/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

After-the-Lock:

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>>2755625

Angel Princess. Hup, on the pile.

PRINCESS GET!

>>2753753

More like Thief Princess but this is kinda ass anyway so I don't care

Rollin

>>2756663
more easy to look at

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>>2755990

Crystal Princess, and PRINCESS GET!

*Hup* on the pile.

roll i guess

>>2755990
[appreciation for old testament angeling intensifies]

>>2756330
Her ass is the merchandise ?
>>2756664
Treat her better. I mean, give here more food, energy and happiness.
>>2757081
Classic basketball injury on her right hand. It seriously hurt.

>>2755477
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>>2755477
What does Twink Princess do when he gets older and can't be a twink no mo? Does he become a Daddy King, Bara Baron, Prince Charming or a Muscular King?

Quickie one using a number generator, need to pose better tho...

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>>2757491

Thanks Anon. :)

>>2757550

Stage right, or other? Hands are still something I need to focus a lot more on.

rollin

>>2757081
Foreshortening is hard af; the pointing arm looks a little goofy but I'll be damned if I have anything productive to say nigga lmoa

rrrr

I roll

>>2757986
That's a really, really big handle and guard on a dagger, anon.

That aside, very good.

I always forget to also post stuff here

>>2755477
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>>2755477
ROLL

Roar.

Nigger tits!

>>2759183
yes please

>>2759197
kill it with fire

I've drawn a Mouse Princess.

>>2760258
That you have.

>>2755477
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>>2759225

lmao i get that meme

>>2755477
Hello, first time ever on this board. I want to get good at drawing and I hope this place can help me.

>>2755477
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>>2760985
We will help you, but you should probably go to the beginner's thread.

>>2761036

my attempt at plant princess...

>>2755477
Roll?

>>2761376
where is her chin??

Gonna roll.

>>2755477
Rolling entirely for myself.

>>2761376
More contrast? Contrast makes pregnant peoples happy.

Sup guys, back in /tg/ they where talking about a Psychic Princess, so i've made some concepts for her to decide her appearance.

While some say she sould be sitting with an elegant dress and a mask, or even laying, since she move herself with her mind i gave her a levitation pose. They also pointed out that she must drool because... i don't remember.

So, wich one you think is better

>>2761860
Middle.

>>2761860
>They also pointed out that she must drool because... i don't remember.
She was lobotomized, wasn't she?

>>2761878
yes

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>>2757081

Not super happy with this one. *HUP* On the pile.

Moth Princess and PRINCESS GET!

>>2762339
I like the concept of a bulb-humpin' moth.

With that said...

The body seems alright, but definitely consider dividing up her back a bit with more of a visible spine next time. The shading in that area certainly helps, but showing a bit of 'backbone' could go a long way to giving the piece a bit more sense of form. Her feet could stand to be a bit bigger as well-our feet are a smidge longer than our heads (when seen from the front) are tall.

Here, have a Goblin Princess made by me.

Drink Responsibly, tho, or at least don't drive.

>>2762370
You're bringing me back to Newgrounds, fambino (not a bad thing necessarily). Strive for consistency with some of the details like the chain of the necklace. Its stage left portion looks flat and the stage right appears bulbous like pearls or some-such.

>>2762375
Newgrounds? Also what's a Fambino

>like the chain of the necklace
The necklace, damn... i admit that i wasn't paying attention for that

>>2761420
>420
>elemental
>smoke
420 blaze it evry day princess

uno amigo enrique iglesias rollamingoooo

>>2762450
DUDE

stage-left eye is a bit further away from the bridge of the nose than its counterpart on the right

>>2762559
...Angelina Jolie?

I like them strokes niqqah

>>2762559
I feel like you could have exaggerated ogre-ish features more and still have it appealing. it looks like a grill with horns.

>>2762339
Beautiful idea, lame drawing. Will do it as an AD.
>>2762370
She serves water, come on.
>>2762450
Dude, not a hint of hemp shapes. Nice.
>>2762559
Bigger brush? Change your values according to materials?

>>2762631
>She serves water, come on.

Actually, that's her Stud's Draugh

>>2762678
Ew nigga!

>>2762802
Well, she's also wearing the King's Crown, but i forgot the other dowry

>>2762631

What's and AD?

>>2763193
Art Director

>>2763206

Hrm. That's a step up I guess. I'll try harder for the next one.

Roru.

rollnaldo, rollnaldinho, rollberto carloooosssssss

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>>2763467
Kroolls, Khediroll, Porollskiiiiiiii

fairy knight

On the bright side, I got to see a train wreck in slow motion.

Kobold Princess, and Princess Get.

Rewl

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roller

rolling

>>2755477
Nice

rollercoaster

>>2755477
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>>2755477
rill

>>2755477
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>>2755477
bippity bop

>>2755477
<3

>>2755477
rolll

>>2761376
>pregnant

i hope these threads never die

>>2764095
His tiny extremities are kind of freaking me out. Strong tangent running through the side of his face. His ear extending down to his jawline makes it look more like a tumor than anything and his horns being so uneven creates a conflict with his otherwise spacially symmetrical facial features. His neck is so long and his belt is so low that his body appears quite distorted.

While I think his extremities are a bit small and in the hands' case asymmetrical, the legs look pretty good and I like the designs on the cape.

>>2764461
Not entirely sure what's going on with the snout but the body looks pretty good for the most part. With tails try and keep them a emerging a little higher on the back at the top of the sacrum, with how big it is it looks like a good portion of it is emerging straight out of her ass crack. Those glutes need to be free.

>>2765190
Pretty decent characterization all around, visible hand is pretty goofy. If you're not sure how they work intuitively always use your own as a reference.Also consider shifting its position in front of that tuft of fur or clearing it from its contours entirely.

>>2765893
After looking a bit and measuring the nearest arm appears to be very slightly too long. It's not heinous or anything. I feel like if that subtle ghosted line just above the current position of the broom was angled up just a few degrees and the contour of the broom was angled into that position it'd be close to perfect after re-affixing the hands to it.

I also feel like the fibular/tibial portion of her leg may be slightly too short.

I love the subtle muscles in visible in the torso, really well done overall.

>>2766309
Nothing lasts forever but it's hard to believe we've gone almost two years now.

Anyway, though there are asymmetries here and there. I really like the personality in this piece.

>>2764095
Strong tangent running through the side of his face. His ear extending down to his jawline makes it look more like a tumor than anything and his horns being so uneven creates a conflict with his otherwise spacially symmetrical facial features. His neck is so long and his belt is so low that his body appears quite distorted.

While I think his extremities are a bit small and in the hands' case asymmetrical, the legs look pretty good and I like the designs on the cape.

>>2764461
Not entirely sure what's going on with the snout but the body looks pretty good for the most part. With tails try and keep them emerging a little higher on the back at the top of the sacrum, with how big it is it looks like a good portion of it is coming straight out of her ass crack. Those glutes need to be free.

>>2765190
Pretty decent characterization all around, visible hand looks kind of off. If you're not sure how they work intuitively always use your own as a reference. Also consider shifting its position in front of that tuft of fur or clearing it from its contours entirely.

>>2765893
After looking a bit and measuring the nearest arm appears to be very slightly too long. It's not heinous or anything. I feel like if that subtle ghosted line just above the current position of the broom was angled up just a few degrees and the contour of the broom was fitted into that position it'd be close to perfect- after re-affixing the hands to it of course

I also feel like the fibular/tibial portion of her leg may be slightly too short.

I love the subtle muscles in visible in the torso, really well done overall.

>>2766309
Nothing lasts forever but it's hard to believe we've gone almost two years now. I'm not sure how much I have left in the gas tank but I've liked doing these threads and seeing how people run with the characters.

Anyway, though there are asymmetries here and there. I really like the personality in this piece.

I accidentally a thing and she kinda looks like a cross between Knight and Primeval Princesses, so i thought i'd post. Might color it later too, so if you niggas have some suggestions of what colors should i use, i'm happy to hear them.
Yes, that's a certified Uncertified Wifu™

>>2767287
Very nice fambinosaur. You should give her gold armor to emphasize those heroic matriarch proportions

>>2767287
blog?

Fuckit.

Roll.

>>2764461
>>2766727

I'll pay more attention to tail placement next time. Also, I had no idea how to snout, so, that showed.

Anyway, Ghost Princess and PRINCESS GET.

>>2767287
For a sec there I thought it was the Looking Glass Knight.

>>2767583
https://liarjohnny.tumblr.com/

>>2755477
yohoho

>>2755477
rollorino

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>>2765676
mmmm. there should be an athlete princess

also roll

Haven't participated in a while myself.

R-roll...

Haven't participated in a while myself.

R-roll...

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=vg14HPuXLOU

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9tZWLRh3xmU

Roll ayy

rell

Rollang why not

I didn't want to sleep without my daily reminder of how much I suck. Enjoy anons

>>2772788

Adorable af

>>2772759

Actually committed this time because I wanna not suck. Would love critique

>>2755477
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>>2772898
I might be wrong, but the construction looks off in some places, particularly the torso, the right arm and hand.

>>2772801
Thx

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>>2767820

Somewhere along the line it got extra stupid.

Arcane Princess and Princess Get.

Blippitybloop.

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>>2755477
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>>2772788
Don't beat yourself up, it could be much worse. Mind the facial features-they don't seem to be following a logical path to a vanishing point. The stage-right ear is lower than the stage-left ear, the stage-right eye is higher than the stage-left, and the stage-left portion of the beak is a bit higher than its counterpart.

>>2772898
Cute scene. The perspective on the cube face is pretty tough, like the other guy said, do your best to think of it like a cube and divide the features and those projections along the contours accordingly. The humeral portion of the stage-right arm appears flat; use the appearance of its counterpart on the left to inform you of what it should look like to take stock of what it should look like. Note that you've placed the right hand and arm a bit farther from the body than the left, once you've corrected this discrepancy it should be easier to envision the proper cylindrical form of the arm.

>>2773354
The stance is a little goofy and the bod is a little thick and squat-her legs almost appear to be sprouting directly from her ribcage, in a female character, much like an actual female, it's normal to compress the obliques inward a bit. Her stage-right forearm doesn't appear to taper in towards the wrist either. Keep practicing fambinosaur, BELIEVE

>>2755477
roll for birb pussy

>>2772788
Don't beat yourself up, it could be much worse. Mind the facial features-they don't seem to be following a logical path to a vanishing point. The stage-right ear is lower than the stage-left ear, the stage-right eye is higher than the stage-left, and the stage-left portion of the beak is a bit higher than its counterpart. Ideally these things should all converge towards the same point.

>>2772898
Cute scene. The perspective on the cube face is pretty tough, like the other guy said, do your best to think of it like a cube and divide the features and those projections along the contours accordingly. The humeral portion of the stage-right arm appears flat, use the appearance of its counterpart on the left to take stock of what it should look like as a cylinder in perspective. Note that you've placed the right hand and arm a bit farther from the body than the left, once you've corrected this discrepancy it should be easier to envision the proper cylindrical form of that arm. Regardless of whether you move the position of the forearm and hand though, you should try fiddling with that part a bit and giving it some form.

>>2773354
The stance is a little goofy and the bod is a little thick and squat-her legs almost appear to be sprouting directly from her ribcage. In a female character, much like an actual female, it's normal to compress the obliques inward a bit assuming she isn't a tubster. Her stage-right forearm doesn't appear to taper in towards the wrist either. Keep practicing fambinosaur, BELIEVE

>>2767655
Bored now.

>>2774802
Whoa, I fucked that leg up.

>>2774802
If you're going to treat the piece as a full on painting rather than a sketch definitely consider really getting in there and blending all of the different colors as best you can. Make some of those hard edges transition into softer ones. Refine the linework and things of that nature. It doesn't look too shabby, but it does look fairly raw in some areas. Mind the abdominal area in particular it kind of looks like some kind of mechanical sloping shape.

>>2774802
HOL UP

>>2776359
WE

>>2776361
AYOOO

AYOOOOOOOOOOOOO

HOL UP

>>2776367
WUZ

*smack lips*

>>2776411
KANGS

>>2776346
Cool, cool, thanks! Too late to fix the linework, but I might as well put some more time into blending.

Late but roll

>>2755477
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>>2755477
r-r-r-rollu

Roll.
more ppl should draw cute girls

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>>2773354

Tried to incorporate some of the advice given in this thread.

For this one I wanted her to look like she was leaning over towards someone, not sure if that translates.

Merchant Princess and PRINCESS GET!

>>2781396
What kind of brush was used for this?

Rolling again, let's see how do

>>2781396
What kind of brush was used for this?

>>2781349
Doesn't translate, you need to define the forms a little stronger, cause atm I have no idea what Im looking at apart from the face.

>>2755477
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>>2755477
Rollin

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roll!!!

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Rolling

>>2781396
What kind of brush was used for this?

Got disencouraged halfway through. Not gonna make it

rollo

Roll-

rolling star

raul

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>>2781349
Mind your proportions, she looks like she has about a head and a half worth of width between the stage-right portion of her head her shoulder on that side.

>>2781396
Adorable, though a bit "safe if that makes sense. You didn't really attempt to portray the monster in th monster girl, but what is there is pretty well done. Consider the relationship between the human features of her face and the monster features closer to the top oof her head, the "eyes". You can kind of see how they're not quite in the right spot.

>>2781522
I like the general design, but there are some hiccups. The hand holding the lance is huge to the point of being grotesque. Her torso to the base of the pelvis looks a little long (about half a head) and using that as your guide it appears you may have made the arm a bit long as consequence.

>>2782838
Could be worse. Decent head construction, belly button may be a bit low, stage right leg looks a bit thicker than its counterpart at the femoral portion. Keep practicing fambino.

>>2784246
Pretty good. I'm hesitant to say that the dynamic foreshortening attempt was a complete success, but the drawing is solid overall. I feel that the pattern on her outfit kind of flattens out her curves. One thing you can try next time on a more serious drawing is to draw the pattern separately and then use the "warp tool" (assuming you're using photoshop) and some of the other transformation tools to fit the pattern across the form after the fact instead of attempting to draw it and account for the surface it's on at the same time.

>>2784246

The foreshortening is a bit extreme, her lower body appears to be tiny.

First time roller

Roall.

>>2784863
>*stage-right portion of her head AND her shoulder on that side.

shake my head to be honest

rolling

roll it

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rolln

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>>2755477
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>>2755477
Hime-chuan!~

rolling

>>2755477
Rolling. First time doing this :)

check em

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>>2788881

>>2788916
Very cute, the simple dodge-tool rendering is effectively used here. It almost looks like something you'd see in a western animator's portfolio.

There are several tangents involving the wrist "poof" on her stage-right arm, both the contour of the back of her head, her hairline, bangs, eyelashes are all being encroached on by it. There's also a tangent made by her stage-left wing both at that fold where the forearm and upper arm meet. Try and find a work around or just look out for that in your next piece. If you are trying to portray her stage-right arm wrapping around the back of her head it's not reading very well to me-the contour of her hand on that same arm is broken up by that contour of the back of her head and it becomes difficult to tell what's going on (I believe she's running her hand through her hair but with the way it originates both higher than her elbow at the top and as low as it does on the bottom, further combined with those aforementioned tangents, makes things a little confusing).

Also, her stage-left forearm is a bit "overdeveloped" so to speak, easily being one and a half times the size of her upper arm of. Maybe tame that a bit.

Otherwise, cute piece. Keep it up fambino

>>2788949
I sort of don't want to be 'that guy', anon, but I've seen a lot of your posts and I can't take it anymore.

Stage left means a performer on the stage's left, when they're looking at us. So stage left is the viewer's right.

To be absolutely clear, in this picture, moth-hime is striding towards stage right.

>>2766727
>drawing a straight line on a curved spine

>>2788966
I see, I always thought stage-left/right was x's appearance to the audience. Thanks for the correction. I guess I'll just stick to "left" and "right", going forward.

>>2788986
No problem, anon; we all make mistakes. Proper left is an additional term that refers specifically to the figure's left. In that picture, for example, her proper left is the same as stage left, but they'd be different if her back were turned to us.

But it's probably easier and clearer to everyone involved to just use stuff like 'her left' or 'our left', which are still totally unambiguous.

>>2788974
Sorry for the confusion but that's not a reference to the spine at all, but the combined length of the upper and lower arms were they at rest.

>>2788991
"our left/right"

The fact I was using an over-extravagant term completely wrong is bad enough, but to think that it never even crossed my mind to use something as simple as that is quite embarrassing.

Thank you anon, I promise I'll never misuse theater terminology again.

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>>2781349

Instead of just rolling on I went back and tried to make it suck less.

I feel good about this one.

Merchant Princess and PRINCESS GET!

>>2755477
Hime chuaaaan!~

Roll (/*ﾟ∀ﾟ*)/

>>2789412
A substantial improvement over your previous attempt. Mind that sleeve; unless you intended it to be "pointy" like that, try and envision it wrapping around the cylindrical form of her arm, should be rounded off a but more. It seems you've given her a bit of extra space between her right arm and shoulder (our view) and her head and neck versus their counterparts on the left (it's noteworthy that you did mostly erase it though the arm is still originating from there). However, because you erased it and let the hair cover everything there wouldn't necessarily be a huge change in the placement of that arm from where it is currently, it would probably just emerge from the contour of that side of her body a bit closer to it is all.

>>2765676
brehs...

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Rollin rollin rollin

>>2755477
cookie...

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rollan

roland

useless roll

mimic
>>2792709

>>2792763
cyclops

Rolling.

>>2792763
>>2792866
Really digging these.

Rolling.

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>>2793009

>>2776426
EN SHEEEET

rollin

>>2781678

Sorry, late, but here she is. Probably my best drawing to date. Rate my bun.

>>2792866
i picked retard girl -_O
>>2792874
thanks :)

>>2792874
thanks!
>>2792866
retard girl/princess...i deleted my last post and changed it so the crown is on the skull

>>2755477
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>>2793361
reroll?

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>>2792763
>>2792866
>>2793311

I like the way the colors look together.

>mimic princess

It's a bit busy and hard to really see what's going on even though she's just standing there. The goo looks pretty good (you been practicing drawing goo for some reason bud?)

>Triclops princess

I like how you managed to make her buff as hell but cute at the same time

>Retard Princess

Really well done, and sad.

>>2793085
I think the teeth are off. They meet around the same height as the upper and lower lips don't they? I guess I'm not 100% sure.

>>2793289
I like the face/espression. Gotta tame that chicken scratch

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=wgDNDOKnArk

The hand on our right looks a little small. Maybe try and orient it in a way we see a bit more of it.

>>2794981

Thank you, anon, I've always had trouble with lines. Gonna get on it. Also rolling again.

>>2794981
>espression

I can't believe I didn't catch smdh

>>2795058
glhf

rolling

>>2755477
Rolling

>>2755477
rull!!

shiggy

Whale Princess.

r9oll

roll

rollerino

Rolling.

>>2755477
Rolling with a song
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=HTbthYig5PQ

roll

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>>2794981
yeah i have practiced drawing goo before haha thanks!

i guess this will be my roll..i'm going to bed now though

uguurangutan?
orange-tan?
orangu chan
I'm sorry /ic/ and anyone who has drawn monkey princess before, really, I just had to. I'll make it up sometime

rol

>>2797388
puppy princess

>>2797219
expression made me lol

>>2797043
plant princess

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>>2797539
kobold princess

>>2797219
I laughed, thanks

>>2797617
angel princess

>>2797895
faun princess

>>2797944
picked squidapus princess

>>2798076
faerie Princess

>>2755477
Kek, I made the whole drawing tilted without noticing.

>>2755498
Lovly

>>2798286


Just add a floorplane and HL and you have a cool perspective shot.

>>2795348

>>2799047
well gotta reroll

>>2795348
>>2799047
>>2799048
seriously...

>>2755477
ro ll

>>2755477
roll

rollerino

>>2755477
rœll

>>2755477
roll

howd you make this rather okay one
>>2755635
and then
>>2755634
???

>>2755477
End my miserable existence.

>>2755477
60 - Golem Princess

(beginner may post on the tower princess threads too, right?)

Wow... I really had fun drawing her, I think I'll even make a full artwork out of her.
I never had so much fun drawing, I think.

Tower Girls is such a cute idea, I love it.

>>2755477
rolling

>>2799051
rull fur alll the princessess!!!!

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>>2755477
r-r-rollin

>>2755477
rerolling because im a poor excuse of a human being

>>2755477
rawling

>>2755477
rolling

Rolling

Cat Princess, need to work on making my shit less stiff

rolling

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>>2755477
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>>2800339
I have no clue what a kobold is

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>>2795770
Nice bewbs famb

>>2797219
KILL IT!

>>2797439
cute

>>2797539
Actually horrifying

>>2797617
Not bad but she could use a neck

>>2797895
Watch that hand

>>2797944
...b-butt

>>2798076
lewd af

>>2798125
I like it; the size disparity between the eyes should actually be reversed; we can easily see that ear on our left which implies her face is being turned slightly away from the creature.

>>2798286
I wonder if it would look better with less enormous femurs but it's pretty good in either case.

>>2799047
Lots of harsh lines, the hand on our right clasping the helmet looks terrifying, our hands have a little "webbing" made from extra skin between our thumb and index finger but certainly not that much. Keep practicing!

>>2799558
Very nice, unfortunately that sash on the right hand side really creates an optical illusion and looks more like negative space because of its similarity with the background color. I would consider adding a hue to it of some sort. It looks great overall though, really.

>>2799559
Very cute face, everything else is very "busy" though which makes it a little hard to look at. Try and cut back on any potentially unnecessary details in your designs and investigate the concept of "line tangents" as this piece is suffering from quite a few. Keep practicing!

>>2799634
Good pose, hands are ably done.

>>2800205
Very well done. I feel like her eye on our left which is turning away might appear a bit too small, though. It should perhaps appear at a somewhat reduced size due to the angle, but having them be the same size might be preferable in this instance; note the headband and the relation of that eye and eyebrow to it.

The rendering is economical but very well done.

>>2800545
mu-...muh dick. Love the reflected light on the crown, and the treatment of the metal fittings around her nubby horns. The lines and colors overall are simple but exceptional nonetheless. Keep it up!

>>2800687

>>2800732
thanks for your criticism!
Really appreciate it and I'm sure the other critiqued fellows do too.

>>2800882
>>2800732
Hell yea we do anon! Thanks for the motivation!

Wish I could spend more time on this, add more details

>>2755477
I would like to try it this year. Thus, rolling. Please be kind to me, post number.

rolling for pixel art practice

Roll

Ye boi

>>2801214
I'm too tired to clean it up, but here's Mouse Princess.

Trying to practice lines for princess what am i doing wrong?

>>2801577
for reference this is also how I do studies and i feel like I like the line work there rather than the clean one for the princess.

Roll

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Rolled using random.org

I need to practice more dynamic poses I think.

>>2803093
I don't think the pose is thát stiff. Maybe push out the hips to one side, make each leg more different from the other. Btw if you resize to about 1000px it's easier to view the image as a whole. Keep it up!

>>2755477
rolling in the deep

rizyrollin'

Roll

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Kobold Princess. I want to learn how to draw cute girls so Tower Girls seemed like an alright way to practice.

>>2795058

This took way too long and showed me just how much practice I need with line weight. Felt worth it to power through though. Rate my zon pls

>>2804284

Thicc / 10

I like the rhythym from the delt - bicep - forearm.

what canvas size do you guys use on photoshop? I want to have an easier time to do line work.