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This thread is meant for artists who might want to try to make anime works in-between their studies. It is strongly recommended that you use this thread in conjunction with learning the elements and fundamentals of art. You can also discuss the visual elements of various professional artists as well if you keep it relatively articulate and civil.

Submit your drawings, receive feedback or critique others! Share your knowledge and remember to thank those who've critiqued or red-lined your drawings. Most importantly, have fun!

Fresh off the Mayflower? Then do yourself a flavor and check out /ic/s complementary subordinate sticky here:
>https://docs.google.com/document/d/1uwaXKU7ev6Tw_or__o8ARpUb6r2rCZYJGqwSFV9AD98/edit#bookmark=id.15jx3pyuimvj
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>Hitokaku Index
http://www.asahi-net.or.jp/~zm5s-nkmr/
>0033
http://www.pixiv.net/member_illust.php?id=59317
>List of active livestreams
Use twitch #creative
>fellowBro's books
http://mediafire.com/?i44dwzkf9j9n8
>Tutorial/Reference Collection
http://pinterest.com/characterdesigh/
>Japanese Tutorials
http://iradukai.com/
deji e no bunpo playlist - https://www.youtube.com/playlist?list=PLKZrlE6oUGx4Mh1zJLnKLc1SDPJfsoxnS
>Figures
http://reference.sketchdaily.net/
>Pose Practice
http://www.eggazyoutatsu.net/eng/atarichan.html

>> No.2775296
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dogs

>> No.2775299
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>>2775296

>> No.2775340

>>2775296
>>2775299
these are cute puppers

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>>2775296

>>2775340
thanks anon

>> No.2775456
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Something i was drawing yesterday...

>> No.2775516

>>2775456
jesus that is a really unappealing facial design

>> No.2775517
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multimedia eye tutorial

i think if you used the corresponding brushes for each tool in photoshop it would look nice

>> No.2775519

>>2775517
>>2772998

>> No.2775524

>>2775456
>>2775516
I think it's kinda cute. Something NORMIES would probably like more. Got some kind of mobile game flair. I mean she's probably playing Angry Birds right here.

>> No.2775563
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redlines welcome before I work more on this tomorrow

>> No.2775577

>>2775517
Is this a serious post?

>> No.2775579

>>2775563
arms are badly foreshortened and proportions are weird but this is pretty

>> No.2775584
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>>2775563
more importantly
which is right
is left knee higher or lower in perspective
In sketch its lower, on the version above higher
>>2775579 thanks I'll have to look up ref to fix that

>> No.2775600

>>2775584
Legs are way too long and the arms look flat.
The knee should be lower because you are looking down at the legs, judging by the feet.

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>>2775563
cylinders

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>> No.2775669

>>2775614
I see your redlines time and time again and I'm always so amazed by how good they look, do you have a blog? I wanna see your original work.

>> No.2775687

>>2775614
H-hi

Can I ask for a quick redline on this too >>2774835 while you're at it?

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>>2775288
Don't know if this belongs in this thread but anyone got any idea how utomaru gets such clean consistent lines? I've read that she uses photoshop and an intuos 5 but can't really find anything else about her process

>> No.2775767

>>2775614
>>2775669
Samefag

>> No.2775768

>>2775764
line stabilizers, big canvas size
very clean line need lots of practice and to be able to work with your arm and not your wrist
there are threads about it all the time, and there's a question thread, here is not the appropriate place

>>2775767
are you retard? this dude's redlines are amazing, why do you assume safagging?

>> No.2775776
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Working on this. Will do a clothed variant next.

>> No.2775778

>>2775776
Whoa, got a back story to her? Her arms seem rad. Also got someplace I can see your other works?

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Pathfinder gnome

ORIGINAL CHARACTER do not steal

>> No.2775787

>>2775778
http://thegoldensmurf.deviantart.com/

She's the MC of a manga/comic project, some kind of remake of classical JRPG stories with a Hero and Demon King. Working on a new proper design of her since the existing one was getting outdated and was incomplete.

>> No.2775790

>>2775776
what the fuck happen to her arm? need story/blog asap

>> No.2775791

>>2775787
>>2775790
kek nvm

>> No.2775793

>>2775786
beg thread anon.

>> No.2775794

>>2775787
Wow, everything you do is amazing. How long have you been drawing? It seriously seems like pro material.

>> No.2775841

>>2775768
>safagging
Samefagging, kiss-ass-weeb

>> No.2775972

>>2775614
thank you I love you

>> No.2775976
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did this with a ink brush.

>> No.2775986

>>2775776
Couldn't find any feet to copy?

>> No.2775988

>>2775986
:^) I love this meme

>> No.2775997

>>2775764
probably done in illustrator with vectors

>> No.2776005

>>2775988
I'll take that as a no

>> No.2776026

>>2775517
m8 this is joke right?

>> No.2776068
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2776068

any tips for big beefy?
(yes, i know i still need to work on hands ;-; )

>> No.2776070

>>2776068
Always use reference and exaggerate proportions based on your reference, also in the construction process make sure to lay out muscles in a 3D manner, use boxes as a point of reference for the sketch.

Also blog?

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>>2775517
please stop coming back here you're one of the anons i hate most
you draw like a 12 year old and the moon runes make you look retarded

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Can't into hands.

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>>2775517

>> No.2776492

>>2776068
no tips but oh no oh no oh no this looks so cute please more

>> No.2776497
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>>2775296
>>2775299
more doggos

>> No.2776505

>>2775988
"meme"

>> No.2776513

>>2775976
That's pretty cool. Just wondering, do you change the brush size luch or just uses pen pressure?

>> No.2776516

If you had to pick 1 artbook to help you git gud at drawing weeb mangos, what would you pick?

no chris hart pls

>> No.2776518

>>2776516
howls moving castle artbook t b h

>> No.2776520

>>2776479
>Can't into hands.
then go do a few pages of hand studies

>> No.2776522
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>>2776516
>muh animes
just trace your favorite shows you inbred weeb

>> No.2776596
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>>2776513
pressure as much as the brush will allow as i can't change the brush head itself.

>> No.2776621

>>2776596
>pentel
my nigga

>> No.2776707
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>>2775669
andrae0, its a dead blog. OTH, Antiloomisranger makes better redline than me, you might want to check his blog.

>>2774835
Study this muscle

>> No.2776718

>>2776707

*kiss*

>> No.2776735

>>2776707
Dayum, you just made the image look 100x better, I wish you could redline one of my works in the future senpai ;w;

>> No.2776770

Very nice, but you need to at least add the foot that should be in frame

>> No.2776885
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2776885

there's a lot i need to work on, but i'm wondering if my style is at least appealing to look at?
been having a lot of doubts

>> No.2776888

>>2776885
Eye proportions are off the charts but everything else looks okay

>> No.2776891

>>2776885
uguu

>> No.2776894

>>2776885
>i'm wondering if my style is at least appealing to look at
to be honest not really

>> No.2776899

>>2776894
what could be changed to make it more appealing?

>> No.2776900
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>>2776885
It's very nice, just the colours are a bit muddy I think.

>> No.2776907

>>2776900
no you actually made it muddy LOL

>> No.2776910

>>2776907
neh they pumped up the contrast and saturation a bit but then blurred out the details

>> No.2776924

>>2776885
Looks like uguu Kron.
Fix those eyes and it'll be pretty cute.

>> No.2776926

>>2776899
the big eyes are creepy, what adds to that unsettling face is the facts that it's stretched horizontally.

>> No.2776970

>>2776707
even just looking at the orignal, try turning your head like that. Unless you're going for the SHAFT look, no person can turn their head that far back, not without being uncomfortable anyway

>> No.2776990

>>2776885
I like your chibis for that creepy cute look, but for less stylized works like this it's not really working for me. Try toning down the eyes/faces like other anons suggested.

>> No.2776998

>>2776926
This mostly, it's like her face is too big for her head. I'm quite fond of the rest of it however.

>> No.2777001

>>2776885
If by appealing you mean extremely disturbing then yeah

>> No.2777003

>>2776885
give that poor girl a skull please

>> No.2777300
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>>2775776
Clothing and accessories are kinda done, still need to finish the cape and helmet.

>> No.2777352

>>2777300
Practice feet

>> No.2777367
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>>2775517
>pen
>it's a fucking ball point

>> No.2777426

>>2775517
man desu I love these things you post, Ithey are just funny as hell

>> No.2777440
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feels super off, but i cant seem to figure out why... might just redraw it, any help though...?

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>>2777440

>> No.2777451

>>2777443
not the artist, but holy shit, how did I not even notice that when I looked at the picture?

>> No.2777558 [DELETED] 

>>2777443
the problem is she's not naked

>> No.2777563 [DELETED] 

>>2777443
the problem with it is that she's not [spoilers]naked[/spoilers]

>> No.2777565

>>2777563
Hello newfag, spoiler doesn't work on this board.

>> No.2777633
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2777633

>>2777440
Push the perspective more, add foreground elements to sell the scale, lamposts, or repeat the chimney like structures to use as compositional pointers. Her current pose appears to be too front on, drop the camera and have her appendages obscure more.

>> No.2777651

>>2775614
>>2776707
I just found my faith in /ic/ again.

>> No.2777658

>>2777651
I just found the autist that will fuck everything up again. Lest we forget, what happened to Teal line guy is entirely the fault of the likes of you.

>> No.2777660

>>2777440
Aren't you bored yet?
I get the fetish but it is the same exact character and same exact outfit and same exact angle in teh same exact environment, in the same exact painting style all the time.
I guess it was fine the first 50 times but I can't fathom you derive any artistic satisfaction from this anymore

Could you may be leave the comfort zone a little?

>> No.2777662

>>2777658
Did he leave because people kept asking for his help? Looked up his shit and damn, RIP.

>> No.2777663

>>2777300
She looks compressed in the vertical direction
also hand hiding
also poor coloring
I like your linearts though, reminiscent of the Beelzebub manga (the theme as well)

>> No.2777664

>>2777663
So any drawing that doesn't have both hands in plain sight suffer from hand hiding?

>> No.2777672

>>2777664
any drawing that looks like hands are hidden (with no apparent reason) deliberately and clumsily like this one

>> No.2777713

>>2777662
People always say why he left. Why not ask yourself why he came and stayed for so long. He knew what he was doing. It's all an act, fuck him.

>> No.2777855

>>2777440
How do you motivate yourself to draw this all the time? My dream is to draw giantesses farting in perspective (seriously)and I can't draw anything without thinking it looks bad.

>> No.2777856

>>2777855
>My dream is to draw giantesses farting in perspective

Not that Anon but you're going places, kid.

>> No.2777859

>>2777663
that's not a hand hide mate i reckon that's passable they added a few fingers.

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>>2777300
heres my idea on a colour fix, obviously just my opinion tho. try using the selective colour function in ps

>> No.2777887

>>2777856
Just want to draw out my fantasies that I can't experience in real life.
>tfw no giant farting gf
>tfw no farting gf

>> No.2777896

>>2777443
>>2777633
Thanks, I'll try these fixes when I get home...

>>2777660
I draw plenty of other things when I'm at work and stuff.

>>2777855
Giant lolis are my antidepressant.

>> No.2777938

>>2777873
Not the OA, but I'd prefer your direction imo, better color theory with red. Makes for a warmer looking image compared to the original, where the blues cool the image down (and I quite like OA's blue colors despite this).

>> No.2777959
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I downloaded some oil paint brushes and I'm really enjoying them, I figured they'd be fun to use as hair so I tried doing some portraits.

Right one is still WIP

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sketchess

>> No.2778012

>>2777873
Lots of parts looks way too saturated tho.

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>>2776707
gonna start posting again?

>> No.2778135

>>2778120
>...and then she farts!

>> No.2778146

>>2778003

blog faggot

Also her shoulders are too broad in the frontal view.

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composition and photo manipulation study
any advice can be helpful.

>> No.2778200

>>2778135
first time I've gotten this comment.
desu, I'm kinda honored. Thx, fartanon

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I already changed the pose of this fucking leg twice. Please tell me this one looks exaggerated but actually possible without permanent injury.

>> No.2778215

>>2778211
Oh and the black blob is indeed a placeholder.

Oh and inadvertent Dunkin Donuts apparently.

>> No.2778481

>>2778003
blog?

>> No.2778499
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2778499

>>2778211
The angle you drew the head makes this pose a little hard to pull off, realistically. Arms really don't go that far.

>> No.2778517

>>2777959
Those are dota characters right?
The windrunner looks good, but the other one is making me feel a bit uneasy, dunno why

>> No.2778637
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>>2777873
tweaked/modified some stuffs and made the helmet.

>> No.2778688

>>2776068
danke for the tips, sorry tho, no atari links
>>2776492
glad you like nwn

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>> No.2778732

>>2778200
I only do it for the ones that get me going and the rare occurrence that someone will post a farting version.

Looks pretty clean. My only gripe would be with the lack of hair, but I'd imagine that'll come later.

>> No.2778790

>>2778689
pretty cute. i like the movement of the hair and rim of the dress. something about the head placement and/or face angle seems a bit off. Also I feel like the expression could use some work, it doesnt really fit the confident pose.

>> No.2778905

>>2777873
She's like 1.20 m, right?

>> No.2778940

>>2778688
whops, sorry, i'mma dummy, meant for that first part to be in response to >>2776070

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>> No.2779116

>>2779115
Kill it with fire.

>> No.2779117

>>2776885
see
>>2779115

>> No.2779124

>>2779115
oh shit, that's why this looked familiar, i've watched a few of your paint vlogs.

>> No.2779133

>>2779116
>>2776885

I did my best to fix it.
The face was short and wide and the upperarm is kinda long so it's either make her look younger or stretch the head size. the body is still kinda in the wrong position tho.

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send help

>> No.2779172

>>2779160
you need therapy so you stop being such a disgusting weeb degenerate

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send help

>> No.2779248

>>2779172
You could also make your own art/stylization thread specially targeted to normalshits like you.

>> No.2779252

>>2779173
The saddest thing about all of this is the breast sag realistically, damn.

>> No.2779276

>>2776885
It is. Very nice style

>> No.2779277

>>2779173
I like it, could work on rendering though. Feels a bit too flat.

>> No.2779281
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2779281

Trying to find a cutesy-creepy style to appeal to young weeblets (and myself).

>> No.2779285

>>2779115
your choice of color edits make no sense to me, but the editted facial planes are more even and appealing

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>>2779173

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>>2779285
here's the original one

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>>2777440
>>2777443
>>2777633
values are super rough at the moment, didnt go values first this time round

>> No.2779400

>>2778790
Actually i fixed her expression, but accidentally posted wrong picture. Thanks for feedback.

>> No.2779402

>>2779281
in what way creepy is supposed to be appealing? it's plain ugly.

>> No.2779420

>>2779402
Man, if it's ugly, I'm winning the battle I was fighting.

>> No.2779444

>>2779388
My man, that face/head/hair is very lopsided and unsymmetrical. Flip the image and correct what you see, okay?

>> No.2779456

>>2776885
oh feverworm Ive always liked your art very much

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>>2779388
but i wanna see dat cameltoe

>> No.2779517
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New brush and trying out stylization
Kinda worry I same face

>> No.2779519

There is Pops, Kyle and the Disney Girl and well yeah Rin too. The Rest of you are fucking trash. Holy shit, this is the beginner thread. The closer I get to making it the more I realize how garbage you all are and how garbage some professionals are.

Pops if you read this man I really look up to you.

>> No.2779523

>>2779519
Oh, genuinely curious, post your work!

>> No.2779528

>>2779346
Like this face is way too big to be on this body. Holy shit I would run from a girl that looked like that. How the fuck did you get so good at rendering when you don't understand any perspective? Like your colors and everything else looks great man, but wow that face is disgusting. I don't think anyone has said it, but that looks like a lion.

Holy shit for YEARS I got beat down time and time again by people being SAVAGE to me and it really made me get good. Looking around here now and its like fucking depressing. These are the people who talk shit. These people. Looking up to people who fucking trace and everything. Fuck not going to make its.

>> No.2779529

>>2779517
Play around with different eyebrows, there's so much to choose from.
Try to not leave open spaces when drawing eyes.
Also start drawing eyelids.

>> No.2779533

>>2779517
worry about being able to draw first

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>>2775764
lines dont matter when the final piece is shit

>> No.2779538

>>2779528
>Holy shit for YEARS I got beat down time and time again by people being SAVAGE to me

I agree with this, which is why I came to /ic/ to get a savage beating and a few laughs, but it seems pretty lax nowadays. Which is fine imo, people who genuinely need/want guidance are (kind of) getting it.

Are you the figure drawing fella?

>> No.2779539

>>2779528
>. These are the people who talk shit
who?

>> No.2779541

>>2779528
>>2779519
post work retard. but we all know you won't, you're here to pad your ego like a pathetic idiot who can't get the feeling any other way, definitely not through your artwork.

>> No.2779542

>>2779536
my b, was referencing >>2775288

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>>2779529
Hm, Different eyebrows, never really thought about that, might also look into eyelashes for verity
Just what do you mean open spaces? You mean the outer line?
Would you happen to have any tutorial images on that and the eyelids?
>>2779533
Im working on it, from absolute beginner
Still got a lot of work to work on

>> No.2779569

>>2779528
if it makes you feel any better, i'm the op of that image and i don't give crit on this board.
i just come here for the harsher opinions that i never get on social media

>> No.2779573

>>2779556
Yes I mean outer lines, open lines look really bad most of the time.
No tutorial, just google references or try to lay a line above the eye to draw the eyelid.
Also don't forget to draw a forehead. Don't stress yourself, if you're a beginner you just need to play around a lot and try out new thing, even if it looks like crap. If you want to improve it's gonna happen.

>> No.2779597
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can anyone redline

>> No.2779625
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2779625

>>2779523
>>2779541

Not that Anon, but he is right you know and I couldn't of said it better myself.

>> No.2779626

>>2779556
this is a bait right?

>> No.2779628

>>2779626
What about it?

>> No.2779635

>>2779628
you can't be serious..

>> No.2779637

>>2779635
>_> why not

>> No.2779639

>>2779635
You're one of them assholes?

>> No.2779655

>>2779346
>>2779173
>>2779388
^ I used to like your stuff, but to be completely honest, I am fking tired of seeing your shit now.
>>2779517
>>2779556
>>2779597
This board is honestly a complete shitpile. Including the op image.

>> No.2779657

>>2779655
>I am fking tired of seeing your shit now.
>tfw not good enough for anon to notice you

>> No.2779658

>>2779655
Dubs of truth

>> No.2779659

>>2779635
well he said he was an absolute beginner
>>2779655
post work and liven up the thread senpai

>> No.2779664

>>2779655
why do you think anyone cares if you used to like someone's work and now don't?
who do you think you are, lol

>> No.2779665

>>2779388
nice composition
and yay, finally feet!

>> No.2779667

>>2778003
i like that hairstyle, you got a reference or something you used?

>> No.2779668

>>2779252
I don't get it, but I don't know the character, it was from a draw request thread.

>>2779277
Okay, thanks, I'll try to keep that in mind.

>>2779322
Thanks!
I completely forgot to add highlights on the body ;_;

>>2779655
>I am >>2779173
Not sure what you mean, it's my first time posting in this thread archetype.


I take it anti-gravity boobs are a prerequisite for hentai?

>> No.2779669

>>2779556
drop the anime and go read loomis etc etc

i'm not even memeing, your shit is flat and riddled with symbol drawing. I'm a fucking weeb just like the next guy but i'm not stupid

>> No.2779680

>>2779669
listen to this man

>> No.2779687

>>2779519
I like Pops too but he's just tracing and heavily referencing stuff, there's nothing amazing about what he's doing and he has yet to develop anything too personal yet. I'm sure he's even said so himself.

So that you compliment him in particular now means you're either a beginner and easily impressed or simply trolling for the (You)s right now.

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>>2779659
I already did.
>>2779664
..

>>2779667
I have a whole bunch of references, but to name a few, I really like ueda hajime, and ototsugu konoe

>> No.2779712
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2779712

>>2779669
>>2779680
Drawing real people is just creepy man

>> No.2779716

>>2779712
Terminal symbol drawing, read the sticky

>> No.2779744

>>2779712
that construction doesnt even make sense

>> No.2779748

>>2779655
fwiw im gonna draw some stuff that arent smug giant lolis after this

>> No.2779752
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2779752

>>2777300
>>2778637
More tweaks and made the cape, guess I'm done.

>> No.2779756

>>2779704
So you think you're in right in insulting 99% of us with a straight face after posting this >>2778003 ?

What are you, 16?

>> No.2779764

>>2779519
who the fuck is pops?

>> No.2779765

>>2779756
He has proportion issues (too long arms/upper bodies, shorter legs), otherwise it is surely better than the vast majority of d/ic/ks.

just look at that awful mess >>2779752 that just keeps hurting my eyes.
no ankles, hidden hand, stiff pose, awkward proportions, gigantic head, deviantart-retardation design.
But what time spent on rendering! rendering is, sadly enough, not half bad!

>> No.2779770
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2779770

>>2779764
russianguy

>> No.2779775

>>2779765
He just plastered a referenced animu face on some trunks, who the hell is being a cocky cunt and egocentric over this.

You people are so weird, I guess the norm around here is to behave like a narcissist monkey to get your dick sucked now.

>> No.2779780

>>2779756
>>2779765
>>2779775
you guys know >>2779655 and >>2779704 is just a falseflagger trying to fuck stuff up for >>2778003

>> No.2779781

>>2779775
you're blind if you don't see how his stuff is very good.
good lineweight, clean work, appealing stylisation, etc.

I'm guessing his issue with guys like giantloliguy is more that he seems to spend a lot of time rendering and stuff, not much on fundamentals, like getting his perspective right, etc.
So he doesn't learn what he should learn with every piece. So he doesn't git gud.

>>2779780
I don't know if that's the case but that doesn't matter too much tbqh

>> No.2779782

>>2779780
Right, if that anon is here reading please take worded advice crits with a GRAIN of salt on this board. Very few, if any, are qualified.

>> No.2779788

>>2779780
nah it's me

tl;dr are you complaints bytw

you guys suck ass.

>> No.2779790

>>2779788
post another draw then fag

>> No.2779791

>>2779788
You're lying, it was me. I'm not some pretentious retard.

>> No.2779792

>>2779770
any links to his blog?

>> No.2779794

>>2779781
I do find it nice and like, still not a reason to act like a kid. If you're tolerating that sort of behavior then don't come complaining no one with decent skill and a decent personality come posting around /ic/ and enjoy your shit board.

>> No.2779923

>>2779794
this is another issue. if you're so concerned about the well being of the board you could have answered more politely yourself
"you're pretty good, but you still have a long way to go, so post work, help others and stop being a dick"
anyway I don't condone his attitude either, since it just pollutes the thread even more.

and about posting when you're decent, most decent work doesn't get much attention, compared to bad or very good work, so it doesn't encourage posting much.
t. guy posting decent stuff

>> No.2779939

A random crossboarder here. Any of you do commissions and such? I'm thinking I might need some for the RPG Maker game I'm doing. I dislike the character generator the game comes with, the expressions are lousy and style isn't up to my speed.

>> No.2779956

>>2779939
create a thread, post all useful information there including the quality you expect (a pic related) and how much you're ready to pay.
usually it doesn't go very well because either of both are unrealistic.

>> No.2779979

>>2779752
reduce the head size

>> No.2779992

>>2779519
Disney girl?

>> No.2779993

>>2779752
that helmet looks way small for her head, should be tilted left a bit more to the side too

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>>2779956

Well, that sucks. I'll consider then. How much do you wager some 144x144 sized portraits would go for, that are similar to pic related style.

>> No.2780021

>>2780008
you know, this guy is one of the top pros.
the fact that it's 144x144 in the end doesn't make it less expensive, on the contrary you have to spend more time downsizing art to look good at low res.
so if you want to fill a game with stuff like that, prepare hundreds of $.
Otherwise go to DA and look for com' artists, you'll find low prices and the quality that go with it.
And fucking stop posting in this thread.

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>> No.2780137
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2780137

>>2779780
I'm honestly not.

>>2779923
>>2779794
>>2779748

I just wanted to apologize for what I said yesterday. I know that the things I said were really rude and immature, and honestly don't know why I acted out in that way.


if anyone's reading this please don't take anything I said to meaning.

>> No.2780140

>>2779780
>>2779788
>>2780137
samefag

>> No.2780149
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2780149

>>2780140
the guy at the end isn't me.. I honestly don't know who that is, and why he would pretend to be me..

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2780151

>>2780140
and here if this makes you happy.

>> No.2780169

why is there always so much drama in the alt thread?

>>2780137
it's ok, instead of apologies post more sketches, that's what the thread is for.

>> No.2780183
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2780183

i wanna git gud at drawing anime grills.

also i'm retarded and resized the image then saved and this is the maximum res i have now.

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2780191

>>2775787
Something about your work feels.. not right. The works on your twitter seem to have a grasp on anatomy while what you post on here is kinda shit.

The art here looks like you're aggressively referencing 1 or 2 manga artists, and twitter looks like someone who actually studies from life

Am I crazy anons?

>> No.2780199

>>2780169
>why is there always so much drama in the alt thread?
Because if we turn /ic/ into complete trash hole maybe mods finally will do something about this shitboard? It's pretty annoying to visit this place because of some special autists like Andrae and redline guy who doesn't post shit in their artblogs

>> No.2780207

>>2780191
> Twitter

You mean DA?

>> No.2780218
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2780218

took these down from my blog 'cause I didn't like 'em much

>> No.2780235

>>2776516
>If you had to pick 1 artbook to help you git gud at drawing weeb mangos, what would you pick?
Read the first book and a half of manga style sketching and thought it was alright. The styles would be considered old fashioned now though so you'll need the learn how to adapt it to modern artists you like.

>> No.2780345
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2780345

the hand is killing me. any other glaring mistakes?

>> No.2780424

Yo Krenz interview is up

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=qTsxeADkwDg

>> No.2780434

>>2775563
blog?

>> No.2780476
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2780476

some bullshit sketches. im not really sure about how to do linework. i like having a lot of lines because it feels like there is a lot of energy but if i could make them look energetic and clean then that would be cool. redlines and roasting is welcome

>> No.2780488

>>2779115
thanks doc

>> No.2780550

>>2780137
Good on you. Looking forward to see your stuff.

>> No.2780574

>>2779687
Pops has my respect because he has his own style. He also has a very nice Japanese aesthetic to his drawing which frankly I don't see imitated much.

>>2779992
There is a girl here who posted her IG before and she works for Disney.

I have been here since 2013. Ups and downs thick and thins, I have stuck with it and have gotten really good. Look enjoy your art and keep doing what you're doing but don't confuse what this thread is. Its /jp/ and /a/ draw thread with the pretense of learning fundamentals. I have been here for so long I have seen several great artists come and go. They don't stay here long. So its fallacy to say that good people don't come here and you need to love them when they do. Because its obvious to me that the crits that really pushed me before came from them. Thats why I avoid this thread though like the plague. Its really just the beginner thread with anime shit, and a few people who know what they are doing.

>> No.2780589

>>2780191
Nope. He's what happens when you regurgitate other artists' symbols.

>> No.2780624
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2780624

trying something new.

>> No.2780668

>>2780183
I've seen you post a couple times and really like your drawings, blog please?

>> No.2780681

>>2780624
Aren't you missing your trademark leprechaun boots?

>> No.2780705
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2780705

>>2779687
How people like Pops able to draw cute anime staff without basic fundamentals, anatomy grinding and drawing old hugs from life for years? I need to know secret. Why anons can doodling cute stuff like pic related while their realistic drawings looks like

>> No.2780707
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2780707

>>2780705
like ass

>> No.2780709
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2780709

Or why people who can draw like this can't draw simple cute anime?

>> No.2780746

>>2780707
cover up the head on the animu's and you will see his animu figures look like ass as well

>> No.2780748
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2780748

>>2780746
still looks cute enough

>> No.2780758
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2780758

ahahahah wew :(

>> No.2780766

>>2780758
not bad

>hurr eraser xd
kill yourself

>> No.2780793

>>2780424
bobby chiu annoys me for some reason

>> No.2780798

>>2780793
I haven''t watched enough of his video to form a strong opinion on him but he seems like a nice enough guy. His interview style is a little bit weird though cause he talks really quite and calm like and doesn't really react to anything. Like when Krenz would tell a joke or laugh he wouldn't really react, he'd just carry on asking questions. But aside from that he seems alright.

>> No.2780840
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2780840

>>2778211
I still need to work on like everything but general feedback on the style? I kinda want to make a short story comic but I'm still trying to strike a certain vibe with the art.

>> No.2780843

>>2780424
see him twirling his stylus every once in a while? and you can see the reflected monitor glare in his glasses while he stares straight ahead
I bet he's drawing during the whole interview

>> No.2780845

>>2779173
lumuis

>> No.2780853

>>2780840
>a certain vibe
you do the garbage vibe quite well

>> No.2780891

>>2780766
He probably wanted to hide something he wrote.

>> No.2780970

>>2780709

It's not because they can't, but they don't want to, mostly because it breaks so many rules it almost feels like taking 20 steps back throwing out almost everything you learned.

>> No.2780972
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2780972

>>2780970
huh, maybe because stylization is actually hard

>> No.2781011

>>2775776
make the torso a tiny bit largeer m8

>> No.2781013
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2781013

>>2780624
cartoony head and porn body is not a good combination

>> No.2781016

>>2781013
Says you

>> No.2781026

>>2780972
was the slight sarcastic wording of your post necessary

>> No.2781121
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2781121

Thoughts?
The neck is too long, right?

>> No.2781122

>>2781121
It's shit, learn fundies.

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>> No.2781140
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2781140

I did my first ever digital drawing for fun today and I would like some help with the colouring. How do I cleanly shade the gate? I feel like my blending of colours makes it look very muddy and unfinished.

I'm also doing Loomis' Fun With Pencil, would copying and drawing from photos help as much as drawing from real life?

>> No.2781153

>>2780748
Man, he has a really appealing use of lines though, love it.

>> No.2781155

>>2780972
Haaa, I was like "is that FunkeyMonkey?"

I love his art so much, it's so stylish and fun.

>> No.2781156

>>2781121
You don't actually draw a box in the figure, you are thinking about a box in your head but not actually drawing it. Also you are not ready to be cartooning. Not being mean but go to the /beg/ thread if you're serious.

>> No.2781193
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>>2781156
Are you serious?
Me thinking about perspective and vanishing points is good but the fact that I put it down on the drawing so I can keep it consistent means I'm bad? Are you saying anyone who can't draw perspective from imagination without putting down auxiliary lines is too terrible at drawing to draw cartoons?

>> No.2781219

>>2781193
>Are you saying anyone who can't draw perspective from imagination without putting down auxiliary lines is too terrible at drawing to draw cartoons?

No, you are saying that. I said you think about the box as you draw. This is too advance thinking for you because you haven't dawn many basic form, such as the box, and are attempting to do what you are doing. In the end it comes down to sing your judgement and you can't get a sense of judgement without doing the formal many times.

So go back to square one...or don't, not my career on the line.

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2781230

more nothing

>>2780668
yaow12.tumblr.com

>> No.2781233

>>2781230
Grow a pair and use the hard round brush.

>> No.2781251
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2781251

>>2775288
How can I practice basics (face drawing) without mindlessly copying references or reading .pdf I don't understand ?
I would like to practice basics while producing something I can be proud of and not throw away.

Is it a possible thing to do ? Honestly .pdf are not helping me drawing better faces, I can't even find the style of face I would like to go for.

>> No.2781252

>>2781233
this man knows what he's talking about

>> No.2781253

>>2781251
is posting this picture the latest meme?

>> No.2781254

>>2781219
Okay, thanks for answering.
The reason I disagree with you here is because I've been taught to always go about drawing anything in this order:

>First Thumbnail
>Then gesture
>Then rough sketch
>Then perspective lines
>Then line art
>Then shading
>Then color

It always made sense to me, so I think I'll stick with it.

>> No.2781256

>>2781253
no I actually really like the line. And even if anime is not my primary style, I would like to use some elements of it.

I don't want to draw cute anime girls tho.

Basically I really like the aesthetic of this pic, and I can't even find the artist even with reverse search.

>> No.2781259

>>2781256
You're not fooling anyone. Fuck off.

>> No.2781264

>>2781259
I haven't come here in weeks, do you think that if I want to shitpost, I will come here ? I can't even be bothered to shitpost.

>"I don't like this so you must be memeing"

Fuck, I'm just asking for an advice, and it was not even directly related to this pic.

>> No.2781267

>>2781254
Your rough sketch can be your gesture. You don't have to start with a thumbnail. You should be thinking about perspective at every point anyway. Lineart is time consuming and not everything has to have lineart. You could go straight into color.

Art isn't a linear process. People smear shit on canvas and put it in a museum to sell for millions. Did they carefully craft lineart before shading so they can actually affix the shit to the wall? I don't think so.

You are free to do w/e though.

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2781298

stuff of this morning

>> No.2781317

>>2781264
I'm >>2781253 but not the rude poster.
If animu isn't what you're going for, you shouldn't even bother with its style in my opinion. The only answer is to just drawing a lot of faces from different perspective, so references are a good help. Look up ghibli artbooks, they focus a lot of how faces look from different perspectives.

>> No.2781324

>>2781317
Thanks I will look up into that.
I wanted to do a mix of western style like Moebius, or comic artists in general with mango.

Going for a very "smooth" style.

I used an anime pic of a girl because I love how some of them look without being too extreme or ridiculous.

I guess drawing a lot of faces is an obvious but true answer. I'll look up Ghibli artworks, look for artistic styles and references and try with time to integrate it in the basics.

>> No.2781329

>>2781324
Also try to use google to look for the faces because I'm sure you're not to keen on looking up artbooks containing mostly landscape and storyboards.

>> No.2781331

>>2781329
Honestly both could be useful to me.

I wanted to learn perspective, but I really can't even begin to fathom how it works. It's too technical and I don't know how to learn it.
So I'm looking for referenes and learn by "analyzing" and "using" existing works"

>> No.2781345
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2781345

so hawt yum

>> No.2781378

>>2780972
>Want to draw like this
>Can't see why it looks good
REEEEE

>> No.2781393

>>2781378
cute face in a sexy costume, what's not to understand? Practice more!

>> No.2781435

>>2780705
>>2780707
cause we studied what more or less equates as cartooning which tends to have a much heavier emphasis on l̶i̶n̶e̶ shape than value

plus those sketches in >>2780707 are very tiny for something like a value study, no real room to work (let alone construct (see the glasses for scale))
something like >>2780709 is much larger, based on the size of those marks that's probably an 18x24 pad

also they have a tough time with anime cause they haven't studied how to design an draw simple yet appealing shapes that echo the human form. of course a cartoonist who's spent years developing and designing their shorthands for anatomy/etc (aka their styles) will have a leg up when it comes to drawing in those styles as opposed to someone who spends most of their time drawing from photo ref (not that it makes any of their works more or less valued than each others, people draw what they like/find interesting)

>>2778120
you're much better than when i tried teaching you how to draw arms, i'm proud
tho the arm is still jus a wee bit off and also those feet are really bad, wish i could help but i'm really bad with feet too unless i super simplify them, always end up redrawing them 3-5 times till i get em looking okay

>> No.2781540
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2781540

>>2781378
Use refs.
Be unoriginal also.

>> No.2781701

>>2781256
Artist is http://kuvshinov-ilya.tumblr.com/image/152994079140
use iqdb or sourcenao next time.

>> No.2781728

>>2781298
BLOG

>> No.2781732

>>2780207
no
go look at the 2 pages and tell me theres not a significant difference in quality

>> No.2781756

>>2781732
> at the 2 pages

I guess mean "last" 2 pages?

>> No.2781770

>>2781540
It's not that easy skillfags
AHHHH

>> No.2781799

>>2781540
Well, using references doesn't have to be unoriginal. I make my own, and by definition, it is unique. If you mean concept like "oh, my sci-fi fantasy setting", that's more of a thing that can't be forced.

>> No.2781829

>>2775786
beg

>> No.2781840

>>2781829
You want him to beg for what?

>> No.2781846

>>2780758
cute I Like your stuff, more pls

>> No.2781847
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2781847

Don't really know what I'm doing but it was fun to experiment

>> No.2781854

>>2781847
holy shit I'm gonna need
BLOG
L
O
G

>> No.2781861

>>2781847
you've got the general shape of the orange down, but color and texture wise the orange's surface doesn't read as an orange (when minimized it looks like garlic) Theres no contrast of texture between the fruit vrs the white fuzzy parts of the peel that always sticks after you take the rind off. Hope that makes sense.

>> No.2781864
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2781864

beginning second half of daki. Going for something more cute this time. the legs are giving me trouble again, should the calves be a little longer?

>> No.2781873

>>2781847
Fucking awesome, blog?
>>2781861
IMO most of your critique is nitpicking and/or useless details that would probably make the image a lot messier to look at, sawrry

>> No.2781878

>>2781873
(you)

>> No.2781879
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Wip

>> No.2781883
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>>2781879
Finished. Really joggin'd my noggin on this one, but it's still pretty shit tbqh. I'll do better next time.

>> No.2781888

>>2781883
degenerate.

>> No.2781889

>>2781888
I know, I'm gonna kill myself now.

>> No.2781890

>>2781879
>>2781883
>all this refining done in three minutes
Whew

>> No.2781898

>>2781883
too much airbrush glow effect

>> No.2781900
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Work in progress, I was going for a scene of a lewd loli cooling herself, but something feels like it's missing, like socks or something. Any criticism on the hair, also?

>> No.2781903

>>2781900
Blog? Like your stuff.

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>>2781854
>>2781873
Wow thank you! My instagram is "freezebobs" but I don't really post a lot of stuff, sorry.

>>2781861
I see what you mean, I wasn't really sure how to make the texture look right. I'll try making more of an effort to render it better next time and probably use refs. Thank you for the crit

>> No.2781907

>>2781903
No such thing, since I feel the need to git gud first. Would you mind criticizing this one for me, though?

>> No.2781944
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I could use a second opinion on these drafts before I start grinding on it. Comics are hard.

>> No.2781946

>>2781944
Sorry, forgot to include the link.
http://imgur.com/a/6nKSJ

>> No.2781958

>>2781900
Torso looks too flat

>> No.2781960
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first go at digital painting. couldn't decide if this belonged in beg or here.

>>2781298
sick, blog pls

>>2781540
mirin' that mesh anon

>>2781864
those socks are nice
n-no homo

>>2781883
that bun has as huge ass tho
looks nice tho

>> No.2781976

>>2781960
My Fking eyes.. Anons pass me a gun so I can shoot myself

>> No.2781979

>>2781976
Really great criticism anon!

>> No.2781981

>>2781976
I've seen worse.

>> No.2781982

>>2781140
bump please

>> No.2781984

>>2778003
AESTHETIC

>> No.2781987
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>>2780112
v cute

>>2781298
love these characters!

>> No.2781991

>>2781976

only if you shoot me first. crits pls

>> No.2782005

>>2781960
hard to give crit when you don't tell us what your goal was here. If this was just an exploration of your new tools than providing crit on facial anatomy or technique is counter productive.
That said, in the future you should use reference when drawing hair. This character looks like they are wearing a wig. The hair line is fucked and the hair billows way too much for how big her skull should be.

>> No.2782011
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>>2781140
I would gradiate it more, if you want a smoother look. It just kind of depends on if you want hyper-realism or not. You seem to be on the right track to me...

>> No.2782030

>>2782005
Thanks. Goal was just getting my feet wet.

>> No.2782044
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>>2781960
Other anon is right, the hair looks much more natural with an actual hairline.

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>>2781987

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>>2782044
Use guidelines

>> No.2782069

>>2782065
meant to reply to >>2781960

>> No.2782075

>>2782065
I was just fixing the hair based on the face drawn already. If I were them I'd redo the whole thing, yeah. Your draw-over is better overall. Nice work, sempai I like how you do lips.

>> No.2782077

>>2782069
Oh shit, okay.

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please save me I just want to get better

>> No.2782084

>>2782075
>>2782077
Sorry, not sure who the OP is

>> No.2782155

>>2782079
Are you using reference?

>> No.2782172

>>2782155
I am not

>> No.2782241

new thread >>2782240

>> No.2782277

>>2782044
>>2782065
Whoa dude that is sweet. Didnt expect to get legit draw-overs. Saving these both for future reference. Thank you anons for taking the time to help

>> No.2783123

>>2780758
Blog please.

>> No.2784266

>>2781121
did you just totally disregard the center line of the face you constructed? Why bother then?

>> No.2784514

>>2784266
That's me struggling with switching from narrow normal face to broad anime faces. I went with more normal proportions from habit and then realized that I had to make it way broader.