/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

well, before the end of Christmas day, here's some wip stuff before I hit the bed. Merry Christmas, everyone.

>>2791943
i feel sick

>>2791943
This is garbage. Can you not see that? You need Loomis.

>>2791943
jesus christ is that a fucking gremlin

been a while so here's some recent stuff from me

>>2791966

>>2791943
what on earth

you really need to refine what you find "cute" unless that shit is the look you're going for lmao

>>2791967
Huge head (or skinny legs?), quite nice rendering.

I drew this for a friend for Christmas.
I'd appreciate advice, especially with the pose, clothes, and color.

>>2791979
thanks my dude

it's a bit of both really, she's meant to be younger and my characters always end up looking too thicc so i upped headsize and tried to stick limb her more

>>2791982
There's so much more that could be done with the pose. It's not entirely stiff so much as just having more potential- exaggerating the twist in the torso andposition of legs to appear more dynamic and lively. It looks like she's being forced to pose at gunpoint. The photo itself is pretty boring unless it's one of those splash banners for a Youtuber. If anything I'd look at actual batters in high-FPS on Youtube and analyze how they look during the stages of their swings

>>2791943

hi

>>2792029
copy that

>>2792006
I have to slow clap that one.

merry christmas friendos

>>2791966
>>2791967
very pretty colors! love the variation everywhere

>>2792029
tits, wrist, hands, elbows all a lil fucked up
end of dress doesn't fall on the floor properly
get some references

>>2792044
pop some darker values in there!

How the fuck do I NOT make my colors so fucking muddy? I do a grayscale color/shading job, then use a gradient map + color layer combo to give it true color but it always looks like shit. Artgerm makes it look so easy, does he have a better understanding of values than I do? Where am I fucking up?

>>2792145
your values are trash, fix those

>>2792173
That's what I thought! Thank you anon.

>>2792118
Thanks, I didn't pay attention to how light it was

>>2792145
read color and light by Gurney

>>2792109
love your stuff, mang, trying to get into the same style myself.

>>2792109
Do you have any process pics? Just curious.

>>2792210
i don't really save very much but these are spare layers i had lying around
>>2792207
thank you!

>>2792221
Nice edge control!

When you soften up your edges how do you lay it in? I've been having some trouble getting control of my edges in places with high density of detail. So I was just wondering how you approached it to make the brush strokes you lay in one area not muddy up edges in another.

I'm kind of assuming you work hard round and soften it up with a soft round afterwards but I've also seen people work soft to hard sometimes. Just trying to get a grasp of how to tackle some more complex planes.

yet another lazy headshot

>>2792268
At least you did better with the cranium this time.

>>2791957
I'm pretty sure if I did see the problem, I wouldn't be posting here, now would I? Just saying.
>>2791958
>gremlin
Got a little bit reminded of Incase there, haha.
>>2791978
which is subjective in it's own right but it is a work in progress. The design I'll play around with more if it's really that off.
>>2792006
Admittedly, I kek'd. Sorry though.

Now, what I'd like to ask is "what" is really off here? As in, the style/design? Or the rendering? I failed to mention before that I'm playing around with rendering arguably for the first time here, so I'd love some feedback on what's wrong here. If anything, the amount of shadows might be a bit strong in that previous pic, but idk. If the design is what you're referring to, going by >>2791958 and >>2791978, then just preference I guess, I'll try working more on it but this is how I want the structure of the face to be, tbqh.

>>2792109
Kyle's not dead!

>>2792145
Work on drawing first
Then colour

>>2792263
i use hard round (with opacity on pen pressure) 90% of the time, and sometime the smudge tool to soften my transitions up but i try my best not to as much as possible because it then has a weird photoshoppy airbrush look to it. without the smudge tool i usually just lay down two values next to each other, eyedrop the middle, paint in the middle that value, and then repeat until it looks smooth. i don't know if i am explaining very clearly you can look at my pic related
obviously when i'm actually painting it's a little more natural and less procedural. also i use the hotkeys to constantly change my brush size so its easier to go from big picture to tiny details whenever i want
i hope that was helpful!!

>>2792387
i'm not kyle unfortunately

>>2792263
i use hard round (with opacity on pen pressure) 90% of the time, and sometime the smudge tool to soften my transitions up but i try my best not to as much as possible because it then has a weird photoshoppy airbrush look to it. without the smudge tool i usually just lay down two values next to each other, eyedrop the middle, paint in the middle that value, and then repeat until it looks smooth. i don't know if i am explaining very clearly you can look at my pic related
obviously when i'm actually painting it's a little more natural and less procedural. also i use the hotkeys to constantly change my brush size so its easier to go from big picture to tiny details whenever i want
i hope that was helpful!!

>>2792387
i'm not kyle unfortunately

>>2792334

The face rendering freaks me out, anon, perhaps its just the difference in detail. I think the style you draw in doesn't lend itself well to how its rendered at all.

>>2791932
I've never seen anyone say it, so thanks for making these threads, chico

>>2792387
the eyes dont look freakish enough to be kyle

>>2792334
you gave her a masculine physique and squashed her head vertically, she looks like a codename kids next door character. giant hands and feet, and a large/squashed head = gremlin

seems more appropriate here than the draw thread

cleaning up lines

>>2792688
Mean it btw, I love some of the artists in these threads

haven't posted for months but have a wip for when I'm less drunk

>>2791932
>>2792688
I mean it, I love the artists in these threads

wip probably

>>2792334
s'kay you didn't you just happened to be the one opportunity to post that cap and I had to take it- but seriously though you should work on the appeal in your drawings. It's my taste/opinion but I really don't dig the large mouth/eyes head with small muscular body proportions. It's like uncanny valley tier, reminds me of Jimmy Neutron. Plus the hairline doesn't make sense to me.

I'd study what makes 'cute' cute famalamily

>>2792388
WAH BEST LOLI

>>2792334
you can do better

"please relate to me" comic for my page.

I haven't drawn anything serious in months.

>>2792268
The last thing I mean to do is drive you away, but, why are you here? What are you looking for?

>>2793099
Translation?

>>2793114
First one says "so many things to do, so little time, omg omg"

Second one: "I better make a list. A colorful one, with a table of contents, and stickers, and..."

>>2793116
hehe very cute

How the fuck do you guys do it? I spent the whole year trying to atleast get a glimpse of a good drawing, I fucking hate art I hate you all fucking dipshit who had the idea of drawing things and got good at it fuck.

All around me are familiar faces worn out places worn out faces bright and early for their daily races no expression no expression hide my head I want to drown my sorrow no tomorrow no tomorrow.

I can feel myself stagnating. Destroy me

>>2793134
How often do you study?

>>2793155
10 hours a week maybe, not sure. I know how often I wanna die, that's pretty easy.

>>2793134
Calm the fuck down, and keep drawing. There's some correlation between learning and play. As in, the best way to learn appears to be play(or the people who learn best treat it as play), so basically, find what you enjoy in it and repeat it, learning alongside as you go.

>>2792833
y-you love me too?

>>2793192
I don't even care how cynical your post is, the answer is yes(even if you're nosefag)

>>2793134
The sound of not gonna make it.

>>2793134
can't wait to get so good i can give someone a mental breakdown just by showing them my art

>>2793204
Great crit!

>>2792109

Links to your websites friendo?

>>2793134
Ahahahahahaha

>>2793134
>>2793242
Yeah also, you probably shouldn't be here if you don't want to brave the bitter failures who can't even do the simplest exercise you can

>>2793247
Sorry for undue drama, but icy seems to love it. Can't imagine why

Anyone know how long has Kyle been drawing?

>>2792109
Blog, please? Really nice stuff, ero ero.

>>2792268
Do you have a tumblr or something?

What does /ic/ think about this guide?

>>2793401
thanks! blog is http://oorioo.tumblr.com/

>>2793231
>>2793401
thanks! blog is http://oorioo.tumblr.com/

>>2793422
beginners will follow it too rigidly without realizing it's a general overview

>>2793445
This is great stuff. If you don't mind me asking, how long have you been drawing?

>>2793445
You're like Kyle with better faces but less feet.

>>2793445
your rendering is way way beyond your fundamentals.
Feet/ankles show immediately your weak understanding of perspective and anatomy.

that said, your stuff is pretty nice to look at, and I suspect normies wouldn't care that much about these issues.

keep at it mang

>>2793449
yeah, shame about the lack of feet

>>2791932
reposting on this thread my tip on closed thread to
>>2790927
btw heavy gif alert
you made her look like an old tranny, so many issues that lead to that, check on the gif

I WANNA BE LIKE KYLE

HOW LONG WILL IT TAKE

HOW SOON IS NOW

critique?

>>2793511
how about you start your drawing before getting critique?
also you'd better step up your loomis and draw a neck and how it connects to a thoracic cage.

>>2793511
looks like your slapping brush strokes all over it without much thought. it makes your edges look very sloppy and muddy. the whole drawing feels like an underpainting. be more considerate where your darks and lights are. looks like you just slapped those horns for a minutes detail. the ear is too far apart and a lil too high. the only good thing i can say about this drawing is the pose and that you have the eyes, nose, eyebrows and mouth in the right place.

>>2793517
the neck is connected fine. get off your high horse willy wonka

>>2793525
are you just bad or getting high on counter signalling? both?
anyway draw the underlying skeleton, I can't wait too see.

>>2793524
>the only good thing i can say about this drawing is the pose and that you have the eyes, nose, eyebrows and mouth in the right place.
good to hear, cause feature placement was an issue for me i was hoping to get past, especially nose and lips. and yeah, this took about 30 minutes of just fucking around, so the brush strokes were in fact slapped all over without much thought.

>>2793528
that anon wasn't me lol.

>>2793528
>>2793535
well... doesnt matter lets see what you both were seeing.

>>2793539

>>2793545
the lips were fine as they were

>>2793545
bruh necks dont bend that way you fixed nothing

hi anons any thoughts ?
i thing there are some perspective issue with the books but he i like it

>>2793490
cheers, that actually helps a ton

>>2793534
Why do you expect people to take the time to give you critique when you're not even willing to meet them half way? "30minutes of fucking around", is this so that you can shrug off comments you don't like?

What is there to say really? do you crave attention? show your parents and get it framed you utter fucking cretin.

>>2793622
lolol I'll bet you show your mom pffftptchh. The bong is ready in the back of the van, edgefag

done with a comm comm

>>2793113
i just like to share my drawings.

>>2792182
i like dat style, moar?

Blacksmith sketch

>>2791943
lol. did you really run away from the porn threads because your art is so shitty and people pointed that out in there?

>>2792334
what's the most off are your fundamentals. more precisely your construction/perspective (both in your shapes and lineart) and your gesture. you basically don't know how to position elements in space following a defined perspective. your lineart lacks confidence, spontaneity and mileage.
stop coloring turds and go a step back. learn some fundamentals and when you are ready start applying value and colors.

>>2792334
This is painful to look at.

I tried to step out of realism, how did I manage?

>>2793739
You sure did manage to get that uncanny valley going on, good work.

>>2793739
Giving me serial experiments lain vibes

>>2793740
Fuck I never thought I would be in such a position... How do I get rid of uncanny valley?

>>2793761
>anime
>realism

Pick one and only one.

>>2793743
shut your mouth lain is a god damn masterpiece

>>2793739
>I tried to step out of realism
Every time I've heard someone say any variation of this I've come to find out they were never did """"realism"""" or were never good at """""realism""""" to begin with

>>2793771
cry more

>>2793688
Thank you!
these are my blogs:
https://www.instagram.com/yara.ameel/
http://perspectivallyincorrect.tumblr.com/

>>2793813
The full pic has a horrible out of proportion neck

my frontal usb dont work

>>2793838
It's not out of proportion. He just didn't use doll like proportions. Pic related same artist.

>>2793813
That's not anime. Also that is also in the realms of the uncanny valley. Congrats on having an absolute shit taste

>>2793881
they're normal proportions for a man's neck, so unless that's a trap...

>>2793451
>>2793449
lol fuck feet ill crop off at the ankles til the day i die
>>2793447
almost 3 years now

>>2793962
>fuck feet ill crop off at the ankles til the day i die
hope you will burn

>>2793962
How do you practice your rendering, nigger?

>>2793962
grats. you're never gonna make it if you'll rely on references so much. sorry for you scrubbo.

>>2794018
he said he will crop the pics though he said nothing about references

feels weird not posting anything for days, so here's a page before screentones, effects and dialogues.

>>2794031
I saw his art and his gallery. he's heavily dependent on references. that's a reason he can't draw feet. he simply didn't learn proper construction. it's all connected anon.

>>2794076
yikes

>>2793734
> you basically don't know how to position elements in space following a defined perspective. your lineart lacks confidence, spontaneity and mileage.
I will conform, I do agree with you. I never really did any proper studies with "shapes in 3D space", like you know, those drawings of manikin-like caricatures showing how shapes overlap each other? Where/how does one get any examples to learn from? I feel stagnated when it comes to perspective and form knowledge.

And as for the lines, is that for the first post? Then I like to ask how to improve "better control" over my lines.

>>2791943
I'm really thankful there is a hide function on this site.
Shit like this is why it exists.

>>2794076

oh my god you're that guy who kept posting that pic with the deadface characters like five times without barely changing anything arent you

>>2794294
learn how to draw faces properly you stubborn mule

>>2793134
You're either
1.not actually practicing much
2.are literally so mentally retarded you are unable to learn

>>2794076
You really need to up your studies if you want to make things passable. You're in this dead spot where you're guessing in so many places (most noticeably perspective and construction) and if you refined your understanding of IRL your things would look a lot more appealing.

any advice would be helpful especially with the anatomy and composition

>>2794314

It's literally a chick with her tits cropped out. Composition? Maybe stop drawing with your dick.

>>2794315
triggered roastie
so what if he draws chicks?
sue him, cunt

>>2794321
I'm a guy. I just have class in my ladies. Go meme somewhere else.

>>2794324
The concept of having class is actually the cringiest teenage shit. Please stop.

>>2794390
Gotta agree with this, "having class" on the fucking internet of all places means jack shit. On the contrary, I give props to people who draw with their dick and put their fetishes out there for people to see.

>>2794390

>grown man calling me an adult
>on a website for children's cartoons
>and in a thread specifically for said children's cartoon
>>2794400
>agreeing with him
>can't think for yourself

>>2794401
*teenager
whatever you know what I mean I need sleep

>>2794402
you don't need sleep, you need to grow up.

>>2794404

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=mKHO0BtjIXw

>>2794405
not physically, mentally.
>website for children's cartoons
get over yourself.

>>2794406

>playing mental gymnastics with basic english

just stop posting, I schooled you.

>>2794413
>hide post
if you wanna troll me you better try harder fucboi.

Is this the anime thread?

>>2792334
She has a code name knd thing going on.

>>2794315
so its fine then

>>2793991
footfags btfo xP
>>2794004
read How To Render by Scott Robertson
>>2794088
i honestly just draw triangle wedges because i feet annoy me so much on a personal level. also what gives off the fact that i use references a lot? curious because I can never tell.

>>2793651
why go to all the effort of making this look this nice/realistic and then fuck up the boobs that bad. Have you ever even seen a pair.

>>2794076
oh my fucking god just stop coming here if you're not actually going to listen to people's criticism

a little concept art for a character for my webcomic

Is there a guide for different types of cloth and fabric? I'm thinking wool (scarves). I tried adding folds and shadows but it still looks flat.

>>2793153
Get some darker values in, sharpen the edges, more hue shifts but I think you already see that yourself. Don't worry man, stagnation is natural. You might feel you're not improving but you slowly are getting better. Keep at it man.

>>2793588
its bad, but i can see and understand whats a bookshelf, doorway, carpet, and books. props

daily reminder

i dont even know what im doin

>>2794726
updato-desu

>>2794734
>>2794726
holy christ i loev it so far

>>2794714
i mean that's fine and all, but the point of /ic/ and most of these threads are to seek criticism and improve.

I've never really dabbled in drawing animals so dont take the cat at face value, it's something I'm aiming to improve on

>>2794812
instead of trying to improve cats, learn to draw feet and hands first.

>>2794453
>what gives off the fact that i use references a lot? curious because I can never tell.
the detailed rendering and well executed faces and some aspects of the poses clash with the things that you construct from memory. it's really really easy to tell if you are not a complete art noob.

>>2794193
>Where/how does one get any examples to learn from?
Andrew Loomis: Successful Drawing
>how to improve "better control" over my lines.
gesture practice. mileage. tons and tons of drawings.
how to do gesture?
Andrew Loomis: Successful Drawing

>>2794815
What aspects should I focus on? I know this drawing isn't hardly complete, but fundies should I look at more closely when i'm constructing the figure?

I know I need to take a closer look at the hand resting on the ground since when I tried it myself there wasn't that kind of slope that I drew. I'll take a closer look at the feet too.

>2791171
changes

>>2791171
i think this works better

>>2791943

I didn't know Draw with Jazza visited /ic/

>>2793834

>>2794881
I really like where this is going but the foreground table in the previous version looked better, I feel it takes a lot of space here

WIP, any noticeable flaws I've missed? I'm trying to actually finish a piece for the first time instead of scrapping things half way through

>>2794899
Forgot to attach the file

>>2793164
do you actually study or just spend 10 hours being angry at the paper like a retard drawing over the same picture for 50 minutes

>>2793134
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=8kfK46nruKM

rough but I needed to get something out of me

>>2794902
There's a lot of flaws, bullet tits are one but the most noticeable one is definitely how fucked your jaw-face-cranium associations are. The top of your head is lopsided and the jaw should end and go up at the midpoint of the side of the head, while yours kind of goes on forever.

>>2794819
haha that's pretty funny because i reference a lot but never the poses (that're always fairly basic contrapposto stances). that's good to know though, i'll keep that in mind

>>2794902
>>2794962
>but the most noticeable one is definitely how fucked your jaw-face-cranium associations are
This. For one (unless you're going for the "original child-like" presentation), her body looks far too "adult" for that childish looking face, either go for a youthier body type or make her face older, bringing down that jawline would help in that regard for one. But you should first fix the whole construction of her head entirely first and for most.

With that said, I hope you make something out of this, there's not enough art of this girl for my tastes. (Also fyi, fix her "claw" hand, imao.)

>>2794520
design needs work, its super bland and has no distinctive qualities

>>2794523
look up reference and make studies

>>2794734
what kind of criticism are you even looking for here? anatomy? you've thrown that out the window. You're going for some kind of abomnination here, but individually I can tell that your body parts are poorly constructed. Stop hiding behind monster proportions and improve you understanding of actual anatomy before you twist it out of shape. Also, you're linework is clumsy, research linewidths.

>>2794812
your legs are shit. use references

>>2794935
is that nigel thornberry's long lost brother?

>>2795059
our left side of her belly is pretty confusing, depth-wise. I would think the buildings would be underneath her but it looks more like they are on top?

>>2794815
cats don't have hands and feet

>>2794812
bretty good

>>2793153
Cut the tumblrshit and start experimenting with a more personal style, that should help you get moving forward again

>>2795081
>tumblrshit

does this mean anything anymore? it's clearly anime inspired.

>"Will you draw me? PLEAAASE DRAW ME ANON"

>>2795091
Yes. Best thing I found that describes it.

>1. Subject should be chunky, or fat in some way. This is our first step in making her "unconventional" and ugly, therefore unique! Because she's not like those other skinny girls.
>2. Draw the limbs as psuedo-Steven Universe style limbs: tube/sausage-like, with little to no definition to seperating the forearm from the upper arm at all, and then adding your own gangly, nasty touch to it! Also, avoid drawing a neck, because necks are hard.
>3. Make the tiniest details of the body as detailed as possible. One of the key elements is to draw little lines everywhere: under the eyes, on the fingers, on the feet, and especially on the legs, because that's where all the hair is! And leg hair makes us look special! Better yet, just draw lines on random areas of the body; it doesn't fuckin' matter!
>4. Time to give your character a realistic shade: use your nearest darker skin color/pink marker and ever so carefully color in wherever on the human body there's a slight pinkish/darker shade: the knees, the ears, the elbows, your finger nubs, and most importantly, the nose!
>5. You must make the face as ugly and horrifying as possible. The eyes and pupils should be squiggly and deformed, the mouth must have an ugly gap tooth (complete with the gums showing), and the eyebrows should be big, dark and unforgiving. Don't forget the random lines!
>6. Lastly, add in a few finishing details, like making the eyelids shiny, or maybe a few extra random lines here and there. Because fuck it.

>With this guide, you'll surely be on your way to make an uninspired, ugly, decrepit art style that completely ignores human anatomy and the way heat and vasodilation works! Aren't you proud?

>>2795199
Example of generic horrible tumblr style.

>>2793153
stop doing this shit:
>>2795199
and start learning your own style by studying real anatomy and fundamentals and making your own decisions on how to simplify it into a style. No wonder your art is shit, you're copying shit artists that all follow sorority girl mentality.

>>2788501
I finished it finally

>>2795199
>mfw I drew and posted this to kiwifarms a fucking year and a half ago
holy shit

>>2794881
I can't look at this anymore for today, other stuff.

>>2794887
Why is a trident in his neck?

>>2794962
>>2794987
Ah thanks, my 2nd layer of shadow kind of blended together with the ear section and I forgot to change that part, will try to work on it. Also I would be lying if I say I don't like torpedo tits, and AFAIK pointier tits are trendier at that time period but I guess that's too much so I will have to work on that as well. Lastly, I will check some ref and try to balance out the face and the body. Being my first "proper" work I afraid I've spent too much energy worrying over rendering instead of other things haha, thanks guys

>>2795262
Oh. Well then yo thanks dude that shit was spot on

>>2792044
got a blog faggot?

>>2795496

i like this : 3
kinda reminds me of final fantasy tactics esp he thumbnail

Tooth thing

>>2795496
loove those lines mate.
>>2795513
Noice. Cartoony but has a fresh feel to it. Not a completely overdone style. Nice forms!

This is the first digital drawing I've ever done and I used normal microsoft paint and my wacom bamboo.

>>2795547
Also I forgot that to mention that they were studies for practice. I literally haven't drawn for 4 years so it'll be nice if I can get a critique.

>>2795513
cute, but I kind of wish you'd paid more attention to the type of tooth this character is supposed to be. Molars aren't just marshmallow shaped lumps.

>>2795536
Thanks breh

>>2795566
I guess

スザンナと電気刀
Suzanna & The Electric Katana

>>2795202
I actually like this. *shrugs*

Whatevs. I'll work on my anatomy and flush all your "b-but MUH taste" bullshit down the toilet.

Autists on this board need to learn to leave their subjective tastes and political bullshit at the door when doing their critiques fuck.

Might as well be ON tumblr with how obnoxious some of you anti-Tumblr fuckers are. Calm the fuck down.

>>2795513

>>2795666
A bowtie? Why didn't I think of that lol

>>2795397
I added a line there by mistake and thought it made the silhouette look better no edgy meaning to it.

>>2795427
see >>2793834

>>2795496
nice one firex
>>2795344
neat

>>2795623
>*shrugs*

>>2795622
still looks like the shit i did when i was 12
i've told you to stop like 100 times but you just keep going

>>2795714
Psst
I think that's bait

>>2795400
Imo it's not that torpedo tits are bad, I think they have purpose if they are under the right construction, try using Doxy as a guide, I feel he does it just right by giving them proper weight. Tits needs weight, it's what gives them the life and shape they need to look good.

>>2795719
believe me when i say it's not

>>2795708
Nuthin personal, kid.

>>2795708
Oh does that bother you~ *shrugs* o3o hehe....

Okay I'll stop. Look I'm just sick of people being less than objective on the thread. It's fine to have your own taste it's just frustrating to see it get so political. Especially when you're probably so harsh on the art because you feel like IT'S political. It's annoying and gets to the point where it's hypocritical and makes it impossible to take anything you say too seriously.

I mean I never understood why this board is so allergic to the idea of drawing how you like to and learning what you need to know to make it convincing.

>>2795714
We're all happy for your twelve year old selfs accomplishments, but telling (especially an obvious beginner) anon to quit is an admission you're not here to help anyone, so kindly go back to admiring yourself.

I mean obviously people are here to improve what they're ALREADY doing right? Not to be told to do something else. Otherwise they'd be on the general drawthread. But I'm getting to serious...

SUCK MY GLORIOUS MASSIVE TUMBLRITE ASS ANON ILL DO WHAT I WANT. probably while still trying to study from life and find my own style but whatever

I need to go to bed. I'm getting weird...

>>2795806
Just fuck off to your tumblr hugbox already, jesus christ, you're still throwing a tantrum hours after the fact.

>>2795789
bitch he's been here for months and most of the times he's posted I've told him to a) stop using colored pencil and b) get a life and start studying if he wants to make it. and surprise, he's gone on posting the same ugly shit with japanese text next to it.
>so kindly go back to admiring yourself.
does that art look good to you? I was joking and saying it's shit. no one draws well when they're 12.
>>2795806
>I'm getting weird...
you're being autistic. go to bed

>>2795830
>you're being autistic.
That being said that anorino is a bit more than usual.

>>2795780
>>2795806
>tfw you're so pathetic even tumblr doesn't want you
NOT. GONNA. MAKE. IT.

Gonna try to finish this this weekend, I could probably try something more interesting with the hands though
>>2792268
cute

>>2795864
Rally!

Trying some MILF Asuka.

>>2795780
the sound of not gonna make it.

>>2795934
>That face

>>2795934
Updated.

>>2795960
Kinda changed it.

>tfw can't make a full body sketch without it looking retarded

>>2795425
You're welcome! That post was specifically aimed at parodying @doemerri on tumblr, and maybe also Elias Ericson. Pic related

>>2796014
I've seen that kinda shit style on Instagram so much.

>>2795970
>rebuild suit

>>2795872
Made the tits a bit bigger
The vaginal-area+underpants are proving to be a massive bitch, haven't gotten to the hands
>>2795513
This is really, really nice and fun to look at. Blog?

>>2795699

>>2796284
resize

>>2795780
Your art looks alright there but it's still /beg/ tier

>>2795970
yea man, where's the eyepatch if she's in her rebuilt suit?

working on torso shape/proportion

>>2796350

2

>>2796350
Proportions are not relative to the stylized head, it is uncanny. if you are using real world figures for reference and slapping on an animu face it doesn't work.

Draw the gesture of whatever you are referencing a number of times, then redraw it without looking at your reference to help solve this issue it worked for me at least.

>>2796353
yeah i did that for all of them except for 3 on the 2nd page that i drew w/o reference. i'm starting to notice that about the proportions...not sure what the proportions should be yet though

>>2796014
... I love it... I just do... All your criticism is spot on and individually all sound terrible but you bring that shit together and it works?? For me at least. But I have notoriously shit taste in everything.

Any crits before I move onto finalizing the sketch?

DBZ style auras make no physical sense,apparently you're just supposed to shade everything that's not to the edge of the figure? Isn't the lighting supposed to come from all different angles? I don't understand

>>2796439
Good stuff bro. How old are you?

>>2796439
nah man treat it like extreme fresnel lighting

>>2796443

Is this sarcasm?
>>2796450
I guess that would be how to go about recreating it

>>2796115
Thanks mane. And no the blog isn't quite ready yet

>>2796443

>>2795498
>>2795705
>>2795536
Thank you, I think I messed up stylizing the nose and the hair in the back but even as is I'm glad you like it

>>2796443
I'm 23

wip

>>2792388

Those enormous ass legs, fix them.

>>2791966
man I really love your use of color dude
>>2792029
the breasts and torso seem a little odd. I'd straighten her spine a little more.

Could I get some suggestions/feedback on this sketch before I ink it, please?

>>2795622
can't tell if this is serious or not.
>>2795970
face and upper torso need work. The raised leg is ok proportionally, but the calf and foot fail to recede in space, try using more variations in line width

>>2796014
what a qt3.14

>>2796388
what the heck is going on with his nose. also, patrician taste

>>2796867
can't see shit you've crushed your blacks, lighten your dark values. Girl's neck is too thin, face is weirdly flat, she looks like a fucking bobble head
kylo is super flat because of aforementioned crushed blacks, use curved lines on his belt.

I hope this thread is a lesson to all of you. Don't give someone too much praise or else they'll turn into a self-absorbed cunt.

>>2791943

First iPad doodle
The input delay is making me regret my purchase a little bit

>>2796388
Blog? I like your style.

starting a 2015 redraw

still wip. critique anyone?

Just want to ask: is guro allowed here? I'm afraid to post.

>>2796948
The forearm is too skinny, and the torso is a little short. Space out the breasts some more and add some lighter values to make her stick out. Right now its all the same value of grey.

I like the design though. Just keep it up

>>2796926
cutie, but the head's attachment to the neck is a little off. Move the head, the entire head, towards the right a smidge. Lower its height as well.

more practices from today

>>2797025

>>2796938
legs are a little short

>>2797027
Well that bottom one sure is a thing.

Critique pls

>>2797187

>>2797189
the ears.

>>2794935
reminds me of the art style of "assigned male".
Believe me... This ISN'T a good thing.

I think you should study realism before trying stylized stuff.

lets see how this goes i guess

What's the secret in creating cute faces? Studying from life, skulls and head constructions, I never understood the shapes used to create something like this. Doesn't even match a baby's skull.

>>2797207
>cisPLAINING
holy fucking shit they came up with another buzzword already?
USA needs to be nuked to the ground

>>2797607
It does proportion wise - it's all about proportions the size of features in relation to each other and their placement to give the impression of cute.

The difficulty in it is maintaining that impression throughout the entire figure so it will not conflict with the visage leading to unpleasant and jarring results.

>>2797614
That makes sense.

work in progress...

>>2797636
Ask yourself this simple but important question. What is she doing? Why is the doing it? Would you feel stupid if you did the same thing? If so why are you fucking drawing it?

>>2795202
>this isn't even their oc shit
>it's "fanart" of kill la kill

If they want to make their own characters look disgusting by all means let them. But it just crosses a sort of line when you deface an existing character like this unironically.

Tl;Dr I get butt hurt about anime characters.

>>2797766
Oh jesus, I couldn't even tell... that's disgusting.

>>2797766
oh my fucking god. They are fucking disfigured Jesus Christ i don't wish this upon my worst enemies. They don't look remotely like the Characters except their hairstyles. How can you be so obsessed with this shit.

>>2793652
Fair enough. Glad you have the compulsion to do so.

I'm not sure where to ask, but I guess here would be the best.

Do people often use stabilizers for line art?

>>2798126
Yes, but it's a crutch and doesn't look as good as a real stroke done with real precision and control.
You can tell a mile away if somebody used a stabilizer.

>>2798046
I really don't see the fascination with the spaced eyes imo, but you need loomis.

>>2798136
It's not a facination, people who do wide eyes with no spacing from the ears literally don't know how to draw.

>>2798141
Well, it's not like I didn't know that anon, but if you've seen this anon post this shit more than once, you'd think it's a fascination too just saiyan.

>>2798141
>>2798144
redline then?, I mean you seem to be saying the same thing over and over about the eyes. Would really love to see the "proper" way then. thanks.

>>2798225
Don't be a dick and people have no excuse to be one to you. While it's taken to the ridiculously negative ends, people here at least have the virtue of honesty for the most part. The fact that you don't know how far eyes are supposed to be apart from one another and made no reason for doing it that way means you have a lot to learn. If multiple anons say the same thing, that means your art doesn't convey what you think it does. Also, a redline is a gift, you're supposed to be gracious for gifts, not expect them.
Make allowances for growth, or you won't.

>>2798235
stop talking with dick in your mouth, I find it quite amusing, that you relate asking for a simple redline to being a "dick". For all I know, and desu I really don't care, it's the two shitheads that wrote the two paragraphs of meaningless shit, and I just really want to know how much more increasingly shit they would turn my drawing into. To be quite frank I'm quite tired, and frustrated as to how people can sit behind anonymity, and vent at others about how shitty their art is, and use Loomis as a crutch to justify themselves, when they can't give a simple 2 minute fking redline of eyes. I mean wtf is this hypocrisy??and what more is there say!???!????!?!!!??

>>2797612
Sweden first, then Germany, then the UK, then every major US city

>>2798261
What you need is practice, nothing less is going to help you perceive and translate accurately(really). You're not ready for a redline yet.
This was me being nice btw as i figured you were about to get savaged, now you're really just being an asshole. Draw more. or don't, either way fuck off with that attitude.

>>2798225
Since I was the anon that pointed this out first, I'll give you my opinion of how to make what you're trying to do workable.

Late reply sorry, but ever since like 2-3 threads back I've seen you post I've thought you needed to make the eyes bigger to remove that negative space between the eyes and imo this makes what you're trying to do look better. But what is more clear is that you're trying to hit "stylization" too early before you got more of your anatomy and fundamental knowledge down first. I can tell from how the girls upper body construction is, it lacks confidence of how the skeleton would be underneath the skin and same for the muscle structure.

But to the point of the argument, if you're going to keep the "eyes reach the sides of the face", make them bigger. But get more skull anatomy knowledge first so you know WHERE they should be so you can exaggerate them later.

>>2796938
>>2797063
agreed. im going to stretch em a bit

>>2797592

>>2798261
>gets upset when anons point out the preying mantis skull

Check your ego and look at what people really look like, it's anime stylization but that doesn't mean you can get away with whatever that is

>>2798261
HAHAHAHA

>>2798261
Roasted boyo

>>2798647
Lol.. I don't fucking give a damn, and have no reason to look into your dumbass opinon.
>>2798532
thanks for at least being honest, and respect to you for not being a pussy like>>2798334 who probably doesn't know jackshit about redlines.

>>2797645
Thats stupid

>>2798655
Haha, okay roasted lad, so angry for a leetle boi uhuhhuuu

I feel that something is wrong and I can't see it

>>2798581
Love all the personalities and composition. And of course it has the best starter so I automatically love it.

>>2798919
There's no depth

>>2798581
>Chandelure
Coolio
The trainer's arms look too long, though

>>2795202
>tfw I've seen this image on a regular basis for half a year
>tfw just realized it was kill la kill fan art

I don't get it why do fat dykes do this to good art

new thread >>2799310

>>2796285
I love this one. Blog?