/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2849591
>tfw the sketch is better than the actual finish

Finally colored something

>>2849618
and working on this although something about the face is bothering me, would it be better to redraw it 3/4?

Kinda tried some new stuff. I think too many brush strokes make things muddy. It's kind of like chicken scratch line work = muddy brush work

>>2849658
hey i like this one Fujoshi girl! Extending hand is disgusting though

>>2849621
Profile view suits your style better imo. You should also use reference for the castle btw, even the Disney castle will do. I also think cleaner and more dynamic lines will make your work much better, so try to draw curves with as few line as possible with your elbow or shoulder if you haven't already.

>>2849621
same stupid elf, same subject matter, over and over and over again.

Do something different, man.

>>2849725
Not him but I'm sick and tired of this "hurr do something different!" parroting. Perhaps it's difficult for mentally limited normalfags like you who've never felt passion for anything but there are people out there with specific goals in mind making them strive and continue practicing art. How does that personally affect whether someone exclusively enjoys drawing cars, lolis, giants or even fucking trees?

Isn't that just your personal form of projection in the end? "I don't know what the fuck I should draw so I'll draw whatever! and everyone should do as I do!". Fuck off.

>>2849735
Maybe they're trying to tell them to get out of their comfort zone, which I agree with, because I stuggle with it myself.
But yeah telling someone what they must stop drawing "x" and draw "y" instead is one of the most infuriating things you can tell an artist

>>2849621
>>2849725
The subject isn't the issue here. The artist in question rarely applies perspective to his drawings, which in turn makes them look very bland. This is the 50th time I've seen that side-view head angle when it's not even appropriate.

>>2849697
I'm not a fan of whoopi goldberg

mayb IC could help me out here, finished this but it seems really strange, lot of people aren't able to identify the girl sitting there,i've put her sitting against camera to reveal her face as a skull later but that fucked up the whole thing, is there a way to fix this hand also? hand looks really strange, ty all btw.

>>2849699
Blog?

>>2849980
I had to up the contrast and brightness to see what she was even doing, but I think the bigger issue here is not being able to recognize a body, where are her arms and hands? Her feet? And her dress looks like it's part of the chair.

Use the lighting to your advantage, shape their silhouette with it.

>>2849980
It would probably help if the whole image was at least a bit brighter so you can see that there are actual legs coming from that wig. Also the pose of the body looks really unnatural too, it would look more normal if her back was supported by the hand. Dont take my advice for grganted though

>>2849997
>>2850001
ty both, the structure was a big issue, here how it was supposed to be, it ended up really confusing

>>2850011
OH I didn't even see the arm around his neck! you are right that is kinda confusing. I though i knew what was going on

>>2849980
The first thing we notice about her is the hair, and at first glance we don't know what to make of that blob of hair because you can't see her arms, her body or her legs without a second look,

I suggest cutting off part of her sleeves to create contrast, so we can see right away that she's wrapping her arms around his neck- If you show her hands, the viewer will immediately know much more about her body position. The hands are furthermore important because you're not showing her face and so she lacks all emotion in this image. You can express a lot of emotion with hands however and they can sometimes be even more expressive than the face. The same goes with her legs and feet. Show her feet so we can see right away how her legs are positioned and they too can express things like elegance or affection.

You can fix the hair issue with some sort of knot or bright tie at the back of her head to indicate how her head is positioned. Imagine him not being in the picture or looking at her - it'd be confusing as to where she's looking.

Anyway, I think this image is pretty good already. I like the rendering on the face and hair especially.

>>2849980
The first thing we notice about her is the hair, and at first glance we don't know what to make of that blob of hair because you can't see her arms, her body or her legs without a second look.

I suggest cutting off part of her sleeves to create contrast, so we can see right away that she's wrapping her arms around his neck. If you also show her hands, the viewer will immediately know much more about her body position. The hands are furthermore important because you're not showing her face and so she lacks all emotion in this image. You can express a lot of emotion with hands, however, and they can sometimes be even more expressive than the face. The same goes with her legs and feet. Show her feet so we can see right away how her legs are positioned, and they too can express things like elegance or affection.

You can fix the hair issue with some sort of knot or bright tie at the back of her head to indicate how her head is positioned. Imagine him not being in the picture or looking at her - it'd be confusing as to where she's looking.

Anyway, I think this image is pretty good already. I like the rendering on the face and hair especially.

>>2850048
Wow, that's awesome bro, i couldnt think about all those solutions my self, after some studies i'll try all those, and will post here again, thanks!

>>2849658
Do you have a blog? I love this

>>2849699
BLO-O-O-O-OG!!!!

>>2849892
Thanks now I cant unsee

>>2849699
...

blog

>>2849699
omg blog?

>>2850132
>>2850252
>>2850293
These jokes? It looks really amateurish

requesting critique

>>2850297
ngmi

>>2850297
All 3 posts are by me. I like his approach, and I bet I can improve my fundamentals by studying him.
>Ib4 study masters
Do not tell my how to live my life, mom!

>inb4 this >>2849699 gets thumbnail before >>2849997
>whoever picks the thumbnails needs better taste

Posted in /beg/ but I think it belongs here too. Any critique for this one?

>>2850336
We've still got two hundred more posts to go, I'll beat both of them.

What do you guys think ?
I posted this in the sketchbook thread too O.O . I'm just looking for some feedback on improving.

>>2850369
Can you draw more cute anime girls

>>2850378
i'm actually trying , but i just don't want to fall into the Moe side

>>2850313
Is that a Pokémon? If not what is it from?

>>2850444
It's a gravios from monhun

After doing some figure drawing, I think I found proportions that work with my style.

there is something terribly wrong about her face and i cant pinpoint what.
Please help

>>2850454
Forehead too large eyes too low

I don't remember how the uniform looks from behind, couldn't find it on Google either

almost done, any apparent mistakes?

>>2849711
>>2849725
>>2849735
>>2849785
>>2849850
Thanks for the feedback all. I appreciate the comment about getting out of my comfort zone, I think its important to draw a variety of things. As for the perspective comment, I do agree that I'm terrible at it. Even though I do want to learn it, I don't think an illustration is automatically bland just because it lacks proper perspective. I think its more a matter of subjective taste.

>>2850507
it looks nice, but isnt that readable due to that layer style or whatever that makes lines glow.
Thats just my opinion tho

>>2850453
keep looking. Better than that , i think you shouldn't rush with this. Keep doing anatomical studies.

>>2850507
you can fix what >>2850518 said with a splash of color on their bodies , just a skin tone or smth

>>2850510
the tall guy , fix his head , it's a little big and his coat is way to stiff , it's not natural . The coat is thick and heavy so it should be pulled by gravity.

>>2850453
i understand that you find it enjoyable to find your style and such (which is probably reinforced after going through this thread) but you -desperately- need to go practice and grind your fundamentals alongside doing works from fun

if not you're going to end up either regretting stylizing too early when you don't know what you're doing or develop a pitying dunning-kruger

>>2850011
the cyan/blue light looks unnatural on the girl's hair, maybe try lowering the saturation on that area

Most of the female figure is hidden so it is very hard to read

>>2850518
I can see what you mean. it's the brush that causes the effect, I didn't think that it would obscure my drawing.
>>2850521
I haven't thought about adding color, I'm not sure if I can pull it off but ill give it a try.

>>2849591

>>2850557

apologies for size

Prompts for character designs were
>dangerous
>tough
>fun
respectively

>>2850502
This one?

>>2850567
Thank u m8

>>2850702
I..is this supposed to be ironic?

help me pls

this is my first time drawing this kind of perspective

>>2850715
trees are fine, but this is what is happening with your guy. if you made his eyes look down, it might pass since legs are almost out of the picture. otherwise it looks like he's staring ahead but about to fall. to really fix it, move his legs closer to VP

>>2850710
a little. I thought it would be funny to have a nomral anime face with an exaggerated body

>>2850740
nigga u forgot to exaggerate those arms, now u got a t rex

>>2850339
Jesus Christ of Nazareth.

>>2850715

Think of stacking the shapes more. If the VP is up like that, as the trees indicate, you have to think more of how the figure would look from down on the ground. As is they're kind of flying over? The lines of your pants and in general go against the perspective hard. I would make a box in perspective and then draw a flat of the character in it if you really need to.

>>2850336
I picked OP, the last thread was mostly firez and a lot of WIPs. I liked how OP documented the drawing's progression, and I'm a sucker for the Nabiki throwback

Unspoken Rules of selecting OP
>NEVER choose your own drawing, some how /ic/ always knows...
>never choose firez (or any other trip) or the thread instantly derails
>if there isn't a new thread 6+ hrs after bump limit, then there wasn't a clear Best Of Thread, so anyone can choose their favorite OP

Or do whatever the fuck you want, but I just wanted to draw last night so I made a new thread

>>2850991
Why not save us the melodrama and do a collage of the best pieces from the previous thread?

Firez still uses trip? that is news to me

btw just finished this one, finally

>>2851030
I can feel your pain
I'm here for you Firez

>>2851033
And I'm here for you too *hug*

I'm glad firez still uses a trip (I filtered that fucker a long time ago I swear he almost gave me eye cancer) and I'm also glad anon has set these rules >>2850991 for those of you who still have to deal with that tripfag

>>2851058
>twin tails
>back
>ass
Nice

>>2851046
ffs fix that god damn goggles. they go behind the ear that said you have the ear misplaced too.

>>2851010
I was more interested in drawing my own thing than collaging other anons work. Plus there can be only 1 best in thread.

Less talking more drawing

>>2851058
Me too, he has to have a limit can you imagine if that idiot started posting even more stuff, I heard he has a daily Sketchbook that he doesn't even post in his blog because it's even worse than the polished turds he oblige us to watch.

>>2851066
Ffs it's firez wtf did you expect?

>>2851073
It's pretty shit tbqh with that quality you shouldn't be talking shit about firez, honestly

>>2851097
>anon thinks they care

WIP, will try to refine further but I could use some feedback at this stage, so I could fix any major issue I failed to notice

>>2849699
Are we found this guy? Is he ok? I'm honestly a bit worried about him.

>>2851188
How do you learn to do stylized rendering like this? I can realistic rendering but not stylized. It's like a completely different beast.

>>2849699
Copied a yoko pose, wanted to make her jump out of a mech or something, but I didn't plan it well, so I'm just going to scrap it.

>>2850320
I can't tell if you are a troll or just new

>>2851212
I'm around from time to time

>>2851228
I tried to emulate the stylized works of various artist I like on Pinterest. Here's one example of work I like.
https://www.pinterest.com/pin/493847915373882240/

Personally I tend to paint the base colour first, then I adjust the hue slider and colour triangle for different colour in light and shadow (kinda like the method shown in the pics). I also used a brush with opacity turned off and pressure sensitive flow capped at ~60% so there's that.

sketching a thing for a print, suggestions appreciated

>>2851464
Really like this, Blog?

>>2851058
>...and then she farts!

>>2851464
Record your coloring plz, or at least take a lot of process pics, thanks.

>>2851464
>typical leg pose
>one leg bent other is stiff
you could atleast try and make it interesting

oh and the leg is too short

>>2851573
>he doesn't think contrapossto pose is interesting

>>2851575
you really think its interesting when i see this shit so much? look at the fucking pic i posted, its on both fucking characters. how lazy do you have to be, jesus. lazy pose and boring comp.

>>2851581
Good joke

>>2851573
When she lands she gonna bite all that lip off. It would be bloodbath.

Leave lip biting to the sluts. Oh wait-

>>2851587
10 sec in artstation. booooring

>>2851598
interesting...

http://imgur.com/a/KiHyK

>>2851598
Is she a Dullahan?

>>2851716
you need to take your pieces to the next level

/beg/ here


Redline/critique?

Sorry if it's sorta big

>>2851755
The eyes seem a bit lopsided.

>>2851755
Hey there anon, you're looking good for a beginner, but here are few things to work on!

In your piece, the face appears to look too smushed; the eyes are too low on the head. You have the guide lines placed correctly, but next time try drawing the eyes above the line instead of below! Also, move up that nose a bit too.

Watch out for asymmetry as well! One of the ears is a bit higher than the other, as well as one of the eyes. To help with this, I suggest holding your paper up to a light source and flipping it over, so that the image becomes reversed. This will help you to catch any flaws like that!

>>2851770
I was trying to draw him with a slight nod, if that makes sense. Hence why the eyes are below the ear line.

Thanks for the tips. I appreciate them.
Do you know any place i could buy reasonably priced lightboxes?

>>2851755

Not entirely my work, I used a surprisingly good sketch from some talented newbie who couldn't color her for shit.

What do you think?

>>2851864
Spaceship design is original though, do not steal.

>>2851865
>original

>>2851864

I like it but am a noob so not equipped to critique.

Spaceship is 10/10

>>2851716
Shine on you crazy diamond.

>>2845751
Finally finished this one.

Thanks to the anons that helped me with the face. I'm not too happy with how it turned out in the end (her ass, her feet...), but I actually don't want to work on it any longer.

Still, if you want to point out any mistakes, go for it. Any critique could be helpful for the next picture.

Yo, looking to make character designs that look like Persona-Q's art style, does anyone have any references or templates I can use? Thanks.

>>2852052
Persona-Q has some good refs

>>2851737
How?

>>2852033
YOU BARELY
FIXED
THE FACE

>>2852128
by getting out of your comfort zone

I think I'm getting the hang of this

>>2852192
And just for anyone wondering each one of these poses were done under a minute

>>2852194
clearly because they look so half assed and bad

>>2852195
They're gestures m8. They're not supposed to be done for more than a minute or 2. I've been trying to loosen up and try and feel the weight of the poses more lately.

>>2852199
"Not supposed to be done for more than a minute or 2" is not an excuse for something this bad. They can be improved, a whole lot. You're stiffening them up (whether or not these are done from imagination or not). You need to identify and communicate a pose's most powerful curves in a few lines.

>>2852212
All right so I should simplify the poses even further to curvy lines? If so how can I apply those lines to foreshortened poses? Or in other words how can block out how the figure moves in 3d space from flat gesture lines?
I'm just asking as I've tried doing a gesture >shapes>forms>squash and stretch approach but I find that doing dynamic angles are difficult to do starting with a gesture

>>2852192

Those don't teach you fucking dick if you don't finish them.

You can draw 100,000,000 stick figures, block-hands, and vague suggestions of gestures, and you'll still be shit at figure drawing.

fuck drawing pages full of poses. Finish the fucking figure.

>>2852227

Finish the fuckers. Complete them.

You don't get better at shooting by opening and closing the bolt on an empty fucking chamber.

Okay, back to grinding then. I'll do more finished figures

>>2852239

That's the spirit! Right there with ya.

>>2850339
Mary, mother of Joseph.

>>2852128
Fan of your work here, I'd say it's probably the genre of demonic horned tribal armor loli. I haven't seen much beyond your tributes to Vocaloid, Ika Musume, and what I mentioned. It's either "name brand" or "six gorillian themes combined". I enjoy giant genocidal muscle lolis as much as the next guy, but a more ordinary, boring character would force you to make the scene or idea more radical, I think.

>>2852033
I feel it was hardly changed as well. Just draw the damn face again, at least to see if the changes look better. The drawing isn't going to die because you scrapped the face like some anon suggested.

>>2850339
You're not ready, buddy.
>>>/beg/

>>2850737
>>2850969
Is this any better?

>>2852332
The person is looking down, right?

>>2852335
yes

>>2852336
Add more shadow to the face, then, since light would be coming from the sky.

>>2852342
What's with the smug anime?

>>2852345
I was smug about the fact that no one mentioned it yet, and that I was first.

>>2852351
Oh, ok. I don't get why people post smug anime. Or frogs.

>>2851464
I want to ___ Kamui!

Droppin off a couple of concept sketches for critique before I start coloring; any suggestions?

hi.
A wip

>>2852358
>see thumbnail
>cute
>open it up
>THICCC

>>2852358
Why is there so much fanart of Raven working out? As far as I know she's the least likely candidate to do so. Also those weights are crazy thin. Look like glass discs.

>>2852358
Boobs aren't supposed to look that way (close to each other) without a pushup bra and it doesnt' seem like she has one

>>2852358
I concur. Her cleavage looks like a vagina.

oops. Thanks for pointing those mistakes out.

>>2852358
legs are grotesque

>>2850454
fixed kinda....

>>2852419
just adding notes to the edit. I'm recommending the chin be a little smaller

>>2852357
pro

>>2852419
Try shifting the whole face downwards to make a smaller chin, and lowering the top of the head.

>>2852444
I'd recommend trying this as it is the first thing I noticed.

Tried sketching directly onto cold press to try and force myself to be a bit cleaner

>>2852486
>cold press
???

>>2852488

>casual detected

It's paper that is pressed cold, such as bristol board. It usually has very low tooth, so you don't get much texture in your lines.

>>2852488


>casual detected

It's paper that is pressed cold, like most watercolor paper. It usually has very high tooth, so you get lots of texture in your lines.

>>2852495
Oh right watercolor does have that weird press shit. I just use whatever says watercolor on the front.

>>2852486
depth isn't portrayed accurately

>>2852495
you got it backwards senpai. Cold press has the texture bumps, hot press is smooth.

The way to remember is that when you're cold you get goosebumps (like cold press).

>>2852502

ur 2 slo

I already fixed it lol

>>2852503
blast

>>2852500
can you be more specific? I'm working on the whole depth and perspective thing but it doesn't come naturally to me, so I don't really know where I'm going wrong.

Redline/Critique please?
took me a whole week of going back to it to finish. Am I hopeless?

>>2852511
>someone dedicated enough to spend a week
Gonna make it. I like it. Hope you add color.

>>2852513
>spent a week on polishing a turd

you call that making it

>>2849658
haven't had a chance to work on this much

>>2850113
yeah but I don't really post a lot of guys
http://butter7103.tumblr.com/

>>2852590
why does this look so gay? Not as in shit but something about that guy makes him look like a gay dude.

>>2852596
toned, relatively hairless and an impractical yet revealing outfit could be the reason why
flower crowns are usually seen as feminine as well

>>2852608
add some manly hair

>>2852636
My original idea was for him to have a beard, so I'll definitely play around with that and some body hair.

>>2852646

Honestly, do whatever you want. If you want him to appear as feminine as he does, keep it as is. It looks great. Hair can also make it look great, but do what you think will feel right.

>>2852590

>>2852674
nice outline of the drawing??

>>2852675
I think he was showing how to make it more masculine? Like the other anons were talking about.

>>2851248
something about cummy bears - I couldn't get into the groove today

>>2851248
something about cummy bears - I couldn't get into the groove today

>>2852128
I disagree that you should draw other things, but other the months I've seen you posted here the one piece of advice that you received a couple times and which I agreed with and which I was once again reminded upon seeing >>2851716 yesterday was your thumbnail problem.

You need draw radically different perspective approaches and show them from different angles. Right now they could very well just be normal lolis playing in a sandcastle for all we know, because they don't necessarily feel like giants. They're kind of just there, although I'm certainly exaggerating a bit to get the point across.

>>2850510

style, looking great. improve on the hair and everything will be fire

may be will polish it later

>>2852674
Gonna keep practicing asses until I get this good.

May I request some opinion on this piece? It's finished but I feel like there's something odd about it I couldn't grasp on at the moment.

By the way, am I decent enough to work for any small indie game dev team, or should I get back to grind more fundamentals instead?

>>2852918
Face is wonky, pose is alright-ish maybe make it a little looser, as far as indie game dev stuff goes, go for it? it's up to you, if you get the offer or not and want to accept it, there's no real level of requirement there. Undertale was basically made with mspaint sprites.

>>2852918
I think it's a bit too soft/blurry. Apply a sharpen filter and you'll see what I mean

>>2852927
>>2852932
Thanks for the feedback guys, I will try to fix whatever I could later on. Sizing up lineart from smaller canvas kinda does make it blurry, so yeah I wouldn't want to repeat that next time.

>>2852678
>>2852675
He added a ribcage and fixed the head's angle.

>>2852911
Reminds me of how Sycra colors.

It's a compliment btw as much as people like to shit on him around here.

>>2852590
nice style and palette

>>2853435
Feels like the appeal of her eye brows got lost

>>2853187
Faggot to me? 1v1 me in RoR scrub
Anyway out of curiosity are you going to put more detail into this? I really like it though

>>2853435
God tier taste, /beg/ tier drawing

S-...sorry

>>2853481
/beg/ tier is much worse than this anon

Hello
i want to draw dynamic illustration
i see something wrong but i dont know what
help please

>>2853538
That leg on the left looks weird

>>2853543
thank you

>>2853547
You're welcome anon. I actually really like where this piece is going, it looks nice

>>2853538
Nice colors

>>2853552
you are very kind

>>2853498
i thought it was a common thing to call the worst of the thread "/beg/-tier"

>>2853592
Or you could quit memeing and give actual advice

>>2853722
>tfw you will never be able to sketch like this

>>2853723
Anon has either practiced those characters or poses a lot to visualize some of the construction in his head or he just has his construction on another layer.

how the fuck do you draw hair? this is the hardest part of the body for me.

>>2853751
Look at tutorials, copy what they do. Apply with a ref. Attempt from imagination. Repeat until able to draw hair.

>>2853751
Break it down into basic shapes

Thoughts on facial hair?

>>2852674
Thank you, I now realize that the waist armor is giving him a more effeminate silhouette, which I'm not against but it helps to be aware.

>>2853081
Thanks! I've seen your other pieces and and your rendering style is very interesting, do you work form dark to light?

Thoughts on facial hair?

>>2852674
Thank you, I now realize that the waist armor is giving him a more effeminate silhouette, which I'm not against but it helps to be aware.

>>2853081
Thanks! I've seen your other pieces and and your rendering style is very interesting, do you work form dark to light?

>>2853889
cute, but the anime eyes tho...

>>2850502

>>2853889
Digging the hairier variants since they add a more masculine but still sensual touch. Also, your rendering has really improved!

>>2853936
How do you always do hair so well?

Didn't get any replies in /beg/, what can I improve in this sketch?

>>2853957
You have to grind your fundamentals, anon.
Try doing a couple of simple portrait studies and come back to it, all of his facial features look flat.

>>2853995
Will do, thanks for the tip.

I fixed the foot to make it seem more balanced, but other than that does anything seem extremely out of place before I start the line art? I've also been trying out new brushes and things on paint sai since I'm transitioning from traditional.

>>2854031
Resize please

>>2854032
Here's a screenshot if its 2big4u

kept the crit from before in mind. almost done

Does anyone have any references for making chibi shit?

>>2853722

andraeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee

>>2853952
Thanks anon, something that I always remember is to think about ribbons while drawing it, it has to work as ribbons before you start rendering it, if you decide to hatch it always remember to follow the form, if something is wrong with the hatching don't try to fix it with the lasso tool, just erase it and make it proper

>>2853936
Perspective pretty broken. Spine looks broken at the bottom, and the head is tilted way for far up for that position compared to the back

>>2850991
Lets not pretend that Kyle doesn choose his own shit sometimes.

>>2854126
>really long long
>wtf are the hands
>wtf is this pose
>is she holding a sword?
>man feet

>>2854317
how did i forget to put leg in there
re >really long legs

>>2853889
Thanks, and yes mostly ftom dark to light

>>2852590
Hey that looks pretty hot good job!

Was gunning for pixel art over an old drawing and realize I didn't quite make the cut.

I want to try drawing a comic and I'm trying to get character consistency. What can I improve on?

I know there's a good tutorial by that one artist who draws a bunch of anthropomorphized cats, can't find it anywhere though.

>>2854528
needs way more contrast

>>2854628
>I know there's a good tutorial by that one artist who draws a bunch of anthropomorphized cats, can't find it anywhere though.


This one? the comic is Lackadaisy btw

>>2854663
aye thats the one, thanks anon!

is she cute yet

>>2854718
kek, what if she runs out of mana

Done for the most part with the skin.

>>2853890
Do they look off? Should I make them smaller or less anime-y?

>>2853939
Thank you!

>>2854525
Thanks! I tried to make him as attractive as I possibly could

>>2854036

I'd go with a solid white outline around the things she is controlling with magic to add demension. Also work on her right knee, it looks so cubical and make me cringe, you can get away with the other knee. Raven's hair is already naturally stiff so you did a good job on that.

Other than that the face is nice very minor details to fix

>literally her right hand and the dumbell overlapping

>>2854718

Lmao this nigga

>>2852419

Smaller something, perhaps the lower face. She has an annoying bimbo smile, no to sound like a jerk but perhaps try something else, and maybe define her eyebrows, lips and nose a bit more.

>>2850454
did an edit a bit i think if u just transformed her upper head a bit it will look nice, good job anon!
>>2854723
You sure did make him attractive im so proud of you shoujo you started drawing hot men aswell.

>>2854745

Actually, the left one seems better.
Consider my shitty advice! (above)

>>2854723
I tried to edit the eyes men tend to have a more blocky/square shape while female circular/oval but i think your style is cute so you dont have to dwell much on it. anime eyes are mostly depends upon the artist stylization so..
>>2854748
yeah the one that i edited is left.

>>2854723
also very linear.

>>2854764
your version is giving me a bit of an eyeliner look maybe something like this rather

>>2854809
This looks great

>>2854809
yep my edit looks really bad lmao you did a great job on that eye, looks really manly.

>>2854718
kek, this background nigga

>>2854723
Do you do commissions?

>>2854718
background sauce? I need it for memes anon

>>2854835
i do your mom

>>2849591
I see did you like my Nabiki's sketch...
Well, hope will you like this one...

>>2854825
>>2854862
u guys serious? its a facebook meme

Ыы

>>2854877
I'm a bit skeptical.

>>2854871
Who uses facebook anymore, sauce plz

>>2854881

>>2854882
Best thing I got from this thread, thanks anon!

>>2854871

It's actually a Twitter meme

>>2854882
>mfw this normie bred meme is actually hard-hitting

>>2854882


>Normie

It already has it's own Pepe

Edgelord detected

>>2852357
I really like these, their design is fun and unique!

>>2854945
The one on the left looks gross.

>>2854945
loving your lines

Crits as always welcome.

>>2854962
Ear looks a little small lol

>>2854193
Thank you

>>2850369
looks good mang

>>2854973
oh it really does, thanks I'll fix it

>>2852911
Saved! Got a blog?

>>2854959
Could you explain why do you find it gross? And how do I make it less gross lookin?

>>2854962
Thanks!

>>2855011
I want the brush.

>>2852033
horrible face, everythng else is pretty gud

>>2849699
Tableguy? Is-Is that you?

>>2855011
i do - http://sladkiy-pirozhok.tumblr.com/

>>2855028
I can see what you're trying to do with the lines around the characters (especially the submerged character on the right) but the lines on the left of the dude's left arm kinda looks like he's got some saggy wrinkles coming from the armpit which is kinda weird since the guy's face doesn't seem old. Basically just remove a few lines that make it the guy's skin look wrinkly and its a 10 outta 10

>>2855033
It's the chalk brush from knkl. You can search for it on youtube
>>2855062
Sweet, thanks!

>>2855066
and here's a shitty paintover

>>2854809
looks like noah bradley now let the original anon live

>>2855071
Thanks!

>>2855011
The brush looks great but don't forget to line up the eyes with the center line. Try lining up the outer corners of both eyes when you try to meme Loomis next time. Here's a shitty edit to help you see what I mean

>>2855094
is that a monkey?

>>2855097
ask the anon that drew it, not me nigga

>>2855094
Ah, I see what you mean, thank you! Makes me see it quite a bit different now

>>2855097
It's a saiyan ayy

>>2855121
no problem my dude. Nice color boomerang tongue on the frog

>>2852357
Hi, do you have a blog? And would you please be so nice to share it with me?

>>2855150
No.

Concept art of some kind of desert tribe monster that can fly can raid people. Not sure should I keep it harpy or insect or just a nude girl.....

>>2855168
nude grils plz.

>>2855168
Tits or gtfo

Although 5 also looks kinda nice

>>2855168
everyone will go for nude girl here.
Why not make it like a bee society. The queen is a nude girl and all other member of the tribe is something like 5. They will capture male human to mate with the queen

>>2855172
>They will capture male human to mate with the queen
Anon for president, right fucking now

>>2855175
>>2855172
>This. Good thread my niggas

>>2854724
ty for the crit

>>2854964
I kind of like it. Her mouth doesn't show up very well and the pattern on her tie looks like it was put on sloppily, but she looks cute so there's that.

>>2855281
Gooooooooood~

>>2855281
Blog?

>>2855281
i love this shit

>>2855303
>>2855305
>>2855307
I'm pretty sure I know this person's blog but I'm not going to tell you without the express written permission of their certified notary public.

>>2855313
You fiend!

>>2854126

>>2855352
Why is she holding her hands in that dumb pose?

>>2855352
fuck, you can just tell that these are done from imagination. all of your drawings are so bad im not even suprised

>>2855352
Her sternum is caving inwards. Also there'd be more foreshortening and twist of the shoulders/torso if she's running forwards.

Qt faces, though!

>>2855356
Wew, what a dumbass. Stay mad.

>>2855383
Who is this seed captor?

>>2854723
>>2853889
>>2852590

I like this a lot!
Also, (no joke) can you please tell me what software and brushes you used for this, canvas size and brush size. Please and thank you anon

>>2854760
>>2854764
>>2854809
I've been working on the eyes, I'll post it tomorrow when I have made more progress.

>>2854745
Thanks, I do need to stray away from generic anime girls haha

>>2854835
Message me on tumblr http://butter7103.tumblr.com/

>>2855394
I'm using Clip Studio Paint EX, canvas size is around 2000x4300, I don't usually go this big but I find it that resizing from that size helps hide small flaws, for the brushes I'm using the "watery" and "transparent" watercolor brushes for rendering and "Darker pencil" for the outline, the brush size varies.

>>2855066
>>2855075
my figures always look like they belong to older people and never knew why, I feel so stupid that I never thought my lines can be interpreted into wrinkles. thanks a lot for pointing it out!

This is absolute garbage, but i gotta start somewhere....

>>2855505
What i usually draw... more less came to realization i need to improve alot, and i mean a shit ton.

>>2855508
reminds me of me 3 years ago.

>>2851495
twitter.com/magical__cat very NSFW

>>2851546
Ok, sure

>>2855038
Ya I'm still here

>>2851464
idk if it looks any better but here you go

>>2855166
Wow dude, 4chan is so funny.

>>2851046
these colours dont work very well together

>>2855627
But why would she do this pose? Why do a kick when she is attacking with a drill at the same time from twice the distance ?

>>2855662
Not that dude but she does not look like she is "attacking with a drill". Neither does it look like a kick. It looks like some spell she is shooting. It also looks more like she is jumping to the left while shooting to the right. The whole composition is a lot more dynamic on the left picture.
Lastly if she is casting a spell, creating distance makes a lot of sense don't you think?

This week I started trying to draw 80s hentai style... I dun't what I am doing... HALP!

I dunno... :(

I am not really sure what to do

here are some small doodles i just did not.
14 minutes ago?

requesting a redline/critique, and do they read well?

oh, and does anybody have tips for getting better at drawing figures from life/imagination?

>>2855859
Disgusting nips.

>>2856040
>>2855859
fixed

>>2856149
Lol nice anon

>>2855389
Bailey Jay

¯\_(ツ)_/¯

>>2856274
>chromatic abberation
Why are you doing this to me, senpai?

Nice clean lines though, and nice use of shadows. The stylization of the faces feels a little too different, and I think it's the cranium sizes. Left has more western, flatter hair volume vs. the more animu, heavy hair volume of the right.

>>2852506
>>2852500
>>2852486
Not that guy, but I agree that the depth is not very well represented. You seem like you're grasping form by itself pretty well though, so understanding how to create a greater sense of space will just give you that awesome boost. Firstly I notice the size comparison between the wolf, the human, and the trees. The Wolf is obviously large enough for a person to mount it, but in comparison, the tree closest to us looks really tiny. And, granted, it could just be a really small tree, or a VERY large wolf, but that would also mean the human riding it is also a giant. However there is nothing with in the context of the picture that implies that, so as a viewer, an outsider is forced to make a lot of assumptions about the piece, or just state that there are errors within it. The less assumptions a viewer has to make about an image, the more clear it reads. Although, I would argue that a good image knows when to give the viewer a clear answer, and when to leave the viewer asking themselves questions. Anyway, I also notice the size difference between the tree closest to us, and the tree that is farther away on the upper left side of the image. They look practically the same size. This leads me to believe one of 2 things. Either the tree is of a different species of even SMALLER trees, or that it is a perspective error. Same issue with the tiny trees on the island. Lastly, just remember variation, everything seems like it's close to the same size. Hope that helps.

Robot anon's going to leave /ic/ for a while. I think I'm okay enough in my fundamentals to make a comic now. I've started seeing flaws in a lot of the artists I used to admire as well as the people on /ic/. I think it's time for me to practice and improve on my own, but Robot anon is thankful for all the growth the /ic/ humans has given him.

>>2856588
See ya robot anon and good luck.
I'll see you on the other side.

>>2856590
Thanks, I'll need all the luck I can get. I've been putting it off and using "but you're shit m8" as an excuse to practice random crap instead of being brave enough to actually do it. Looking back at when I actually did attempt some panels I notice that they're actually somewhat good(albeit with some fundies missing). I guess I realized after a while that after seeing a lot of the people who admire tell me that they got good just by doing what they love doing after they learned their fundies, I felt like I needed to do the same. There's a point where you just gotta accept that you'll have to learn some things along the way.

NEW THREAD
>>2856727
>>2856727
>>2856727

>>2855627
>>2855662
>>2855671
Thanks. Corrin changes parts of her body into lances/fangs so I somewhat agree that a high-jump-kick look doesn't fit, but I changed it to something halfway in between since I did think it was in the right direction. I only kept her leg so straight because she sort of hangs in the air once she spears the ground in the original material.

>>2856459
Hi anon, just saw this and it's really helpful! I definitely need to think about scale and proportion more when constructing environments. Thanks for the feedback.