/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

How come the Anime thread in /ic/ is always the most hostile? People in the normal threads are typically more helpful/constructive. That last thread was a fucking disaster.

>>2653258
this type of art attracts the tumblrinas

they get triggered and baited way more easily

monaters

>>2653267
?
That doesn't look like anime, but not entirely western.
Where do you get your references for character design?
Reminds me a little of stink bomb

>>2653231

>>2653258
>>2653262

They're cancer. What did expect?

i made a rare rinfag

>>2653267
blog?

>>2653307
I really like these.

Ink tomorrow?

>>2653258
It's not really the whole thread. /ic/ is a really slow board with about 100 total, give or take. These threads average out around 60 different IPs per thread, so if we take into account IPs that naturally reset, as well as shitposters, you can average around 40 people per thread.

Of those 40 only a small number are actively engaged in conversations, as the people drawing really just sort of come and go.

So really, it's just one really bitter dude who like to hang around here and gets easily pissed off. You can always tell by the way he posts, he gets very angry all the time, and gets offended when people don't take his criticism well. I don't really think he's a shitposter persay, just a really bitter person. It's kibd of easy tp notice since /ic/ is a smaller community, but if you've been to other forums, you'll always notice those really strange people here and there eith legit autism who are always gettibg angry. This anon in particular thinks the veil of anonymity hides him, and he'll ocassionally samefag to give the illusion of multyiple people agreeinf with him, but his posts are still about a minute apart from each other. I don't think he's like s troll or anything, I imagine he posts art too sometimes, but something tells me he mustn't be very good either, since his behaviour screams jealousy, so he slams other people to validate himself. He's probably just autistic.

If /ic/ had IDs he wouldn't do that so often. And we won't get rid of him, he's been around /ic/ for a good 2 years. He probably hangs around /a/ a lot too. He has similart posting habits to that board, and he obviously hangs around this thread the most.

>>2653270
Yeah, I think my style just ended up looking like that, a mix of european/western influences + a bit of manga too.

All character designs are drawn from imagination?

>>2653439
Grachh.tumblr.com/tagged/art

>>2653307
Another one from last night
>>2653482
Thanks dude

>>2653479
Cute, I like where the style is going, but you have fixes that would make it so much better too.

>>2653479

Learn what a jaw is. LOOMIS.

Finally done with this.

>>2653773
they have no lively expression in their faces. it's almost like they're drones or something.

>>2653773
The tiny tangent on their tails is triggering my autism.

>>2653783
Look closely, they're smiling.

>>2653787
Look closely. They're robots.I'm right, you're wrong.

>>2653793
Why are you so angry all the time anon?

>>2653797
Dry your tears little baby. Let me hold you tight.Shh there there. You're going to be alright. shh just relax, my baby.

>>2653802
Ok dude. You already ruined the last thread with your shitposting, not gonna play along this time I'm afraid. Have a nice day bro.

Read the sticky btw. You might learn a thing or two.

>>2653773
>>2653783
>>2653787
>>2653793
>>2653797
>>2653802

Now kissu~

>>2653773

Why aren't we getting green bouncelight from the grass? Why arent the shadows more blue? Why do the bushes in the foreground look like vegan turds?

Your colours are letting you down senpai. Goodjob on the animals though.

>>2653773

The mountains in the background would be a lighter blue. Please fix this, it is triggering me.

>>2653773
Looks good, now you can move on to your next piece.

>>2653813
First ever painting. That's why. I know fuck all about painting. I'm reading Alla Prima, so hopefully I'll learn something.

I plan on doing more actual paintings here and there as colors and stuff are my weakest point.

>>2653819
>I plan on doing more actual paintings here and there as colors and stuff are my weakest point.

Still life paintings really help in that regard, aim for accuracy with colour and colour relationships and with that book you'll make some nice gains.

>>2653820
Yeah, that's what I wanna do. I'm really itching to do some real life ref paintings, as most of that was imaginative work, and took a lot of guesswork and stuff. That's why I just wanted to get it over with.

>>2653773
Give them some form of expressions, they look like creepy mannequins.

>>2653847
That's how the original looks like to be fair.

>>2653847
Take it up with Miyasaki.

>>2653847
Those look like they're searching something.

>>2653851
These look like they ran into each other.

>>2653818
>Looks good

No, it doesn't. She says that they're smiling but what do people look for first in a smile? The eyes, you read people's expression through the eyes you may not realize this but it is one of those subtle characteristics that you pick up immediately.

Those eyes are not smiling hence why Anons are saying they look like drones - expressionless and void of life.

>>2653904
>anons
it's really just one dude desu

>>2653919
you mean the guy who bash "miyazaki/daisuke in person", or the guy who defend "miyazaki/daisuke in person"?
personally I've tried twice to say something to help, but it doesn't seem like anything is going to work. I mean, he's "miyazaki/daisuke in person", so how would you help, lowly mortal?

>>2653940
I meant the shitposter who's excessively rude with his ''critique'' and gets angry when people don't take him seriously.

I've seen it happen with other posts too. Not just the daisuke/miyasaki anon. Seen it happen to M, and a couple others. Makes you wonder about the sort of person who's so lonely they actually lurk an art thread to berate people's work in order to get others to acknowledge they exist.

>>2653773
Why is links neck as long as his head? Also why are their eyes so unfocused?

anyone have any resources for robots/mechas?

>>2653848
That's not being fair, that makes it worse. It shows you are unable to deduce problems with something you are "referencing" and just copy down the same mistakes. You can't learn anything this way and your work suffers for it.

>>2653817
If you assume they are black cooled lava when up close it's not so awful

>>2653963
I don't know man, I'm too tired of this shit to try to identify posters anymore. Usually I have more an issue with people who don't take well crits or just don't listen to them, as I didn't get that much help on the things I posted last, but there are indeed too much people who just say "you're shit" without anything else.

>>2653963
>>2653806
You're actually delusional. I'm the guy who criticized your shit in the previous thread, and this is the first time I'm posting in this thread. I only posted a fraction of the posts you accusing me of in the previous thread as well.

The problem here isn't me, it's you. You're the one incapable of accepting criticism, and just keep running around in circles with your excuses. You have no sense of your own lack of skill, and you're so paranoid that you think you're getting stalked. I've never samefagged in my entire life, and just because you do it, doesn't mean others do.
You seriously need to grow up and accept criticism. You're turning into the next Malfag.

>>2653787
>>2653797
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>>2653851
Look at this shit. It happens every time. People give you honest critique and point out the flaws in your picture that are evident for everyone to see, and you refuse to accept it. You make excuses that are just plain wrong, then you compare yourself to a professional Japanese artist by posting the reference you used, which ironically looks nothing like your own picture. If people post redlines, you just outright reject them. In the end, you become hostile and bitchy and accuse everyone who's trying to criticize your art of being the same person.
It's the same every damned time.

I drew a blossom. Any tips?

>>2654143
stop drawing anime.

>>2654143
stop drawing anime desu baka senpai phamalam, my nigger, compadre, dood.

>>2654147
>>2654154
>stop drawing anime
>in anime general
Get out

>>2654147
>>2654154

>>2654160
That person clearly lacks the fundamentals necessary to stylize, hence why they need to stop drawing anime.

>>2654143
it's ok

>>2654160
>not knowing why they need to stop

not all of us are gonna make it, anon

hope you find a better hobby

>>2654124
>>2654137
Whoops.

Guess you goofed. You can stop shitposting now please. I told you the first time I wasn't gonna play along, now I'm saying it again dude. It's honestly pathetic at this point.

>>2654206
Are you trying to make yourself look like an ass, or is someone else trying to slander you?

>>2654226
Feel free to check the exif data whenever you like. Personally, I'm done here.
Have a nice day anon.

Can y'all stop?

>>2654238
>exif data
Why, did you use a camera?

>Personally, I'm done here.
That's the third time. I'll see you in 10 minutes, when you pretend to be someone else.

>>2654143
I think you want to redo the creases on the right leg. They're making it look odd

This is what happens when you people try to critique unsalvagable works like >>2653773. There is literally nothing good about this art, maybe the wolf creature, but that's about it. And now when you guys have tried to help him, you get shit on. He's a terrible artist, one of the worst I've seen on this board, probably due to the fact he skipped over learning the essentials and dove straight into rendering (which is shit as well). But now this thread has been clogged up with responses to this image and literally none of them are helpful because you cannot help people who refuse to learn. Stop replying to shit. Stop critiquing pieces drawn by people who haven't bothered learning the fundamentals. you people are so goddamn retarded i swear

>>2654343
I was having a lot of trouble with that leg, but I didn't try adjusting the creases. I'll definitely take a look at them, thanks!

>>2653307
love the colors, what medium is the pink stuff?

>>2653773
>>2654614
>This is what happens when you people try to critique unsalvagable works
>There is literally nothing good about this art

thanks for pointing this out anon. some people don't need critique, they need to face reality

>>2654614
>>2654646
>what is learning from your mistakes
>what is progress
>what is improving

old danua cheeb with bad light sorry

>>2654660
>what is learning from your mistakes
You can't learn from your mistakes, if you refuse to accept that they are there.

>>2654664
you better be

>>2654664
I feel like the lighting made your image better. Less contrast as a result.

>>2653806
Okay bro. I'm not in anyway bashing your art. It's okay to get criticized man. I do it all the time to at least help the artist out, yes I'm extremely harsh,but why the fuck should I care about your feelings when I'm simply telling you the truth. We're not as good as we think, be open minded, stop being so attached to your art work. Accept criticism. Pce faggot.

>>2654770
The dumb faggot thinks you're me.

>>2654794
way to go man. look what you did. made it all confusing , like how you fucked your sister last night.

"shit poster" here. I speak the truth, and nothing but the truth. I find the greatest insults you can make to an artist is with flattery. Those fake ass nice comments that are so dry and reek of lies. It makes me sick and it really just pollutes the thread with non interesting discussion.

>>2654807
That's some dumb ass shit, buddy. The greatest insult you could pull on me is with actual shitposting, mkay?

>>2654809
Well Imma take a dumb ass shit on your face, buddy. You like.

>>2654809
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>>2653231
I swear these threads are getting worse ny the day. I thought after the shit show that happened last thread that the cancer wpuld have haf enough. Yet another fucking thread derailed by talentless fucktards. Lets see if we cant at least get a few of you banned.

This mentally ill kid talking to himself trying to ruin these threads specifically for what reason God knows.

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I swear these threads are getting worse by the day. I thought after the shit show that happened last thread that the cancer would have had enough. Yet another fucking thread derailed by talentless fucktards. Lets see if we cant at least get a few of you banned.

>>2654817
??? really anon+++//-

>>2654817

It's just one person (you) doing it, can you stop?

>>2654820
Regardless. There is a report option for a reason. You morons are just guilty for letting him/them derail the thread. Report, report, report

>>2654817
Yeah. Stop it.

I have no idea who the others are, but these are mine:
>>2654794
>>2654673
>>2654226
>>2654137
>>2654124

Would be nice is we had some mods around here, or if we could at least get IDs to prevent shitposting. There doesn't seem to by any way to contact the mods, and they don't seem to give a fuck about what goes on around here, so I doubt anything's going to change. I'm almost at the point where I write a post to the mods and report myself, just so they can read it. /ic/ has turned to complete shit over the past year.

>>2654846
You're on 4chan. In case you forgot. Also this thread is about anime lol.

>>2654888
Rule number two:
>Only constructive criticism will be accepted. Rude or offensive comments will result in a ban.

Just becuase it's 4chan, that doesn't give you or anyone the right to derail a thread by acting like a jackass. The posts I pointed out are bannable as per the rules once mod sees them.

Take your cancer back to the /b/ drawthreads. I deal with enough teenage angst at work.

>>2654910
by acting like a jackass. You mean constructive criticism. Because that's all I see here. All those posts are people being honest while sharing their opinions about the art works posted. Do you not get it?

>>2654910
stfu bitch

>>2654143
practice more pose and construction, try quickly sketching some people in magazines or cosplayer in pose "5 to 10 minutes each.

Mid quality but quantity is what you wanna aim for.

Also look at some of yoshinari or atmosphere's work to study

[You Yoshinari] Dead Wood Designs
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/730354/8d8c83d569/

Atmosphere Sketchbook 2 & 4
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/678940/88a9f719eb/
http://g.e-hentai.org/g/802526/a85719b66c/

>>2655052
STOP SPREADING THE YOSHINARI, I WILL BE HIS ONE TRUE KOHAI

>>2653231
today's drawing

>>2654664
>>2653546
guys these are adorable

little sketch from last night

>>2655087
resized and rotated, sorry

>>2655069
Thanks! A love of my life is anything mecha.
Have you checked the beginner threads yet?

>>2655069
I saw this in the discord.

I really dig it, nice job dude.Keep up the good work.

Two things. Her ass should have a little bit more "bubble" if you catch my drift. She looks flatassed.

And try to clean up your lines so they're less sketchy. What are you drawing on?

>>2655069
Thanks! I like this

>>2654664
very cute danu. I guess I'll post the completed io too

>>2655094
lefty is such a shitter lmao

>>2655118
IO NOOOOOOOO (thank you!)

>>2653231
Is that legit?

doodlez nya~

Tried to redraw a panel of Murata to see if I'm able to do a proper manga page render while doing it faster, since I've had the bad habit to taking too much my take for lines, which even then feels like it looks less "natural" and interesting.

>>2655195
original.

is left or right better? any redline/crit?

>>2655232
Left looks a bit more dynamic while right looks a bit too symmetrical. but both looks cute.

>>2655232

>>2655195
You did good son.

>>2655271
>>2655195
My only suggestion would be to use screen tones for the gray. You won't notice it because of how small it is here, but it makes a difference for larger things. Give is the real manga look versus digital.

tell me major mistakes please, can't see

>>2655232
I don't really like the sense of weight in her legs.
A good tip from classical art is to think about both upper and lower leg as having two major forms (cylinders) - the one on top is boney and hard (femur, tibia) and the other is soft flesh (adductor group, calf). When sitting down, the mushy form gets squished between the hard one and the surface the figure is sitting on.

>>2655278
that chicks forehead is something weird going on!

>>2655279
>>2655268
worked on them a bit more

>>2655410
right

>>2655410
left is a much more dynamic gesture, and makes sense since her left facing shoulder is lifted that her right facing leg would be lifted up as well.

>>2655422
invert right drawing into left

>>2655363
Why do you draw busts so much, dude?

>>2655438
i usually do them for warmup

>>2655438
i dunno
because theyre hot i guess
i dunno lol

>>2655104
Thanks, ill redraw her ass later today, rhis is super doodley thats why the lines are messy. I draw in clip studio
>>2655105
Thanks c :
>>2655094
Cute mechs c :
I dont go to the beg/ thread tho.

>>2655118
Cute as always! So frilly

>>2655472
>I dont go to the beg/ thread tho.
It's over here, friend! >>2654295

a magical place where spending at least a year in it will make your art get better.
Try checking it out! It only takes 1/10th of your time in /ic/, you won't regret it!

>>2655410
Left, and her ankle is broken on the right.

>>2655492
post your work.

>>2655069
>>2655104
updated version

>>2655492
no, yeah. trust me i am actually studying this time. i'm even going to read loomis, just give me more time, i haven't studied before and it's a difficult process.

>>2655276
> screen tone

I guess.

A real try this time.

>>2655607
Better. Reminds me of Poison.

>>2655492
Why are you such a cunt?

Rape me.

>>2655704
Is she supposed to be a giant?

>>2655675
not that sure if screentones is the good choice.

>>2655708
Nope, but she's tall and observed from the level of her pelvis

>>2655716
I mean, I'm not sure if it's just me, but because of the wave in the back. It makes it seem like she's a giant fighting a giant kraken.

>>2655714
Did you just add a screentone filter on top of flat colors? Because that's not how you get the effect

>>2655704
The neck really doesn't work, the head is too far away.

>>2655719
I have no idea how big the waves like this are, lol.

>>2655721
I didn't, there is that option on clip studio that makes the layers into a screentone, put it for my grey shading shading, so that should have affected the whole thing.

>>2655692
Yeah, if Posion was a twig.

>>2655587
I recognize this style.

>>2655607
I know I've seen this before. What reference did you use?

>>2655704
her left boob is being crossed by a tentacle

Did you actually painted that wave/sky? its colors are on spot, everything else is not

It's a mystery why she have 4 different types of shadowing, while the octoppus makes the 5th type
color theory
vilppu

>>2655692
thanks, she is Poison lol ^^ ;;
>>2655735
lol
i do tend to draw skinny characters
>>2655738
this is from imagination lol
its a common pose tho

>>2655179
Yes, it's legit. His early work is absolute turd. It's still around on his pixiv

>>2655607
>when u hav no ribs but make it up with tiddies
blogg pls
polish it more
wheres the dick

>>2655743
>Did you actually painted that wave/sky?
Yeah, i looked at some pictures of waves and a video of a dude painting a wave and painted a wave
>It's a mystery why she have 4 different types of shadowing, while the octoppus makes the 5th type
Yeah, my workflow is a mess,a massive one.

>>2655765
i lol'd
sorry about the lack of dick
flatberry.tumblr.com

>>2655410
looking good c :

>>2655766
you need to set reasonable rules to fix your workflow, do it lazy
set yourself some limits to render
three layer groups: line art, base colors, lighting

nothing else, don't break that pattern, keep it simple

keep a main base color and everything else on top of it at 90% opacity, that basically makes them closer and fit better

make shadows on only 1 layer, multiply/difference/divide modes, sightly gray-dark cold color (purples do best)

all base colors due to shadows will be pushed exactly as far, being beilable
If you divide the workload to paint shadows in actual casted shadows and AO, it will be easier and will get cheap 3D read
don't spend time rendering weak drawings
resize your posts

>>2655783
I do it through Overlaying Black and White and then finish painting in color

.

never colored like this before, but i kinda like it

>>2655803
I like your style.

>>2655749
>this is from imagination lol
I've seen your other work, and it's nowhere near that level. Seriously, just cough it up. I'll find the source sooner or later.

>>2655803
needs more anatomy studies

>>2655808
>implying that awful broken pose had a ref
pls anon

the background is very filler-ish, but I kinda like how the character came out.

>>2655817
I didn't say it was good. I said it was copied.

>>2655817
lol this

>>2655803
how do you hair like that?

>>2655803
this is surprisingly bad firez. wtf.

e

>>2655803
im having the exact problem with that face in the middle
what is he doing wrong?

>>2655962
>surprisingly

Jesus christ youre so fucking new to this community but youre so intent on getting your mommy attention from this board. Comments like this so telling. Not to mention your trash art. Firez has always been bad.

>>2653546
inked - but didn't do a very stellar job... color next?

>>2655069
thanks

>>2656033
the beg thread is that way ->

Rate my loomis.

>>2656287
need less loomis / loomis

>>2656287
Move onto Hampton, or Figure Drawing for All it's Worth.

The face is fine now for the style but you clearly have no idea how a hip even begins to look like.

>>2655675
>>2655714
Rest of the page.

>>2656188
I've spent years in the beginner thread. When will I be allowed to post here?

chalott

>>2656514
oh please don't listen to these autists

>>2656520
scratch that, made her skirt fluffier

>>2656496
tweaked it a bit.

>>2656675
Why is her dodging line looks weird

>>2656559
No Lunalu? ;_;

>>2656068
no he hasnt. its just this one

Latest illustration.

I see pretty much everyone sketches using thin semi-transparent brushes.

Is there anybody who sketches using thick pure black brushes?

I ask because I find it much easier to sketch like that, but then I can't draw details, the inked version looks worse than the sketch, and coloring stops making sense. So I could use some reference.

>>2656705
>Why is her dodging line looks weird

Yeah, now that at I looked at it again those weren't really properly done, guess that should do it this time.

>>2656822
latest failure

>>2656861
damn people like you are pure cancer for this board. are you the guy who never posts, but shitposts to vent?

>>2656822
nice atmosphere fampai

>>2656866
>damn people like you are pure cancer for this board
that's ironic coming from a cancer thread

>>2656877
who are you? lanis morissette?
fuck you

I made this in ~10 minutes. What should I work on/practice? What would you change about my drawing?

>>2656879
>What should I work on/practice?
everything

am i anime yet

>>2656891
Is it that bad

>>2656905
if you have to ask that, then it's worse than you could imagine.

>>2656879
Beginner thread my friend.

>>2656915
>>2656915
A'ight, thanks m8s

>>2656904
You're fat for sure

>>2653307
>>2654633
Thanks dude, and its red lead that I went over with a light grey marker. Has a cool effect.

Starbucks sketches

>>2656978
More from starbucks peeps

>>2656824
I usually sketch with binary, but sometimes go over to softer brushes if I feel like it.

>>2656978
>>2656981
stick to serving coffee kiddo

>>2656978
>>2656981
hey these are really good. I like your stuff

>>2657001
>I like your stuff
you like shit

>>2656978
do you have a blog?

>>2657013
>>2656978

Yes, do you have a blog?

>>2656996
Hehe okay
>>2657001
>>2657013
>>2657017
Thanks guys and I do but pretty much never update it

a sketch...

>>2656033
Fuck you.

>>2656155
Your artwork is absolute garbage.

>>2657017
I hate you and your yellow goblin faces.

>>2657070
Is that a water-pistol?

>>2656846
I think the other problem is there's just way too much dodging lines on her. The other guy just dropped down from the fucking sky with enough force to literally shatter the ground, yet the dodging lines on his body aren't as exaggerated as the ones of the girl.

Considering her pose makes it look like she's stepping away at a brisk pace it really doesn't warrant her blurring her surroundings as much as the flash.

>>2653231
today's thingy
i wanna get better at drawing cute outfits

>>2657160
Cute!

>>2655806
Thank you

>>2655815
I've done some in the past but they are not even decent

>>2655862
Mobile sketchbook pro synthetic brushes

>>2655962
ok

>>2656046
??

>>2657117

>>2657160
Slut!

>>2657246
hnnnnnnnnng

>>2657196
thanks~
>>2657259
wut
>>2657246
very cute, good linework c :

>>2657196
thanks~
>>2657284
wut
>>2657246
very cute, good linework c :

>>2657246
dam

>>2657246
what is the purpose of this?
that face is crooked as fuck
you've done much better work than this
you know what you're doing wrong. stop repeating the same stupid mistakes
you're firez right? what happened to you, man?

>>2657375
Firez is in grinding mode now. He believes in as long as you draw something you'll get better.
Different from the last time when he said "i always push myself when it comes to drawing. There's no limit in what you can do. Everytime i pick up a pen or pencil there's new areas to be explored. Art is like an adventure to me.".

RIP

can someone explain to me why people hate firez so much? what did he even do??

>>2657383
sameface syndrome. also a bit of jelly of his reddit post he did in 2013 that got to the main page of the site and net him some reddit golds
you know come to think of it, if firez stayed out of /ic/ he probably would've been someone great by now.
i guess the shitposting must've got to him. whoever baited him to come here anyway?

>>2657383
jealousy

he's good enough to cause tears, but not too good to shit on

Catching up on SJWen SJWniverse

>>2657383
Firez is the yellow troll anon

>>2657383
Back in the day he used to spam threads and ignore requested advice, all while progressing very, very slowly by polishing turds. Now at least he doesn't spam.

>>2657381
He's living proof that comfort zone is not a meme.

doodlezzz

Quickie.

I'm so garbage at rendering and not using lines so heavily. What do.

Is drawing something purely upon rendering (no lines) a good way to render?

>>2657403
so if you draw the same thing over and over again until you master it like a frontal view of a character will you get good?

>>2657453
you will be able to get good at drawing that one thing, but it will take you an absurdly long time in comparison to those who utilize deliberate practice and good study habits.

>>2657458
I've been drawing for about 2 and a half years now and most of what I've been drawing is the front view face of an anime girl, I don't want to say that I got "good" per say but I got proficient at drawing that view and the 3/4 view. But lately I've been experiencing a period where I just feel like I've gotten worse, it all starts when I see the thing I've drawn and I don't like it, and try to draw another one and it's just as bad then it takes about two weeks or so to finally start "liking" what I draw again, and then I get scared to draw that front view face because it might be bad, and it's gonna trigger that whole repetetive cycle again... then when i start drawing that front view face again a lot of times it starts inevitably getting bad again... I wish I could always feel that good feeling, it's always so short and bittersweet, and I feel like I have to keep fighting to reach that moment each time. I know that a good feeling will come after I go through that "hell" so that's why I haven't quit yet. I know the theory of the hand and eye but it's just getting so frustrating up to a point where I feel so lost.. It's like getting high off of some drug and then that down low period...

>>2657504
just fucking post it loser.
ill tell you if its bad

>>2657508
uhh ok i'll just link my deviantart account I literally don't have any draws tho http://james7006500.deviantart.com/

>>2657509
can't you see how far away from each others are the eyes?

>>2657509
are these girls supposed to be humanised hammerheads?

>>2657512
>>2657513
lul sry i thought that was like the new trend haha anyways thx for the advice?

>>2657519
just stick to faving people's shit
you're miles away from the /beg/ threads

>>2657551
really cute, although I would recommend bringing her left eye in a bit

When will i draw normal legs? Also loomis part XX.

>>2657572
>When will i draw normal legs?
If you stop rendering the same pose and actually study legs.

my oc critiques are welcome

>>2657584
>implying drawing legs properly has anything to do with studying legs
he needs to learn to see and draw ovals
he needs to triplecheck shapes proportions, lines angles, type of curves etc
his problem is not anatomy related

>>2657572
people dont have thigh gaps that big, especially not when sitting down

>>2657616
>his problem is not anatomy related
Sure thing. Anatomy is not a problem.

>>2656822
I love it, good job.

>>2656155
Give her a neck and this won't look too bad

>>2656822
Basic 2 point perspective would have made this much better

>>2655809
blog asap and work on those proportions

>>2657595
y-you must be baiting

>>2657635
If someone draws an helicopter wrong, it doesn't mean he should study helicopters because he's missing something about them

the problem is within the basic skill set to check proportions from the reference, to see form within the reference, to then construct it 3D from 2D

otherwise it will be flat and with strange proportions/shapes, like his pic

>>2657774
hi pops :D
wheres the rest of her legs :-/

>>2658000
shes amputee, i heard people like amputees

>>2656981
Jet set radio fanart

>>2658031
Only if they have a ton of semen dripping out of their cunts.

Thoughts on this? Is it loomis approved?

>>2658254
>flat nose
Yeah, no.

>>2658256
You're not Loomis

>>2658254
Feet on the left one are completely flat rectangles and a bit too small.
The cap feels like it's too big for the head/doesn't fit properly.
Right character's back and butt are not aligned.

Good work on the arm/hand (holding the cheque), the hair on both, and the face of the right one.

>>2658258
NO DON'T START FLAME WAR
STOP ANON
REEEEEEEEEEEEEE

>>2658259
Thank you for the constructive crit. This board need more people like you.

>>2658307
The hands are tiny and the left arm seems to have an extremely long upper arm/small lower arm because of the angle of the lower arm.

>>2658320
oo, didn't even notice how stupid that left arm feels. Thanks

>>2655757
can you link me to his pixiv?

>>2658307
>>2658352
blog?????

>>2654664
baby arms, but otherwise pretty cute

>>2655818
what is this brush senpai

idk why nobody has said anything about this, your piece is pretty rad.

>>2657010
stay mad

>>2655818
GIVE ME YOUR BLOG

>>2658430
i really like that art style its fucking hilarious did you draw that?

>>2657680
best grill

>>2658432
It's this guy
>>2653267
>>2653632

imagination turd

>>2658714
ayy lmao

>>2656846
Second page in progress, still need to redraw clean the second panel.
Think I handled the render of the rocks better this time, guess I'll tweak the first page's to match them.

>>2658837
it's a really bad framing/poses, the effects are really nice and dinamic, on spot, yet, the camera POVs kill the hype

you've made 3 consecutive windows where the main character is on the same pose, 3/4 looking up, then 3/4 same direction, frontal antagonist, while recycling a whole page-scene, that's too much

the man appears frontal and stiff, get some movie or wwe references for better coreography, you could have made it way better with just better starting choices/planing/design

>>2658846
>while recycling a whole page-scene

That was clearly the point of the scene. Wouldn't have worked with a new POV.

>>2658849
what are you going to lose by changing the camera angle anon? if anything keeping the same POV hurts you more than helps.

hermaphrodi

>>2658929
Cute.

Weird legs though, too manly, and that arm.

>>2658930
>arm
I noticed the moment I posted

>>2658931
also thanks familyman

I think the legs are 2thicc also looking back

adding colour

>>2659056
And more shame

coloring wip

>>2659181
hey thats pretty neat, whats your process like?
I've been wanting to do something similar, but if I dont paint methodologically it ends up looking very painterly and unpolished.

theres a lot of layer manipulation there right, kyle?

>>2659181
Pretty good. But why are her boobs so big?

>>2659181
wut does it take 2 be medicalwhiskey

new thread >>2659220

>>2659181
cute migoo

>>2659187

>>2659181
>miku cowtits

blasphemy.

doing some practice, any input would be appreciated

why does this thread get so many replies its literally the easiest thing in the world to develop a style

>>2659766

post your anime

>>2656861
like your life.

>>2657246
Neat, what's your instagram?

>>2659181
i used to follow you on DA but i forgot your name!

>>2659109
you didnt make this right?

>>2657375
Nigga, stop spamming.
He's progressing slowly? Whatever the guy is slow and actually progressing.
You on the other hand don't seem to do anything but post this same exact post everytime he shows up.

YOU know what you're doing wrong. Stop.

>>2657458
You know what, that just isn't true.
All people learn differently, some loomis loomis and git gud, some actually need tutoring, some get good through grinding.
I read the sticky intently, did everything as adviced, actually READ Loomis, but couldn't draw a fucking proportioned person.
Then I traced over a couple medical illustrations for work and suddenly I could draw proportionate figures, amateurish and crude, but finally fucking proportional.

If /ic/ is ever to be an actually useful resource for aspiring artists we need to stop it with "muh fundamentals" and "muh sticky" and actually analize and comminicate what specific fundamental flaw the piece in question has. Otherwise we're just sending people wandering the desert, sure we give them a farting camel and vague map of what the desert looked like a century ago, but they're still aimless.

>>2659181
This is pretty cute well done anon might fix lips tho.

>>2653307
Her boobs look weird

>>2658307
Too much focus was put on the details of her face, legs look too thin and long, arms too, practice more with gesture and anatomy.