/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

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>>2847941
How the h*ck did you link to the old thread like that?

Either way thanks; I was debating making one final interim thread before the redesign-no need to second-guess myself anymore.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=6jqEdBUHY4Q

>>2848003
>link to the old thread like that
What other way is there to link it?

>>2848824

I think anon means the thread disappeared from the /ic/ pages and they didn't have the url anymore. Also rolling.

>>2847941
BOOM

>>2848824
I don't know, I just didn't know you could do that I guess. You learn something new every day!

roll

rooooll

Guess I'll shit things up again.

Princess Get.

>>2847941
aw, no new roll table?

i will wait as long as it takes, OP

Rolling for tomorrow

>>2848972
Sorry!

I'm planning a new challenge and reworking some of the existing art, adding princesses, shuffling them around etc. It will take a little bit.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7mdIWaRi-7c

>>2849168
Really going all-out, eh? It'll be worth the wait then. Take as long as you need.

that Merchant Princess is pretty fantastic too, I really dig the line brush

>>2847941
boo

When we draw are we supposed to draw the same design or is making one up alright

>>2849179
Thanks, I like the brush too. It's a shame this picture is going to look a lot worse by the time it's done. I really need to learn how to clean up and color things properly, but it's been challenging for me to get out of my comfort zone in that regard.

>>2849287
It's no secret that I really like the designs as they are, but I'm not in the position to make demands of anybody. This thread is meant to challenge you with something relatively random and by the end of it hopefully leave you with something to put in your portfolio if you have one. The designs are for inspiration, but not an obligation.

>>2849312
I feel like I have the opposite problem- I'm too much of a perfectionist and it makes my sketches take forever. really annoying stuff

anyway here's a killer cutie

>>2847941

Rolling for trips

>>2849312
ah thanks so much, though it wouldn't have bothered me if we had to draw the given designs. They're all pretty fantastic, I just wanted to make sure I'm not breaking rules haha

>>2848890
kept it sketchy because I'm really not confident painting crystals orz

also rollx2

>>2849312
I'm debating just using my sketches themselves in the final image. Not really...but the pain of not being able to clean line art or color well is real.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=AiaRzV7HmfM

>>2849348
>I'm too much of a perfectionist and it makes my sketches take forever.

If it's any consolation, the result of your 'problem' speaks for itself. Clean lines, great gesture, a dynamic pose with well-executed foreshortening; a wonderful end result.

I really had to grasp at straws for this one because it's fine as it is. One thing you could try is isolating her head with the lasso tool and shifting it like 8-9 pixels to the left and repair where necessary. I feel it'd give a little more punch to the character's line of action without compromising the appearance of her head being centered on the neck too much.

Right now it doesn't look wrong, but to me giving it that little nudge helps the pose somehow. I don't know, maybe I'm going nuts but like I said, this is just me trying to desperately grasp for any straw I can to give you some kind of critique.

>>2849360
I really like that. Looking forward to seeing what you come up with.

>>2849543
Yeah don't worry about breaking any rules or whatever, unless you're getting paid you should always be drawing for 'you' one way or the other.

Interesting design, I especially like the cubic earrings. I feel like there ought to be a little bit more pelvis separating the legs from one another. You might consider changing the legs a bit to better accentuate a human form too. Think of like, that planar "Asaro Head". Keep it up!

My god I love these threads. Here's my slime princess.

Also rolling again. Also gonna have small comments tomorrow for all the lovely pieces already submitted.

>>2849360
You done with your new years comic yet?

Send help

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Lx15RANQiKM

Take all this with a grain of salt.

>>2847942
Really like the upper body to this one, the form's graceful and the exaggeration of the nose and ears make her look even more mousy. The hands and feet seem oversimplified though, especially when set so close to the amazing details of the blouse (shroud?)'s lacework.

>>2847943
Love everything about the composition, the dress, the hair, the sheen on the crown. The thumb's on the wrong side of her right hand but the flow of motion makes it barely noticeable.

>>2847944
Fukken cute. Great detail and simplification of facets make her seem sufficiently crystalline, but I wonder how it'd look with a little bit more detail and value variation.

>>2847945
Cam buccktes. Really good impression of 3D movement on the tentacles, but something's off about the face that goes beyond the intended effect. A little bit more careful proportioning on everything from the shoulders up could make this even better.

>>2847946
A lot seems off with the proportioning, but the gesture is good and defining. The teeth and nips look great, but what stands out to me as being off are the left arm and facial elements.

>>2847947
Incredible/10. The shading and anatomy is remarkable and true to life while still conveying personality and artistic style. My only problem is with the chin. It seems like the shading and lining makes it seem as though it is receding back, resulting in a lack of depth that really clashes against the incredible depth everywhere else. That could just be me though.

>>2847948
Also fukken amazing, I just wish it looked more complete in the coloring and detailing of the hands compared to everything else. Eyes seem somehow unfocused, but the body and clothing looks stunning.

>>2847949
Gorgeous clothing, love the colors used, love the graceful simplification on the face, but something seems off about the perspective on the sword. Hilt and handle seem correct for the most part to me, but the blade doesn't have the same depth.

>>2847941
rolll

>>2850154
cont.

>>2847950
Incredible/10 again. Love the colors, the shading, the texturing and the sort of graininess that makes it feel like it's out of a comic book. The mouth seems out of position a tiny bit, but that could be just me.

>>2847953
Extremely cute. Great style, great hands, great facial expression. Everything is subtle and simplified but to great intended effect. This feels like it's lost in the tail, where there aren't as many details. I'd love to see this completed.

>>2847954
Body anatomy is amazing, I love the way she stands in particular because I myself can't get that feet positioning right yet. Adorable clothing, simple yet effective fur-work, but the face feels flat and out of position compared to everything else.

>>2847956
ZA BESU because I have a massive weak spot for pixelation. Great job avoiding pillow shading and I love the background. Her pose is amazing, you set out everything you intended to do.

>>2847957
I love everything about it. The details of dirt on her dress, the great line weight, the cap, the expression, the shading. This is wonderful. My one concern is that some of the line weight does seem out of place through unintended jagging, but it's so minor compared to how well the composition comes together as a whole.

>>2847958
Fukken squish/10. Simple, adorable, the blob-slime look works exactly as desired. I love the highlighting and gloss on her as well. Maybe more could make it better? I can't think of any complaints otherwise.

>>2847959
CUTE. I love the wall ripples and the skin blush/tone you've got going on. It's obvious she ded af, but the other colors seem off as a result. The blond hair seems too vivacious and might benefit from a bit less saturation, while the dress seems washed out somehow compared to the wall and skin. I'd try to unify the color palette a bit more somehow as a result, but I love her expression and the composition overall.

>>2850168
cont.

>>2847960
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She really is fun to draw, huh? Love the colors, expression, hair, roundness, but the linework could use a little bit of cleanup. Adding just a touch more lineweight to other sections of the body, like the legs, could have a much more pronounced effect.

>>2847963
Action scene! Great composition, bare bones around the edges of the canvas but overall great work. Love the simplicity, love the dragon, the fire, the princess and the tower. Knight's right arm looks a little off angle and too away from her body, but it's minor.

>>2847964
Fukken cute. Love the perspective and positioning on the tower's ramparts.

>>2847965
Extremely cute. Simple, stylish, boobs. It's got it all.

>>2847966

I tremendously adore this one. Love the flowing cloth, the perfectly conveyed motions, her cute little expression. Everything came together on this one. I'd stress just a little bit more line weight on the legs to match the perfect linework on her entire right arm.

>>2849360
Porse/10. That's a porse.

>>2849348
Very fucking cute. Amazing use of perspective, I love the hands, the colors, the stance and gesture. I agree with loomisperson that the shifting of the head a bit could make it look just slightly more dynamic, but overall everything looks lovely. I especially love the arms.

>>2849543
It feels like crystal princess comes up a lot doesn't it? Amazing job conveying softness and hardness, and the bowties add character. Colors seem dark and value variation couldn't hurt in terms of adding more brights/lights, but otherwise everything is lovely. I especially like the unique take on her hair.

>>2850053
Coloring! Good use of shading, lighting, and I really love the style, but it feels like some of the gesture around her hips gets lost because of a somewhat uniform line weight. The mouth and nose seem somehow out of place too... maybe just add a touch more detail? It could just be me. Love the bandage. Get poor Brendan out of there pls.

rolly poly

>>2847941
This shit's been on my desktop for months.

Rull

rollioli

>>2849165
Rolling again for whenever

>>2850210
Thanks for the advice. I'm still hacking away at this-I feel like it's starting to look a little better, but I'm running out of patience and might have to move on soon. It's unfortunately become apparent that for what it's worth this is generally where my level is at-there's no use struggling with this one picture forever.

At least it looks marginally better than the last one I guess.

>it feels like some of the gesture around her hips gets lost because of a somewhat uniform line weight

Speaking of that, her outfit as depicted is a little weird. The front of her shirt(?) overlaps her pants or "chaps", but her pants overlaps her shirt on the sides. I've seen plenty of people pull it off very well but I don't know what the hell I'm doing, myself.

>>2850301
Nice pose on that froge

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xJotUPsqmS4

>>2850210
>>2850168
>>2850154
I love you

>>2850432
This is why I hardly post from my phone, goddammit. A version for people who don't want to break their necks

>>2850437
Rerolling for later, I've done the gobbo before

roll***

>>2850429
rerolling 'cause I did the frog one a couple days ago

rolle

>>2850435
Anytime, I hope I helped, and I see you implemented it a little! Maybe the skin tone was the problem, because the lighter gray works really well there.

>>2850436
Aw, thank you, anon, I hope it was helpful. I'm gonna try to do this more often because looking for things to bring up feels like it trains my eye too.

Also hope my slime princess gets noticed by senpai

>>2849666
Nice slime, satan!

Think about toning down the ripples in the puddle to bring it into line with the more viscous-looking goop on/in/around the rest of her body. As it is it kind of looks more like water with how many extraneous ripples there are. It's a slime so you can pretty much take whatever liberties with anatomy you like of course.

>>2850437
Cute. Looks like a french children's book i.e. 'Madeline' "ou" 'le Petit Prince'

>>2850154
>Really like the upper body to this one, the form's graceful and the exaggeration of the nose and ears make her look even more mousy. The hands and feet seem oversimplified though, especially when set so close to the amazing details of the blouse (shroud?)'s lacework.

Ah thank you so much! I got pretty lazy with the hands and feet orz will reference next time

>>2850210
>It feels like crystal princess comes up a lot doesn't it? Amazing job conveying softness and hardness, and the bowties add character. Colors seem dark and value variation couldn't hurt in terms of adding more brights/lights, but otherwise everything is lovely. I especially like the unique take on her hair.

Aha the hair was tricky for me so I just lazily copied the given design somewhat orz.I'll take what you said into account and mess around with it some more~

>>2849601
>Yeah don't worry about breaking any rules or whatever, unless you're getting paid you should always be drawing for 'you' one way or the other.
>Interesting design, I especially like the cubic earrings. I feel like there ought to be a little bit more pelvis separating the legs from one another. You might consider changing the legs a bit to better accentuate a human form too. Think of like, that planar "Asaro Head". Keep it up!

Thanks you so much~ Will mess around with the legs

>>2850602
I think you should mess around with the line weight. It'd probably be annoying to fix em now though so maybe just keep it in mind for later kek. The bit about thinning lines where the light source is coming from I think would make it look better. Especially on her lower half you got the lines thicker where the light is hitting, maybe try swapping it up

It's looking pretty nice so far though! Nice job~

>>2850443
Rolling again for tomorrow or whenever I get time again

>>2850602

Yeah I'm not quite there in terms of 3D texturing yet... but I see your point. Maybe I'll play around with it some more and see what happens.

>>2849666
Satan trips! Exciting! I chose Grand Wizard Smugh and then this happened. I had way too much fun with this. Rolling again and gonna do more comments tomorrow.

roll for glory and honour

>>2847941
roll

>>2850678
>So this...is the power...of line weight...

Alright, I gave it a shot; I promise I won't post this picture anymore!

>make big stupid lines
>hack away at them with my stylus's butt until they're appreciably thinner

This was easily the most arduous drawing I've ever made, but I've brought so few to completion I guess I shouldn't be surprised when the best I can muster after spending so much time is a disjointed figure with Shadman-shading. Next time I'll definitely have to go in with a plan.

>>2851040
i just wanted to draw big tits (sorry if the size is fucked)

>>2851088
one more i wanted to post

>>2849543
At this point I'm polishing a turd so I'm going to drop this and move on to the next one orz

>>2851050
wew looks great. Coloured lines were a nice touch too.

>>2847941
I didn't roll but here I draw an Eldritch Princess.

I'm pretty bored

>>2847941
rolln

ral

roll

>>2847941
roll

>>2852152
Of course I get the brown one.

The eyes WILL NOT cooperate with me. I'm rolling again though, this was fun.

>>2852221
Generic anime girl #746

roll

>>2850746
Another roll

rollo

>>2852292
delibering jestering princess

Okay, let's get started. Like always, take with a grain of salt.

>>2850301
Really love this perspective look. She's approaching the viewer, the positioning of the legs looks remarkably natural, everything about the composition is a perfect amalgam of froge and person. The eyes feel out of place though, just given the style of the linework and then their sudden presence on the face.

>>2850437
Is that some fukken Shin-chan style I see. Great use of color, great value differentiation, it looks like something that should already be in some type of adorable publication. The umbrella is as simplified as the style itself, but I feel maybe a touch more depth there won't hurt.

>>2850746
Adorable af, you convey expression and movement as skillfully as you do value variation. The colors are amazing, the style looks even more unified now that there's action and characterization presence, and it feels even more like something out of a kid's storybook. The fading of color on the very bottom of the grass feels off, but that could just be me. Love it otherwise.

>>2851088
THICC. Great use of lines and I love her expression. The raised hand looks slightly out of place with the linework, but it could just be me. I really like the texturing on the skin too.

>>2851089
Really cute, I like the expression and body language, but the shapes and forms feel flat on the paper. A little bit more definition and shading, like what's present around the knees, could add more life to it.

>>2851113
Looks even better, but the texturing and color choices make it look like metal armor more than crystals. The shading on the skin is fantastic.

>>2851209
Eldritch/10. Love the style, the activity, the body horror, and her expression seems somehow fitting. The linework around the sections with the most negative space creates the most lasting impressions, and maybe thinning out the linework closer to where all the lesions and grosses are can make the effect even more pronounced.

>>2847941
let's see if i can do something today

>>2852422
cont.

>>2852221
CUTE. Love the eyes, love the facial features, feels like an older anime style that you don't see all too often. The hand is really cute, if a little small, but stylistically, everything works. I would love to see this continued into further gesture.

>>2852283
Also extremely fukken cute. The lightness of the lines makes the sketchy style even more fitting, like early storyboarding. You nailed a difficult facial position, made the mouth and eyes gorgeous, but I'd love to see a bit more detail around the nose. The depth starts to fade around the earfins as well, but nothing that a bit more shading can't fix.

>>2852293
SO ADORABLE. Every scene you've set so far has that perfect storybook feel. You could add some whimsical text in the space above and it'd look like a scan. The color on the hooves seems odd, but it might just be me. Gorgeous scene otherwise, personality everywhere you look.

>>2852339
Great perspective shot! The head might be better shifted just a little bit forward and lower, or maybe the arch of her back may be better defined to keep her head there. Something feels off, but I can't place what because my eyes aren't there yet with perspective work, but amazing leg positioning. I like the juggling movement and your eyes have been steadily improving.

>>2852438
what the fuck dude you're too kind get out before i start blushing

>>2852438
thanks, yeah head is off :(

rolling for justice! we shall see if i fall asleep before i finish or not. . .

>>2850897
rolled a snake wife

heres my choice

>>2852583
fucked around with pose too much..oh well. sword princess

>>2852620
oops..here's picture

>>2852614
lmao i forgot her crown

>>2852628
tutor me

posting to have some reason to finish later

roll

shplerp

>>2853428
gorgon princer

>>2853508
ok i already did ogre princess but whatever . . .

>>2852422
>a reply that made me feel good
who are you

roll

fairy princess

>>2847941
o' great gods of the roll, give me something that isnt droll. give me something that i wont turn into a plastic doll or make it look like something i stole.

>>2850168
WOW THANKS, you give very kind critiques!

mfw kappa princess didn't make highlight reel, also rooru

>>2852528
>>2853574
>>2853787
Daww, I'm just being honest. I'm really glad they're helpful and enjoyable because they're so fun to do. I'll catch up on all the lovely new pieces either later tonight or tomorrow. I'm hoping to finish a holstaurus tonight.

>>2853787

herpy do

>>2853888
I like your towergirls art style

>>2853905
hah, thanks! i'm trying to keep it consistent and it's been really challenging. i'm so rusty from lack of drawing that my knuckles are suffering from stylus vice grip.

>>2853914
blahg pls

>>2853893
lazulit minion..just realized i went by my post time instead of my no...

>>2853961
pic

>>2853962
ghost princess b4 bed

>>2854295
i ended up not finishing this one because i kept getting interupted just as i was getting into it and then suddenly 10 hours later i realise i wasted my whole day on this. still fun tho.

rollin

Took a little longer and I still need a lot of texturing practice, but those are the best fat little legs I have ever drawn. Rolling again, commenting in a bit.

Hope I get everyone, take everything with a grain of salt.

>>2852615
Why does she wear the mask? She's a big girl.

>>2852624
I really like the perspective on the arrows in the shield. The positioning isn't random enough for, a random battle, but it works with the style because it also creates action lines and draws attention to the shield. Good effect! I love the hair and her expression, but the stance seems a little stiff. A little defensive gesture could really capture her power better, especially to convey the moment when she stops like a dozen arrows. With her feet the way they are, she looks like she's floating and it's hard to visualize the ground.

>>2852628
So fukken cute. I love your linework and proportioning. That style of body and general anatomy is something I myself am trying to show in my drawings, so this already has a special place in my heart. I love the way you convey weight along the bottom of the tail. It looks like she's properly grounded and everything and I absolutely love her expression. Style-wise, everything works, but maybe the face is a little oversimplified compared to everything else? Maybe it's just be, because like I said, it's extremely cute and correct and it all works.

>>2852681
Please do finish this, because even from the brief glimpse, I like where it's going. The gesture captures the essence of your subject matter perfectly. It's cute, playful, whimsical, it's all there, and I love the way you drew the eyes and linework. Keep going, anon!

>>2853508
Reminds me of Dark Souls scenery, just with the basic composition. I love the way you drew Osca-- err-- the subject's body language, because the drawn up legs and clutching hands signify resistance before death, a great element amidst the adorable x eyes and tongues. I love the beam of light and gentle scenery, but I'd love to see this drawn with a bit more detail. It looks complete and I love the style, but a tiny bit more tidying could be transformative. Entirely up to you.

>>2855072
cont.

>>2853542
Pretty cute! The hands and arms are the best features, and you really convey the softness of the breasts perfectly. The way the legs and feet are positioned works great as well, but it feels like some elements are off in the bigger picture. The shoulders seem very broad, even for an ogre, and the pupils seem too big for the eyes themselves. The fix is as easy as a bit of resizing and repositioning, and I love the expression otherwise. The composition of the hair makes it seem more like fabric than hair, but only because some of the spikes seem out of place. Again, just a bit of repositioning and reproportioning can make a world of difference.

>>2853712
Daw, I really love the colors and expression. The hair is beyond incredible because of how much life and character you've put in the highlights and shading. Her two crowns are gorgeous and fitting, but the scene feels incomplete. I'd recommend tidying up around the fingers, boots and petals, and the left eye seems a tiny bit too small compared to the right. Just a few adjustments and this could really spring to life.

>>2853787
That's a kappa alright. I love the glistening touches on the water, especially in the splash on her head, and I really love the proportioning and texturing of her clothes and skin. You're absolutely owning your style and that's fantastic to see. My one criticism is the sizing of her left foot's toes. It makes it look like she's got two right feet, but it's not a major issue.

>>2853888
So fukken cute/10. This one's amazing because everything comes together perfectly. The style, the color palette, the background looks like a winter storm, the flow of her clothing fur, and the gentle blush on her face. It's all perfect. I honestly can't think of anything to change here. Maybe thicken up her left thigh a little to better match the flair of her coat, but otherwise it's all fantastic.

>>2855086
cont.

>>2853962
Great use of gesture and movement! She's swinging that chain alright, and I love the strength conveyed in the musculature. The fish bone's fantastic and the one complaint I have is with the eyes. The pupils don't have a lot of character compared to the weight of the gesture, and making the eyebrows a touch thicker could better convey her expression. Should the right leg be so raised? It makes her look like the swing is taking her extremely off balance with the way the body's curving, but it could just be me. Everything you're trying to convey is definitely there.

>>2854228
Aw, poor baby. This looks much more experimental because you're starting to play with color and blooming and shading and that's always fun. I like her body language and the simple clothing is perfect, but it feels as though the proportions could use some touching up. The neck seems a little too long and thick and the whites of the eyes could be conveyed a little better. Don't be afraid to make the pupils smaller if you need to, the eye whites are necessary in creating the illusion of depth and movement, and if the pupils dominate the field, the result is doll eyes. I really like her hair and the shading is wonderfully done, but there's a light source issue with the light of the cross. The shadows work if the only light source is above her head, but maybe toning down the cross or adjusting the shadows above the cross could make the effect more believable. You're definitely stepping out of your comfort zones. it's really visible and it's something everyone should strive to do.

>>2854295
Not bad! I like the gesture and leg positioning, and the texturing on the skin is definitely unique because I've not seen magma elements in too many elemental princess drawings, even though it seems obvious. It's a good take on her, and a lot of my complaints will revolve around anatomy. I can see the style you're going for, so it's up to you what you want to fix.

>>2853914
sorry if the colors are shitty, i was accidentally coloring this with flux on.

>>2855277
>nezimyprincess
>dubs again
sighh

>>2855279
i hate dubs the most because then i have to choose and i like random the best...

anyways...roooooooooooooollllllllllllll

>>2855086
>>2855098

thanks for the criticism! you can even find the good things in my bad drawings haha

I'll give it a shot

>>2852293
ANOTHER

>>2854523
Kinda speedpaintery

>>2855301
assassin princess

>>2847941

rolling

ran out of drawing paper so i had to do a quick sketch on some orange origami paper i found

>>2847941
rolling for it

roll for later

>>2856124
cyclops princess

>>2856523
cyclops princess again ( . . . )

>>2856698
lamaya princess

>>2856731
ok last one for tonite

>>2847941
Roll.

rolled human princess in random tool

Rollll

I have nothing better to do tonight, roll

Just finished the dark elf, gonna post in a second, first this. Grain of salt, like always.

>>2855277
Madly in love with this one. I'm gonna strive to take a page out of your book when it comes to the hair, but you've captured her essence perfectly. The little expression, the tail, dragging the snack away, her tattered clothes, there's so much personality everywhere you look. I can't gush enough about this style. The wonderful colors, the linework, all I can say is keep it up.

>>2855361
So much action! Your sense for composition is really shining in this one. I love the fierceness on everyone's face. The action lines, the gesture, the style is consistent and fantastic, but maybe varying up the gray a bit more can add value to the piece. The princess's face seems a little off, I think because looking up is just a difficult position to capture in any stylized piece. It could just be me too, it's great otherwise.

>>2855363
Great use of a light source, as you really get a feel for the depth of the subject. The shadows are perfect, the lighting stands out, and I love the colors chosen overall, but there are small sections around the body that could benefit from a bit of anatomy adjustment. The nose seems set slightly too much to stage right and her shoulders could use a bit more refinement. A little more refinement around the edges couldn't hurt, but you've captured the princess's essence, especially with how unified the color palette is.

>>2855385
Aw! You set the scene so well! I love the arrangement of foreground and background elements. It's so simple yet well-defined, like the shine on the chandelier's candles and arches of the building itself. My one problem is with the princess herself. In that little corner, the value becomes blurry. My first thought is that she is clumsy and fumbling down to complete her mission, but I can't be sure, just because of how close the grays are. Changing that up could add as much character to her as you added to the scene itself.

>>2856982
cont.

>>2855448
Cute! Very Mononoke! I love the small personal touches of fur clothing here and there, especially on the pelt's face. Great use of shading and linework as well, though the eyes may seem just a bit too far apart, even with the obvious stylization. It could just be me though.

>>2856523
Yep, that's a cyclops princess. You're getting better all the time. Fantastic use of color, great job capturing the shadows from the welding she's doing, especially with her face raised, that's never easy to draw. I love the small touches of personality in her face, arms, and hair. I'd only recommend touching up the flames a little. It looks a bit too fluffy, more like cotton candy than fire.

>>2856698
No shame in rerolling if you're not happy with your pick. Good practice doing the same one though, and I like the variations here. Great job twisting her torso and drawing her hair. The feet and hands look a touch incomplete, but I'm really glad you're changing up your eyes. The casual and playful air is definitely there, and I'd love to see you experiment with lineweight too. I think it could really add further characterization to your art.

>>2856731
Daw, I can clearly see your influence here and you turned a fantastic reference into a representation of your style. The anatomy spot-on, the lines are simple but convey depth as you'd like, and the hair has clear action behind it. I'd recommend changing up the shading under the tongue, and to continue experimenting with the eyes.

>>2856816
This one's just fantastic. Great use of perspective, I don't have much to say here. The face seems a little simple compared to the body, but overall this is my favorite of yours yet.

>>2856966
Gorgeous! Snowy! I love the Slavic influences in the scene, you've perfectly captured her style and essence through her clothes and pose. The linework looks a little incomplete at the bottom of her dress, but otherwise great job drawing the fabric.

>>2856997
Aha thank you! The eyes do seem a bit off as do the hips and and legs to me actually, they seem a bit stiff. Definitely one for me to redraw with more time.

I apologize for the photo quality, my phone decided to stop working today and I had not choice. Any way I got Sphinx Princess

>>2856997
>>>2856966
thank ya . i kinda just did most of it and added in the bottom at the end that's why the weak line work in that area.

>>2857004
I had to use my computer camera*

First time doing a very rough scene. You can see where I spent the vast majority of my time. What terrible plans does our mysterious captor have our helpless princess? Tune in next week to find out! Also rolling again.

Pirate princess. Will finish later.

rollercoaster tycoon

role

I guess I'll try this

>>2857156

>>2847941
Cunt

>>2858957
looking nice yet

>>2858957
boring

rollo

>>2847941
ayy

>>2847941
rolla

>>2847941
Rôll

>>2847941

Roll

>>2847941

rolling

>>2858957
Looking good as usual. I really like the subtle attention to detail like that little knot in the wood grain handle Something looks a bit off with the forearm on the viewer's left (it appears like it sort of becomes "flattened" though I can't quite articulate why) and the cuff of the glove seems a bit larger than it's opposite as well even when accounting for foreshortening etc.

>>2859049
Thx. I also feel like something's off with her left arm, somehow her upper arm is completely horizontal and directed at the voewer at the same time. I messed that up, ill try to fix it later. And about the right glove, its a completely different "glove", its gonna be her hook hand.

>>2859065
>And about the right glove, its a completely different "glove", its gonna be her hook hand.

Oh, I see; looking forward to you unearthing this buried treasure in that case matey

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=yF4zXddfN3U

>>2856997
thanks for the critiques!

I like to let the game tell me what to do sometimes, even if I don't always like what it gives me :) random is fun

lineweights are really hard for me digitally. i know i could do them traditionally, but i really hate scanning and also buying materials, so I gotta find a way to do it in Photoshop, maybe..

Roll

>>2847941
FINE ROLL

>>2852628
i really want to like this because you drew the body well but was lazy on the hands, head, and face.

>>2855361
Another roll for whenever

>>2847941
roll

>>2847941
got dubss way earlier

Pirate princess tickle lewds. Gonna comment more on posted stuff tomorrow. Also rolling again.

>>2847941
SUMMON PRINCESS !

>>2847941
PRINCESS GO!

>>2847941
roll

experimenting with values, might do another one later

roll

>>2860452
Very nice, Anon.

roll

>>2860452
Hnnng....but I feel we should not be able to look her left eye, remember there is one eye of space between them

>>2860452
That's pretty great, anon. Made me unf.

>>2860634
yeah, i can see what you mean. though at the same time i twisted the proportions a bit so that could happen, it still looks weird though. will definitely re-work the face, and some other stuff i'm noticing now

Alright, let's do the thing. Take with a grain of salt.

>>2857004
Very cute! I really like the expression and the hair and ears, but I'd love to see this a bit more clearly. The lines seems wispy and could use more definition, but I'm sure the picture itself isn't helping.

>>2858957
Always a pleasure seeing your work. Incredible linework and clothing detail. I hope to one day grasp your mastery of anatomy. There's so many little touches that just breathe life to what you've drawn, from the skulls and scars to the belts and tassels, this is wonderful. My one complaint is the one I always have. There's sections that look incomplete that I'd love to see finalized. Keep it up. This is beyond fantastic.

>>2859772
AW/10. This is fukken adorable. I love her little face and the composition is spot-on. The eyes sweep across everything you need to see in the scene. Amazing background work and overall use of color. Love the subtle highlighting on her hair.

>>2859836
Thicccccc. That's just too fukken cute. You can really see how lovingly the thighs and shoulders were rendered, and I love the style overall. Great use of lines and gentle shading, and I love the little touches of personal items, like the strap and necklaces. The mushroom cap looks a little flat compared to everything else, but nothing that a bit of strategic linework can't fix.

>>2860452
Fantastic use of value, especially on her shoulders and face. You've really captured the softness of her skin and the gentle pout of her expression. As one anon already said, the left eye looks a little out of place, but not by much. Play around with the proportions and add stronger lines if you'd like. I'd love to see the legs completed but this is fantastic as it is.

roll?

>>2861290
already did crystal princess dammit

Is the new roll chart still being worked on?

>>2847941
roll

>>2861302
Yeah sorry, it's on its way. I've kind of taken a back seat in this thread so I can plug away at it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=JFadABMZnYM

>>2861290
dark elf princess doesn't have short hair but you cant stop me

roll.

>>2855363
One more.
These new brushes I was testing obviously don't work on hairs.

>>2855448
well picked up an A5 sketchbook for £1.80 and rolled a vampire princess

roll

So many rolls yet so few images.

Rolling.

roland

>>2849543
half assed plant princes orz

I'm not sure this pose is possible and I wasn't really liking it so I didn't search for a reference

>>2847941
What's the purpose of this thread? It looks like some attempt at getting free stuff instead of hiring an artist for a game.

>>2863040
It's just a drawing game with waifus involved, google it

Gogogog

roll

>>2859846
While I haven't said much this thread, it's because you've done a lot yourself. I like the expression, and everything looks fairly consistent style-wise (apart from the squid face which looks to have been a bit of an afterthought). I would consider omitting that exposed ear entirely and just putting hair there while shifting the head a few pixels to the right. I feel that the presence of the ear kind of pulls the otherwise hidden shape of the skull further to the viewer's left and contributes to an appearance of the head sitting a bit off-center on the neck (I could just be seeing things in that regard though, I'm very tired).

Watch out for some of those line tangents by the feet. On viewer's left you have the top of her foot (not her toes) blending in with the bottom of her breast with a similar problem on the other foot with her big toe running through both the contour of her breast and a fold in her clothing, might not be a bad idea to try and break the feet away from the silhouette of the rest of the character as much as possible, perhaps just by tilting the feet slightly and perhaps separating them just a bit more. Keep it up, fambino

>>2863040
Your concerns about art theft are perfectly valid, so I'll explain.

This thread was inspired by the "Roll-a-Wizard" drawing game that is sometimes still posted here, replacing generic wizards with generic female characters that were created and freely distributed mainly by a single user on /tg/. For ethical reasons it's not a thread for specific requests nor is drawing the characters as they're portrayed on the image stressed either (though I admit I personally find the designs charming enough).

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=UFmrC_W6AXg

>>2863229
Ah shit I don't know if moving the head is necessary after all. Hell, the more I look at it the more my "correction" looks like it might be worse. Maybe I'll be able to tell in the morning when my eyes aren't fried. Goodnight, you're all going to make it.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=nNMSAXNzB20

>>2863179
welp

>>2863252
gross

>>2847941
Rolling to see if I get something inspiring

>>2863394

>>2847941
roll!

>>2863264
I know anon orz

>>2863252
It all went to shit when I tried to add colour, even going back to values though I still really dislike it. Welp back to studying I go

roollll

>>2847941
Rollarino

>>2847941
it gon be shit

>>2863229
>>2863238

Aw thank you for taking the time, anon, your input's always insightful. I do see what you mean with the head and maybe playing around with the jaw could have the intended effect. It's funny, when you mentioned the squid princess, I literally just redrew the actual character sheet interpretation for her because I had no idea how to stylize something chibi-like for the way I draw yet.

>>2847941
Roll

Juggling too many projects at once and it might be a while before centaur princess is up, but I'm also really glad to be drawing this much. This thread's been great for keeping me motivated and I hope it's done the same for you anons too. Still! I hope to get to all of the new pieces now. Again, take with a grain of salt.

>>2861672
Fukken adorable. I love her little expression and she looks great with short hair. Amazing use of linework and color. Her left breast seems a little off, I think just because maybe the clavicle seems out of place, or the chest could use a touch more definition. All the values are there, the shadows could maybe use a touch more emphasis, but that's at your discretion. I love everything about this. Keep it up!

>>2861797
Great work on the value and texturing! I love her hook especially, the metal looks like metal and transitions great into her clothing elements. Her nose and face shape is wonderful, but something about the eye seems flat, as if it's set too close to the nose. The hat feels out of place, but the majority of the hair looks fine, especially her bangs.

>>2861997
Love her mouth and hair, but the right eye doesn't look right in its placement. Shifting it just a bit more to her left could make a massive difference. The hair seems a touch too simple, but your style is coming through, and there's loads of potential here.

>>2862942
Poor baby! Is she wilting? Sleeping? Using stronger lines can make the conveyed emotions much clearer, but the form looks amazing. Wonderful face, shoulders, butt, and petals. I'd love to see it fleshed out a bit more.

>>2863252
>>2863602

The coloring's not THAT bad. There's just a lot of pink going on. Color value is one of the most difficult skills to master and it's good that you're experimenting. Keep experimenting, and don't be afraid to use more saturation where appropriate to send a clearer message. That said, the composition itself looks great. Love her dress, love her hair, love her chubby little everythings. The neck may be a touch too thick, and changing up the appearance of the neck and clavicle to make them less pronounced can help make her look more unified in her chubbiness. As of now, those two body elements are clashing a little, but this is an incredible foundation to get started on.

>>2863414
I really like this one! The color choices reminds me of Roerich's Tolkien paintings, and the subject matter is there to match. Beautiful anatomy and gesture. There's slight stiffness but it looks so classical and natural that the picture might actually not be the same without it there. It's perfect. I would absolutely love to see this made bigger and even more fleshed out. This doesn't feel complete as it is, but I'm in love with what you've got so far.

>>2864182
>>2864192

Oops, forgot to do the cont. thing, but, well, you get it.

rol

>>2864192
Thanks for the feedback though I was not familiar with those paintings. I was kinda winging the anatomy and I was mostly just playing with the colors. I "fixed" it a bit but perhaps I ruined what you liked about it. I didn't want to spend too much time on it. And I guess I need to work on my chest/boob anatomy.

roll

>>2847941
Just fuck my shit up fampai

>>2864484

>>2847941
roll

The hands are a bit of a stiff mess, but eh, if I didn't force myself to finish it now I'd start to really hate it. Here's my centaur princess. Rolling again!

a lil sketch

fuck hands

Fugg :D

>>2865409
Hm?

>>2847941
rrrurrolllll

Rollan'

>>2847941
rell

>>2864221
tried to mess with some silhouettes and designs this time around

rollin

Rolled a 67

Rollarino

rollflip

>>2866497
lovely drawing vetyr
you raise the quality of this board by at least 60% just by yourself

r o l l

>>2866497
her left arm is really short

>>2866920
I think it's going back in space

>>2866837
idk what I'm doing ahhhh

roll

Shouldn't have done this with so much work to do for school

>>2867248
raider princess

>>2867295
why do i always do this..

>>2866948
if that were the case it wouldn't be in profile. also the hips are totally off

Rolling'

r o l l

r o l l

>>2847941

>>2847941
pls be something i can flex my imagination with a bit

not very happy with this one, but still fun to do

>>2869206
learn
edge
contrl

>>2869225
how
?

>>2869225
thanks for the feedback, will look into it

roll?

>>2869445
This guy gets it.

RORRING

>>2869467
>one off of trips
i get nothing

Busy weekend, didn't even get to finishing my stuff. Hoping I can work on everything later tonight. Let's get these going, grain of salt like always.

>>2864525
Actually really lovely background and foreground elements! The cliff's really clear! But that face, even if stylized, is super simplified and incongruous with the rest of the style. Unless it's just there as a joke... I'm bad at this.

>>2864865
Very cute, great foundation, but could use more fleshing out. The lineweight starts to blur around the bottom of the hair especially, and it feels as though the face could use a little bit more defining in the same regard. You're communicating everything you want, ultimately, but refinement is always ideal. Good use of color too!

>>2865341
I will admit, anon, those are some fuckable hands. You did a great job defining everything as usual, fantastic work on the values and shading, particularly around the face and arms. The value and message starts to lose presence around the fabric, but it's only because of a lack of detail. You can tell what everything is, but I'd love to see the rest of it given the same treatment as the face. The way she stands seems a bit stiff too, but you convey such phenomenal softness in the torso up. Keep it up! I love seeing these!

>>2866497
Very cute! Love the color and presentation, feels like an old pulp poster. The face is perfect, the hair is fantastic, but there's a bit of anatomy issues throughout. Really, nothing that experimentation can't fix. I understand the desire for the stylized look, but when the anatomy is at such variant lengths, you don't convey foreshortening the way you want to (like the relationship around the right arm, legs and abdomen.) Wonderful centering and body flow, with just a little refinement, this would be perfect. I look forward to seeing more!

>>2869508
cont.

>>2867148
Making me hnngh, that's what you're doing, anon. Thicc/10, fantastic work on the hips, thighs and belly. I love the way you conveyed body language, but the hands and arms seem a little 2D compared to the very tasteful value on everything else. The metal looks rough, but ultimately translatable, and the face shows enormous promise. I would love to see the lineweight played with a little more around the head, especially where her ear stands out against the back of her hair.

>>2867255
Very interesting one! The stylized look works great with the perspective, but I think a touch more overlapping can be ideal in some of the points of connection, like the legs and ribs. Some of the touches give away the issue, like how the legs seem too thin around the loincloth and how the right arm seems unnaturally bent because of the elbow's position. This could just be me though. There is not enough value variation. The grays start to blend into each other, but that's nothing a bit more experimentation can't fix. I absolutely adore her expression, fukken Vogue model, adorable. Great work overall!

>>2867298
You gotta put work into your feet and expression, anon. The arms and abdomen look fantastic, but some of the elements seem at odds with each other. The mouth and expression looks great, especially with how detailed the helmet looks, but there are many flat elements that clash with these more detailed parts of the drawing. You've been experimenting with the pupils and you can really tell, because the gesture and expression come together to convey that something has captured the princess's attention, now I want you to play around with the same cartoon shapes as they apply to defining the character itself. I've noticed a lot of your eye shapes tend to be round and simple. Try experimenting here to convey even more character and personality. Keep at it!

>>2869517
cont.

>>2869206
You've got dem faces down, without a doubt. Your grasp of anatomy is fantastic as well, and I especially love the value definition along her shoulders and abdomen. Even though you've conveyed perfect hardness in the muscles, there's this amazing softness you've captured in terms of value definition that breathes life into your drawings. One of my only problems with this is the stiffness. I'd love to see you apply your understanding of anatomy and shading to more dynamic poses. Don't be afraid to play around with the body language. What would make the princess you roll stand out more? What would make her even more life-like through a candid moment of motion? The way she's holding the club seems uncomfortable too, and I'd love to see the club completed to share the same degree of value the rest of the drawing has.

>>2869473
I'm using this one instead, screw trying to draw centaur princess

I'll try

Please gimme a cute one

>>2861068
thank you, here it is finished.

>>2847941
Lessee what I get.

>>2869467
>>2869468
>>2869867
welcome to the club

>>2869522
thanks for the critiques ! will take these into consideration for the next one

>>2869824
looking good anon

>>2869824
This is great. Loving the details.

>>2869824
I love how you inked the skulls.

>>2869565
One arm shorter than the other. Ear looks like it's hanging from head. Left breast looks flat. Feet and leg looks fucked. You could had pushed it more.

Pretty cute for an anime though.

rollnshit

I'm cuming

>>2869824
waahh
this is gorgeous anon! pls link blog

Rolling

>>2860452
damn those values are perfect!

Roll

>>2870028
thanks anon. Could I trouble you for a redline of the legs if they're really that bad?

Rolling

>>2869824
everything looks nice except for her skeletal right hand, its confusing to read is it supposed to be like a glove thing or is she actually missing her hand? if so why does it bulge out at the wrist

>>2860452
oh my god that hand. it ruins it. I know the feet are at a rough stage but they look pretty broken too

rollyy

>>2847941
Rolling.

>>2847941

roll

(I never completee any of these)

>>2870735
slime princess

>>2869517
thanks for the encouragement!

I got realy lazy realy fast while doing this but I might aswell post it

>>2858764
My attempt is pretty awful, but I'll post it anyways.

brolly

>>2871673
Not awful at all, looks pretty good.

>>2871685
No, it's really bad. But he's a beginner so its understandable.

New stuff! Grain of salt.

>>2869565
Extremely fukken cute/10. Love the linework and the motion in general. The style works and the color choices are fantastic. Nothing I don't love about this. The cloth on her belly looks a little weird with the motion though, like it's going down despite her body going up. A quick fix can set this right though.

>>2869824
Absolutely fantastic. I wish I could find something else to say other than this is incredible and you constantly inspire me to get better.

>>2871234
Aww!!! Oh my goodness this is your best one yet! And by far too! You've captured everything, improved on my previous suggestions, and defined it with your own personal touches! I love the values and her expression, the eyes look amazing, and I'm thrilled with how well the highlighting looks. The elf's nose could use a bit more presence and the face/neck looks just a touch flat, but otherwise this is so wonderful. Can't wait for your next one.

>>2871516
A little stiff and too simplified along the face, but you've definitely captured the pose and set the scene itself. Love her thighs and arms. Play around with the placement of her right breast and left arm and see how you can make it appear a bit more lifelike.

>>2871673
Cute! Simple, but that's not a bad thing, as the face's style and expression go incredibly well together. Love her hair, love her tiara, the ear's too small and the head could use a touch more proportioning. The hand's a bit too small too, which makes the sword look out of place, but this is definitely a good foundation to get started. Don't be afraid to make the features and limbs bigger, I had a similar problem when I was starting out and larger elements only add character to your style.

Pls (no) bully

>>2871682
Bleh, lost interest pretty quick.

>>2871853
thank you :)

>>2871853
I really enjoy your crits. Thanks for the feedback!

>>2873485
>>2873791

Daw, I'm glad, anon, thank you. I'm gonna reroll because I have no idea what I was supposed to draw now. Also:

>>2872646
Not much to bully here! This looks lovely and the shapes are conveyed very well through the right type of lineart. I particularly like the helmets, but the legs seem a little too thin and out of place. Thickening those up a touch could help.

>>2872913
Moth princess is cute! Cute! This is fukken cute/10. The style's there, everything looks in place, it's fukken cute. I like it. I'd love to see more.

rollor

roll..where's the original file btw? i can't see it

i think this is the op pic. Also, rolling.

Roll

roll

Roll

roll but I add +3 and -3 to the final result

>>2876952
give it to me straight

>>2879350
she looks stiff as a mothafucker. also the material... looks bland as shit. I'd atleast add folds to indicate her arm was under there.

>>2872646
rotate your shit dumbass

>>2879350

If you look closely at the references you'll realize the reason why the 2nd ladies closer shoulder appears higher up is perspective

since you changed the torso to a straight shot, the straight arms shoulder would actually be below the bent one

also the crown looks like a paper cutout which clashes with the style you are going for imo

>>2879474
There's always been a bug that shows that it's in the correct orientation on the camera roll, but it's sideways regardless when you post it on 4chan. It's just the downside of phonefagging senpai

This is going to look like shit since I have to use phone screenshot, not to mention I erased all over the place and my lines aren't super clean either. I'm gonna have to check how it looks on pc, maybe try to get a better screenshot
Anyway, I think some mistakes I did here are the hair shape not being great, the crown isn't shaded properly and maybe her left arm i slightly too short. Also her mid section is thin compared to hips and torso but I kinda like it so I left it like that

>>2880028
FUCK

>>2879375
>>2879579
ok then what can you tell me about my line work. I'm more concerned about that than anything else.

roll