/ic/ - Artwork/Critique

>>2616265

gonna dump some war shit.
most of its uniform oriented

>>2616438

>>2616439

>>2616440

>>2616442

>>2616443

>>2616444

>>2616445
i fucking love eod suits

Has anybody got an image like this but lit from below?

>>2616155
stealth waifu thread

>>2616907
Carrie Anne Moss is top tier waifu.

>>2616155
Bumping. Post your stuff.

>>2616262

>>2616265

>>2616266
>>2616265
A little stylized. But these were fun.

>>2617594
ilya please leave!

>>2617585
kek

>>2617594

>chromatic aberration and stupid eyes

You're killing me, kr0n.

Marble sculpture reference please?
Preferably women, but anything goes.

>>2618725

>>2618729

>>2617606

>>2618767
Its too late m8, I already saw it

>>2618905

>>2618906

>>2618772
I didn't, what was it?

>>2618933
anon tried drawing one of the references in the thread...

>>2619028
Why did he delete it? OP did call this a study/reference thread.

>>2616266

Anyone have pictures of men in suits?

Anyone know any beautiful complex village clothing for reference? I tried to find one, but many doesn't have much visual information (only in angle, making it hard to figure the way the clothes works)

So anyone have a good reference? Even better if it have multiple angles

>>2617585
Jesus fuck Anon,

a) she looks like an alien (and not the hot green-skinned type).
b) what's with the weird-ass blurring all over the place
c) please stop photobashing

>>2616155
MAXIMUM EFFORT

The eyes and expression gave me trouble. Is there a clear and concise method to learn expressions? That isn't ugly as an open-mouthed duck?

>>2616263
fug

Can we get some still lives?

>>2621454
Pretty good. But high light on jug looks a bit to hard and to strong

>>2616279
>>2616286
Ted Mosby fuck off

>>2621473
This wasn't drawn anon...

>>2617604
Boss!

>>2617600

>>2621473
thats the reference m8.....

>>2621454
toppest of keks

>>2621652
What did you draw this with? Charcoal?

>>2621699
holliest of fucking shits, that is the most retarded fuck off trying to give critique on a photo. ahahahahahahahahaahaha

>>2616155
This looks like my mom.

>>2621850
Congratulations.

>>2621473
fucking kek

>>2621850
i would fuck your mom, like, really man, i would rub my dick all over her soul and ejaculate into her spirit.

>>2616155
got me laughin

>>2616155

>>2616265
yeah this one was fun too

>>2621846
Yeah, a charcoal pencil.
Also came back to tweak it a bit.

>>2616280
gave myself about 30mins for this one, any help would be much appreciated

more liquids

>>2616265

>>2616265

>>2622061
Read the sticky.

>>2624248
her right nipple needs more love

>>2624248
>this thread

Good work everyone, you are all well on your way on becoming a human xerox machine!

>>2624268
want to elaborate?

>>2621044

>>2616270
omg who are you I recognize that style

lol >just naked women
so 0riginal~ w0w~

This thread is a failure, and so are you OP.
>STUDY SOME SHIT NIGGERS
back to >>>>>>>/pol/

<3

>>2624429
Pretty sure it's catbib.

>>2621473
holy fuck lmao

>>2624581
>being offended by a slur on 4chan

>>>/t/umblr

>>2624404
She's missing part of her jaw.

>>2620943
Make her head face the right direction and make it more square-ish, add in more shadows that suggest form. She looks too cute the way you drew her. Draw bigger too.

>>2616280
Will do a render study later

>>2625616
damn you draw well

>>2625601
Thanks anon. I couldn't find a way to add lines or shadow without making her look old and masculine. I'm really inexperienced when it comes to that and facial anatomy.

>She looks too cute the way you drew her
I that kind of good?

>Draw bigger too.
Will do.

>>2625145
I flipped it a bunch and I still dont see it, maybe im blind. Could you redline it? im trying to learn as much as possible from these and if the jaws fucked id like to be able to see it

>>2625637
You also fucked up her eyes.

>>2626336
Oh shit I see it now, thanks a lot mate

>>2616263
Painting like shit, a quick guide by me. ):

>>2616265
i already did this one a super long time ago

This pic is awesome...also the guy is fucking hot

>>2626632
That ref is bad because the values in it are really flat, but I feel like you could afford to take liberties and push some of these values towards higher contrasts rather than going for 1:1. It would also be a great exercise to make sure you're studying facial construction rather than just copying 2d shapes.

You should soften some of the edges that outline the lips. These tend to be soft, and your upper lip is entirely hard-edged.

Your philtrum is off-center.

These are the major pointers I can see.

>>2626786
He looks like the world's most pretenious, shallow, fad-following faggot.

>>2626786
He does look like a faggot, but the pic is a cool pic of a faggot

>>2616280
she doesn't look like her but why not share it anyway :)

>>2621454
loomis

Enough people. Time for animals.

>>2627592
Nice

>>2627606
i like this photo but it's shit for studing imo. back light uck

>>2616265
itt pervs.

>>2627606
no female apes.

>>2617633
head is too small

>>2627684
what in the fuck are you talking about anon, yes there are proportion problems but the heads being too small is not one of them. the left one is awkwardly big even for a stylization.

>>2627671
Yeah, because backlighting / contre jour is such a useless lighting setup that has no use at all and is totally useless to understad..

You're not gonna make it, bro.

>>2624351
>can make the difference between study and photorealism
ngmi

>>2616160

>>2628230
That's pretty good famalam

>>2616438

>>2618933
Lmao this was what he posted

>>2628761
>blog?ing intensifies
neat

>>2616274
I don't know if I should post this here or in /beg/

This is a work in progress that I plan to finish ater the weekend.

How am I doing?

>>2628894
Stop tracing.
You have absolutely 0 idea about color or edges, you're making it way too obvious.

Get measuring and sketching first, then shade planes in greyscale. Then you will start understanding color.

Do you guys have any good car references? I'm getting a little bored of figures and I'd like to study some cars or automobiles in general.

>>2616270
bready good anon like your approach.

>>2616266

>>2616263
>>2626801

I should have done that.

>>2616262
quickie

>>2633167
Everything around the neck area is a bit too straight, I assume there was a ref but even if that's how it looks in the photo I'd say a very slight curve would improve it.

Really gorgeous work, though.

>>2631955
look at the left eye and flip the canvas

work on noses too

>>2616280

>>2617585
Ricky why don't you ever paint something imaginative instead of just doing photo smudges and reference paintings all the time.

>>2616266
took a fuckton of liberties with this one. half assed a lot of areas.

>>2634624
fix that butt, otherwise looks alright.

>>2628829
now I start wondering what you saw worth in it to save it

anyone got some good back studies?

>>2616280
Damn color is tough. Fun stuff though.

>>2618907

>>2627665
thank you!

>>2619031
His style might be recognized by people he/she knows who happen to be browsing /ic/
>>2625616
Portrait appears squished sideways
>>2635308
You managed to turn a cute girl into a mtf transgendered

>>2616155
More of her.

>>2617034


r8

>>2618907

>>2635483
i like da style

>>2616280
Didn't know she's a lewd
Damn

>>2618905
I think my mid-range values weren't dark enough to begin with, hmm

>>2637071
I'll stop for now, because clearly I don't quite understand planes as well as I thought I did

>>2627729
that's the joke

>>2637071
First try at Procreate, will finish tomorrow

>>2616155

new pic.

>>2639009
damn he looks quite
a e s t h e t i c

>>2616438

>>2639337
Ayyy this is some Good Shit man.
The nose and ear seems a little symbol drawn though, and the perspective on the glasses is off.

>>2639349
Thanks, i'll be working on that

http://www.posemaniacs.com/tools/handviewer/

>>2639392

>>2639393

>>2616447
I like them too

Got bored, did a live study. Realized I suck terribly at freehanding ellipses.

>>2639392
cute boi

>>2616262

I'm ready. Give me your best, goys.

>>2641142
Shadow on the nose is inconsistent (doesn't seem to follow the shape of the nose and has too much of a hard edge), highlights on the hair are too saturated and bright all over (only keep it for your two main spots, on either side of the brow line), and you need to abstract your eyebrows and eyelashes a bit (or work from rough to detailed) because they look creepy.

These are the major flaws I see, I actually like how you rendered the skin although it lacks subsurface scattering.

>>2621473
this reply explains exactly why this place is shit

>>2618906

>>2624248
what a lazy paintover

>>2637081
I-is this legal?

>>2641994
muh dick says yes

>>2642007
>1.jpg
So there's more right? Where?

>>2642033
REVERSE IMAGE BRUH

>>2616438

>>2639395
I've never painted digitally before. Phew. This is the farthest I got before giving up.

>>2644854
Return to fundamentals, train your measurements and form.
There is no point to push values and rendering if you don't see the fact that his face is an elongated rectangular shape instead of a square shape.

Return to pencil and practice your eye mesurement and your form.

>>2624351
Poor lad, sadly you will never know the feeling of making it

>>2616360
Should I just stop drawing or is there still something to save in that shitty drawing so I continue practicing?

I'm studying Hampton book now but I don't see any progress

>>2644904
Stop trying to go into detail of ribs and such yet.

The biggest problem with all of the earliest beginners is that you misunderstand the core purpose of the exercise, you are not meant to copy it until you somehow know it, at best this will turn you into a human xerox, at worst you will not learn anything for years, both are bad.

What you need to try and do is learn to compare sizes and shapes of the body and everything in general, learn to break down objects and use a visualized grid to see how high this line should be and how low this line should be, etc.

What I prupose to you is to erase this whole drawing and start again without drawing the ribs or the shirt yet, first get her basic blob shape right.


Her body is almost a rectangle, her head is at this straight angle, get this shape right and start breaking it down.
How much of this imaginary rectangle that is around her body does the head occupy? I would say that in length it's short of being a half just about by the half of it's own length, do the same for the height of her head and compare it to the overall rectangle of the body. Try to do this with the whole body and slowly, carefully, taking your time place each and every part in it's place.

The point of this exercises is to mentally let your visual ruler click and once it clicks you can do it innately without having to rely on constant measurements and re-measurements.

>>2644864

Maybe you know, it's just his style.

>>2644904
>>2644913
Try to visualize something like this. When you train your eye to compare the form and size of objects and when your innate feeling of the form is finally developed you suddenly feel that your hand and eye do most of this basic work by themselves even from imagination because you will have seen enough examples and will have memorized how most of the bodies usually look/what their proportions are. Of course once that feeling is developed you need to go into intense anatomy study for human figure and general study for objects and such, but that is the groundwork you need to develop.

>>2644914
I doubt that broke disproportional jaws, asymetric blob heads that don't even resemble the general shape of the picture he is studying and broken form are basis of any style.

>>2644913
>>2644918

Thanks a lot for the advices. I will try to redo it, but I have one question, where should I start the drawing? By tracing the "flow" of the body? I've always a lot of difficulties with the beginning.

>>2644944
Sometimes it can help to draw from reference/model using mostly straight lines. Sort of an angular version of her. It can help judge proportions better and keep you from falling into autopilot or getting caught up in the details. Then you go back in and round off the corners.

>>2644957
Is it better?
Or did I entirely miss the point again?

>>2616280
Am I still shit?

New pic.

Gonna add my study in a bit.

>>2645443
Dammit I forgot the pic.

>>2645444
r8

>>2645446
The lips are too thick and the mouth isn't wide enough. However I think you did a pretty good job capturing the shape of her face and the individual forms of the features. The spacing is just a little off. Also, Try shading the hair more. I'd recommend using charcoal for studies to also pull out better value. But not too bad anon.

>>2616266
>>2616263

>>2624248
Nice work

>>2645079
study so far

>>2645618
Thanks, anon!

>>2645057
requesting review for that

Tell me all the problems please

>>2626714
Some features are too defined and some not enough... particularly the face and torso

>>2637971
i tried

>>2646627
a decent start, but pay more attention to the face proportions. for example, the chin is waaaay too long in your drawing.

>>2646760
I see what you mean...the chin is way too long, i can't believe i didn't notice. Its funny I can never see these kinds of errors until someone else points them out.

Bumping.