop pillow shading and don't leave your color palette on the artwork, it makes you look super douchy

>>2940810 here, I also forgot to ask, am I making it easier or harder for myself by limiting to one main colour and one colour for areas in shadow?

>>2938611
dude have you ever grabbed a boob?

any good tips on drawing blowjob or tutorials?
i'm having problems with this.

>>2940848
D-doxy?
Also looks fine, but I recommend cropping the image more from the top since the men's neck are getting too long.

>>2940810
Sketches. But look up tutorials and learn as you sketch. By tackling a fully coloured image, you're creating too much to learn all at once since you don't even understand the fundamentals.

Another tip is that you should practice realism first, it's obvious that you're copying from what you think anime looks like while in fact those famous anime artists actually learned proper anatomy beforehand.

>>2941788
>>2941788

Like every things else you wanna learn to draw,

Study.

Go over to /hc/ look for a blowjob thread and do some studies.

>>2941787
>have you ever grabbed a boob?
No and I'll probably never will. If you have some tutorials about drawing this subject then feel free to share them.

>>2941848
you really feel like you'll never touch a boob, that's sad, even if you're a gay or something, touching a boob should be a universal experience

>>2941860
That's like saying taking a dick in the ass should be a universal experience.

>>2941866
It should be.

>>2941875
Not everyone wants a loose asshole. So really, I'd say that's a rather subjective sentiment.

>>2941875
seconded if you haven't tried this in the right way you are missing out.....
seriously....

>>2940516
Seconding that. Never, ever draw the ear as a flat shape, always draw the plane that's facing you to define its depth.

Also thanks, the rest of the head is a very good ref.

>>2940443
You might want to reconsider your workflow. No need to jump to anime cell shading, but if you go too painterly you'll have to face the problems of muddy colors and unclean edges, so watch out for that. Extra marks add extra years.

>>2941860
You say that, yet you're on 4chan
If it was that easy (well it is), you'd be in jail for harassment dumbass or if you're doing it the "honest" way you'd be fucking your girlfriend you'd have and not fucking drawing porn for yourself.

>>2938611
>tfw don't know if I should feel happy or ashamed my shit got put in the OP.

I realize her right leg looks detached, but I was hurrying to finish it cause I was horny. And doing art when horny is stupid.

I kinda feel I should post something else now, so here it is.

>>2941801
nah, i'm nowhere near onta's skill level
also yeah, maybe i should just say fuck it and extend the canvas up and draw their heads, commit to the bit. too bad i won't be able to work on it till i get a replacement battery/cable

>>2940850
rotoscopy is an animation technique, you wouldn't really use the term to describe the process of creating a single stationary image

also there's a lot more to it than just blindly tracing anything that looks like a contour, you still gotta know what, when, where and how to simplify/stylize in a way that is appealing. what you've done looks more like a wikihow illustration with an anime-ish face. on top of that you're robbing yourself of the ability to experiment with proportion and composition. tracing and/or rotoscopy can be a powerful, useful tool for many artists but for what it seems you want to achieve this is not the way to do it

help me with the face and the rest

>>2942201
I like your rendering anon

>>2942201
you should feel neither as a retard without taste picked a shitty artwork. get back to studying real life models and stop winging this retarded anime crap.

All of you, grind more anatomy, gesture and perspective before trying to tackle porn. It'll save both you and potential viewers of your works a lot of cringe, there's extra level of autism that exists in shittily-drawn porn that isn't found in regular shittly-drawn art

>>2942752

What if I don't want to spend a year drawing pictures I'm not interested in just so I can draw slightly better-looking anime lewds?

There's no time anon, death comes for us all

>>2943065
>implying you can't make gestures and anatomy lewd
For shame, anon

>>2942358
Huh, we'll do you got a blog? Your art style is really pleasing to look at.

Also, maybe just add their chins and mouths in?

>>2941848
I think there's one in the tutorials thread right now

>>2943069
apologies, no blog at the moment, thank you for the compliment tho

and yeah, i could do that, part of me really didn't want to show the heads at all cause i worried the goofiness of sponge bob and patrick's designs on big buff bodies would ruin the work i put into trying to make them attractive but the other part of me keeps whispering "but what if you drew yaranaika faces on their headshapes"

alright alright Now im onto the inking phase

>>2938676
scissoring isn't a thing.

>>2943679
Lesbian here, yes the fuck it is, Anon drew it wrong though. The point is to get friction on the clitoris and it's ideal when both parties are incredibly wet/lubed up. What they drew is the vulva rubbing against the mons??? That does nothing for anybody and makes me sad.

>>2943683

nice try but lesbians aren't real and neither is the clitoris

Critique please, I'm open to any advice

>>2943830
her nose is the size of her eye

>>2939398
>>2939643

who is dis artist? any links to more work?

drew this the other day

>>2943937
> those hands

hearty kek

>>2943996
aint nobody got time for hans

>>2944118
that's why most of porn artist are shit.

>>2943937
that's nice bruh
those blends are super soft.
smudge tool or just brush+opacity?

>>2943937
I noticed some problems and did some redlines for you.

1. The eyes are slightly slanted as if the head is tilted slightly away from the viewer but the rest of the head doesn't really seem to match up with that. I also didn't notice until now, but the mouth could probably be centered a little bit better.

2. The boobs, again, don't seem to match up with the rest of the pose or each other, and her left boob should curve in more at the bottom unless they're supposed to be fake tits.

3. Both of the legs are too long.

4. Her left hip, again, isn't lined up with the rest of the body and the leg is coming out of the wrong place.

The shading's pretty good, but the lighting's uneven. I can't really say much about the rest of the picture because it's quite messy but I can see that you're probably going to run into more problems with parts being uneven or not lining up correctly. I think you really need to slow down and not jump the gun with starting rendering your stuff before working out the whole piece. I know how tempting it is but I'd say very few people can get away with working like that. Work on getting your perspective, proportions and lighting/values out of the way before you go into details. And It'd probably help if you worked with your lines a little neater. It just makes life easier.
You've got skills but you just seem a little careless/trigger happy and with the style you seem to be going for, it helps to be a bit more focused and cleaner in the earlier stages because you're just gonna end up painting over or erasing your hard work.

>>2943628
Her left shin is slightly bent since you put a boot on the foot. The right foot is way too long. You should probably practise more hands and feet in general and maybe find or shoot your own reference for those hands. They're a little off as well. The head seems a little small, but not that important.

>>2945320
learn what line weight and perspective are. this is pretty much shit.

>>2943907
Kairunoburogu

>>2945472
Why are so many critiques like this? Whats the point in posting if you're not gonna get helpful feedback?

>>2945237
not sure if i quite agree with you on the face stuff, but duly noted on the others.

the rendering was just for fun and didnt take that long at all so im not really too bothered if i need to change or erase it, and im pretty comfortable just warping stuff if i have to. if i end up continuing this ill have to go back and do another pass on the lines

>>2945068
smudge here and there

>>2945535
>Whats the point in posting if you're not gonna get helpful feedback?
Beginners should post in the beginners thread.
End
of
fucking
story.

>>2945564
then you should go post there :^)

newfag here.
can we post commission threads here?

im looking to draw lewd stuff for extra bucks.

>>2945599
No. Use the promotion thread.

>>2940443
blog ?

>>2945602
thanks mate!

Why don't I see Keppok posting around here anymore?

I need my dose of thicc

I want to do porn specifically for girls.
Any advice?

>>2945669
Any form of teasing always works. Like underwear mid-pull revealing half of the private part.

Then there's also people who likes it rough.

Rate my work

>>2938611
sasuke?

>>2946094
>>2946103
Your top priority should be learning how to draw appealing faces.

What should I do if I have trouble drawing strictly from imagination?
I feel fairly confident in my ability to draw proportionally and fairly accurately from reference or life, but I find it super difficult to construct a form with no reference.

>>2946094
I told you to fuck off to the beginners thread.

the thread i was gonna post this on died so i decided i'd post it here
rip me a new one

>>2946120
Why not just use ref? Porn refs are a dime a dozen, plus they'll help you memorize pose ideas that you can rotate in your head.

>>2946355
i'm not really in the habit of obeying random jackoffs on the internet

>>2946578
He's right though, you would benefit from checking it out

>>2946390
get your ass in the beginners thread.

>>2946578
then keep shitting up a thread that is supposed to be for advanced artists with your beginner tier crap, dunning kruger.

>>2946723
>Thread for critique
>Give lazy no effort meme response
>Get mad and insult the artist when called out on your bullshit

>>2946760
>Board for artwork
>Completely ignore sticky full of tips for beginners
>Completely ignore thread for beginners
>Post lazy no effort drawing in a thread that was made for a bit more advanced artists
>Whine about anons that won't spoonfeed you
You disgust me.

>>2946798
can you not post that picture the fucked up saturation in the shadows makes me feel bad for /ic/

>>2946798
>Get called out on shitposting
>Proceed to make further assumptions about the artist and insult him for trying to improve
This is just sad

>>2946811
>Get called out on shitposting
>Proceed to make further assumptions about anon who criticized you and insult him for telling you where you should go to improve
This is just sad

>>2946823
Now this is some high speed professional shitposting

>>2946760
>Thread for critique about stuff that beginner can't handle properly
>Give lazy no effort meme response because otherwise they would have to basically redraw the entire pic with a redline
>Respond by insulting the beginner scrub when called out because too dunning kruger to understand
there, I fixed it for you. you're welcome, shithead.

>>2946798
so glad I'm not the only one here that thinks this way.

>>2946798
*Whine about anons who make low tier shitpost
Ftfy

Who cares? Just post an in-depth critique. You'll make someone's day and you'll improve yourself just by regularly articulating the concepts and principles that go into problem-solving. The more you problem-solve, the more these things become ingrained in your head.

If you don't have the time for a critique, then you probably don't have time to get into a pissing contest over why you're totally justified to be an unhelpful, discouraging prick.

>>2946936
If you have time to get into a pissing contest over why you're so entitled to get a critique, then you probably also have time to read sticky.

What do you think of it so far /ic/?

not sure about the torso

>>2940443
>... and then she farts!

>>2947873
Is that supposed to be a guy or a girl

>>2947355
It looks like 2 dudes. That's gay.
Connection between wings and back of the right dude seems unnatural - those wings don't grow from his back, they're glued to it.
Torso and belly of the character on the right is oversimplified. Needs more Hampton.
And it looks like person on the right is putting all his weight on that dick. Make it look more like he's supporting himself by flapping his wings or put hands of the other guy on his ass for extra support.
If they're doing anal, then they should be closer to each other.
Dude on the right have only one leg.
I dislike how everything is made with the same line weight, but it's OK if it's just a sketch and you're going to paint over it.

>>2939750
It is incredibly difficult to figure out what is happening in this piece.

>>2948019
Here's an clarification.

>>2943937
The world needs more Lunas nudes.
Did you ever finish this one?

>>2948068
>>2947449

What on earth happened to the porn threads? They used to have so much activity, but not they barely get any posts, and when they die, it can take weeks before they're back up.

>>2949283
They've been nuked since they started banning people that hurt some fee-fee's with their work.

>>2949283
It only had steam when actual artist like BBC were here, once they all left this shithole porn threads died.

Good. it was filled with shit art that only circle jerked the good artists anyway, unhealthy and I'm glad they moved on from this shitty place.

>>2949331
>>2949287
>>2949283
but im still here guys

>>2948068
He has no forehead or back of head
Mouth is too large
Unappealing position
torso is a head too large

overall pretty bad

>>2946120
Maybe this can help?:
http://bookzz.org/ireader/932672

Draw from imagination by bert dodson

>>2945320

>>2949592
I'll give it a look, thanks for the link!

Thoughts?

>>2951266
terrible
polished turd.
not even memeing

look at those half assed feet.
the piece feels dry, the only substance is the saliva coming out of the toothless woman.
Their expression is so off is funny, the guy looks mildly annoyed and the girl doesn't look distressed or exited, I dont know what the fuck is that face trying to convey.also is hard to tell what age is she. thats the head of an adult in a child body.

>>2951266


fixed it for ya

>>2951278
>fixed
>

>>2951276
Holy motherload of buzzwords.

>>2951284
1-Dont dismiss the criticism
2-get your shit together and learn to draw

>>2951284

i dont see any buzzwords in there. just because something is more than 7 letters long doesnt make it a buzzword.

my first ever drawing
i drew it on my phone
how do i start from here
i want to start a graphic-novel quality webcomic as soon as possible

>>2951333
cant tell if you are being serious or not.

if yes, read the sticky at the front page of the board.

>>2938611
just made tonight, thoughts?

>>2951266
It's got all the visual appeal of an airbrush painting on the side of a carnival wagon, I mean what the fuck

>>2951546
Face is nice but body is off especially chest

>>2951284
he's completely right. stop being butthurt and learn your fundamentals, before you throw yourself into rendering.
right now that pic is the definition of a polished turd.

>>2945320
Captain Sweden is back!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3KSJY0c8QWw

>>2951699
reported

>>2951740
It is captain Sweden anon. Don't be such a modern puritin.

>>2951266
This is the stiffest, driest, most expression less, static, boring porn image I've ever seen... quite an accomplishment, actually!

I can only say one positive thing: the rendering of the girls skin is nice. But everything else....

>>2952044
my sides why is this so funny

>>2952044
best piece in the entire thread.

>>2952328
let's fix that.

pic by bbc-chan

>>2939750
There are so many bad tangents it's not even funny.

can i get some advice on how to move from here?

>>2953197
you need to re-do the lines for sure

>>2951546
Style is nice desu but her right arm socket looks dislocated, meanwhile the left one is far too small. Torso is kinda fucked too. Work on your anatomy.

>>2952044

>>2952044

>these aren't my headphones

Are there any books/essays/documentaries on why some things considered sexy/erotic/arousing and others don't, body language, fetish, what makes a good porn, etc?

>>2953401
because there is no objective truth. you can apply your question to everything

>>2939045
This should be titled "Bitch, get off me!"

>>2953469
>there is no objective truth
You're fucking retarded.

>>2953401
Sadly I don't think there was kind of proper research. Modern sexology focuses more on sex roles in society, sexual abuse, sex education, mental health of deviants and stuff like that. I don't know of any good books that would be of any use to artists.

But there IS a blog that strives to figure out how to draw good porn: http://babelab dot blogspot dot co dot uk/
>At Babe Lab, we realize drawing women isn't an exact science...yet. It's our aim to distill and harness hotness for pinup artists everywhere. Findings are subject to change.

>>2953401
Read "A Billion Wicked Thoughts: What the World’s Largest Experiment Reveals about Human Desire". Critiques on amazon claim that research for this book was made in very amateurish, unscientific way - it won't give you a trustworthy explanation on why some porn is more popular than another. But maybe it will give you some insight about what kind of porn is the most popular.

>>2948068
doesn't look like you are thinking about 3d forms at all except maybe parts of the torso. he has a face but no head arms look flat as a roadkill cat. I see you trying for some drapery, 3d forms are the answer here too. looks like the pants gave you more trouble than they needed to.

>>2953469
blog please?

>>2953197
updated,any tips or so?

getting stuck on the eyes/face/head area, gonna probably redo them more later

>>2953855
you have no idea what fundamentals of drawing are, right?

move your ass to the beginners thread.

>>2939162
very nice anon

>>2954052
i am aware of the fact that i am lacking in places,and im still reviewing fundies but can i get some direction on whats wrong with the piece?so i can look into correcting it

what youre saying here is about as helpful as shouting "loomis"

>>2945669
If you're going to draw muscular dudes draw their muscles "soft-looking" if you know what I mean. White guys should have beautiful creamy skin. Also draw them shy/embarrassed or being dominated by girls, that works too. Put the guys in the exact same situations as girls in porn or softcore stuff.

>>2953571
Yeah, this blog seems to be the thig i'm looking for, cheers.
>>2953618
Cool, i'll look into it.

>>2954075

>>2954079
the perspective is so fucking terrible it hurts

>>2946120
Same problem here!

>>2954374
still funny all these years later

>>2954393
I WILL FIX IT!!!!

>>2954538
no idea what the fuck i was on when i drew the first one,does this make more sense?

also i need to practice textures and shading with this thing(recently made the transition into digital)

>>2954593
wow.im actually retarded forgot the image

>>2947873
Thats awesome!
oh damn, pls i need your tumblr/etc.

>>2939162
What happened to her?

did she sit down on a can of whipped cream?

>>2954596
stop trying to draw porn, ffs.
with your current skills you should be learning how to draw spheres and boxes, not advanced stuff.
and to answer your question from here
>>2954079
>can i get some direction on whats wrong with the piece?
everything. every single fundamental of drawing is flawed.
1st thing you should do is google what fundamentals are and go from there.

>>2954623
stop posting this crap, autismo.

thoughts?

>>2954870
Ugly, scratchy lines, leg on the right is higher than the other one without any reason, fingers are really thick and masculine, pose looks kinda stiff (maybe try to draw couch/bed first next time), her smile is kinda weird (I'm not sure is she just smiling or is she bitting her lip), neck is too thin for this body and it's not placed symmetrically on her torso (it's growing more from the right side from our point of view), if she's sitting then her buttocks should be squished more, dick is twisted counter-clock wise (right side of the glans is higher than the left one) and tits that are so big tend to sag a bit more.

I like your background though.

>>2954839
I'm currently the best artist itt tho

>>2954893
>>2952722

>took a porn commission from a ponyfag cuz i thought it would be fun cuz i like monster girls, so furry shit probably isn't that much of a leap
never again mang

>>2954891
ok. thank you anon

>>2954900
>porn commission from a ponyfag
>never again
Why not? Were you simply uncomfortable with the subject or was it fault of your client?

>>2954906
Sure, np.

Draw porn of president Trump.

>>2954893
either autism or trolling confirmed.
kys.

>>2954944
GTFO back to your containment board /pol/fag.

>>2954596
line-art is pretty bad bruh.

jelly like.

>>2954944
The ref is far too small. How am I supposed to draw him if I can't even tell what he looks like?

>>2954623
Whats that? Attack on Titans?

>>2954623
>>2952044

What do you think? Does the background look fine?

>>2955411
BG looks great, it's the foreground that doesn't match. Style of FG is totally different, space mech thing is in the wilderness, and mech thing is having sex with woman outside... None of it makes sense

>>2955411
background either is or looks like a filter over a photo. foreground doesn't match it and it pretty much looks like shit.
learn your fundamentals properly if you want to draw porn.

>>2955444
thats what i was also thinking, the bg looks like a completely different image. it looks like you posturized a photograph and just popped it behind that drawing that i see still looks kinda stiff and not changed much since my last crit. try to match up the looks of the 2 images by painting the foreground to have edges instead of lines or something and fix the perspective. its reading like the foot is on top of the lake but not quite touching it.
something needs to be done.

>>2955444
>>2955451
>>2955454
I knew the background was terrible and definitively need to practice gesture. That's what I like about this thread, all my friends only say things like: "It's amazing" and that. But gonna be in the next drawing, that was all for this one.
Thanks!

>>2955444
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Horizon_Zero_Dawn

The grind begins.

>>2955283
>Not having sexy pictures of the US president.
It's like I'm on reddit.

>>2955483
hopefully it won't be porn, hopefully it won't be a character in a complicated pose, and hopefully you'll post it in the beginners thread.

>>2955551
>>2955271

>>2955539
The girl in the right left corner is in a weird position, it kinda makes you think she's either very short or has no neck.

There's some perspective bunk going on with the middle girl: glasses girl's mouth is level with the penis, her shoulders are lower, the middle girl is even lower and yet her mouth is level with the glans which doesn't show drooping.

The penis problems are benign but manifold. The glans is a bit weird: while passable, it's reminiscent of a mushroom cap or a bell, guessing it's due to the rim being very meaty; while not wrong per se, as in bellends can look like that, it's a bit off. The other thing is the veins — they are absolutely huge to the point of looking like varicose veins: a penis might have a one or two veins on the thicker side and a few smaller ones, but yours is simply unhealthy-looking. There's also a series of visual hints that make the shaft of the penis look completely round (the way he's holding it in the background and the vein position in the foreground) while in reality it's a much more complicated semi-oblique shape.

Also, that guy's forearm is fucked in the background.

On a side note, there are better artists to emulate/be inspired by. Your choice/preference , I know, just saiyan.

>>2955539
same problem as with any other beginner. bad perspective and unable to convey depth with lineart.
it has some appeal because anime symbols, but that's pretty much it.
if you want to draw good porn you'll have to improve the fundamentals I mentioned above.

does anyone have any tutorials on the physics of boob smooshing?

>>2956463
>>2957149
Noted, I want to make an excuse that I didn't plan the perspective beforehand but idk if I could've done better. Rn im studying okina, brekkist, meme50, asanagi...etc.. But yeah gotta keep grinding

>>2938904
>when the wacky tobacky slams your assy

>>2939106
remove the ballsack and you'll be good

>>2939455
t. footfag

pretty much done but could use a once over

Can anyone helpme with clear references on vaginas being penetrated "girl on top style"? preferably with the hips moving front, I just cant figure out labia minora...

>>2955123
Holy fuck, that face tho!

>>2958469
it's not only the face. their art is shit through and through kek.

>>2951774

Well, it kind of looks like a normal photo from the thumbnail, reality is much less dynamic, I guess he referenced a real photo or some 3D program, this also explains the accurate lighting sicne the program had the reference quite down.

>>2943830

You need to learn structural drawing, unlike most HOMOSEXUALS here that tell you to draw everything again and give no guidelines I will tell you; the face is skewed and its perspective is wrong compared to the body, learn to line up the face, second the arm that is visible to us is caved in and the shoulder is to muscular and masculine wich makes it even more noticeable, third, the shading, it seems to be coming almost straight up from her, but the hands have no shade under them ???

Looks like you drew by folowig lines from a referece photo, try to learn structural drawing, until you memorize how body parts look.

>>2958451

please I need to se how the labia minora wraps itself arouund the dick, I am a virgin please understand.

>>2957878
>mem50
Oh, so that's where that penis is from. There are literally hundreds of artists out there who draw a better cock, pick one of theirs to emulate. It doesn't even have to be an artist that you like the style or subject matter of, just benchmark the good looking penis and be done with it.

>>2955539
Someone's been playing Persona.

What about this one? I cant make it more detailed I am at work.

>>2955539
Blog?

>>2958183
>watercolor for porn
I just don't get you guys who go for this. Do you think it makes it classier or what?

The penis looks squashed and a bit deformed, the veins are too big and abstract, and I would assume the guy is erect? Should it point straight or up instead of kinda down then, even if her butt is pressing it down?

>>2958541
>"Are you drawing detailed vaginas again, Johnson?"
>"No sir! — only sketching!"
>"Good man, keep it up!"

Is anyone here willing to draw trap for me? I'd be willing to go as high as $300-400 depending on detail and work put into it.

Feel free to leave examples of art.

>>2939165

Not him, but I had this chicken scratch when i started using the tablet, I ditched it because it was to slippery, I mark the paper very hard I have to do it because my hands shake terribly if not.

>>2958568
How's this?

Seriously though, $300-400 is top-tier greedy asshole money. You can get whoever the fuck you want for that dough, instead of some random amateurs. If you pick some guy who's not that big yet, you can probably get a series of 6 or so pics.

>>2958584
I'm looking for quality hence why I'd be willing to spend that much.

>>2958593
What do you mean under "quality"? How about you post a link to an example of the kind of level you're looking for.

>>2958593

WHY NOT LOOK AN ARTIST YOU ALREADY LIKE?

>>2958451

Still waiting for vagina reference pics please?

>>2958183
noice

>>2958608
>vagina reference
Are you a little child with parental block on your PC? The internet is busting at the seams from vagina pics. Both porn and sex ed.

>>2958554
kek'd

>>2958619

I cant interpret the photos I need to know how it looks in 2D I have already tried.

Something like this but full front pls

>>2958568
For that amount of money I'll draw anhtbing. What are you looking for?

>>2958662
>sadpanda
>female:cunnilingus
That usually has a lot of pussy shots. Knock yourself out.

>>2958608
>>2958509
>>2958451
>>2958662

Look at real porn, you fucking retard. Also, it's called "cowgirl position", you don't need to have sex to know this, if you're drawing porn you're likely familiar with these terms.

>I need to know how it looks in 2D
Are you underage or just a moron? Go to fucking Gelbooru and look through the appropriate tags.

>>2958662
If you want to be a lazy shit:
https://chan.sankakucomplex.com/?tags=spread_vagina

>>2958662
>I cant interpret the photos I need to know how it looks in 2D
The words of someone who doesn't grasp the fundamentals of art.

>>2958506
that's the difference between intelligent homosexuals and a common retarded fag.

work on a request tell how it looks so if there any thing i need to fix i can fix it

>>2958543
No blog yet, just grinding for now.

>>2959611
heres the reference

>>2959611
pretty much shit tier.

>>2958543
are you blind or retarded?
both?

>>2959611
This is mildly horrifying. From the Lovecraftian horror faces and to the double vagina.

>>2958541
Stop putting a line in the center of the clit like they're miniature dick heads.

>>2958568
there's commission threads on /aco/ for stuff like this.

>>2939447
Relax her right arm (our left) more to make it look more natural.

r8

>>2939782
The tip of the foot gets much wider. Measure the angles from heel to toe on each side of your own foot.

>>2953469
>>2953795
I'll open a new blog soon

>>2960045
sh8

help please

help please

>>2960686
Pretty sure the hand behind the head is on backwards. Try holding your hand like that, your thumb should be pointed downwards towards your shoulder. Also, is that a pole? Or a sword? Staff? If it's a stationary object like a pole, she probably wouldn't be able to pose like that without bending forwards. If a staff, the object should gain width as it points closer towards the viewer. Same with the dong, which should be naturally pointing in the direction that the torso is facing when erect. Other than being generally disproportionate, i would suggest doing another pass, flesh out your shapes more before going to detail or inking.

>>2960686
like mental institution help?

>>2960708
Yikes the hand aaah haha.

You're so right. Planning to go over this digitally (when I do the original sketch on a tablet it looks even worse, if you can believe that) so I'll definitely try to redo some of that. Thanks for the detailed input!

>>2960710
I mean, I guess

>>2960045
Of all the drawings here this is the only one that gave me a boner.

>>2952044
I forget his name, but is this supposed to be that kid from the old Mr T comics? If so, that's rad as fuck!

I did a girl with bunny ears and a tail, I hope it isn't too furry for you guys but I would really like to share it and get a lil bit of critique!

>>2948037
whats with her neck. and it looks like she has 3 fet and only one hand.

Try and make your picture completely understandable just with its silhouette first before you make a piece

>>2943711
lel

>>2943830
uhhhh it sucks lol but nice try

>>2960750
head angle doesn't make sense since the column is straight. It's like she's decapitated.

>>2945565
oOOOOOO ROASTED MY NIGGA

>>2946723
shut the fuck up youre being a retarded asswipe

>>2960750
Noice grasp on color. Though, i don't think I'd be able to tell if it were a girl without the vag staring me in the face. Maybe try slimming out the upper torso and the waist? Currently the body is more masculine. The other part that concerns me is the very unnatural "snapped" in half look; i feel her body should have a more natural curve in the spine and her legs a bit more elevated. With that, the angle of the vag might not be quite so pointed at the viewer, perhaps, and the anus a little further back, closer up towards her tail.

Also, don't be afraid to foreshorten. Try foreshortening the left leg some!

My last bit of advice is to flip your image upside down. Does it look natural?

I don't mean to tear this down, you really do have a nice grasp on color. Keep working on this!

>>2939447
guud

>>2953776
sexy

>>2960823
the amount of fucks I give is immense.

>>2960828
Nice brown nose, faggot.

>Guud, gudd, guud. Nice colors, weeb, weeb, weeb.

>>2960817
the head angle was a bit weird to do, she is kinda looking to the side a tiny bit, but with the low viewing height it kinda puts a weird perspective on it that I'm not sure if I like, But that decapitated look does come when you're in that position, unfortunately

>>2960828
Thanks a lot for the feedback! I flipped it upside down and it suddenly got a lot more masculine haha. But, thank you for point out those anatomy issues, it was a colour and shading exercise to see how quickly I could get some nice looking stuff, although dropping the ball on anatomy isn't a compromise I'm willing to make long term.

I am a bit afraid of extreme foreshortening, and it's something I want to really be able to use properly since it opens up some nice avenues with flow, so I will try get a bit more adventurous.

thanks again for your comments!

>>2960686
Right hand and penis upside-down like >>2960708 mentioned. The left hand looks misshapen: the distance from wrist to the knuckles is too big, it looks like a flipper. The breasts are also off: it's like they've been cut off at the bra, they should either be made smaller, or you have to draw the pooling in the bra forms instead of just disappearing into some portal in there (I see you've attempted to do the latter, but failed).

>>2960750
Pretty good aside from the head angle as >>2960817 mentioned, but I just don't understand why you picked such a weird pose. There are better ways to showcase as the ass and pussy. This is straight-up yoga. You can't even see her face properly (OK in comics, bad in single pics).

>>2961345
haha, I was drawing deactivated android girls, so I was going for a pose where they were just flopped there, I thought it was fun to draw.

This is the other one I drew, but I don't like how much I fucked the anatomy so I didn't share it before.

>>2961644
this is what happens when you learn to draw using anime and manga artworks as reference. you become good at symbol drawing anime faces and you suck at everything else, like perspective, conveying form with proper shading and lineart, etc.
this is a badly polished turd. sorry anon.

>>2961267
>Critique is all negative feedback and never encouragement

>>2961797
>browses porn thread on 4chan
>looks for high quality art and complains about animu faces

your wisdom is dripping out of your ass anon. I know I have a long way to go, but nothing is set in stone and I am working on it. your fatalistic message tells me you've already given up long time ago.

>>2962332
I commented on your artwork and you are trying to dismiss it with a retarded 'quality doesn't matter on 4chan'. I guess I nailed it.

>>2962443
NO SURVIVORS!

>>2962554
ONLY BUTTHURT SCRUBS!

>>2961797
>>2962332
>>2962443
Both of you are retards. There's nothing wrong with that pic. At least not anything an amateur can adequately address. And the first faggot's "critiques" was just "it sucks, lel".

what is the best way to spread your pron art? not furry. apart from hentai foundry, what would be the best place to post?

>>2962646
>There's nothing wrong with that pic.
kek, gtfo.
>At least not anything an amateur can adequately address.
thank god this is /ic/ and porn is not for amateurs to draw. OH WAIT.

>>2962951
even your writing is shit. all my sides.

>>2962951
>>2959304