/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

Wow! This is pretty good. You have some really appealing shape design and fantastic linework. Your understand of cloth is pretty good as well, lots of artists including myself struggle with this. I think you can improve the detail though but overall your fundamentals are strong, do you have a blog or something? I wanna follow your work

>>2818150
Wow, I wasn't expecting this much enthusiasm! Really appreciate the response, and the detail you put into it. I don't have a blog, but I was considering opening a deviantart. Might do that tonight and get you a link. Again, thanks for the response.

>>2818141

Is that Eclair from dog days?

??

Anyways, I'll give it and 8/8 m8.

>>2818141
>>2818176
Wow. That's the most I can think of when I see this art. I really want to see more of your work. This is just fantastic. Please open a DeviantArt account!

>>2818181
Nah, actually, it's Nodoka from Negima. Thanks for the comment though.

>>2818141
blog??

>>2818187
>>2818205
No blog, but I'll probably start using this deviantart soon. It's an account from years ago I just fixed up. Nothing there yet, though.

http://powerstars321.deviantart.com

>>2818141
>tfw someone at some point is going to ask something like this seriously, and will think these are honest replies
Or maybe it has happened already and we didn't notice, or maybe it happens a lot and we don't notice because our usual cynical shitposting.

>>2818227
People are just tired of telling people like OP that they're shit and to not make their own threads that they're having fun with them now. It's a little sad but honestly he's is probably so far up his own ass at this point that it's pointless to say otherwise.

You've got great work, OP. I'm really jealous.

>>2818227
yet you're the one posting mlp cringe shit.

>>2818258
>6 years later
>still can't take a picture

>>2818141
Gonna be honest with you m8, its shit. On the bright side, its good enough for deviant art.

>>2818141
Are you Leonardo the Vinci reborn??

>>2818265
Fuck yourself anon, op is drawing. What are you doing? Post your stuff. Last time you did you got fucking schooled by others in this thread. Where do you get off calling someone's work chicken scratch? Bet youre too chicken shit to post your work or a link to your site or finished stuff. Op shows promise all I saw from you were a few crap sketches and whining.

Also op proved you a liar once, if this is the same person, where you said he was using supplatives like " great" and he called your dumbass out in it.

Never stop OP. Keep showing these assholes how it's done.

>>2818141
it's all bad, buddy.
but at least you are putting the hands in view, and trying to understand proportions
try to do some life studies from photographs or w/e

anyways
-widen the torso. im looking down @ my boobers rn and my ears almost align with my nipnops
-understand that the torso is not just an hourglass shape, and that the boobbers are two seperate entities from the main trunk. they don't start to extend from the body until the armpit.
-the thinnest part of a person's torso varies, but is generally never right under the bipbaps. the thin part of the waist is created in the part of the flesh under the rib cage and above the hip bones, in an area where there are no bones to stretch skin outwards
-im too tired to give proper explanation on leg structure so here is quick diagram. the thigh bones move inwards and then the calve bones go straight down
-have fun
-good night