/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

After-the-Lock

roll for victory

>>2804852
delibering nomad princess

>>2804943
Pony's face looks a little flat like a crocodile or something but overall it's very cute. Well did nigga

>>2804950
thanks man!

>>2804881
Yeti Princess.

>>2804854
oh boy

*shakes dice*

>>2804868
Nothing too much to be said against this one, it's very nice. I will say that the horn on our left is extending just a bit too far out, if you look at the angle where its contour ends on that side it appears it isn't quite attached to her head.

>>2804869
Great rendering and I love that vilppu-worthy twist of the body. One thing to notice is that her eyes may be a bit too far apart. Under most normal circumstances our eyes are about one eye's length from one another and this is a rule that extends to most stylizations as well (look at the anime "Haruhi" and others and how there's enough room for a dinner plate between their eyes). You have a couple of options there.

>>2804872
Looks a little unfinished in places but I like the sensitive rendering and use of texture. The little crown is cute and I love the blush colors you've strategically added in areas.

>>2804879
I never thought I'd see the day one of the princesses would be throwing down gang signs. I believe you asked in the other thread what you did "wrong" as far as lineart goes but unfortunately I'm a novice in that area myself, no way I could help. As far as the drawing itself goes, the hand on our right looks a little alien, it might not be a bad idea to alter it so that it's making a gesture and facing a direction that reads a little better. Also I would consider removing the chin from its position tucked into the scarf because it's creating kind of a tangent where it's hard to tell if that line is her chin or the scarf

>>2804880
I like the cute ribbon. I feel like the scarf should be a bit thinner and more form-fitting on the neck (though not completely) rather than having the contours of the scarf run from her head down into her outfit.

>>2804881
Always a fan of lizard lumps. Very cute expression.

>>2804884
The lines are very clean, especially on the weapon. Her breast on our right appears to fold over her shoulder though. Get a pair of clavicles in there pronto, soldier!

>>2804974
I like those cute rosy cheeks and that frost-nipped tumblr nose. I find the friendly, almost mischievous expression and the body language of her pose quite endearing.

"Hey anon, let's go shopping so I can tell you about what a jerk all the guys I've dated and continue to date who are not and who never will be you are!"

what size canvas do you guys use to draw on?

roll

rolling precariously

From the roll I did in the previous thread
>>2795217

Any critique is welcome, also reroll.

rolllll

>>2805495
I feel like we should be able to see a portion of the calf, ankle and foot attached to the leg we see on our left. When using those thick lines be wary about fine details getting lost or obscured needlessly. In this case the fingernails on her pinky and ring finger for example do much to obscure the shape and form of the hand and also create a strong tangent with the contour of her forearm. I feel there is something a little strange happening near the breast and armpit on our right hand side but it's hard for me to put into words. I would consider trying to visualize her body near that portion of the sash and perhaps you'll see what I'm talking about.

Any advice? Trying to go for thicc. First time trying to do a midget.

>>2806279
With regards to the girl on the left I feel like she's in this sort of uncomfortable area in-between normal proportions and 'short stack' ones that makes it look more like unintentionally poor anatomy than a stylistic choice. Consider looking closely at artists you associate with the genre and look how they do it. When looking it up myself I'm seeing torsos that tend to be either one or two heads high (at most) or somewhere in between-with the head often being close to the width of the entire body.

>>2806436
I don't know any artists that draw short thicc midgets.

Rohlun

lorr

rool

rawl

>>2806459
Me neither, but if it's something you're interested in pursuing you're going to have to find some and take a close look at the sort of things they do.

>>2804837
ᴙ oll

just a quick sketch... havent drawn in over a year. gonna try and pick it up again...

>>2805000

Aw I got posted in a new thread! Dis feels good. Hope I'm on my way to making it. Thank you for the good eye and kind words, gonna keep the momentum going. Rolling. Also dem trips.

roll

rattle my roll

>>2804837
ROOOOOOOOOOOOLIN for no bugs (watch me get bugs anyway)

>>2805000
>http://tower-girls.booru.org/
Doing the lord's work anon, thanks for the motivation

useless roll

>>2807476

reroll to post a smaller image.

>>2807569
Monkey princess. Fooo

im just happy i finally got this pose close to what i wanted, i dont care if everything else is trash, this pose took way too long to get """"decent""""

i dont care if everything else is trash, im just happy i got the pose itself close to what i wanted. this fucking pose was wracking my brain for a good while.

also i guess this is another roll

>>2807647
Loot raider princess & friends

rooolling

>>2807714
but
>>2807731
Imp princess, usual saturday night.

Rolling~

>>2807789
Super messy Crystal Princess, mainly just trying out a different coloring style.

>>2806637

Very cute, I like the ears and positioning of the limbs overall. I feel like her left breast (our right) seems off-position though, especially compared to the natural rhythm of her right one.

>>2807546

Could really use some stronger points of contrast where some of her clothes/limbs meet with each other and with the environment. I love the effects and I love the clothing direction overall, but without better value and definition, it's hard to tell that she's even female.

>>2807647

What da fug, senpai, nicely done lol. Seriously jelly of how you drew those ta tas.

>>2807670

Cute, fundamentally recognizable, but there's a few proportioning and anatomy issues that, ultimately, with mileage, you'll get down in no time. I like the cloak in particular, rough and simple, but you clearly defined the motion.

>>2807714

Same issue as with the faerie, the shades blur into each other too suddenly, to the point where all that's recognizable is that there's a warrior striding through a battlefield. Inherently not bad, and the mist effect on the cloak is lovely, but it's hard to tell that that's a raider princess.

>>2807779

Good gesturing, hands, and expression, and the forearms remind me of a lot of FF9 and Tactics artwork. I get the mean drunk vibe you were going for (I hope), but her left breast looks flatter compared to the fullness of the right one. Just a touch of highlighting will give a better impression there. Also if you make the handle on the stein a little bit more pronounced, the item will have more character in the composition. That could be an opinion thing though, it's up to you. Great work overall.

>>2807809

Super messy but also super cute. Feels a bit incomplete though. The color choices are good, but the hair has what looks like the beginnings of mineral cleavage and hardness while the rest of her doesn't share the same angular depth. It makes it look like she's wearing crystalline headgear rather than that being her hair.

Djinn

rollin

>>2804868
Is this a Jojo reference

>>2807970
Fantastic color, I love the strategically placed areas of high saturation. Great movement and characterization.

>>2807970
ooo very nice

>>2807970
Nice. I love the gesture, but I feel the head is a bit big and the arms are rather tiny.

>>2808132
I would assume the head was deliberate; I think the arms are long enough as well but I suppose the stylized head with how much it dwarfs them could cause a degree of confusion if you're looking at it more like a figure drawing than a cartoon.

rollin

>>2807933
Yeah as soon as i posted it i noticed her left breast was a tad... off. Thank you for the encouragement. Ima try and keep @ it. I need to work on outfits and hips/legs

>>2804837
Rollan

>>2805764
Thanks for the criticism, much appreciated. I think her breast was supposed to be a bit higher and towards the side. I totally forgot to paint her nails, great that you mentioned them. I think I improved the pointers now.

>>2806656

Sphinxess Prinxess. I hope my lines are getting better. Rate my catbird pls

>>2809365
Fun expression, gotta do something about that uniform line weight though, makes everything look flat. Also it looks like her calves/lower legs are much, much longer than her thighs. Her foot and leg on our left that's crossing behind her other leg would be further away on the ground plane so it shouldn't appear 'lower' than the other one if you know what I mean

>>2809807

I see what you mean. Thank you, I'll change it up.

rolll

roll

rolly polly

>>2804837
Rollerino

roll88

Are absolute noobs allowed to participate too?

>>2810221
Of course, just give it your all and have fun with it

rollin

rollercoaster tycoon

>>2810279
Just a quick sketch, i can't believe i got the human.

Rollan

Armadillo

>>2810317
Well done regardless, for whatever reason as simple as it is I'm somehow given the impression you're actually hiding a pretty strong power level.

Or maybe I;m thinking about thos Boobs

>>2810440
Never reveal your full power level on 4chan.

>>2810456
oh, you tease

>>2804837
>roll

>>2810430
Might do more for this later

>>2810764
Interesting pose taking full advantage of the froge anatomy. I like the strong, clean lines and simple colors. The color pattern on the face kind of looks like "jowls" and I'm not sure how I feel about that, and to me it looks like the eye on our left is a bit flat and could stand to bulge out a bit more from its socket. Good work overall.

Let's give it another go.

>>2810317
cont.
>>2811326
I guess it was only fitting for my next roll to be a knight :D

>>2811156
Thanks for the crit, man. I'll totally fix up that eye. As for the jowls, I think I had pic related in the back of my mind and didn't realize it. I'll see what looks best for those cheeks, whether I should recolor them or just scrap that idea

Rolling

>>2811451
I feel like an ahegao might have been totally appropriate here

>>2811895
For who? and why?

>>2811451
>you will never be a fire-breathing dragon with tiny, tiny wings

Just fuck my whole life up f a m.

>>2811897
Not him but when is an ahegao face not appropriate? The answer is never. It is never not-appropriate.

rolling

rorru

First time roll to move my lazy ass.

Remember to deliver your rolls, or this thread has no point.

>>2813479
Here she is. princess liftsherdresstohigh

You guys make it look so easy...

roll for doodle

>>2813647
HNNG

Take care of that mutant back foot, her shoulder cleavage (is that supposed to be a clavicle?), her claw like hand on our left side and we have a date. Keep workin'!

>>2813647
Those arms are broken, brev.

Rolling.

>>2814737
Large, naked breasts are a pain to draw. Good thing clothing exists.

>>2805495
Quicker sketch, wasn't really happy with the pose so I didn't render it.

>>2814794
Bewbs

The eyes are slightly different sizes and different shapes. Note the almost "triangular" quality of the eye on our right and how it contrasts with the more even-keeled eye on our left, consider choosing one shape or the other and consolidating them. When placing a graphic design on an article of clothing or really anything with form on it such as you have with that little star think about how the form might alter the appearance of that shape to the viewer and draw accordingly so that it will contribute to the overall solidity of that form rather than work against it.

One thing a lot of people do is draw things like tattoos or designs or similar things on their own layer and then shaping it with the "warp" tool in Photoshop.

>>2815034
Cute. Mind those line tangents again. The contour of her forearm running parallel to the contour of her leg has the two lines practically merging into one another. Also it looks like her leg on our left (the one crossing over that ends on our right) is a bit longer than her other leg. The hair on her head poking out behind her arm looks more like pit hair than anything-it's essentially another tangent. Keep workin'!

http://schweizercomics.tumblr.com/post/11966164633/the-schweizer-guide-to-spotting-tangents

roll

i wanted to draw something before sleeping so i did this as fast as i could, good night!

Roll

>>2816604
sleep tight mousey

>you're probably awake rn tho

>>2816052
Thanks for the advice, do you know if SAI has anything similar to the warp tool?

>>2817287
I don't, sorry man.

rololelulul~

>>2817384
Unf, her left arm looks a bit off and her face too but overal it is well done.
Would fap to.

>>2804837
roll

>tfw all I have is my Samsung Note rn to draw with
Dis gon b gud

>>2816052
Thank you for pointing it out! Me and tangents seem inseparable..

roll it

rollinnn

Rolllercoaster

roll

>>2818661

>>2818760
Very creative and cute, though as a disembodied head for all practical purposes I suppose it's a little on the safe side. I like the concept and how the angular forms of her "tail" and hair tie together. Those subtle, simple gradations on her clothing are also fantastic.

For what it is it's more or less flawless. You could consider thickening the eyebrow seen on our left very slightly to make it more congruent with the one on the right-not necessarily because what you have is incorrect-but simply to make it appear less congested by its own outlines which are converging in on themselves. The angle of where the eyebrows terminate near the "keystone" appear to be a slight departure from one another. Also with her face turned slightly to the viewer's left I can't help but feel the little "cheek" suggestion at the edge of the mouth would look better on the opposite side to kind of give the impression of an overlapping form.

Well done!

>>2817401
Having a break.

RoII

>>2808694
Used this post as my roll. I'm happy with how she turned out, probably going to render this one. Hope this time I succeeded in avoiding tangents.

>>2818865
Thanks for the crit friend you have a keen eye for these things =) It is on the safe side, it was only supposed to be something quick to get me started on some serious work.

roll

>>2818946
I think the lines are good but the composition is eh. You really don't need that whole left side. Then you should add the shade from the umbrella.

>>2820440
Yeah i didn't plan anything out before i drew it,
i was just doodling.

If i redid it, i would put the dango shop behind her, a road and maybe some bamboo.
But im not that invested in the picture.

roll

Plz

>>2813647
thanks for the critique so far. raider took a lot longer after the bashing, but i am actually quiet pleased in how she turned out. (That keep workin was quiet important ;P)

I'm going to keep working on it and I'll eventually paint
How do I legs?

>>2821769
Jerk off to more leg/thigh porn.

>>2821769
It does look a bit awkward, try putting the legs up?

>>2818946
Simple and charming. I could be wrong, but the legs appear JUST a bit short both at the thigh and calf relative to the body. If you pull your foot back and kind of tuck your calf into your thigh and make them as parallel to one another as possible I believe your heel should come pretty close to making contact with the outer contour of your ass. If you sit on the ground and pull your knees towards your chest they should peak at close to your clavicle.

>>2821617
No problem paisan. With this one I'd say mind some of your proportions. Those fingers at viewer's left are all of very different thicknesses when they should be a bit more uniform. That belt running along the contour of her big ol' tiddy is something of a problem besides creating a minor line tangent. The way it changes angles like that works against the solidity of the character's form, I would recommend having it travel in one arc informed by the portion on the viewer's right. Also, instead of drawing that "pinch" right there consider the rigidity of a leather belt. Draw it straight but add a little "compression point" on the contour of the clothing near the obliques as they're being tucked into that tight-ass belt. Keep it up.

>>2821769
The legs aren't particularly badly drawing but they do indeed appear too short, particularly the calves. Stretch them out with the transform tool a little bit. Just eyeballing it I'd say they need to be about 10-15% longer. Keep workin'.

>>2821769
Her left arm is far too long. Also the width of the upper arm makes her look skeltal

>>2822503
The cat princess sprite has freakishly long arms, anon. Her hands/paws end at the end of her dress /by her knees or shins.
Look at the arms in comparison to fairy princess

roll

>>2807970
beautiful! blog?

>>2822745
As long as you have a reasoning behind it I suppose that's cool and all; just remember that you're not necessarily beholden to that image. This is more an exercise to inspire you to make a completed drawing for your portfolio or just sketch for fun/practice-doesn't necessarily have to be as on-model as all that.

Roll

some silhouettes
may expand on one or two of these later

rollyolly

roll

Rolling

Still not any good, but hey.

PRINCESS GET!

>>2804837
roll

ロリング

>>2826422
And here she is.

>>2804837
rollarino

rolan

>>2825047

I didn't want to post it because it's shit(per usual). But oh well.

Princess Get.

>>2826670
Next time look for reference photos

>>2826676

I honestly don't even know why i still do this.

>>2826704
Dont beat yourself up over it, just study more and dont be afraid to use refrence. Artists dont just start out knowing all shit. If you wanna get good you gotta push yourself.

rick rolling

Rrrrrrrrrrrrrroollllllllll

rolll

>>2826741

they see me rollin'

>>2826938
human skulls don't work that way, even if you cut it in half in that direction. You fucking shoe horning asshole retard.

roll

Leggo

>>2827215
Orc artisans sand and hollow out skulls and bones for decoration, obvs. It's the height of orc fashion.

But yeah, I see what you're saying.

>>2827187
reroll on that

Reeeeoll

>>2826602
noice

roll

Rolling rolling.

*rolls*

>>2828452
I rolled Nomad-Princess. I'll probably finish it properly tomorrow.

>>2826602
I'm pretty sure I'm used to follow you on Tumblr. You draw a lot of psychedelic stuff, fog/smoke and girls with hairy legs right? Proportions used to remind me of Schiele too.

wip

>>2804837
Rollio

>>2828550
nezumi
(also roll I guess!)

roll

>>2828614

Hey, that's pretty good. I really like your style. The eyes seem a bit expressionless but I have a thing for eyes and that might be just me. Cute as fuck.

>>2828642
thank you! I'm not actually used to drawing in this kind of painterly style, so I had a hard time making her eyes look....non corpse-like

>>2828635
rolled a slime lady

>>2804837
roll

>>2804837
Roll

>>2828360
Thanks, senpai.
>>2828504
No, the tumblr you follow isn't me. I rarely draw girls, never one with hairy legs.

>>2828681
Cute.

The Roll

>>2804837
i did itttt

>>2829234
Congratulations anon!

>>2804837
rolling

>>2829235
thatnks we will do our best to be happy together

rolls

>>2826602
Well done. I like how conscious you were of the very subtle tilt of the head by exposing just a liver more of her ear on our right, obscured as it is by her muschroom top. I feel that the top contour of her arm running across her chest and the contour of her chest are kind of converging in on one another. Consider either having the forms of her tiddy conspicuously overlapping her forearm slightly (and perhaps her upper arm on our left as well). Also, it appears that her upper arm on our right might be slightly thicker than the one on our left. Consider how the torso, which is turned towards the viewer's right side, would obscure a portion of the arm on that side.

>>2826670
>>2826704
Don't be discourgaed. I can see a little Bridgman in those arms. I can tell you're practicing. I would forego any time-consuming refinement measures like inking for now and focus on sketching alone with most everything you do. You will be able to pump out a lot more drawings if you don't spend all that time hitting them with a felt-tip. Keep working!

Note how you have those shading lines on her left arm that run through both the hair and her arm, that causes the viewer confusion and it makes it hard to tell where the arm ends and the hair begins. This is exacerbated by how that hair "follows through" to her bicep and upper arm in general on that side.

>>2826938
I like the colors. She's a bit uneven and it doesn't look deliberate given her hirsute neck posture. She looks like she's leaning towards our left from the waist up but her head is perfectly straight on, which is why her sternum is encroaching on the left side of her face. I feel like her legs should be slightly longer, also there's a pretty big discrepancy in size between her left lower leg and her right. Keep practicing!

>>2829234
What brush did you use for this?

>>2829282
it's pencil tool, anon

>>2829234
anon, want to watch me eat this flower?

>>2829234
>>2829370
I love your style Anon, do you have somewhere I can follow you?

>>2828649
You should practice it more. It's really nice looking.

>>2827187
I like how you made it into a sort of card. Lookin' good, the horn on our right appears to be a bit too high relative to the other one. I also feel like the hand overlapping the other hand doesn't appear to be interacting with its counterpart in space, observe how the fingers on the hand clasping the cup and further away from the viewer look a bit more robust. Also, that crown might look a bit better if it were closer to being centered and perhaps even favoring the opposite side it is now slightly. Well done, keep it up.

>>2828491
The superlative detail kind of gives off an uncanny valley-like vibe. I like the eyes.

>>2828614
Pretty. I like how many strokes are layered over everything. Something seems a bit off with how the mouth is crooked to me but I can't quite put my finger one it. Perhaps it's how it's a biit longer on one side than the other or just how the bottom lip seems to originate on the corner of the mouth on one side but doesn't quite make it all the way on the other (I think this might be an actual observable phenomenon depending on how we have our lips stretched or pursed, etc. ). Lovely stuff overall.

>>2828681
>you will never have a slime wife with big slimy boobies

I don't even want to live anymore, f a m.

Very cute stuff. Mind the contour of her hair that emerges directly from that "gloop" near the base of her deltoid. That there's a tangent.

>>2829234
Adorable, wonderful etc.

That frilly collar thing is a fun part of her design but it also creates quite a jumble up near her shoulders because of the thick outlines running into and across from each other. I would think pretty hard about how you draw that and whether you might want to omit the little suggestion of breasts entirely or perhaps use a different color to help separate it from the collar and its half-dozen multi-directional lines.

>>2829281
Pretty good critiques, my dude.
Thanks for taking your time to analyze my piece. I'll take my notes and try to be more careful with the anatomy next time.

>>2829476
haha, thank you. the boobs were indeed an afterthought; in the thumbnail, i thought mushroom princess had her arms crossed, but then saw they were giant boobs.
>>2829452
thanks, ahh i'm actually using a different style for this thread than i normally would. i'm working on getting a tumblr or something together after having dropped offline for a long time.

>>2829370
>anon, want to watch me eat this flower?

Y-...yes.

>>2821786
niice ref!

>>2829506
Really good, I look forward to some more. Definitely post your Tumblr.

rollin

>>2828173
cat get
>>2829476
hey thanks for the critique, friend.
i agree, especially with the hands. drawing them in general is difficult for me but i feel like practicing them interacting with each other would make for a great exercise

r-roll

Rolling.

lolling

>>2829697
i dont like snek. Something quick.

>>2828614
notha wip for yall

>>2829460
thank you! I will!

>>2829476
YEAH I think it's because the teeth aren't totally centered in the mouth? It's been bothering me quite a bit actually. Thank you!

sorry guys i got kinda drunk

>>2829741
it's a good snek tho

Rorru

roru~

>>2828363
Too lazy to make it decent. Also, roll.

>>2829793
and rolling again!

>>2804837
roll

>>2830777
The original design was very confusing to me like is she supposed to have a keyhole in her torso?

>>2819228
Since I always use a frontal light source, I thought it'd be good practice to use a back light now. Didn't find very good references though, but it feels okay to me.

>>2831117
I thought that as well, but it doesn't matter. You don't have to copy it exactly, it's nice to see how others interpret the design. I like yours, the left upper arm looks a bit weird though, and the lower arm is pretty long compared to it.

>>2831478
thanks for pointing it out, there was a lot of weirdness I tried to do some quickfixes here and there though the result is questionable

>>2804837

roll

roll

Yeye

>>2831784
weeb sword princess

>>2829688
Looking good bud. Think I'd let you get away with that tangent by her elbow fluff and her twin tails though? Step it up paisan!

>>2829741
Very pretty. Love the disdainful expression.

The "grecian" design on her armlet is a nice touch but if you made it a bit more symmetrical it would perhaps accentuate the form of the armlet itself a little better (though being an imaginary design it's not "wrong" per se, just a suggestion). I feel like her clavicle might just a bit low and that she could also use a subtle (less subtle?) suggestion of a trapezius to kind of delineate it from the shoulder on viewer's left side. As-is it appears to be very close to one solid straight line.

Good work.

>>2829892
Cute stuff. Because of that kind of inward curve that originates near the deltoid on her arm closest to the viewer it almost looks like that arm is both in front of her torso and behind it at the same time. As an aside, as far as I recall you might be the first person to draw Kappa Princess. Congratulations!

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wL3boAkvkA4

>>2830731

Ear is a bit small and low given the downward tilt of her head. Remember, ear fits into an area about as large as the gap between the brow of the skull (not necessarily the eyebrows) and base of the nose.

>>2830748
Very, very nice. I don't have much else to say. I presume this may have been a deliberate choice but just in case: the horn on viewer's right might be a little asymmetrical; going off of the tilt of the head you might want to let the angles between the features of the face inform you of how the horns might similarly be arranged in space. Nonetheless, I like pretty much everything about this from the rockin' triclops tiddy to the filter you used that makes it look like a scan from a Dungeons and Dragons art book

Keep it up.

>>2831716
Legs look a little disproportionately long but I could be wrong, it's subtle. Conversely I feel like the neck could be JUST a bit longer. Not bad!

>>2830748
I'm going to give you another (You)

>>2831899
The subtle portions of reflected light on the kimono are fantastic. That spot near her wrist on the kimono you used to imply a sheer fabric is just great-both as a concept and how you'd executed it. I'd say the only thing I have a problem with so to speak is the sword itself, which looks like it was something of an afterthought-its blade and hilt don't seem to be related to each other in any meaningful way in perspective. Regardless, this is gorgeous work when taken for the sketch that it in many ways is. Kudos.

>>2831733
Roll again cus I can't decide

>>2832115
Uu-h, roll again? Sorry, this is totally cheating ;-;

bumporoll

roorru~

rolling in the deep

>>2804837
roll

Rollerino

Figure i'd join in

>>2804837
Rooolll

Roll

>>2831992
Thanks man! (I'm the guy that did >>2830748 ). I'm still trying to teach myself how to paint and stuff w/o lineart so I'm glad it's looking ok.
And thank you for the tip about the horns. I just sort of randomly put them in, I'll pay more attention to it next time.
Also thanks for being a genuinely Cool Guy™ with all these crits

>>2832028
Thanks so much for the critique! And I agree, the sword is super wonky, rushed it.

>>2804839
hot. also, rolling.

>>2829892
kapa

>>2830748
wip, I have no idea what I'm doing with this one

make me finish this i'm in rendering hell

crits welcome

>>2833981
First off, I really like this color scheme!! You've definitely got that goin for ya.
My one crit would be that you made her irises VERY big, so much so that there's no more whites of her eyes. This sort of gives off a walled-eyes expression because we can't really tell where she's looking.
I doodled up one solution, but there's really a myriad of easy fixes for this.

>>2807933
Sorry, i'm late. Thank for all those usefull comments. Will come again.

>>2804837
roll


r noobz sketch welcomed?

>>2834157
cant spell dilivary..

>>2834213
sorry ... herea a rotated version

>>2833908
I was gonna give her clothes but then I got lazy so

>>2834307
ugly

>>2834360
thanks!

>>2832115
WIP, why does it look like shit? ;-;

>>2834440
Sry, low res here

Rollerino

>>2834442
pick a light source and roll with it dood, that pillow shading's not gonna get you anywhere

>>2834029
>2834029

thanks i was wondering if those colors were looking weird as well, prolly cause i've been staring at it too long haha
your solution for the eyes looks great so i'm gonna steal that lmao

thanks again m8

>>2834392
fat and ugly*

>>2834544
oh man! keep the compliments comin, I'm blushing like a schoolgirl over here

>>2834586
fat ugly and souless

keep "blushing" this is the only attention you will ever get

>>2834632
and I'm lovin every second of it! You're so generous!

rolllllllllllllllllllllllll

roll

>>2830731
I don't think I'll finish this one, but it was fun. Also, sorry for the shitty camera.

>>2831899
Thanks! I'll watch out for that in the future.

>>2833908
I think she's beautiful. The coloring and the toning of her skin is very nice, as well as her cute little nails. I think she could use some highlighting on her nose though

>>2835138
Don't be a cocksucker, also rolling

>>2835139
here we find the lonely anon in its natural habitat

>>2835120
Sorry, I meant to reply to >>2831992
but my phone is a little shit.
Reroll, 'cause I'm terrible.

Roll again

>>2834307
>>2835149
>>2835138
samefag

Roll for tomorrow

rollin rollin rollin

>>2804837
Reull

>>2804837
henry rollins

roll

>>2835393
>CUS IM A LIAR *da dada da da da*

>>2835406
wut is a eldritch proncess 06? someone tell me. its confusing as hell

>>2835406
>>2835409
here... turned out absolutely disgusting

Not too proud of this, the hair is off and I didn't do anything interesting with the legs. I can also tell that something else is wrong, but I don't know what it is :v

I did use reference, even though I'm not that skilled with it.

>>2832734
I like some of the brushwork. Something about the arm on viewer's left is irking me a bit; to me it appears that it's a bit thicker than its counterpart and it feels like we should see a small impression of her deltoid emerging from the contours of her hair. There's also the matter of the glove on that side, try and envision the cylinder-like shape of the upper forearm in space and how the glove would fit around it.

>>2834307
The skin is well rendered in most areas; I love that smattering of blue-gray color you've applied in certain places too, not to mention the addition of highlights to her hair. I feel like her legs from the knee down are a bit thin, with her forearms appearing to almost eclipse them in size. Truth be told I feel that the side of her body that we're able to see stands out as being a bit less refined than it was in earlier stages. You've darkened it up to kind of emphasize the directional lighting which isn't bad, but some of the brush strokes themselves seem a bit hasty.

Good work again!

>>2834392
>>2834586
>>2834680
Don't feed the not-gonna-make-its (except me I guess)

>>2833981
Her head and neck appear to emerge a bit off from the center. Also, while it is often more subdued on a female character, keep in mind the origin and insertion of that part of the trapezius muscle that both drapes over and fits into the shoulder girdle just above the deltoid. As-is it appears that, particularly on the viewer's left side of her neck, she just has a neck sticking out of the top of her ribcage.

>>2836457
thank you for the crit abt the brush strokes, I'm pretty new to painting and that's one of the things I find myself struggling with most. I'll keep it in mind for the future!
(Also sshh you're totally gonna make it, I believe in you)

>>2834220
Proportions aren't too bad, bud. Got a "chicken scratch" problem but that's easy enough to fix.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgDNDOKnArk

In lieu of inking/painting I'd suggest you focus on drawing with pencil and other disposable media for now-it will help you to not get hung up on individual pieces so you can increase your output.

https://www.ctrlpaint.com/videos/mastering-the-art-of-letting-go

...and of course, attack some of the material in the sticky.

>>2834440
>>2834442

The piece lacks form almost throughout except the tiddies (and believe me I can appreciate that as much as anyone else) and the gloves. There's little anatomy to speak of and its very, very flat as consequence, but it looks like you've a general idea of the proportions at the very least. I suggest if you're still hiding hands and that sort of thing you ought to go in the same general direction I sent >>2834220 in

>>2835120
How rude!

>>2835176
Is that butter or margarine?

>>2835244
I'm waiting!

>>2835447
Could be worse. The expression on the little symbiotic head thing is pretty cute. Keep working, hitting the sticky etc.

>>2835939
It's okay bud, there's a lot more problems than "the hair is off" but at least you're trying. Keep working at it.

>>2836552
Thank you for the kind words, but it's too late for me-I already haven't made it...

Anyway, what I've done or haven't done with myself up to this point is my own responsibility! Just keep doing what you do, and good things will happen for you.

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=n42kjrhOMzs

>>2834307
ogre princess! I gotta teach myself how to paint hair eventually man, that shit trips me up every time

Rolling

>>2836717
thanks gor the critique

I am not sure what the etiquette is around her, but has whoever runs these threads considered adding the newest Princesses into the chart to be rolled? If it is all roll based, changing it up so that the Princesses with less art start getting some good art could be interesting. I am not a regular on the art side of Towergirls but just a suggestion.

rolling

>>2836802
Good work, scary tho.

Might want to consider having that vertical stripe pattern on her shawl on either side mirror its opposite more closely i.e. either bring the stripes closer to the shawl's edge towards the center or push them further out depending on what looks best to you. Such a simple little thing but it's always those kinds of otherwise innocuous details that can make a surprising difference.

Keep workin'

>>2838612
That's a hell of an idea. I'll delay remaking the thread until I can get that done.

rolll

rrrrrrrrrrr

>>2838656
Same anon, this link has most of the new Princesses if you want to add them into the mix

http://imgur.com/a/maXHJ

>>2838658
ok..don't really feel like doing anything else w/ this 1

>>2804837

>>2838706

>>2838729
damn.... thats some imigination. nice.

>>2804837
rolling

made a Crystal Princess a while ago. Kinda wish it was closer to the sprite but it's really tough to parse

>>2839416
ok

>>2839568
super cute, but the aratifacting at the bottom of the image is distracting af, what's up with that

>>2839598
gomen

roll

roll~

>>2840513
lazy mouse princess orz