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2738563 No.2738563 [Reply] [Original]

draw a head

>> No.2738565

>>2738563
How much are you paying?

>> No.2738590

>>2738565
I think OP wants you to draw for free.

>> No.2738599

>>2738590
How much exposure will I get?

>> No.2740725

>>2738599
a few dozen autists :^)

>> No.2740729

threads like these, it would actually be nice to see people participate and just draw a head. like a community activity
>not posting a head with post

>> No.2740748

>>2740729
post a head then boi

>> No.2740786
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2740786

>>2738563

>> No.2740796
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2740796

ready for modeling

>> No.2740869
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2740869

Ok

>> No.2740971
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2740971

I think the guidelines helped very much ^^

>> No.2740973

>>2740869
cranial mass is too small compared to the jaw and face

>> No.2740974

>>2740796
ideal head proportions 2020

>> No.2740995
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2740995

I'm good at drawing ugly head

>> No.2741000

>>2740995

If you want to change that you can start by giving your characters a chin. Just a tip

>> No.2741145

>>2740973
Indeed, thanks lamalama

>> No.2741167
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2741167

Pft i used up all my energy already so here are some tiny quicky ones

>> No.2743383

>>2740995
leafy?

>> No.2743393
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2743393

>> No.2743463
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2743463

Did my best but I should've looked more at the guide.

>> No.2744236
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2744236

Off the top of my head for 5 mins

>> No.2744247
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>> No.2745890
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>> No.2745931

>>2740786
Nicely proportioned old man's head
>>2740971
Unintentionally cute head

>> No.2745942
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2745942

>>2743463
That's pretty good man, I like the sharp lines.

>> No.2746082
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2746082

>> No.2746091

>>2745942
Hey thanks anon.
>>2746082
I think this might be the best one. I think it has the best proportion though maybe it's just me I might have put a little more cranium in the back. Then again the cranium is way too fucking big on mine so I could be very wrong.
Anyway, nice work.

>> No.2746130

>>2746091
you are right, a little more would be better. and thanks

>> No.2746520
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2746520

pls r8.

>> No.2746527

>>2746520
Actually I'm gonna self-criticize:
-Cranium too small
-Ear is kinda weird
-Cheekbone placement is off
-Nose alar base is too detached from the body

Anything I missed?

>> No.2746529
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2746529

ok

>> No.2746539

>>2746520
I thought this was a racial caricature, not gonna lie.

>> No.2746542

>>2746529
This is really nice and kudos for using CSP.

>> No.2746544

>>2746529
>everything changed when the fire nation attacked

>> No.2746546
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2746546

no wonder this board thinks loomis is a meme

>> No.2746584
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2746584

>>2738563
pbbt

>> No.2746592
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2746592

WHO /anime/ HERE

>> No.2746845
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2746845

>>2738563
You should all need some Loomis in your life

>> No.2746859

>>2746845
That's pretty good!
>>2746082
I really like this one Anon, it just speaks youthfulness.

>> No.2747350
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>> No.2747428
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2747428

Sure.

>> No.2747432
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2747432

fug

>> No.2747595
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2747595

My spooker has vry bicc brains

>> No.2747623

>>2740973
stop body shaming

>> No.2747627
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2747627

hed

>> No.2747635
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2747635

So much feels off. Please help me not sucko

>> No.2747652

>>2747635
look at the original referenes lines and where ach feature matches up on them

>> No.2747671

>>2747635
Symbol drawn eye, mouth, ear with chicken scratch. Only life drawing will cure you.

>> No.2747748
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2747748

Only had a mouse, so I fuzzied a bit over the lines.

>> No.2747884

>>2746592
i find that head charming

>> No.2748896
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2748896

Idk man i like cartoons

>> No.2748924

>>2748896
Cartooning is no excuse to ignore the fundies, famalam.

>> No.2748939

>>2748924
Like what? I cant get better if you're vague.

>> No.2749028

>>2748939
Like shapes, proportions, perspective and values.

>> No.2749187
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2749187

mines boring but w.e

>> No.2749290
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2749290

gj to
>>2746592

>>2746082
>>2740971
>>2740786

and no one else

>> No.2749291

>>2749290
blog?

(I'm serious I forgot lmoa)

>> No.2749300

>>2749291
http://daizua123.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=0

>> No.2749301
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2749301

>>2748896
>when lil shits use style as a way to avoid learning basics
>when said lil shits post their art on ic expecting to be seen as "defiant" or "innovative"

>> No.2749305
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2749305

>>2749300
That's not your blog you pushy proboscis

>Due to recent incidents, only those who I can truly consider friends can request. Everyone else is an acquaintance or an enemy.

heh

>> No.2749309

>>2747652
the original reference is terrible though

>> No.2749313
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>> No.2749353
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2749353

a head

>> No.2749433

>>2743463

Back of the neck connects too low, and the ear is also a bit low.

>> No.2749468
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2749468

meh i tried

>> No.2749476

>>2748939
>>2749028
Also lurking moar, it would seem, if you don't know what an ic-anon means by fundies.

>> No.2749483
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2749483

>> No.2749495
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2749495

basic because im new to this

>> No.2749544
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2749544

>>2738563

>> No.2749578

get it

>> No.2750602
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2750602

>> No.2750626
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2750626

One I did a year or two back

>> No.2750686
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2750686

some boys

>> No.2750721
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2750721

>>2738563

>> No.2750790

Stop making floating heads and give them some character/personality

>> No.2750805

>>2750790
No u

>> No.2750841
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>> No.2750849
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2750849

On a scale from 1 to /beg/, how bad is it?

>> No.2750901

>>2745890
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GGWs8WYUp8c

>> No.2750903

>>2750849
>>2745054

>> No.2750989
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2750989

k, quick generic profile coming in

>> No.2751048
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2751048

>>2750989
Kryten?

>> No.2751452

>>2746520
u fucken suck lol

>> No.2751483

>>2738563
>>2740995
>>2746520
>>2747432
>>2750989
Jaw ends after ear but not as a value change

>>2740995
>>2744236
>>2745942
>>2746584
>>2747432
>>2747595
>>2747635
>>2749313
>>2750849
eye not triangular enough

>>2740995
>>2743463
>>2744236
>>2745942
>>2746584
>>2746845
>>2747635
eyebrow not far enough

>> No.2751489

>>2738563
>>2740995
>>2743463
>>2744247
>>2745942
>>2746082
>>2746520
>>2746529
>>2746584
>>2747428
>>2747432
>>2747635
>>2749495
Entry of neck into back of skull either not aggressive enough, too aggressive, too high or too low. Too many variations to go individually.

>>2750989
>>2750602
Almost, but uncomfortable leftover spike from your pen strokes

>>2750602
>>2750686
>>2745942
>>2746520
>>2746584
>>2746845
underbite

>>2747432
>>2749187

overbite

>> No.2751500

>>2749290
>ear is wrong and too far back
>the transition from chin to neck is too sharp
>the hairline on the neck is wrong it should curve up around the ear
>eyebrow too straight should have a slight curve in it

6/10

>> No.2751502

>>2745942
>>2746520
>>2747428
>>2749290
eye too horizontally large

>>2738563
>>2740869
>>2745942
>>2746520
>>2747350
>>2747432
>>2749301 ( barely)
>>2750602 (barely)
head is flatter on top than you think it is

>>2750721
>>2750686
>>2746529 (barely)
>>2745942 (barely)
>>2744236
neck too stiff


Okay, now that everyone is severely triggered I'll stop.

>> No.2751503

>>2751500
Thanks! I agree with everything but the eyebrow part

>> No.2751504
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2751504

>>2751502
Wait, trigger me too

>> No.2751508

>>2751504
eye too big + not a fan of the shape, eyebrow not far enough, ear too close to eye, you probably rounded your head too much

>> No.2751521

>>2751502
I mean on one hand grats for actually going through the thread. On the other the advice is generalized to the point of meaninglessness, you've overextended yourself.

Oh well, good work nonetheless. In a peer-based community it definitely takes more balls to criticize than to create.

>> No.2751531
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2751531

>>2751521
IM NOT SURE IF THAT LAST PART IS SARCASM.

>> No.2751538

>>2751531
blog

>> No.2751539

>>2751531
>on this episode of Nosebro exemplifying the dunning-kreuger effect

>> No.2751542

>>2751531
>IM NOT SURE IF THAT LAST PART IS SARCASM.
It's not, it definitely is much harder for me to criticize other artists than to just make stuff.

>> No.2751544

>>2751538
http://kodyboy555.deviantart.com/gallery/?offset=0

>> No.2751547
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2751547

>>2738563

Hopefully this attend your standards

>> No.2751570

>>2751531
holy shit dunning-kruger is actually real

>> No.2751799

>>2751570
>>2751539
how can i make it better?

>> No.2751825
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>> No.2751835

>>2751547
Is that the dude from the infinite comic thread a while back? Looks familiar.

>> No.2751843
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2751843

I decided to try mine again after looking at others in the thread and looking at some real people's heads. I think it turned out better this time.
>>2749433
Thank you for the advice, you're absolutely right. I tried to place them better following your tip.

>> No.2752122
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2752122

Not side view but can I get a critique anyway?

>> No.2752631

>>2752122
You're having trouble visualizing objects in perspective. This drawing shows you understand the goal of perspective but haven't practiced it enough to be able to see on your own when it's off because the features are somewhat skewed. It might help to practice drawing cubes in various rotations and drawing objects within those cubes. Also your head and facial structure understanding is a bit weak, doing some studies and checking out some head construction diagrams could help that.

>> No.2752838
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>> No.2752848

>>2752838
If you're not even going to do the exercise, why post?

>> No.2752850

>>2752848
but I did the exercise, that's a side profile of a teenage boy head

>> No.2752869

>>2752848
funnily enough hes actually top 10%

>> No.2752877

>>2752869
>>2752850
Kill yourselves.

>> No.2752909

>>2751799
the nose, bro

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>>2752909

>> No.2752967
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t.Beginner

r8

>> No.2752970

>>2752967
Drop the chickenscratch, mon.

>> No.2752974
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2752974

overcooked this one

>> No.2753607

>>2752945
is this churchil

>> No.2755246

>>2752974
i kinda get 'advanced symbol drawing' vibes from this one . It's good tho!